[Inner Oni]
After the intro, you could add some 1/4 to kinda give the feeling of the repeated rolls (even if they are not exactly on spot). Every 4th beat, adding a 1/4 pattern would greatly increase the emphasis of the section. What I'm saying is: 00:12:472 (81,82) - make it a kdk/kkk for bigger impact; 00:14:290 (90,91) - make it a kkd/kdd... and so on. Every 4th beat, remember, until the long roll before the higher BPM part starts.
00:41:644 (354,355,356) - This should rather be a ddk, snare is way too potent at 00:41:786 - to ignore it. It also would follow a higher guitar pitch.
00:41:927 (350,351,352) - Should be ddk for better guitar pitch increase emphasis.
00:58:886 (531,532,533) - and 00:59:169 (534,535,536) - same as the two above ^
01:11:650 (614,615) - These two have potent crashes in it, add finishers?
01:44:266 - You should probably make this part slightly less SV, as in decreasing the SV of 01:43:394 (855,856,857,858,859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866) - progressively. The player won't expect a lower BPM unless they know the song by memory, which most of the times will not be the case.
02:03:213 (974) - Not as strong but I think this note would benefit having a finisher.
02:07:950 (999) - Same as above ^
04:52:744 - I think you should really add a note here, ceasing to stop the guitar constant rhythm threw me off a lot.
06:16:864 (3143) - This can have a finisher, no fears.
Awesome guitar solo, I'm impressed.
Call me back.
edit: I forgot. Lower the background so we can see the band's logo. Change the 0 to 82
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