I love this song

[Soul-less/Hit sound]

I think this is better.
However, I think more on more sounds.

Good luck!

Download: Yuzuki - Dear You - remix (Ayeen) [Sample hit].osu

I know, I fail hard at hitsound ~.~

General:
Offset deems to be little bit wrong, but i am not an expert in those things
You should make map's more rythmical.

Lovely:
00:11:522 (3) - make it shorter and start at 00:11:867 - 3 reverses and end at 00:12:556 -
00:13:246 (5) - delete 2 reverses and add a note at 00:13:936 -
00:14:281 (1) - delete
00:13:936 (6) - new combo
00:18:763 (4) - make it shorter, like 00:17:384 (2) - and make 1 revers. delete finish.
00:19:453 - add a note here
00:19:798 (6) - move it to 00:19:970 (6) -
00:20:143 (7) - delete reverse, make shorter so it will end at 00:20:143 (7) - delete finish
00:20:660 (x) - add a slider end at 00:20:832 -
00:21:522 (10) - remove finish at the beginning of slider
00:25:315 (5) - delete
00:25:660 (5) - delete
00:26:005 (1) - delete slider
00:25:660 (5) - make a slider,with 3 reverses end at 00:26:349 -
00:26:694 - add a note
00:27:039 - ^
00:27:384 (8) - delete
00:28:074 (9) - make it shorter and move it to 00:28:418 -
00:29:798 (2) - make it shorter
00:31:177 (3) - delete
00:31:522 (3) - move it to 00:31:177 (3) -
00:32:211 - add a note
00:32:556 - ^
OMG.... i will continue tomorrow. to much mistakes, and i didn't play other diffs yet.

Thanks for your time. But, all seem fine to me. Waiting for next modder on it for confirmation. About the offset, 143 is the best I get from like 10+ ppl. This map was famous before it uploaded to the server because of BPM issues

alright
offset = 174
bpm = 174.12

make sure the beats are either on a white or a red tick

i will remod again tomorrow on

I found the issues on "Lovely". Since the beginning of the mapping it is set 87BPM, there is some slider need to be redo. Should be some issues on Adorable too.

Too late in the midnight already. That all should be fix all day tomorrow ~.~

Edit: Done fixing on Lovely difficulty and Adorable

Ayeen wrote:

Thanks for your time. But, all seem fine to me. Waiting for next modder on it for confirmation. About the offset, 143 is the best I get from like 10+ ppl. This map was famous before it uploaded to the server because of BPM issues

So, i don't need to continue mod?

★ミ

nicktoons wrote:

Ayeen wrote:

Thanks for your time. But, all seem fine to me. Waiting for next modder on it for confirmation. About the offset, 143 is the best I get from like 10+ ppl. This map was famous before it uploaded to the server because of BPM issues

So, i don't need to continue mod?

Still, I will stay with my bpm for now. modding is still needed

Hello~
offset 154
As I already said Rename - Dear You (Remix)
Higurashi moved to Source
remove commas in a tag
2 timing section : bpm 174,20 ~ offset 66 332
Kiai Mod
01:28:422 start
01:39:357 finish
01:39:443 start
01:50:465 finish
[Lovely]
00:11:177 (2) - finish
00:13:246 (5) - new combo
00:14:281 (1) - delete new combo
00:14:625 (2) - new combo
00:16:694 (1) - finish
00:17:384 (2) - new combo
00:21:522 (4,1) - spacing
00:25:660(x)-add note
00:27:729 (3) - new combo
00:29:453 (1) - delete new combo
00:29:798 (2) - new combo
00:33:246 (2) - finish
00:34:970 (7) - clap
00:35:746 - ^
00:36:349-^
00:36:694 (2,4,6) - delete clap
00:39:108-clap
00:39:798-^
00:41:177^
00:42:556^
everyone else claps remove
00:44:281 (1) - finish
00:44:970 (3,5) - delete clap
00:46:349^
00:47:039^
00:47:729 clap
00:48:418 clap
00:49:108 clap
00:49:798 clap
00:50:487 clap
00:51:177 clap
00:49:453 (2,4) - delete clap
[Adorable]
00:10:832 (1,1,1) - delete new combo
00:11:177 (1,1) - spacing
00:15:315 (6) - new combo
00:15:660 (1,1) - delete new combo
00:17:384 (1) - ^
00:18:419 (1) - ^
00:18:763 (2) - new combo
00:19:798 (1) - delete new combo
00:20:143 (2) - new combo
00:25:315 (1) - delete new combo
00:25:660 (2) - new combo
00:27:039 (1) - delete new combo
00:29:453 (1) - delete new combo

else IRС Modding

Thanks Qrool for the hitsound mod.
Here's my updated difficulty.(Remember to delete the old .osu file or else there'll be duplicated difficulties due to different name!)

Download: Yuzuki - Dear You(Remix) (Ayeen) [Soul-less' Hard].osu

Imply ZLOdeuka modding and some more hitsound added.

alright here is my mod

x3 modlog

General: bpm = 174,12 3/4 signature < important this is constant
slider velocity = 1.10
offset 1 = 143
offset 2 = 55.315

after applying these changes u may need to redo some sliders (extra bounce or a bit shorter/longer)

star~

Thanks for your effort and star XepherX3. Too many offset argument on this map already .

Long before this uploaded to server, there is argument on BPM too. In the early stages of mapping, BPM was set 87. Uploaded to mediafire and asking for some help on #modhelp as i feel weird on later section of song the notes drop from white tick to red ticks, though still playable. After that, it got the second timing BPM as 87.15. But then, this BPM is slow considering to the bass. So it was suggested to 174 and second section to 174.2. After it uploaded, seem like everyone have their own opinion about it offset. I wonder if I follow all the BPM offset here in modding, I will be redo snapping few times >.<

Offset: 66,378ms BPM: 174.20 insert an uninherited timing section here and your metronome will be back on track.

Lovely:
Remove the inherited points at 32901, 44280, and 54970.
Update the positions of all the inherited sections after the BPM change.

00:18:763 (3,1,2) - Curve these sliders around the (1). Try this:
00:22:901 (2) - Try this:
00:24:280 (4) - This looks a bit nicer (it's a copy of the other one):
00:31:177 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle.
00:36:694 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try this:
00:36:694 (2,4,6) - Add whistle. (6) might sound better with a finish instead.
00:40:832 (2) - Change the five sounds to be: whistle, none, clap, none, whistle.
00:46:005 (6,7) - Up one.
00:51:867 (1,3) - This overlapping is nasty.
01:11:515 (1,2,3) - Reshape (1) and move the start of (3):
01:17:370 (1) - Two left.
01:17:715 (2) - Up and left one.
01:19:437 (7) - One up. Also, I think this has too many finishes.
01:25:637 (2,3) - Down one.
01:26:326 (4) - Right one, down two.
01:26:670 (5) - Down two.
01:27:014 (6) - Down three. Finish?
01:29:081 (4) - Up one.
01:29:425 (5) - Left one.
01:29:770 (6) - Left one, up two.
01:30:114 (1,2) - Left two, up one.
01:30:803 (3) - Left one, up two.
01:31:148 (4) - Left and up one.
01:31:492 (1) - Up one.
01:32:525 (4) - Down one.
01:32:870 (5,6) - Right one.
01:36:658 (4) - Down and right one.
01:38:036 (3) - Down and right one.
01:38:381 (4) - Two right.
01:40:447 (4) - Left and down one.
01:40:792 (5) - Left and up one.
01:41:481 (1) - Left and up one.
01:41:825 (2) - Right and down one.
01:42:169 (3) - Three up, one right.
01:43:203 (2,3,4) - Down and right one.
01:44:236 (5) - Right one, down two.
01:44:925 (1,2) - Down and right one.
01:50:436 (1) - Too long for an easy diff.

Adorable:
Update the positions of all the inherited sections after the BPM change.
Maybe slider tick rate 1? Tick rate of 2 is awful in the 0.5x section.
The hitsounds are way too soft at the end.

00:16:694 (1) - Remove clap.
00:21:522 (3) - Remove whistle from the last repeat and change to a finish (00:22:211).
00:31:522 (3) - Up one.
00:38:763 (1) - Remove clap, add finish.
00:42:211 (2) - Remove clap.
00:42:556 (3) - Two right, one down.
00:48:763 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:798 (3) - Add new combo.
00:52:556 (5) - Up one.
01:39:414 (1) - Add a clap to the end of this.

Soul-less' Hard:
00:23:591 (1,2,3,4) - This shape is a bit of a mess. The spacing between 2,3 is half the distance of 1,2 and 3,4.
00:53:936 (1) - Make the kiai section finish exactly at the end of this spinner.
01:37:347 (1,2,3) - This sudden change in spacing doesn't really fit.

Mostly nazi stuff. Starred.

Hey, just wanted to point out that artist is "DJ Genericname" and song title just "Dear You"

Take a look at this mp3, I think it's better
http://puu.sh/1lms

Offset for first section would be 0 for that mp3 (and I think that's all you need for bpm sections)

General
-You must end the spinner at the same time in all diffs
-I think [Lovely] is a tad too hard for easiest diff
-Rename Soul-less' Hard into sth. else? [Lovely] , [Adorable] , [Hard] sounds a bit...strange y'know xD
-delete empty .osb
-Move this map to Pending or are you gonna add more skin elements?
-I think the timing on the 2nd red line is a bit off...maybe as someone experienced @timing for this



Soul-less' Hard

*AR -1
*00:13:418 (2) - Remove Clap
*00:13:591 (3) - Add Clap
*00:13:763 (4) - Remove Clap (Why is the clap pattern changing? It doesn't sound very well...)
*00:20:143 (1) - Make it like this : and add clap on (2)
*00:23:763 (2,3) - and all the cross-patterns after this have slight spacings but it should be okay
*00:27:729 (1) - spacing
*01:15:993 (9) - Not-so-really-good-looking-slider (please fix !! ;w;)
*01:25:292 (1) - Fix overlap...
*01:37:347 (1,2,3) - 4 grids left?
*01:50:436 (1) - End the spinner here : 01:54:052 - ?

Adoreable

*00:34:625 (5) - NC => 00:36:349 (1) - Remove NC
*(NAZI)00:42:556 (3) - 1 grid right
*00:54:970 (8) - NC + remove finish?
*01:50:436 (1) - end here : 01:54:052 - ?

Lovely

*00:11:522 (3) - This is an [Easy] !! Way too many reverses
*00:25:660 (6,1) - swap NC
*01:46:991 (3) - too hard
*01:48:369 (2) - ^
*01:50:436 (1) - end here : 01:54:052 - ?


Cool song and Map , good luck on ranking this !
STAR~