1. Immortal (5,69 stars, 1956 notes)

-M4x wrote:

I felt like modding today lol

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1. 04:42:874 (1) - This is very difficult now... I love how you set the spinnerends in this part, but I see a problem with that. If you use for example the Default-Skin, one won't see the following circle coming. I would leave it for now, but if a BN brings it up you might have to change it :/ - yea it will get changed if many people tell me to
2. 05:32:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice part! I like it. - thanks
3. 05:12:616 (1) - Why did you stop using different Hitsounds/samples from here on? It was so cool..!! Please add them to this part, especially cuz it's the final part of the map. - i left the hitsounding to FCL cause I don't know what I'm doing
4. 06:45:188 (1,2) - This jump is a bit too big imo. Could you reduce that a little? - It's not even that big. I'm able to hit it nicely.

Good work guys, keep it up! Overall one of my favorite maps!

I hope this helps a bit. Good luck with ranking this!

-M4x

-M4x wrote:

I felt like modding today lol

General and Storyboard

1. I really love the Storyboard, but since this is a collab it would be cool if you could fade in the names when a new part begins! The SB is wip now, so all things that are needed will be added
   
2. You could use grey combo colors in the parts where the Storyboard is "colored" black and white. This would emphasize the atmosphere even more. I will do it later
3. Some of the "slider-glowing-effects" are not following the cursor perfectly. For example here 04:00:274 (1,1) - But I think thats minor and you can ignore this lol. waji pls

EDIT: Quoting AIMod

1. This map may need an epilepsy warning, cuz of the storyboard. probably is okay
2. There is a file missing in the beatmap folder, called "Mist3.png". waji pls
3. The beatmaps filesize is bigger than 10MB. Reduce that. nah, it's fine because we have 7+min marathon with 7+min sb lol

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1. 01:07:474 (1,2,3) - The arrangement of the notes looks very unclean. Try something like This instead. did something similar
2. 01:13:816 (6,7,8) - I think it would be better if you use This rhythm, cuz this makes the "Not" clickable. blue tick feels stronger that red tick, so my option looks right
3. 01:17:074 (1,1) - - In my opinion these extended sliders are pretty cool, but you ingnore beats this way. I think it's not a big issue but consider making them 1/2 sliders, since you're not using them consistantly. For example: 01:28:045 (1,2) - here. The sound has provided 1/1, so it's should be right. I had used 3/4 because 01:17:416 (2) - obviously pretty strong and should be clickable. Also I am not fun to use only one rhythm for same sections in my maps, so why not xD
4. 01:32:674 (2,3,4) - This pattern can be improved. Rotating 01:32:845 (4) - by 15° should do it. This way the circles fade straight into the slider. sure, fixed
5. 01:34:045 (3,4,5,6,7) - I don't know about this. Since it's a very exciting this is kinda flow-breaking. I would prefer a non stacked stream here. hmmm, will listen more opinions
6. 01:44:844 (5,6,7,8,1) - The vocals are starting here. So increasing the spacing by a little would fit very well i guess! Not by much! only like from 0.7 (I think you used 0.7 here) to 0.8. This applies accordingly for all of the following streams, also later in the song!I hadn't mapped to vocal, so it's fine I guess. On the other hand your idea seems not bad, so I also will listen more opinions about this and probably will change
7. 01:53:074 (2) - Only slightly but putting the 2 Here would look and flow better! nah, it's fine too
8. 02:44:159 (1,2,3) - You missed two beats here! It should be like This oups
9. 02:44:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why did you stop using Normal/Drum here? Change that please! probably I forgot, fixed
10. 02:48:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just awesome!! noice, thanks
11. 02:57:530 (5) - Why no stream turn here? I would change that since you used one in every other stream! nah, I didn't map to vocal
12. 03:07:988 (4,1,2,1) - I like that part!! (Making you smile so that you won't flip the table after my next point)
13. 03:17:759 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't stacked correctly :3 (sry for nazi) probably fixed
14. 03:27:359 (1,2) - I would stack them (For consistancy, you know) unstack is fine too, i guess
15. 03:49:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't know but this looks kinda "not nice". Condsider fixing this. idk, looks fine imo
16. 03:50:674 (1,1) - Ah, these babys again.. well yea, maybe stick to them maybe don't, your choice.
17. 04:00:616 (1) - That curve could look better :3 fixed a bit

deetz wrote:

01:14:331 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - hp rain ! xD why not? NC spam is good fit to song and hitsounds (finish spam I mean lol)

01:20:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels like poop cuz of the linear acceleration u have going on here. the way u have it is speed up from 2->3, slow down across the whole stream then speed back up, all in a straight line. generally you want to avoid linear acceleration so you could increase the angles between these objects and it would play nicer thx okay, I had changed the placement of 01:20:845 (8) - , now the circle be below that stream, guess that it's better now

01:21:188 (1) - now thats a strong beat for a slidertail u even hitsounded it lol added finish

01:29:074 (8) - wat happened to the jump fck, I can't understand what you mean

01:32:159 (1) - same as before

01:54:616 (2,3,4) - where's the emphasis with this, leaving 01:54:959 - passive just feels odd and causes polarity problems I mapped this section when I was drugged

02:57:874 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - u could use a rhythm like this to emphasize the new sound and make it more interesting http://puu.sh/nIRTm/a739666ff3.jpg

03:03:359 (1,2,1,2) - ^ yea u get what i mean noice

03:47:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these don't really feel that special because the whole section had similar spacing lol fixed I guess

03:52:045 (1) - 03:54:788 (1) - 04:01:645 (1) - 04:04:388 (1) - 04:07:131 (1) - G

Strategas wrote:

[Tutorial Stage]

increase the offset by 30 thanks I tried

I guess someone pointed out elipsy thing already y

Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap4.wav
normal-hitclap4.wav Will keep since I haven't finish hitsounding

02:46:559 (5) - unsnapped green line which doesn't really apply your sv change and hitsound uh, fixed
01:39:016 - another unsnapped green line but it doesn't matter much just pointing out. too

00:30:102 (5,6,1) - 00:35:588 (5,6,1) - http://i.imgur.com/KsfywqR.png this kind of rhythm seems much better Not think so because the vocal had finished on white tick, not red
00:41:074 (4,5,1) - could do something here too if you apply the above cuz 00:42:788 (1) - doesn't really sound right to me

00:50:330 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - you could definetely make something cooler here with the emphasis My fantasy is shit

01:22:045 (4) - move to 234x,289y makes the patern look better imo ok

01:34:045 (3,4,5,6,7) - stacks of 5 sux one more comment about it and I will changing them

01:57:531 (1,2,1) - zzz flow I am suck in flow

02:10:045 (6) - seems really out of place because it's the only note that doesn't follow your paterning don't see problem with him lol

02:22:216 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - hi Veyron fuck

02:38:502 (2) - move further from 02:38:331 (1) - eh okay

02:44:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - rip hitsounds not rip

02:45:359 (6,7,1) - this is so close to the previous burst it might seem as a stream jump why not follow the repeat slider pattern as your did before? seems good

02:49:388 (2) - overmap so extend 02:48:959 (1) - to the blue tick pls not, it's my best patterns in my life. Hope a little overmapp doen't good reason to be removed

02:50:416 (2,4,6) - hey calm down budy the stream ended already no

02:54:959 (2,3,4) - move 4 more up, something like 247x, 204y ok

03:03:016 (5,6,1,2,1) - the flow from 1,2 and 2,1 is pretty awkward because you played 03:03:016 (5,6,1) - circular way then you suddenly make a differently spaced line jump to 2, which has a next to it note 1 which makes even more weird movement. I suggest moving those obhect to the left side of screen, something like http://i.imgur.com/4y2J5AG.jpg it might be kind of a bad example but I still hope you change that patern somehow Had tried to my best

03:07:988 (4,1,2,1,1) - this doesn't play very comfy either, you have lots of movement into a repeat arrow which actually repeats more than once into heavy movement again. I can kind of see your intention here, but maybe try making this play a bit neater should be fine imo

03:09:188 (1,2,3,4,1) - this burst looks uneven too me n

03:17:416 (5,6,1) - move 6 up so it play neater something around 144x, 286y y

03:20:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - all these overlaps so ugly af lol not think so

Strategas wrote:

Maakkeli best finnish mapper - Maakkeli best finnish meme

-M4x wrote:

I felt like modding today lol

General and Storyboard

1. I really love the Storyboard, but since this is a collab it would be cool if you could fade in the names when a new part begins! later wip
2. Some of the "slider-glowing-effects" are not following the cursor perfectly. For example here 04:00:274 (1,1) - But I think thats minor and you can ignore this lol. fixed

EDIT: Quoting AIMod

1. There is a file missing in the beatmap folder, called "Mist3.png". fixed

Asserin wrote:

~Hello!
#Discord

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1. 00:19:504 (6,1) - What you about => https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4793544 seems good
2. 00:48:989 (1,2) - Why you put cirlces there if you put slider there 00:46:246 (1) - Its same part so it should be same pattern .-. but not necessary to be so
3. 01:16:590 (1) - Shouldnt be stacked
4. 01:17:618 (3,4,5,6,7,9) - Correct this blanket plox lol
5. 01:22:932 (2) - x 384|191 y and it will be more readable imo.dont want to ruin stack
6. 01:34:075 (3,4,5,6,7) - What is wrong with ds here ? Check it 01:28:589 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same part other ds :c Correct it
7. 01:28:589 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Btw its uneven => https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4793591 <= See red circle is over stream XD Its +-1* to rotate
8. 01:44:018 (4) - It should has same ds like 01:43:675 (2,3) - For estetic and dont mad :d
9. 01:44:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Come on i know you can make it better ;-; Or if you dont want you can make it more simple.
10. 01:47:789 (3,4,5,6,7) - U can stack it like "5" on "3" => 01:47:103 (3) - This one
11. 01:49:246 (3,4,5,6) - Again dont understend
12. 02:10:075 (6) - Aaaaaaaaaaaaa so ugly overlap :C
13. 02:30:989 (7) - ^ Not overlap there but still to close XD
14. 03:08:361 (2) - It should be two circles cus loud rhythm is there and it should be c able imo
15. 03:15:389 (2) - Why you didnt stack it with 03:14:361 (3) - ???

Asserin wrote:

~Hello!
#Discord

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1. 04:23:618 (1) - Its a little unever at the top side .-. - i tried
2. 04:35:104 (2) - Really ? Why it isnt stacked ? Why you put it there lol. Come on 04:34:589 (1,2,3,4) - Correct this part plox i dont understend it for real ;-; - what's wrong about it? It's just some custom stacks and they look cool imo. They look fucking autistic with HR but I don't make my maps for mod play so xd
3. 04:38:361 (3,4) - ^ 04:37:332 (1,2) - There you make good pattern why u change it so bad ;-;
4. 04:40:075 (1,2) - ^ - i don't understand what is wrong with these. They flow fine (I testplayed like 4 times xD). The flow would literally be the same even if I gave these more spacing. This is not pishi's King For a Day with those custom note stacks under sliders (which don't play good at all but they look cool). This is super low BPM so I don't think there is anything wrong with these.
5. 04:57:561 (4,5) - Ugly overlap imo - subjective but changed
6. 06:06:818 (3) - Its bad pleace for this cirlce imo it has weird flow there - testplayed many times. Still flows fine. Sharp angles usually flow fine.
7. 06:18:046 (4,5,6,7) - Again this changed ds on streams guys you need keep same ds for same parts .-. Nobody cares its extra diff
8. 06:24:904 (3,4,5,6) - ^
9. 06:29:018 (4,5,6,7) - ^
10. 06:38:618 (3,4,5,6) - ^ and other the same - I'll change these if these really become a problem. I don't think anyone has ever pointed this kind of stuff in my diffs/maps ever so I'm gonna keep them for now.
11. 06:44:704 (1) - Rotate 45 imo it will be more readable - Didn't rotate that much