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xi - Breakthrough Atmosphere [Taiko]

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Nishizumi
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Nishizumi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, January 03, 2017 at 2:07:22 PM

Artist: xi
Title: Breakthrough Atmosphere
Tags: parousia tasuke912 Nardoxyribonucleic
BPM: 158
Filesize: 6088kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Inner Oni (5.98 stars, 1392 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.53 stars, 322 notes)
  3. Nardo's Futsuu (2.24 stars, 481 notes)
  4. Oni (3.97 stars, 1002 notes)
  5. tasuke's Muzukashii (3.36 stars, 694 notes)
  6. tasuke's Ura Oni (5.18 stars, 1221 notes)
Download: xi - Breakthrough Atmosphere
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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see osu!std version here ! (mp3 stolen from here too)

tasuke's Muzukashii and tasuke's Ura Oni by tasuke912
Nardo's Futsuu by Nardoxyribonucleic

Thanks a lot
  1. ZTH (mod + star)
  2. Nyan (mod)
  3. Surono (mod)
  4. xtrem3x (mod)
  5. _kumakichi (2 stars)
  6. FlamingRok (mod)
  7. chaica (mod)
  8. Invective (mod + star)
  9. Ceryuia (mod)
  10. guro (star)
  11. Volta (mod + )
  12. Annadine (star)
  13. newyams99 (mod + )
Last edited by Nishizumi , edited 38 times in total.
Surono
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Joined November 2013
Surono

kutukan dia pun mgenhantuimu~~~~


ccd, Oni (H), Inner (I)... mindblow

you irl
tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
tasuke912
sorry for taking a long time. Inner Oni has finally done. :)

Edit: Muzukashii done

http://puu.sh/pGF5c/5d2d04f24b.zip
Nishizumi
1,092 posts
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Topic Starter
Nishizumi
will revive it later, if i want to rank this :/
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic
Here is the Futsuu diff as requested. (no kd)

https://puu.sh/qxzCf.rar

Please add my name to tags, thank you :3
Nishizumi
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Nishizumi
updated, thanks nardo :)
ZTH
254 posts
Joined November 2014
ZTH
Hi~ From M4M request.

General

  1. Isn't Ura Oni usually harder than Inner oni? If you browse through the ranked maps, Ura oni is almost always the top.

Inner Oni

  1. 00:46:390 (125,126,127,128) - Instead of kkdk, I would go for kdkd. The third kat emphasizes the instrument and the fourth don sounds the same as the proceeding notes.
  2. 00:57:529 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - Not a fan of these patterns. kkkkd seems forced and 00:57:782 (77) would serve much better as k due to its loud pitch. Would change to kkddk ddk or kkd kkddk.
  3. 01:33:858 (312) - Change to k (and change 01:34:111 (314) to d for smoother transition to ddddddk). Being consistent with 01:30:820 (295).
  4. 01:59:808 (71) - Change to d. k is intrusive.
  5. 02:48:099 (440,441) -dkddk sounds a bit awkward. Ctrl+g to keep the consistent 1/3 rhythm.
  6. 02:53:099 (481) - Minor but change to k? Has the same rhythm as 02:52:719 (478,479), which is more pleasing for my ears.
  7. 02:54:871 (496,497) - I would delete 02:54:997 (497) and make 02:54:871 (496) a finisher. Has more impact towards the song and the change in kiai.
  8. 03:31:010 (769) - Would change this to d (or ctrl+g with 03:30:947 (768,769)) for smoother flow.
  9. 03:33:858 (788) - Same reason as 01:33:858 (312).
  10. 03:43:162 (870) - Same reason as 03:31:010 (769).

tasuke's Ura Oni

  1. 00:50:061 (30,31) - Maybe change both of them to d? 5 kats are a bit too strong for the song. (Also you have a nice kkk ddd triples)
  2. 00:57:529 (24) - Change to k. Makes the next use of k less random and forced.
  3. 01:33:858 (35) - Change to k. Carries the previous rhythm and sounds better.

Oni

  1. 00:58:035 - Would add k here. If you intentionally added a break, then it doesn't really work well as you neglected a prominent sound.
  2. 01:33:858 - Same reason as Inner Oni.
  3. 02:36:770 - Don't see any purpose of this break as it loses the overall 1/3 rhythm on the kiai. It is still an oni so there is no real reason to add a break here.
  4. 02:39:808 - Same as above.
  5. 02:52:086 to 02:53:858 -This part sounds a bit iffy in terms of flow. Nothing technically wrong, but I favour modifying some of the patterns so that it goes like this: (white bar at 02:52:846) http://puu.sh/qAgvJ/ba2d0b4778.jpg

tasuke's Muzukashii

  1. 02:47:782 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - These triplets sound really awkward as they break the overall rhythm. I would do something similar like the image below: (White bar at 02:47:403)

Nardo's Futsuu

  1. Can't find any issues.

Kantan

  1. 02:12:592 (39), 02:14:871 (43) - You seem to put d on thumps so apply these notes as well?
  2. 02:42:592 (7) - Maybe change to k. d is a bit bland for my tastes.
  3. 03:43:352 (92,93) - Instead of dK, try kD. High pitch at 03:43:352 (92), which serves better as k. The next finisher, being a don and an opposite colour, gives more of a smooth impact.

Really solid map. Hope you can rank this as taiko needs more long, full set maps.

GL~
Nishizumi
1,092 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

ZTH wrote:

Hi~ From M4M request.

General

  1. Isn't Ura Oni usually harder than Inner oni? If you browse through the ranked maps, Ura oni is almost always the top.
probably will change tasuke's ura to inner (?). i'll ask him later

Inner Oni

  1. 00:46:390 (125,126,127,128) - Instead of kkdk, I would go for kdkd. The third kat emphasizes the instrument and the fourth don sounds the same as the proceeding notes. high pitch of the instrument is actually on red tick (00:46:580 -) so, i'll change to kkkd instead of kkdk or kdkd to accompany high pitch on red tick by 00:46:516 (126,127)
  2. 00:57:529 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81) - Not a fan of these patterns. kkkkd seems forced and 00:57:782 (77) would serve much better as k due to its loud pitch. Would change to kkddk ddk or kkd kkddk. the loud is emphasizing for low pitch, since 00:57:782 - pitch continue to 00:57:909
  3. 01:33:858 (312) - Change to k (and change 01:34:111 (314) to d for smoother transition to ddddddk). Being consistent with 01:30:820 (295). changed only 01:33:858 - to k. as you said, being consistent (d k k k d) sounds better than d k k d d
  4. 01:59:808 (71) - Change to d. k is intrusive. 01:58:289 - change to d here instead
  5. 02:48:099 (440,441) -dkddk sounds a bit awkward. Ctrl+g to keep the consistent 1/3 rhythm. ups my mistakes, i intended to make ddddk quintuplet
  6. 02:53:099 (481) - Minor but change to k? Has the same rhythm as 02:52:719 (478,479), which is more pleasing for my ears. no, since it does contrast with the next stream. also, this pitch is similar as (480)
  7. 02:54:871 (496,497) - I would delete 02:54:997 (497) and make 02:54:871 (496) a finisher. Has more impact towards the song and the change in kiai. nice catch
  8. 03:31:010 (769) - Would change this to d (or ctrl+g with 03:30:947 (768,769)) for smoother flow. i want to make slightly hard in the climax of this map, this flows well too for me
  9. 03:33:858 (788) - Same reason as 01:33:858 (312). same too
  10. 03:43:162 (870) - Same reason as 03:31:010 (769). same

Oni

  1. 00:58:035 - Would add k here. If you intentionally added a break, then it doesn't really work well as you neglected a prominent sound. i know, i'm confused on this lol. changed for now, see what modders says later
  2. 01:33:858 - Same reason as Inner Oni. same
  3. 02:36:770 - Don't see any purpose of this break as it loses the overall 1/3 rhythm on the kiai. It is still an oni so there is no real reason to add a break here. yea, i think twice for deleting this too. added btw
  4. 02:39:808 - Same as above. yea
  5. 02:52:086 to 02:53:858 -This part sounds a bit iffy in terms of flow. Nothing technically wrong, but I favour modifying some of the patterns so that it goes like this: (white bar at 02:52:846) http://puu.sh/qAgvJ/ba2d0b4778.jpg umm nope, somehow it doesn't fit with my ears x_x

Kantan

  1. 02:12:592 (39), 02:14:871 (43) - You seem to put d on thumps so apply these notes as well? i'm actually following the instrument, but this seems ok
  2. 02:42:592 (7) - Maybe change to k. d is a bit bland for my tastes. nice
  3. 03:43:352 (92,93) - Instead of dK, try kD. High pitch at 03:43:352 (92), which serves better as k. The next finisher, being a don and an opposite colour, gives more of a smooth impact. i don't think so. 03:43:732 - with big kat looks better since it's peak of this pitch. similar as 01:40:694 - and other my diffs

Really solid map. Hope you can rank this as taiko needs more long, full set maps.

GL~
thanks for the mod and star zth :) i'll mod yours later
Nyan
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Nyan
[Kantan]

02:04:997 (29) - add Finish
02:14:871 (43) - don

[Futsuu]

01:18:858 (132) - delete
01:24:934 (146) - delete
02:18:668 (258,259,260) - 1/2 k__k__d
02:21:706 (266,267,268) - 1/2 k__k__k
03:03:479 (372,373,374,375,376) - k k d k d
03:21:896 (421) - delete
03:27:972 (435) - delete

[Muzukashii]

01:25:377 - add a don
02:03:478 (44,45,46,47,48,49) - 1/3 dd_d__k_kk
03:28:415 - add a don
03:43:732 (1) - add Finish

[Oni]

SliderMultiplier:1.4599999666214 Fix it on osu file

00:40:441 - add a don
Nishizumi
1,092 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]

02:04:997 (29) - add Finish i want to minimize in using finisher to low diff
02:14:871 (43) - don it doesn't follows either drum or instrument for me

[Oni]

SliderMultiplier:1.4599999666214 Fix it on osu file fixed

00:40:441 - add a don nope, to differentiate with my inner
thanks for the mod nyan :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic

Nyan wrote:

[Futsuu]

01:18:858 (132) - delete Retained to conjugate 01:18:289 (130,131) -
01:24:934 (146) - delete ^
02:18:668 (258,259,260) - 1/2 k__k__d Hmm, it would be a bit monotonous imo.
02:21:706 (266,267,268) - 1/2 k__k__k ^
03:03:479 (372,373,374,375,376) - k k d k d d k d k k could accompany the progressively increasing pitch nicely.
03:21:896 (421) - delete same as 01:18:858 (132) -
03:27:972 (435) - delete ^
Thanks for your mod though~ :)
tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
tasuke912

ZTH wrote:

SPOILER
tasuke's Ura Oni

  1. 00:50:061 (30,31) - Maybe change both of them to d? 5 kats are a bit too strong for the song. (Also you have a nice kkk ddd triples) I feel dkkkkkd also fits to the song as well
  2. 00:57:529 (24) - Change to k. Makes the next use of k less random and forced. I prefer simple here. Not bad idea though.
  3. 01:33:858 (35) - Change to k. Carries the previous rhythm and sounds better.

tasuke's Muzukashii

  1. 02:47:782 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - These triplets sound really awkward as they break the overall rhythm. I would do something similar like the image below: (White bar at 02:47:403) I thought reverse pattern helps players. Gonna consider about color (and placement).

Nyan wrote:

SPOILER
[Muzukashii]

01:25:377 - add a don
02:03:478 (44,45,46,47,48,49) - 1/3 dd_d__k_kk
03:28:415 - add a don
03:43:732 (1) - add Finish All applied.
Thanks for mods. :D
http://puu.sh/qI5La/d51d3d7f8a.zip

About difficulty name, "Ura Oni" means "Inner Oni". it doesn't matter
Nishizumi
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Nishizumi
updated
Surono
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Surono

Surono wrote:


kutukan dia pun mgenhantuimu~~~~


ccd, Oni (H), Inner (I)... mindblow

you irl
weh memes lama (kWOKWOKWOKW pemakan telur kecoa. kekek baper di hek anonimuszz prooh kwkw), njirlah ngemod 2 diff luw ngabisin wktu V: mending maen gem macem pebe cyna server turki wkwkkw

modded in-game, Oni & Inner diff. good shit and Oni is pain~
01:14 Nishizumi: cieg gw dc -_-
01:14 Nishizumi: pantesan
01:14 Surono: wkoKWOKWOkw
01:14 Nishizumi: lu punya map gw yg ini ga sur
01:14 *Nishizumi is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948501 xi - Breakthrough Atmosphere]
01:14 Nishizumi: mo tesple v:
01:14 Surono: bajir
01:14 Surono: V: GD antek2 cynah coeg
01:14 Surono: kwwkowkokwokwo
01:15 Nishizumi: sekalian mod in dong :V
01:15 Nishizumi: iya donk
01:15 Surono: VVVVVVVVVVVvvvv:
01:15 Nishizumi: 2 bn gd gw :V
01:15 Surono: VVVVVVVVV:
01:15 Surono: trus yg ngerenk siapa kWKWKw
01:15 Surono: woh iyo, mereka kan BN yg susah buat dimintain renk
01:15 Surono: VVVVVV: ya udah beruntung dpt BN GD, ez rank
01:15 Nishizumi: volta ada, juda ada, yimyams ada
01:16 Surono: V: coba minta GD ke Bn2 yg aktif. kelar idup luw
01:16 Nishizumi: dan liat aja itu yg fav map gw siapa :V
01:16 Surono: V: mampus weff
01:16 Surono: antek jermen gukguk KWKWKW
01:16 Nishizumi: minta ke dia bisa :V
01:16 Surono: VVVVVVVVVVVVVV: vr0o0hhhhhhh
01:16 Surono: the anteks
01:16 Surono: SoonTe eM 2069
01:16 Nishizumi: soon tm
01:16 Nishizumi: :V
01:16 Surono: dari lagu lama V: lu map
01:17 Surono: ngeri cieg kwkwkw.
01:17 Nishizumi: sekali2 map long map
01:17 Nishizumi: :V
01:17 Surono: KWOWKOWKow
01:17 Nishizumi: daripada tipi sais sama maraton mulu
01:17 Surono: V: kwkwkwkwkw
01:17 Surono: biar kekinian, mapper yg enercieg kwkw
01:18 Nishizumi: ye lah
01:18 Surono: bazirrrrrr
01:19 Nishizumi: jangan hd cieg
01:19 Surono: ni tempo lagunya KWKWKW
01:19 Surono: lupa copot
01:19 Nishizumi: mata lu siwer liatnya
01:19 Nishizumi: :V
01:19 Surono: emang VVVVVV;
01:19 Surono: polanya gini juga, mata gwwwww
01:19 Surono: snap edan
01:20 Nishizumi: iyalah
01:20 Nishizumi: 1/3
01:20 Nishizumi: biar kek kunlaw
01:20 Nishizumi: saingan iron man within temptation
01:20 Surono: WWOWKOWKW
01:20 Surono: iya
01:20 Surono: ini perasaaan mirip tu map elitid
01:20 Surono: anjerlah VVVVvv: suruh kunlaw tes
01:20 Nishizumi: BEDA ANJEG
01:20 Surono: ntar dia inget
01:20 Surono: duntek tekdun
01:20 Nishizumi: GW LEBIH BERKUALITID
01:20 Nishizumi: ntar gw malah dibuli :V
01:20 Surono: duntek tekdun. ya itu bedanya
01:20 Surono: tapi lagunya coeg VVVVVVVv:
01:21 Surono: temponya mirip, makanya minta dia ntar biar dibulyy. ado bacoeds qualitid KWKW
01:21 Nishizumi: because 1/3 snap vrohhhh
01:21 Surono: kWKWOkw
01:21 Surono: GG ini di renk V:
01:21 Surono: bpm segini, snap dasar semua 1/3 KWkwokw
01:22 Nishizumi: cced
01:22 Nishizumi: malah kena dq permanen kalo dia sampe tau
01:22 Nishizumi: harus di rank lah :V
01:22 Surono: wanjerrrrrrrrrr
01:23 Surono: gile bener V:
01:23 Nishizumi: kan masi ada tasuke version
01:23 Surono: vro0o0ohhhhh
01:25 Nishizumi: mod sur mod
01:25 Nishizumi: :V
01:25 Surono: bajir
01:25 Surono: KWKWKWkw, map edan tenan
01:25 Nishizumi: mantap sur
01:25 Surono: V: harusnya banyakin pola pepes
01:25 Nishizumi: :V
01:25 Surono: biar sr  VVVVvvvvv:
01:25 Nishizumi: pepes nih
01:25 Nishizumi: ini udah pepes
01:25 Surono: x.u sodara kWKWK V:
01:25 Nishizumi: tadi awal pembuatan 5.92
01:25 Surono: VVVVVVVVVVVV:
01:25 Nishizumi: sekarang jadi 6.02
01:25 Surono: coeg nambah 0.10 doang
01:25 Surono: 0.50 baru gg :V kwkww
01:26 Nishizumi: lumayan cieg
01:26 Surono: :V kwkwkw
01:26 Surono: nyentuh angka 6 yha
01:26 Nishizumi: ntar dikira overmapped segitu mah
01:26 Nishizumi: gblk
01:26 Surono: V: KWOWKOWKwo overmepped, bpm 150an. 
01:26 Surono: snap 1/3 juga ga rame banget. yha overmep wkkw
01:30 Nishizumi: itu rame cieg, mau serame apa lagi gblg
01:30 Nishizumi: kunlew aja starnya 5an :V
01:30 Nishizumi: tapi kunlew kampret, dari stars 5 an kalo di dt jadi 7.50an
01:30 Nishizumi: gw juga kalo di dt ini jadi 7.50an
01:30 Surono: wew
01:30 Nishizumi: napa
01:30 Surono: ya wew V:
01:30 Surono: kunlaw kan 5.4an
01:30 Surono: di DT gara2 pola ngawurnya itu yg kampret kwkw
01:31 Nishizumi: nah itu
01:31 Surono: makanya nyentuh 7.5an kwwkkw
01:31 Nishizumi: di dt jadi 7.50an
01:31 Surono: kwkwkkw
01:31 Nishizumi: gw dari 6.02 jadi 7.50an juga
01:31 Surono: V:
01:31 Nishizumi: edan beda tipis :(
01:31 Surono: kurang mengiqhe kwkw
01:31 Surono: sungguh tydac veri nais
01:31 Surono: ikut2an kek kunlaw aja
01:31 Surono: pola2nya lu awur V: spa tau nyentuh 8 kwkw
01:31 Nishizumi: buset
01:32 Nishizumi: merusak estetika
01:32 Nishizumi: :V
01:32 Surono: wkwkwkwkw
01:32 Nishizumi: mod sur
01:32 Surono: ya
01:32 Nishizumi: buru :V
01:32 Nishizumi: btw
01:32 Nishizumi: fort hiatus ya ?
01:33 *Surono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/952389 xi - Breakthrough Atmosphere [Oni]]
01:33 Surono: ga tau, grup IMTnya berantakan
01:33 Surono: suatu saat paling on lagi wkwkkw
01:34 Surono: 00:49:111 - ini delete, 00:49:301 (137,138) - trus swap.
01:34 Surono: serah lah.
01:35 Nishizumi: gw cuma mau minta nasib meriank gw gimana nantinya :(
01:35 Surono: cieg.
01:35 Surono: std gimana kabarnya tu map.
01:35 Surono: V: kalau renk, rame dah yg maenin
01:35 Surono: lagu meriang terkenals V: NC vr0o0hhhhh
01:35 Nishizumi: ga gw delete sur
01:35 Surono: oke
01:36 Nishizumi: ngikutin suara kasar ngeung apa lah itu
01:36 Surono: slanjutnya juga ngeung nguing
01:36 Nishizumi: yg itu juga ga di swap, don akhir ngikutin suara dum
01:36 Surono: cieg cieg, gw cuma ngeliatin spread diff2nya V: makanya gw suruh dlt kwkwk.
01:36 Surono: oke.
01:36 Nishizumi: ngiungnya juga gw lanjutin di 00:49:808 - :V
01:37 Surono: V:
01:38 Surono: 01:40:124 - e
01:38 Surono: 01:39:744 - seenggaknya ini ga usah, cuma yg dikanan delete bagi gw. biar neken si beatnya.
01:38 Surono: bukan srett wus was wezzzzzzzz swusssss
01:39 Nishizumi: sebenernya sih masih nyambung sama ngeung whus wushhnya, ini gw bikin susah doang disini
01:40 Nishizumi: spread oni gw pembandingnya ke inner mulu :c
01:40 Surono: 03:55:630 - kosong
01:40 Surono: eh ntar
01:41 Nishizumi: ya iya kosong sur
01:41 Surono: 03:55:251 - 01:52:213 - beda, padahal suara sama. di Inner 01:52:592 - ini ada tapi pas akhir ga ada.
01:42 Surono: disamain aja.
01:43 Nishizumi: hmm sebenernya di akhir gw ga bikin panjang gitu
01:43 Nishizumi: karena part akhir biar lebih mudah
01:43 Nishizumi: gw pertimbangin lagi deh :/
01:43 Surono: oke, say it playable.
01:43 Nishizumi: yea
01:44 Surono: up to u, boss. its ur map ur dedication
01:44 Surono: 02:42:276 - bener ni ga mau delete?
01:44 Nishizumi: yeeeeee
01:44 Surono: cuma beda warna di high diffnya.
01:45 Surono: 02:42:592 - ini 3 karna comparenya si longstream, 02:42:276 - yang ini mah delete aja. di high diff uda 3 masa oni juga
01:45 Nishizumi: bener
01:45 Surono: *longstream high diff
01:45 Nishizumi: sebenernya sih itu buat variasi aja
01:45 Surono: V: nyakitin player oni luw
01:45 Surono: VV: vro0ohhhh di DT
01:46 Nishizumi: soalnya di 02:41:327 - ada 1 triplet
01:46 Surono: variasi itu warna, kalau notes mah additional
01:46 Nishizumi: dan selanjutnya mau gw bikin 2 triplet
01:46 Nishizumi: :V
01:46 Surono: V:
01:46 Surono: mengedan
01:46 Nishizumi: kalo dua2nya 1 triplet, looks boring
01:46 Nishizumi: :V
01:46 Surono: VV:
01:46 Nishizumi: biar mampus tu jari
01:46 Surono: VVVVVVVVVVVVVVV: kan
01:46 Surono: cacadas
01:47 Nishizumi: owowkowkowk
01:47 Surono: 03:03:985 -  :'D
01:47 Surono: cacadas, yg kosong cuma sini
01:47 Surono: gap muzu sama high diffnya omg
01:47 Surono: masih deket high, delete 1 lagi aja. di setiap long 1/2 patternnya.
01:47 Nishizumi: hmm
01:48 Nishizumi: mungkin karena perbedaan style kali ya
01:48 Nishizumi: dia soalnya lebih ngikutin drum dum dum taknya
01:48 Nishizumi: dibanding gw yg ngiktin instrumennya
01:48 Surono: 03:07:086 - mending geser kiri biar jadi ddddk, gabung si 3plet sebelumnya
01:48 Surono: jarang liat 5plet di ni diff.
01:49 Surono: 03:06:643 - dari sini kan ngakal stream beatnya sama 03:07:023 - singlebeatnya.
01:49 Nishizumi: nah itu
01:49 Surono: wew
01:49 Surono: VVVVVV:
01:49 Nishizumi: mungkin gw jadiin ddddk ddd K aja kali ya
01:49 Surono: mantab VVVVvvvvv:
01:50 Surono: tambahin susah, silakan V:
01:50 Nishizumi: :V
01:50 Surono: ntar bn dateng ya cuma ia iain aja
01:50 Nishizumi: rusak ni SR owkowkow
01:50 Nishizumi: berhubung yg lu saranin di kiai
01:50 Surono: V:
01:50 Nishizumi: ok gw jadiin ddddk d d K
01:50 Surono: kiyai
01:50 Surono: tambah ddd lagi biar jadi inner V:
01:51 Surono: anjirlah Vvvvvv: memes map
01:51 Surono: gegara snap 1/3
01:51 Nishizumi: ga lah gblg
01:51 Nishizumi: memes map
01:51 Nishizumi: emang aniki :V
01:51 Surono: V:
01:51 Surono: aniki dong
01:51 Surono: ngikut suara ih ah ih ah
01:51 Surono: kan memes, dari pada map qualitid.. yg penting, hepi~~
01:52 Surono: *djaroem cokelat
01:52 Surono: 03:18:985 - jgn loepa.
01:52 Nishizumi: triplet banyak gitu apanya ngikutn ah ih
01:52 Surono: lagu aslinya
01:52 Nishizumi: sip
01:53 Surono: V: coeg, gw dulu ngemapnya pake hedset. skarang ga ada VVVVVv:
01:53 Surono: dengerin dung yg versi instrumental V: kan dibilangin lagu aniki memes. dah kecampur suara abang abang kwkw
01:53 Surono: makanya orang ngatain map pepe. bkan map bagus :'V cacadas dah.. si Tasha malah ngomongin PPnya.....
01:54 Nishizumi: ganti modem cieg :V
01:54 Nishizumi: mampus
01:55 Nishizumi: mas stepan doang yg ngomongin memes
01:55 Surono: V: kWKWKw
01:55 Nishizumi: ga ada yg ngomongin map bags
01:55 Surono: wkwowkwokwokw
01:55 Nishizumi: bagus
01:55 Nishizumi: :V
01:55 Surono: stepany
01:55 Surono: tambah y, udah jadi hode
01:55 Surono: *cewek
01:55 Nishizumi: stepan
01:55 Nishizumi: looks cool
01:55 Nishizumi: stepany
01:55 Nishizumi: auto sagne
01:56 Surono: V: WKWKWKW gublug
01:56 Surono: autos sagne wkwkkw
01:56 *Surono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948501 xi - Breakthrough Atmosphere [Inner Oni]]
01:56 Surono: nengok inner2 doeloe.
01:56 Nishizumi: :V
01:56 Nishizumi: ok
01:57 Surono: 03:30:694 - k ddkdddkkd dong :^)
01:57 Surono: :^^^^^^^^^^^^^^) polanya kunglaw
01:57 Surono: :^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^)
01:57 Surono: 03:30:061 (755,764,771) - biar neken nada pianonya.
01:57 Surono: 03:30:947 - ini kat buat beatnya ini. kan lebih clear kalau ddkdddkkd
01:57 Nishizumi: 00:30:694 - ga bisa gw jadiin k
01:58 Surono: V:V:
01:58 Nishizumi: soalnya 763 sama 764 itu nyambung, sama
01:58 Surono: kok itu anjer
01:58 Surono: 00:30:694 -  V:
01:58 Nishizumi: ddkddddkkd pola dasar banget anjeg
01:58 Nishizumi: sr gw nurun
01:58 Surono: V: okelah
01:58 Nishizumi: + keknya ga nyambung itu
01:58 Surono: ga nyambungnya gimana
01:59 Nishizumi: kalo di bagian itu prefer vocalnya sih
01:59 Surono: gagal paham gw V: apa lagi yg lu link itu
01:59 Surono: woh iya ada vocal
01:59 Nishizumi: style gw agak aneh sih `-` kalo ada musik baru gw nyambungin ke situ
01:59 Surono: 03:30:061 - ini juga ngikut vocal.
01:59 Nishizumi: seenaknya gw aja soalnya wokwokw
01:59 Nishizumi: ya
01:59 Nishizumi: itu vocal juga
01:59 Surono: ho oh ya teserah luw V:
01:59 Nishizumi: :V
01:59 Surono: Vvvv: vocalnya juga bkan nyanyi
02:00 Surono: malah kek efek. masih dapat ditrima dengan normal
02:00 Surono: kalau macem vocal mapper lagu kawaee mah gw ga demen modding
02:00 Surono: kalah pengalaman kwkwkw, macem nardo
02:00 Nishizumi: wokwokw
02:00 Nishizumi: geli gw kalo vocal moe moe kawae
02:00 Surono: dah gw save
02:00 Nishizumi: macem rayden jadinya gw
02:00 Nishizumi: `-`
02:00 Surono: :^^^^^^^^^) mampus, lu antek2 si rayden
02:00 Surono: ````````-``````` yah low
02:00 Nishizumi: :V
02:01 Surono: gw sih biasa2 aja V: tapi kadang geli
02:01 Nishizumi: btw
02:01 Surono: kalau emang moe banget kwkwk V:
02:01 Nishizumi: 2 diff doang ? :(
02:01 Nishizumi: iye
02:01 Nishizumi: jijik
02:01 Nishizumi: apalagi kalo yg di moe moe in
02:01 Surono: V: gw bkan modder lagi coeg yg harus ngemod map orang. ini aja ngemod karna gw tes dan otje otje woke V:
02:01 Surono: VV: map mengiqhe
02:01 Nishizumi: :V
02:01 Surono: diff laen cacadas. low diff malazzz.
02:01 Nishizumi: lha trus lu mapper doang gitu ?
02:01 Surono: V: ga tau
02:02 Surono: map teko gw last cuma elitid itu, tatujin kwkww
02:02 Nishizumi: ccdes
02:02 Nishizumi: :V
02:02 Surono: sama sucky sucky V: kwkww
02:02 Nishizumi: taiko salvation
02:02 Surono: bansad
02:02 Surono: VVVvv: bedain para elitid
02:02 Nishizumi: lama2 gw bikin custome diffname dah
02:02 Surono: apa
02:02 Nishizumi: stylenya juga beda sendiri lagi luw :V
02:02 Surono: VVVvvvv: ojlas
02:02 Surono: 3plet spam lagi
02:02 Nishizumi: ya tergantung judulnya
02:02 Surono: VVVvvvv: the
02:02 Nishizumi: ccd :V
02:02 Surono: the flying dragon with warrior for holy sword taiko
02:03 Surono: Mampussssssssss V:
02:03 Nishizumi: 1/6 kddkddk di tengah2 strim
02:03 Surono: :^^^^^^^^^^^^)
02:03 Nishizumi: auto dq :V
02:03 Surono: :VVVVVVVV
02:03 Surono: kalau raiden mah 1/4, gw ttp ikutin. aslinya kdddddk :^^^^^^)
02:03 Nishizumi: itu meriank gw custom diffname aja kali ya
02:03 Surono: pepes vroo0hhhhhh. nambah sr 0.1 soalnya :^^^^)
02:03 Nishizumi: ccd :VVVVV
02:03 Surono: iya costume aja
02:03 Surono: + Od7
02:03 Surono: biar maknyus pada nangis acc jelek V:
xtrem3x
1,781 posts
Joined July 2009
xtrem3x
My Queue


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K


Kantan

  • 03:36:896 - possibly need other d note here ...
    03:54:744 - same here ...


DNA's Futsuu

  • just one observation ...
    00:55:884 (78,79,80,81,82)- 1 = in this part, blue note is better in 3rd or 5th note (3rd for variety or in 5th for change in sound) or ... 2 = just change to k in note 82


tasuke's Muzukashii

  • uncheck Widescreen Support.

    00:54:997 - need other note here ...
    00:58:035 - same here ...

    01:14:871 - in this section can have variation for vocal in the 4th note ... possible dddk kkkd (?)

    01:28:162 - change this note to d .. have bass sound.
    01:39:554 - inverse to above point this note have same sound as previous 3 notes.

    02:33:478 - Change to k ... this note have same "screech" sound as previous note.

    02:47:782 - this part is too weird .-.

    03:03:478 (32,33,34,35) - Change to d to obtain a cute progressive sound (and progressive sequence combined) (?)
    03:15:630 - Same ...

    03:16:643 - add other note here to combine with above point and previous kd.


Oni

  • 00:50:567 - add finish in this note ... have pure K note behind, but here have other bass sound type.
    01:07:972 - in this point needs other note ... have sound for a triple.

    01:39:744 - apparently this note is unnecessary (?)

    01:51:327 - 1 = change this note to k (have same high sound as next note) or ... 2 = add finish to emphasize the high sound plus a sound boom.

    01:58:668 - Change this note to k .. have same high piano sound as previous note.

    02:03:478 - ---> (?)

    02:27:909 - Change this note to k .. have same sequence of sounds ...

    03:07:086 - Comparing with previous triple ddd this not nessesary .. delete this note.
    03:19:238 - Same ...

    03:30:124 - move this note to 03:30:251- ... the triple is more convenient in this part of course, for "vocal" sound.

    03:37:466 - Move this note to 03:37:339- (?)

    03:55:251 - need other k note in this point. (?)


Inner Oni

  • 00:44:238 - Delete this note and ...
    00:44:491 - Fill empty spaces to complete this sequence in 1/3 ... have sound to make a long "stream".

    01:00:504 - Move this note to 01:00:630- ... triple sounds better in this place (?)

    01:14:997 (201,202) - ctrl+g in this ... for vocal sound.
    01:15:757 - Change to k .. same reason ^

    02:04:934 - this part is very weird .. but analyzing all possible options I see better delete this note why in previous note have high bass sound and need priorize this issue, besides that give priority the following note with their respective piano sound.

    03:01:010 - need note here to triple (?)


tasuke's Ura

  • uncheck Widescreen Support.
    Oni = 1147 notes -> Ura = 1221 notes ... you need add more notes, at least to be in 1300 notes (?)

    01:03:858 - change this note to k .. for "vocal" sound (?)

    02:22:782 - change this note to d .. comparing with 3rd and 5h note, this don't have high sound (is minimum)
    02:25:630 - same as above point but in this have variation, have high sound just in 5th note .. ddddk (?)

    02:54:934 - change this note to k .. to leave next 3 notes with more priority about his own rhythm.

    03:19:238 - Same as above point but is better leave last note in red.

    03:55:757 - add note .. have a hit sound.

is hard mod in 1/3 as base rhythm XD!! ...
Nardoxyribonucleic
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3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

xtrem3x wrote:

My Queue


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

DNA's Futsuu

  • just one observation ...
    00:55:884 (78,79,80,81,82)- 1 = in this part, blue note is better in 3rd or 5th note (3rd for variety or in 5th for change in sound) or ... 2 = just change to k in note 82 I would prefer keeping d k d d d as a transition from 00:52:846 (72,73,74,75,76) to 00:58:922 (84,85,86,87,88) -

is hard mod in 1/3 as base rhythm XD!! ...
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Nishizumi
1,092 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

xtrem3x wrote:

My Queue


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K


Kantan

  • 03:36:896 - possibly need other d note here ... it's ruining the consistency
    03:54:744 - same here ... to gap with futsuu since there is on futsuu

tasuke's Muzukashii

  • uncheck Widescreen Support. unchecked


Oni

  • 00:50:567 - add finish in this note ... have pure K note behind, but here have other bass sound type. sounds not fit with big note for me, even its harsh sound (?). maybe it's not as load as 00:52:086
    01:07:972 - in this point needs other note ... have sound for a triple. i think it doesn't needs, my inner did the same and for better gap to muzu

    01:39:744 - apparently this note is unnecessary (?) yeah agreed

    01:51:327 - 1 = change this note to k (have same high sound as next note) or ... 2 = add finish to emphasize the high sound plus a sound boom. i'm sory i remapped this diff and late to upload it ;; i'm following that drum sound, to keep the consistency as previous pattern

    01:58:668 - Change this note to k .. have same high piano sound as previous note. i've remapped this ;; i'm not following the piano now :( i'm sorry

    02:03:478 - ---> (?) same as above

    02:27:909 - Change this note to k .. have same sequence of sounds ... yea if it's piano, but i'm following the drum/harsh sound *i don't know that =.=*

    03:07:086 - Comparing with previous triple ddd this not nessesary .. delete this note. yea and i'm following the harsh sound now
    03:19:238 - Same ... agreed, it's already deleted now lol

    03:30:124 - move this note to 03:30:251- ... the triple is more convenient in this part of course, for "vocal" sound. same as above, it's already deleted :/

    03:37:466 - Move this note to 03:37:339- (?) yea

    03:55:251 - need other k note in this point. (?) swapping is better as i did on inner


Inner Oni

  • 00:44:238 - Delete this note and ...
    00:44:491 - Fill empty spaces to complete this sequence in 1/3 ... have sound to make a long "stream". nope, 00:44:238 - there is drum sound and unnecessary to make any stream or even triplet

    01:00:504 - Move this note to 01:00:630- ... triple sounds better in this place (?) i don't think so, here is still better to emphasizing 1/3 drum with 1/6 note (triplet)

    01:14:997 (201,202) - ctrl+g in this ... for vocal sound. sounds better for instrument too
    01:15:757 - Change to k .. same reason ^ nope for this, i don't follow the vocal

    02:04:934 - this part is very weird .. but analyzing all possible options I see better delete this note why in previous note have high bass sound and need priorize this issue, besides that give priority the following note with their respective piano sound. what weird ? i'm consistent with what i follow the first. i prefer to follow synth/piano/instrument etc. here.

    03:01:010 - need note here to triple (?) i think it doesn't follow anything


tasuke's Ura

  • uncheck Widescreen Support. ofc
    Oni = 1147 notes -> Ura = 1221 notes ... you need add more notes, at least to be in 1300 notes (?) as i said, i've reduced it before you post this :(

is hard mod in 1/3 as base rhythm XD!! ...
thanks for the mod xtrem :)
_kumakichi
43 posts
Joined June 2016
_kumakichi
the map seems too good i decide that i would save the trouble doing mods which would necessarily get rejected
so stars instead...
solid rhythm and solid map <3

good luck
Nishizumi
1,092 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

_kumakichi wrote:

the map seems too good i decide that i would save the trouble doing mods which would necessarily get rejected
so stars instead...
solid rhythm and solid map <3

good luck
thanks for your stars :)
FlamingRok
306 posts
Joined October 2012
FlamingRok
Hello, from priority queue!

d = don, k = katsu, D = large don, K = large katsu

Remember that when going into this, all of these are merely opinions and are in no way needed needed to be changed for ranking.

[Kantan]

00:33:099 (28) I think this should be k to coincide with the higher pitch.
00:36:137 (32) ^
01:14:871 (86) I think this should be changed to d to avoid the triple k on a Kantan this early (super opinion based this one)
01:27:782 (1) This note feels somewhat out of place when following the patterns thus far. Remove it?
03:41:833 (88) ^ except also because a finisher at the end of a six note pattern might be too hard for Kantan players

[Nardo's Futsuu]

Honestly not certain how to feel about most of the 1/3rd notes on Futsuu. The BPM could be slow enough to make them work, but there are also times I think that Futsuu players would either try and hit these by alternating and becoming confused for the notes afterwards, or if they'd try to hit it with the same hand multiple times, which would tire them out faster. Other than this, I don't see much wrong, and the 1/3rds when paired up with just monocolor (like at 01:53:605) I think would be very fun to play. However, if you decide to stick with 1/3rd notes, there's one I'd absolutely recommend removing for build up.

02:26:516 (278) By removing this, the last double right before the drumroll has more buildup to it, getting the newer player more pumped and ready for the drumroll up ahead.

[tasuke's diffs]

Don't see any problems here honestly, though on Muzukashii, the seven note 1/3rd patterns might be too tricky. It's slow enough for them to possibly work, but I'd be weary of it regardless.

[Oni]

02:27:909 (598) Change this to a k, as all the other notes being a k as well could catch the player off guard all of a sudden for only doing k and all of a sudden having to swap to d.
03:41:960 (274) Removing this I feel makes this section not only sound better, but play better as well. The pause here is very nice.

[Inner Oni]

00:50:377 (35) Change this to a d for more fluidity and also a better sounding pattern.
01:59:048 (65) Remove this to keep up with the style of patterns you've made so far.
02:00:567 (77) ^ except this is to have buildup to the next pattern you've made.
03:18:732 (375) (379) ctrl+g so we have a nice 1 blue 2 blue 3 blue rise with the pitch.
03:43:035 (867) (869) change these to d to match the song closer.

Overall, really well done mapset guys! Looking forward to seeing this ranked in the future!
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