M4M request[General]I noticed you have added these tags of Reflec Beat Colette, pop'n music Sunny Park, Sound Voltex II - Infinite Infection for rhythm game sources as well as AiMEE the singer in the tags on the beatmap website, however I don't see them in the actual metadata box when setting up the song and you should probably double check it.
Maybe, as an suggestion you should turn down the HP drain to 4.5, as the song is very streamy and the OD 6 adds another layer of difficulty to accurately hit the notes or you could make the OD 5.5 and keep the HP drain the same.
For hitsound inherited points with 90% volume, I think you can tone it down to 85% or tone down the other hitsound volumes as 90% is a bit loud.
[Inner Oni]00:08:142 (11) - Change to
k, To repeat the pattern like you did with 00:06:678 (7,8) - and for the violins in the background.
00:08:508 (12) - ^
00:10:337 (15) - ^
00:17:654 (24) - ^
00:19:483 (29) - ^
00:20:215 (31) - ^, these pattern can alternate and make it more interesting as well highlight the violin parts.
00:24:605 (1) - Change to a
K with a finisher, It works better with the piano part coming in.
00:26:069 (6) - Change to a
k, It highlights the piano right here as well this note at 00:25:886 (5) -
00:27:532 (12) - ^, It highlights the piano and the note between it at 00:27:349 (11) - and 00:27:715 (13) -
00:31:556 (27) - Switch this note with 00:31:922 (28) - , as the
k, will highlight it better at 00:31:922 (28) - with the piano.
00:36:312 (44) - Change to a
k, for the piano part starting again.
00:35:215 (41) - Change to a
d, for consistency like you did with 00:34:849 (40), as well as making this note better 00:36:312 (44) -
00:35:947 (43) - ^
00:37:227 - Add a
d, I hear the piano and makes the note at 00:37:410 (48) - with a
k, sound more pronounced.
00:39:971 - Adding a
d, would be better than having a gap as the piano and music is continuous on this part of 00:38:690 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) -
00:43:630 (70) - Change to
k, as the piano key can be clearly heard here and be more pronounced if changed.
00:45:276 (77) - Change to a
k, if you're going to have a
k, on this part 00:44:910 (75) - for that ringing sound.
00:48:020 (86) - Change to a
k, to highlight the start of a new piano part again.
00:47:288 (84) - Change to a
d, for the continuous piano part as well as highlighting this note at 00:48:020 (86) -
00:47:654 (85) - ^
00:48:203 - Add a
d, as there's a faint piano sound.
00:48:751 (87) - Change to a
k, for the singer's voice to be more pronounced.
00:48:569 - Add a
d, as the singer's voice comes in and the gap at 00:48:386 - makes the two patterns at 00:48:020 (86,87) - and 00:48:569 (88,89) - be doubles.
00:50:581 - Add a
k, as I hear both the singer's voice and the piano part come in.
00:50:947 - Add a
d, as the vocals drop off and the piano parts stops.
00:51:312 - Add a
d, as the piano comes in faintly.
00:51:495 - ^
00:51:678 - ^
00:51:861 (93) - Change to a
k, as the vocals become more pronounced.
00:52:227 (95) - Move this note over to 00:52:319 -
00:52:776 - Add a
d, as the piano key can be heard.
00:53:142 (96) - Move this note back to 00:52:959 - as it works better with the piano in the background.
00:53:142 - Add a
k, for the vocals saying something.
00:54:239 - Add a
d, for the piano here.
00:54:422 - Add a
k, for the piano ending.
00:54:971 (100) - Change to a
k, as the vocals are saying something.
00:55:154 (101) - Switch to a
d, as the vocals are lower and highlights this note at 00:55:337 (102) -
00:55:703 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - I understand you're highlighting the vocals before the music kicks in but you could also add notes in for the piano parts here to keep consistency, either way is fine and is up to you.
00:58:630 (110) - Change to a
k, if you're highlighting the vocals and since it works better as a (
k,
k,
k) pattern before the music kicking in,
01:00:276 - Change to a
d, to highlight the note after it at 01:00:367 (118) -
01:00:459 (119) - Add a
k, I hear the piano keys going high and the vocals as well, this pattern at 01:00:276 (117,118,119) - would be opposite of 00:59:910 (114,115,116) - and would play well.
01:01:739 (126) - Change to a
d, to highlight the note after it at 01:01:831 (127) -
01:01:922 - Add a
k, Same thing as the vocals and piano part going high and the patterning at 01:01:373 (123,124,125) - would be the exact opposite of it.
01:03:477 (138) - Add a
d, for the vocals and piano part and this pattern at 01:03:203 (135,136,137,138,139) - to be a five note stream.
01:05:398 - Remove this note if you want to have a gap as the vocals overpower any of the music and it can be a break until the vocals come in at 01:05:581 (149) -
01:05:581 (149) - Change to a
k, for the vocals singing a new line.
01:05:764 (150) - Change to
d, The vocals is continuous and low, and faint sounds can be heard here.
01:05:855 (151) - ^
01:05:947 (152) - Change to
k, as the vocals go a bit high here.
01:06:495 (155) - Change to
d, to better highlight the vocals.
01:06:587 (156) - ^
01:06:678 (157) - Change to
k, This emphasizes the vocals and the notes before at 01:06:495 (155,156) -
01:06:861 (158) - Switch the note with 01:07:044 (159) - as it plays better with the vocals.
01:09:239 (175) - Change to a
k, for the synthetic sound here.
01:09:971 (181) - ^
01:10:611 (186) - Change to a
k, as there's an extra synthetic sound here as well.
01:10:703 (187) - ^
01:11:434 (191) - Change to a
K with a finisher, it highlights the piano part coming to a end and plays better with the note at 01:11:251 (190) -
01:12:898 (203) - Change to a
k, synthetic sound goes a bit higher.
01:13:630 (209) - ^
01:14:361 (214) - Change to a
K with a finisher, as the piano part comes in and plays well with this note at 01:14:178 (213) -
01:14:819 (217) - Change to a
k, as the synthetic sound is still continuing.
01:15:825 (223) - Change to a
K with a finisher, as the piano part comes in and plays well with this note at 01:15:642 (222) -
01:17:288 (232) - ^
01:18:751 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255) - Nice stream pattern.
01:21:770 - Remove this note to highlight the stream pattern at 01:21:130 (257,258,259,260,261,262,263) - and the kiai part coming in as well as giving a little break.
01:21:861 (264) - Change to a
k, the music is kicking in and contrasts the note after at 01:21:953 (265) -
01:22:776 (273) - Change to a
d, if you're emphasizing the drums and the boom sound here.
01:22:959 (275) - You can change this to a
k, if you're highlighting melody here.
01:23:325 (279) - ^
01:24:422 (290) - Change to a
k, as the piano part pops in a bit.
01:24:514 (291) - ^, this would make this part at 01:24:239 (288,289,290,291,292) - a better stream pattern to play.
01:25:977 (305) - Change to
k, melody hits a high note here and you need to emphasize it.
01:29:087 - Add a
d, faint music can be heard here.
01:29:178 (335) - You can remove the note if you're doing the above.
01:29:270 (336) - ^, same thing and it provides a break for the pattern before at 01:28:630 (330,331,332,333,334) -
01:29:453 (337) - You can add a
d, as there is music here and it if you did the above. ^
01:30:550 - You can add a
k, since the music still continues.
01:33:020 (371) - Change this to a
d, if you want to emphasize the drums and the bass going boom three times.
01:33:203 (372) - Change to a k, as the melody also kicks in and you can show the bass going boom three times a different way too.
01:33:294 (373) - ^
01:36:678 (406) - Change to a
k, The piano key can be heard here.
01:41:251 (449) - Change to
k, if you want the break at 01:41:160 - to pronounced, and the drums can be heard as well as the melody.
01:45:276 - Add a
d, the music is continuing but slowing down from the kiai part as well.
01:45:367 - ^, it works well as (
d,
d,
d) patten.
01:48:386 (509) - Change to
k, as the singer is ending her line here.
01:49:117 (514) - Change to
d, the singer is continuing and works better with the drums in the background here.
01:49:300 (515) - Change to a
k, to show that the singer is saying something.
01:54:239 (548) - ^
01:54:971 (549) - Change to
d, as it works better continuing the 1/2
don pattern.
01:55:154 (550) - ^
01:55:337 (551) - Change to
k, indicates new part section of music and the melody kicking in a little bit.
01:56:069 (558) - ^
01:56:800 (564) - Change to a
K with a finisher, it fits the melody better than a
D with a finisher.
01:57:532 (569) - Change to a
k, the singer is saying something here and it emphasizes it.
01:58:264 (572) - ^
01:58:812 (576) - ^
01:59:178 (579) - ^, works well as a double 1/2
kat pattern with 01:59:361 (580) -
02:00:825 (589) - Change to a
d, the vocals go low here.
02:01:008 (590) - Change to a
k, vocals say something and the voice is a bit high here.
02:01:922 (595) - ^
02:02:654 (599) - ^, Piano key can be heard here.
02:04:666 (612) - ^
02:06:130 (623) - ^
02:07:959 (634) - ^
02:07:959 (634) - ^, The vocals are ending soon as the music slows down.
02:11:434 (645) - Switch this note with 02:11:983 (646) -
02:14:178 (647) - Change to a
k, works well as the opposite of this pattern at 02:14:727 (649,650) -
02:15:459 (652) - Change to a
k, vocals are present here.
02:15:825 (654) - Change to
d, vocals are ending here.
02:16:922 (658) - Change to a
k, for the vocals here and opposite of the pattern before at 02:16:190 (655,656) -
02:17:654 (660) - Switch this note with 02:17:837 (661) -
02:18:203 (662) - Switch this note with 02:18:569 (663) -
02:19:117 (664) - Change to a
k, vocals are picking up and so is the music.
02:22:959 (685) - Switch this note with 02:23:142 (686) - , it mirrors this pattern at 02:24:422 (694,695) -
02:30:459 (725) - Change to a
k, For the vocals.
02:31:190 (733) - ^
02:35:947 (775) - Change to a
k, for voice here.
02:36:312 (779) - ^
02:37:776 (791) - ^
02:40:520 (817) - ^, for the vocals going down a key.
02:43:904 (846) - Change to a
k, I hear a double beat with the melody.
02:45:459 (861) - ^
02:46:648 - Add a
d, stream is continuing and as well as the music.
02:46:739 (873) - Change to
d, to keep continuity for the music and stream pattern.
02:48:934 (894) - Change to
k, vocals go up a bit here and copies the same pattern at 02:48:569 (891,892,893) -
02:54:605 (946) - Change to
D with a finisher, works better as a break and the music kicking in after.
02:54:788 (947) - ^
02:54:971 (948) - ^
02:55:154 (949) - ^
02:59:361 (991) - Change to
k, singer's voice can be heard here.
03:00:733 (1003) - ^
03:03:751 (1033) - ^
03:09:239 (1089) - ^
03:12:898 (1123) - Change to a
K with a finisher, vocals is ending as well as the kiai section before.
03:22:593 (1174) - Change to a
k, vocals are still going on here.
03:24:697 - Add a
d, I hear a different melody going on here.
03:24:788 - ^
03:24:880 - ^
03:25:428 - ^
03:25:886 (1196) - Change to a
k, the vocals are continuing and plays better like a three
kat pattern.
03:26:892 (1203) - Change to a
k, vocals continues like a double here.
03:29:178 (1216) - Change to a
k, vocals are faintly there and it plays better.
03:30:093 (1222) - ^
03:31:373 (1227) - ^
03:31:739 (1229) - ^
03:33:203 (1238) - ^
03:33:386 (1239) - ^
03:33:569 (1240) - ^
03:34:300 (1245) - ^
03:34:666 (1247) - ^
03:37:593 (1267) - ^
03:39:056 (1277) - ^
03:41:434 (1289) - Change to a
D with a finisher, as the vocals kick in and the kiai part after it.
03:41:617 (1290) - ^
03:41:800 (1291) - ^
03:41:983 (1292) - ^
03:42:898 (1297) - Change to a
k, vocals are here.
03:43:630 (1302) - ^
03:44:178 (1305) - ^
03:44:544 (1308) - ^
03:44:910 (1311) - ^
03:46:008 (1319) - ^
03:46:373 (1322) - ^
03:48:020 (1334) - ^
03:48:934 (1339) - ^
03:49:300 (1341) - ^
03:50:215 (1348) - ^
03:51:495 (1357) - ^
03:52:410 (1363) - ^
03:54:422 (1374) - ^
03:56:251 (1386) - ^
03:56:617 (1389) - ^
03:57:075 (1393) - ^
03:57:532 (1396) - ^
03:57:715 (1398) - ^
03:58:081 (1400) - ^
03:58:995 (1407) - ^
03:59:910 (1415) - ^
04:00:276 (1418) - ^
04:00:642 (1421) - ^
04:01:922 (1427) - ^
04:02:654 (1433) - ^
04:04:392 (1447) - ^
04:04:849 (1451) - ^
04:05:581 (1) - Change to a
K with a finisher, kiai parts come to a close and vocals slow down.
04:08:386 (7) - Change to a
k, if you're gonna emphasize the vocals ending here.
04:14:361 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - Really nice stream pattern here.
04:28:995 (60) - Remove this note or you can tone down the hitsound volume a lot as the vocals really fade out here and don't end on a point.
04:35:947 (70) - Change to a
k, as the violin is present more here.
04:36:312 (71) - ^
04:39:239 (77) - ^
04:42:166 (80) - ^
04:47:654 (89) - ^
04:48:020 (90) - ^
04:50:947 (96) - ^
04:51:678 (97) - ^
Please point out any mistakes in timeline pastes and mix-up with
don and
kats, as this mod post was very long and one of my firsts as I liked the song quite a bit.
Best endeavors in getting this marathon ranked.
Chromoxx
tasuke912
