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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 10 de septiembre de 2016 at 12:03:19

Artist: u's
Title: LOVELESS WORLD
Source: ラブライブ! School idol project
Tags: Hata Aki Yamada Takahiro Kawada Takaou Love Live! Honoka Kotori Umi Maki Rin Hanayo Nico Eli Nozomi nico-nico-nii
BPM: 157
Filesize: 8015kb
Play Time: 05:12
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Download: u's - LOVELESS WORLD
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Yes, a ham can map Love Live! songs too! secret ver. by me

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Hello! Coming from my queue! t/446294

00:28:788 (45,46,47,48,49) - This, and 00:31:845 (57,58,59,60,61,62) - Basically are the "same" on rhythm. Let's make some small corrections:
00:30:125 (51) - This should be kat, if you're following the drum hit. Since you started to make the hit stronger with finisher, the second don before that is useless. And after change it will be a similar for reserve further.
00:32:418 (61) - This should definitely be kat, to make the next finisher don stronger in rhythm (and you still like to do a good hit background, so hey! do that!)

Part from 93 combo can be better, it's full of "waiting". I'd suggest to make it somehow better with follow on guitar btw. Example is:
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The selected (93) circle is from your map, the guitar pattern repeats of those seven notes so really (then goes your K D K from 101 to 103), and it goes three times like that. To perform this, you need to add: dons at: 00:38:915 (+ two next 1/4 ticks), kat here: 00:39:297, dons at: 00:39:488 (+ two next 1/4 ticks). Then goes dons 00:40:444 (+ two next 1/4 ticks), kat here: 00:40:826, dons at 00:41:017 (+ two next 1/4 ticks). Then goes dons 00:41:973 (+ two next 1/4 ticks), kat here: 00:42:355, dons here: 00:42:546 (+ two next 1/4 ticks). Would only change 00:42:928 (121) - to be a Kat finisher, and 00:43:883 (125) - for be a Don finisher (to make rhythm better).
Overall should look like this http://i.imgur.com/AkH2iLH.png
00:56:304 (202) - If you're sure of kat finisher here, make 00:56:495 (203,204,205,206,207) - to be not ddddd but dkddk. Why? You gonna hear a nice 1/3 part fiting rhythm.
01:16:367 (7,8,9,10,11) - Weird those kdkdkd for me. 01:16:750 (11) - turn this don, tons better imo. Then the next kdkdk is fine. Also, in stream next, I would emphatize kkddk pattern which you used most, so I'd just 01:18:756 (25) - turn this kat, 01:19:902 (37) - turn this don. (Mostly because this drums and guitar are similar to Dragonforce's, and the rhythm just fits).
01:26:113 (82) - Stream starting from here was kinda disappointing for me. I mean.. I dislike this pattern in overall, but that's me. I noticed pretty much nice vocal rhythm you can follow here with a pretty constant pattern which won't cause problems to alt players.
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01:32:801 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - Somehow I don't like it, it goes good with second (dddk) 1/6, but I can't find a replacement which won't hurt it EXCEPT the 1/6 monostream with ending kat (but that would be brutal, it goes about 15 notes, somebody other will check it).
01:42:164 (68,69) - Suddenly some big finishers. Well, why? Especially when you have some pretty close after those two. 01:42:546 (69) - Delete this one, 01:42:355 starting from here (and counting next four 1/4 ticks), do kdkdd or kdddk. Preferrably kdkdd.
01:53:629 (155) - Same as above, keep it, 01:54:011 (156) - delete, 01:53:820 - starting from here (and counting next four 1/4 ticvks) do kdkdd or kdddk. To fit rhythm.
From here: 01:58:406 to 02:02:036 you could think of doing the same guitar trick as before mentioned. It's pretty empty, as it's half of map AND next part is without almost any sounds, so it's like double break time for 6* map. :/
02:03:374 (197) - Finisher?
02:07:387 (208) - Finisher?
02:08:151 (211) - Finisher?
02:09:488 (218) - And finisher? xD
02:09:871 - From here (and next two 1/4 ticks) do "dkk" to fit rhythm
02:14:170 (262) - Turn to don for rhythm
02:18:087 (285) - Finisher?
02:19:616 (292) - Finisher?
02:21:144 (297) - Finisher?
02:24:202 (310) - Finisher?
02:27:259 (324) - This could also be Finish.
02:22:482 (304) - Turn to kat? Feels better.
02:24:202 (310) - This could also be fini... nvm, it is.
02:29:743 (335,336,337,338,339) - It does not fit rhythm imo. Eleven 1/4 ticks from here (02:29:743) should be arranged into: d0k0kdd000D (where 0 is empty, d - don, k - kat, D - finisher on don, K - finisher on kat).
02:34:329 (6,7,8,9,10) - Not really liking it. 02:34:329 (6) - delete, 02:34:520 (7) - make it don, 02:34:711 (9) - make it don, 02:34:807 - add kat. Suddenly it fits the rhythm and it's the pattern begininng of siimilar streams later.\:D/
02:56:304 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - Not sure why, but I have feeling people will miss on it often. xD
03:01:176 - Add don, don't let the rhythm stop
03:04:234 ^
03:07:291 ^
03:08:151 - Considering up, add don

Then till the end I don't have any problems. :D.
Good luck!
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Acrith wrote:
Hello! Coming from my queue! t/446294

00:28:788 (45,46,47,48,49) - This, and 00:31:845 (57,58,59,60,61,62) - Basically are the "same" on rhythm. Let's make some small corrections:
00:30:125 (51) - This should be kat, if you're following the drum hit. Since you started to make the hit stronger with finisher, the second don before that is useless. And after change it will be a similar for reserve further.
00:32:418 (61) - This should definitely be kat, to make the next finisher don stronger in rhythm (and you still like to do a good hit background, so hey! do that!)

I tried too change these notes to k and i need to say that sounds a bit weird for me, for now i'll keep with d, they sounds good for me

Part from 93 combo can be better, it's full of "waiting". I'd suggest to make it somehow better with follow on guitar btw. Example is:
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The selected (93) circle is from your map, the guitar pattern repeats of those seven notes so really (then goes your K D K from 101 to 103), and it goes three times like that. To perform this, you need to add: dons at: 00:38:915 (+ two next 1/4 ticks), kat here: 00:39:297, dons at: 00:39:488 (+ two next 1/4 ticks). Then goes dons 00:40:444 (+ two next 1/4 ticks), kat here: 00:40:826, dons at 00:41:017 (+ two next 1/4 ticks). Then goes dons 00:41:973 (+ two next 1/4 ticks), kat here: 00:42:355, dons here: 00:42:546 (+ two next 1/4 ticks). Would only change 00:42:928 (121) - to be a Kat finisher, and 00:43:883 (125) - for be a Don finisher (to make rhythm better).
Overall should look like this http://i.imgur.com/AkH2iLH.png

This is a ''calm'' part, your suggestion is not bad but i would prefer to keep with this amount of notes

00:56:304 (202) - If you're sure of kat finisher here, make 00:56:495 (203,204,205,206,207) - to be not ddddd but dkddk. Why? You gonna hear a nice 1/3 part fiting rhythm. i don't understand, a pattern like that doesn't affect to the 1/3 rhythm of 01:00:125 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208) - , also, i like the ddddd pattern, is like a relax pattern for finish this section
01:16:367 (7,8,9,10,11) - Weird those kdkdkd for me. 01:16:750 (11) - turn this don, tons better imo. Then the next kdkdk is fine. Also, in stream next, I would emphatize kkddk pattern which you used most, so I'd just 01:18:756 (25) - turn this kat, 01:19:902 (37) - turn this don. (Mostly because this drums and guitar are similar to Dragonforce's, and the rhythm just fits). these kdkdk should be kd dk but kdkdk follows vocals and instrumental good so kdkdk sounds very good for me and not WEIRD, about the stream, i want to keep it ''easy'' there.
01:26:113 (82) - Stream starting from here was kinda disappointing for me. I mean.. I dislike this pattern in overall, but that's me. I noticed pretty much nice vocal rhythm you can follow here with a pretty constant pattern which won't cause problems to alt players.
Image changed to kddkddkdddkdkdk, i like the kddkddk patterns, fits good with vocals
01:32:801 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - Somehow I don't like it, it goes good with second (dddk) 1/6, but I can't find a replacement which won't hurt it EXCEPT the 1/6 monostream with ending kat (but that would be brutal, it goes about 15 notes, somebody other will check it). if mooooore people suggest to delete 1/6 i'll do, i like the pattern and it sounds good for me, i don't wanna add a dddddddk 1/6 there
01:42:164 (68,69) - Suddenly some big finishers. Well, why? Especially when you have some pretty close after those two. 01:42:546 (69) - Delete this one, 01:42:355 starting from here (and counting next four 1/4 ticks), do kdkdd or kdddk. Preferrably kdkdd. is like a ''rest'' moment, and they emphatize good
01:53:629 (155) - Same as above, keep it, 01:54:011 (156) - delete, 01:53:820 - starting from here (and counting next four 1/4 ticvks) do kdkdd or kdddk. To fit rhythm. hmm same
From here: 01:58:406 to 02:02:036 you could think of doing the same guitar trick as before mentioned. It's pretty empty, as it's half of map AND next part is without almost any sounds, so it's like double break time for 6* map. :/ i can't have a break? if i did not mapped that guitar part before why i should map it now? that break it's fine after that kiai
02:03:374 (197) - Finisher? weird having a finisher there
02:07:387 (208) - Finisher? okay, good for start a new section
02:08:151 (211) - Finisher? i don't agree with that
02:09:488 (218) - And finisher? xD same ^
02:09:871 - From here (and next two 1/4 ticks) do "dkk" to fit rhythm uhm? there is no sound, its just the vocal and sounds weird having that dkk before the stream
02:14:170 (262) - Turn to don for rhythm i prefer ''easier'' since it's not the kiai
02:18:087 (285) - Finisher? i don't see any reason there
02:19:616 (292) - Finisher?
02:21:144 (297) - Finisher?
02:24:202 (310) - Finisher?
02:27:259 (324) - This could also be Finish.same with these suggestions, it's a ''calm'' part, so.. no
02:22:482 (304) - Turn to kat? Feels better. i like dkd, no change for now
02:24:202 (310) - This could also be fini... nvm, it is. it isn't a finisher but same as before
02:29:743 (335,336,337,338,339) - It does not fit rhythm imo. Eleven 1/4 ticks from here (02:29:743) should be arranged into: d0k0kdd000D (where 0 is empty, d - don, k - kat, D - finisher on don, K - finisher on kat). that part it was ''hard'' to map, the actual pattern is the best i got (imo), if someone suggests a better thing i'll change
02:34:329 (6,7,8,9,10) - Not really liking it. 02:34:329 (6) - delete, 02:34:520 (7) - make it don, 02:34:711 (9) - make it don, 02:34:807 - add kat. Suddenly it fits the rhythm and it's the pattern begininng of siimilar streams later.\:D/ your suggestion it's not bad, but i don't want to make 1/4 + finisher, i'll keep mine as i like too
02:56:304 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - Not sure why, but I have feeling people will miss on it often. xD i was thinking a lot about this, i was about change but i decided to wait for your mod, changed to kkdkkdkdkkdkk again
03:01:176 - Add don, don't let the rhythm stop there is no sound, i did that in the next part for increase a bit the diff and make a bit of variety
03:04:234 ^ ^
03:07:291 ^ ^
03:08:151 - Considering up, add don i prefer kd dk for avoid inconsistency

Then till the end I don't have any problems. :D.
Good luck!


Thanks for the mod~
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you know why people mad if chat me.. and this about editor mode (mapping/modding) I hope ur n-
23:03 Hanjamon: dem surono
23:03 Surono: !1!!
23:03 Surono: dem
23:04 Hanjamon: kitchen gun
23:04 Hanjamon: xDDD
23:04 Hanjamon: i want to ask you, can you testplay a map?
23:04 Surono: y!
23:04 Surono: gib me
23:04 Hanjamon: xDD
23:05 Hanjamon: here
23:05 *Hanjamon is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/959168 u's - LOVELESS WORLD]
23:05 Surono: wut hepun with SR??!??!
23:05 Surono: moe with harsh takos?!?!??! dem `L_`
23:06 Hanjamon: hahahaha
23:06 Hanjamon: it's broken
23:06 Hanjamon: xD well, it's not too hard
23:09 Surono: noice DLing and failed. dem intreeNUt
23:10 Hanjamon: bad internet there?
23:11 Surono: nope. it just me is dem
23:11 Surono: in here is fine, but surdem isnt fine :U rip me, Intrehnut h8 me `L-
23:12 Hanjamon: but well, i don't have internet, i'm just stealing neighbour internet (?
23:12 Surono: xd
23:17 Hanjamon: dem, stills bad internet?
23:18 Surono: fine... I use IE for DLing this, sry :U
23:18 Surono: fine speed, but bad transferr data.. rip
23:19 Hanjamon: rip
23:19 Hanjamon: don't you have another browser?
23:20 Surono: have, mozilla :U but failed DLing happen, so IE
23:21 Hanjamon: rip
23:21 Surono: xd lol
23:21 Hanjamon: you can get an app like flashget for download files, it's good
23:21 Surono: tek ur time sand pie, dont care me ;w; dem dont notice me.
23:21 Surono: wehh!??! I'll try that app :U hmm noice
23:22 Hanjamon: xDDDD
23:22 Surono: ok done.. dem high speed but bad transfer. but Upload speed is superduperfast :U
23:23 *Surono is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/959168 u's - LOVELESS WORLD]
23:23 Hanjamon: xDDDDDD
23:23 Hanjamon: no problem
23:23 Surono: 5.96 sr, I hear that
23:23 Surono: i hear that doganforce drum :U
23:23 Surono: dem.. i mean metal genre
23:23 Hanjamon: yeah
23:23 Surono: dem moe :UUU nice sr. dem metal drum
23:30 Hanjamon: better i talk this xD well, maybe you play less now
23:31 Hanjamon: here*
23:31 Surono: :U but.. I see unnecessary emphasize on coloring pattern, okey
23:31 Surono: okey IRC?
23:31 Surono: so lazy and rip me with post forum
23:31 Hanjamon: oh
23:31 Hanjamon: gmm
23:31 Hanjamon: hmm*
23:31 Hanjamon: let's try, but i don't know if i need to go in a while xD
23:32 Surono: !!1!!., okey idk. I will post this
23:32 Hanjamon: okay xD
23:32 Surono: :U I just confuse with my bad english. okey..
23:32 Hanjamon: and thanks a lot Surono
23:32 Surono: `L-`
23:33 Hanjamon: dem
23:33 Hanjamon: sir
23:33 Surono: dem /close sign
23:34 Hanjamon: xD
23:59 Surono: nice, I click other link on osh website
23:59 Surono: so mod is gone. gluck with your map.
23:59 Hanjamon: :(
00:00 Hanjamon: no problem Surono
00:00 Hanjamon: and thanks
00:00 Surono: :/ so is my bad fate lol, maybe another next time.
00:01 Surono: maybe is karma I spam minor things :U yeah.. lol sry.
00:01 Hanjamon: lol xD
00:03 Surono: okey I mad :U okey irc. blah
00:04 Surono: 00:13:023 - idc this slider or spiner. dem `L_`
00:04 Hanjamon: wait xD
00:04 Surono: 00:43:883 - change color bruh.. dem is differ sound with 2 left finisher.
00:05 Surono: 00:51:622 - and 00:55:062 - wanna kat?? :U
00:05 Hanjamon: i prefer slider instead of spinner
00:05 Surono: 00:58:597 (194,195) - swap color? 194 just kick, 195 is cymbal with snare. so swap >:U
00:06 Hanjamon: 00:43:883 (104) - changed to d, didn't noticed lol
00:06 Surono: yeah i know. I just idontcare that :U thats same. lol slider wuz `L-`
00:06 Hanjamon: 00:54:680 - about this i prefer kdddkdddkdddk, so no change
00:06 Surono: 01:01:367 - this ghost note. no have drum. 01:01:463 - and this dddk 1/6
00:07 Surono: yeah kdddkdddk repeating. I just think is nice to emphasize that faded violin. lol forget
00:07 Hanjamon: 00:58:597 (194,195) - ddk D is better
00:08 Surono: okey. that instrument..
00:08 Surono: 01:09:775 (261,263) - swap? I just feel this weird emphasize..
00:08 Hanjamon: oh
00:08 Hanjamon: that 1/6
00:08 Surono: yeah lol :U
00:09 Hanjamon: changed to dddk 1/6 lol but
00:09 Hanjamon: kk(dddk) like this, i know that k it's a ghost note but fits with the melody
00:09 Surono: but keep to not delete?
00:09 Surono: :U nice ikr ikr.
00:10 Hanjamon: 01:50:189 (261,263) - dkk it's good, it's a bit similar to ddk and want to keep consistency
00:10 Hanjamon: 01:09:775 - *
00:10 Surono: 01:12:737 - swap? kdk?
00:10 Surono: 01:20:094 - kat? thats flow imo... good
00:11 Hanjamon: no change, want to keep consistency
00:11 Hanjamon: hmm
00:11 Surono: 01:21:336 - delete?
00:11 Hanjamon: maybe it sounds good that stream suggestion
00:11 Hanjamon: but
00:11 Hanjamon: i want to keep ''easy''
00:11 Hanjamon: at least that part
00:11 Surono: that easy.. consistent alternating.
00:12 Surono: not like kddkddk things. with differ turnover kat. :U
00:12 Hanjamon: yeah but it will be too suddendly
00:12 Surono: xd
00:12 Hanjamon: 01:21:336 - not accepted, i want to keep that
00:12 Surono: 01:26:781 - kat? for contrast 01:26:877 - here?
00:13 Surono: 01:30:221 - kat?
00:13 Surono: 01:33:087 - weh this I want to say mainly.. why not change to don?
00:13 Hanjamon: kddkddkdddkdk it's good, i like that pattern
00:13 Hanjamon: so no change
00:14 Hanjamon: 01:30:221 - drums
00:14 Surono: :U please.. i not tel about kddkddk
00:14 Hanjamon: 01:33:087 - not d because it flows better
00:14 Surono: yeah yeah keep. I say with that change for ddkkdkkkddk. bcus it consistent alternating with right finger. not like kddkddk.
00:14 Surono: after hit dddk(d)dddk
00:15 Surono: (d)dddk is easy yeah? and 01:33:469 - wanna don? I think better to give emphasize kat just 01:33:565 - this
00:16 Surono: 01:50:380 (262,263) - swap color? 01:50:571 (263,264) - same vocal
00:16 Hanjamon: 01:33:469 - i'll think about it
00:17 Surono: 01:51:240 (266,271) - don for 266 and kat 271?
00:17 Surono: kkkkdddd feels.. forced imo ._.
00:17 Hanjamon: 03:08:915 (263,264) - i prefer to finish with D
00:18 Surono: link..
00:18 Hanjamon: it's not forced
00:18 Hanjamon: 01:50:476 - this part i mean, i prefer to finish with D
00:18 Surono: 02:05:094 - this... delete..
00:19 Surono: on 00:14:839 - , but this not stronk like that
00:19 Hanjamon: but decided 01:51:144 (266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274) - to change
00:20 Hanjamon: so now will be kkkkddkkd
00:20 Surono: 02:16:558 - kat for this cymbal and emphasize vocal?
00:21 Hanjamon: 02:05:094 - i'll think about it
00:21 Hanjamon: 02:16:558 - more priority to drum there, so i'll keep
00:22 Surono: from 4th kiai until 03:41:973 - here, try to make 4plet pattern? I think boring with current 2plet pattern, theres have guitar nice to follow imo
00:23 Surono: 03:43:979 (21,22) - swap and 03:44:743 (31,32) - these? I think is nonsense to emphasized imo
00:23 Hanjamon: 02:52:960 (159) - okay, i'll add 4plet in things like this
00:23 Hanjamon: 03:26:781 -
00:24 Surono: 04:13:692 - don this?
00:24 Surono: maybe just it. wait 03:23:055 - i hitd this when u askd me to test...
00:24 Hanjamon: 03:42:068 - here i'll keep better without 4plet
00:25 Surono: I confuse if u make sv on there... I just guess that 1/4.. but well... dem fingers is 1/6
00:25 Hanjamon: 04:13:692 - kkkkd fits better for me
00:25 Surono: oke.
00:25 Surono: 03:42:068 - yeah lol dont add note at here x
00:26 Surono: 03:23:055 - maybe sv on here and 03:24:011 - back normal to here imo.. please is kill my eyes xd
00:26 Surono: with increasing every notes with green lines..
00:27 Hanjamon: but i think is good :(
00:28 Surono: lol xd
00:29 Surono: okey... just this, :U dont take seriously my word.. but I think I mostly make people to mad/angry, and sorry for nazi things (-/\- )
00:29 Hanjamon: no problem
00:29 Hanjamon: thanks to you for the mod :3
00:29 Hanjamon: some things were good
00:29 Hanjamon: you can post
00:30 Surono: :^U yeah.. you not mad? well I never mad.. but I think I will laugh if people seriously problem with me
00:30 Hanjamon: nah
00:30 Surono: okay I posting this dem mod :U minor things is dem. btw dddk(k)dddk, you agree to (d)dddk?
00:30 Hanjamon: i'm fine xD
00:30 Surono: demm u handjamoon :U okey /savelog


really nothing. dont take seriously.. ppl... dem..
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you know why people mad if chat me.. and this about editor mode (mapping/modding) I hope ur n-
23:03 Hanjamon: dem surono
23:03 Surono: !1!!
23:03 Surono: dem
23:04 Hanjamon: kitchen gun
23:04 Hanjamon: xDDD
23:04 Hanjamon: i want to ask you, can you testplay a map?
23:04 Surono: y!
23:04 Surono: gib me
23:04 Hanjamon: xDD
23:05 Hanjamon: here
23:05 *Hanjamon is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/959168 u's - LOVELESS WORLD]
23:05 Surono: wut hepun with SR??!??!
23:05 Surono: moe with harsh takos?!?!??! dem `L_`
23:06 Hanjamon: hahahaha
23:06 Hanjamon: it's broken
23:06 Hanjamon: xD well, it's not too hard
23:09 Surono: noice DLing and failed. dem intreeNUt
23:10 Hanjamon: bad internet there?
23:11 Surono: nope. it just me is dem
23:11 Surono: in here is fine, but surdem isnt fine :U rip me, Intrehnut h8 me `L-
23:12 Hanjamon: but well, i don't have internet, i'm just stealing neighbour internet (?
23:12 Surono: xd
23:17 Hanjamon: dem, stills bad internet?
23:18 Surono: fine... I use IE for DLing this, sry :U
23:18 Surono: fine speed, but bad transferr data.. rip
23:19 Hanjamon: rip
23:19 Hanjamon: don't you have another browser?
23:20 Surono: have, mozilla :U but failed DLing happen, so IE
23:21 Hanjamon: rip
23:21 Surono: xd lol
23:21 Hanjamon: you can get an app like flashget for download files, it's good
23:21 Surono: tek ur time sand pie, dont care me ;w; dem dont notice me.
23:21 Surono: wehh!??! I'll try that app :U hmm noice
23:22 Hanjamon: xDDDD
23:22 Surono: ok done.. dem high speed but bad transfer. but Upload speed is superduperfast :U
23:23 *Surono is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/959168 u's - LOVELESS WORLD]
23:23 Hanjamon: xDDDDDD
23:23 Hanjamon: no problem
23:23 Surono: 5.96 sr, I hear that
23:23 Surono: i hear that doganforce drum :U
23:23 Surono: dem.. i mean metal genre
23:23 Hanjamon: yeah
23:23 Surono: dem moe :UUU nice sr. dem metal drum
23:30 Hanjamon: better i talk this xD well, maybe you play less now
23:31 Hanjamon: here*
23:31 Surono: :U but.. I see unnecessary emphasize on coloring pattern, okey
23:31 Surono: okey IRC?
23:31 Surono: so lazy and rip me with post forum
23:31 Hanjamon: oh
23:31 Hanjamon: gmm
23:31 Hanjamon: hmm*
23:31 Hanjamon: let's try, but i don't know if i need to go in a while xD
23:32 Surono: !!1!!., okey idk. I will post this
23:32 Hanjamon: okay xD
23:32 Surono: :U I just confuse with my bad english. okey..
23:32 Hanjamon: and thanks a lot Surono
23:32 Surono: `L-`
23:33 Hanjamon: dem
23:33 Hanjamon: sir
23:33 Surono: dem /close sign
23:34 Hanjamon: xD
23:59 Surono: nice, I click other link on osh website
23:59 Surono: so mod is gone. gluck with your map.
23:59 Hanjamon: :(
00:00 Hanjamon: no problem Surono
00:00 Hanjamon: and thanks
00:00 Surono: :/ so is my bad fate lol, maybe another next time.
00:01 Surono: maybe is karma I spam minor things :U yeah.. lol sry.
00:01 Hanjamon: lol xD
00:03 Surono: okey I mad :U okey irc. blah
00:04 Surono: 00:13:023 - idc this slider or spiner. dem `L_`
00:04 Hanjamon: wait xD
00:04 Surono: 00:43:883 - change color bruh.. dem is differ sound with 2 left finisher.
00:05 Surono: 00:51:622 - and 00:55:062 - wanna kat?? :U
00:05 Hanjamon: i prefer slider instead of spinner
00:05 Surono: 00:58:597 (194,195) - swap color? 194 just kick, 195 is cymbal with snare. so swap >:U
00:06 Hanjamon: 00:43:883 (104) - changed to d, didn't noticed lol
00:06 Surono: yeah i know. I just idontcare that :U thats same. lol slider wuz `L-`
00:06 Hanjamon: 00:54:680 - about this i prefer kdddkdddkdddk, so no change
00:06 Surono: 01:01:367 - this ghost note. no have drum. 01:01:463 - and this dddk 1/6
00:07 Surono: yeah kdddkdddk repeating. I just think is nice to emphasize that faded violin. lol forget
00:07 Hanjamon: 00:58:597 (194,195) - ddk D is better
00:08 Surono: okey. that instrument..
00:08 Surono: 01:09:775 (261,263) - swap? I just feel this weird emphasize..
00:08 Hanjamon: oh
00:08 Hanjamon: that 1/6
00:08 Surono: yeah lol :U
00:09 Hanjamon: changed to dddk 1/6 lol but
00:09 Hanjamon: kk(dddk) like this, i know that k it's a ghost note but fits with the melody
00:09 Surono: but keep to not delete?
00:09 Surono: :U nice ikr ikr.
00:10 Hanjamon: 01:50:189 (261,263) - dkk it's good, it's a bit similar to ddk and want to keep consistency
00:10 Hanjamon: 01:09:775 - *
00:10 Surono: 01:12:737 - swap? kdk?
00:10 Surono: 01:20:094 - kat? thats flow imo... good
00:11 Hanjamon: no change, want to keep consistency
00:11 Hanjamon: hmm
00:11 Surono: 01:21:336 - delete?
00:11 Hanjamon: maybe it sounds good that stream suggestion
00:11 Hanjamon: but
00:11 Hanjamon: i want to keep ''easy''
00:11 Hanjamon: at least that part
00:11 Surono: that easy.. consistent alternating.
00:12 Surono: not like kddkddk things. with differ turnover kat. :U
00:12 Hanjamon: yeah but it will be too suddendly
00:12 Surono: xd
00:12 Hanjamon: 01:21:336 - not accepted, i want to keep that
00:12 Surono: 01:26:781 - kat? for contrast 01:26:877 - here?
00:13 Surono: 01:30:221 - kat?
00:13 Surono: 01:33:087 - weh this I want to say mainly.. why not change to don?
00:13 Hanjamon: kddkddkdddkdk it's good, i like that pattern
00:13 Hanjamon: so no change
00:14 Hanjamon: 01:30:221 - drums
00:14 Surono: :U please.. i not tel about kddkddk
00:14 Hanjamon: 01:33:087 - not d because it flows better
00:14 Surono: yeah yeah keep. I say with that change for ddkkdkkkddk. bcus it consistent alternating with right finger. not like kddkddk.
00:14 Surono: after hit dddk(d)dddk
00:15 Surono: (d)dddk is easy yeah? and 01:33:469 - wanna don? I think better to give emphasize kat just 01:33:565 - this
00:16 Surono: 01:50:380 (262,263) - swap color? 01:50:571 (263,264) - same vocal
00:16 Hanjamon: 01:33:469 - i'll think about it
00:17 Surono: 01:51:240 (266,271) - don for 266 and kat 271?
00:17 Surono: kkkkdddd feels.. forced imo ._.
00:17 Hanjamon: 03:08:915 (263,264) - i prefer to finish with D
00:18 Surono: link..
00:18 Hanjamon: it's not forced
00:18 Hanjamon: 01:50:476 - this part i mean, i prefer to finish with D
00:18 Surono: 02:05:094 - this... delete..
00:19 Surono: on 00:14:839 - , but this not stronk like that
00:19 Hanjamon: but decided 01:51:144 (266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274) - to change
00:20 Hanjamon: so now will be kkkkddkkd
00:20 Surono: 02:16:558 - kat for this cymbal and emphasize vocal?
00:21 Hanjamon: 02:05:094 - i'll think about it
00:21 Hanjamon: 02:16:558 - more priority to drum there, so i'll keep
00:22 Surono: from 4th kiai until 03:41:973 - here, try to make 4plet pattern? I think boring with current 2plet pattern, theres have guitar nice to follow imo
00:23 Surono: 03:43:979 (21,22) - swap and 03:44:743 (31,32) - these? I think is nonsense to emphasized imo
00:23 Hanjamon: 02:52:960 (159) - okay, i'll add 4plet in things like this
00:23 Hanjamon: 03:26:781 -
00:24 Surono: 04:13:692 - don this?
00:24 Surono: maybe just it. wait 03:23:055 - i hitd this when u askd me to test...
00:24 Hanjamon: 03:42:068 - here i'll keep better without 4plet
00:25 Surono: I confuse if u make sv on there... I just guess that 1/4.. but well... dem fingers is 1/6
00:25 Hanjamon: 04:13:692 - kkkkd fits better for me
00:25 Surono: oke.
00:25 Surono: 03:42:068 - yeah lol dont add note at here x
00:26 Surono: 03:23:055 - maybe sv on here and 03:24:011 - back normal to here imo.. please is kill my eyes xd
00:26 Surono: with increasing every notes with green lines..
00:27 Hanjamon: but i think is good :(
00:28 Surono: lol xd
00:29 Surono: okey... just this, :U dont take seriously my word.. but I think I mostly make people to mad/angry, and sorry for nazi things (-/\- )
00:29 Hanjamon: no problem
00:29 Hanjamon: thanks to you for the mod :3
00:29 Hanjamon: some things were good
00:29 Hanjamon: you can post
00:30 Surono: :^U yeah.. you not mad? well I never mad.. but I think I will laugh if people seriously problem with me
00:30 Hanjamon: nah
00:30 Surono: okay I posting this dem mod :U minor things is dem. btw dddk(k)dddk, you agree to (d)dddk?
00:30 Hanjamon: i'm fine xD
00:30 Surono: demm u handjamoon :U okey /savelog


really nothing. dont take seriously.. ppl... dem..


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00:13:023 (1) - How about extend the slider length to 00:14:074 - here? The sound didn't stop here.
00:19:425 (9,10,11) - kkd? To follow the pitch of the vocal.
00:21:909 (17) - k here, the pitch is higher than previous note.
00:24:202 (25) - k, the pitch is same as previous note.
00:36:909 - => 00:37:195 - I'd prefer to add all 1/4 note at this part too not only because the drum 1/4 sound isn't stop but I think it makes more fun too.
00:59:552 (199) - How about change this note to big k to make it symmetry to 00:58:788 (195) - this note?
01:17:227 (14) - I think you should delete this note to make a break because the 1/2 part stream is too long.
01:32:036 (123) - k here to follow 2-4 clap?
01:33:469 (134) - ^
02:16:558 (405) - k to follow pitch.
02:18:087 (409) - ^
02:25:730 (443) - ^
02:33:660 (2,3,4,5) - The rhythm sounds weird here in my opinion, so how about 02:33:947 - add a note at here?
02:40:730 (63,64) - Swap these to follow 2-4 clap?
03:52:100 (3,4) - Swap these for vocal pitch.

Although I found that last part is overmapped, but I think I know what you're thinking. So I just wanna mention it. :P


Generally it's not a bad map. :)
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00:13:023 (1) - How about extend the slider length to 00:14:074 - here? The sound didn't stop here. done
00:19:425 (9,10,11) - kkd? To follow the pitch of the vocal. done
00:21:909 (17) - k here, the pitch is higher than previous note. done
00:24:202 (25) - k, the pitch is same as previous note. done
00:36:909 - => 00:37:195 - I'd prefer to add all 1/4 note at this part too not only because the drum 1/4 sound isn't stop but I think it makes more fun too. done, i'll do this to kiai and other similar patterns
00:59:552 (199) - How about change this note to big k to make it symmetry to 00:58:788 (195) - this note? not a bad idea, done
01:17:227 (14) - I think you should delete this note to make a break because the 1/2 part stream is too long. i'll think about it, i think it's not too hard and due to this bpm the players will not get too tired
01:32:036 (123) - k here to follow 2-4 clap? i like better ddkkddd, no change here for now
01:33:469 (134) - ^ before it was (ddd)kk(ddd)kkk, but changed to (ddd)kk(ddd)kdk, it plays better imo
02:16:558 (405) - k to follow pitch. done here
02:18:087 (409) - ^ uhm, done, fits good with vocals
02:25:730 (443) - ^ done
02:33:660 (2,3,4,5) - The rhythm sounds weird here in my opinion, so how about 02:33:947 - add a note at here? added a k
02:40:730 (63,64) - Swap these to follow 2-4 clap? will break a bit the consistency with the first kiai and and sounds better for me kdkkddkkd
03:52:100 (3,4) - Swap these for vocal pitch. changed 03:51:718 (2) - to k instead

Although I found that last part is overmapped, but I think I know what you're thinking. So I just wanna mention it. :P I think it's not too overmapped, i can hear a lot of stream drums xD


Generally it's not a bad map. :)
Good luck!


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no much to say about SV or long streams, i think theyr pretty good
smart re-use of same structures so yeah..


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* - 00:13:119 - slider should probably start here, i know there is a weak sound where you started it but the main one is here, also it feels awkward to start on an odd line.
* - 00:15:030 -/- 00:16:558 - i suggest you to add notes like k at those spots, you are following the vocal for that intro but here you are ignoring so much while at - 00:17:323 - you suddenly follow every vocal sound. Feels kinda weird.
* - 00:38:724 - to - 00:39:680 - what about a spinner instead ? to properly cover the vocal.
* - 00:58:788 (196) -/- 00:59:552 (200) - sounds too overdone imo, they hardly deserve finishers, also that specific part plays kinda weird. Soo that might looks like being too much at first but what about something like this for - 00:58:023 - to - 01:00:125 - :
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there isn't any big notes, but it plays pretty good for that part imo, please try it.
* - 01:09:775 (265) - move to - 01:09:584 - as d or k ? fits much more the vocal imo; dkk here plays kinda awkward as it doesn't particularily fit either drums sound or the vocal. - 01:12:832 (286) - same here.
* - 01:49:138 (250,251) -/- 01:49:520 (254,255) - maybe swap colors, kinda same structure but then you dont have 3 ddk in a row for - 01:48:278 (243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251) - lol.
* - 02:13:501 (380) - hu why not using kddkddkdkddkddk here like you did for similar part before ?
* - 03:16:941 (319,320,321,322,323) - you got some interesting 1/3 spot here from the little melody in the background. d k d (1/3) then ddk (1/4) seems to fit best, and i think so it plays pretty cool and add some more challenge, think about it ?
* - 03:21:527 (350,351,352,1,2) - sounds more like d kd dk D here, following what you've done for most of this part.
* - 03:35:571 (92,93) - i would remove those 2 and possibly add k at - 03:35:858 - to represent more that guitar melody.
* - 04:54:297 (379) -/- 04:55:826 (395) -/- 04:57:355 (411) - what about k at those spots ? sounds ok i think.
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no much to say about SV or long streams, i think theyr pretty good
smart re-use of same structures so yeah..


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* - 00:13:119 - slider should probably start here, i know there is a weak sound where you started it but the main one is here, also it feels awkward to start on an odd line. i think it's fine >< if more people suggest this i'll change
* - 00:15:030 -/- 00:16:558 - i suggest you to add notes like k at those spots, you are following the vocal for that intro but here you are ignoring so much while at - 00:17:323 - you suddenly follow every vocal sound. Feels kinda weird. done
* - 00:38:724 - to - 00:39:680 - what about a spinner instead ? to properly cover the vocal. it will be a bit weird for me as the long vocal finish at 00:41:590 -
* - 00:58:788 (196) -/- 00:59:552 (200) - sounds too overdone imo, they hardly deserve finishers, also that specific part plays kinda weird. Soo that might looks like being too much at first but what about something like this for - 00:58:023 - to - 01:00:125 - :
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there isn't any big notes, but it plays pretty good for that part imo, please try it. i tried, and not sounds bad at all, but i want to follow the melody there, i like mine better ><
* - 01:09:775 (265) - move to - 01:09:584 - as d or k ? fits much more the vocal imo; dkk here plays kinda awkward as it doesn't particularily fit either drums sound or the vocal. - 01:12:832 (286) - same here. i want to keep consistency with 01:03:183 (221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - :(
* - 01:49:138 (250,251) -/- 01:49:520 (254,255) - maybe swap colors, kinda same structure but then you dont have 3 ddk in a row for - 01:48:278 (243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251) - lol. i know there are 3 ddk in a row but they fit good imo, keep for now ><
* - 02:13:501 (380) - hu why not using kddkddkdkddkddk here like you did for similar part before ? oh my, didn't noticed that xD but as kddkddkdkddkdd will be a bit tricky i'll change to kddkddkdkkdkkdk
* - 03:16:941 (319,320,321,322,323) - you got some interesting 1/3 spot here from the little melody in the background. d k d (1/3) then ddk (1/4) seems to fit best, and i think so it plays pretty cool and add some more challenge, think about it ? nice idea, applied but i made the 1/3 d k k, so the 1/4 ddk is easier to hit
* - 03:21:527 (350,351,352,1,2) - sounds more like d kd dk D here, following what you've done for most of this part. did dk kd k D instead
* - 03:35:571 (92,93) - i would remove those 2 and possibly add k at - 03:35:858 - to represent more that guitar melody. removed and added a kkD 1/3 in 03:35:794 -
* - 04:54:297 (379) -/- 04:55:826 (395) -/- 04:57:355 (411) - what about k at those spots ? sounds ok i think. sounds good, but i want to keep this last part less tricky, sorry
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Hi, here is the M4M as requested.


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  • Artist: μ's
  • Romanised Artist: u's
  • Source: ラブライブ! School idol project (omit the space between "ラブライブ" and "!")
  • Tags: change "Takao" to "Takaou"; capitalize "love live!"
  • Concerning the timing points, the SV increases are rather high for the kiais. Why not use 0.8x or 0.9x for calmer parts (1.0x for verses) and 1.1x for the kiais ? And 1.15x would be enough for the last ones.
  • How about lowering the hitsound volume by about 30% in calmer parts as well ? Currently it is too loud imo.


Try to find a few more mods to further improve the map, then you may call me back~ :D
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Best diffname ever

Also, gezo, your avatar is kawaii af
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