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Yazawa Nico (CV. Tokui Sora) - Bokura no LIVE Kimi to no LIF
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Hello
Cancer
First off, gratz on your map crashing my osu the first time I opened it in editor mode.
Anyways
00:12:818 (1) - Why the weird slider shape?
00:18:390 (4) - Spacing of this needs to be relevant to 00:17:961 (3) - just like 00:17:390 (1,2) -
00:20:104 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The song doesn't justify the increase in width here
00:21:247 (2) - Reverse slider start to make it flow better
00:31:247 (10) - Calm down with the weird shapes especially at jumpy high bpm maps
00:40:675 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again about the increase in width
00:53:961 (6) - Fix the spacing in reference to 00:53:818 (5) -
00:54:961 (10) - This doesn't just go for here but in general, find places where you can start a new combo so it doesn't reach up to 10+
00:59:247 (7,8) - Spacing between these needs to be fixed
01:07:675 (4,5,6) - Make slider spacing consistent with 01:08:532 (7,8,9) -
01:17:532 (8,9,10) - ......why so far?
01:21:390 (5) - C'mon this isnt needed
I understand this map is meant to be jumpy and hard but at least include a bit of symmetry for it. Even asymmetry has some sort of pattern or design
01:46:247 (4,5,6) - Move this to the left onto the center
02:10:104 (10) - Fix the spacing on this
02:22:104 (2) - Tumor elbow
02:41:390 (4) - Too many points
03:35:247 (1) - Too many points
03:36:961 (1,2) - Please fix this
03:49:461 (4) - Move this over to the white tick
04:03:818 (1,2,3,4) - Space between the sliders shouldn't be increasing
04:06:104 (8,9,10) - Fix the spacing on here
04:07:247 (1) - Try this instead:
04:09:532 (1) - Just replace this with a spinner
04:29:104 (10) - Fix the spacing
04:33:961 (7) - Okay really dude I don't mean to nag about this but a lot of your sliders have too many points for a single curve. Please look at all your sliders and reduce it
04:48:390 (1) - Okay man I don't know if you're being serious or not anymore
04:52:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please find a way to map this differently that isn't just bland across the screen horizontal jumps
05:08:818 (7) - Fix the spacing
Alright so, over all you need to go back and look at your spacing. Work on readable patterns and please please fix your sliders, not just the ones that I mentioned. I really don't see the justification in OD 9 and AR 10, that's absolutely crazy.
God help you
First off, gratz on your map crashing my osu the first time I opened it in editor mode.
Anyways
00:12:818 (1) - Why the weird slider shape?
00:18:390 (4) - Spacing of this needs to be relevant to 00:17:961 (3) - just like 00:17:390 (1,2) -
00:20:104 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The song doesn't justify the increase in width here
00:21:247 (2) - Reverse slider start to make it flow better
00:31:247 (10) - Calm down with the weird shapes especially at jumpy high bpm maps
00:40:675 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again about the increase in width
00:53:961 (6) - Fix the spacing in reference to 00:53:818 (5) -
00:54:961 (10) - This doesn't just go for here but in general, find places where you can start a new combo so it doesn't reach up to 10+
00:59:247 (7,8) - Spacing between these needs to be fixed
01:07:675 (4,5,6) - Make slider spacing consistent with 01:08:532 (7,8,9) -
01:17:532 (8,9,10) - ......why so far?
01:21:390 (5) - C'mon this isnt needed
I understand this map is meant to be jumpy and hard but at least include a bit of symmetry for it. Even asymmetry has some sort of pattern or design
01:46:247 (4,5,6) - Move this to the left onto the center
02:10:104 (10) - Fix the spacing on this
02:22:104 (2) - Tumor elbow
02:41:390 (4) - Too many points
03:35:247 (1) - Too many points
03:36:961 (1,2) - Please fix this
03:49:461 (4) - Move this over to the white tick
04:03:818 (1,2,3,4) - Space between the sliders shouldn't be increasing
04:06:104 (8,9,10) - Fix the spacing on here
04:07:247 (1) - Try this instead:
04:09:532 (1) - Just replace this with a spinner
04:29:104 (10) - Fix the spacing
04:33:961 (7) - Okay really dude I don't mean to nag about this but a lot of your sliders have too many points for a single curve. Please look at all your sliders and reduce it
04:48:390 (1) - Okay man I don't know if you're being serious or not anymore
04:52:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please find a way to map this differently that isn't just bland across the screen horizontal jumps
05:08:818 (7) - Fix the spacing
Alright so, over all you need to go back and look at your spacing. Work on readable patterns and please please fix your sliders, not just the ones that I mentioned. I really don't see the justification in OD 9 and AR 10, that's absolutely crazy.
God help you
Topic Starter
i hate pp wrote:
HelloCancer
First off, gratz on your map crashing my osu the first time I opened it in editor mode.
Anyways
00:12:818 (1) - Why the weird slider shape? Changed
00:18:390 (4) - Spacing of this needs to be relevant to 00:17:961 (3) - just like 00:17:390 (1,2) -
00:20:104 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The song doesn't justify the increase in width here
00:21:247 (2) - Reverse slider start to make it flow better
00:31:247 (10) - Calm down with the weird shapes especially at jumpy high bpm maps Fixed
00:40:675 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again about the increase in width
00:53:961 (6) - Fix the spacing in reference to 00:53:818 (5) -
00:54:961 (10) - This doesn't just go for here but in general, find places where you can start a new combo so it doesn't reach up to 10+
00:59:247 (7,8) - Spacing between these needs to be fixed
01:07:675 (4,5,6) - Make slider spacing consistent with 01:08:532 (7,8,9) -
01:17:532 (8,9,10) - ......why so far?
01:21:390 (5) - C'mon this isnt neededr=#00FF00]Fixed[/color]
I understand this map is meant to be jumpy and hard but at least include a bit of symmetry for it. Even asymmetry has some sort of pattern or design
01:46:247 (4,5,6) - Move this to tr=#00FF00]Fixed[/color]
02:10:104 (10) - Fix the spacing on this
02:22:104 (2) - Tumor elbow Removed
02:41:390 (4) - Too many points Fixed
03:35:247 (1) - Too many points Fixed
03:36:961 (1,2) - Please fix this Fixed
03:49:461 (4) - Move this over to the white tick Fixed
04:03:818 (1,2,3,4) - Space between the sliders shouldn't be increasing
04:06:104 (8,9,10) - Fix the spacing on here
04:07:247 (1) - Try this instead:
04:09:532 (1) - Just replace this with a spinner Done
04:29:104 (10) - Fix the spacing
04:33:961 (7) - Okay really dude I don't mean to nag about this but a lot of your sliders have too many points for a single curve. Please look at all your sliders and reduce it Fixed
04:48:390 (1) - Okay man I don't know if you're being serious or not anymore
04:52:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please find a way to map this differently that isn't just bland across the screen horizontal jumps
05:08:818 (7) - Fix the spacing
Alright so, over all you need to go back and look at your spacing. Work on readable patterns and please please fix your sliders, not just the ones that I mentioned. I really don't see the justification in OD 9 and AR 10, that's absolutely crazy.
God help you
Topic Starter
SnowflakeStreet wrote:
i hate pp wrote:
HelloCancer
First off, gratz on your map crashing my osu the first time I opened it in editor mode.
Anyways
00:12:818 (1) - Why the weird slider shape? Changed
00:18:390 (4) - Spacing of this needs to be relevant to 00:17:961 (3) - just like 00:17:390 (1,2) - Fixed
00:20:104 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The song doesn't justify the increase in width here Changed
00:21:247 (2) - Reverse slider start to make it flow better
00:31:247 (10) - Calm down with the weird shapes especially at jumpy high bpm maps Fixed
00:40:675 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again about the increase in width Fixed
00:53:961 (6) - Fix the spacing in reference to 00:53:818 (5) -
00:54:961 (10) - This doesn't just go for here but in general, find places where you can start a new combo so it doesn't reach up to 10+
00:59:247 (7,8) - Spacing between these needs to be fixed
01:07:675 (4,5,6) - Make slider spacing consistent with 01:08:532 (7,8,9) - Done
01:17:532 (8,9,10) - ......why so far?
01:21:390 (5) - C'mon this isnt needed Fixed
I understand this map is meant to be jumpy and hard but at least include a bit of symmetry for it. Even asymmetry has some sort of pattern or design
01:46:247 (4,5,6) - Move this to the left onto the center Fixed
02:10:104 (10) - Fix the spacing on this Done
02:22:104 (2) - Tumor elbow Removed
02:41:390 (4) - Too many points Fixed
03:35:247 (1) - Too many points Fixed
03:36:961 (1,2) - Please fix this Fixed
03:49:461 (4) - Move this over to the white tick Fixed
04:03:818 (1,2,3,4) - Space between the sliders shouldn't be increasing Fixed
04:06:104 (8,9,10) - Fix the spacing on here
04:07:247 (1) - Try this instead:
04:09:532 (1) - Just replace this with a spinner Done
04:29:104 (10) - Fix the spacing
04:33:961 (7) - Okay really dude I don't mean to nag about this but a lot of your sliders have too many points for a single curve. Please look at all your sliders and reduce it Fixed
04:48:390 (1) - Okay man I don't know if you're being serious or not anymore
04:52:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please find a way to map this differently that isn't just bland across the screen horizontal jumps
05:08:818 (7) - Fix the spacing
Alright so, over all you need to go back and look at your spacing. Work on readable patterns and please please fix your sliders, not just the ones that I mentioned. I really don't see the justification in OD 9 and AR 10, that's absolutely crazy.
God help you