1. Fire Dawn Oni (4,5 stars, 1591 notes)

00:45:574 (80) = 1/3

Nepuri wrote:

From my Queue!

Fire Dawn Oni

01:22:298 (171) - thumping noise, consider a d Better changing to k the prevous one, i felt like only d for clap is so Osu!,
01:30:057 (231) - the sound you mapped to k, should change! I'm using the down melody effect, not the beat.
02:27:298 (665) - ^ fixed
01:30:574 (234,235,236) - try doing a ddk to emphasize the clap sound at the end The melody make mine le don't want to be focus on the beats.s on the beats. Before there's shots of pistols sounds, which makes a good contrast with d and triple k, having ddk would make the shots not unique.
01:32:643 (247) - d, thumpy noise Melody + higher contrast with triple k.
01:34:022 (255) - ^ Melody
01:34:712 (258) - ^ Fixed due to previous pattern structure.
01:35:574 - the clap sound is not mapped, try inserting a k here! I'm representing the vocals by the doublets, the clap beat doesn't interest me.
01:36:781 (274,275,276) - ddk to emphasize the clap again Nope i'm focusing on the melody with these patterns
01:45:747 (348,349,350) - ^ Melody too, there's also a sounds who deserved a k, fixing (351) to k because of a sound too.
01:55:919 (435) - d because thump noise vocals.
01:58:333 (452,453,454) - kdd because the clap sound is at the start I don't care about the beats, what i'm interested is about to reproduce those 1/8 sounds in the background (that's why there's several kkk kkk in the map)
02:03:850 (494,495,496) - ^
02:09:367 (535,536,537) - ^
02:20:402 (614,615,616) - ^
02:25:919 (654,655,656) - ^ Same for all ofc
02:08:505 (529) - thump noise, d melody
02:18:850 (603) - Fixed because of seam patterns before.
02:10:574 (543) - ^ vocals
02:11:953 (554,555) - the clap sound is the 2nd one and the 1st one is a thump, change to d k k k instead vocals
02:22:126 (625,626,627) - kkd, the pitch is falling No need to change, it sounds well with what we have around
No need to apply to 2nd part, for variety
Since it's not a copy paste, i've no reasons. xD

Nice map! Thanks

Ppuskalin wrote:

From My Queue

General

See This
Yes sorry

[centre]

Fire Dawn Oni

[centre]
01:09:022 (83) - Add Finish Added, just because it fits well with the storyboard (star)
01:25:574 (194) - ^ No find this good enough, this section doesn't need impact imo.
01:52:471 (411) - Change This to K That may sounds good and legit, but tbh i find that K doesn't have as impact as D.
02:04:195 (497) - Add finish I'm really hesistant, and the left hand, i find this good and sounds well and deserves it (because we're in kiai, but it's not decent with my structure).
02:14:540 (576,577) - Change to K same argues as above
02:15:229 (578) - Add Finish I would go for yes, but 3 would be too much and this one especialy wouldn't make sense for me. Even changing to K too.
02:19:712 (609) - Change This To d yep
03:09:626 (61) - Delete This Why?
03:32:471 (141) - Change This To K no D.
04:22:126 (524) - Add Finish yee
04:38:678 (653) - Change This To k nope.
05:00:747 (805) - Change This To D yes my bad

Good Luck With Rank

Q____X wrote:

Hi

General

*Open AiMod, and look those errors with design
*ChangeSlider Velocity to 1.40 1.40 Is too fast, for the actual speed. No changes. And it's not obligatory to have 1.4 SV too

Fire Dawn Oni

00:20:057 (48) - k because you use this pattern before and fits well Fixed the first one too. Long time i had to done this. :<
01:13:678 - k nope and why?
01:19:195 - k same
01:35:402 - to 01:35:747 - do this pattern same, i quite like my own pattern due to the vocals following and not beat. Using doublets make also the player react because it's not that common.
02:04:712 - d Why? I found this current doublet interesting to have and it make a better impact to the d which have a nice song here.
02:19:798 (611) - move to 02:19:884 - Why? Tried both, and mine sounds better since the vocals are on the 1/4, imo i find this 3/4 space pretty nice.
02:25:057 - k ^
03:41:953 - k
04:26:091 - k ^ x 2
04:50:488 (737) - delete Feels a bit too much yes.

I hope this helps you

Good map Thanks! :>

infr4 wrote:

From Queue

warning! : all of suggestion is matched my mapping style ok

start.

[Fire dawn Oni]

00:54:367 - missed some sound Since i'm following vocals, there's no reasons to add something here, however i find that 00:49:367 should be delete due to inconsistency with other patterns after.
01:35:402 - dd kd isn't matched at song. but i guess you matched at vocal. yes

those streams are may not matched at song muchh. so i delete all streams and i heard
- 01:47:643 Delete it and you'll know that it's the most decent stream you could heard xD
- 02:32:126 That could be legit to not be okay about that, but since it's the end of the kiai and previously we had long streams, that would be akward not having it.
- 03:51:781 oh eh oh eh
- 03:58:678 this is not a 3.* SR
- and many more like 5-streams

actually, i'm rly hard to understand what ur mapping style. Following beats, vocals, and melody. If i would have just followed one of them that map woudn't be instresting and result as a converted map. Also you may think that it's overmapped, but most of the taiko in this level are overmapped, but decently

i'll re-mod this later but don't hope much better than this. As you wish
no kudos anyway, even if i re-mod and edited more.

not end.

infr4 wrote:

re-mod

and i heard the song without any notes, your streams now acceptable.
- but those streams' sound big to me and other modder, so it's not acceptable when modding without heard song.

but many sound is missed before 01:09:022

00:24:884 ~ 00:44:484 - many sound ignored but still good
00:47:928 ~ 01:08:333 - but i'm still here is bad to avoid some sounds even if focus at vocal. For both, i prefer keeping this calm since it's the calm part, i prefer having sliders on the streams since i don't have to have a lot of notes here (because of the SB and the sound) so having streams here wouldn't be decent. And the vocals here are the most noticable thing here, so better only follow them here. :>

*02:48:333 ~ 03:25:574 - same as above but actually better than that, still bad to me. same :>

[Fire dawn Oni]

00:46:953 - d fit more the k is more suitable due to piano note and making contrast with the "beat" (like for the clock tick in the middle)
01:25:229 - maybe kkk kkk fits fine, but kkk ddk more fit I follow the 1/8 ticks sounds here, that's why full k.

and it still a nice map.

as i said, no kudos.

end.

[R] wrote:

[General]
Check the "Widescreen Support" you has a storyboard right ? Yup

[Oni]
00:45:574 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - why not just put a slider only ? this part still calm , also sound same like 00:51:091 - | 00:56:609 - |
Compare and you still see not. This section cannot be represented with a slider. Look closely

00:49:712 - chage to d then 00:48:333 (40,41,42) - ctrl+G , i will emphasize the 00:49:712 - Remade this section a bit. But it has to be changed.
00:53:160 - k, you following the vocal here i guess Not for the vocals but yes
00:59:022 - d yep for the piano

01:04:884 - sems like this part to monotoune let me arrange some
| 01:05:229 - D
| 01:05:919 - to 01:07:643 - from here you can try a pattern like this with 83 as Finisher


Just follow the changes, not for 84 still in k for vocals, not planning to add more notes here aswell.

01:17:471 - add note, it will matching the drum with vocal Personnal preferance, i don't mind for this drum/vocal.

01:34:884 - i guess this part isn't good
| 01:35:143 - move 01:34:971 -
| 01:35:574 - add k
| 01:35:919 - d
| 01:36:005 - delete

All denied, the triple k is to make more intense on the vocals. The doublet is here for the vocal focus.

01:45:057 - this pattern kinda hard i guess, try a ddkdkdd Made my own remake but it has to be changed considered on the melody stuff. But it's close of your own tho

02:16:695 - add note ? consistency with next part Non sense, the last quint is to mark the end of the pattern.


Maybe just that
okay Good Luck , nice map

liusong159753 wrote:

Hi!

[Fire Dawn Oni]

Some Inherited Points which are 100% volume make the sounds too loud.If you can,change these to 85%-90%. Well ok why not.

01:16:609 (132) - K much better? Prefer keeping d for the beats.
01:17:384 (138) - Change this to D? Why? Personnal préférence
01:24:971 (187) - Change this to K? It's already k?
01:32:988 (247) - Change this to D? Fixed according to what we have previously
01:50:833 (397,403,405) - Change these to D? All denied due to melody and vocal.
01:50:747 (396,404) - Change these to K? Same due to beats.
02:13:247 (565,571) - Change these to D? Why? Personnal préférence and melody
02:19:109 (604) - Change this to D? Nope for contrast with k
03:13:850 (76) - Add a 1/1 drum after it?
03:19:367 (88) - Add another 1/1 drum after it? All denied due to vocals not placed on 1/1 compared to teh others
03:33:850 (152) - Change this to D? Nope, pattern style. Watch around.
03:42:988 (220) - Change this to D? Nope, pattern style too watch the whole diff and delete them, you'll know why it's full k.
04:21:522 (520) - Change this to D? same


That's all. Good luck.

mintong89 wrote:

Hello, you've request a mod request at my queue, so here we go!:

[Fire Dawn Oni]

00:05:747 - Add note at here and 00:05:919 - here to fit vocal just like you do at before? The intention is good, but the vocals don't have such impact on the timers you pointed. Plus i don't think that next d would be as good as it is now.
00:11:264 - & 00:11:436 - Same as above and rest of same part. ^
00:29:022 (9) - Just saying I like this idea! The tick of slider fit perfectly with the song. Thanks, i played this map on converted and found that using circles won't fit this calm part, that's why i used sliders.

00:47:816 - I know this will break your pattern part if you add a note at here but the piano is really loud so it should be have a note.

I'm gonna think about it. Because i'm only following the vocals. However, following piano strong notes isn't a bad idea too, but i've to look over on these next section (and on the middle of the map too). But i'm ok to follow the piano too. The actual SR allows me to do. Well i've to follow the same structure after and it doesn't sounds bad too imo

00:53:333 - Same as above and the rest of the same part.
00:55:402 - & 00:56:091 - Same as these too. Same blabla as above for both
01:00:747 (65,66,67,68) - It's kinda nazi but the note at here isn't snap with the vocal, consider add some bpm or offset on it? (Maybe you will say you're follow the song's drum beat but you didn't lol, so I mention it.) Well i agree with the argues that i'm not "really" following the vocals which i did previously, howevers the drum beat saves the note. I think adding some bpm / offset will make the map more complicated that it needs. PLayer won't notice that much and will see the 2/1 and 1/1 break without having problems when playing.

Nice catch tho

01:02:126 - & 01:02:816 - How about add note at these two place? It's kinda weird that the beat at this part is kinda full and you didn't put anything on it, plus add these two note wouldn't hurt your pattern in my option. No need to argue more, even while playing, i'm playing those beats haha. Added d k

01:10:316 - Add a note at here? Imo that 1/2 part is too long, add a 1/4 on it will make it balance. Plus consistency pattern. Added


01:13:160 (107) - Change this to k? The piano tone at here is kinda high. Yep, after trying i'm fine with this.


01:15:229 (121) - Swap the note to k? I think the flow is better if you change it. Changing to k makes less impact for the next kdk.
01:16:781 (133) - k at here too? The vocal tone is higher than 01:16:609 (132) - this note. Fixed.
01:17:298 (137,138) - kd at here, the reason is almost same as above. yep

01:18:678 (146) - Same as above reason that I've mentioned, k is better because the piano tone is kinda high.
Already fixed without you said i guess.

01:21:091 (161,162,163) - kkk at here? Firstly the vocal at here is higher than 01:20:574 (157,158,159) - three of these. Secondly you can have a symmetry (ddd first then kkk.). Why not, let's try this!

01:29:712 (228) - How about big K at here? the hitsound (I mean the song itself hitsound) is quite noticeable and it's kinda loud, so a big K wouldn't hurt imo.

Imo i'm using finishers when i feel it needs, most on the time on the bullets, end of a section or this kind of stuff. I don't feel using finishers for these kind of notes.

01:30:402 (232) - D here and 01:30:316 (231) - delete this? The reason is same as above. With my argues that sounds obvious and logic lol.

01:34:712 (257,258) - k k? the tone is same as 01:34:022 (254,255) - here and did it as k k. I'm using the beats here, but i feel like it's more logic having k here.


01:35:574 - Why you didn't put a note at here? the drum snare at here is quite loud. Vocals following.

01:46:953 (356) - k? the tone is just same as 01:46:091 (350) - this and you put as k. Yes, you're right.

01:56:436 (437) - d here? the sound at here isn't have any drum snare or high-pitched sound so it would be better to keep as d. Fixed


02:08:160 (525) - Same as above I've mentioned, should be k. Prefer keeping this as a triple d, i feel there would be too much k over here. :<
02:28:678 (676) - k here for the high pitch violin. Fixed

02:42:298 (8) - If you hear properly the tone is actually lower than other two, consider change to d? Personnal preference for triple k imo. No real argues to provide here but i don't feel it'll have such an impact.

03:19:712 - Hmm? It seem missing a note because the vocal isn't end yet at here. Since the vocal isn't on the 1/1 i don't add a note here. Same for the others ofc.

03:23:505 (94) - change this note to k and 03:23:160 (93) - this as d? the vocal tone is said the reason itself. Fixed
03:34:367 (155) - k here for the better flow? Pattern structure wanted here.
03:47:643 (251) - Same as above what I've mentioned, should k. blabla
03:58:160 (333) - k, the tone at here is higher too. Fixed
04:20:747 (514) - Same. Yee
04:47:988 (723) - d here? I think kkd is better flow for break instead of kkk. Fixed and one of the k before which weren't usefull at all.
Also how about change the last note to spinner for fun?
Last not should be kept, but i'm curious about a spinner cause i don't see how long i should put it.

Overall it's a solid map.
Good Luck

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue

General

I think HP4 is too easy. Try HP5 or HP6? Gonna change to HP5 yep.

Turn off "Widescreen Support" Nope Storyboard.

Fire Dawn Oni

02:17:902 - Delete Why? I would delete the current pattern made with before.

04:27:126 (565) - d yep due to beat sound.

04:55:747 (774) - d No real reson for. Why?

...OMG I can't found another mistake in this beatmap

Looks your beatmap no problem

Sorry about my shit mod ;w;
GL with Rank !