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No_sync
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Raveille
Beatmap file incomplete. Please do something about this.
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No_sync

Raveille wrote:

Beatmap file incomplete. Please do something about this.
... I dont expect this and i dont know which is the cause... I re-downloaded again from zero and get that error too.

Doing something right now, and Idk if the request still pending... anyway Thanks for noticing that.

PS: idk if can give you kudos since is "my error" in first place ... :o for now i will fix first this!

Edit: this symbol "·" just kill the .osu and .jpg files :o Fixing...
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Fixed! Sorry for that! i dont know that symbol ... :o ok Now is safe. :)
Raveille

No_sync wrote:

Raveille wrote:

Beatmap file incomplete. Please do something about this.
... I dont expect this and i dont know which is the cause... I re-downloaded again from zero and get that error too.

Doing something right now, and Idk if the request still pending... anyway Thanks for noticing that.

PS: idk if can give you kudos since is "my error" in first place ... :o for now i will fix first this!

Edit: this symbol "·" just kill the .osu and .jpg files :o Fixing...
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Fixed! Sorry for that! i dont know that symbol ... :o ok Now is safe. :)
Will mod soon :P
Topic Starter
No_sync
Again Sorry for the error! :?

Thanks! :D
Raveille


Ok time to do this then, thanks for fixing.

|1|2|3|4|

Easy
00:15:662 - double cause of cymbal clash and start of new beat
00:19:441 - start of verse and cymbal clash so double again
00:33:929 (33929|0) - why is this unsnapped in 1/4, I found that the follow up sound begins on 00:33:969 - so this note shouldn't be unsnapped. Bring it forward. 00:32:669 (32669|3) - this note should snap too.
00:44:717 (44717|0) - why finish sound on this note? doesn't sound nice when mixed in.
00:59:126 - double tap note cause start of chorus
01:01:725 (61725|3) - wrong snap, should be on 01:01:843 -
01:10:937 (70937|0) - again, no real use for a finish sound on this note
01:21:803 (81803|2) - if you are mapping to the background music instead of the vocal, the hold note should end 01:22:158 -

Normal
00:19:441 - double for cymbal and start of verse
00:32:669 (32669|1,32669|0,33929|2,33929|3) - again, snap them correctly.
00:41:410 (41410|1,41410|0) - finish sounds here again sound bad.
00:44:717 (44717|1,44717|0) - ^^^^
01:21:803 (81803|2,81803|3) - again, snap them to blue line
01:23:693 (83693|2,83693|3) - ^^
01:27:236 - missing sound

Hard
00:19:441 - won't reiterate again
00:33:929 (33929|2,33929|3) - snapz
00:41:410 (41410|2,41410|3) - hi finishes
00:44:717 (44717|1,44717|3,44717|2,44717|0) - noes finishes :<
01:21:803 (81803|1,81803|0) - won't reiterate this too
01:23:693 (83693|0,83693|1) - ^^

Stick
00:19:441 - this is the hardest diff and you don't map doubles for cymbal and new verse?
00:26:528 - was thinking, since this is the hardest diff, you should make use of the 1/6 beats here. Click here for my suggestion.
00:41:410 (41410|0,41410|1) - finishes X<
00:44:717 (44717|3,44717|2,44717|0,44717|1) - finishois :<
01:21:803 (81803|0,81803|1) - deja vu
01:23:693 (83693|1,83693|2,83693|0) - deja vu part 2

This map is relatively ok, but you need to work on some parts that are unsnapped and that follow the beat. Also, correct usage of the doubles on specific areas of a song.

Good luck for rank :PPPPPPP
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Raveille wrote:



Ok time to do this then, thanks for fixing. :)

|1|2|3|4|

Easy
00:15:662 - double cause of cymbal clash and start of new beat you right! :o Applied!
00:19:441 - start of verse and cymbal clash so double again Applied!
00:33:929 (33929|0) - why is this unsnapped in 1/4, I found that the follow up sound begins on 00:33:969 - so this note shouldn't be unsnapped. Bring it forward. 00:32:669 (32669|3) - this note should snap too. I think this was 1/6 snap... for now i will snap like you said... Applied!
00:44:717 (44717|0) - why finish sound on this note? doesn't sound nice when mixed in. Changed for clap2 sounds better and i dont find anything better before than "finish" :/
00:59:126 - double tap note cause start of chorus Applied!
01:01:725 (61725|3) - wrong snap, should be on 01:01:843 - Done!
01:10:937 (70937|0) - again, no real use for a finish sound on this note Normal hit then!
01:21:803 (81803|2) - if you are mapping to the background music instead of the vocal, the hold note should end 01:22:158 - Done!

Normal
00:19:441 - double for cymbal and start of verse Done!
00:32:669 (32669|1,32669|0,33929|2,33929|3) - again, snap them correctly. Done!
00:41:410 (41410|1,41410|0) - finish sounds here again sound bad. I change these two for Drum->Finish. If i put Normal clap2 is something strange... Done!
00:44:717 (44717|1,44717|0) - ^^^^ Done! clap2
01:21:803 (81803|2,81803|3) - again, snap them to blue line Done!
01:23:693 (83693|2,83693|3) - ^^ Done!
01:27:236 - missing sound Added! + Added missed notes in that section to the end...

Hard
00:19:441 - won't reiterate again :? Applied!
00:33:929 (33929|2,33929|3) - snapz Done!
00:41:410 (41410|2,41410|3) - hi finishes Drum->Finish, clap2 dont work there
00:44:717 (44717|1,44717|3,44717|2,44717|0) - noes finishes :< Replaced only the soft for clap2 if i put 4, they will too LOUD...
01:21:803 (81803|1,81803|0) - won't reiterate this too Done!
01:23:693 (83693|0,83693|1) - ^^Done!

Stick
00:19:441 - this is the hardest diff and you don't map doubles for cymbal and new verse? :o :cry: Done!!! ;)
00:26:528 - was thinking, since this is the hardest diff, you should make use of the 1/6 beats here. Click here for my suggestion. Yes is true and fits, i do that too in 00:22:984... Thanks!
00:41:410 (41410|0,41410|1) - finishes X< :o Done! (like i said above)
00:44:717 (44717|3,44717|2,44717|0,44717|1) - finishois :< Done! (like i said above)
01:21:803 (81803|0,81803|1) - deja vu Done!
01:23:693 (83693|1,83693|2,83693|0) - deja vu part 2 Done!

This map is relatively ok, but you need to work on some parts that are unsnapped and that follow the beat. Also, correct usage of the doubles on specific areas of a song.

Good luck for rank :PPPPPPP Yeah :roll: Thanks for your help! (and patience 8-) )
Thanks for mod all the diffs!

Edited with changes!
Froskya
Hi!~ Random Mod :D
General

  1. Add combo colours
  2. Use this bg for all diffs
  3. Delete "Widescreen Support"
  4. Add in Tags "ed"
  5. 00:59:126 - set here Preview Point in all diffs
  6. 01:21:803 - set kiai's end here in all diffs

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
No_sync

Revialink wrote:

Hi!~ Random Mod :D
General

  1. Add combo colours Not necessary in Mania mode...
  2. Use this bg for all diffs Keep.
  3. Delete "Widescreen Support" Whenever i put a video this appears anyways... Applied!
  4. Add in Tags "ed" ending is enough...
  5. 00:59:126 - set here Preview Point in all diffs Keep.
  6. 01:21:803 - set kiai's end here in all diffs Keep.


Good Luck~
Thanks for your mod, Sorry for the inconvenience! :)
Nivrad00
From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

HAHAHAHA ReallyStick that's hilarious

General
Some of the bgs look very low quality, and on ReallyEasy the bg looks like it has distorted dimensions
Some of the diffs may have unnecessary green lines?
box
ReallyEasy
00:33:969 - I'm not sure why you chose to start the LN here. Doesn't the sound change most noticeably on the 1/1 snap?

ReallyNormal
00:14:244 - From here to the end of the intro, almost all the doubles are on the same lanes. A bit unexpected .P
00:33:969 - same LN thing as Easy
00:38:339 - How come this pattern looks different from 00:34:559 - and 00:36:213 - ? they sound pretty similar. Also 00:39:520 - is single notes while 00:35:740 - is LNs. The variety is cool but in such a small section it's probably best to practice consistency

ReallyHard
00:34:087 - same LN thing
00:38:811 - same comment as Normal

ReallyStick
00:49:205 - overlapping objects x:

I haven't done a very in-depth mod because I think this set needs more work on your own. I think you could improve on consistency, first of all. You should focus on establishing and following patterns when you consciously make decisions (which instruments to map, what size the chords are, when you use LNs, how long LNs are, etc.)

As a concrete example, it seems like you jump between instruments a lot in Easy. You ignore the melody at 00:08:103 - but chart it at 00:11:882 - , but I think it would be more logical to map it both times. You could also extend the LN at 00:16:843 - to match the full length of the sound, or put a LN at 00:18:260 - for the violin, since you mapped the previous AND the following violin notes. These are just examples, of course.

Maybe you could also improve on visual appeal? 00:54:165 - on Hard, for example, the 1-2-1-2 pattern is not a good use of space (cus the right side is empty) and it kinda sticks out visually.

That was a lot of advice, but tbh it might not be very useful. If you want to improve, my best advice is to just make more maps ;n;
I hope that was helpful. Good luck!
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No_sync
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Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

HAHAHAHA ReallyStick that's hilarious I see the title in japanese and that "·" separate that word in "Really-Stick" translated... typo or not looks funny! :3

General
Some of the bgs look very low quality, and on ReallyEasy the bg looks like it has distorted dimensions I Need more work in BGs then! asap
Some of the diffs may have unnecessary green lines? Now i see a lot of rare greens and idk why! changing that now... :o and for hitsounds, changing that too. asap
box
ReallyEasy
00:33:969 - I'm not sure why you chose to start the LN here. Doesn't the sound change most noticeably on the 1/1 snap? Applied!

ReallyNormal
00:14:244 - From here to the end of the intro, almost all the doubles are on the same lanes. A bit unexpected .P omg you right xD :o Fixed!
00:33:969 - same LN thing as Easy Applied!
00:38:339 - How come this pattern looks different from 00:34:559 - and 00:36:213 - ? they sound pretty similar. Also 00:39:520 - is single notes while 00:35:740 - is LNs. The variety is cool but in such a small section it's probably best to practice consistency Applied!

ReallyHard
00:34:087 - same LN thing Fixed
00:38:811 - same comment as Normal Fixed

ReallyStick
00:49:205 - overlapping objects x: Moving notes and not noticing that :o Fixed!

I haven't done a very in-depth mod because I think this set needs more work on your own. I think you could improve on consistency, first of all. You should focus on establishing and following patterns when you consciously make decisions (which instruments to map, what size the chords are, when you use LNs, how long LNs are, etc.) Need more maps

As a concrete example, it seems like you jump between instruments a lot in Easy. You ignore the melody at 00:08:103 - but chart it at 00:11:882 - , but I think it would be more logical to map it both times. You could also extend the LN at 00:16:843 - to match the full length of the sound, or put a LN at 00:18:260 - for the violin, since you mapped the previous AND the following violin notes. These are just examples, of course. Doing changes to this.

Maybe you could also improve on visual appeal? 00:54:165 - on Hard, for example, the 1-2-1-2 pattern is not a good use of space (cus the right side is empty) and it kinda sticks out visually. When use patterns... Fixed. AutoMod not miss there wtf!? Thx!

That was a lot of advice, but tbh it might not be very useful. If you want to improve, my best advice is to just make more maps ;n; I reach my limit of three. xD
I hope that was helpful. Good luck! Thanks! Very helpful. oh Congratulations for BN! 8-) ...now its time for c h a n g e s (!alot!) For now, i will update the map with the mod, after that i will continue... now lunch :)
Thanks for mod all the diffs!

Edited with changes!
erlinadewi-


Hi No_Sync :) mod Requested from my queue. Sorry for late mod, very busy with IRL stuff

4K 1|2|3|4


just a simple mod

ReallyEasy

00:01:488 (1488|3) - this LN start 00:01:252 - here and end to 00:01:961 - here
00:07:630 - add Ln for violin
00:14:953 - hear something here. maybe you can add note
01:00:071 - add for loud kick
01:15:189 - ^

ReallyNormal

00:01:488 (1488|0) - same reason with easy mod
00:14:953 - add
00:19:914 (19914|2) - move to col 2 for better
00:59:126 (59126|2,59126|3) - 1 LN is good enough
01:14:244 (74244|2,74244|3) - ^
01:21:803 (81803|2) - move to col 1 for balance
01:26:882 (86882|3,87000|2) - swap for balance

sorry only 2 diff can be modded.

Good luck~ >w<)/
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erlinadewi- wrote:



Hi No_Sync :) mod Requested from my queue. Sorry for late mod, very busy with IRL stuff

4K 1|2|3|4


just a simple mod

ReallyEasy

00:01:488 (1488|3) - this LN start 00:01:252 - here and end to 00:01:961 - here noice :3 Changed!
00:07:630 - add Ln for violin Changed!
00:14:953 - hear something here. maybe you can add note Even in higher diffs i dont put anything there, i dont hear nothing... Keep.
01:00:071 - add for loud kick I change that part :? and added that note too Applied!
01:15:189 - ^Changed and Applied!

ReallyNormal

00:01:488 (1488|0) - same reason with easy mod Changed in all diffs its the same thing xD
00:14:953 - add Even in higher diffs i dont put anything there, i dont hear nothing... Keep.
00:19:914 (19914|2) - move to col 2 for better Changed!
00:59:126 (59126|2,59126|3) - 1 LN is good enough Yeah :o my brain these days Changed!
01:14:244 (74244|2,74244|3) - ^ Changed and Applied!
01:21:803 (81803|2) - move to col 1 for balance Changed!
01:26:882 (86882|3,87000|2) - swap for balance Changed!

sorry only 2 diff can be modded. Self modding/mapping for your mod! any help is welcome so Thanks! :)

Good luck~ >w<)/ \(>w< i like these faces xD
Thanks for your help!

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