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SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mica - Summer Tears

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Mint
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dinsdag 23 februari 2016 at 7:48:45

Artist: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mica
Title: Summer Tears
Tags: caldito o1 澤野弘之 HabiHolic
BPM: 90
Filesize: 4929kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,62 stars, 357 notes)
  2. Habi's Hard (3,25 stars, 412 notes)
  3. Insane (4,17 stars, 473 notes)
  4. Normal (1,94 stars, 227 notes)
Download: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mica - Summer Tears
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you!
Modders
  1. Narcissu
  2. Haruto
  3. Sonnyc
  4. fuyuyu-
  5. TT Mouse
  6. TitaN7
  7. Karen
  8. Monstrata
  9. Taeyang
  10. Xinely
Testplayers
  1. Milan-
  2. Shad0w1and
  3. vellya
Thanks to Lavender, Satellite & Kalibe too!
Yohanes

appleeaterx wrote:

rip methyl
HabiHolic
Can i GD?
Topic Starter
Mint
Normal or Hard is open if that's okay c:
Narcissu
澤野弘之!

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[Insnae]
  1. e …… i prefer keep full mp3 and break last part for people listen song , if you avoid the rule map > 80% , you could add a sample Storyboard
  2. add 2000 AudioLeadIn ? avoid MP 1 miss
  3. 00:00:179 - miss whistle ? look like you add whistle all bar , but 00:16:262 - sound like paino here ? don't mind ……
  4. 00:00:679 - 00:02:012 - drum-clap follow music better ? http://puu.sh/mEJsZ/03b10f36ac.jpg
  5. 00:02:845 (1) - if you do ↑↑↑ , it's use sampleset drum + addition soft + wishtle better
  6. 00:30:845 - add whistle ? even if it's drum here and without vioce , just more common
  7. 01:03:012 (2) - i prefer add click when drum → http://puu.sh/mEKWu/ba701855d9.jpg
Sotarks
HEY APPLE > Methyl.
KASUM1
I would like to make Easy (if there is ) or normal (if habiholic didn't make it)
Topic Starter
Mint

Narcissu wrote:

澤野弘之! :arrow: Narcissu!

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[Insnae]
  1. e …… i prefer keep full mp3 and break last part for people listen song , if you avoid the rule map > 80% , you could add a sample Storyboard :arrow: A huge chunk of the song wouldn't be mapped indeed.. so I'm trying to avoid that. But if I get a SB I'll change the MP3 again :3
  2. add 2000 AudioLeadIn ? avoid MP 1 miss :arrow: Will add when mapset is completed.
  3. 00:00:179 - miss whistle ? look like you add whistle all bar , but 00:16:262 - sound like paino here ? don't mind …… :arrow: Yeah, good catch. Fixed!
  4. 00:00:679 - 00:02:012 - drum-clap follow music better ? http://puu.sh/mEJsZ/03b10f36ac.jpg
  5. 00:02:845 (1) - if you do ↑↑↑ , it's use sampleset drum + addition soft + wishtle better :arrow: I don't want to spam drum clap in non-intense parts ;w;
  6. 00:30:845 - add whistle ? even if it's drum here and without vioce , just more common :arrow: Sure!
  7. 01:03:012 (2) - i prefer add click when drum → http://puu.sh/mEKWu/ba701855d9.jpg~ :arrow: Want main emphasis on claps here :3
Thank you so much Narcissu, you've helped me so much already ;w;

@KASUM1, set is full now :3/
HabiHolic
Done!

Habi's Hard
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk] mica - Summer Tears.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53012
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Summer Tears
TitleUnicode:Summer Tears
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mica
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mica
Creator:appleeaterx
Version:Habi's Hard
Source:
Tags:caldito o1 澤野弘之
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Haruto
Hey there Apple o/
[General]
  1. Enabling the Countdown seems Necessary imo^^ might want to uncheck it?
  2. Combo Color 2 is a bit Blended with the BG. Reduce the Brightness of it maybe?
  3. Why not Uncheck the Letterbox thing owo?
  4. As Narcissu Said, add some AudioLeadIn? since the mapset is already done owo
  5. Edit : add Habi's Name too in the tags owo//
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:345 (4) - Not adding Whistle at the slidertail? should be add imo for the guitar sound owo
  2. 00:09:345 (4) - instad slider, might want to change it into triplet i suppose?
  3. 00:09:512 (1) - this slider should be end at 1/4 beat. i heard a drum sound on 00:09:679 -
  4. 00:12:845 (3) - Whistle on sliderhead owo?
  5. 00:16:012 (5) - should be triplet imo, using 1/8 slider is just... ww. also 00:16:179 (1) - this should end at 1/4 beat same as 00:09:512 (1) -
  6. 00:26:845 (1) - addition drum sampleset soft maybe? i heard the drum sound on it owo
  7. 00:27:345 (2,1) - yeah, nazi stuff. blanket could be improved a bit
  8. 00:31:845 (5,6,7,8) - might want to explain why there's a stream here?
  9. 00:40:179 (1,2) - nazi, are you blanketting this?
  10. 00:52:512 (3,4) - add finish on (3) and clap on (4)
  11. 01:31:345 (2,3,4) - you can notice the triangle tho, it's not placed "goodly" >w<//
  12. 01:33:012 (4,1) - nazi stuff, blanket
  13. 02:02:012 (6,7,8,9,10) - im a bit uncomfortable with this jump ._.
  14. 02:13:345 - should add a volume greenline and set it around 30 since the finish sound is noisy =w=// then add another greenline after it. you know what to do right? www

    What a neat Style <3 Guitar sounds should be added with whistles too owo/
[Hard]
  • There's still a lot of Nazi stuff you need to fix tho ;) im not gonna point them out since it's all about blanket lol. also, not using any kiai times?
  1. 00:01:179 (4) - Same issue as Below ↓ ↓ ↓
  2. 00:03:845 (4) - this should be a Circle and move 00:04:179 (1) - to 00:04:012 - then add a circle on 00:04:512 - . take a look at apple's diff for reference
  3. 00:06:679 (4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing
  4. 01:36:845 (3,5) - might notice that the blanket didn't placed goodly. move 01:36:845 (3) - last slider node to 191|124
  5. 02:00:179 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - dont you think this is way too hard for those player who just starts playing Hard diff :( . this could be tricky with DT tho
  6. 02:21:512 (1,1) - could notice that it is not placed/stacked perfectly

    Overall, it is a Neat Diff but has a lack of Blanket and Spacing Issue that I think you Should fix them :oops:

Lower Diffs Really Mapped Well. great job Apple :)
[]
Good Luck apple, sorry if its not Really Helpful. im nub at modding atm uwu
Topic Starter
Mint

Haruto wrote:

Hey there Apple o/
[General]
  1. Enabling the Countdown seems Necessary imo^^ might want to uncheck it?
  2. Combo Color 2 is a bit Blended with the BG. Reduce the Brightness of it maybe?
  3. Why not Uncheck the Letterbox thing owo?
  4. As Narcissu Said, add some AudioLeadIn? since the mapset is already done owo
  5. Edit : add Habi's Name too in the tags owo// :arrow: fix all general, thanks!
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:345 (4) - Not adding Whistle at the slidertail? should be add imo for the guitar sound owo :arrow: Everytime I hitsound, I only add one each new measure... I know it's lame but want to keep consistency ;w;
  2. 00:09:345 (4) - instad slider, might want to change it into triplet i suppose? :arrow: The song only use 1/4 in the first parts of the song.. so want to limit 1/4 tapping >_<
  3. 00:09:512 (1) - this slider should be end at 1/4 beat. i heard a drum sound on 00:09:679 -
  4. 00:12:845 (3) - Whistle on sliderhead owo?
  5. 00:16:012 (5) - should be triplet imo, using 1/8 slider is just... ww. also 00:16:179 (1) - this should end at 1/4 beat same as 00:09:512 (1) -
  6. 00:26:845 (1) - addition drum sampleset soft maybe? i heard the drum sound on it owo :arrow: If I put a whistle, then I usually won't add drum hitnormal ._.
  7. 00:27:345 (2,1) - yeah, nazi stuff. blanket could be improved a bit :arrow: lol fixed
  8. 00:31:845 (5,6,7,8) - might want to explain why there's a stream here? :arrow: there are sounds here tho
  9. 00:40:179 (1,2) - nazi, are you blanketting this? :arrow: meh, not really, want to keep ds instead (blanket makes too close imo)
  10. 00:52:512 (3,4) - add finish on (3) and clap on (4) :arrow: did something else
  11. 01:31:345 (2,3,4) - you can notice the triangle tho, it's not placed "goodly" >w<// :arrow: it's fine by me, but adjust a little
  12. 01:33:012 (4,1) - nazi stuff, blanket :arrow: i tried ;w;
  13. 02:02:012 (6,7,8,9,10) - im a bit uncomfortable with this jump ._. :arrow: weird angle i guess, you're right.... rearrange whole pattern.. but increase SR from 4.17 -> 4.27 lol
  14. 02:13:345 - should add a volume greenline and set it around 30 since the finish sound is noisy =w=// then add another greenline after it. you know what to do right? www :arrow: okay!

    What a neat Style <3 Guitar sounds should be added with whistles too owo/ thank you so much! so quick lol, also im not good with whistle sorry ;w;
Thanks for modding Haruto :)
Sotarks
What a nice map! Osu needs more Sawano Hiroyuki ! :3
Kalibe
<3
Sonnyc
[Normal]
  1. 01:38:179 (4,1) - Blanket could be better if this was intended to be a blanket.
  2. 01:47:512 (2) - Consider placing at (132,144) to make a smoother flow in (1,2,3). The current sharp flow doesn't look nice in view.
  3. 01:59:512 (4,1) - I think giving more space between these parallel slider would look better in view. http://puu.sh/mRvRu/0a6e051e0b.jpg in case you didn't understood what I meant.
  4. Your Normal is easy enough and can work completely fine as a lowest difficulty. However considering several 1/4 rhythm usages, adding an additional Easy difficulty would definitely benefit your mapset.
[Advanced]
  1. 00:58:179 (7,8) - Personally the rhythm here felt a little weird despite it's following the song. The beat of 00:58:345 is pretty unexpected, and your rhythm is following that while ignoring the vocal (which the previous rhythms were following) of 00:58:512. If you really want to express the rhythm of 00:58:345, try making a better rhythm transition that indicates you are not going to follow vocals as a major rhythm. Removing (7), and adding a reverse at (6) is my suggestion here.
  2. 01:45:512 (5) - Consider stacking this on (6) instead. Sound of (5) is higher than (4), and giving no movement didn't felt natural imo.
  3. 02:12:845 (6,7) - Consider a slider jump here for consistency with 01:03:512 (6,7).
  4. 02:27:679 (2,3,4,5) - Personally since a new feeling appears from 02:28:179 instead 02:27:679, using a square pattern didn't seemed to reflect the music perfectly. But the current pattern is totally fine! Just my comment, not a mod.
[Habi's Hard]
  1. 키아이는 일부러 안넣으셨나요?
  2. 00:02:845 (1,2) - 00:04:179 (1,2) - 00:06:012 (2,3) - 이 부분들 간격이 왜 다른 곳과 달리 줄어들었는지 의문스럽습니다. 마지막 블랭킷 미스는 고쳐주시길.
  3. 00:15:345 (2,3) - 00:16:179 (1,2) - 00:27:512 (3,4) - 00:28:679 (7,8) - 00:30:679 (1,2) - 01:05:179 (4,5) - 등등 특히나 1/1 슬라 이후 노트 블랭킷에서 두드러지게 간격이 일정하지 않은 모습이 맵 전체적으로 띄었습니다. 들쭉날쭉한 간격 설정은 맵 완성도에 크게 타격을 주는데, 하비님 답지 않은 초보적인 실수를 범하신 듯 하네요.
  4. 00:38:679 (1,2) - 블랭킷
  5. 00:39:679 (4,1) - 약간 가까운 감이 있는데 00:40:012에 노트 추가 혹은 (1)을 ctrl+G해서 간격 늘리는거 고려해보세요.
  6. 00:52:179 (1,2,3) - 간격이 같은데, 박자는 다릅니다. 게다가 한 콤보로 묶여 있어서 매우 이질적입니다. 00:53:512 (1)의 콤보를 (3)부터 시작하는 것으로 바꿔주세요.
  7. 02:02:179 (5,6,1) - (6,1) 간격이 (5,6) 보다도 가까운데, 나름 강한 음이 존재하는 (1)이니 점프 추가 고려해보세요.
[Insane]
  1. 00:47:012 (2) - Inconsistent spacing.
  2. 02:01:512 (2) - Consider NC. The pattern starting here pretty feels detached from the previous 1/4 slider patterns and the song.
  3. 02:03:845 (4,5) - 02:08:179 (1,2) - Try a better blanket.
  4. 02:28:179 (1,2,3) - Seems you've used a sv decrease, and that works pretty nice. Just that since the curve rate of (1,2,3) differs, it kinda damaged the completeness of the pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4446603 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4446605 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4446607 (1) - 3.69x (2) - 3.63x (3) - 3.84x There is an objective method to analyze a slider's curve rate by checking the spacing of the head and the tail of a slider. The higher the number, the lower the curve rate. The above numbers are the results, and you can see the curve rate of (3) is slightly lower than other sliders. Increase it.
Worth my star.
Silky
short mod because im suck at modding ;w;
Normal
  1. letterbox/countdown/widescreen
  2. 00:46:512 (3) - umm... maybe 3/2 is more fit in the song imo
  3. 01:14:179 - clap instead whistle? I heard snare sound.
  4. 01:18:845 (3) - like this? you did similar rhythm in 01:08:845 (4,5,1) - , so its not bad idea imo
Advanced
  1. letterbox
  2. 00:07:845 (7) - its not normal, so this 1.90 DS is okay but I think use same DS is better because of there is not kiai...
  3. 00:23:679 (5,6) - maybe slider then circle is better, 00:23:679 - here have bass-drum sound that larger than 00:23:845 - .
  4. 00:29:012 (7,8) - 00:39:679 (5,6) - ^
Hard
  1. HP5? since Insane's Hp is 6.
  2. 00:19:345 (2) - stack on 3? just like 00:12:679 (2,3) - .
  3. 02:00:179 (1,2,3) - idk but maybe that is better flow
Insane
  1. 00:42:179 (1,2,3,4) - a bit bad flow? I'd like this.
  2. nothing else to say, nice to play:3
gl~
HabiHolic

Haruto wrote:

Hey there Apple o/


[Hard]
  • There's still a lot of Nazi stuff you need to fix tho ;) im not gonna point them out since it's all about blanket lol. also, not using any kiai times? // Notting need kaia time.
  1. 00:01:179 (4) - Same issue as Below ↓ ↓ ↓ // No
  2. 00:03:845 (4) - this should be a Circle and move 00:04:179 (1) - to 00:04:012 - then add a circle on 00:04:512 - . take a look at apple's diff for reference // No..
  3. 00:06:679 (4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing // i think this spacing notting unrankedble issue
  4. 01:36:845 (3,5) - might notice that the blanket didn't placed goodly. move 01:36:845 (3) - last slider node to 191|124 // Sure!
  5. 02:00:179 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - dont you think this is way too hard for those player who just starts playing Hard diff :( . this could be tricky with DT tho // Why?? i think this better flow..
  6. 02:21:512 (1,1) - could notice that it is not placed/stacked perfectly // K.

    Overall, it is a Neat Diff but has a lack of Blanket and Spacing Issue that I think you Should fix them :oops:

Lower Diffs Really Mapped Well. great job Apple :)
[]
Good Luck apple, sorry if its not Really Helpful. im nub at modding atm uwu

Sonnyc wrote:

[Habi's Hard]
  1. 키아이는 일부러 안넣으셨나요? // 예. 노래가 잔잔해서 키아이 없이도 흐름이 좋기 때문에 별로 필요없다고 판당했습니다.
  2. 00:02:845 (1,2) - 00:04:179 (1,2) - 00:06:012 (2,3) - 이 부분들 간격이 왜 다른 곳과 달리 줄어들었는지 의문스럽습니다. 마지막 블랭킷 미스는 고쳐주시길. // 간격차이나지않게 몇몇곳 손봤어요
  3. 00:15:345 (2,3) - 00:16:179 (1,2) - 00:27:512 (3,4) - 00:28:679 (7,8) - 00:30:679 (1,2) - 01:05:179 (4,5) - 등등 특히나 1/1 슬라 이후 노트 블랭킷에서 두드러지게 간격이 일정하지 않은 모습이 맵 전체적으로 띄었습니다. 들쭉날쭉한 간격 설정은 맵 완성도에 크게 타격을 주는데, 하비님 답지 않은 초보적인 실수를 범하신 듯 하네요. // 그냥 몇곳 손봤습니다.
  4. 00:38:679 (1,2) - 블랭킷 // 기각.
  5. 00:39:679 (4,1) - 약간 가까운 감이 있는데 00:40:012에 노트 추가 혹은 (1)을 ctrl+G해서 간격 늘리는거 고려해보세요. // 간격을 넓히면 플래이가 부담스럽다고 생각하고 보컬 위주의 맵인데 흐름을 깨트리는 노트를 왜 굳이 추가해야하는지 이해가 되질 않습니다.
  6. 00:52:179 (1,2,3) - 간격이 같은데, 박자는 다릅니다. 게다가 한 콤보로 묶여 있어서 매우 이질적입니다. 00:53:512 (1)의 콤보를 (3)부터 시작하는 것으로 바꿔주세요.// 드럼 소리에 정확한 패턴과 콤보를 더욱더 자연스럽게 표현했는데 콤보를 바꾸면 흐름이 더욱더 깨져버려서 좋지 않은 방법같아요
  7. 02:02:179 (5,6,1) - (6,1) 간격이 (5,6) 보다도 가까운데, 나름 강한 음이 존재하는 (1)이니 점프 추가 고려해보세요. // 걍 5번을 일정하게 맞췄어요

fuyuyu- wrote:

short mod because im suck at modding ;w;

Hard
  1. HP5? since Insane's Hp is 6. // Sure.
  2. 00:19:345 (2) - stack on 3? just like 00:12:679 (2,3) - . // No. now is better flow.
  3. 02:00:179 (1,2,3) - idk but maybe that is better flow // same (^)
gl~
SPOILER
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Topic Starter
Mint

Sonnyc wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 01:38:179 (4,1) - Blanket could be better if this was intended to be a blanket. :arrow: Fixed!
  2. 01:47:512 (2) - Consider placing at (132,144) to make a smoother flow in (1,2,3). The current sharp flow doesn't look nice in view. :arrow: Fixed!
  3. 01:59:512 (4,1) - I think giving more space between these parallel slider would look better in view. http://puu.sh/mRvRu/0a6e051e0b.jpg in case you didn't understood what I meant. :arrow: Fixed!
  4. Your Normal is easy enough and can work completely fine as a lowest difficulty. However considering several 1/4 rhythm usages, adding an additional Easy difficulty would definitely benefit your mapset. :arrow: I can understand, but I usually prefer N/H/I sets... just like lfj's aLIEz. If it's mandatory (unrankable) issue, I will add ^^
[Advanced]
  1. 00:58:179 (7,8) - Personally the rhythm here felt a little weird despite it's following the song. The beat of 00:58:345 is pretty unexpected, and your rhythm is following that while ignoring the vocal (which the previous rhythms were following) of 00:58:512. If you really want to express the rhythm of 00:58:345, try making a better rhythm transition that indicates you are not going to follow vocals as a major rhythm. Removing (7), and adding a reverse at (6) is my suggestion here. :arrow: Actually, wanted to emphasize bass here.. for some reason switching to vocal seems weird to me here. Also, keep consistent w/ insane diff / concept.
  2. 01:45:512 (5) - Consider stacking this on (6) instead. Sound of (5) is higher than (4), and giving no movement didn't felt natural imo. :arrow: Good idea, fixed!
  3. 02:12:845 (6,7) - Consider a slider jump here for consistency with 01:03:512 (6,7).
  4. 02:27:679 (2,3,4,5) - Personally since a new feeling appears from 02:28:179 instead 02:27:679, using a square pattern didn't seemed to reflect the music perfectly. But the current pattern is totally fine! Just my comment, not a mod. :arrow: I was actually thinking about that too and you're absolutely right... but I can't think of anything different? To use 3 slider triangle pattern, curve will have to change a lot which is a bit strange to me ;w;
[Insane]
  1. 00:47:012 (2) - Inconsistent spacing. :arrow: Fixed!
  2. 02:01:512 (2) - Consider NC. The pattern starting here pretty feels detached from the previous 1/4 slider patterns and the song. :arrow: I generally dislike single NC placement when not completely necessary, but I can agree. Changed!
  3. 02:03:845 (4,5) - 02:08:179 (1,2) - Try a better blanket. :arrow: Tried to fix ;w;
  4. 02:28:179 (1,2,3) - Seems you've used a sv decrease, and that works pretty nice. Just that since the curve rate of (1,2,3) differs, it kinda damaged the completeness of the pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4446603 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4446605 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4446607 (1) - 3.69x (2) - 3.63x (3) - 3.84x There is an objective method to analyze a slider's curve rate by checking the spacing of the head and the tail of a slider. The higher the number, the lower the curve rate. The above numbers are the results, and you can see the curve rate of (3) is slightly lower than other sliders. Increase it. :arrow: Since it's not too noticeable in-game, I won't use precise numbers, but I made the curve at (3) larger :3
Worth my star. :arrow: Really thank you for pro mod & stars ;w;

fuyuyu- ni saku hana wrote:

short mod because im suck at modding ;w;
Normal
  1. letterbox/countdown/widescreen
  2. 00:46:512 (3) - umm... maybe 3/2 is more fit in the song imo :arrow: avoid polarity problem in this diff ;w;
  3. 01:14:179 - clap instead whistle? I heard snare sound. :arrow: good. fixed in all diffs!
  4. 01:18:845 (3) - like this? you did similar rhythm in 01:08:845 (4,5,1) - , so its not bad idea imo :arrow: really good point, change rhythm here!
Advanced
  1. letterbox
  2. 00:07:845 (7) - its not normal, so this 1.90 DS is okay but I think use same DS is better because of there is not kiai... :arrow: You're right, changed!
  3. 00:23:679 (5,6) - maybe slider then circle is better, 00:23:679 - here have bass-drum sound that larger than 00:23:845 - .
  4. 00:29:012 (7,8) - :arrow: Fix all these!
  5. 00:39:679 (5,6) - ^ :arrow: Except this one, (6) for vocal :3
Hard
  1. HP5? since Insane's Hp is 6.
  2. 00:19:345 (2) - stack on 3? just like 00:12:679 (2,3) - .
  3. 02:00:179 (1,2,3) - idk but maybe that is better flow
Insane
  1. 00:42:179 (1,2,3,4) - a bit bad flow? I'd like this. :arrow: Try to keep DS here ;w;
  2. nothing else to say, nice to play:3 :arrow: <3
gl~ :arrow: thank you so much for helpful mod ;w;
Thank you so much guys ;w;
Updated with Habi's diff too!
TtmnZk
Hi!
from pm
osu need more hiroyuki sawano!!

Insane
i think ar9 is better
00:39:179 (2,3) - i suggest ctrl+g 3 or stack for better flow,

01:08:845 (3,4) -,i konw you flow drum(snare drum,) here but can't support skip voacl cuz the vocal is more clear than drum here and clickable
try http://puu.sh/mSZ9z/e8b3365754.jpg

02:18:179 (3,4) - if changed also here

01:14:179 (1,2,3,4) - try 2 3 ctrl +g?

01:30:179 (3) - ctrl +g

Habi's Hard
not add kiai

00:23:179 (2) - how about stack 00:23:345 (3) - ?

00:33:679 (5) - ^

01:11:845 (8) - seem abit far for HD diff,try to move 246 317

01:14:345 (8,9) - stack, why you like this style in HD diff ;w;

02:01:179 (4,1,2,3) - feel like extra's overlap
AD & NM is fine for me

GL!
starx2~~
Topic Starter
Mint

TT Mouse wrote:

Hi!
from pm
osu need more hiroyuki sawano!! :arrow: yes indeed 8-)

Insane
i think ar9 is better :arrow: since patterns are not hard and bpm is low (actually just 180bpm), i think 8.8 is okay ^^'
00:39:179 (2,3) - i suggest ctrl+g 3 or stack for better flow, :arrow: hmm, i find this flow to be okay, but adjust slider shape to improve a bit :3

01:08:845 (3,4) -,i konw you flow drum(snare drum,) here but can't support skip voacl cuz the vocal is more clear than drum here and clickable
try http://puu.sh/mSZ9z/e8b3365754.jpg :arrow: you're right.. but for me it sounds weird somehow to map that out? maybe it's just me.. actually i used that slider shape to emphasize vocal a bit haha. will keep for now because i love this pattern ;w;

02:18:179 (3,4) - if changed also here

01:14:179 (1,2,3,4) - try 2 3 ctrl +g?

01:30:179 (3) - ctrl +g :arrow: for these two, i find keeping ds is fine and the jump/antiflow is good.. but i notice error in other pattern, so will fix that w

GL!
starx2~~ <3
Thank you so much for modding and the stars TT Mouse, I really appreciate it ;w;
TitaN7_old
From my queue o/
Advanced

00:23:345 (4,5) - Remove the curve points
00:49:179 (1) - NC
02:22:679 (1) - NC?
A short spinner at the end


Habi's Hard

00:23:179 (2,3) - Stack
01:42:012 (2,3) - Stack
02:00:179 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Weird for this diff D:


Insane

00:10:512 (4) - Ctrl g?
00:25:345 (1) - Add flow, Linear looks good -> http://puu.sh/mTERV/5ce69c2bae.jpg
00:39:679 (4) - timing flow, reverse arrow works great for me :o
00:58:179 (3,4) - (4) DS, blannnnket.
01:04:012 (6) - Stack on 01:04:179 (1) :?:
01:13:512 (1) - same position as 01:14:179 (1), and 01:13:845 (3) -> 01:14:345 (2) ?? looks great for me :)
01:40:845 (1,2,3,4) - DS, maybe -> http://puu.sh/mTGH9/ca0c2ced46.jpg ?
01:48:012 (1) - weird curve point
01:49:012 (4) - reverse arrow
01:52:012 (4) - put it in the same position as in 01:51:345 (4)

GL :D
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