Soul Evans : 20
Cawub : 20
Vulkin : 10
EYA- : 4
Janko : 3
ArcherLove : 2
- Ly0572 - : 2
-Kamikaze- : 1
Antalf : 1
Nysrogh : 1
zz_Natsu_zz : 1
FastYoshi : 1
Myle : 1
Shiro-neechan : 1
CommandoBlack : 1
qqqant

20/09/16
- Fixed 2 end of LNs, wrong end snap, sorry.
- Made some really small change.
- Applying some suggestion soon

12/10/16
- Fixed 3 unsnap notes

06/11/16
- Apply mod

21/12/16
- Self mod
- Apply mod

23/12/16
- Self mod
- 50% hitsound done
- Apply mod

31/12/16
- Self mod
- 60% hitsound done
- Apply mod

02/01/17
- Done hitsound
- Self mod

07/09/17
- Apply mod

Lost a bunch of screenshot that was play when the map was upload sowwy ;w;

The section staring at 02:21:193 - feels very left hand dependent and repetitive so half way through the section i recommend flipping the pattern. (half way would be 02:27:593 - )

03:04:393 (184393|3,184393|0,184493|1,184593|2,184693|0,184793|3,184793|1,184893|2,184993|0,185093|1) - I enjoy this pattern and if you flip the pattern as well and put it at 03:05:193 - I think it would fit the song better since you added a similar pattern at 03:11:293 -

The rest section at 07:28:393 - should sound like this:

07:28:393 (448393|0,448593|3) - These notes should start at 07:28:593 - and end at 07:31:793 -
07:31:593 (451593|1) - Should start at 07:31:793 - and end at 07:33:393 -
07:33:193 (453193|2) - Should start at 07:33:393 - and end at 07:34:993 -
07:34:793 (454793|1) - Should be a single note at 07:34:993 -
07:34:993 (454993|3) - Should start at 07:34:993 - and end at 07:38:193 -
07:37:993 (457993|1) - Should start at 07:38:193 - and end at 07:39:793 -


09:12:393 - Noob player like me can't do this section twice :c Since you already used this last pattern

12:21:193 - wssduovdsh please nerf qwq too strong for such a long duration

I didn't fine much wrong with this section just a lot of my opinion on what you could change

21:01:193 - Cool LN section? ( https://gyazo.com/3fdaa4dda67d7a8065fec13087800a3e )

23:35:693 (1415693|0,1415693|2,1415793|0,1415793|2,1415893|2,1415893|0,1415993|2,1415993|0) - Maybe nerf this the ones before and after are okay but i think there should be an easier part in this build up

26:03:893 (1563893|1,1563893|2,1563993|2,1563993|1,1564093|2,1564093|1,1564193|2,1564193|1,1564293|1,1564293|2) - :c maybe nerf this one too?

Maybe I just can't hear it but it doesn't sound like there is anything to add a LN here for 29:08:593 (1748593|0) - To me it just sounds like this LN 29:07:593 (1747593|1) - should extend to 29:09:193 - assuming you are going off of the cymbol and not the chords.

29:32:293 (1772293|1,1772293|0,1772393|0,1772393|2,1772393|3,1772493|1,1772493|0) - I found there patterns very difficult to hit, I'm not sure if it was because I am not skilled enough to hit them or for another reason, if other people comment on it might want to change it :3

I think you did a nice job on this section it is very entertaining to play and mod~

32:38:889 - hehe windows sound

43:00:250 (2580250|0) - Not sure why this note is here, should be a triple and the note should be moved to 43:00:550 -

44:08:350 (2648350|0,2648450|0,2648550|0) - Maybe move this pattern into the 4th column since there are no triplets on it

Nothin really wrong with this section either

52:15:750 - Since this section seems easy there is a spot here where you could add some fun patterns like this ( https://gyazo.com/c0dbf10af2cfb556c18b45fcb0220b89 )

Nothing wrong with this section really :3 I loved the ending and thought it was fitting for this map

2016-09-19 13:02 Julie: owo
2016-09-19 13:03 Julie: the other spectator was DoNotMess xP
2016-09-19 13:03 -Kamikaze-: I know
2016-09-19 13:03 -Kamikaze-: hehe
2016-09-19 13:03 Julie: XD
2016-09-19 13:04 -Kamikaze-: sitek got 945k wow
2016-09-19 13:05 Julie: who else was in the multi?
2016-09-19 13:05 -Kamikaze-: sitekx, juan, janko and hudonom
2016-09-19 13:05 -Kamikaze-: hudo had wrong skin and quit out right away
2016-09-19 13:06 -Kamikaze-: and janko quit out after few mins
2016-09-19 13:06 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:06 Julie: rip xD
2016-09-19 13:06 -Kamikaze-: juan went to eat lunch midway through
2016-09-19 13:06 Julie: I wanted to do something
2016-09-19 13:06 Julie: more challenging
2016-09-19 13:06 Julie: but bpm
2016-09-19 13:06 -Kamikaze-: managed to get back in time to finish the map
2016-09-19 13:06 Julie: so low
2016-09-19 13:06 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2016-09-19 13:06 -Kamikaze-: it's very fun tho
2016-09-19 13:06 -Kamikaze-: apart from those 1/8 jumptrills LOL
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: yeahh XD
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: there some part
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: that shouuld be like
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: 1/16 or more
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: but meh did it 1/8
2016-09-19 13:07 -Kamikaze-: you could just do a stair pattern
2016-09-19 13:07 -Kamikaze-: imo
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: yeah
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: I did stair
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: for those that should be 1/16
2016-09-19 13:07 -Kamikaze-: yea but those 1/8 jumptrills
2016-09-19 13:07 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:07 Julie: while the 1/8 burst, is to follow the same 2 notes-chord drum
2016-09-19 13:08 Julie: the other 1/8 stairs are different
2016-09-19 13:08 Julie: sound
2016-09-19 13:08 Julie: another drum that I do 1 note chord
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: XD
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: so yeahh ;w;
2016-09-19 13:09 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: I went woops thats gonna be a stress killer part
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: get to stress
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: and fail
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: and huge rage ;w
2016-09-19 13:09 -Kamikaze-: to be honest I do have some complaints about the chart
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: what is it? owo
2016-09-19 13:09 -Kamikaze-: but it was fun to play
2016-09-19 13:09 -Kamikaze-: like some jack parts
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: wooot
2016-09-19 13:09 -Kamikaze-: are haaaaaaaaaard
2016-09-19 13:09 Julie: LOL
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: YEAHH
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: mostly the 2 notes chord one aaaaa
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: like I think
2016-09-19 13:10 -Kamikaze-: jumptrills are kinda too repetetive imo
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: 5-6 jack
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: yeahh
2016-09-19 13:10 -Kamikaze-: and the transitions between jumptrills
2016-09-19 13:10 -Kamikaze-: why minijacks ;w;
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: oh yeah that part
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: there only 1 part like that
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: if is bad imma change
2016-09-19 13:10 -Kamikaze-: I saw a couple
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: if im not wrong, there only 1 part like that
2016-09-19 13:10 Julie: oh
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: then might be different
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: then what I was thinking
2016-09-19 13:11 -Kamikaze-: the only "bad" part are those rapid jumptrills, there are two or three where I nearly died
2016-09-19 13:11 -Kamikaze-: imo
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: ahahaha
2016-09-19 13:11 -Kamikaze-: those are just meh, but not that bad
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: everyone nearly die there =w=
2016-09-19 13:11 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:11 -Kamikaze-: no wonder
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: like
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: is not a fun part at all
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: and im not putting 2 notes because yay more stars
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: is actually supose to be 2 notes =w=
2016-09-19 13:11 Julie: the 1 notes one and 2 notes one
2016-09-19 13:12 Julie: are really differnt
2016-09-19 13:12 Julie: shouldnt be having the same feeling xD
2016-09-19 13:12 -Kamikaze-: yea but imo it's too big of a difficulty spike
2016-09-19 13:12 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:12 Julie: yeahh it is xD
2016-09-19 13:12 -Kamikaze-: you could just do a 1/8 stair
2016-09-19 13:12 -Kamikaze-: imo
2016-09-19 13:12 Julie: I didnt listen the whole song when I started mapping
2016-09-19 13:12 Julie: the 1/8 stairs
2016-09-19 13:12 -Kamikaze-: inbetween the jumptrills
2016-09-19 13:12 Julie: are different sound
2016-09-19 13:12 Julie: as well
2016-09-19 13:12 Julie: there some few part like that xD
2016-09-19 13:13 -Kamikaze-: what else, hmm
2016-09-19 13:13 Julie: hows the song?
2016-09-19 13:13 -Kamikaze-: stair bursts were always the same pretty much
2016-09-19 13:13 -Kamikaze-: the song is great
2016-09-19 13:13 Julie: ights
2016-09-19 13:13 Julie: the 1/8 one?
2016-09-19 13:13 -Kamikaze-: I didn't know that ryu remixed club music as well
2016-09-19 13:13 Julie: like going 1234 1234 then LN 123 123
2016-09-19 13:13 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2016-09-19 13:13 -Kamikaze-: yea yea
2016-09-19 13:13 Julie: ights, I'll change that a bit
2016-09-19 13:13 Julie: xP
2016-09-19 13:13 -Kamikaze-: more variety basically
2016-09-19 13:13 Julie: ights
2016-09-19 13:14 -Kamikaze-: but with LN it should be same as it is
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: yep
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: Ill keep the LN
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: but should I change um
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: LN + 123 or 321 <-- should I change this part?
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: the reason I did a stairs was because
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: it might be like really hard
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: with one hold
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: I dont mind changing pattern for challenge
2016-09-19 13:14 Julie: if I have to
2016-09-19 13:14 -Kamikaze-: yeah don't change it
2016-09-19 13:15 -Kamikaze-: because it will be too hard
2016-09-19 13:15 Julie: yeahh
2016-09-19 13:15 Julie: Ill change the one before
2016-09-19 13:15 -Kamikaze-: god editor is lagging
2016-09-19 13:15 -Kamikaze-: XD
2016-09-19 13:15 Julie: hahaha
2016-09-19 13:15 Julie: it officially
2016-09-19 13:15 Julie: broke my osu xD
2016-09-19 13:15 Julie: on the bottom bar
2016-09-19 13:15 -Kamikaze-: hahaha
2016-09-19 13:15 -Kamikaze-: nice
2016-09-19 13:16 Julie: need to always press insert and reopen so that it appear hahaha
2016-09-19 13:16 -Kamikaze-: oh yeah also slow parts on buildup like this 01:01:193 -
2016-09-19 13:16 -Kamikaze-: the 1/2s
2016-09-19 13:16 -Kamikaze-: don't make them so easy
2016-09-19 13:16 Julie: and like when you went to sleep, those white line was jumping
2016-09-19 13:16 Julie: I WAS LIKE
2016-09-19 13:16 Julie: NANI KOREEEE
2016-09-19 13:16 Julie: oh
2016-09-19 13:17 Julie: like
2016-09-19 13:18 Julie: mapping this sound? 01:01:493 -
2016-09-19 13:18 -Kamikaze-: I meant pattern wise
2016-09-19 13:18 -Kamikaze-: don't make it so straight forward
2016-09-19 13:18 -Kamikaze-: you've done that in a couple of places
2016-09-19 13:19 -Kamikaze-: that you do a slow jumptrill like pattern and then a faster one
2016-09-19 13:19 Julie: yeah
2016-09-19 13:19 -Kamikaze-: mix those patterns up, will be more fun
2016-09-19 13:19 Julie: there some killer too
2016-09-19 13:19 Julie: mix?
2016-09-19 13:19 -Kamikaze-: yeah mix patterns up on buildup, don't make them so stale
2016-09-19 13:20 Julie: oh
2016-09-19 13:20 Julie: like instead of always 12|34
2016-09-19 13:21 -Kamikaze-: yeah instead of those, make more varied patterns
2016-09-19 13:22 Julie: ights nothing this down xD
2016-09-19 13:22 -Kamikaze-: alright x3
2016-09-19 13:22 -Kamikaze-: 01:53:993 - this pattern is like impossible LOL
2016-09-19 13:22 Julie: LOL
2016-09-19 13:22 Julie: AAHAHAH
2016-09-19 13:22 -Kamikaze-: you should just do single streams
2016-09-19 13:23 Julie: oh gawd is not audible at all on my spreaker
2016-09-19 13:23 -Kamikaze-: hahah
2016-09-19 13:23 -Kamikaze-: 02:56:793 - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
2016-09-19 13:24 Julie: YES
2016-09-19 13:24 Julie:
2016-09-19 13:24 Julie: you told me
2016-09-19 13:24 Julie: to do unconfortable pattern
2016-09-19 13:24 Julie: =3=
2016-09-19 13:24 Julie: #blamekami
2016-09-19 13:24 -Kamikaze-: yea ik
2016-09-19 13:24 -Kamikaze-: but those doubles after that are worse
2016-09-19 13:24 -Kamikaze-: XD
2016-09-19 13:24 -Kamikaze-: so awkward aaaaaa
2016-09-19 13:25 -Kamikaze-: alright one more thing to point out, alternate jumptrill patterns more
2016-09-19 13:25 -Kamikaze-: and on longer ones you can switch to a diffrent pattern in the middle of it
2016-09-19 13:25 -Kamikaze-: but avoid minijacks
2016-09-19 13:26 Julie: yeah I try to avoid random minijacks
2016-09-19 13:26 -Kamikaze-: 04:20:293 (260293|1,260393|1,260393|0,260493|0,260493|1,260593|0,260593|1) - this kind of transitions is also weeeeeeeeird
2016-09-19 13:26 Julie: except those that have a cymbal ;w;
2016-09-19 13:26 Julie: 04:20:293 (260293|1) - move to 3?
2016-09-19 13:26 Julie: 0hm
2016-09-19 13:26 Julie: hmm
2016-09-19 13:27 -Kamikaze-: you can just make this pattern a 12 34 12 34
2016-09-19 13:27 -Kamikaze-: in this song you have almost all 13 24 jumptrills
2016-09-19 13:27 Julie: http://puu.sh/rgLff/64a663d750.png
2016-09-19 13:27 Julie: how about this?
2016-09-19 13:27 Julie: xD
2016-09-19 13:27 Julie: kek
2016-09-19 13:28 -Kamikaze-: wew
2016-09-19 13:28 Julie: ahahaha
2016-09-19 13:28 -Kamikaze-: might be okay xD
2016-09-19 13:28 Julie: k_hand:
2016-09-19 13:29 -Kamikaze-: 04:35:593 - for parts like this you can do something like http://puu.sh/rgLjw/b3d26a98c7.png
2016-09-19 13:29 -Kamikaze-: the synth thingy has a stronger beat on each 1/1
2016-09-19 13:31 -Kamikaze-: another thing that I noticed is that on the jack sections - especially the longer single note ones - the jacks are awkard to transition around because they are not ballanced enough on both hands
2016-09-19 13:31 -Kamikaze-: there's a lot of transitions on the same hand which is not bad, but there's kinda too much of it imo
2016-09-19 13:32 Julie: yeah for the jack part, Im pretty sure alternating hands would be more fun
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: but hmm pitch or more fun
2016-09-19 13:33 -Kamikaze-: fun fun fun
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: ahaha
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: ights
2016-09-19 13:33 -Kamikaze-: would you want me to sing at correct pitch or provide more fun :^0
2016-09-19 13:33 -Kamikaze-: :^)*
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: I WANT
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: I WANT
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: I WANT <3
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: I WANTT
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: I WAAAAAAAAAANT
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: I WANT I WANT I WANT I WANT IWANT
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: I WANT I WANT
2016-09-19 13:33 -Kamikaze-: SEE
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: I WANT YOU TO SING
2016-09-19 13:33 -Kamikaze-: HAHA
2016-09-19 13:33 Julie: LOL
2016-09-19 13:34 -Kamikaze-: 08:19:593 -
2016-09-19 13:34 -Kamikaze-: tfw missed a burst
2016-09-19 13:34 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:34 Julie: should be 1/8
2016-09-19 13:35 Julie: actually wait
2016-09-19 13:35 Julie: idk what im hearing today gotta grab my headset
2016-09-19 13:35 -Kamikaze-: it's 1/8
2016-09-19 13:35 -Kamikaze-: for sure
2016-09-19 13:36 Julie: yeah oh gawd LOL
2016-09-19 13:37 -Kamikaze-: 10:24:393 - this jumptrill hurts me inside
2016-09-19 13:37 -Kamikaze-: XDDD
2016-09-19 13:37 -Kamikaze-: I hate jumptrillsssss
2016-09-19 13:37 Julie: should I change pattern in the middle? and cause a mini jack
2016-09-19 13:37 Julie: is only 150 bpm
2016-09-19 13:37 Julie: =w=
2016-09-19 13:37 Julie: =3=
2016-09-19 13:37 -Kamikaze-: tbh I was thinking of another solution
2016-09-19 13:37 -Kamikaze-: you could just do jumpjacks
2016-09-19 13:38 -Kamikaze-: so minijacks alternating all the time
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: LOL
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: ights
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: LOL
2016-09-19 13:38 -Kamikaze-: it's fun
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: that make it
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: more hard
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: LOL
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: 2 jump jack
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: ?
2016-09-19 13:38 -Kamikaze-: yeah but random minijack in a transition is worse
2016-09-19 13:38 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:38 Julie: yeahh xD
2016-09-19 13:38 -Kamikaze-: something like 12 13 34 24 12
2016-09-19 13:38 -Kamikaze-: you know
2016-09-19 13:38 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:39 Julie: OH
2016-09-19 13:39 Julie: I didnt use that pattern
2016-09-19 13:39 Julie: well not on these kind of situation
2016-09-19 13:39 -Kamikaze-: I'm gonna give you a map with fun jumpjacks
2016-09-19 13:39 -Kamikaze-: so you can take examples
2016-09-19 13:39 Julie: hai owo
2016-09-19 13:40 -Kamikaze-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/972575 Nizikawa - Drop That (Ghettoblaster) v1.1 [break-even]]
2016-09-19 13:40 -Kamikaze-: good example
2016-09-19 13:40 -Kamikaze-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/675531 SAMBA MASTER -SATOH- - Samba Land [Capoeira]]
2016-09-19 13:40 -Kamikaze-: another good example
2016-09-19 13:41 -Kamikaze-: and this
2016-09-19 13:41 -Kamikaze-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/627633 Shiraishi - True Millennium Queen [4K]]
2016-09-19 13:43 Julie: ights
2016-09-19 13:43 Julie: x3
2016-09-19 13:43 Julie: arigatoo >3<
2016-09-19 13:43 -Kamikaze-: np x3
2016-09-19 13:43 -Kamikaze-: everything for you <3
2016-09-19 13:43 Julie: <333333
2016-09-19 13:43 Julie: ok ok ok ok owo
2016-09-19 13:44 Julie: is your bday you know =w=
2016-09-19 13:44 Julie: should be like
2016-09-19 13:44 Julie: me gifting not you helping me out =3=
2016-09-19 13:44 -Kamikaze-: I'm having fun tho so who cares x3
2016-09-19 13:44 Julie: yaay
2016-09-19 13:44 Julie: I was worry it killed you ><
2016-09-19 13:44 Julie: since is super tiring
2016-09-19 13:44 -Kamikaze-: naah
2016-09-19 13:44 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:44 Julie: waaa
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: so happy ;w;
2016-09-19 13:45 -Kamikaze-: it's not that hard
2016-09-19 13:45 -Kamikaze-: just spiky
2016-09-19 13:45 -Kamikaze-: xD
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: yeahh
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: I didnt expect that
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: until I got to that part
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: and just map what I think is right
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: and woops
2016-09-19 13:45 -Kamikaze-: well it's ~150 jumpstream for the most part
2016-09-19 13:45 -Kamikaze-: so easy
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: think is DTable&
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: yehah
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: yeahh
2016-09-19 13:45 Julie: low bpm XD
2016-09-19 13:45 -Kamikaze-: when you nerf the spikes yeah
2016-09-19 13:45 -Kamikaze-: easily
2016-09-19 13:46 Julie: =w=
2016-09-19 13:46 -Kamikaze-: XD
2016-09-19 13:46 Julie: the no DT, play full houur =w=
2016-09-19 13:51 -Kamikaze-: oki I'm going off osu owo
2016-09-19 13:51 -Kamikaze-: will be on discrod still

key=1/2/3/4
00:45:393 (45393|0) - this could be a 1/2 LN according to previous patterns : 00:40:593 (40593|0,40793|3,40793|1) -
00:42:393 (42393|0) - this one is okay as a LN eventho the sound isn't really significant as here :00:37:593 (37593|3) - imho
00:52:993 (52993|1) - add note to 2 there is a instru sound here : also according to : 00:55:893 (55893|1,56193|1) -
00:54:293 (54293|1) - same as ^ , add a note to : 00:54:593 (54593|1) -
01:18:393 (78393|0) - you could double this one imho
01:19:993 (79993|0) - same ^
01:21:593 (81593|0) - ^ and here aswell
01:22:993 (82993|0,82993|1,83193|3,83193|2,83293|2,83293|3) - move this whole block one line up (the snaps are blue and blue red lines (basically 1/4 later)
02:56:793 (176793|3,176793|1,176893|3,176893|1,176993|1,176993|3,177093|1,177093|3,177193|1,177193|3) - oh girl that jack XD ahah
04:20:593 (260593|1,260593|0) - move to 3 -4 it could make a nice flow imo
04:26:993 (266993|3,266993|2) - move to 1 -2
06:02:993 (362993|1,362993|0) - ^ again same suggest
and this one aswell 06:09:393 (369393|3,369393|2) -

10:59:593 (659593|1,659593|3,659793|2) - you can make notes jacking here for the double kick effect
12:14:393 (734393|2,734493|2,734593|2,734693|2) - jack fest yeouuuuhouuuu xD ahah , fun stuffs


LOOOOL I GOT THE BAD IDEA OF CTR+A , the editor froze :joy: ahahahahha xDDDD omj
14:33:993 (873993|0,873993|3,874093|2,874193|0,874293|2,874393|0,874393|3,874493|1) - nice alternative there
15:25:993 (925993|2) - add one more note , according to : 15:32:393 (932393|2,932393|0) -
15:29:193 (929193|2) - add to 4 ^ same suggestion
15:41:993 (941993|2) - ^
17:00:393 (1020393|2) - dondondon ^
17:06:793 (1026793|2) - ^ in case you ask why on the LN part adding, it's cause of that :17:13:493 (1033493|3,1033493|0) -

18:32:393 (1112393|3,1112393|0,1112493|1,1112593|2,1112693|3,1112793|0,1112793|2) - Hello this is a Z pattern ahah
18:40:393 (1120393|3,1120393|0) - shoulddn't thoose LNs end 1/4 earlier ?

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32:37:193 (1957193|3,1957193|1,1957193|0,1957293|3,1957293|2,1957393|0,1957393|1,1957493|3,1957493|2,1957593|1,1957593|0,1957693|3,1957693|2,1957793|1,1957793|0,1957893|3,1957893|2,1957993|1,1957993|0,1958093|3,1958093|2,1958193|1,1958193|0,1958293|3,1958293|2,1958393|1,1958393|0,1958493|3,1958493|2,1958593|1,1958593|0,1958693|3,1958693|2) - Maybe remove it and add part similar to this 32:28:493 (1948493|1,1948593|2,1948693|3,1948793|2,1948793|0,1948893|1,1948993|2,1949093|3,1949193|0,1949193|2,1949293|1,1949393|2,1949493|3,1949593|0,1949593|2,1949693|1,1949793|2,1949893|3) -

Windows sounds
32:52:137 - 32:52:331 - 32:58:331 - 32:58:524 - maybe LNs instead one note. This is example 34:31:234 (2071234|2,2071234|3,2071427|1) -

33:06:653 (1986653|1) - to 1 column. I think that it would look better.
33:08:201 (1988201|1,1988395|1) - the same situation that above. To column 1 and 33:08:589 (1988589|0) - move to column 2.
33:09:750 (1989750|1,1990137|1) - ymm the same. Column 1 and 33:10:331 (1990331|2) - to column 2 and 33:10:524 (1990524|0,1990524|1,1990718|2) - ctrl+H
33:11:298 (1991298|1,1991492|1) - hehe column 1 and 33:11:685 (1991685|0) - to column 2
33:12:847 (1992847|1) - ayy column 1
hmm I hope that you know what I mean. Next do the same until that moment 33:22:524 -

33:23:105 (2003105|2,2003105|0,2003298|1,2003298|3) - the same think that with widows sounds above. Maybe LN ( for example 34:31:234 (2071234|2,2071234|3,2071427|1) - o )

33:36:266 (2016266|3) - is this needed? I propose remove it ;w;

34:20:976 (2060976|2,2062524|2,2064072|2) - move to column 4
34:24:847 (2064847|2) - maybe to column 1
34:27:169 (2067169|1,2068718|1,2070266|1) - to column 1
34:33:363 (2073363|2,2074911|2,2076460|2) - to column 4
34:37:234 (2077234|2) - maybe to column 1
soo... Next do the same until that moment 34:37:234 (2077234|0) -

34:48:072 (2088072|2) - move to column 2
34:52:718 (2092718|2) - move to column 1
34:55:814 (2095814|2) - move to column 1
Why? Because it's more comfortable and because I inspired by 34:44:976 (2084976|1,2084976|0) -

36:13:350 (2173350|0) - I propose column 2

36:59:550 (2219550|2,2219550|1,2219950|1,2219950|2) - tone sounds are different than sounds below so I propose 36:56:350 (2216350|2,2216750|2) - move to column 2 and 36:57:150 (2217150|1,2217550|1,2217950|1,2218350|1,2218750|1,2219150|1) - move this to col 1

38:18:950 (2298950|0,2299350|0) - hmm I think that will be better if these notes will be moved to column 3
38:20:150 (2300150|1) - move to column 3
38:21:750 (2301750|0) - why column 1?
38:24:550 - maybe one note in column 2?

39:37:150 (2377150|1) - yyymmm col 4 plz
39:38:550 (2378550|3) - move to 2

40:32:750 (2432750|2) - to 4 for pitch and 40:32:950 (2432950|3,2432950|1) - move to left and 40:33:050 (2433050|0) - move this to 2 or 4 or where you want xD

40:34:350 (2434350|1) - move to column 3

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24:53:393 (1493393|2,1493793|2,1494193|2) - hmmm maybe move to column 1 and 24:53:593 (1493593|0,1493593|1,1493993|0,1493993|1) - move this to right [23] and 24:54:393 (1494393|1) - move this note to col 3

24:56:193 (1496193|2,1496393|1,1496393|0,1496593|2,1496793|1,1496793|0,1496993|2,1497193|1,1497193|0,1497393|2,1497593|1) - http://puu.sh/rFUgv/61f2885ed6.png

25:08:393 (1508393|3,1508393|2,1508493|2,1508493|3,1508593|3,1508593|2,1508693|2,1508693|3,1508793|2,1508793|3) - ugh... http://puu.sh/rFUoJ/e078d217da.png I think that these moments are more. I recommended this anywhere. Gameplay is more important.

25:55:193 (1555193|1,1555193|2,1555293|2,1555293|1,1555493|2,1555493|1) - ughh? ;_; ^the same thing

25:56:593 (1556593|0,1556593|2,1556793|2,1556793|0,1556893|0,1556893|2,1556993|2,1556993|0,1557093|2,1557093|0) - yeaah ^

*continue watching*
26:02:893 (1562893|2,1562893|0,1562993|0,1562993|2,1563093|2,1563093|0,1563193|0,1563193|2,1563893|1,1563893|2,1563993|1,1563993|2,1564093|1,1564093|2,1564193|1,1564193|2,1564293|1,1564293|2,1564693|3,1564693|1,1564793|3,1564793|1,1564893|3,1564893|1,1564993|1,1564993|3,1565093|3,1565093|1) - Julie plz ;_;


28:15:793 (1695793|1) - ufff normality. Move to column 3 ^^

Ahh my head. I hope that's enough. Everything in this mod for cosmetic changes aimed at improving the gameplay and look better to the eye.

>w<

change:
31:51:793 (1911793|3,1912193|2) be doubles
31:54:993 (1914993|2) ^
31:58:193 (1918193|3,1918593|2) ^
32:04:393 (1924393|0,1924393|2,1924593|3,1924793|1,1924793|0,1924993|2) ^ doubles with lns now
32:10:793 (1930793|2,1930793|0,1930993|3,1931193|0,1931193|1,1931393|2) ^
32:07:793 (1927793|2) ^just double

32:14:793 hella lazy patterning
39:56:150 ^

36:55:550 the doubles should just be lns

37:01:750 place those lnss in other cols, seem like 1,4 was forgotten

45:40:150 place some of those jacks in col 1,4 i mean fo real, this aint 2k

47:29:750 continue these with the doubles ahead
49:17:750 this part should be like this part ^^^^^?????!??
49:43:350 now you do it?

52:04:350 this aint 2k
53:33:950 ^

58:30:129 map these lns to pitch

add:
33:55:234 you can add notes for those gallop snare like 33:56:395 and 33:56:492
35:08:976 ln for vocals
43:34:850 ln col 1 3 ticks
43:38:050 ^
43:41:250 ^

56:58:267 there are sounds here, maybe too quiet to map?

del:
50:46:150 (3046150|3) flat out throw it out the window

All of the mod will likely be suggestions of random stuff because I think modding random timespans of a map is not a really good way to check consistency or pattering xD

32:38:793 - I thiiink this might be better if you add some sort of slowjam on it and change the pattern a little bit. Maybe like this?



32:40:718 (1960718|3,1960718|0,1961105|2,1961105|3,1961492|0,1961492|3) - Also you could make those triplets for the crashes!

32:49:331 - 32:49:524 - those are good 1/4s to make the map less mindblocky. Up to you tho

32:52:331 - SV PLS Make it like super fast into the crash if you want to.

32:53:105 - Same thing for the triples

32:55:524 - Same thing for 1/4s

33:00:653 - Something like this maybe?



33:02:201 - Then this (windows sounds are so good)



33:23:685 - Weeew



Most if not all of this suggestions are to not make your map just jumptrills but I think it can also apply to be your style because the map is quite unique already. Dunno, will just keep suggesting stuff. (Of course the last one should keep that pattern until 33:26:782 - )

33:26:782 - Then here you coooould:



33:57:653 - Missing a note there?

34:03:653 - Well this is hard to add but there are some 1/4s there as well. Up to you.

34:07:234 - Well, that not being a triple is a sad thing but I guess it makes sense to not make it super ouch

34:07:814 - You could try to do some stuff like this here: Kinda makes it a bit less monotonous maybe



34:09:556 - For the other windows sound perhaps



34:25:040 (2065040|2,2065427|0) - Shouldnt those be doubles as well?
34:31:427 (2071427|1) - ^
34:37:718 - Same goes here
34:43:814 (2083814|2,2083911|0) - Ctrl+h or Ctrl+g for pitch!
34:45:750 (2085750|2,2085750|3,2085879|1) - Ctrl+h for pitch

(cant believe that windows sounds would make me say pitch)
34:48:847 - Also you did it here so

34:50:782 (2090782|3) - Wouldnt be better to be on slot 2? Same sound as before

34:52:331 (2092331|0) - ^ but on 4
34:53:879 (2093879|0) - ^ you get me
34:55:427 - ^And same

Anyways, probably the next 2 minutes is likely the same stuff being pointed out. WINDOWS IS LOVE

35:02:976 (2102976|0) - You could use doubles for those notes in this whole pattern

35:06:653 - Ayy lmao

35:07:040 (2107040|0,2107089|2,2107137|0,2107185|2,2107234|0,2107282|2,2107331|0,2107379|2) - You coooould move that to riight since pitch but whatever



Sorry if it was a bit too short, is really hard for me to mod something like this without having the full context of the map but I guess everyone has that problem. Thats also the reason because I mostly used pictures instead of explanations of what I think you might want to change, cant really find the words if I dont have the look of the whole map. Its funny that most of the suggestions can probably work for most of the map, specially those 1/4s mentioned. Anyways YOU WILL DEFINITELY WILL NEED LUCK HERE SO I WISH YOU ALL MY LUCK.

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