1. Brink (5.02 stars, 1017 notes)

1. Offset 75 (-4)? Something around that seems better.
2. 00:12:316 (3,4,1) - I think a stack would fit better here, dunno, really don't like the triplet atm, it looks to close to the previous slider and idk
3. 01:38:695 (1) - remove NC?
4. 01:34:557 (5,6) - how about arranging them like this http://puu.sh/lCNXE.jpg ? This way they would continue the clockwise circular movement from the circles 01:33:872 (1,2,3,4) - before.
5. 01:39:557 (2,3) - ctrl-g?
6. 02:42:488 (1) - make this similar to 01:58:350 (1,2) - ? I mean with this extra circle at the end.
7. 02:46:281 (1) - ^same with 02:02:143 (1,2) -
8. 02:51:626 (4,5) - uhh, that spacing is so low, I think a big jump into the slider and 1,0x spacing after that would feel nicer
9. 03:52:833 (7,1) - higher spacing wouldn't be bad
10. 04:11:799 (2) - NC here, like with the previous slowed down sliders
11. 04:14:557 (2) - ^
12. 04:20:419 (7) - how about doing it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4043073 . Move (7) to 372|386 and add 04:20:592 (8) - at 139|289. That would make for a nice continuation of the previously used pattern movement 04:19:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and fills the gap.
13. 04:55:937 (2) - NC?
14. 04:58:695 (2) - ^

Tshemmp wrote:

[Brink]

1. Offset 75 (-4)? Something around that seems better.
2. 00:12:316 (3,4,1) - I think a stack would fit better here, dunno, really don't like the triplet atm, it looks to close to the previous slider and idk
3. 01:38:695 (1) - remove NC?
4. 01:34:557 (5,6) - how about arranging them like this http://puu.sh/lCNXE.jpg ? This way they would continue the clockwise circular movement from the circles 01:33:872 (1,2,3,4) - before.
5. 01:39:557 (2,3) - ctrl-g?
6. 02:42:488 (1) - make this similar to 01:58:350 (1,2) - ? I mean with this extra circle at the end.
7. 02:46:281 (1) - ^same with 02:02:143 (1,2) -
8. 02:51:626 (4,5) - uhh, that spacing is so low, I think a big jump into the slider and 1,0x spacing after that would feel nicer
9. 03:52:833 (7,1) - higher spacing wouldn't be bad
10. 04:11:799 (2) - NC here, like with the previous slowed down sliders
11. 04:14:557 (2) - ^
12. 04:20:419 (7) - how about doing it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4043073 . Move (7) to 372|386 and add 04:20:592 (8) - at 139|289. That would make for a nice continuation of the previously used pattern movement 04:19:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and fills the gap.
13. 04:55:937 (2) - NC?
14. 04:58:695 (2) - ^

Tshemmp wrote:

[Brink]

1. Offset 75 (-4)? Something around that seems better.
2. 00:12:316 (3,4,1) - I think a stack would fit better here, dunno, really don't like the triplet atm, it looks to close to the previous slider and idk yes
3. 01:38:695 (1) - remove NC? Okay
4. 01:34:557 (5,6) - how about arranging them like this http://puu.sh/lCNXE.jpg ? This way they would continue the clockwise circular movement from the circles 01:33:872 (1,2,3,4) - before. Okay
5. 01:39:557 (2,3) - ctrl-g? Im not a fan of squarejumps
6. 02:42:488 (1) - make this similar to 01:58:350 (1,2) - ? I mean with this extra circle at the end.
7. 02:46:281 (1) - ^same with 02:02:143 (1,2) -
8. 02:51:626 (4,5) - uhh, that spacing is so low, I think a big jump into the slider and 1,0x spacing after that would feel nicer
9. 03:52:833 (7,1) - higher spacing wouldn't be bad
10. 04:11:799 (2) - NC here, like with the previous slowed down sliders k
11. 04:14:557 (2) - ^ k
12. 04:20:419 (7) - how about doing it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4043073 . Move (7) to 372|386 and add 04:20:592 (8) - at 139|289. That would make for a nice continuation of the previously used pattern movement 04:19:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and fills the gap. I'd like a little break there
13. 04:55:937 (2) - NC? yes
14. 04:58:695 (2) - ^

FCL wrote:

o/

• [General]

1. standard combo colours look is not good. Try this Okay
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 251,32,103
   Combo2 : 179,4,198
   Combo3 : 19,232,249
   Combo4 : 254,150,252

2. uncheck countdown, i thinks it's not necessary Okay

• [k nice]

1. 00:01:454 - hitsounds here is too loud. I recommend you to reduce the sound to 40% Will fix when more suggest it
2. 00:02:143 (2) - make him symmetrical, so it's will be look better Ive tried
3. 00:03:523 (2) - just suggestion: stack slider with end of 00:02:143 (2) - That looks weird
4. 00:33:178 (1,2,3,4) - hmm, i think that here spacing is too large. In fact is here have nice sound for jumps, but they don't should be so large Map is for app, and sliderjumps are very easy, its fine
5. 00:39:902 (4,5,1) - em, looks a bit rough. Curved flow will be fine here I think it fits with (3)
6. 00:49:730 (4) - same, try to stack him with end of 00:48:006 (1) - No
7. 00:52:488 (5) - i don't like rotation of slider here. So is fine http://puu.sh/lE5uG/c766e9c075.jpg Improved blank
8. 00:53:523 (1) - stack with end 00:52:488 (5) - Not necessary, looks cool the current way
9. 00:54:557 (2) - try to make blanket with 00:53:523 (1) - , will be look great. http://puu.sh/lE5zz/4340a0c540.jpg Its fine
10. 00:55:247 (3,6) - stack maybe?
11. 01:03:523 (4) - same don't like rotations http://puu.sh/lE5D1/f01ce50764.jpg Well, for me it looks fine
12. 01:11:109 (3) - red dot looks weird here, curved maybe? Moved the red dot a bit up, looks better now
13. 01:24:902 (3) - stack with end of 01:23:523 (3) - Isnt noticeable anyway
14. 01:25:247 (4) - make a more distance, it's look randomly now It has a cool movement in it
15. 01:30:419 (4) - same as 00:02:143 (2) Yep
16. 01:32:143 (6) - i don't understand why you use red dot at end of slider. It's looks a bit ugly and don't a necessary Yup
17. 01:36:454 (5) - ideal place for jump, but you use a usual space. http://puu.sh/lE6bt/374d6ede6c.jpg fixed
18. 01:35:937 (4) - idk, looks rough. Sliderwawe will be look perfect It looks cool imo
19. 01:39:040 (5) - copy 01:38:695 (4) - and press ctrl+>+>. This form is better than what is now (5) is straight now which looks cool as well
20. 01:47:488 (5,1) - same as 01:36:454 (5) yes
21. 01:49:040 (1) - same as 01:35:937 (4) - No
22. 01:49:730 (3,4) - uh, looks ugly in my comprehension I know, but somehow it looks nice, i like weird slider placement xD. Will fix if more suggest it
23. 02:08:350 (1) - same as 01:35:937 (4) -
24. 02:15:937 (5,6) - same as 01:49:730 (3,4)
25. 02:18:178 (2,3,4) - you used a bit more spacing at same moments, but here... rly looks randomly Increased distance
26. 02:24:212 (5,6) - same as 01:49:730 (3,4)
27. 02:24:902 (1) - saaame as 01:32:143 (6)
28. 02:26:109 (5,1) - same same Yes
29. 02:28:178 (2) - move on 360 240 f0r create better blanket Yes
30. 02:44:212 (3) - stack with end 02:42:488 (1) -
31. 02:45:247 (1,1) - hmm, spacing here looks wierd too It has NC which is fine
32. 02:59:040 - here started CHB part, i guess?
33. 03:05:937 (1,2) - looks bad, try to make a blanket Yes
34. 03:11:454 (1) - sliderwawe will be fine
35. 03:20:075 -or started here? xD
36. 04:12:488 (1) - same as 00:02:143 (2) yes
37. 04:50:419 (5,6) - stack, i guess it's looks a bit confusing Its cool

Shiguri wrote:

wennde speedrankst kriegste n keks

Stjpa wrote:

Shiiiet, forgot to mod it 2 days ago. My bad, please forgive me cbh-senpai.
Warum nennst du dich in der Beschreibung zuerst? Kommt total selbstverliebt rüber, normal nennt man sich selber immer als letztes. c:


• 00:21:454 (2,1) - Either increase the overlap or space them a bit more. Looks a bit weird. yes
• 00:49:730 (4) - Maybe let the slidermiddle cross the slidertail of 00:48:006 (1) ? Not noticeable
• 01:06:971 (8) - A slider would fit way better. no
• 01:40:075 (5) - Would flow neater with the previous jumps if you'd CTRL + G it. Yes
• 01:46:626 (2,4) - Improve it please? yes
• 02:11:195 (1) - Why not using some sliders here? Spinner is way too boring and makes you look lazy lol. For a better build up into the main part, sliders would be kinda lame
• 02:26:971 (5) - I'd like it more with CTRL + J. Looks better. Looks weird imo
• 02:44:902 (5,1) - You could make a custom stack like you did before ( 02:00:764 (5,1) ) Not really necessary though
• 05:02:488 (3,5) - Definitely clean. Kappa. yes

Yoges wrote:

'ere's your M4M.

[General]

1. I think CS 4.5 would fit better I really like cs 5 here

[Brink]

1. 01:18:006 (3,4) - The pattern going back on itself feels a bit weird to play. How about something like Its cool to play, i love patterns like thatthis?
2. 01:23:178 (2) - Why not Ctrl+G that and rotate it like 7 degrees clockwise? It would fit the music better imo since the song is building up at that point. No
3. 01:41:454 (4) - Ctrl+H and putting it back where it was would play better for me. Looks weird though
4. 01:42:833 (5,6) - Ctrl+G and Ctrl+H both of these individually and put them back where they were to create something like this. Improves the flow a lot Theres not really any flow, because of the sliders shape
5. 01:43:523 (1) - Ctrl+G this if you're going to do that^ ctrl+g'd that, its kinda cool
6. 02:17:488 (3,4) - How about move the 3 a little and Ctrl+G the 4 to create something like this? I don't like the sharp angled mouse movement created in the top left of the screen with the original pattern. yes
7. 02:27:661 (1,2) - They look weird touching, space them a little They are not touching
8. 02:34:557 (1,1,1,1) - I think these would play a lot better spaced more to put emphasis on the music It fits more with the sv currently
9. 02:54:557 (3,4) - I really don't like going against the flow of a return on a repeat slider. It's detrimental for me.
10. 03:44:902 (1) - The 1 is kind of expected to be around 488|300 to like complete the triangle the jump pattern creates Moved it a bit
11. 03:57:661 (3,9) - I think stacking the 9 would fit better just stacked under the 3. That would take out the good jump movement
12. 04:02:143 (5) - I think that should have more spacing and/or Ctrl+Gd ctrl+g
13. 04:04:385 (2) - Bit difficult to read, you can't notice it that well under the slider. Improved the jumps afterwards though
14. 04:06:626 (5,6,1,2) - I really don't like that. All the other jump patterns were creating like X, zigg zagg and triangle patterns and this thing suddenly makes a bloody square. Feels so weird to play. yes
15. 05:07:661 (1,2) - Much more spacing please. I think its enough already

Nice Song choice ^^

Exote wrote:

helloooo~:3
m4m stuff, let's begin shall we?

01:40:075 (5,1) - stack 1 under 5 completely fixed
01:58:350 (1,2) - why don't you make that pattern like 02:42:488 (1) ? removing 2 and increasing 1's length, for consistency Okay
01:59:730 (1) - nice slider length ;o hope it's a mistake xD ups
02:01:109 (1) - that slider doesn't form a proper blanket with 02:02:143 (1) 's tail, is it intentional? if not, I would just blanket it Blanks are overrated :pp
02:38:695 (1) - stack this slider's end with 02:37:661 (3) 's head (entirely) yes
So, another think that I noticed. You could reduce the volume of the parts except the kiai, emphasis stuff. Especially the beginning of the map, it's a bit too loud in my opinion, and the whistles are just irritating my ears. Okay

Other than that, pretty good map. I kinda enjoyed it, especially the dnb part. Soz for the short mod and good luck with the map!
have my babies star!