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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年3月2日 at 21:47:07

Artist: cillia
Title: Ringo Uri no Utakata Shoujo
Tags: 歌幡メイジ The Transient Apple Salesgirl yukkedoluce kyaami vocaloid vocaloid4 Gahata Meiji Gahata Mage
BPM: 225.2
Filesize: 8650kb
Play Time: 05:36
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「cillia - Ringo Uri no Utakata Shoujo」
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yeaah countinue map cillia
blessssss her
blessssssssssss these two people too

standard: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/517120

Can't even fc my map gg
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Hai, (M4M if You accept My map) via pm site

>General
  • SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046 delete red colour in notepad of this map
  • untick countdown
  • Kiai unsnap, Check AiMod
  • Offset Like early with notes
  • I think this map can to be more to mapping till end with adjusting for reducing patterns to fitting music

>Apple

I realised is full of spam ctrl g and first mod on this map, so sorry for a lot suggestion and my simple english, Hope this helpful with my lot emphasize and contrast suggestion for this map and hope you understand.
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Hai, (M4M if You accept My map) via pm site

>General
  • SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046 delete red colour in notepad of this map lol I don't know why it will become this but ok
  • untick countdown ok
  • Kiai unsnap, Check AiMod ^
  • Offset Like early with notes eeh I don't think so? it's fine when i play
  • I think this map can to be more to mapping till end with adjusting for reducing patterns to fitting music ahh since the song is fading out I can't really map it sorry

>Apple

I realised is full of spam ctrl g and first mod on this map, so sorry for a lot suggestion and my simple english, Hope this helpful with my lot emphasize and contrast suggestion for this map and hope you understand.


Thanks for the useful mod! I've apply other that I'ven't reply. Well mostly when I map fast song I'll take flow as the primary and ignore the tone and vocal. So these is quite help me, thanks!
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Hello, Mod request from chat


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Disable Countdown
Maybe OD=6 but that's up to you


Apple

00:20:098 - You could delete this note, since there is no voice here, If you do so change 00:19:965 - to kat
00:36:217 - How about a kat there? Background music is high pitched as well as the voice
01:01:527 (258,259) - ctrl+g? Pitch is higher in the first note
01:16:181 - d? It's to emphasize the drum kick
01:27:771 - How about this?
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01:33:899 - I think it's more convenient to have a break here, move that note to 01:33:632
01:41:092 - Delete?
02:05:070 (792,793) - Ctrl+g this?
02:47:032 (1087,1088) - Ctrl+g? Voice is lower here
02:47:698 (1090,1091) - ^
02:57:289 - Move that note 1/2 to the left and change to don, I think this part needs more the break lol
03:35:654 - How about a kat here? There's a guitar sound. If you did so change 03:35:787 to don
04:14:819 (1729,1730) - Delete these kats? If you did so change 04:14:686 - to kat

Well, that's all, I couldn't find too many flaws, is a good map =w=b
Good luck!
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Sorry for saying about offset, my bad. I just tired and rather unusual for playing flow patterns
Yeah, fast song is fit if mapped with flow or vocal. follow music just bad for playing ( I've been tried with mostly follow like drum, and I get the result )
I Just Think in Kiai parts has harsh part to playing, but its fine cuz for Approve map. Just this from me, bye sir.
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Surono wrote:
Sorry for saying about offset, my bad. I just tired and rather unusual for playing flow patterns
Yeah, fast song is fit if mapped with flow or vocal. follow music just bad for playing ( I've been tried with mostly follow like drum, and I get the result )
I Just Think in Kiai parts has harsh part to playing, but its fine cuz for Approve map. Just this from me, bye sir.


lol I guess you missed my point. What I've mean is I'm suck on mapping fast song, and you mod is really great to me and I've change a lot of things.

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Hello, Mod request from chat


General

Disable Countdown oops ok
Maybe OD=6 but that's up to you hmm ok


Apple

00:20:098 - You could delete this note, since there is no voice here, If you do so change 00:19:965 - to kat ...but there's have voice..?
00:36:217 - How about a kat there? Background music is high pitched as well as the voice yeah sounds fine
01:01:527 (258,259) - ctrl+g? Pitch is higher in the first note ok
01:16:181 - d? It's to emphasize the drum kick yeah
01:27:771 - How about this? ^
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01:33:899 - I think it's more convenient to have a break here, move that note to 01:33:632 I find it weird but I'll consider it
01:41:092 - Delete? I've follow the piano sound here
02:05:070 (792,793) - Ctrl+g this? yep
02:47:032 (1087,1088) - Ctrl+g? Voice is lower here You're right but I'd prefer d on the first beat
02:47:698 (1090,1091) - ^
02:57:289 - Move that note 1/2 to the left and change to don, I think this part needs more the break lol ok
03:35:654 - How about a kat here? There's a guitar sound. If you did so change 03:35:787 to don ^
04:14:819 (1729,1730) - Delete these kats? If you did so change 04:14:686 - to kat I've changed other pattern to make it more fit

Well, that's all, I couldn't find too many flaws, is a good map =w=b
Good luck!



thanks for mod :)
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Hello mint! Here's the Taiko mod that you requested for.


    Apple
  • 01:33:233 - There is a heavy "thump" here in the music. So, I recommend deleting the note at 01:33:366 - so that the "thump" can be emphasized more with a slight 1/2 gap after the don.
    :idea: Additionally, you can also change 01:33:499 - to a kat after applying the changes above so that it flows better with the vocal note.


  • 01:58:942 - This ddd here is placed in an unnatural position that doesn't flow well with the music, try moving the don at 01:59:009 - over to 01:58:875 -?

  • 02:53:959 - This gap here kinda ruins the flow for this part imo. I suggest moving 02:54:092 - over to this spot and then changing it to don. This way, the flow of the note structure will fit better with the music and also, there is a consistency of rhythm with 02:54:758 -
    :idea: Alternatively, you can also just add a don here to fill up a gap. Both method works.


  • 04:06:693 - How about changing this ddk d pattern to a ddd k instead? The placement of the kat improves the flow of this part much better imo

  • 04:50:253 (38) - Change this note to kat? It makes the note structure here feel more solid and stronger when played :3c

  • 04:58:646 (126,127,128,129,130) - Change this pattern to kkkkd? It follows up nicely with 04:58:113 (120,121,122,123,124) - imo

  • 01:52:415 - I highly discourage this double-note pattern because throughout this entire kiai, you've only used triplet and five-note patterns. Suddenly having a double-note pattern come out of nowhere really ruins the flow for this part.
    :?: How about changing it to a triplet pattern or five-note pattern instead?


  • 04:59:045 - ^ Same for this, the flow is severely affected by this sudden double-note pattern. Change it to a triplet/5-note pattern instead?


This is a really really good map! Most of my suggestions only touched on the flow of the note structures and rhythms because those were pretty much the only issues with the map. Other than that, the map is very solid and I hope it gets ranked soon! :D
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Jerry wrote:
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Hello mint! Here's the Taiko mod that you requested for.


    Apple
  • 01:33:233 - There is a heavy "thump" here in the music. So, I recommend deleting the note at 01:33:366 - so that the "thump" can be emphasized more with a slight 1/2 gap after the don.
    :idea: Additionally, you can also change 01:33:499 - to a kat after applying the changes above so that it flows better with the vocal note. yep you're right, fixed


  • 01:58:942 - This ddd here is placed in an unnatural position that doesn't flow well with the music, try moving the don at 01:59:009 - over to 01:58:875 -? Hmm I think current position is fine to me, but I'll take look in next mod

  • 02:53:959 - This gap here kinda ruins the flow for this part imo. I suggest moving 02:54:092 - over to this spot and then changing it to don. This way, the flow of the note structure will fit better with the music and also, there is a consistency of rhythm with 02:54:758 -
    :idea: Alternatively, you can also just add a don here to fill up a gap. Both method works. lol you're right, I was doing this in second parts too


  • 04:06:693 - How about changing this ddk d pattern to a ddd k instead? The placement of the kat improves the flow of this part much better imo ok, seem fit more with vocal too

  • 04:50:253 (38) - Change this note to kat? It makes the note structure here feel more solid and stronger when played :3c

  • 04:58:646 (126,127,128,129,130) - Change this pattern to kkkkd? It follows up nicely with 04:58:113 (120,121,122,123,124) - imo yup

  • 01:52:415 - I highly discourage this double-note pattern because throughout this entire kiai, you've only used triplet and five-note patterns. Suddenly having a double-note pattern come out of nowhere really ruins the flow for this part.
    :?: How about changing it to a triplet pattern or five-note pattern instead?


  • 04:59:045 - ^ Same for this, the flow is severely affected by this sudden double-note pattern. Change it to a triplet/5-note pattern instead? I've changed the second one but I feel first one are fine, I'll look forward to next one


This is a really really good map! Most of my suggestions only touched on the flow of the note structures and rhythms because those were pretty much the only issues with the map. Other than that, the map is very solid and I hope it gets ranked soon! :D


Thanks :)
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17:17 *mintong89 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/866288 cillia - Ringo Uri no Utakata Shoujo]
17:17 mintong89: 这张 ^______^!
17:18 Firce777: 00:39:014 (87,88,89,90) - kddk?
17:18 mintong89: omg ok
17:19 Firce777: 00:58:730 (235) - k
17:19 Firce777: 01:05:924 (299) - d
17:20 mintong89: okok!
17:22 Firce777: 02:33:312 (1000) - d
17:23 Firce777: 03:05:948 (1230,1231,1232,1233,1234) - kdddk
17:23 mintong89: wow ok
17:23 mintong89: good
17:27 Firce777: 04:43:460 (1) - move to 04:42:394 -
17:27 Firce777: 04:43:993 - add slider
17:27 mintong89: 噫反过来可以吗
17:28 Firce777: 可以
17:28 Firce777: 05:17:828 (25) - d
17:28 Firce777: 好了 懶了
17:29 mintong89: 好 omg 谢谢 >_<!
17:29 mintong89: 你发osu forum吧
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17:17 *mintong89 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/866288 cillia - Ringo Uri no Utakata Shoujo]
17:17 mintong89: 这张 ^______^!
17:18 Firce777: 00:39:014 (87,88,89,90) - kddk?
17:18 mintong89: omg ok
17:19 Firce777: 00:58:730 (235) - k
17:19 Firce777: 01:05:924 (299) - d
17:20 mintong89: okok!
17:22 Firce777: 02:33:312 (1000) - d
17:23 Firce777: 03:05:948 (1230,1231,1232,1233,1234) - kdddk
17:23 mintong89: wow ok
17:23 mintong89: good
17:27 Firce777: 04:43:460 (1) - move to 04:42:394 -
17:27 Firce777: 04:43:993 - add slider
17:27 mintong89: 噫反过来可以吗
17:28 Firce777: 可以
17:28 Firce777: 05:17:828 (25) - d
17:28 Firce777: 好了 懶了
17:29 mintong89: 好 omg 谢谢 >_<!
17:29 mintong89: 你发osu forum吧


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OD稍微高一点?长图od5给的pp略少了 >.<
00:45:408 (114,115,116) -116听起来有点像k欸
00:47:940 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - kkkkddddk感觉更适合这个00:47:407 (133) -位置些
01:08:255 - 好像能加个k和前面的ddd d呼应一下
TAT歌里有k k k的节奏但是和鼓音混杂在一起于是晕掉了@ @
01:50:816 (652,653,654,655,656) - kkkkd?
01:52:415 (668,669,670,671) - 这里全图唯一的二连有点不大明白欸 求解释;w;
01:53:880 (682,683,684) - 虽然kkd和ddk都很贴不过感觉往后接下ddk比较好?
01:56:677 (712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722) - ddd k k kkddk d试试?(原因说不出来凭感觉的www
02:23:187 (932) - 感觉有点突兀 补上02:22:654 - 或者删掉单独 d k dkk?
02:24:253 (938) - 02:25:319 (944) - 同上
02:51:561 (1117,1118,1119,1120,1121) - 02:55:291 (1142,1143,1144,1145,1146) - >n<有没有除了同色带过以外更好的方法咩
03:05:415 (1221,1222,1223,1224,1225,1226,1227,1228,1229,1230,1231,1232,1233) - kdddkdddkkddk?(03:05:948 (1229) - 的音听起来要比前两个长一点的样子
03:14:473 (1306,1307,1308,1309,1310,1311,1312,1313,1314) -kkddkkkkd可以吗;w; (dkkkdkkkd苦手表示/runs)
04:00:565 (1622,1623,1624,1625,1626) - 感觉还是k更适合钢琴些;w;
04:36:266 (1826) - 实际打好像没什么不正常233 但是editor看随着乐句分跟着八音盒节奏还是有点不太习惯(语死早无视掉这个就好orz)
04:43:460 (1) - 这里要是能换成note体现出来那种逐渐逼近的紧迫感就好了
05:00:377 (147) - d?
后面可以加料到八音盒前吗 这样成绩结算界面就能听到八音盒了(runs)


又被安利了首曲子 看了歌词和PV简直泪目TAT
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apple
OD稍微高一点?长图od5给的pp略少了 >.< 好!!
00:45:408 (114,115,116) -116听起来有点像k欸 ok
00:47:940 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - kkkkddddk感觉更适合这个00:47:407 (133) -位置些 hmm 我考虑看看
01:08:255 - 好像能加个k和前面的ddd d呼应一下 好像有点太难了233 这里歌比较安静所以要保持容易点
TAT歌里有k k k的节奏但是和鼓音混杂在一起于是晕掉了@ @
01:50:816 (652,653,654,655,656) - kkkkd?
01:52:415 (668,669,670,671) - 这里全图唯一的二连有点不大明白欸 求解释;w; 好吧 太多人投诉我就该惹
01:53:880 (682,683,684) - 虽然kkd和ddk都很贴不过感觉往后接下ddk比较好? 不明白 (
01:56:677 (712,713,714,715,716,717,718,719,720,721,722) - ddd k k kkddk d试试?(原因说不出来凭感觉的www 先保留着 想保留ddk ddk ddkkk 的节奏
02:23:187 (932) - 感觉有点突兀 补上02:22:654 - 或者删掉单独 d k dkk? 这里跟着鼓节奏的所以先看看
02:24:253 (938) - 02:25:319 (944) - 同上
02:51:561 (1117,1118,1119,1120,1121) - 02:55:291 (1142,1143,1144,1145,1146) - >n<有没有除了同色带过以外更好的方法咩 同色打起来比较累 虐人(
03:05:415 (1221,1222,1223,1224,1225,1226,1227,1228,1229,1230,1231,1232,1233) - kdddkdddkkddk?(03:05:948 (1229) - 的音听起来要比前两个长一点的样子 ok
03:14:473 (1306,1307,1308,1309,1310,1311,1312,1313,1314) -kkddkkkkd可以吗;w; (dkkkdkkkd苦手表示/runs)
04:00:565 (1622,1623,1624,1625,1626) - 感觉还是k更适合钢琴些;w; 好 爽
04:36:266 (1826) - 实际打好像没什么不正常233 但是editor看随着乐句分跟着八音盒节奏还是有点不太习惯(语死早无视掉这个就好orz) 233
04:43:460 (1) - 这里要是能换成note体现出来那种逐渐逼近的紧迫感就好了 好 我考虑看看
05:00:377 (147) - d?
后面可以加料到八音盒前吗 这样成绩结算界面就能听到八音盒了(runs) 好吧


又被安利了首曲子 看了歌词和PV简直泪目TAT


谢啦 :) 要mod可以随时找我 (.
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Wow this map is amazing. I like it :)
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Azulae wrote:
Wow this map is amazing. I like it :)


thanks :D

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00:42:078 (100) - Change this to k but I wanna make a pattern difference from previous part
00:52:336 (183,184,185,186) - Ctrl+G I will consider it, it seem quite odd
01:00:928 (255,256) - ^ but there are guitar at final note?
01:14:050 (369) - Add Finish I don't want because there's no loud sound to let me emphasize it
01:49:351 - Add k here Well I'd prefer to keep empty here because I wanna emphasize the big note
02:15:994 (872,873,874,875,876) - kdddk I will consider it
02:26:384 - Add k here there isn't have any sound...?
02:33:445 (1003) - Delete this there's vocal here...?
02:55:824 (1148) - Add finish same as above reason, there's no loud sound
03:19:269 (1357) - ^
03:42:182 (1499,1500,1501,1502,1503,1504) - ^
04:50:386 (39) - Change This To K k K seem really hard to press
05:22:824 (58,59,60,61) - Ctrl+G I don't see the reason lol
05:36:212 (138) - Add Finish I don't want because the sound is kinda fading out so loud D will kinda noisy


Good Luck With Rank :D


Thanks for mod :)
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