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Amamiya Sora - Kanade

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_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年4月10日 at 2:01:05

Artist: Amamiya Sora
Title: Kanade
Source: 一週間フレンズ。
Tags: ed one week friends love school boy gril Pata-mon [Kamiya]
BPM: 77
Filesize: 9835kb
Play Time: 04:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kamiya's normal (1.95 stars, 340 notes)
  2. Pata-Mon's Hard (3.11 stars, 461 notes)
  3. To you (4.11 stars, 582 notes)
Download: Amamiya Sora - Kanade
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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- Me
- Pata-Mon

- [Kamiya]
Last edited by _MiaoFUuU_ , edited 23 times in total.
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor
[Normal]
先把AIMOD里的东西清了吧......
02:06:945 (2,3) - blanket
00:54:540 (2,2) - 这两个最好能叠在一起
03:14:150 (4,1) - 能叠就叠，不然丑
03:14:150 (4,1) - ^
01:20:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
节奏有点迷，因为你没有easy难度，所以normal稍微简单点比较好.......这里我觉得四个滑条带过去就可以了
02:26:147 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:33:343 (2) - 这个爱心建议把最左边那个点改成白点，弧度更舒服一点，红点那里有个尖尖的地方
02:38:547 (1) - 从这里开始我觉得四个1/1滑条带过就可以了，这么摆的话感觉重音的地方不clickable
建议取消的NC
00:53:340 (1) -
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建议增加的NC
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04:14:953 (2) -
04:24:354 (2) -
04:26:154 (2) -

02:58:949 (3,4,1) - 像这种和00:47:340 (1,2,3) - 这种，你最好统一下，最好是能在重音的地方NC，不然总觉得怪怪的，还有几个这样的地方我就不写了
把这些nc之后再看看，最好同样的节奏能对应同样的下法，毕竟是偏easy一点的normal.......

[hard]
没啥说的
[to you]
00:45:940 - 这里为什么漏了呀
00:49:140 - ^
00:49:940 - ^
后面也是，感觉这么漏不好吧......
01:20:742 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 五角星的话感觉不标准
01:28:543 (1,1) - 这里都NC了为什么01:31:743 (3) - 不呢？
03:02:149 (3,4) - 建议叠到前面那个1的滑条尾下
主要是前面，最好能跟下vocal还是跟下吧

好曲子，射星了，GL
_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

kanor wrote:

[to you]
00:45:940 - 这里为什么漏了呀
00:49:140 - ^
00:49:940 - ^
后面也是，感觉这么漏不好吧...... 前面主要跟伴奏
01:20:742 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 五角星的话感觉不标准 √
01:28:543 (1,1) - 这里都NC了为什么01:31:743 (3) - 不呢？√
03:02:149 (3,4) - 建议叠到前面那个1的滑条尾下 这种要开堆叠效果看
主要是前面，最好能跟下vocal还是跟下吧 我是根据鼓点强弱来下的，和这里一样01:47:744 - ，01:58:945 - 这里就开始变密集

好曲子，射星了，GL
THX For Modding
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]
[quote="kanor"][Normal]
先把AIMOD里的东西清了吧......
02:06:945 (2,3) - blanket
00:54:540 (2,2) - 这两个最好能叠在一起
03:14:150 (4,1) - 能叠就叠，不然丑
03:14:150 (4,1) - ^
01:20:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
节奏有点迷，因为你没有easy难度，所以normal稍微简单点比较好.......这里我觉得四个滑条带过去就可以了
02:26:147 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:33:343 (2) - 这个爱心建议把最左边那个点改成白点，弧度更舒服一点，红点那里有个尖尖的地方
02:38:547 (1) - 从这里开始我觉得四个1/1滑条带过就可以了，这么摆的话感觉重音的地方不clickable
建议取消的NC
00:53:340 (1) -
00:56:541 (1) -
01:00:941 (1) -
01:04:141 (1) -
01:10:941 (1) -
01:14:142 (1) -
01:20:142 (1) -
01:26:543 (1) -
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02:12:546 (1) -
02:25:746 (1) -
02:29:347 (1) -
02:33:347 (1) -
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02:36:547 (1) -
02:38:547 (1) -
02:45:348 (1) -
02:57:349 (1) -
03:23:750 (1) -
04:07:753 (1) -
04:10:953 (1) -
04:14:553 (1) -
04:19:354 (1) -
04:23:754 (1) -
04:25:754 (1) -
04:26:954 (1) -

建议增加的NC
01:15:342 (2) -
01:25:342 (5) -
02:13:346 (3) -
02:30:947 (4) -
02:34:147 (2) -
02:37:347 (3) -
02:56:549 (6) -
04:08:553 (3) -
04:11:753 (3) -
04:14:953 (2) -
04:24:354 (2) -
04:26:154 (2) -

02:58:949 (3,4,1) - 像这种和00:47:340 (1,2,3) - 这种，你最好统一下，最好是能在重音的地方NC，不然总觉得怪怪的，还有几个这样的地方我就不写了
把这些nc之后再看看，最好同样的节奏能对应同样的下法，毕竟是偏easy一点的normal.......

嗨呀

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上面是修改内容;w;
嗯 还是我最渣
Hanazawa Kana
727 posts
Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
no kd
老司机带带我
卧槽还是变速歌
感觉确实没什么可以写的 就当是学习吧
[to you]
03:42:951 (1) - 从这里开始的单点我觉得换成滑条好打一些acc 拉到第二根蓝线 你试一试
[Normal]
中文模没问题吧？
检查一下aimod 我看了下好像有些的ds有问题
01:20:142 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这里叠的有点多 考虑空掉个音吧
02:25:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这里也是
02:38:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 同上
其实一般打normal的选手打这种一堆放在一起的会不知道怎么办 所以建议不要堆一起 适当空掉几个音。后面还有几个 我就不写出来了

好歌 收下小弟的kd
_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

[to you]
03:42:951 (1) - 从这里开始的单点我觉得换成滑条好打一些acc 拉到第二根蓝线 你试一试 这里暂时先留着，如果有第二个人说我就把这里换成break了~
kana好大方，我都不知所措了www
THX For Moding
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Binguo
[四萌]
请删掉多余的绿线
00:26:139 - 那个还是不要偷懒为好哦
00:46:940 (3) - 这样的音不要漏 重复不提
低难度没什么好说的



[怕他梦]
00:42:140 (1) - 慢的这段音乐 能不能稍微把间距拉大一点 就一点
02:19:746 (1) - 换单点如何
02:40:647 (1) - 似乎在跟人声 不过这不合适吧 毕竟你前面一段又没跟
02:52:548 (6) - 同第二条
04:32:554 (1) - 不好看

[狗喵扶]
00:32:339 - 为什么不多塞一个啊
00:34:939 (4,5) - 这更适合滑条 不是吗
00:41:340 (1) - 删掉
01:20:742 (2) - 放远
01:24:342 (2) - ↑
02:00:145 (3,1) - 这两个音效... 后面也是 我觉得这个曲子不适合哨音
03:12:150 (3) - 这个是1/8吧？
04:27:754 (1) - 请保持圆滑
04:53:371 (1) - 折返 后面那个音也跟了
转盘结尾消音

做的很用心我看见❤了 和我完全不一样 请保持下去 但是你能不能换个BG
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
@冰菓
拉间距和换单点没道理啊，何况拉0.01间距也=remap
kiai结尾处的转盘跟人声毫无违和感。何况这首我还是人声和鼓点一起跟的
你说这个不好看他说那个不好看，这个应该属于比较通常的长滑条了，要是有人有好想法再说吧

谢摸
no change
_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Binguo wrote:

[萌喵抚]
00:32:339 - 为什么不多塞一个啊 因为这里 00:28:539 (4,5) - 本来和这里一样节奏的，只不过 00:32:139 - 这里多了个鼓点就塞上了，蓝线都塞不会很密吗
00:34:939 (4,5) - 这更适合滑条 不是吗 √
00:41:340 (1) - 删掉 √
01:20:742 (2) - 放远 √
01:24:342 (2) - ↑ √
02:00:145 (3,1) - 这两个音效... 后面也是 我觉得这个曲子不适合哨音 √whistle是玩家自带的
03:12:150 (3) - 这个是1/8吧？ 是1/6，你拉开听鼓点
04:27:754 (1) - 请保持圆滑 √ 那我多加两个骨架点
04:53:371 (1) - 折返 后面那个音也跟了 神他喵折返，后面变速怎么折返
转盘结尾消音 转盘消音一定要留一个的，所以就留了转圈的消音

做的很用心我看见❤了 和我完全不一样 请保持下去 但是你能不能换个BG
看什么看，你这是怠惰啊！！！BG不换
THX For Modding
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Yorita Yoshino
[NM]

  • 00:53:340 (6,7) - 没包好
    00:59:741 - 这里没懂，跟什么轨把这漏了....
    01:02:941 - ^
    01:30:943 - ^
    04:28:554 - ^
    04:30:154 - ^
    03:39:751 (5) - 可以考虑拉个长的
[到处怕他们]

  • 00:40:539 - 00:40:739 - 这两个不跟了？这么明显
    01:28:543 (1) - 这个不是很好看。。。
    01:32:943 - 不跟这个跟蓝线什么意思...
[涂油]

  • 00:26:139 (1,2) - 包好
    00:37:339 (1) - 这里前面1/8放个二连如何，这样总感觉光秃秃的
    02:00:545 - 后面的哨声到底是干嘛的.....好破坏歌的气氛啊
果然我好喜欢饭卡的图啊1111111

感觉摸不出来什么 :(
好听，祝早飞
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

Binguo wrote:

[四萌]
请删掉多余的绿线删好了
00:26:139 - 那个还是不要偷懒为好哦（这里不属于前奏吗;w;）
00:46:940 (3) - 这样的音不要漏 重复不提ok 都加上了
低难度没什么好说的
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[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

-ClariS- wrote:

[NM]

  • 00:53:340 (6,7) - 没包好done
    00:59:741 - 这里没懂，跟什么轨把这漏了....这里就不改了;w;
    01:02:941 - ^
    01:30:943 - ^
    04:28:554 - ^
    04:30:154 - ^
    03:39:751 (5) - 可以考虑拉个长的加了个转
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_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
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Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

-ClariS- wrote:

[NM]

[涂油]

  • 00:26:139 (1,2) - 包好 这里没问题啊
    00:37:339 (1) - 这里前面1/8放个二连如何，这样总感觉光秃秃的 √
    02:00:545 - 后面的哨声到底是干嘛的.....好破坏歌的气氛啊 √多加了一组音效，我把有些不适合用哨子的地方改了qwq
果然我好喜欢饭卡的图啊1111111 xiexie~

感觉摸不出来什么 :(
好听，祝早飞
THX For Modding
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
我喜欢这个曲子=W=等下给你摸一个有空的话，先给你射星

[ Kamiya's normal ]
我个人意见，貌似这个难度问题稍微有点大？
给几个大致意见吧
00:46:940 - 首先第一段主旋律类似这种的第三根白线都空出来了，但是你其他的节奏都在跟鼓点什么的，并没有跟人声，然后这第三根白线是有重音的，换个说法，你这里想自己弄一个节奏，听起来也可以，但是01:47:744 - 02:11:746 - 咱们看看第二段主旋律，如果你要用和第一段主旋律一样的节奏的话，你第三根白线应该也空出来，不然节奏没有持续性，图的整体性也破坏了。
01:11:542 (2,3,4) - 类似这样的节奏，可能对于有easy的图里面加没问题，但是你这个图没有easy考虑到整个图难度，我建议你不要这样放,这种打起来对于新手还是比较有读图难度。
01:20:142 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ↑
01:26:943 (2,3,4) - ↑，还有些类似的，你再看看吧，这几个读图问题是我个人看法
02:23:746 (5,1) - DS
02:38:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 首先这里读图肯定有点难度，然后02:39:547 (6) - 这个滑条尾才是重音啊，怎么可以不是click呢
02:45:948 (7) - ↑
02:52:348 - 个人看法，这里加个NOTE
02:57:349 (3,1,2) - 这个遮挡看着不太好
04:27:754 - 04:34:154 - 同样这一段突然空出第三根白线也比较奇怪，稍微感觉有点一下变化太大了，跟人声这根线上有音，跟鼓声这里也有重音，所以我个人觉得跟上
然后整体NC有点混乱，简单的难度保持一根大白线一次NC，或者两根一次都可以

[ Pata-Mon's Hard ]
00:28:539 (5,6) - 00:31:739 (5,6) - 这两个应该一样节奏吧？
01:51:544 (2) - 这个不要跳吧，在蓝线上面，前面类似这样的也没有跳00:45:940 (2) -
04:06:953 (1,2) - 这里不叠吧？因为后面紧跟重叠的三连，打起来可能有一点混淆感

[ To you ]
00:08:583 (2,3) - 这里调个头啊，前面都是顺着来的，就这里反了
00:18:157 (2,3) - 这个换到滑条1的右边看着更好点，或者就Ctrl+G一个
00:28:939 - 这里加个NOTE和00:31:739 (4,5,6) - 这组类似，或者00:28:539 (4,5,1) - 稍微拖远一点，不然看着蓝线到白线之间间距和红线到白线的跳差不多大，貌似红到白的看着还大一点00:32:139 (6,1) -
00:34:139 (3) - ctrl+g?
04:46:955 (2) - NC
04:55:049 (2) - NC，红线的地方或者红线之后是要NC的
04:56:382 (4) - ↑
我喜欢你的IN,很整洁=W=
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_MiaoFUuU_
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_MiaoFUuU_

[ Abhor ] wrote:

我喜欢这个曲子=W=等下给你摸一个有空的话，先给你射星
好啊谢谢~qwq
_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ To you ]
00:08:583 (2,3) - 这里调个头啊，前面都是顺着来的，就这里反了 √
00:18:157 (2,3) - 这个换到滑条1的右边看着更好点，或者就Ctrl+G一个 √
00:28:939 - 这里加个NOTE和00:31:739 (4,5,6) - 这组类似，或者00:28:539 (4,5,1) - 稍微拖远一点，不然看着蓝线到白线之间间距和红线到白线的跳差不多大，貌似红到白的看着还大一点00:32:139 (6,1) - √
00:34:139 (3) - ctrl+g? √
04:46:955 (2) - NC √
04:55:049 (2) - NC，红线的地方或者红线之后是要NC的 √
04:56:382 (4) - ↑ √
我喜欢你的IN,很整洁=W= aha谢谢~www
THX For Modding

小霸王服务器卡的我分身了
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_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ To you ]
00:08:583 (2,3) - 这里调个头啊，前面都是顺着来的，就这里反了 √
00:18:157 (2,3) - 这个换到滑条1的右边看着更好点，或者就Ctrl+G一个 √
00:28:939 - 这里加个NOTE和00:31:739 (4,5,6) - 这组类似，或者00:28:539 (4,5,1) - 稍微拖远一点，不然看着蓝线到白线之间间距和红线到白线的跳差不多大，貌似红到白的看着还大一点00:32:139 (6,1) - √
00:34:139 (3) - ctrl+g? √
04:46:955 (2) - NC √
04:55:049 (2) - NC，红线的地方或者红线之后是要NC的 √
04:56:382 (4) - ↑ √
我喜欢你的IN,很整洁=W= aha谢谢~www
THX For Modding
Pata-Mon
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Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
@妙芙 把gder的tag加上

@四萌 每次回摸尽量复制到一起回一次

@冰菓 那两个鼓比后面两组轻多了，无视。不好看的看别人怎么说，我觉得还好。最后你想说没跟红线吧，这里跟的鼓，暂时保留吧

@阿伯 第一个曲子里声音不一样，所以我跟的不一样。滑条尾+flow顺，不难打，先保留。叠在逻辑上没有问题，因为第一个是空拍叠，第二个是三连叠，hard玩家是需要学会读这种梗的

谢摸
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[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

[ Abhor ] wrote:

我喜欢这个曲子=W=等下给你摸一个有空的话，先给你射星

[ Kamiya's normal ]
我个人意见，貌似这个难度问题稍微有点大？
给几个大致意见吧难度必须大点吧 再改下去可以当成easy玩了(难度跟不上就GG
00:46:940 - 首先第一段主旋律类似这种的第三根白线都空出来了，但是你其他的节奏都在跟鼓点什么的，并没有跟人声，然后这第三根白线是有重音的，换个说法，你这里想自己弄一个节奏，听起来也可以，但是01:47:744 - 02:11:746 - 咱们看看第二段主旋律，如果你要用和第一段主旋律一样的节奏的话，你第三根白线应该也空出来，不然节奏没有持续性，图的整体性也破坏了。意见保留 其实跟整体节奏来比 前面跟后面的白线空的是有关系的
01:11:542 (2,3,4) - 类似这样的节奏，可能对于有easy的图里面加没问题，但是你这个图没有easy考虑到整个图难度，我建议你不要这样放,这种打起来对于新手还是比较有读图难度。clear
01:20:142 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ↑clear
01:26:943 (2,3,4) - ↑，还有些类似的，你再看看吧，这几个读图问题是我个人看法clear
02:23:746 (5,1) - DSclear
02:38:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 首先这里读图肯定有点难度，然后02:39:547 (6) - 这个滑条尾才是重音啊，怎么可以不是click呢clear
02:45:948 (7) - ↑
02:52:348 - 个人看法，这里加个NOTEclear
02:57:349 (3,1,2) - 这个遮挡看着不太好clear
04:27:754 - 04:34:154 - 同样这一段突然空出第三根白线也比较奇怪，稍微感觉有点一下变化太大了，跟人声这根线上有音，跟鼓声这里也有重音，所以我个人觉得跟上意见保留
然后整体NC有点混乱，简单的难度保持一根大白线一次NC，或者两根一次都可以呀;w;我第一次抱大腿


NM

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Narcissu
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Narcissu
還需要兩條紅線糾正重音，分別位於01:09:341 - 02:14:946 -

官網外面的預覽BG 好像和BG文件名排序，上傳時候選擇的難度有關，優先度不明。想要用自己難度的BG做預覽BG應該是……BG名字換成BG.jpg，打開自己的難度，上傳。

我喜歡……長髮，平胸，弱嬌，蘿莉……

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[Kamiya's normal]

這個normal 是有概率要跪的……主要因為實際難度非常高，參考https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4844495/

星級雖然是1.98這樣的擦邊數字，可是是因為你1/4都是滑條而且1/4note基本是堆疊導致的，實際難度2.25都不止。考慮這是個沒有Easy難度的set，建議加一個Easy難度或者參考下列normal 難度。當讓補一個Easy 也是可以的

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/271111 不帶1/4的normal
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/769846 帶1/4的normal
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/780119 帶Easy的normal 可以難一點像這樣，雖然也沒有超過2.0……

這幾個DS浮動過大，雖然並沒有強硬限制……用四級網格或者不開網格看上去給人的感覺認真一點，三級網格導致了很多肉眼可見的不等距

01:03:341 (1) - 0.65
03:16:150 (2) - 0.77

03:36:551 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 計畫擺正六邊形的話，可以試試ctrl+shift+D……

前面空四十秒相當沒有誠意……我建議和Hard 一樣時間開頭

02:25:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 02:38:547 (3,4,5,6,7) - 導致實際難度超過2.25的元兇們，而且因為純新人難以讀連續遮擋所以這個實際難度還要比完全分開的圖更高。計畫簡化難度的話，這些就是重點需要修改的節奏……當讓加個easy的話就無所謂了

NC頻率不統一，大部分是兩節一次。但是01:10:941 (1) - 01:26:543 (1) - 04:14:553 (1) - 是一節一次而且一節只有兩個滑條/非重音NC/單獨NC而且似乎沒什麼必要？

01:50:544 (4,1) - 因為你已經堆疊了1/4，所以1/2建議全部分開，這樣玩家就可以放棄思考看見堆疊就點1/4

02:46:948 - 重音建議扔圈或者起滑條……

OD建議比AR低……
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