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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Minggu, 21 Januari 2018 at 14.30.35

Artist: 20th Century
Title: INNOCENCE
Source: アイシールド21
Tags: V6 TV Size opening 2 Eyeshield 21 Sena Kobayakawa Yoichi Hiruma Taro Raimon Monta Natsuhiko Taki amefuto american football riichiro inagaki yusuke murata
BPM: 134
Filesize: 18643kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,3 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Hard (2,64 stars, 184 notes)
  3. Insane (3,6 stars, 258 notes)
  4. Normal (1,66 stars, 141 notes)
  5. Touchdown! (3,79 stars, 287 notes)
Download: 20th Century - INNOCENCE
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Xinely
omg childhood has been revived
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Xinely wrote:

omg childhood has been revived
Dis animu is abot kyut boys doing kyut things ♡


ヽ(^Д^)ノ~ ┴┴
Xinely
Mau gd hard nya /kabur
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Xinely wrote:

Mau gd hard nya /kabur

*catch moenely*

Sorry Karen, I'm gunna borrow her for a little while cuz she is being so moe

/run
The21k
You didn't ask for this so take this as an insult because this mod will be the worst eber
Easy
  1. 00:31:897 (1) Reverse slider could fit better... oh and here 00:49:808 (1)
Normal
  1. 00:31:450 Everything so close! can be like this, and like this.
  2. 00:56:524 NC?
  3. 00:59:658 NC?
Hard
  1. Light hard*
  2. 00:52:494 (4) What? Why? This slider shouldn't be here.
  3. Purrfect
Insane
  1. 00:07:270 (2) maybe more space like this?
  2. Well, only that :3
Touchdown!
  1. 00:15:778 Remove NC
  2. Purrfect
Good skin and mapping skills!
-NanoRIPE-
Hi kak ~ NM Request dari q
JOHN SENA!!
eh maksud saya Kobayakawa sena :v

[Easy]
saking bagusnya enggak ada masalah sama sekali masalah :x

[Normal]
00:07:270 (2) - clapnya kelupaan atau sengaja?
00:21:151 (1) - coba ganti slidernya dengan bentuk yg lain,kalau kayak gitu kayak rada gimana gitu :3
00:57:644 (2) - lebih baik finish deh ~

[Hard]
00:01:226 - hmm coba tambah 2 circle disini *ngikutin suara gitar
00:07:270 (4) - clap?
00:08:838 (2,4) - di stack?

[Insane]
00:01:226 - sama dengan hard
00:07:270 (2) - ^
00:56:524 (5,6,7,8) - coba geser ke kanan dikit *intinya circlenya itu tepat di atas slider (1)
00:57:644 (3) - finish
01:09:509 (1) - coba ganti bentuk slidernya,kalau kayak gitu macam aneh lihatnya *bagi saya :3

[Touchdown]
00:23:390 (1) - ini slidernya di cepatin kwkw?
00:43:539 (1) - hapus clap?

GL ~
PureCreamy
Omg omg this song!!!! I love it!!! The map itself is so perfect. Please rank it or i'll cri ;_;
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PureCreamy wrote:

Omg omg this song!!!! I love it!!! The map itself is so perfect. Please rank it or i'll cri ;_;
Thanks for the support~
I'll do my best ( • ̀ω•́ )✧
PureCreamy

Modem wrote:

Thanks for the support~
I'll do my best ( • ̀ω•́ )✧
MARRY ME
Izzywing
NM from queue :^)

[Easy]

Wow this is a really good looking map. Blankets were crisp, everything flowed well. Nothing to comment on here.

[Normal]

00:27:420 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - note density felt a bit high here for a normal, I think you could tone it down

00:30:106 (5,6) - This blanket needs some work

00:40:852 (4) - Blanket looks better if you move the bend to the left a bit.

Like easy, this is a very visually pleasing map. Nice blankets again, good stuff.

[Hard]

00:03:241 (4,5) - That nudge upwards seems pointless when the slider below is parallel with it; I think 4 should just be straight

00:26:300 (5,1) - Blanket needs work, the end 1 curves sharply in the circle which looks bad

00:27:420 (2) - ^Would have to move after you fix the above since its under the end of 1

00:29:211 (3) - The end of this slider should be parallel with the end of 00:30:106 (1). Right now it's slightly off.

[Insane]

00:09:621 - There's a note here worth mapping, I'd remap this little area to fit a 5xcircle stream, although I suppose you could get away with not doing this. Just sounds better imo, esp for an Insane.

Overall, this diff and touchdown both look fine but they seem very similar in terms of difficulty. Like, I don't really think they're both necessary in the same mapset. That being said, you obviously can keep both of them, it just feels like Touchdown doesn't really have anythings special that separates it from the Insane all that much. Personally I think it could be made harder, but that's up to you.

Good luck!
Yahuri
yo again
From queue~

General
-I feel like that spinner-circle football could be way bigger. As in more than 50% of the diameter of the circle. Then you can just add a dot (for user reference) in the middle of it.

Insane
00:03:241 (1) - personally i was little confused by this slider when i played this diff cuz it was like-- oh the middle of it appeared, but wheres the head? (since the head was under another slider)
00:15:330 (4,5,1) - i would make the second slider farther to the right to get more distance between its tail and the tail of the previous slider
01:01:002 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:02:345 (1) - don't really agree with the shape of this slider, too compact

Touchdown!
00:53:166 (6,1,2) - make the (DS of 6 to the body of 1) the same as the (DS of the body of 2 to the body of 1)
welp thats it

map looks great, good luck!
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The21k wrote:

You didn't ask for this so take this as an insult because this mod will be the worst eber
Easy
  1. 00:31:897 (1) Reverse slider could fit better... oh and here 00:49:808 (1) Sorry, I prefer 1/1 slider ;w;
Normal
  1. 00:31:450 Everything so close! can be like this, and like this. I would love to. But the distance snap I'm using is 0.8 DS >.<
  2. 00:56:524 NC? Nope sorry ;w;. Cuz the downbeat started at 00:56:972 (1)
  3. 00:59:658 NC? Nope sorry, the next downbeat is at 01:00:554 (1)
Hard
  1. Light hard*
  2. 00:52:494 (4) What? Why? This slider shouldn't be here. It should be there 'cuz there were 1/4 rhythm at that part from the main music >.<
  3. Purrfect Thanks~ >////<
Touchdown!
  1. 00:15:778 Remove NC Um, there's a downbeat there >.<
  2. Purrfect
Good skin and mapping skills! Thanks~ >////<
Thanks for the mod~! >w</
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-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi kak ~ NM Request dari q
JOHN SENA!!
eh maksud saya Kobayakawa sena :v :v

[Easy]
saking bagusnya enggak ada masalah sama sekali masalah :x Makasih >////<

[Normal]
00:07:270 (2) - clapnya kelupaan atau sengaja? Etto..... Di situ emang whistle >.<
00:21:151 (1) - coba ganti slidernya dengan bentuk yg lain,kalau kayak gitu kayak rada gimana gitu :3 Aku pingin ngebikin tuh slider ngeblanket sama 00:20:255 (6) >.<
00:57:644 (2) - lebih baik finish deh ~ Nice~ Fixed~

[Hard]
00:01:226 - hmm coba tambah 2 circle disini *ngikutin suara gitar Em, enggak deh. Soalnya aku bingung di situ tuh ritmenya 1/4 atau 1/8 :3
00:07:270 (4) - clap? Itu whistle >.<
00:08:838 (2,4) - di stack? Nope, sorry ;w; Lebih suka indirect stack :oops:

[Insane]
00:01:226 - sama dengan hard ^
00:07:270 (2) - ^ ^^
00:56:524 (5,6,7,8) - coba geser ke kanan dikit *intinya circlenya itu tepat di atas slider (1) Nope sorry ;w; Emang sengaja dibikin kayak gitu biar ada sedikit jump buat ngemphasize downbeatnya >.<
00:57:644 (3) - finish Oki fixed~
01:09:509 (1) - coba ganti bentuk slidernya,kalau kayak gitu macam aneh lihatnya *bagi saya :3 Tapi imut ;w;. Trus slider tailnya juga nggak ngebreak flow nya >.<

[Touchdown]
00:23:390 (1) - ini slidernya di cepatin kwkw? Yup xd
00:43:539 (1) - hapus clap? Dari main musicnya emang harus ditambahin clap >.<

GL ~
Thanks for the mod~! >w</
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Hobbes2 wrote:

NM from queue :^) :^D

[Easy]

Wow this is a really good looking map. Blankets were crisp, everything flowed well. Nothing to comment on here. Thanks~! >////<

[Normal]

00:27:420 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - note density felt a bit high here for a normal, I think you could tone it down Nope sorry ;w; I guess that's fine for normal diff. Moreover, the SV is kinda slow which will help the player more in catching the current rhythms >.<

00:30:106 (5,6) - This blanket needs some work Indeed xd. Fixed~

00:40:852 (4) - Blanket looks better if you move the bend to the left a bit. Fixed~! >w<

Like easy, this is a very visually pleasing map. Nice blankets again, good stuff. Thanks~ >////<

[Hard]

00:03:241 (4,5) - That nudge upwards seems pointless when the slider below is parallel with it; I think 4 should just be straight I guess the shape of (4) is pretty fine since it follows the guitar nicely :3

00:26:300 (5,1) - Blanket needs work, the end 1 curves sharply in the circle which looks bad Fixed~ >.<

00:27:420 (2) - ^Would have to move after you fix the above since its under the end of 1 Fixed~

00:29:211 (3) - The end of this slider should be parallel with the end of 00:30:106 (1). Right now it's slightly off. I guess they stack perfectly fine >.<

[Insane]

00:09:621 - There's a note here worth mapping, I'd remap this little area to fit a 5xcircle stream, although I suppose you could get away with not doing this. Just sounds better imo, esp for an Insane. Hm, I'll think about it :3

Overall, this diff and touchdown both look fine but they seem very similar in terms of difficulty. Like, I don't really think they're both necessary in the same mapset. That being said, you obviously can keep both of them, it just feels like Touchdown doesn't really have anythings special that separates it from the Insane all that much. Personally I think it could be made harder, but that's up to you. I guess I'll leave it just the way it was now because the Touchdown diff is actually a lot harder since I added few SV changes here and there and the spacing between the objects itself were a lot larger than in Insane diff. Plus I made 1/4 rhythm in Touchdown diff like 00:48:017 (1,2,3) have some spacing while in Insane diff they weren't. So I'll keep that diff >w</

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod~! >w</
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Yahuri wrote:

yo again Yo~ \:3/
From queue~

General
-I feel like that spinner-circle football could be way bigger. As in more than 50% of the diameter of the circle. Then you can just add a dot (for user reference) in the middle of it. Um nope sorry ;w; I wanna keep it since that spinner-circle football was actually the main dot for the spinner itself >.<

Insane
00:03:241 (1) - personally i was little confused by this slider when i played this diff cuz it was like-- oh the middle of it appeared, but wheres the head? (since the head was under another slider) Yup. It was purposely stacked in order to increase the difficulty :3
00:15:330 (4,5,1) - i would make the second slider farther to the right to get more distance between its tail and the tail of the previous slider Nope sorry ;w;. Cuz when I was test-playing it, the flow would be better if I kept the placement for 00:15:330 (4,5,1) just the way they were now :3
01:01:002 (3,4) - fix blanket Oki, fixed~!
01:02:345 (1) - don't really agree with the shape of this slider, too compact But it follows the singer's voice nicely >.<

Touchdown!
00:53:166 (6,1,2) - make the (DS of 6 to the body of 1) the same as the (DS of the body of 2 to the body of 1)
welp thats it Um, but I was using the same 1.2 DS while mapping 00:53:166 (6,1,2)

map looks great, good luck! Thanks >////<
Thanks for the mod~! >w</
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Updated~! >w</
roshan117
From my Queue :)

Easy
00:30:106 (3) - The whistle sound on this slider sounds and feels out of place compared to the other hitcircles, and their drum-like sound.
00:33:688 (3) - have a hitsound at BOTH the beginning AND the end of the slider
Normal
00:30:106 (5) - the whistle here sounds out of place. use a different hitsound (preferably the same one as all the other ones have)

Overall
VERY SOLID. The only thing I had an issue with were the hitnoises. I hope this gets ranked in the future! (What anime is this from?)
ganad
Yo bruh took a lot of time *sigh* but hey I got it but the quality isn't like 1080p or anything special

http://puu.sh/ps7Fk/2d048c316a.avi

(Video offset is 515ms)

Good luck
Always wanted a eyeshield 21 map ever since i started osu so i really want this >.<
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ganad wrote:

Yo bruh took a lot of time *sigh* but hey I got it but the quality isn't like 1080p or anything special

http://puu.sh/ps7Fk/2d048c316a.avi

(Video offset is 515ms)

Good luck
Always wanted a eyeshield 21 map ever since i started osu so i really want this >.<
Uwah thank you~~~ >w</

And thanks for the star as well~
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