1. Spark (5.07 stars, 925 notes)

Hobbes2 wrote:

mod incoming

oops i dropped all my kudosu xd

Shoga wrote:

first xd

From queue

Consider changing the sv to higher sv 1.4 is kinda low. Hmm, sure!

1. 00:06:956 (1) - The distance between these 2 sliders path could be improved. Not too sure what you mean or what changed. The start/end? Please PM in game and confirm.
2. 00:15:232 (1,1,1,1,1) - this part is weird I know, but it follows the beat in the back and is the only thing I can really map to. Including a break removes its potential to be approved. Though please let me know if you have a better idea and I'll consider change!
3. 00:23:508 (3,4) - blanket can be imrpoved Kinda, sure!
4. 00:28:335 (1,2) - Should blanket Agreed, meant to. Done!
5. 00:41:094 (5,6,8) - blanket 5 and 6 then try to curve 6 around the shape of 8 Great idea! Though 5 and 6 were already sort of blanketed, I put the start of 8 in the curve of 6, looks good. Thanks!
6. 00:45:577 (1,1) - listen carefully there are beat between these. The guitar should consider map those In this section, I go from mapping beat > guitar > vocals to highlight different parts of the song that are important here. I agree though, the order may need change, however I will leave it as it is for now for sake of increasing difficulty through it. Will consider for future change!
7. 01:06:266 (1,2) - the beat here is kinda strong should space it further out Strongly agree, thanks for catching this. Fixed.
8. 01:22:818 (8) - ^ Fixed.
9. 02:11:439 (3,4,5,6) - should be spaced further compared to 02:11:266 (2,3) becuz beats at 3 to 6 is stronger Wish I caught this, changed and fixed! for all moments like this.
10. 02:17:646 (1,2,3) - As said before sv should be faster, these don't fit in comparision to the other parts Made them bigger, SV 1>1.25.
11. 02:36:266 (5,6) - stack 6 on tail of 4 then blanket 5 with 6 is a better looking I guess Sure
12. 02:39:025 (5,6) - ^ Done
13. 02:41:784 (5) - stack tail of 5 on 4 to avoid overlap Intended, think it's fine but someone slap me if it's not.
14. This is ugly I can't help u with this ;w; Changed a bit, but is it that bad? D:
15. 03:23:853 (1,2) - Blanket k
16. 03:24:542 (2,3) - ^ fixd
17. 03:35:922 (2,3,4,5) - This kinda catch the player off guard. Many people playtested and had no issue, but if it becomes one later I'll change.
    
18. 04:21:094 (1,2) - Blanket fixd
19. 04:23:508 (5,6) - overlap fixd
20. 04:44:025 (7,1) - Blanket fixd
21. 04:45:404 (4,5) - ^ fixd
22. 04:51:439 (5,6) - ^

blanketed to slider underneath

Not bad for a fresh mapper. gl~

aww only for fresh mapper? alright. ty for the mod, appreciated!

Hitouma wrote:

Hai hai o/

From my queue :3

00:06:956 (1) - this slider starts too early i suggest starting it around 00:09:542 - where you start hearing the noise Sure! Done~

00:24:542 (4,1) - The spinner kind of cuts off the part where she says light in the song.I would suggest adding notes for these vocals and pushing the spinner more towards 00:26:611 - Hmm.. I would, but the spinner would be too short and there's not too much to map there. The end of the slider catches the "light", so I'll leave it I think

00:28:335 (1) - this note and 00:29:715 (3) - this one should be placed on 1/4 and not 1/8 (00:29:715 (3) - and 00:30:060 - respectively Looks like there were issues with my slider velocity changes, making these longer like that. Thanks for catching that!

00:43:163 (8) - a repeat slider is recommended to catch the "nite" from "Ignite It cuts off since I start mapping to the bass instead, and there's a noise from the bass there, hence why I cut it off. You'll notice the next section is mapped more towards the rhythm and beat. ^_^

00:54:197 (3) - This hitsound o.o this goes for similar sliders like at 01:00:404 (9) - Agreed, feels weird. Removed since they hold out the note in the vocals, for both.

02:17:646 (1,2,3) - These sliders feel kind of awkward 02:19:025 (3) - is particularilly long and instead you could follow the instruments than the vocals here I was fairly unsure about them, wanted to try something xd changed to something else, lot better imo, thanks!

02:54:111 (1) - the spinner starts too early 02:55:232 - this is a more appropriate time to start it Fixed!

Overall Appreciation
Very well placed jumps and streams and has a good flow to it. Some odd things here and there but I honestly really like it! Keep it up! Thanks so much, mod really helped!

Hope this mod helps ~

-Hitouma

jakomo73 wrote:

From my queue, thanks for the request and the mod!

00:00:000 - 00:21:784 - I feel like this intro isn't really needed, it's pretty difficult to hear the background and as a player I would prefer it start at 0:22:560 I feel the same, but for approval drain has to be >5 mins. without it it's under and I have to make a mapset.
01:29:554 (6, 7, 8) - The difference in the distances are confusing, 6 and 7 are super close with a greater gap between the beat than 8, and 8 is much further out. Caught me by surprise when playing Agreed, fixed~
02:23:853 (2) - Kind of an awkwardly shaped slider, but no real issue Fixed! Made prettier
02:56:956 (1) - The whistle sounds a bit awkward to me, maybe a softer version of it would fit better Removed whistle
03:00:577 (5, 6, 7) - Same as 01:29:554, but isn't as confusing as the one at 01:29:554 I'll leave it then I think, but if it's continually an issue I'll change.
03:10:749 (5) - The whistle feels a bit loud here Lowered volume to 80% for section
03:12:128 (2) - Same as above ^ Fixes it
03:21:611 (2, 3) - 3 starts before 2 ends I swear, changing the SV on the map ruined a bunch of stuff like this, xd fixed, thanks for catching that!
03:23:853 (1, 2, 3) - The ending of the sliders aren't in tune with the song. Think this one's fine, the sliders start on changes in pitch in vocals.

During all of the kiai times, I think the hitsounds should be slightly more loud than they are. Ahh, they're 100% though

Overall, the streams are really nice! I really like the way you mapped it, thanks!
keep up the good work. Hope I helped, if you need anymore help just let me know! tysm for mod~

yaleufeu wrote:

Ayy, I'm here from my queue ! Owens is too busy, so I'll mod it myself.
I'll mod approx 2minutes of the map, from the beginning.

Enkindle

00:50:404 (7,8) - Space them Sure~
00:57:646 (4,5) - Blanket the end of the 4 slider on the 5. Fixed~
01:06:439 (2) - Blanket This one's fine
01:06:956 (3) - Blanket^
01:07:473 (4) - Blanket Fixed
01:11:956 (2,3,4,5) - Space them, that's not logic from what you did there 01:06:439 (2,3,4,5) - 01:09:197 (2,3,4,5). Variation doesn't hurt, doesn't all have to be the same. If someone else says it's an issue though I'll change it.
01:20:232 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing is not the same. Fixed, sorta. Just moved 4.
01:20:232 (2,5) - They are not well stacked Whaa? That's how they stack. Flows well with the slider it's on too.
01:34:542 (3,4) - Space them Sure! Fixed~
01:36:611 (5,6,7) - Spacing is not the same but the wait time between thoses notes are the same. fix it ? Sure~ DS 4.0x and snapped all properly.
01:55:922 (1) - Finish hitsound Totally forgot I had finish, thanks so much. Added throughout the song's choruses.
02:06:956 (1) - Finish hitsound instead of Whistle Though I would, the finish hitsound is a long sound and playing it twice will make it ring out awkwardly when they stack.
02:07:128 (2) - Delete the Whistle hitsound It's hitsounded to the bass, the noise is here too ^_^

Very cool map, I like it Thanks! And tysm for the mod~

Bearizm wrote:

It will be a while until mine is done. Try your luck! I'm very slow and yours is finished. You have nothing to worry about, for now lol.

Kalibe wrote:

late m4m~ sorry orz

General*

- Your background have weird resolutin 996x509 // Please change it to 1366x768 since that resolution is rankable.Fixed!
- Some unsnappedobjects please fix : 01:47:473 (4) - 01:49:542 (4) - 02:11:611 (4) - 02:11:266 (2,3) - 02:11:784 (5) - 03:25:232 (3) - Fixed! Looks like I missed some SV changes.
- 00:00:060 - Unrankable. Two diffirent volumes in the same time.. just change volume on red timing to 5% Kay, fixed~

Diff*

- 00:25:318 (1,1) - I don't like the idea of usage spinners. I think you should mapped this like you did with 00:30:404 (1,1) - cause there's "should be" spinner in your map. Sure, changed~
- 01:00:060 (8,9) - Ctrl G rhythm makes more sense, since big white tick could be emphasis due to good sound. Agreed, fixed.
- 01:06:266 (1,2) - vs 01:17:301 (1,2) - in spacing.. Consider it. whoops xd "consider" it done
- 01:22:818 (8,1) - Swap NC, cause (8) starts a new stanza. Aah, dumb mistake. Fixed!
- 01:33:335 - You missed really really really loud sound aaaa. Please map it !!Added note
- 01:47:301 (3,2,3) - Those overlaps just doesn't look good imo and yes they are visible in game ;w; Bah... I forgot I remapped stream so it doesn't look nice now. Hmm... I'll look into a fix, but may not be with this update.
- 01:48:335 - Two greenlines with diffirent volumes aaaa.. just delete one of them. Whoops, sorry I forget to double check these
- 01:49:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice flow~ Haha really? One of my least favorite flow parts. But if it works, great! Thanks!
- Kiai time needs improvments, for example 01:51:784 (1,2,3) - the flow feels messy and transision really could be better. / 01:58:163 (8) - Using repater arrow just to hit a clap sound is a bad option for emphasis. Fixed~
- 02:04:197 (1,2) - Make (2) the same curve as you have in (1) ?? Blanketing with 02:03:853 (8) - will be more powerful. kk
- 02:23:853 (2) - ? For what reason you use 3/2 slider after you mapped every 1/2 tick? Point for a little break before the jump pattern sections, which require more stamina. Gives the player the time to prep
- 02:34:542 (1,2) - Rip stack, fix that xd kk
- 02:34:542 - This section lacks hitsounding!! For example 02:35:232 (3) - 02:37:991 (3) - clap ends / 02:36:266 (5) - 02:36:266 (5) - clap heads and etc. Though I agree with the lack of hitsounding, the focus of this section is on the guitar melody. If I hitsound the bass it makes it pop out and not focus on that instead. Plus, with the melody, many of the bass noises fall between sliders. I've tried adding them and wasn't happy with it, so removed them. If I feel creative maybe I'll hitsound this section some unique way, but we'll see.However, I will put whistle hitsounds on the starts of the sliders, if you'd like feel free to replay + see if it fits better!
- This map needs more polishing about spacing and emphatising beats, but nonetheless not a bad map, good luck!

lazyboy007 wrote:

Ahoy bud ^^ hii

00:39:025 (1) - don't think NC is needed here oops, fixed :u
00:43:163 (8) - missing a note here? Maybe make it stop at 2/3 the length and add a hitcircle at what it currently the end (this is also fine) hmm, tried that but doesn't fit. gonna leave it
00:50:749 (8,9,1) - not quite aligned I was being lazy and didn't wanna ds xd fixed!
02:57:991 (2,3) - blanket this and copy 2 to 02:56:956 (1) - this good idea, fixed
03:09:025 (3) - also skipped a note here changed!
03:58:335 (2) - a stream is possible here, idk this fits fine :3 I would but it'd be overmapping since there isn't one in the song D:
04:56:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think it'd be nice to reduce SV gradually further here, but.... lower than 0.55 is kinda hard I guess haha I made it do it a bit :U

Found a few times where the song's hihats make triplets but you didn't map, dunno if that was on purpose or not so i won't mention them here:p if you want i can point them out by pm. think I'm missing 'em, pls pm! tysm

Great map doe ^^ Would love to see this approved Great pleasure playing it tyy! stop throwing so many kudosu, this map isnt that good appreciated though <3 <3

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! Requested from my queue. Sorry If I were a bit late.

[- - Enkindle - -]

1. 00:49:715 (6,7) - At the start of the combo, you were defaulting 2.0x spacing on this part. But here, it creates a bit of confusion in gameplay even though it's 1.0x spaced on 1/2. I suggest increasing the distance spacing to avoid that. Agreed, fixed! I also adjusted the pattern ahead, the sudden stacked 1/2 to spaced 1/2 hexagon is odd, so I adjusted it accordingly. I adjusted a lot of the following section until the melody picks up and gets stronger, around 1:01:439. This helped a lot, thanks!
2. 00:57:646 (4,5) - Well, it's probably similar to above. So yeah.Fixed with the big fixes^
3. 01:16:266 (5) - Is this slider's tail manual stacking on purpose? Because it's the only one among the rest of the sliders' tails being stacked for a pattern but this... Little mistake, thanks for catching it~
4. 01:24:887 (7,1,2) - This is quite some imbalanced spacing and flow. If you could at least default it into 1.5x or 1.8x spacing, it'd comfort the structure ofc. Snapped 01:24:887 (7,1,2,3) to 1.5x.
5. 01:39:025 (4) - Add a whistle, sounds very suitable on this circle for following some strings on the song. Sure! Added
6. 01:44:715 (7,1) - I really expected this to be a jump, turns out not. But it'd be really cool if there's a small jump to notice an incoming stream later on. Rearranged pattern to make it a jump.
7. 02:02:301 (6,7,1) - I might think this is quite gimmick, at least to me. It's a good pattern though, but maybe smoothen a few flaws here would be much comfortable on cursor guiding. Maybe just curve the sharp slider, or symmetry both of the sliders, move down the circle... etc. Tried to make slider ends parallel, made it a curve instead (originally had as one, wanted to experiment)
8. 02:10:404 (9,1) - Uhmm.. Swap the NC here? Obviously (1) is on the blue tick, but you're adding NCs during streams are mostly on the while ticks. If it's intentional, don't mind it ;p Wasn't intentional, was a mistake XD thanks for catching it!
9. 02:19:370 (1,2,3) - Optional objective: Rather than a low-spaced straight down circles on a motivating track of the song, how about a triangle here? or a polygon with the five-notes streams? Well, there are many ways to improve this for aesthetics and structure. Hmm, agreed with making a pattern. Though I feel I have a lot of triangles in the map, I'll try to fit an isosceles in there and see how it works. I need 3 to flow with the next stream burst though, which is why I needed it positioned there, I think I got a decent fix.
10. 02:51:439 - Since the HP drain rate is 7, which is a bit high. Maybe you should add some notes here like a long slider e.g., or at least a break in order to prevent a diversion during emptiness. I like this idea, I made a slider that sharply curves where the melody changes notes.
11. 03:15:577 (5,6,7) - Probably curving the slider here would do best, and Ctrl+J the 1/4 slider. This is for aesthetics, and this is for cursor guidance. Both are good and equal (with 2.0x DS). Your pick.I really like the 2nd one, changed!
12. 03:32:128 (5) - Try to move this slider a bit down right, around x:372|y:205 idk. It's just to keep the hexagon formation a bit cleaner on this part ;3 Sure! Adjusted just a tad further than those coords.
13. 03:58:853 (3,4) - NEARLY the same thing before at the first mod.
14. 04:02:991 (2,3) - I thought this kind of jump is supposed to be on 04:02:646 (4,1) - for the kiai/chorus. So I guess this looks really necessary. ? Bit confused on this statement, do I keep or change? D: I made the spacing larger from 4 to 1 and then adjusted the pattern for 1,2,3.
15. 04:22:818 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try polishing the placements of these sliders, for some polygon pattern on this one. There are many ways for this so idk your way.I made it trapezoid-y, if that makes sense @_@ Fixed! Looks better now~

I like the song btw~ IMMO, This is a really good map having potential for ranking! :3/ Have a star!
Best of luck! Thanks so much, this means a lot coming from someone who's ranked a few maps in their time Really helpful mod, all changes helped a ton. Thanks so much for star!