Weef, from my queue.
[General]
> 01:00:606 - insert a break time?
[Oni]
> 00:09:524 (31) - change to D? Although K is matching 00:08:714 (29) - ,but I think a new on-beat pattern is formed in the drum set with 00:09:254 (30) - 00:09:524 (31) - 00:10:065 (34) - 00:10:335 (35) - (k d d k). Perhaps you would like to keep a K for the clear and loud cymbal crash.
> 00:10:786 (40,41) - ctrl+G, it can match the pitch. 00:10:876 (41) - using D can match 00:09:524 (31) - if you adopt the above suggestion.
> 00:14:389 (58) - change to d, sounds better
> 00:15:380 - if you adopt the above change, you may find that a d d dk pattern is repeated. You could add a d here for a complexer pattern. Moreover, the pattern sounds more rhythmatic. But still, I can see that you have not used dd dd dk pattern, this may not be an optimum choice for you.
> 00:18:443 (77) - shift it 2 beats to the right in 1/6. The main reason is that K D k d K this pattern seems not fitting the mood of the music. Another reason is that after a D, it's better to leave some space for the snare to echo.
> 00:19:434 - a k can be added here. This sound quite stands out. If you insist on using a Finish at 00:19:524 (1) - , then neglect this suggestion
> 00:27:542 (40,42) - These two D are umm.... I can't say that they are weird because they actually match well with the piano with pedal. The overall felling is weird, I would say. The ending of the phase is quite rich and the current one just end with a clear D D pattern.... Might be you would like to try this?
Still, matching the petal piano note is still fine, just the mood shown is strange.
> 00:34:299 - d should be added here to state the difference from the new start at 00:34:660 (76) -
> 00:34:930 (77) - change to d? sounds better
> 00:38:984 (15) - from this note onwards, the mapping channels are really unstable. I am confused somehow...
> 00:39:524 - / 00:43:849 - / ... why don't you put a note on these timing?
> 01:11:957 (14) - Have you forgotten to put a Finish here carelessly?
> 01:13:038 (17,18,19,20,21,22,1) -
Should it be a zebra (kdkdkdk) pattern? kkkdddk does not fit the pitch. Oh, I see your point now, you are mathing the drums.
> 01:21:146 (51) - change to D? to emphasize 01:21:687 (52) - , the highest pitch.
[Muzukashii]
> 00:16:281 (49,50) - change to d d. souds better
> 00:41:687 (19) - k can be added here. Muzu should also contain this note, not only Oni/ Inner Oni
> 01:13:308 (15,1) - ctrl+G, they should be consistent to Oni's.
> 01:24:119 - add a d here for a symmetrical pattern (nnnn n n). If you want to leave a rest, it is still fine though.
> 01:28:443 - add a k here, same reason.
[Futsuu]
> 00:18:173 (32) - d can be added here because the gap between K k nearby is too wide.
> 01:17:362 - A Finish note can be added here, same reason^
[Kantan]
> Can we use 1/2 in BPM= 111? I have a question here. Well, if you treat it like BPM= 222, I have nothing to say lol.
> 00:09:524 - add a d here, the gap is too large.
> 00:10:335 (13) - add a k here, same reason ^
> 00:18:173 - / 00:18:984 - simular case ^ ^
> There are lots of simular pattern as described above. I really think that there's a need to put notes on those timings.
> 01:10:335 (6) - add a k here
> The Kiai session feels porous, but there're limitations due to the BGM. 1/1 spammed wisely though, still fine.
I have no intention to mod 1/12 Inner Oni lol. I hope my mod is helpful!