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Hi NM as requested 
Columns 1|2|3|4|
All advice is just that and nothing more, so take it how you want but I give the critique because you want to further develop your map
Unfortunately this took me a lot longer so I didn't get to the other two difficulties. If I have some more time I may come back to do them though. Good lucky with your mapset (And yes, that was intentional)
Columns 1|2|3|4|
All advice is just that and nothing more, so take it how you want but I give the critique because you want to further develop your map
General
I see from all the maps you focused heavily on the vocals, I would strongly recommend against it as vocals can be sometimes hard to map and play. Also it appears some, or maybe one of the diff doesn't have hitsounds which is a must if you want it to get ranked. I also highly recommend if you do want the map to me ranked (I'm assuming you do as your asking for a mod but I'm not sure) to check out the ranking criteria for osu!mania maps - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Ranking_Criteria
Where's the kiai?
Where's the kiai?
Easy
Add extra notes to the following:
00:01:974 (1974|2) -
00:02:504 (2504|1) -
00:03:210 (3210|3) -
00:03:916 (3916|0) -
00:04:798 (4798|2) -
00:05:504 (5504|2) -
00:05:151 (5151|3) - Remove note
00:18:210 (18210|2) - take to 00:18:033 - and extent the long note to 00:18:739 -
00:18:916 (18916|1) - add note to make a double
from 00:19:269 (19269|3) - to 00:21:739 (21739|1) - delete and replace with an easier pattern to follow such as double note single note as shown in the print screen here http://puu.sh/qlYdF.jpg
00:22:357 (22357|3) - delete and replace with long note and put it on the white tick instead here 00:22:445 -
00:22:710 (22710|0) - same here as above replace with long note and put on the white tick here 00:22:798 -
00:22:974 (22974|2) - delete and replace with a long note which starts 00:22:974 (22974|2) - and finishes 00:23:327 -
00:23:239 (23239|1) - move up to the red tick here 00:23:327 (23327|1) - and also extent to the white tick
00:23:327 (23327|1) - place a note here at the end of the long note preferable in column 1
00:24:386 - add note in column 3
00:24:563 (24563|0) - add note in column 1 to make a double
00:25:974 (25974|1) - make this a double
00:27:386 (27386|1) - make a double as well
00:28:798 (28798|3) - and this, make it a double
00:28:974 (28974|1) - add single note in column 2
00:29:239 (29239|2) - move to the red tick here 00:29:327 -
00:30:210 (30210|0) - make a double put extra note in column 2 or 3
00:31:622 - add a double here
00:36:916 (36916|2) - make a double add note in column 2
00:37:445 (37445|1) - add a note in column 3 to make a double
00:38:504 (38504|3) - add a note in column 4
00:40:445 - add a note in either column 1 or 4
00:41:504 (41504|2) - add a note in column 2 or 3
00:41:857 - add a double here either 1-4 or 2-4 or 1-2
00:42:210 - add a double here too
00:42:298 (42298|0,42474|1,42651|2) - remove completely and replace with doubles at 00:42:386 - , 00:42:563 - and 00:42:739 -
00:42:739 - double here
00:43:092 - add a double here
00:43:180 (43180|3,43357|2) - remove and but doubles 00:43:092 - , 00:43:269 - and 00:43:445 -
00:48:563 (48563|1) - add a note
00:54:563 - add a note here
00:54:033 (54033|3) - extend to white tick or reduce to the red either way is fine, makes it easier to play
00:54:916 - add note
00:55:092 - add note
00:55:622 (55622|2) - make double
01:01:269 - make a double
01:04:269 - add note
01:07:445 (67445|1,67622|2,68151|0,68680|3) - make them all doubles as well
01:22:445 (82445|1,83063|2) - extend to the white tick
01:23:504 (83504|0) - make double
01:24:210 (84210|3,84916|3,85622|1,86327|1,87033|2,87739|3,88445|0,89151|3,89857|2,90563|3,91269|1) - make double
Notes:
The changes make this difficulty change to 1.72*
Not sure if there were hitsounds in this difficulty. Hitsounds must be added throughout all the maps in the mapset
Also, there is no kiai mode activate at any given time, im not sure if this makes in unrankable not though so don't take my word for it. Furthermore, if you do decide to use kiai mode its recommended to put it at the same place throughout all maps in the mapset
00:01:974 (1974|2) -
00:02:504 (2504|1) -
00:03:210 (3210|3) -
00:03:916 (3916|0) -
00:04:798 (4798|2) -
00:05:504 (5504|2) -
00:05:151 (5151|3) - Remove note
00:18:210 (18210|2) - take to 00:18:033 - and extent the long note to 00:18:739 -
00:18:916 (18916|1) - add note to make a double
from 00:19:269 (19269|3) - to 00:21:739 (21739|1) - delete and replace with an easier pattern to follow such as double note single note as shown in the print screen here http://puu.sh/qlYdF.jpg
00:22:357 (22357|3) - delete and replace with long note and put it on the white tick instead here 00:22:445 -
00:22:710 (22710|0) - same here as above replace with long note and put on the white tick here 00:22:798 -
00:22:974 (22974|2) - delete and replace with a long note which starts 00:22:974 (22974|2) - and finishes 00:23:327 -
00:23:239 (23239|1) - move up to the red tick here 00:23:327 (23327|1) - and also extent to the white tick
00:23:327 (23327|1) - place a note here at the end of the long note preferable in column 1
00:24:386 - add note in column 3
00:24:563 (24563|0) - add note in column 1 to make a double
00:25:974 (25974|1) - make this a double
00:27:386 (27386|1) - make a double as well
00:28:798 (28798|3) - and this, make it a double
00:28:974 (28974|1) - add single note in column 2
00:29:239 (29239|2) - move to the red tick here 00:29:327 -
00:30:210 (30210|0) - make a double put extra note in column 2 or 3
00:31:622 - add a double here
00:36:916 (36916|2) - make a double add note in column 2
00:37:445 (37445|1) - add a note in column 3 to make a double
00:38:504 (38504|3) - add a note in column 4
00:40:445 - add a note in either column 1 or 4
00:41:504 (41504|2) - add a note in column 2 or 3
00:41:857 - add a double here either 1-4 or 2-4 or 1-2
00:42:210 - add a double here too
00:42:298 (42298|0,42474|1,42651|2) - remove completely and replace with doubles at 00:42:386 - , 00:42:563 - and 00:42:739 -
00:42:739 - double here
00:43:092 - add a double here
00:43:180 (43180|3,43357|2) - remove and but doubles 00:43:092 - , 00:43:269 - and 00:43:445 -
00:48:563 (48563|1) - add a note
00:54:563 - add a note here
00:54:033 (54033|3) - extend to white tick or reduce to the red either way is fine, makes it easier to play
00:54:916 - add note
00:55:092 - add note
00:55:622 (55622|2) - make double
01:01:269 - make a double
01:04:269 - add note
01:07:445 (67445|1,67622|2,68151|0,68680|3) - make them all doubles as well
01:22:445 (82445|1,83063|2) - extend to the white tick
01:23:504 (83504|0) - make double
01:24:210 (84210|3,84916|3,85622|1,86327|1,87033|2,87739|3,88445|0,89151|3,89857|2,90563|3,91269|1) - make double
Notes:
The changes make this difficulty change to 1.72*
Not sure if there were hitsounds in this difficulty. Hitsounds must be added throughout all the maps in the mapset
Also, there is no kiai mode activate at any given time, im not sure if this makes in unrankable not though so don't take my word for it. Furthermore, if you do decide to use kiai mode its recommended to put it at the same place throughout all maps in the mapset
Normal
Lacks consistency in terms of the placement of doubles for example 00:30:210 (30210|3,30210|0,30563|2,30563|0) - you have used doubles and correctly so it goes with the music and hitsounds but then here 00:30:916 (30916|2) - you don't? The sound is the same. So, look over the difficulty again and try to really listen to the notes your putting down for certain sounds
00:36:033 (36033|1) - double
00:37:445 (37445|1) - double its the same intensity as 00:36:916 (36916|1,36916|0,37092|3,37092|2) -
00:41:416 (41416|1) - put on the white tick. Classic example of why you should try to avoid mapping to vocals. If the bpm is correct which I'm assuming is as I'm really bad at checking, it should be on the white tick. Vocals don't tend to follow a clear pattern as such other than that of the background instruments so its easier for you the mapper and the player to play it in the future
00:42:386 (42386|0,42386|2,42563|0,42563|1,42739|0,42739|3) - change the order of them so 00:42:210 (42210|0,42386|0,42563|0,42739|0) - this no longer (mini-jacks) very difficult for the star difficulty
00:43:092 (43092|1) - make a double
01:07:974 (67974|2,67974|3,67974|0,68151|3,68151|0,68151|2,68504|1,68504|0,68504|3,68680|1,68680|0,68680|3) - no need for all the triples unless you make the other 4 doubles triples too
01:25:974 (85974|0,86239|2,86416|3,86680|1,86857|0,87122|1) - they are 1/3 beats so change the beat snap divisor to 1/3 then place the notes
01:44:063 (104063|2,104416|2,104680|2,104857|2,105033|2) - move some of them to different columns to tricky for the star difficulty
01:58:798 (118798|1,118798|2,118798|0) - make it double, bit random you made it a triple
02:00:210 (120210|2,120210|0,120210|3) - same here
02:02:327 (122327|0,122327|3,122327|1) - same again
00:36:033 (36033|1) - double
00:37:445 (37445|1) - double its the same intensity as 00:36:916 (36916|1,36916|0,37092|3,37092|2) -
00:41:416 (41416|1) - put on the white tick. Classic example of why you should try to avoid mapping to vocals. If the bpm is correct which I'm assuming is as I'm really bad at checking, it should be on the white tick. Vocals don't tend to follow a clear pattern as such other than that of the background instruments so its easier for you the mapper and the player to play it in the future
00:42:386 (42386|0,42386|2,42563|0,42563|1,42739|0,42739|3) - change the order of them so 00:42:210 (42210|0,42386|0,42563|0,42739|0) - this no longer (mini-jacks) very difficult for the star difficulty
00:43:092 (43092|1) - make a double
01:07:974 (67974|2,67974|3,67974|0,68151|3,68151|0,68151|2,68504|1,68504|0,68504|3,68680|1,68680|0,68680|3) - no need for all the triples unless you make the other 4 doubles triples too
01:25:974 (85974|0,86239|2,86416|3,86680|1,86857|0,87122|1) - they are 1/3 beats so change the beat snap divisor to 1/3 then place the notes
01:44:063 (104063|2,104416|2,104680|2,104857|2,105033|2) - move some of them to different columns to tricky for the star difficulty
01:58:798 (118798|1,118798|2,118798|0) - make it double, bit random you made it a triple
02:00:210 (120210|2,120210|0,120210|3) - same here
02:02:327 (122327|0,122327|3,122327|1) - same again
Unfortunately this took me a lot longer so I didn't get to the other two difficulties. If I have some more time I may come back to do them though. Good lucky with your mapset (And yes, that was intentional
)why note vocal in mania.... and its insane diffs..
bad hand balance.
inconsistend double notes
cancer LNs ..
i will mod later
note* : this thing wont be ranked if you dont change those weird patterns D:
bad hand balance.
inconsistend double notes
cancer LNs ..
i will mod later
note* : this thing wont be ranked if you dont change those weird patterns D:
Hard
Inconsistent double/triple notes
Insane
pls dont note vocal in mania.
whats this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774264
00:38:504 move up 1 row
do you really understand how to make an insane map?
dd ff jj kk <- you shouldnt use something like that in something like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774288
the columns full? delete LN. dont want to delete LN? delete the double notes. dont want delete double? dont edit 4k.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774295 <- balance please...
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774302 <- this pattern sux
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774319 <- whats this...
srsly why you always use dd ff jj or kk(idk what ppl call that) something like that is HARD and NOT OKAY. rlly its hard, this is proof... -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774334
you want to rank this? impossible with these patterns.
decent beatmap? i think its only random note placement plus cancer LN without patterns. some diffs are decent.
Inconsistent double/triple notes
Insane
pls dont note vocal in mania.
whats this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774264
00:38:504 move up 1 row
do you really understand how to make an insane map?
dd ff jj kk <- you shouldnt use something like that in something like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774288
the columns full? delete LN. dont want to delete LN? delete the double notes. dont want delete double? dont edit 4k.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774295 <- balance please...
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774302 <- this pattern sux
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774319 <- whats this...
srsly why you always use dd ff jj or kk(idk what ppl call that) something like that is HARD and NOT OKAY. rlly its hard, this is proof... -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774334
you want to rank this? impossible with these patterns.
decent beatmap? i think its only random note placement plus cancer LN without patterns. some diffs are decent.
Topic Starter
genkicho wrote:
Hard
Inconsistent double/triple notes
Insane
pls dont note vocal in mania.
whats this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774264
00:38:504 move up 1 row
do you really understand how to make an insane map?
dd ff jj kk <- you shouldnt use something like that in something like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774288
the columns full? delete LN. dont want to delete LN? delete the double notes. dont want delete double? dont edit 4k.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774295 <- balance please...
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774302 <- this pattern sux
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774319 <- whats this...
srsly why you always use dd ff jj or kk(idk what ppl call that) something like that is HARD and NOT OKAY. rlly its hard, this is proof... -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5774334
you want to rank this? impossible with these patterns.
decent beatmap? i think its only random note placement plus cancer LN without patterns. some diffs are decent.
Thank you for this, but mind if i ask what difficultys are decent? Also the hard wasn't made by me.. Oh... and i have no clue what LN means
hmm the LN... the single notes placement i think a bit weird because of LNs
Topic Starter
Thank you very much for this, it helped a lot. If you can do the other two it would be highly appreciated.LuckyLemon wrote:
Hi NM as requested
Columns 1|2|3|4|
All advice is just that and nothing more, so take it how you want but I give the critique because you want to further develop your mapGeneralI see from all the maps you focused heavily on the vocals, I would strongly recommend against it as vocals can be sometimes hard to map and play. Also it appears some, or maybe one of the diff doesn't have hitsounds which is a must if you want it to get ranked. I also highly recommend if you do want the map to me ranked (I'm assuming you do as your asking for a mod but I'm not sure) to check out the ranking criteria for osu!mania maps - https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Ranking_Criteria
Where's the kiai?EasyAdd extra notes to the following:
00:01:974 (1974|2) -
00:02:504 (2504|1) -
00:03:210 (3210|3) -
00:03:916 (3916|0) -
00:04:798 (4798|2) -
00:05:504 (5504|2) -
00:05:151 (5151|3) - Remove note
00:18:210 (18210|2) - take to 00:18:033 - and extent the long note to 00:18:739 -
00:18:916 (18916|1) - add note to make a double
from 00:19:269 (19269|3) - to 00:21:739 (21739|1) - delete and replace with an easier pattern to follow such as double note single note as shown in the print screen here http://puu.sh/qlYdF.jpg
00:22:357 (22357|3) - delete and replace with long note and put it on the white tick instead here 00:22:445 -
00:22:710 (22710|0) - same here as above replace with long note and put on the white tick here 00:22:798 -
00:22:974 (22974|2) - delete and replace with a long note which starts 00:22:974 (22974|2) - and finishes 00:23:327 -
00:23:239 (23239|1) - move up to the red tick here 00:23:327 (23327|1) - and also extent to the white tick
00:23:327 (23327|1) - place a note here at the end of the long note preferable in column 1
00:24:386 - add note in column 3
00:24:563 (24563|0) - add note in column 1 to make a double
00:25:974 (25974|1) - make this a double
00:27:386 (27386|1) - make a double as well
00:28:798 (28798|3) - and this, make it a double
00:28:974 (28974|1) - add single note in column 2
00:29:239 (29239|2) - move to the red tick here 00:29:327 -
00:30:210 (30210|0) - make a double put extra note in column 2 or 3
00:31:622 - add a double here
00:36:916 (36916|2) - make a double add note in column 2
00:37:445 (37445|1) - add a note in column 3 to make a double
00:38:504 (38504|3) - add a note in column 4
00:40:445 - add a note in either column 1 or 4
00:41:504 (41504|2) - add a note in column 2 or 3
00:41:857 - add a double here either 1-4 or 2-4 or 1-2
00:42:210 - add a double here too
00:42:298 (42298|0,42474|1,42651|2) - remove completely and replace with doubles at 00:42:386 - , 00:42:563 - and 00:42:739 -
00:42:739 - double here
00:43:092 - add a double here
00:43:180 (43180|3,43357|2) - remove and but doubles 00:43:092 - , 00:43:269 - and 00:43:445 -
00:48:563 (48563|1) - add a note
00:54:563 - add a note here
00:54:033 (54033|3) - extend to white tick or reduce to the red either way is fine, makes it easier to play
00:54:916 - add note
00:55:092 - add note
00:55:622 (55622|2) - make double
01:01:269 - make a double
01:04:269 - add note
01:07:445 (67445|1,67622|2,68151|0,68680|3) - make them all doubles as well
01:22:445 (82445|1,83063|2) - extend to the white tick
01:23:504 (83504|0) - make double
01:24:210 (84210|3,84916|3,85622|1,86327|1,87033|2,87739|3,88445|0,89151|3,89857|2,90563|3,91269|1) - make double
Notes:
The changes make this difficulty change to 1.72*
Not sure if there were hitsounds in this difficulty. Hitsounds must be added throughout all the maps in the mapset
Also, there is no kiai mode activate at any given time, im not sure if this makes in unrankable not though so don't take my word for it. Furthermore, if you do decide to use kiai mode its recommended to put it at the same place throughout all maps in the mapsetNormalLacks consistency in terms of the placement of doubles for example 00:30:210 (30210|3,30210|0,30563|2,30563|0) - you have used doubles and correctly so it goes with the music and hitsounds but then here 00:30:916 (30916|2) - you don't? The sound is the same. So, look over the difficulty again and try to really listen to the notes your putting down for certain sounds
00:36:033 (36033|1) - double
00:37:445 (37445|1) - double its the same intensity as 00:36:916 (36916|1,36916|0,37092|3,37092|2) -
00:41:416 (41416|1) - put on the white tick. Classic example of why you should try to avoid mapping to vocals. If the bpm is correct which I'm assuming is as I'm really bad at checking, it should be on the white tick. Vocals don't tend to follow a clear pattern as such other than that of the background instruments so its easier for you the mapper and the player to play it in the future
00:42:386 (42386|0,42386|2,42563|0,42563|1,42739|0,42739|3) - change the order of them so 00:42:210 (42210|0,42386|0,42563|0,42739|0) - this no longer (mini-jacks) very difficult for the star difficulty
00:43:092 (43092|1) - make a double
01:07:974 (67974|2,67974|3,67974|0,68151|3,68151|0,68151|2,68504|1,68504|0,68504|3,68680|1,68680|0,68680|3) - no need for all the triples unless you make the other 4 doubles triples too
01:25:974 (85974|0,86239|2,86416|3,86680|1,86857|0,87122|1) - they are 1/3 beats so change the beat snap divisor to 1/3 then place the notes
01:44:063 (104063|2,104416|2,104680|2,104857|2,105033|2) - move some of them to different columns to tricky for the star difficulty
01:58:798 (118798|1,118798|2,118798|0) - make it double, bit random you made it a triple
02:00:210 (120210|2,120210|0,120210|3) - same here
02:02:327 (122327|0,122327|3,122327|1) - same again
Unfortunately this took me a lot longer so I didn't get to the other two difficulties. If I have some more time I may come back to do them though. Good lucky with your mapset (And yes, that was intentional
I fixed almost everything you pointed out and changed a lot to make it less vocal focused.
hi ~
req from Ly0 and Syadow's MANiA QUEUE
NM |M4M | GDs
|1|2|3|4|
req from Ly0 and Syadow's MANiA QUEUE
NM |
|1|2|3|4|
easy is to hard i crei
00:12:210 (12210|0,12563|3,12916|1) - ctrl+h pls
00:18:033 (18033|2) - this LN end here 00:18:563 -
00:22:092 - missed a note here
00:24:563(24563|0,24563|3,24739|2,24916|1,25092|0,25269|1,25445|2,25622|3,25798|2,25974|1,26151|0,26327|1,26504|2,26680|3,26857|2,27033|1,27210|0,27386|3,27386|1,27563|2,27739|3,27916|2,28092|1,28269|0,28445|1,28622|2,28798|0,28798|3,28974|1) - WHY? TT_TT
try this:
00:24:386 (24386|2) - delete
add ln from here 00:24:210 - ends here 00:24:563 -
00:24:739 (24739|2,25092|0,25445|2,25798|2,26151|0,26504|2,26857|2,27210|0,27563|2,27916|2,28269|0,28622|2) - delete this
00:24:563 (24563|0) - delete also
00:24:563 (24563|3) - move to |3|
00:24:916 (24916|1) - move to |1| and add to |4| to make it double
00:25:622 - add to |1|
00:25:974 (25974|1) - move to |3|
00:26:327 - add to |4|
00:26:680 (26680|3) - move to |1|
00:27:033 - add to |4|
00:27:386 (27386|1,27386|3) - move one col. to the left
00:28:092 (28092|1) - move to |1| and add to |3|
00:29:327 (29327|2,29327|1) - move one col. to the right
00:29:857 - add Ln here~ ends here 00:30:210 -
00:30:210 (30210|0) - u can delete this
00:31:974 (31974|3) - delete since u didnt put any here 00:33:033 - and here 00:34:445 -
00:36:386 - delete ghost note
:v oh wait nvm~ there was le vocal
but still better if u delete
00:37:622 (37622|3,37798|2) - delete
00:42:210 (42210|2,42386|3) - delete
00:43:092 (43092|1,43269|0) - delete
00:43:445 (43445|2) - move to |1|
00:43:798 (43798|0,43974|1,44151|2) - change to ln in |3| ends here 00:44:327 -
00:45:386 (45386|2) - move to |2|
00:54:386 (54386|1,54563|1,54739|1) - delete this is just a nm diff~ thats hard dude
01:04:710 (64710|2) - y nat start here 01:04:798 -
01:04:798 (64798|0,65151|3,65327|0) - ctrl+h
01:06:563 (66563|2) - this should be here 01:06:386 - i believe
01:08:151 (68151|3) - move to |3|
01:41:504 (101504|2,101857|1) - move one col. to the left
01:44:151 (104151|1) - delete
01:45:386 (105386|1,105563|2) - chnage to an LN in |2| ends here 01:45:739 -
01:47:327 (107327|2,107680|0) - delete
01:49:798 (109798|0,110151|2,110504|2,110857|0,111033|1) - DELETE
now from here 01:49:974 - i suggest this http://puu.sh/qAElb/072371ff85.png
01:53:504 (113504|1,114033|2) - delete
00:18:033 (18033|2) - this LN end here 00:18:563 -
00:22:092 - missed a note here
00:24:563(24563|0,24563|3,24739|2,24916|1,25092|0,25269|1,25445|2,25622|3,25798|2,25974|1,26151|0,26327|1,26504|2,26680|3,26857|2,27033|1,27210|0,27386|3,27386|1,27563|2,27739|3,27916|2,28092|1,28269|0,28445|1,28622|2,28798|0,28798|3,28974|1) - WHY? TT_TT
try this:
00:24:386 (24386|2) - delete
add ln from here 00:24:210 - ends here 00:24:563 -
00:24:739 (24739|2,25092|0,25445|2,25798|2,26151|0,26504|2,26857|2,27210|0,27563|2,27916|2,28269|0,28622|2) - delete this
00:24:563 (24563|0) - delete also
00:24:563 (24563|3) - move to |3|
00:24:916 (24916|1) - move to |1| and add to |4| to make it double
00:25:622 - add to |1|
00:25:974 (25974|1) - move to |3|
00:26:327 - add to |4|
00:26:680 (26680|3) - move to |1|
00:27:033 - add to |4|
00:27:386 (27386|1,27386|3) - move one col. to the left
00:28:092 (28092|1) - move to |1| and add to |3|
00:29:327 (29327|2,29327|1) - move one col. to the right
00:29:857 - add Ln here~ ends here 00:30:210 -
00:30:210 (30210|0) - u can delete this
00:31:974 (31974|3) - delete since u didnt put any here 00:33:033 - and here 00:34:445 -
00:36:386 - delete ghost note
:v oh wait nvm~ there was le vocal
but still better if u delete
00:37:622 (37622|3,37798|2) - delete
00:42:210 (42210|2,42386|3) - delete
00:43:092 (43092|1,43269|0) - delete
00:43:445 (43445|2) - move to |1|
00:43:798 (43798|0,43974|1,44151|2) - change to ln in |3| ends here 00:44:327 -
00:45:386 (45386|2) - move to |2|
00:54:386 (54386|1,54563|1,54739|1) - delete this is just a nm diff~ thats hard dude
01:04:710 (64710|2) - y nat start here 01:04:798 -
01:04:798 (64798|0,65151|3,65327|0) - ctrl+h
01:06:563 (66563|2) - this should be here 01:06:386 - i believe
01:08:151 (68151|3) - move to |3|
01:41:504 (101504|2,101857|1) - move one col. to the left
01:44:151 (104151|1) - delete
01:45:386 (105386|1,105563|2) - chnage to an LN in |2| ends here 01:45:739 -
01:47:327 (107327|2,107680|0) - delete
01:49:798 (109798|0,110151|2,110504|2,110857|0,111033|1) - DELETE
now from here 01:49:974 - i suggest this http://puu.sh/qAElb/072371ff85.png
01:53:504 (113504|1,114033|2) - delete
normal
00:08:945 (8945|1,9033|2,9122|0,9210|0,10004|3,10092|2,10180|3,10974|2,11063|2,12033|0,12122|0,12563|2,12651|0,12739|0,14151|3,14769|3,14857|3,15122|2,15210|2,15298|3,15651|2,15739|1,15827|3,17327|1,17416|1,18122|0,21210|0,21386|0,21563|0,23151|1) - this selected notes is hard~ do something about it pls~ maybe reaarrange/delete/remap trust me coz im a ez and nm only player~ cant even S T^T..coz i suck
hard
00:08:857 (8857|0) - move to |3|
00:10:092 (10092|2,10180|1,10180|0) - switch them
00:12:298 (12298|0,12386|1) - ctrl+j
00:16:004 (16004|1,16004|3) - should start here 00:16:092 -
then maybe add one note to |3| 00:16:004 -
00:17:416 (17416|1) - shoul also start here 00:17:504 - ends here 00:18:210 -
00:18:122 (18122|2) - move here 00:18:210 -
00:18:298 (18298|2) - move to |4|
00:18:386 (18386|3,18474|2,18563|1) - move one col. to the left
01:06:386 - missed a note here
01:06:563 (66563|1) - delete
01:30:122 (90122|2,90210|2) - aww move one of them to |1|
01:56:504 - missed a note here
01:56:680 (116680|1,116680|2) - delete
02:03:386 - missed a note
00:10:092 (10092|2,10180|1,10180|0) - switch them
00:12:298 (12298|0,12386|1) - ctrl+j
00:16:004 (16004|1,16004|3) - should start here 00:16:092 -
then maybe add one note to |3| 00:16:004 -
00:17:416 (17416|1) - shoul also start here 00:17:504 - ends here 00:18:210 -
00:18:122 (18122|2) - move here 00:18:210 -
00:18:298 (18298|2) - move to |4|
00:18:386 (18386|3,18474|2,18563|1) - move one col. to the left
01:06:386 - missed a note here
01:06:563 (66563|1) - delete
01:30:122 (90122|2,90210|2) - aww move one of them to |1|
01:56:504 - missed a note here
01:56:680 (116680|1,116680|2) - delete
02:03:386 - missed a note
Topic Starter
Its nice to have the opinion of someone who plays easier maps, thank you, it helped.- Ly0572 - wrote:
hi ~
req from Ly0 and Syadow's MANiA QUEUE
NM |M4M | GDs
|1|2|3|4|easy is to hard i crei00:12:210 (12210|0,12563|3,12916|1) - ctrl+h pls
00:18:033 (18033|2) - this LN end here 00:18:563 -
00:22:092 - missed a note here
00:24:563(24563|0,24563|3,24739|2,24916|1,25092|0,25269|1,25445|2,25622|3,25798|2,25974|1,26151|0,26327|1,26504|2,26680|3,26857|2,27033|1,27210|0,27386|3,27386|1,27563|2,27739|3,27916|2,28092|1,28269|0,28445|1,28622|2,28798|0,28798|3,28974|1) - WHY? TT_TT
try this:
00:24:386 (24386|2) - delete
add ln from here 00:24:210 - ends here 00:24:563 -
00:24:739 (24739|2,25092|0,25445|2,25798|2,26151|0,26504|2,26857|2,27210|0,27563|2,27916|2,28269|0,28622|2) - delete this
00:24:563 (24563|0) - delete also
00:24:563 (24563|3) - move to |3|
00:24:916 (24916|1) - move to |1| and add to |4| to make it double
00:25:622 - add to |1|
00:25:974 (25974|1) - move to |3|
00:26:327 - add to |4|
00:26:680 (26680|3) - move to |1|
00:27:033 - add to |4|
00:27:386 (27386|1,27386|3) - move one col. to the left
00:28:092 (28092|1) - move to |1| and add to |3|
00:29:327 (29327|2,29327|1) - move one col. to the right
00:29:857 - add Ln here~ ends here 00:30:210 -
00:30:210 (30210|0) - u can delete this
00:31:974 (31974|3) - delete since u didnt put any here 00:33:033 - and here 00:34:445 -
00:36:386 - delete ghost note
:v oh wait nvm~ there was le vocal
but still better if u delete
00:37:622 (37622|3,37798|2) - delete
00:42:210 (42210|2,42386|3) - delete
00:43:092 (43092|1,43269|0) - delete
00:43:445 (43445|2) - move to |1|
00:43:798 (43798|0,43974|1,44151|2) - change to ln in |3| ends here 00:44:327 -
00:45:386 (45386|2) - move to |2|
00:54:386 (54386|1,54563|1,54739|1) - delete this is just a nm diff~ thats hard dude
01:04:710 (64710|2) - y nat start here 01:04:798 -
01:04:798 (64798|0,65151|3,65327|0) - ctrl+h
01:06:563 (66563|2) - this should be here 01:06:386 - i believe
01:08:151 (68151|3) - move to |3|
01:41:504 (101504|2,101857|1) - move one col. to the left
01:44:151 (104151|1) - delete
01:45:386 (105386|1,105563|2) - chnage to an LN in |2| ends here 01:45:739 -
01:47:327 (107327|2,107680|0) - delete
01:49:798 (109798|0,110151|2,110504|2,110857|0,111033|1) - DELETE
now from here 01:49:974 - i suggest this http://puu.sh/qAElb/072371ff85.png
01:53:504 (113504|1,114033|2) - deletenormal00:08:945 (8945|1,9033|2,9122|0,9210|0,10004|3,10092|2,10180|3,10974|2,11063|2,12033|0,12122|0,12563|2,12651|0,12739|0,14151|3,14769|3,14857|3,15122|2,15210|2,15298|3,15651|2,15739|1,15827|3,17327|1,17416|1,18122|0,21210|0,21386|0,21563|0,23151|1) - this selected notes is hard~ do something about it pls~ maybe reaarrange/delete/remap trust me coz im a ez and nm only player~ cant even S T^T..coz i suckhard00:08:857 (8857|0) - move to |3|
00:10:092 (10092|2,10180|1,10180|0) - switch them
00:12:298 (12298|0,12386|1) - ctrl+j
00:16:004 (16004|1,16004|3) - should start here 00:16:092 -
then maybe add one note to |3| 00:16:004 -
00:17:416 (17416|1) - shoul also start here 00:17:504 - ends here 00:18:210 -
00:18:122 (18122|2) - move here 00:18:210 -
00:18:298 (18298|2) - move to |4|
00:18:386 (18386|3,18474|2,18563|1) - move one col. to the left
01:06:386 - missed a note here
01:06:563 (66563|1) - delete
01:30:122 (90122|2,90210|2) - aww move one of them to |1|
01:56:504 - missed a note here
01:56:680 (116680|1,116680|2) - delete
02:03:386 - missed a note
goodluck
Topic Starter
tehe...- Ly0572 - wrote:
Uhm? wers my kudos? T^T
iforgotplsforgiv
Hi there , modsu hope it can help
Good Luck :3
try to check ai mod for the other diffs aswell might have same issue
dadon
key=1/2/3/4
[Insane]
Check ai mod, two timming point exist at the same time on : 01:34:445 (94445|0) -
00:05:239 (5239|2,5328|1) - I suggest Ctrl+J then move : 00:05:416 (5416|2) - to 4
00:05:769 (5769|3) - this note should be on the white line here : 00:05:857 (5857|2) -
00:13:798 (13798|3,13886|3) - I don't suggest this jack here, since they aren't same pitch , the one just before that is the same pitch so it's okay I think , but this one isn't and is quite tricky to catch up
00:13:180 (13180|2,13180|0) - I think you should double here : 00:13:269 (13269|1) - instead
00:17:857 (17857|1,17945|1) - thoos aren't same pitch , I suggest a 12 43 pattern , basically move : 00:17:857 (17857|1) - to 1
00:21:386 (21386|0) - add one more note for snare sound , according to your previous pattern : 00:19:269 (19269|3,19269|2) - 00:19:975 (19975|3,19975|1) -
00:22:092 (22092|3) - ^ same suggestion
00:23:504 (23504|3) - ^ ^ same suggestion
00:24:210 (24210|1) - ^ ^ ^ same suggestion here aswell
00:25:798 (25798|0,25798|2) - I don't understand why you used toubles for thoose notes (you can keep them tho it's not hard and pretty simple to catch so)
00:29:857 (29857|2) - add one more note ?
00:37:975 (37975|0,38063|1) - Ctrl+H to make more hand balance imho and the pattern is well balanced overall that way I think
01:09:386 (69386|2,69563|1) - you could double thoose to make an effect , since the drum sound is abit louder here
01:24:475 (84475|3) - This LN starts here : 01:24:386 (84386|3) - , this one 01:23:151 (83151|2) - ends here : 01:24:386 (84386|0) -
^ don't forget to re-arrange the LNs end
01:27:739 (87739|0) - this LN ends here : 01:28:798 (88798|1) -
01:28:798 (88798|1) - snap here is 1/4 until here : 01:29:328 (89328|2) - after that it's probably a 1/6 rythm , idk the songs here are really confusing to snap @_@
01:52:798 (112798|1) - move to 1 ?
[Insane]
Check ai mod, two timming point exist at the same time on : 01:34:445 (94445|0) -
00:05:239 (5239|2,5328|1) - I suggest Ctrl+J then move : 00:05:416 (5416|2) - to 4
00:05:769 (5769|3) - this note should be on the white line here : 00:05:857 (5857|2) -
00:13:798 (13798|3,13886|3) - I don't suggest this jack here, since they aren't same pitch , the one just before that is the same pitch so it's okay I think , but this one isn't and is quite tricky to catch up
00:13:180 (13180|2,13180|0) - I think you should double here : 00:13:269 (13269|1) - instead
00:17:857 (17857|1,17945|1) - thoos aren't same pitch , I suggest a 12 43 pattern , basically move : 00:17:857 (17857|1) - to 1
00:21:386 (21386|0) - add one more note for snare sound , according to your previous pattern : 00:19:269 (19269|3,19269|2) - 00:19:975 (19975|3,19975|1) -
00:22:092 (22092|3) - ^ same suggestion
00:23:504 (23504|3) - ^ ^ same suggestion
00:24:210 (24210|1) - ^ ^ ^ same suggestion here aswell
00:25:798 (25798|0,25798|2) - I don't understand why you used toubles for thoose notes (you can keep them tho it's not hard and pretty simple to catch so)
00:29:857 (29857|2) - add one more note ?
00:37:975 (37975|0,38063|1) - Ctrl+H to make more hand balance imho and the pattern is well balanced overall that way I think
01:09:386 (69386|2,69563|1) - you could double thoose to make an effect , since the drum sound is abit louder here
01:24:475 (84475|3) - This LN starts here : 01:24:386 (84386|3) - , this one 01:23:151 (83151|2) - ends here : 01:24:386 (84386|0) -
^ don't forget to re-arrange the LNs end
01:27:739 (87739|0) - this LN ends here : 01:28:798 (88798|1) -
01:28:798 (88798|1) - snap here is 1/4 until here : 01:29:328 (89328|2) - after that it's probably a 1/6 rythm , idk the songs here are really confusing to snap @_@
01:52:798 (112798|1) - move to 1 ?
Good Luck :3
try to check ai mod for the other diffs aswell might have same issue
Topic Starter
I liked alot of things you suggested, it gave me a couple of other ideas for change as well. Thank you.Eternalie wrote:
Hi there , modsu hope it can helpdadonkey=1/2/3/4
[Insane]
Check ai mod, two timming point exist at the same time on : 01:34:445 (94445|0) -
00:05:239 (5239|2,5328|1) - I suggest Ctrl+J then move : 00:05:416 (5416|2) - to 4
00:05:769 (5769|3) - this note should be on the white line here : 00:05:857 (5857|2) -
00:13:798 (13798|3,13886|3) - I don't suggest this jack here, since they aren't same pitch , the one just before that is the same pitch so it's okay I think , but this one isn't and is quite tricky to catch up
00:13:180 (13180|2,13180|0) - I think you should double here : 00:13:269 (13269|1) - instead
00:17:857 (17857|1,17945|1) - thoos aren't same pitch , I suggest a 12 43 pattern , basically move : 00:17:857 (17857|1) - to 1
00:21:386 (21386|0) - add one more note for snare sound , according to your previous pattern : 00:19:269 (19269|3,19269|2) - 00:19:975 (19975|3,19975|1) -
00:22:092 (22092|3) - ^ same suggestion
00:23:504 (23504|3) - ^ ^ same suggestion
00:24:210 (24210|1) - ^ ^ ^ same suggestion here aswell
00:25:798 (25798|0,25798|2) - I don't understand why you used toubles for thoose notes (you can keep them tho it's not hard and pretty simple to catch so)
00:29:857 (29857|2) - add one more note ?
00:37:975 (37975|0,38063|1) - Ctrl+H to make more hand balance imho and the pattern is well balanced overall that way I think
01:09:386 (69386|2,69563|1) - you could double thoose to make an effect , since the drum sound is abit louder here
01:24:475 (84475|3) - This LN starts here : 01:24:386 (84386|3) - , this one 01:23:151 (83151|2) - ends here : 01:24:386 (84386|0) -
^ don't forget to re-arrange the LNs end
01:27:739 (87739|0) - this LN ends here : 01:28:798 (88798|1) -
01:28:798 (88798|1) - snap here is 1/4 until here : 01:29:328 (89328|2) - after that it's probably a 1/6 rythm , idk the songs here are really confusing to snap @_@
01:52:798 (112798|1) - move to 1 ?
Good Luck :3
try to check ai mod for the other diffs aswell might have same issue
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