00:19:432 (7) - You may want to change this to
k since the vocal pitch is higher than the hits surrounding it.
00:24:494 (28) - ^ The pitch is the same as the next hit, and you did a similar thing at 00:34:085 (67).
00:27:957 (42,43) - Just a personal opinion, but this should have Ctrl + G done on it, then change 00:28:490 (44) to
k. The way you've matched the
ks here seems to be matched to the music box (let's call it that); if so, you could possibly Ctrl + G 00:27:158 (39,40) instead.
00:29:423 (47,48,49,50,51,52) - I'd personally delete this portion, since adding hits in a quiet section doesn't sound good imo. Also, it creates a transitional effect into the second half of the quiet section. You can do whatever you want tho.
00:36:616 (78) - I realize you matched the instrumentals here because it's on a different place within the measure compared to places such as 00:31:821 where you didn't match to the instrumentals. However, I still think you should add the hits at these places where you omitted, such as the one mentioned above, and other similar places such as 00:35:018 in the quiet section. Idk, it just felt kinda inconsistent when I played through it.
01:06:190 - Add a
d here. You can clearly hear an instrumental sound here, and it kinda interrupts the flow. To compensate for the break loss, you could add a break by deleting 01:07:789 (314,315) which doesn't have a sound.
01:07:922 (316) - You can change this to
k to match to the vocals and instrumentals. Even further, you could change 01:08:055 (317) to
k as well, and Ctrl + G 01:08:188 (318,319,320) for a better match with the instrumentals, like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/443195601:08:721 (322) - Change to
d? The background instrumentals aren't present here (the snare drum-like sound I think), and vocals aren't present either.
01:09:121 (327,328,329,330,331) - This rhythm should be reworked as there are instrumentals that are missed. Something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4431966 may work
01:11:119 (343) - You could change this to
k for the snare drum sound.
01:13:384 (363,364) - Ctrl + G for the same reason as above.
01:15:115 (378) - You could change to
d as there's a clear bass drum sound here.
01:15:781 (384) - Change to
k? Then Ctrl + G 01:16:048 (387,388) would make a better match the instrumentals, with the
ks matching the snare drums once again.
01:16:448 - This rhythm is absolutely beautiful.
01:18:579 (406) - I'm guessing this is a
d for contrast with the next hit which is vocals. However, I personally like this as a
k better.
01:18:845 (408,409,410,411,412,413,414) - This could be reworked too imo.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4432058 01:21:510 (432) - Change to
d to match the bass drum and because there's no snare drum, and because the vocals are lower.
01:22:842 (444) - You can change this to
k if you want to match the snare drum.
01:26:172 (472,473) - You may want to delete this for a nice emphasis on the vocals.
01:26:705 (477) - Change to
k for the snare drum.
01:27:504 (483,484,485,486) - You could switch the colours of these four hits for the same reasons as before. The colour change on 01:27:904 (486) is most optional.
01:28:304 (490,491) - Ctrl + G matches the snare drum and the vocal pitch better.
01:29:369 (500,501,502) - Switch the colours for the same reason as above?
01:30:435 (509) - You can change this to
k. Alternatively, 01:30:568 (510) may be changed to match the vocals.
01:33:499 (534,535,536,537) -
k d d k is possible to match the snare drums, and the first k d to match the vocals.
01:34:698 (544,545,546,547) -
k d k k is possible to match the snare drums and the k k to match the vocals.
01:35:763 (550) - You may change this to
d to match the pitch of the vocals, as you did at 01:38:960 (568).
01:47:086 (622,623) - Ctrl + G would have the
k matched to the vocals and have a
d to contrast with the instrumentals at 01:47:352 (624).
01:52:415 (668,669,670,671) - Switch the colours of this pattern? A
k on 01:52:415 (668) works to match the vocals, and a
k on 01:52:681 (671) works to match the instrumentals.
01:58:809 (732,733,734,735,736,737,738) - This can also be reworked like this perhaps:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4435774 The current rhythm is too monotonous at 01:58:809 (732,733,734,735,736) imo.
02:02:805 (772) - You can change this to
k to match the instrumentals. Alternatively, you could change 02:03:072 (774) to
k to match the instrumentals.
02:04:804 (792,793) - Ctrl + G would match the instrumentals and vocals better imo.
02:07:867 (814) - You could change this to
D to contrast with the surrounding hits and to emphasize the highest point of the vocals at 02:08:666 (818). Same at 03:25:130 (1402) and 05:04:774 (174).
02:08:666 (818) - Best part of every kiai and the whole song right at this hit <3
02:12:663 - I think the kiai should end here. I'm pretty particular on stylistic elements such as the kiai time.
02:16:260 (875,876,877,878) - Switching the colours of these hits would work better to match the pitch of the instrumental melody.
02:18:525 (895,896,897) - ^
02:20:256 (910,911,912,913) - ^
02:22:921 (931) - You could change this to
d to contrast the vocal pitch and the instrumental sound difference.
02:26:118 (949) - Change to
k? The instrumental sound is more similar to the next hit than the previous.
02:26:384 - It wouldn't hurt to add a hit here.
02:27:050 (955,956,957,958) - Ctrl + G would work to match the
ks to both the vocals and instrumentals.
02:28:782 (970,971,972) - ^
02:29:448 (976,977) - ^ If you want to match to the vocals.
02:30:381 (984,985,986) - If you switch the colours of these hits, it could work better for the
k on 02:30:381 (984) to match a similar sound that was heard at 02:30:248 (983) and
d k for a nice contrast on the vocal pitch.
02:34:377 (1006,1007) - You could change these to
d to show a difference in instrumental sound with the next two hits, and you could also add a
k at 02:34:910 if you want to.
02:44:767 (1076,1077,1078,1079,1080) - You could switch the colours of these hits to match the instrumentals better at 02:44:901 (1077,1078).
02:49:297 (1101) - You can change this to
k to match to the vocals which I think you're doing here; it also matches the instrumentals.
02:49:896 - You can add a hit here.
02:54:891 (1141,1142) - Ctrl + G may be better to have the
k be matched to the high pitched drum sound at 02:55:024 (1142).
02:55:424 (1144) - You can change this to
d to put a bit more emphasis on the vocals.
03:04:216 (1211) - You can change this to
k to match the similar sound at 03:04:083 (1210).
03:07:146 (1240) - You can change this to
d for a slight more variety.
03:07:946 (1247,1248) - Ctrl + G works to bring out the vocals with the
k at 03:08:079 (1248).
03:10:610 (1272,1273,1274,1275) - Ctrl + G for consistency with 01:53:347 (678,679,680), it also sounds better. You may also want to change 03:11:076 (1276) to
k if you want, or just have the whole triplet as
ddd as it was originally.
03:16:072 (1324,1325) - ^ for a better match with the vocals.
03:19:136 (1355,1356) - ^
03:19:669 (1359,1360) - You could also change this to
dd if you want to bring out the vocals at the end of the triplet.
03:35:254 (1459) - Change to
d. The
k matching is inconsistent with 03:34:722 (1457). If you accept this suggestion, you should also Ctrl + G 03:35:521 (1460,1461,1462) for contrast and consistency of matching.
03:43:780 -
It's also possible to create a kiai here. It's a pretty high-paced part. ok maybe not cuz the kiai would be insanely long lel
03:47:777 (1536,1537) - Ctrl + G for a nice match with the vocals 03:47:777 (1536,1537).
03:49:908 (1554,1555,1556) - Switch the colours of these hits? It'll help match the vocals and match the instrumental sound at 03:49:908 (1554).
03:53:105 (1579) - The drums are slightly higher pitched here and it'll also create a good contrast with the next finisher, so change to
k?
03:54:970 (1587) - Change to
k to keep the consistency of matching the instrumentals at 03:54:171 (1583). Same at 03:55:769 (1591). You may also want to change some surrounding hits.
03:58:833 (1607,1608) - Ctrl + G will have a
k better match with the high vocals and the instrumental sounds.
04:08:291 (1681,1682) - ^
04:11:489 (1707,1708) - ^ To match the instrumental sound at 04:11:755 (1708).
04:14:686 (1730,1731) - ^
04:22:146 (1785) - You should change to
D since the vocal pitch is lower. Similarly, 04:25:343 (1799) should be changed for the lower instrumental sound.
04:22:546 (1786,1787) - Maybe change to
d d to contrast the instrumental sound at 04:22:945 (1788)?
04:27:740 (1801) - You can change this to
k to match a similar sounding xylophone sound at 04:28:274 (1803).
04:36:266 (1827,1828) - Ctrl + G for the same reason as above.
04:34:401 (1822,1823,1824) - Switching the colours would match the pitch of the xylophone and the vocals.
04:41:595 (1844,1845) - Ctrl + G for the same reason as above.
04:47:722 (16,17) - ^ to have the
k matched to the vocals, probably one of the more optional changes tho.
04:51:452 (48) - You could change this to
k to match the high vocals.
04:58:646 (126,127,128,129,130) - Having this pattern start and end with a
k would sound better imo.
05:02:109 (165) - Idk, but this slider seemed unnecessary to me, and could be made just like 03:22:466.
05:08:504 (202) - You could change this to
K for a greater contrast with the surrounding hits.
05:09:036 (204) - This could be changed to
k for the instrumental difference and vocals.
05:10:635 (1) - This spinner should end at 05:12:500 for the vocals imo.
05:14:498 (5,6) - Ctrl + G may work to have the
k match the instrumental sound at 05:14:631. Same at 05:30:617 (104).
05:17:828 (25) - Could be changed to
k for the same reason as above. Adding a hit could also be possible at 05:17:695.
05:19:693 (35,36) -
d d works better to contrast the instrumentals at 05:19:960 (37).
05:20:892 (42) - This can also be changed to
d for the same reason as above.
05:22:491 (55,56) - Ctrl + G works better to match the instrumentals imo.
05:23:956 (67,68) - ^
05:34:613 (126) - You may change to
k here for the same reasons as before.
05:35:412 - May I ask why this inherited point is at 47% lel xD Change to 45% if you want to be precise:P