1. Calm (1,38 stars, 85 notes)
2. Shmik's Serenity (2,01 stars, 108 notes)

Stamby wrote:

Hi, M4M

General

Easiest diff must have "Easy" on its name to make it rankable (Ranking Criteria § Mapset)

Guest mappers's names must be added to the tags (Ranking Criteria)

Kiai is too short, it should last from 00:25:421 to 01:14:267 to match the music better

Timing sounds ok

Skin was well chosen, I liked it

Consider adding song-related tags so people will be able to find the map easily in the listings (e. g. Lee Hee-ah 이희아 - name of the pianist; "piano", etc) added

I would set the volume lower at the end of the map to match the song's audio level

Imakuri: Shmik's diff is the highest level in the mapset, so unless you have created the skin yourself or made some work on the mp3, mapset must be submit by the one who put 'the most effort' on every set. You should try making another difficulty or else ask Shmik to add it to their pending list to make it rankable.

Calm

Not much to say here, it's quite well mapped thanks

01:35:613 (1) - This spinner feels off the song no

Shmik's Serenity

01:36:190 - Why not place a circle here instead of a slider? It feels overmapped no it's rankable


Well, sorry for not going into detail with this map but it seemed good overall, besides metadata and diff levels. Hitsounds are well placed too.

Cya, good luck

Stamby wrote:

Imakuri: Shmik's diff is the highest level in the mapset, so unless you have created the skin yourself or made some work on the mp3, mapset must be submit by the one who put 'the most effort' on every set. You should try making another difficulty or else ask Shmik to add it to their pending list to make it rankable.

Shmiklak wrote:

Stamby wrote:

Imakuri: Shmik's diff is the highest level in the mapset, so unless you have created the skin yourself or made some work on the mp3, mapset must be submit by the one who put 'the most effort' on every set. You should try making another difficulty or else ask Shmik to add it to their pending list to make it rankable.

It's fine, I did only my diff. And btw Ima why did you reply for me? :/

Shmiklak wrote:

I told about this 01:36;190 - :v

Synk1337 wrote:

Easy mod (Calm) :

01:35:805 (1) - I personally don't like the spinner... fixé à contre coeur

00:25:421 (1) - Kiai for 1sec ? looks weird pas besoin de changer c'est rankable

00:49:267 (4) - You should put first combo on this note, same for 01:13:882 (7) - fixé

Nothing much to say your map is pretty good mapped

Parachute wrote:

Hey, heres a mod :3

Calm
Some things i found weird in this diff:
00:34:652 (3) - This slider is honestly weird XD, I think you should make the last red point a normal sliderpoint and make the slider overall more beautiful. Fixed
But also i would kinda like to let the slider end at 00:35:805 - and make another circle at 00:36:190 - to map the piano right there. No, it's pretty fine for me
00:42:729 (3) - This slider maybe make it look straigt to the right? I think it looks better with the next slider (better blanket and flow) ofc, fixed !
01:20:805 (1,2,3) - Another thing that was kinda weird imo. You rarely use hitsounds and then here soooo much. I would remove the claps on the reverses fixed
01:36:190 (3) - Here i would do a clap at the end of this slider to make a nice ending sound You're right, so, fixed !
Also i would like to suggest making whistles on following sliderstarts:
00:24:652 (4) -
00:49:267 (4) -
01:13:882 (4) -
Because of this "Finish sound" that plays in the song. I think it fits on these sliders, and you didnt use whistle at all. Fixed all, thanks !

Thats it for this diff, pretty good already

Well thats it, already pretty nice diffs, so gl to get it ranked ^^Big thanks to you !

Parachute wrote:

Hey, heres a mod :3

Normal
First: I'd suggest the whistles at the same points as i wrote them in the "Calm diff" i'm lazy to do hs, imakuri, pls do them xd Same to all hs suggestions
00:06:959 (1) - You should really rotate this slider a bit so it looks like this for better flow: Screenshot I prefer my flow.
00:02:729 (4) - For this diff i would do claps on sounds like this sliders reversepoint.
So for example also here: 00:05:805 (3) - At this sliderend.
Maybe even on sounds like 00:01:959 (3) - These red points? It fits but its already okay like you did it, juts suggesting this.
00:11:575 (3,4) - Here you should really add claps at the sliderbeginnings because it fits for the music and if theres nothing while you did so many hitsounds before this section it feels kinda weird imo.
01:36:190 (1) - This finish at the end doesnt really fit at all for the ending. I'd do whistle at least or, preferably just no hitsound at the end of this slider.


Well thats it, already pretty nice diffs, so gl to get it ranked ^^

Ovoui wrote:

slt slt grosse merde

[calm]

je trouve que le hitsound finish est beaucoup trop fort par rapport à la musique , tu devrais le changer imo FAIS HAHAHA
00:42:729 (3) - tu pourrais faire un blanket avec la pointe du slider suivant ta race c'est bien, mais bon j'ai changé
00:51:959 (3) - fais plutôt un slider un droit, après cette courbe on s'attend plutot a jouer en bas à droite or le sliderr suivant est au dessus fixé

1. Try to Add more tags: Insrumental Korean SFX Flower Dance
2. Unnecesary tag: song of soul

1. 00:10:036 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
2. 00:25:421 (1) - I think that you must do an entire kiai time from here 00:25:421 (1) - to here 00:48:498 (4) - , i think that its better.
3. 00:27:344 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:27:729 (4) - .
4. 00:30:421 (3) - Delete this slider and add a 1/2 slider here 00:30:805 (4) - .
5. 00:39:652 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:40:036 (4) - .
6. 00:42:729 (3) - ^ here 00:43:113 (4) - .
7. 00:46:190 (2) - Replace this with a singletap.
8. 00:51:959 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:52:344 (4) - .
9. 01:07:344 (3) - ^ here 01:07:729 (4) - .
10. 01:10:805 (2) - Replace this slider with a single tap.
11. 01:13:882 (4) - ^.
12. 01:36:190 (3) - Overlaps ARE NOT permited on easy diffs.

1. 00:01:959 (3,4) - Try to evade the stacks on Normal diffs, can confuse the players, remember that the normal diff players aren't that experienced.
2. 00:05:036 (2,3) - ^.
3. 00:16:190 (1,2) - Fix flow.
4. 00:19:267 (1,2) - ^.
5. 00:31:575 (1) - Ctlr+G, for a better flow.
6. 00:31:575 (1,2) - This is a jump?, the jumps ARE NOT permited on Normal/Easy diffs.
7. 00:35:805 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff.
8. 00:45:421 (2,1) - Fix flow.
9. 00:49:652 (3,2) - Try to evade this overlap.
10. 00:56:190 (1) - Ctrl+G?, for a better flow.
11. 01:00:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff.
12. 01:10:036 (2,1) - Fix flow.
13. 01:11:574 (1,2) - ^.
14. 01:14:267 (3,2) - Try to evade this overlap.
15. 01:20:806 (1) - Ctrl+G?, for a better flow.
16. 01:25:036 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff.
17. 01:34:652 (2,1) - Fix flow.
    
    I think that this diff is completly Copy+Paste, is repetitive and can be boring after a while of playing it because it's all the same, please try to be more creative and create more fun patterns for the players.

+1 Star!