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Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne! [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Volta
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 January 2017 at 06:36:36

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
Tags: cute jpop christmas carol xmas
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5405kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.64 stars, 531 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.56 stars, 282 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3.06 stars, 848 notes)
  4. Oni (4.53 stars, 1258 notes)
Download: Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
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meri meri meri meri merinding~

DeletedUser_6637817
Mod from queue!

general
first off, Spread!
gap between Oni and Muzu is a bit too wide i think, with oni using a lot of 5lets which have harder patterns such as kdddk
gap between Oni and merry oni is too big, its pretty ridiculous
to work it out:
you can make the Oni a bit easier to even out the gap between Oni and Merry oni and the gap between Muzu and Oni.
then to straighten out the gap between oni and merry oni,you may rename the oni to light oni, and make another oni (or get a GDer) to make one for you

now me correcting pitch incongruencies (i suck at it)
Kantan
try to map a bit less on red ticks ya catch my drift?
newer players might not be able to have good accuracy, thus this can be confusing

For a Kantan, hitsounding is pretty much free for you, not gonna interfere.

welp i dont i give a crap about the other diffs... ill cut to the chase and do the merry oni (that will prolly need most of the modding anyways.)
Merry Oni
For starters, * means that you can repeat this suggestion on the looped parts of the music.

00:09:017 (34,35,36,37,38) - dkdkd fits more i guess*
00:14:351 (70,71,72,73,74) - ^
00:17:684 (93,94,95) - these ddd's feel out of place, do something with them? also not gonna list em all, use your own instincts and tesplay it with auto
really flippin tired atm, sorry for the dissapointing mod, i hope atleast the spread helps.....
Topic Starter
Volta
i don't see problem with spread. the amount of notes from kantan to oni is 271 - 515 - 792 - 1045. the difference of note used between difficulties is 244 - 277 - 253. it's pretty much stable so you can't say Oni has large gap with Muzu, as the notes difference is similar with futsuu to muzu. you say i should make oni easier, that would make the spread even more bad. actually i was expected modder to do something with muzu to make it more even.

Merry Oni is an extra diff for higher level player, wider spread to the highest diff is tolerable.

due to the song nature that has many emphasis in the 1/4 beat, thats inevitably makes kantan and futsuu feels a bit harder than usual (in term of SR. but i would suggest you to not look a diff from its star rating), but i give enough break to so that should be ok. newer player can take this as a challange to increase their off-beat feeling.

thanks for your feedback. i'll check your suggestion in Merry Oni later
Surono
Penyakits... aduh BGne mas e, asem menu menu neehh~ cyaattt kambeoh weboz ku bozz~

>General
* Merry Oni setara Extra diff? (Inner Oni) diffname costume mah enaknya buat map2 edan doang, buat di atas Ura/Hell/Inner Oni... (Hell oni setau gw juga diff costume tapi ya mengidentik kek si Ura.. biasanya buat lagu breakcore ) gini mah lebay mas kecuali ni lagu ada remixnya hard/breakcore.. ada nada 1/69nya.. bisa dah pake nama Merry Oni
* :U Oni ma si Merry cecede penyebarannya asdfasdf cecete improve buat fill note high diff lah

>Ono Medeni
* 00:06:434 - iki namanya overlapping majuin ke tick biru kanan? soalnya flow disitu *ddk*
* 00:07:267 - masih bisa ini.... ew
* 00:07:767 - nih, kondisikan kalau ini emang inner.. masa 2 oni :U dua pepes dong
* 00:08:350 (29,30,31,32,33) - tettetdungtettat jadi kkddk, menurutku kalau sama si flow
* 00:09:017 - ini baru kdddk, 00:09:184 - ini maksa amat jadi kontras... cuma kick drum ini
* 00:11:767 - kek di pertama hal overlapping, geser tick biru kanan biar pas sama flow
* 00:12:600 - yaJeddah
* 00:13:100 - maow ikyut flow?!??! kek di detik ke 7:767
* 00:13:683 (65,71) - kkddk kdddk, kkddk mah buat suara yg deep.. kalau kdddk pas itu buat suara yg bersih jelas
* 00:15:600 - mau ikut icik icik? jadi kkd enak nih
* 00:17:767 - overlapping, geser kanan. disini mah ga ada suara. adanya 00:17:684 - vokal, bukan flownya
* oke.. gw stop buat suges2 point untuk difilling.. yah atur sendiri ae yo mas.. kalau di merry oni bisa lebih pola2 streamnya.. kan di Oni biasa bisa toh dibuat simple streamnya.. *kek tadi ada yg bisa jadi kkddk, nah di Oni misal cuma 1/2 ya tinggal truh 3plet aja biar imbang* dan seterusnya.. gw juga rada ga nyaman sama overlapping di not strimnya.. jelas2 vokal ada yg ngeflow di icik2 tick biru timbang si Lirik *00:17:934 - kek ini, ada flow dari si vokalnya.. tapi ya uwes kalau takut repetatif sama 00:17:184 - ini, ya variasi hanya di 1/2 aja kalau ga mau gitu2 doang kek 00:16:850 (88,89) - ini di ctrl g, 00:17:517 (93,94) - trus ini bisa ttp buat variasi di vocal.. cuma strim yg "sama" ditempatnya

* 00:37:684 - ~ 00:40:017 - cufu.. niru niru "sani, gowo, cino, tani, HA-DES" lagu Yousei teikoku `-`

* 01:05:850 - wes wes strimnya overmap.. mending juga dibuat 1/2 doang, ga begitu parah karna musik ga begitu bervariasi.. cuma di bagian kek 01:05:684 (1,1,1) - ini doang
* 02:13:934 - ay ay
* 02:57:350 - wtf.. dkddd doang mah akward, fill kat lah biar dkddk, 02:57:350 (126,127) - ngikut ini sama kat 127
* 02:58:350 - worstt pattern. ternnyata buat mirror pattern toh.. ddddk? :U k trakhir buat si sener derum
wes gitu doang.. ini udah bagus menurut gw.. tinggal maslahnya cuma di mod2 gw yg bahasanya kek ngajak taffuran. :U nice diff mas bruh ( gw tau kenapa dimap begini.. karna cuma buat ngeneken nada2 penting kan? buka ngemap semua nada toh?!?!?! yowes... itu semua sugestinya samfah akwakww, kecuali buat ngespread di Oni asdfasdf )

>Onirrr
gw asal klik2 lengthnya. nemu beginian
* 00:45:017 - cct jarang banget liat ginian kulo asdafasdaf, tapi cocok. 00:44:850 - napa ga disini kek inner? yg penting kan 00:45:850 - ada rest ngeh
* oke gw ga ada maslah sama ni diff.. ntar juga situ selfmod gegara perubahan di Medeni Oni.. asem penyakitku kambuh, tolong lagu begini!1!!

> Muzuk
* 00:52:850 - panjang mas bruh, dlt.00:53:017 - tekanan si vokalnya gurih
* 01:00:850 (103,105) - mana yg mau di ddelete? 01:01:184 - mending ini dari pada 01:00:850 - ini ntar jadi repetatif kat kat kat kawkawk, selanjutnya terapin.. ikr vokalnya itu vokalnya itu.. tapi ga harus ngisi2 teruz :'\/
oke, panjang2 anu :^V

> Kantan & Futsuu
futsuu diff sparring??? banyak bener 3plet 1/2 polanya.. apa lagi dibandingin di 01:30:017 - sini kantan sama futsuu..
:U mastah low diff.. atur futsuunya.. kantan udah gurih

dah segini aja mod sampahnya.. wazalam.,
EDIT NihH tapi blom dipost:
anuuu sry kelamaan modnya. karna kalau ketemu lagu gini+mappernya ngemapnya gimana.. diriku bimbang bingung eh. ga tau deh :U dada :8 *emot cium gagal*
Topic Starter
Volta
lolol pusing gw baca modnya pake bahasa yang bener napa wkwkw

biarlah gw pengennya Merry Oni. extra diff bukan berarti harus susah susah banget, yang penting pas sama lagunya. fillingnya emang rasanya kurang mantep sih ntar dipikirin lagi.
dem weekend tak cek smua mod yang datang ._.
Gemu-
Hi Volta!

From my Queue


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

HP: 7

Can you put the SV to 1.20? Because this BPM is high.

01:03:017 (9) - Change to k to follow the finish rhythm with 01:00:350 (5) - and because this part have a finish 01:05:684 (13) - so to have a balance and consistency I recommend you that.
02:11:017 (9) - The same in this part, change to k to follow the finish 02:08:350 (5) - and to have a balance and consistency with 02:12:350 (10,11,12,13) -

[ Futsuu]

HP: 6

SV to 1.20
? The BPM is high.

00:37:684 (7,8,9,10) - I recommend you change that finish to K or D, because that part have the same drums, so I it's not necessary differents finish, with a same finish is fine.
01:45:684 (7,8,9,10) - How I said previously, I recommend you change that finish to K or D, because that part have the same drums, so I no see necessary differents finish, with a same finish is fine.
02:36:850 (3) - Move this note here 02:36:517 - to keep the consistency with 02:25:017 (26,27,1,2,3,4,5,1) -

[ Muzukashii]

00:37:684 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - How I said previously, change finish to K or D, because that part have the same drums, so I no see necessary differents finish, with a same finish is fine.
01:01:517 (108,109) - Ctrl G and remove this 01:01:850 (110) - to keep the consistency with 02:08:684 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
01:02:517 - Add a k and change to d this 01:02:684 (113) - or remove this 02:10:517 (13) - to keep the consistency with this 01:02:684 (113,114) - and with this 02:10:017 (11,12,13,14) -
01:04:517 (122) - Remove to keep the consistency with 02:11:350 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,1) -
01:05:184 (1,1,2,3) - Can you appy this here to keep consistency 02:13:184 (1,1) - or can you apply this 02:13:184 (1,1) - here 01:05:184 (1,1,2,3) - The important is have consistency in that parts.
01:10:184 (9) - Remove this and this 01:10:684 (11) - to keep the consistency with 00:00:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
01:45:684 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - If you apply the first suggestion, change finish to K or D, because that part have the same drums, so I no see necessary differents finish, with a same finish is fine. Also, to keep the consistency with 00:37:684 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
02:13:850 (1) - Remove this or add a d here 01:05:850 - to keep consistency this 01:05:684 (1,2,1) - with this 02:13:684 (1,1,2,1,2,1) -
02:57:350 (78) - Change to k to have a great rhythm with 02:58:017 (81,82,83,84,85,86) - Also sounds good!
03:11:517 (9) - Remove this, the same for 03:12:017 (11) - , 03:14:184 (9) - , 03:16:850 (9) - , 03:17:351 (11) - to have a similar rhythm or consistency with 00:00:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and the consistency with this (If you apply the sixth suggestion) 01:08:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

[ Oni]

00:37:684 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - How I said previously, change finish to K or D, because that part have the same drums, so I no see necessary differents finish in this part.
00:59:850 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - You are following that rhythm, and you are breaking in this part 01:01:350 (139,140,141) - So, if you want follow that rhythm I recommend you change to k 01:01:350 (139) -
01:03:017 (150,151,152,153,154,155) - The same explication here, for that change to k here 01:04:017 (156) -
01:45:684 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - How I said previously, change finish to K or D, because that part have the same drums, so I no see necessary differents finish in this part.
If you apply the second suggestion, change to k here 02:09:350 (12) - to keep the consistency or a similar rhythm with 00:59:850 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) -
If you apply the third suggestion, change to k here 02:12:017 (29) - to keep the consistency or a similar rhythm with 01:02:517 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,1) -
02:13:934 (2) - If you want can you remove this note to keep the consistency with 01:05:184 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3) -

I recommend you apply this 00:00:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - here 01:08:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - and here 03:09:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Because have the same rhythm and the same drums, so you have to make the same notes in that parts to keep a consistency with the same.

But can you have a similar rhythm in this part 00:00:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - to keep the consistency with here 01:08:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - and here 03:09:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - But, the question is, How? This is the answer:

Adding d here 00:00:684 - , 00:01:184 - , 00:01:684 - , 00:02:184 - , 00:03:350 - , 00:03:850 - , 00:04:350 - and 00:04:850 -

[ Merry Oni]

00:37:684 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - How I said previously, change finish to K or D, because that part have the same drums, so I no see necessary differents finish in this part.
01:01:350 (160) - Change to k to follow the rhythm you was doing in this part 00:59:850 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) -
01:04:017 (179) - The same, change to k to follow the rhythm you was doing in this part 01:03:017 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178) -
01:04:934 (2,3) - Can you change to k those notes or simply change to k this 01:05:017 (3) - to have a balance rhythm with 01:03:017 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184) - and with 01:05:184 (1,1,2,3,1) -
01:45:684 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - How I said previously, change finish to K or D, because that part have the same drums, so I no see necessary differents finish in this part.
02:09:350 (168) - Change to k to follow the rhythm 02:07:850 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165) - and to keep the consistency with 00:59:850 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170) -
02:12:184 (191) - Change to k here and here 02:12:934 (2,3) - or if you want here 02:13:017 (3) - to keep the consistency with 01:03:017 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) -

If you want con you add d here 00:00:684 - , 00:01:684 - , 00:02:184 - , 00:03:350 - , 00:03:850 - , 00:04:350 - and 00:04:850 - to keep the consistency or a similar rhythm with 01:08:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - and with 03:09:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -

Very Good Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!
Surono
mamfrus tembok teks dari ni orang keren mas, linggisnya bkin lu joget muter. semoga mbejan!1!! ( eh bkannya linggisnya, linknya maksud gw xd )
Topic Starter
Volta
penyakittt.

apllied some surono and game rock mod

update november: remapped muzu, oni. deleted merry oni.
Yaminoma
hi kentang
mod from xmas queue


[General]
  1. dem cute song
[Kantan]
  1. this diff is just good, couldnt find anything that needs to be changed but this is just my oppinion > 02:26:684 - move to 02:26:017 -
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:06:850 - move to 00:06:517 - and change to d to follow the same rhythm as u did at 00:08:350 - and 00:13:684 -
    do the same here 00:12:184 - 00:11:850 -
  2. 01:14:517 - same as above, and if u want you could add a d at 01:15:184 -
  3. 01:19:850 - same here
  4. optional change - you could move this 02:42:350 - to 02:42:517 - and change 02:42:684 - to k and delete this one 02:44:184 - to make 02:44:350 - a finisher big don
  5. 02:50:184 - D fits it better uh ??? if youre trying to follow that puresento imo
  6. i see youre trying to follow vocal here 02:55:684 - then, id say move this to 02:55:517 - , and 02:56:183 - to 02:55:850 - , 02:56:017 - change to k, this will follow vocal better. 02:02:350 - i just look back to see if i missed something and i found out you could do the same here, and here 00:54:350 - lol....
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:017 (1,4) - d ?
  2. 00:06:850 - move to 00:06:517 - for rhythm
  3. 00:11:850 - same as above, same pattern, make changes to fit rhythms dem
  4. 01:14:517 - same as above
  5. 01:16:350 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - about these k ddd k kkk , why not change it to k ddd d kkk ? make it simple for muzukashii and still follow the rhythms (happens again here 01:21:684 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - )
  6. 01:37:517 (16,17,18) - ?? change 01:37:684 - to d , muzukashii cant have xxy patterns unless slow bpm *im not sure*
  7. 02:42:850 - remove this to add a little break, because u have 2 1/4 triplets, that can get hard for muzukashii players
  8. 02:44:350 - finisher?
  9. 03:16:850 - remove 03:14:184 - remove 03:11:517 -
[Oni]
  1. 00:07:850 - remove this it doesnt fits the rhythm ure following
  2. 00:13:183 - ^
  3. 00:15:600 - add k (optional: you could make this a kkddd pattern by adding 00:15:767 - d )
  4. 00:20:850 - remove to put more focus on the vocal (which u did by making these notes as finishers)
  5. 01:15:850 - same reason as 00:07:850 -
  6. 01:21:183 - ^
  7. 01:23:600 - you could add a k here and another k 01:24:184 - here
  8. 01:30:850 - remove
  9. 02:23:100 - move to 02:23:267 - it fits the rhythm better
  10. 02:33:683 - you could do the same as above here OR move 02:34:434 - to 02:34:267 - and change 02:34:350 - to don
meri meri xmads boi
Topic Starter
Volta
hi potato.

mods are welcome. will reply after back from holiday.
Niko-nyan
pffft baru bisa mod .-.

[General]
  1. Volumenya mungkin bisa dikurangin ke 70% karena 90% agak terlalu kenceng :(
  2. minta metadata dong
[Merinding di Oni]
  1. 01:28:684 - disini drumnya agak naik sama pitch vocal juga naik mending jadi K deh
  2. 01:35:017 - daripada bingung dengan finisher, kenapa nggak diganti ke k aja?
selamat merindingin BN ya :3 (udah waktunya BN sih)

edit for metadata checking for the title
click here
14:30 Niko-nyan: :( minta metadata ya 
14:30 Volta: dari ranked set lol
14:31 Niko-nyan: D:
14:32 Volta: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5531338
14:34 Niko-nyan: itu setelah titik gk ada spasi?
14:35 Niko-nyan: soalnya di liriknya spasi dan di title map lain di spasi (yg kamu kasih adi)
14:35 Niko-nyan: *tadi
14:35 Volta: ooo
14:35 Volta: yayaya
14:36 Niko-nyan: gw bingung titiknya D:
14:36 Niko-nyan: ada yg titik biasa ada yg kaya "・・・"
14:36 Volta: sama D:
14:37 Niko-nyan: ... =/= ・・・ rip
14:37 Niko-nyan: rip metadata D: tapi gpp sih
14:39 Volta: 'ne' nya juga pake hurup besar xd
14:39 Volta: parah bgt metadata gw wkwk
14:39 Niko-nyan: wkwkwkkw
14:39 Niko-nyan: btw di lyrics enggak loh
14:39 Niko-nyan: makanya awkward ya
14:45 Niko-nyan: [http://thisplaylist.com/artist/tamura-yukari.html got it]
14:46 Volta: whoa
14:46 Niko-nyan: :p
14:46 Volta: itu official?
14:46 Niko-nyan: web dia krg tau
14:46 Niko-nyan: tapi di playlist rata2 titiknya gitu
14:47 Volta: cara bikin titik gitu disini gimana..
14:47 Niko-nyan: copas
14:47 Niko-nyan: :( kyk gw koma pas get lucky gw copas itu
14:47 Volta: wkwkw
14:47 Niko-nyan: #simple
14:48 Niko-nyan: di romanisednya pakai ... yg biasa
14:48 Volta: ok2

the chat is in indonesian
Surono
merinding confirmed & approved, BG tydack adha megane/jendala mata.

Niko-nyan wrote:

Reserved from Christmas Queue
Yaminoma

Surono wrote:

merinding confirmed & approved, BG tydack adha megane/jendala mata.
Hi BN kwkwkwkkkwk
Topic Starter
Volta

-TheHateD- wrote:

hi kentang
mod from xmas queue


[General]
  1. dem cute song
[Kantan]
  1. this diff is just good, couldnt find anything that needs to be changed but this is just my oppinion > 02:26:684 - move to 02:26:017 - remain unchanged for consistency with 02:37:350 -
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:06:850 - move to 00:06:517 - and change to d to follow the same rhythm as u did at 00:08:350 - and 00:13:684 -
    do the same here 00:12:184 - 00:11:850 - fixed
  2. 01:14:517 - same as above, and if u want you could add a d at 01:15:184 - ^
  3. 01:19:850 - same here ^
  4. optional change - you could move this 02:42:350 - to 02:42:517 - and change 02:42:684 - to k and delete this one 02:44:184 - to make 02:44:350 - a finisher big don no change as the instrument sound is flowy i prefer to end it in normal note
  5. 02:50:184 - D fits it better uh ??? if youre trying to follow that puresento imo K is also fine imo like other diffs
  6. i see youre trying to follow vocal here 02:55:684 - then, id say move this to 02:55:517 - , and 02:56:183 - to 02:55:850 - , 02:56:017 - change to k, this will follow vocal better. 02:02:350 - i just look back to see if i missed something and i found out you could do the same here, and here 00:54:350 - lol.... fixed, good one.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:017 (1,4) - d ? why
  2. 00:06:850 - move to 00:06:517 - for rhythm hmm i prefer current rhythm tho
  3. 00:11:850 - same as above, same pattern, make changes to fit rhythms dem ^
  4. 01:14:517 - same as above ^
  5. 01:16:350 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - about these k ddd k kkk , why not change it to k ddd d kkk ? make it simple for muzukashii and still follow the rhythms (happens again here 01:21:684 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - ) i think this is simple enough. 01:17:017 - this note sounds off if changed to d.
  6. 01:37:517 (16,17,18) - ?? change 01:37:684 - to d , muzukashii cant have xxy patterns unless slow bpm *im not sure* actually it is allowed. i also give longer rest around this pattern. but will see other's opinion
  7. 02:42:850 - remove this to add a little break, because u have 2 1/4 triplets, that can get hard for muzukashii players fixed
  8. 02:44:350 - finisher? nope
  9. 03:16:850 - remove 03:14:184 - remove 03:11:517 - retained for better spread with oni
[Oni]
  1. 00:07:850 - remove this it doesnt fits the rhythm ure following i don't think so. it fits the drum and flow feels broken if removed
  2. 00:13:183 - ^ ^
  3. 00:15:600 - add k (optional: you could make this a kkddd pattern by adding 00:15:767 - d ) retained for more focus in main melody
  4. 00:20:850 - remove to put more focus on the vocal (which u did by making these notes as finishers) fixed
  5. 01:15:850 - same reason as 00:07:850 - same
  6. 01:21:183 - ^ ^
  7. 01:23:600 - you could add a k here and another k 01:24:184 - here same as 00:15:600
  8. 01:30:850 - remove removed 01:30:517 - instead
  9. 02:23:100 - move to 02:23:267 - it fits the rhythm better no change idk but i prefer the ddd there lol
  10. 02:33:683 - you could do the same as above here OR move 02:34:434 - to 02:34:267 - and change 02:34:350 - to don ^
meri meri xmads boi
thx boi
Topic Starter
Volta

Niko-nyan wrote:

pffft baru bisa mod .-.

[General]
  1. Volumenya mungkin bisa dikurangin ke 70% karena 90% agak terlalu kenceng :( gpp, biar merinding
  2. minta metadata dong fixed
[Merinding di Oni]
  1. 01:28:684 - disini drumnya agak naik sama pitch vocal juga naik mending jadi K deh chord nya gak ganti disini jadi D juga oke
  2. 01:35:017 - daripada bingung dengan finisher, kenapa nggak diganti ke k aja? soalnya suara drumnya menurun disini
selamat merindingin BN ya :3 (udah waktunya BN sih)

edit for metadata checking for the title
click here
14:30 Niko-nyan: :( minta metadata ya 
14:30 Volta: dari ranked set lol
14:31 Niko-nyan: D:
14:32 Volta: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5531338
14:34 Niko-nyan: itu setelah titik gk ada spasi?
14:35 Niko-nyan: soalnya di liriknya spasi dan di title map lain di spasi (yg kamu kasih adi)
14:35 Niko-nyan: *tadi
14:35 Volta: ooo
14:35 Volta: yayaya
14:36 Niko-nyan: gw bingung titiknya D:
14:36 Niko-nyan: ada yg titik biasa ada yg kaya "・・・"
14:36 Volta: sama D:
14:37 Niko-nyan: ... =/= ・・・ rip
14:37 Niko-nyan: rip metadata D: tapi gpp sih
14:39 Volta: 'ne' nya juga pake hurup besar xd
14:39 Volta: parah bgt metadata gw wkwk
14:39 Niko-nyan: wkwkwkkw
14:39 Niko-nyan: btw di lyrics enggak loh
14:39 Niko-nyan: makanya awkward ya
14:45 Niko-nyan: [http://thisplaylist.com/artist/tamura-yukari.html got it]
14:46 Volta: whoa
14:46 Niko-nyan: :p
14:46 Volta: itu official?
14:46 Niko-nyan: web dia krg tau
14:46 Niko-nyan: tapi di playlist rata2 titiknya gitu
14:47 Volta: cara bikin titik gitu disini gimana..
14:47 Niko-nyan: copas
14:47 Niko-nyan: :( kyk gw koma pas get lucky gw copas itu
14:47 Volta: wkwkw
14:47 Niko-nyan: #simple
14:48 Niko-nyan: di romanisednya pakai ... yg biasa
14:48 Volta: ok2

the chat is in indonesian
thx!!
me rip metadata. re-dl pls
Senritsu
no kd

sebenernya berkeinginan buat mod map ini dari christmas q tapi berhubung ada suatu masalah diusahakan nanti atau besok dimod /nangis/

metadata : MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...Ne! (tanpa spasi)

lagunya dari anime C3 , albumnya Haru Machi Soleil (春待ちソレイユ)

proof ya, gw dl albumnya karena gw penasaran
Topic Starter
Volta
aa
Acrith
I've chosen your beatmap for second week of Polish Taiko Ladder. (19-25 December). Well done! :D
Hope it won't change too much during this week ._.
t/531164&start=0
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

[General]

Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... ね! (the ellipsis could be halfwidth form)

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:09:684 (13) - consider changing this note to d for the lower-pitched music ?
  2. 00:49:684 (11,12) - swapping these notes to K D would maintain pattern consistency across the set.
  3. 00:53:350 (15,16) - d k would accompany the pitch increase of vocal nicely.
  4. 00:55:017 (18) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  5. 00:59:517 (4,5) - d K would be better if you apply 00:49:684 (11,12) -
  6. 01:01:017 (6) - it would be much better to remove this note for a 4/1 break. Currently the pattern chain is rather long from 00:52:350 to 01:13:684 -
  7. 01:03:017 (9) - same as 00:55:017 (18) -
  8. 01:16:684 - add d and swap 01:17:684 (12,13) - to d k ? There is no reason to reduce the note density in this session.
  9. 01:22:017 - add d and change 01:23:017 (20) - to k ? Same as ^
  10. 01:30:350 - you may add d here for the increased pace of music.
  11. 01:57:684 (11,12) - same as 00:49:684 (11,12) -
  12. 02:01:350 (15,16) - same as 00:53:350 (15,16) -
  13. 02:03:017 (18) - same as 00:55:017 (18) -
  14. 02:07:517 (4,5) - same as 00:59:517 (4,5) -
  15. 02:09:017 (6) - same as 01:01:017 (6) -
  16. 02:11:017 (10) and 02:16:350 (18) - same as 00:55:017 (18) -
  17. 02:20:684 - add k and change 02:21:017 (23,24) - to k D for a better spread with Futsuu ?
  18. 02:32:017 (41) - similar to ^ , move this note to 02:31:350 - and change 02:32:350 (42) - to D ?
  19. 02:51:017 (69,70) - same as 00:49:684 (11,12) -
  20. 02:54:684 (73,74) - same as 00:53:350 (15,16) -
  21. 02:56:351 (76) - same as 00:55:017 (18) -
  22. 03:00:850 (4,5) - same as 00:59:517 (4,5) -
  23. 03:02:350 (6) - same as 01:01:017 (6) -
  24. 03:04:351 (11) - same as 00:55:017 (18) -
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:25:850 - 00:26:017 and 00:26:350 - add d k d respectively for a better spread with Muzukashii ?
  2. 00:40:850 (14) - maybe d as you did at 00:41:184 (15) - ? The sounds are exactly the same and not strong.
  3. 01:04:684 (84) - you may use d here in contrast to the k k at 01:02:017 (75,76) -
  4. 01:33:850 and 01:34:017 - similar to 00:25:850 - , adding d k would be good for the spread's sake.
  5. 01:48:017 (12) - maybe D as you did at 00:40:017 (12) - ?
  6. 01:49:184 - consider adding d here to make it consistent with 00:41:184 (15) - ?
  7. 02:10:684 (11,12) - use k D instead ? A bit strange to see it different from 02:08:017 (2,3) - as you mapped them the same in other kiais.
  8. 02:12:684 (18) - same as 01:04:684 (84) -
  9. 02:27:017 (1) - maybe d as you did at 02:37:684 (1) - ?
  10. 02:37:350 (1) - k would fit the snare well.
  11. 03:05:684 (82,83) - swapping these notes to k d would accompany the pitch drop in a way better.
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:31:517 (25) - moving this note to 00:31:850 - and adding k at 00:32:017 - would result in a more balanced spread with Oni.
  2. 00:40:850 (24) - same as Futsuu
  3. 01:39:517 (23) - same suggestion as 00:31:517 (25) -
  4. 01:48:017 (21) - same as Futsuu
  5. 02:10:517 (14,15,16) - similar to Futsuu, dk D would help improve the flow.
  6. 02:29:517 (16) - k would be better as the pitch of music becomes higher.
  7. 02:40:184 (16) - same as ^
  8. 02:53:517 (64) - this note could be removed to narrow the gap with Futsuu.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:40:850 (30) - same as Futsuu
  2. 00:50:684 (90,91) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the snares well.
  3. 00:53:517 (111,112) - d k would match the pitch increase of vocal nicely.
  4. 01:58:684 (98,99) - same as 00:50:684 (90,91) -
  5. 02:01:517 (119,120) - same as 00:53:517 (111,112) -
  6. 02:55:017 (110) - maybe k to follow the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
  7. From 03:06:350 to 03:06:850 - you may try 1/4 ddkdkkd here to have a greater impact for this kiai end.
  8. 03:18:017 (3) - 03:18:517 (6) - 03:19:017 (9) - these notes are unnecessary in the context of the slower pace. Consider removing them ?
You may call me back after that~ :D
Topic Starter
Volta

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

[General]

Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... ね! (the ellipsis could be halfwidth form) fixed

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:09:684 (13) - consider changing this note to d for the lower-pitched music ? ok
  2. 00:49:684 (11,12) - swapping these notes to K D would maintain pattern consistency across the set. fixed
  3. 00:53:350 (15,16) - d k would accompany the pitch increase of vocal nicely. the bass sounds dropped at 00:53:684 - so k-d can fit it better imo
  4. 00:55:017 (18) - I think you may have missed the finish here ? fixed
  5. 00:59:517 (4,5) - d K would be better if you apply 00:49:684 (11,12) - fixed
  6. 01:01:017 (6) - it would be much better to remove this note for a 4/1 break. Currently the pattern chain is rather long from 00:52:350 to 01:13:684 - right, fixed
  7. 01:03:017 (9) - same as 00:55:017 (18) - fixed + changed 01:03:684 - to d
  8. 01:16:684 - add d and swap 01:17:684 (12,13) - to d k ? There is no reason to reduce the note density in this session. yep, i think it's not updated last time
  9. 01:22:017 - add d and change 01:23:017 (20) - to k ? Same as ^ fixed
  10. 01:30:350 - you may add d here for the increased pace of music. alright
  11. 01:57:684 (11,12) - same as 00:49:684 (11,12) - fixed
  12. 02:01:350 (15,16) - same as 00:53:350 (15,16) - kept for same reason
  13. 02:03:017 (18) - same as 00:55:017 (18) - fixed
  14. 02:07:517 (4,5) - same as 00:59:517 (4,5) - fixed
  15. 02:09:017 (6) - same as 01:01:017 (6) - ^
  16. 02:11:017 (10) and 02:16:350 (18) - same as 00:55:017 (18) - fixed + changed 02:11:684 - to d
  17. 02:20:684 - add k and change 02:21:017 (23,24) - to k D for a better spread with Futsuu ? added d at 02:21:350 - instead to match the drum going lower, and not put finish at 02:21:684 - for better playability for newbie
  18. 02:32:017 (41) - similar to ^ , move this note to 02:31:350 - and change 02:32:350 (42) - to D ? changed similar as above
  19. 02:51:017 (69,70) - same as 00:49:684 (11,12) - fixed
  20. 02:54:684 (73,74) - same as 00:53:350 (15,16) - kept for same reason
  21. 02:56:351 (76) - same as 00:55:017 (18) - fixed
  22. 03:00:850 (4,5) - same as 00:59:517 (4,5) - fixed
  23. 03:02:350 (6) - same as 01:01:017 (6) - fixed
  24. 03:04:351 (11) - same as 00:55:017 (18) - fixed + changed 03:05:017 - to d
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:25:850 - 00:26:017 and 00:26:350 - add d k d respectively for a better spread with Muzukashii ? fixed
  2. 00:40:850 (14) - maybe d as you did at 00:41:184 (15) - ? The sounds are exactly the same and not strong. fixed
  3. 01:04:684 (84) - you may use d here in contrast to the k k at 01:02:017 (75,76) - fixed
  4. 01:33:850 and 01:34:017 - similar to 00:25:850 - , adding d k would be good for the spread's sake. fixed
  5. 01:48:017 (12) - maybe D as you did at 00:40:017 (12) - ? fixed
  6. 01:49:184 - consider adding d here to make it consistent with 00:41:184 (15) - ? ^
  7. 02:10:684 (11,12) - use k D instead ? A bit strange to see it different from 02:08:017 (2,3) - as you mapped them the same in other kiais. fixed
  8. 02:12:684 (18) - same as 01:04:684 (84) - fixed
  9. 02:27:017 (1) - maybe d as you did at 02:37:684 (1) - ? fixed
  10. 02:37:350 (1) - k would fit the snare well. fixed
  11. 03:05:684 (82,83) - swapping these notes to k d would accompany the pitch drop in a way better. fixed

    additional change: moved 01:31:350 - to 01:30:684 - to match stronger hit
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:31:517 (25) - moving this note to 00:31:850 - and adding k at 00:32:017 - would result in a more balanced spread with Oni. fixed
  2. 00:40:850 (24) - same as Futsuu fixed
  3. 01:39:517 (23) - same suggestion as 00:31:517 (25) - fixed
  4. 01:48:017 (21) - same as Futsuu fixed
  5. 02:10:517 (14,15,16) - similar to Futsuu, dk D would help improve the flow. fixed
  6. 02:29:517 (16) - k would be better as the pitch of music becomes higher. because the snare is weaker than (15), d would fits better imo
  7. 02:40:184 (16) - same as ^ same ^
  8. 02:53:517 (64) - this note could be removed to narrow the gap with Futsuu. fixed
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:40:850 (30) - same as Futsuu fixed
  2. 00:50:684 (90,91) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the snares well. fixed
  3. 00:53:517 (111,112) - d k would match the pitch increase of vocal nicely. same as kantan, i think (112) would be better as d to emphasis the bass
  4. 01:58:684 (98,99) - same as 00:50:684 (90,91) - fixed
  5. 02:01:517 (119,120) - same as 00:53:517 (111,112) - kept
  6. 02:55:017 (110) - maybe k to follow the relatively high-pitched vocal ? remain unchanged to keep consistent with other kiai
  7. From 03:06:350 to 03:06:850 - you may try 1/4 ddkdkkd here to have a greater impact for this kiai end. fixed
  8. 03:18:017 (3) - 03:18:517 (6) - 03:19:017 (9) - these notes are unnecessary in the context of the slower pace. Consider removing them ? fixed
You may call me back after that~ :D
thanks for your mod nardo :)
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