AiRI - Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.) · forum

KaedekaShizuru

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2016-09-27T14:30:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年1月11日星期三 at 18:05:50

Artist: AiRI
Title: Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.)
Source: 枯れない世界と終わる花
Tags: Karenai sekai to owaru hana the rainbow appears after flowering rain sweet ＆ tea galgame visual novel eroge opening DreaM117er m1223961117 Pata-Mon Nymph Chaoslitz
BPM: 95
Filesize: 27131kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:

117's Insane (4.35 stars, 385 notes)
Hana (4.86 stars, 408 notes)
Normal (1.84 stars, 167 notes)
Nymph's Advanced (2.58 stars, 252 notes)
Pata-Mon's Hard (3.6 stars, 283 notes)

Download: AiRI - Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.)
Download: AiRI - Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#13
この世界は、綺麗じゃないから……
See also an other map set here: AiRI - 永遠に咲く花 (short ver.) by Toyosaki Aki

Hana as Extra by me.
Insane by DreaM117er.
Hard by Pata-Mon.
Advanced by Nymph.
Normal by me.
Hitsound by DreaM117er.
Video by Shad0w1and.
Special thanks to Chaoslitz for 117's Insane mods reply.

Lyrics

永遠に咲く花（short ver.）
歌：AiRI
作詞：雪仁
作曲：水城新人
編曲：水城新人

ただ静かに夢を見ていた
この手を空に広げて
ただ静かに待ち続けてた
風に揺られ　未来　顔　背けて

手のひらから零れた記憶
失くした淡い哀しみ
目を細めた　滲む太陽
ひとりぼっちで　欠けた声　集めてた

（まだ揺れてる）儚い未来
待ち焦がれた（廻る）　流れる涙を
彼方　強く願う　空

枯れないで　心に咲いた白い風
その優しいそら　見上げ
哀しみ告げる　サヨナラ
希望の絆を　高く風に乗せて
虹を架けた　光を　光を　光を　今咲かせ

Last edited by KaedekaShizuru 2017-01-18T11:29:34+00:00, edited 26 times in total.

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DreaM117er 2016-10-11T08:29:35+00:00

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osu file format v14

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Title:Towa ni Saku Hana
TitleUnicode:永遠に咲く花
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:117's Insane
Source:枯れない世界と終わる花
Tags:Karenai sekai to owaru hana
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Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-11-28T11:17:27+00:00

[Normal]
00:44:352 (2,3) - DS不齐

edit:
[Hana]
00:40:563 (5) - 这附近到底是跟人声还是不跟嘛...不跟的话不该有这个圈，跟的话 - 00:40:089 -也跟上吧..
或者可以把 - 00:39:931 (2,4) - 都变成1/2滑条

01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不太对，感觉间距应做成像这些一样的 - 02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -

憋不出什么来..就这样吧..gl

Last edited by Lily Bread 2016-11-28T12:24:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2016-11-28T11:24:54+00:00

from modreqs hope it helps

SPOILER

Hana
[list]
[*]00:03:458 (4) - 00:08:510 (4) - 00:13:563 (4) - 00:18:615 (4) - more spacing since there is that other loud piano here
[*]00:35:194 (4) - 3/2 slider here would work better imo 00:35:668 - would be better with a slider end and you could add emphasis to 00:35:826 (1) -
[*]00:42:615 - 00:42:931 - shouldnt be undermapping here it makes your map less interesting and doesnt represent the song, you also do it a bit more later so change them as well please
[*]00:50:036 (5,6,7,8) -

this rhythm would represent the music better and give pressure onto 00:50:984 (1) -
[*]01:26:036 - 1/2 slider works better here since it gives emphasis to the vocal and puts 01:26:194 - on a slider end which is good since its weaker
[*]01:28:168 (4) - overmapped for no reason
[*]/list]

MoeAsuka

302 posts

Joined October 2013

MoeAsuka 2016-11-28T15:33:47+00:00

Hi,回个m4m

[Normal]
DS修一下

SPOILER

00:40:247 (3) - 我倾向于不放折返毕竟前两个音特别重
00:59:668 (2) - 感觉稍微多弯那么一点点会更好看

SPOILER

01:44:984 (2) - 感觉这个note不加音效比较舒服

[Pata-Mon's Hard]
00:02:984 (1) - 我觉得你既然要跟中间的音就完全跟比较好，所以把这个换成折返怎么样？
00:03:931 (3) - 同一组的跟的节奏我也觉得统一比较好
00:08:036 (1) - ^
00:21:615 (3,4) - stack不完全叠起来好难受。。其他的地方也一样
01:23:510 (4,5) - 这里我觉得音和前面是相似的，继续1/2滑条比较合适
01:28:563 (4,5,1) - hard还要摆这种间距。。我觉得完全可以DS啊，或者全叠起来
01:54:773 (3) - 按照你前面放NC的规律我觉得NC放在这里比较合适

[117's Insane]
00:03:615 (4) - 滑条尾这么大的重音不clickable真的好吗
00:08:668 (4) - ^
00:13:721 (4) - ^
总之这类地方我推荐用相似的节奏来表现出音乐的重复↓

SPOILER

00:55:879 (4) - 我不是太喜欢这样叠在滑条尾，叠在前面2的滑条头如何？也让跳变得不那么大，不过无所谓就是了

[Hana]
00:01:879 (4) - 这种突然缩小间距的跳体感不是很好打
01:28:879 (1,2) - 感觉这个地方的音很轻不足以支撑这么大间距的跳
整个diff基本都是跳就不说什么了。。没什么问题

GL

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2016-12-01T15:06:46+00:00

Just comments.
Personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable points.

General

关了widescreen support
无用绿线一大堆的感觉，删些吧。。

Normal

00:16:563 (2,1) - 细节
01:07:089 (2,1) - 蛋疼至极
01:45:142 (3) - 这个开头的normal很怪，或许别的diff听上去还好，但这个真不好

Nymph's Advanced

00:02:984 (3) - NC?
00:08:036 (5) - ^ 而且这个和前面的物件隔得好近
00:59:510 (3) - 这里处理的不太好呃，我是建议放成一个圈+滑条，然后一直到后面的红线
01:35:826 (3) - 这个和前面的就这么错开遮着，有比较乱的感觉
01:47:036 (2) - 突然出现的2折返？
01:57:142 (1) - 这里又突然3个了，要么和上面那个保持一致比较好

Pata-Mon's Hard

00:33:773 (2,3) - 可以包的更好，参考00:37:563 (4,1) -

117's Insane

00:17:194 (4) - 这种滑条给人随意的感觉
01:18:458 (1,2,3,4) - overmap嫌疑，仔细听也不是这个节奏
01:38:352 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 我建议空开点，和后面类似
01:40:247 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary NC

Hana

前面这些单点说真的打着有点憋屎，flow太急了
00:30:300 (3) - 这个不是很必要做成滑条的感觉，要么后面红线再放个圈
01:26:668 (2) - 这形状，吔屎吧
01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议放开点
01:40:247 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary nc

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-12-02T01:14:33+00:00

General

后面鼓真的不是95bpm?
01:14:352 - 这里117放转盘了，你也稍微查下音效呀

Normal

01:24:931 (3,1) - 这个还是不碰干净点
01:38:352 (4) - 01:40:879 (2) - 可以考虑换1/1+单点

Nymph

00:18:300 (2,3,4) - 建议和后面有几组1/2一样用1.3x ds
00:59:510 (3,4) - 考虑改成圈+1/1滑条? 更合vocal
01:47:036 (2) - 01:57:142 (1) - 这节奏不太合适读图
01:56:669 (6,1) - 按照前面的nc这里交换一下?

Pata-Mon

00:10:563 (1,2) - 就这组俩滑条组合形状毫无关联感觉有点违和
00:41:826 (3,4) - 00:42:773 (6,7) - 这两种gap你都用一样的stack方式是不是不太友好啊.. 要么考虑 00:43:089 (7) - nc这里，后面一样的地方同

117

00:08:036 (1,2) - 保持和第一小段一样的视觉距离?
01:18:458 (1,2,3,4) - 这里听起来有点勉强

Hana

考虑od8?
00:05:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段就这组跳看起来比较散，不合整体
00:15:615 (1,3) - 还有就这stack了好像也有点没整体感?
02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 可以节奏放的好控点，圈+滑条之类的，这样排版也能更有余裕

Hitsounding

00:39:931 - 再上个whistle也挺合曲
01:43:405 - 01:43:721 - 或许人声whistle

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2016-12-04T04:25:35+00:00

[General]
Metadata check ok.

[Normal]

Structrual Issue
My personal opinion about this diff is that perhaps if the lowest diff is something with the vocal, that would be better for rookies. For now it's just fine to use beats like this though.

[Nymph's Advanced]

Structrual Issue
01:57:142 (1) - This reverse since the downbeat is on white tick, it feels like something like this:
SPOILER
and 01:47:036 (2) - is similar issue imo.

[Pata-Mon's Hard]

Structrual Issue
00:11:510 (2) - If it can be somehow with some relationship with the previous slider, it will be better. Currently the position seems not structured. You can try parallel or something else, stacking can also be a way.

01:11:194 - The build up from here is not enough. The music is trying to build up and from here you can start to make some jumps potentially to suggest the kiai's arrival, rather than using a sudden attack.

[117’s Insane]

Structrual Issue
Generally good, several points here:

01:18:458 - if you want to use a stream, try not make the hitsound weak, since it's used for strong beats, and here is pretty easy to make people feel lost in the beat. Reverse slider can well express the intention here, but if you insist using the stream, just make the volume higher.

[Hana]

Structrual Issue
The first group of jumps are just too intense for the entrance of music. Music is pretty soothing, while the jumps require quick moves of cursor.

02:03:300 - Personally I'm not for making this kind of stream, it requires quick cursor move and slow beat controlling. If possible, I prefer things like01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) but with more distance.

Forum PM for any questions related.

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-12-04T05:54:05+00:00

MoeAsuka wrote:
[Pata-Mon's Hard]
00:02:984 (1) - 我觉得你既然要跟中间的音就完全跟比较好，所以把这个换成折返怎么样？我主跟的是重音（低音）后面几条同样
00:03:931 (3) - 同一组的跟的节奏我也觉得统一比较好
00:08:036 (1) - ^
00:21:615 (3,4) - stack不完全叠起来好难受。。其他的地方也一样不开autostack系列
01:23:510 (4,5) - 这里我觉得音和前面是相似的，继续1/2滑条比较合适 5那里鼓点很强（而且也有hitsound），用note没问题
01:28:563 (4,5,1) - hard还要摆这种间距。。我觉得完全可以DS啊，或者全叠起来 hard摆这种很正常啊
01:54:773 (3) - 按照你前面放NC的规律我觉得NC放在这里比较合适一大白线一nc 现在这是对的

@爱抚好
@花园第一条改了，第二条的话，我这难度本来就是比较难的hard，后面还有不少这种，keep
@黄书第一条改了，第二条感觉目前这样足够了，进kiai之后才是更明显的变化

谢摸

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: OP.mp3
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Title:Towa ni Saku Hana
TitleUnicode:永遠に咲く花
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:Pata-Mon's Hard
Source:枯れない世界と終わる花
Tags:Karenai sekai to owaru hana the rainbow 

appears after flowering rain sweet ＆ tea 

galgame visual novel eroge opening DreaM117er 

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166,201,85879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
131,337,86036,2,0,P|86:373|

15:366,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,208,86352,6,0,P|123:126|

224:136,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
366,137,86984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
306,263,87142,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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273:343,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
243,203,87931,1,4,0:3:0:0:
448,166,88247,1,4,0:0:0:0:
314,7,88563,1,0,1:0:0:0:
318,3,88721,1,0,1:0:0:0:
329,93,88879,6,0,P|282:151|

190:149,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
132,137,89352,1,4,0:3:0:0:
216,246,89510,2,0,P|169:304|

77:302,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,290,89984,6,0,P|8:232|

5:136,2,143.999995605469,4|0|4,0:3|1:0|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
107,384,90773,2,0,L|

103:312,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,183,91089,2,0,L|

169:255,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,349,91405,6,0,P|289:351|

384:329,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,307,91879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,168,92036,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,253,92194,1,4,0:3:0:0:
463,137,92352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
315,114,92510,6,0,P|248:116|

120:167,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
54,217,92984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
142,218,93142,1,0,1:0:0:0:
146,222,93221,1,0,1:0:0:0:
150,226,93300,2,0,P|175:251|

188:311,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
54,217,93615,1,0,1:0:0:0:
174,137,93773,1,0,1:0:0:0:
270,244,93931,5,4,0:0:0:0:
274,248,94247,2,0,P|314:246|

354:226,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,84,94563,2,0,P|373:119|

371:164,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,216,94879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,350,95036,6,0,P|432:287|

428:216,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
369,151,95510,2,0,L|

263:156,1,71.9999978027344,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
177,216,95826,2,0,P|211:153|

207:82,1,143.999995605469,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
147,20,96300,1,4,3:0:0:0:
279,33,96458,5,4,0:0:0:0:
283,37,96773,2,0,P|294:80|

303:135,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,247,97089,1,0,1:0:0:0:
379,141,97247,1,0,1:0:0:0:
243,173,97405,1,0,1:0:0:0:
373,228,97563,6,0,P|464:160|

437:76,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
299,107,98036,1,4,0:3:0:0:
303,111,98352,2,0,L|

224:120,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
334,160,98668,2,0,L|

413:169,2,47.9999985351563,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
303,209,98984,5,4,0:0:0:0:
303,209,100247,5,4,0:0:0:0:
303,209,100879,1,4,0:0:0:0:
118,57,101510,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101589,12,0,103405,0:0:0:0:
399,111,104036,6,0,P|335:111|

241:64,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
190,32,104510,2,0,P|178:104|

212:151,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
346,195,104984,1,4,0:3:0:0:
214,231,105142,6,0,P|274:194|

346:195,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,229,105615,1,4,0:3:0:0:
442,12,105931,2,0,P|467:91|

458:189,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,229,106405,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,200,106563,6,0,P|311:151|

381:157,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
427,229,107036,1,4,0:3:0:0:
334,305,107194,2,0,L|

340:233,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,156,107510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,226,107668,6,0,P|473:342|

413:389,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
377,382,108142,1,4,0:3:0:0:
213,210,108458,2,0,L|

76:235,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
5,248,108773,1,0,1:0:0:0:
83,286,108931,1,0,1:0:0:0:
102,146,109089,6,0,L|

266:116,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
305,59,109563,2,0,L|

442:84,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
472,215,110036,1,0,1:0:0:0:
488,73,110194,6,0,P|472:143|

472:215,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
495,298,110668,1,4,0:3:0:0:
360,155,110984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
383,238,111143,2,0,P|382:309|

366:379,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
191,362,111615,6,0,P|192:291|

208:221,1,143.999995605469,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
248,143,112089,1,4,0:3:0:0:
148,77,112247,2,0,P|149:113|

161:148,1,71.9999978027344,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
208,220,112563,1,0,1:0:0:0:
371,174,112721,6,0,P|316:130|

248:143,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
208,220,113194,1,4,0:3:0:0:
427,240,113510,2,0,P|457:162|

435:115,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,91,113826,1,0,1:0:0:0:
371,174,113984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
419,43,114142,6,0,P|330:6|

260:89,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
262,105,114615,1,4,0:3:0:0:
136,125,114773,2,0,P|195:87|

263:106,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,242,115247,6,0,P|222:280|

154:261,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,200,115721,1,4,0:3:0:0:
252,19,116036,2,0,L|

245:162,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,242,116510,1,4,0:3:0:0:
166,199,116668,6,0,L|

95:196,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,163,116984,2,0,L|

316:160,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,82,117300,1,0,1:0:0:0:
404,157,117458,1,0,1:0:0:0:
449,231,117615,1,0,1:0:0:0:
446,82,117773,6,0,P|374:71|

271:78,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
221,100,118247,1,4,0:3:0:0:
261,313,118563,2,0,L|

269:241,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,100,118879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
204,184,119036,1,0,1:0:0:0:
303,73,119194,6,0,P|226:14|

136:82,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
63,95,119668,2,0,L|

135:92,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
389,66,120142,1,4,0:3:0:0:
377,195,120300,6,0,P|410:133|

389:66,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,215,120773,2,0,L|

297:286,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
335,309,121010,1,0,1:0:0:0:
339,313,121089,2,0,L|

335:384,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
215,336,121405,2,0,L|

211:265,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
169,140,121721,6,0,P|272:173|

325:72,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
163,54,122194,2,0,P|89:107|

105:198,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
241,92,122668,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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365:72,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
388,52,123300,2,0,L|

399:0,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
429,92,123615,2,0,L|

418:144,2,47.9999985351563,8|4|4,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
471,52,123931,2,0,L|

482:0,2,47.9999985351563,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
512,92,124247,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,124326,12,2,134194,0:0:0:0:

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-12-04T06:38:34+00:00

随便找俩难度送sp

主难度

01:08:668 (1,3) - 感觉不太好看
01:35:826 (4,5) - 可以拉远点
01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这1/3读不出，拉开间距并且加nc（和02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 应该统一，至少nc肯定要统一）

妮姆芙

音量绿线好像没改，00:40:879 - 之后整个都几乎听不到音效了
00:18:142 (1,2,3) - 跟前面几个统一叠起来会舒服点吧．感觉这里并没有什么变化需要分开放
00:29:668 (6,8) - 在ad这种难度里，这么低的ar，放这种单独的白线前1/2，感觉不太友善．这俩音很轻，我觉得没必要用note跟（滑条尾可以）
00:31:878 (3) - 加个音效比较舒服，毕竟主难度跟的轨跟你不一样
00:36:931 - 也是，反正这段看一下，clickable，尤其是人声起音，最好都给个音效

就到这儿吧（懒

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2016-12-04T14:42:05+00:00

Lily

Lily Bread wrote:
[Normal]
00:44:352 (2,3) - DS不齐 fixed

edit:
[Hana]
00:40:563 (5) - 这附近到底是跟人声还是不跟嘛...不跟的话不该有这个圈，跟的话 - 00:40:089 -也跟上吧..
或者可以把 - 00:39:931 (2,4) - 都变成1/2滑条并不是这一个小节是跟鼓

01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不太对，感觉间距应做成像这些一样的 - 02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 唔前后两个1/3我觉得听感上不太一样呢前面的我觉得是在减速（减间距或者说刹车）后面那个虽然也有点类似的感觉不过是收尾了而且我想摆个图形所以间距大一些 sry

憋不出什么来..就这样吧..gl

ikorza

ikorza wrote:
from modreqs hope it helps
Hana
00:03:458 (4) - 00:08:510 (4) - 00:13:563 (4) - 00:18:615 (4) - more spacing since there is that other loud piano here yoru're right and you‘ve saw my intentions, maybe DS here a litter bit closer, OK, more father.
00:35:194 (4) - 3/2 slider here would work better imo 00:35:668 - would be better with a slider end and you could add emphasis to 00:35:826 (1) - I need a stop here and distinguish from light insane
00:42:615 - 00:42:931 - shouldnt be undermapping here it makes your map less interesting and doesnt represent the song, you also do it a bit more later so change them as well please this part piano too tiny too follow, I need more different rhythm
00:50:036 (5,6,7,8) - this rhythm would represent the music better and give pressure onto 00:50:984 (1) - sry I think you're in wrong rhythm
01:26:036 - 1/2 slider works better here since it gives emphasis to the vocal and puts 01:26:194 - on a slider end which is good since its weaker in KIAI I need more circle
01:28:168 (4) - overmapped for no reason if this kind of triple is overmap, really insane and extreme can't map anymore
/*:m]

sorry for my poor english

MoeAsuka

MoeAsuka wrote:
Hi,回个m4m

[Normal]
DS修一下前面lily说过啦 fixed
SPOILER
00:40:247 (3) - 我倾向于不放折返毕竟前两个音特别重想不出别的更好的摆法了要么就难得不像N了
00:59:668 (2) - 感觉稍微多弯那么一点点会更好看好
SPOILER
01:44:984 (2) - 感觉这个note不加音效比较舒服还是有对应的音的比较清晰虽然没01:45:142 (3)的重我觉得保留比较好

[Hana]
00:01:879 (4) - 这种突然缩小间距的跳体感不是很好打其实并没有缩小很多这里的音相对弱一点所以间距减小
01:28:879 (1,2) - 感觉这个地方的音很轻不足以支撑这么大间距的跳你这么一说我也觉得后面有人提我就改了
整个diff基本都是跳就不说什么了。。没什么问题

GL

yf

yf_bmp wrote:
Just comments.
Personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable points.
General
关了widescreen support [/color]
无用绿线一大堆的感觉，删些吧。。好我看看
Normal
00:16:563 (2,1) - 细节了解
01:07:089 (2,1) - 蛋疼至极 :o 我看看别的摸怎么说
01:45:142 (3) - 这个开头的normal很怪，或许别的diff听上去还好，但这个真不好我看了下别的diff 都是这个节奏的下法啊？

Hana
前面这些单点说真的打着有点憋屎，flow太急了
00:30:300 (3) - 这个不是很必要做成滑条的感觉，要么后面红线再放个圈在钢琴轨虽然比较弱这里跟00:50:036 (5,6,7)是一样的
01:26:668 (2) - 这形状，吔屎吧
01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议放开点想了想还是keep 我要刹车
01:40:247 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary nc

no reason but I really need this. sry

Garden

Garden wrote:
General
后面鼓真的不是95bpm? 我一直在犹豫到底是95还是190
01:14:352 - 这里117放转盘了，你也稍微查下音效呀哎呀我傻了
Normal
01:24:931 (3,1) - 这个还是不碰干净点 DS限制没办法如果挪了后面照顾不到 sry
01:38:352 (4) - 01:40:879 (2) - 可以考虑换1/1+单点压难度不敢再多circle了233
Hana
考虑od8? 找人test了就OD8了
00:05:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段就这组跳看起来比较散，不合整体改了
00:15:615 (1,3) - 还有就这stack了好像也有点没整体感? 也改了
02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 可以节奏放的好控点，圈+滑条之类的，这样排版也能更有余裕没人看出来02:01:721 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1)摆的是个啥么
Hitsounding
00:39:931 - 再上个whistle也挺合曲其实我没能听出什么区别好像完全被盖掉了（
01:43:405 - 01:43:721 - 或许人声whistle 好头上01:43:405加了尾上01:43:721算了；117的因为01:43:721是circle所以加了别的难度也跟进

Atrue

Atrue wrote:
[General]
Metadata check ok. I saw toyusaki aki's map maybe I will use "short ver."

[Normal]
Structrual Issue
My personal opinion about this diff is that perhaps if the lowest diff is something with the vocal, that would be better for rookies. For now it's just fine to use beats like this though.
[Hana]
Structrual Issue
The first group of jumps are just too intense for the entrance of music. Music is pretty soothing, while the jumps require quick moves of cursor.
The sound of the piano is crisp for me, that's why I choose jumps.

02:03:300 - Personally I'm not for making this kind of stream, it requires quick cursor move and slow beat controlling. If possible, I prefer things like01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) but with more distance.
117 has did it, so I just want to make difference. ~~don't you think 02:01:721 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) likes a flower ?~~

Forum PM for any questions related.

Pata-Mon

Pata-Mon wrote:
随便找俩难度送sp

主难度
01:08:668 (1,3) - 感觉不太好看呃……
01:35:826 (4,5) - 可以拉远点再远点的话就离01:36:458 (1) 太远了 sry
01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这1/3读不出，拉开间距并且加nc（和02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 应该统一，至少nc肯定要统一）
我认为这两个1/3串中间隔了很久也没有1/4串来回切并无必要在NC上保持一致 02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1)更多的是为了图形效果才NC的；另外这里怎么听都是标准的1/3 的确98%都是1/4的歌突然切到1/3串难以适应更不要说初见了读不出可以理解
就到这儿吧（懒

Thank you for you all

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-12-06T15:27:19+00:00

媽的好多摸
我是117 (helping him fix mod when he is afking)

MoeAsuka wrote:
[117's Insane]
00:03:615 (4) - 滑条尾这么大的重音不clickable真的好吗我覺得是考慮到00:04:089 - 的琴音比較高所以00:04:089 - 用head
00:08:668 (4) - ^
00:13:721 (4) - ^
总之这类地方我推荐用相似的节奏来表现出音乐的重复↓
SPOILER
00:55:879 (4) - 我不是太喜欢这样叠在滑条尾，叠在前面2的滑条头如何？也让跳变得不那么大，不过无所谓就是了 flow好像不太好orz..

yf_bmp wrote:
117's Insane
00:17:194 (4) - 这种滑条给人随意的感觉有音啊
01:18:458 (1,2,3,4) - overmap嫌疑，仔细听也不是这个节奏 [/color]
01:38:352 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 我建议空开点，和后面类似好
01:40:247 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary NC 好

Garden wrote:
117
00:08:036 (1,2) - 保持和第一小段一样的视觉距离? ?
01:18:458 (1,2,3,4) - 这里听起来有点勉强嗯..好吧

Atrue wrote:
[117’s Insane]
Structrual Issue
Generally good, several points here:

01:18:458 - if you want to use a stream, try not make the hitsound weak, since it's used for strong beats, and here is pretty easy to make people feel lost in the beat. Reverse slider can well express the intention here, but if you insist using the stream, just make the volume higher. fixed

Thanks :3

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Title:Towa ni Saku Hana
TitleUnicode:永遠に咲く花
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Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:117's Insane
Source:枯れない世界と終わる花
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Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2016-12-07T13:19:00+00:00

整个图排列和flow都是随机的，毫无逻辑，你叫我mod，我也很难办啊，我很绝望的呀

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2016-12-09T11:30:59+00:00

Karen wrote:
整个图排列和flow都是随机的，毫无逻辑，你叫我mod，我也很难办啊，我很绝望的呀

原来人哥现在喜欢看对称流了么（思考我也很难办啊我很绝望啊

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Nymph's Advanced had all fixed.

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2016-12-13T07:27:53+00:00

我觉得就是该设计点什么东西的时候还是有点设计比较好现在排列上一看就感觉有用心的地方就只有01:16:247 (1,2,1,2,1) - 和结尾
比如00:29:826 (1,2,3) - 这种很弱的地方再和前面一样下跳就不太合适可以搞搞小距离的多边形什么的
当然整个图我感觉还可以节奏下的很有意思大部分地方的flow也挺好不过现在大趋势是这样稍微在美观方面花点工夫吧

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2016-12-14T10:07:21+00:00

02:03:826 (1) - 為什麼佬爺沒幫我改這個??

KaedekaShizuru

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KaedekaShizuru 2016-12-24T05:07:25+00:00

imoutosan wrote:
我觉得就是该设计点什么东西的时候还是有点设计比较好现在排列上一看就感觉有用心的地方就只有01:16:247 (1,2,1,2,1) - 和结尾
比如00:29:826 (1,2,3) - 这种很弱的地方再和前面一样下跳就不太合适可以搞搞小距离的多边形什么的
当然整个图我感觉还可以节奏下的很有意思大部分地方的flow也挺好不过现在大趋势是这样稍微在美观方面花点工夫吧

谢妹桑 00:29:826 (1,2,3)我缩小一点好了

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1.看起來有進步些，但preview time重複的梗用得有點多次 (比如00:10:563 (1) - 從這開始)
看了下的确有几个白的几乎一样我把00:15:615 (1,2,3,4,5) 这串换了个摆法
2.preview後面到Kiai前的部分 : 看得沒什麼大的槽點，只是00:51:615 (3) - 這種斜的滑條用的稍多，應該能用其他pattern表達?
hmm 说实话我没觉得00:51:615 (3)这样的slider有用的很多啊……
3.KiAai後的跳點異常的大但還能接受，然後01:26:668 (2) - 還是盡量避免overlap，01:29:826 (5,1) - 聽起來沒什麼跳點感覺沒必要放這麼遠，01:44:036 (1) - 後面的滑條pattern看的還ok，不算太weird。
01:26:668 (2)附近一片都做了调整
01:29:826 (5,1) - 整个01:28:879 (1,2,3,4,5) 这一段都改了

感谢船爷

DreaM117er wrote:
02:03:826 (1) - 為什麼佬爺沒幫我改這個??

为啥突然冒出来个NC？？帮你修啦
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smallboat

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smallboat 2016-12-28T16:50:26+00:00

[Global]

Nymph's Advanced沒加影片

[Normal]

01:21:931 (2) - 應該是可以換成1/2 slider跟著vocal。

[Nymph's Advanced]

00:32:510 (5) - 這個背景音樂是無聲的，建議還是別放note好。

[Pata-Mon's Hard]

沒什

[117's Insane] ~~怎麼感覺這diff難度跟Hana差不多~~

00:49:405 (5,1) - 跟最後一個diff比較了一下，這好像沒必要放這麼遠，還是拉近一些些
01:18:458 (1) - 0.75的減速好像看不出來，不如用0.5的看看吧
01:30:300 (2) - 這過遠了吧，建議ctrl+g下
01:47:984 (2,3) - 這個間距移動有點強硬，有點難以預測出突然來個大跳(思

[Hana]

已跟Mapper在講了一些看法在QQ通訊讓他改善自己的diff。

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