Fleet Foxes - White Winter Hymnal · forum

ZekeyHache

Joined October 2009

Topic Starter

ZekeyHache 2015-11-13T19:18:43+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 7, 2016 at 10:13:24 AM

Artist: Fleet Foxes
Title: White Winter Hymnal
Tags: Bonsai Snow
BPM: 125.2
Filesize: 15238kb
Play Time: 02:22
Difficulties Available:

Bonsai's Normal (1.86 stars, 218 notes)
Easy (1.48 stars, 140 notes)
Hard (2.77 stars, 263 notes)

Download: Fleet Foxes - White Winter Hymnal
Download: Fleet Foxes - White Winter Hymnal (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~Winter song~

Easy- me

Bonsai's Normal- Bonsai, I guess :v

Hard- me
Timing by Bonsai

Modders

Bonsai
Stjpa
blissfulyoshi
Bara-
Zectro
pishifat
monstrata
Little
Lanturn
CDFA
MkGuh
monstrata
Bakari

Last edited by ZekeyHache 2016-11-07T22:27:55+00:00, edited 46 times in total.

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-11-13T21:16:03+00:00

Two stars dropped in the map, accidentally. xD

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

Topic Starter

ZekeyHache 2015-11-13T21:17:59+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Two stars dropped in the map, accidentally. xD

accidentally? I don't think so <3

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2015-11-27T13:22:42+00:00

[Hard]
• OD7 and HP7 is anything but chill. Is this map even passable with HR? :c
• 00:18:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - The distance between each other isnt the same, which make it looks ugly. (1) and (3) are even almsot touching. >.<
• 00:27:500 (6,7) - Why don't you stack them? You did it before too...so... D:
• 00:31:340 (6,7) - ^
• 00:38:072 (6,7) - I also don't understand this custom stack tbh. If you make custom stacks, they should at least look the same.
• 00:48:140 (3,4,5) - Are they supposed to be straight? If so, they aren't. Also it would be better if the line would start at (2) and end at (5) because of the drum thingy.
• 01:02:556 (7,1) - Overthink your custom stacks in general and maybe change this one.
• 01:15:517 (5,6,7) - They should have the same DS as 00:30:380 (4,5,6) -
• 01:43:129 (2,3,4,5,6) - Distance thingy.
• 01:57:781 (4,2) - Not-so-pretty overlap.

[Bonzii's Normal]
• 00:09:734 (2,3) - Haben die mit Absicht verschiedene y-Koordinaten?
• 00:11:654 (4,5) - ^
• 00:13:574 (6,7) - ^
• 00:15:494 (8,1) - ^
• 00:23:660 (5) - Sollte evtl auch 1,2x DS haben.
• 00:59:194 (2,3,4,1) - Die Slider hatten am Anfang 1,2x DS. <.<
• 01:46:971 (2,3) - Könnte man ruhig etwas versetzt platzieren.

[Easy]
• 00:37:592 (4,1) - Make a proper Blanket out of it.
• 00:37:592 (4,2) - And stack them.
• 00:40:471 (2,3) - Blanket.
• 00:47:662 (1,2) - ^
• 01:10:713 (4) - Dunno if a NC would be good here.
• 01:27:523 (2,1) - I'm sorry for this Blanket mod, but otherwise this diff is really fine.

Bonsai

1,212 posts

Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2015-11-27T13:29:34+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
[Hard]
• OD7 and HP7 is anything but chill. Is this map even passable with HR? :c

dat fc but yeah until the previw part it's pretty harsh ^^
~~gonna post a real reply soon :^)~~

Stjpa wrote:
[Bonzii's Normal]
Bonzi's multi confirmed
• 00:09:734 (2,3) - Haben die mit Absicht verschiedene y-Koordinaten? asdf
• 00:11:654 (4,5) - ^
• 00:13:574 (6,7) - ^
• 00:15:494 (8,1) - ^
• 00:23:660 (5) - Sollte evtl auch 1,2x DS haben. o:
• 00:59:194 (2,3,4,1) - Die Slider hatten am Anfang 1,2x DS. <.< but SV-change @00:39:033 und ab da sin se immer x1,1 - einer von denen war nur x1,0 though, habe den gefixed
• 01:46:971 (2,3) - Könnte man ruhig etwas versetzt platzieren. uh dunno was du genau meinst, Stacks kommen da ja in der ganzen Section vor, hab aber den und einen anderen um ein paar pixel verschoben bc auto-stack </3 DS falls du das meintest

box

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: White Winter Hymnal.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:White Winter Hymnal
TitleUnicode:White Winter Hymnal
Artist:Fleet Foxes
ArtistUnicode:Fleet Foxes
Creator:ezek
Version:Bonsai's Normal
Source:
Tags:Bonsai
BeatmapID:823998
BeatmapSetID:376372

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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
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@ezek: I noticed that the timing for the first few notes was a bit off and changed it, look at my diff as I posted it here and copy the first three sections while deleting the current first section + the first inheriting section as that one is replaced with an uninheriting one, sry ^^
Also, maybe add some tags like Christmas Snow etc.?

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

Topic Starter

ZekeyHache 2015-11-27T20:06:31+00:00

Thanks for the mod!

~~I'll check it later!~~ just... check below... X.X

Last edited by ZekeyHache 2015-11-29T19:44:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

Topic Starter

ZekeyHache 2015-11-29T19:38:38+00:00

Shit! accidental double post X.X

Stjpa wrote:
[Hard]
• OD7 and HP7 is anything but chill. Is this map even passable with HR? :c hmm...hmm.. I don't know what to do.
• 00:18:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - The distance between each other isnt the same, which make it looks ugly. (1) and (3) are even almsot touching. >.< the distance is not meant to be the same, but I fixed the (1) & (3) issue
• 00:27:500 (6,7) - Why don't you stack them? You did it before too...so... D: because if I do that, (6) will automatically move and ruin the pattern
• 00:31:340 (6,7) - ^ similar issue
• 00:38:072 (6,7) - I also don't understand this custom stack tbh. If you make custom stacks, they should at least look the same. Fixed, I think.
• 00:48:140 (3,4,5) - Are they supposed to be straight? If so, they aren't. Also it would be better if the line would start at (2) and end at (5) because of the drum thingy. oki, they're straight now. And I can't imagine a good way to start at (2) and end at (5).
• 01:02:556 (7,1) - Overthink your custom stacks in general and maybe change this one. No change, I think it looks nice and adds variety.
• 01:15:517 (5,6,7) - They should have the same DS as 00:30:380 (4,5,6) - yeah, fixed!
• 01:43:129 (2,3,4,5,6) - Distance thingy. It's pattern-based, so distance doesn't matter.
• 01:57:781 (4,2) - Not-so-pretty overlap. eeewww! fixed!

[Easy]
• 00:37:592 (4,1) - Make a proper Blanket out of it. Fixed! I think..
• 00:37:592 (4,2) - And stack them. Stacked!
• 00:40:471 (2,3) - Blanket. I know
• 00:47:662 (1,2) - ^ Improved, I think..
• 01:10:713 (4) - Dunno if a NC would be good here. Nope, look at 00:32:304 (4) -
• 01:27:523 (2,1) - I'm sorry for this Blanket mod, but otherwise this diff is really fine. ah, thanks!

Thanks for the mod!

Updated~
*Stjpa's mod
*New Timing by Bonsai
*Added "Snow" to tags

blissfulyoshi

osu! Alumni

4,755 posts

Joined July 2008

blissfulyoshi 2015-11-30T03:55:52+00:00

Christmas Queue modding!

Not going to check timing because I'm lazy.
Also, first time modding in a while, so I'm sorry if my modding is lackluster

Not adding the video?
No winter themed colors for circles?

Easy:
00:28:460 (1) - Lower the ending a bit to point more directly at 00:29:900 (2)
00:34:229 (1,3) - Have the linear part point toward the center of 00:33:749 (5)?
02:02:564 (4) - Spin the slider 180 degreese, so that when you return from the repeat, you're going in the direction of the next slider
What are your combos following? I can't find any logical pattern that tells me why new combos are where they are.

Bonsai's Normal:
00:48:618 (3) - Make part of the next combo because this is where the drum lands and you've been following a pattern of a new combo every 2 drum hits during this section?
01:07:834 (4) - Why did the combos all of a sudden get longer? From about 1 measure in the previous measure to 2.25 measures in this current one.
01:24:161 (3,1) - (nazi) might be just me, but 1's ending is not parallel with 3's first half? (drop down 3's red anchor point by 1 grid)
You seem to have some order with your combos, but you're pretty inconsistent with combo usage, so I advise you look through your map and make a set pattern for them.

Hard:
AR seems a bit fast for this map. Maybe 6.5?
Why HP7? You can easily lose half your hp if you make 1 100 in the intro of the song.
00:18:857 (1,4) - (nazi) these are the only 2 notes in the star pattern that are touching each other, you might want to move them apart
00:32:304 (2,3,4) - why aren't these jumps like 00:25:100 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6)?
00:39:512 (2) - why is there a jump here? The heavy drum doesn't fall on this note
00:40:471 (1) - make this part of the previous combo so that the next combo (00:40:951 (2)) can start on a drum note and be consistent with 00:50:543 (1)
00:42:869 (6) - for the same reason as 00:40:471 (1), add a new combo here
This section of the heavy drum and no lyrics confused me a lot. You have small jumps on notes like 00:45:747 (3,1) or 00:50:543 (1) that emphasize the heavy drum, but there are no jumps for 00:40:951 (2), 00:41:910 (4), 00:44:788 (1), etc. I would hope you would make the map a bit more consistent on this point
01:16:478 (7,8) - any justification for such a large increase increase in distance?
The things I mentioned for the first nonlyrical section apply to the second as well.

======================
Besides combo issues, Easy and Normal are fine maps. Hard, while it looks okay, doesn't feels like it fits the song very well. Jumps felt near random to me, and the high HP didn't feel like it reflected the chill nature of the song at all. Oh well, I think all of it can be fixed without too much effort.

Bonsai

1,212 posts

Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2015-11-30T13:27:30+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
Christmas Queue modding! <3

Not going to check timing because I'm lazy. phew

No winter themed colors for circles? !!

Bonsai's Normal:
00:48:618 (3) - Make part of the next combo because this is where the drum lands and you've been following a pattern of a new combo every 2 drum hits during this section? see below
01:07:834 (4) - Why did the combos all of a sudden get longer? From about 1 measure in the previous measure to 2.25 measures in this current one. see below
01:24:161 (3,1) - (nazi) might be just me, but 1's ending is not parallel with 3's first half? (drop down 3's red anchor point by 1 grid) ah yup, fixed it
You seem to have some order with your combos, but you're pretty inconsistent with combo usage, so I advise you look through your map and make a set pattern for them. I went through the whole map now and changed it a bit, on average the combos have gotten longer now and should be more consistent - In the non-lyrical sections it's basically every second measure, in the lyrical parts it's mainly following the text-lines with one exception at 01:12:395 (5,6,7,1) as the second combo would get too long if I put the NC at 01:12:395

Thank you!

boxbox

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ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

Topic Starter

ZekeyHache 2015-12-03T21:28:54+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
Christmas Queue modding! Oh, that's wonderful!

Not going to check timing because I'm lazy. who cares about timing anyway?
Also, first time modding in a while, so I'm sorry if my modding is lackluster oh wooow a cool mod!

Not adding the video? I always add a video if the song has one but osu gives me an error if I try uploading with a video in this map, ugh..
No winter themed colors for circles? oh, how did I forget that?

Easy:
00:28:460 (1) - Lower the ending a bit to point more directly at 00:29:900 (2) oki
00:34:229 (1,3) - Have the linear part point toward the center of 00:33:749 (5)? nah, I think is fine, also is in the same place as 00:37:592 (4) - and 00:40:471 (2) -
02:02:564 (4) - Spin the slider 180 degreese, so that when you return from the repeat, you're going in the direction of the next slider
What are your combos following? I can't find any logical pattern that tells me why new combos are where they are. maybe I'm not good at combos, but I kinda established a pattern, for example 00:28:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:06:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - then also 00:39:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:17:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Hard:
AR seems a bit fast for this map. Maybe 6.5? I tried, but feels weird imo
Why HP7? You can easily lose half your hp if you make 1 100 in the intro of the song. eh? that's not true, I even tried doing a 50 and is not an issue.
00:18:857 (1,4) - (nazi) these are the only 2 notes in the star pattern that are touching each other, you might want to move them apart they weren't touching, but they were too close, so yeah, I separated them a little bit more
00:32:304 (2,3,4) - why aren't these jumps like 00:25:100 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6)? because I want some variety
00:39:512 (2) - why is there a jump here? The heavy drum doesn't fall on this note ok, I set the jump on the heavy drum
00:40:471 (1) - make this part of the previous combo so that the next combo (00:40:951 (2)) can start on a drum note and be consistent with 00:50:543 (1) oki
00:42:869 (6) - for the same reason as 00:40:471 (1), add a new combo here ok
This section of the heavy drum and no lyrics confused me a lot. You have small jumps on notes like 00:45:747 (3,1) or 00:50:543 (1) that emphasize the heavy drum, but there are no jumps for 00:40:951 (2), 00:41:910 (4), 00:44:788 (1), etc. I would hope you would make the map a bit more consistent on this point ok, I did some changes about that.
01:16:478 (7,8) - any justification for such a large increase increase in distance? not really, so I stacked them to be consistent with 00:38:072 (6,7) -
The things I mentioned for the first nonlyrical section apply to the second as well.

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Besides combo issues, Easy and Normal are fine maps. Hard, while it looks okay, doesn't feels like it fits the song very well. Jumps felt near random to me, and the high HP didn't feel like it reflected the chill nature of the song at all. Oh well, I think all of it can be fixed without too much effort. ah.. let't see how it goes~

Thanks 4 the mod yoshi!!! <33 merry Christmas!

Updated~

~~I can accept combo color suggestions, I'm not good at selecting them..~~ Edit: never mind, Bonsai found some cool colors

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-12-18T14:57:02+00:00

Hi
[General]
Why not make the softwhistle the same as the slidertick?
Now 2 different files play, which is quite awkward
Oh, lower volume please
50% is more then enough imo

[Easy]
What's going on with the NC's? They feel really awkward. Why not do a Nc every 2 white ticks?
Also, the sliders ending at a big white tick are not that good, you need to let go on a fairly strong sound, which is quite awkward
01:12:635 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit cluttered, so close all together
01:22:241 (1,3) - Make them the same shape, for symmetry?
02:06:868 (3,4) - This is like the only stack in the map, that'll be very confusing for newbies

[Normal]
Diff is fine, just a few things
Consider making it longer, the other diffs map the whole song, and it feels weird if you don't do it here
Some combos feel weird, try to be consistent!
Make sure the DS is the same trhoughout the map, 00:34:229 (2,3,4) - for example

[Hard]
00:30:380 (4,5,6,7) - Make sure it's spaced the same, as the rhythms are the same as well!
00:47:901 (2,3,4,5,6) - Add some sliders, too many circles is too hard
Spacings in general seem a bit overdone, but everyone does that nowadays so I guess it fine

Uhm idk, I believe this song is quite hard to map properly, so you did a good job on it!
Good luck, and a merry Christmas!

Bonsai

1,212 posts

Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2015-12-18T15:32:47+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
[General]
Why not make the softwhistle the same as the slidertick?
Now 2 different files play, which is quite awkward They are the same already, dunno what you mean o: The slidertick is exactly the softwhistle from the default skin template, sounds the same to me
Oh, lower volume please
50% is more then enough imo I'd be okay with lowering everything, maybe not that much since Finish and Clap would be pretty inaudible then but whatever ezek wants

[Normal]
Diff is fine, just a few things
Consider making it longer, the other diffs map the whole song, and it feels weird if you don't do it here I don't really want to because I feel like I can't map it calm enough to fit both the difficutly and the song intensity so I'd rather not unless it's necessary but I don't think it is afaik
Some combos feel weird, try to be consistent! well that doesn't help lol
Make sure the DS is the same trhoughout the map, 00:34:229 (2,3,4) - for example I vary in spacing to emphasize certain gaps / intervals consistently and it's not forbidden in any way so I don't see how that's a bad thing

Uhm idk, I believe this song is quite hard to map properly, so you did a good job on it!
Good luck, and a merry Christmas! Thanks, you too! :3

added a slider somewhere lol

osu file format v14

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Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-12-19T00:23:14+00:00

About the hitsounds
When using a custom skin (which I believe almost everyone does) which has different hitwhistle it'll sound different
Consider changing the sound to a not-defaultskin sound so both slidertick and hitwhistle are the same on every skin

Zectro

371 posts

Joined April 2013

Zectro 2015-12-19T02:04:24+00:00

Alrighty, let's see
Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
soft-hitfinish.wav

Easy is perfect.

[Normal]
00:47:662 (2) - Is not perfectly blanketing 00:45:747 (5) -

[Hard]
00:27:500 (6,7) - 00:31:340 (6,7) - try to make the distance more the same ish idkhgbrsguh you get what I mean (try disabling grid snap for this)
00:38:072 (6,7) - ^
00:39:033 (1,2) - This can be blanketed better
01:02:556 (7,1) - Since you barely do this in other parts of the map it looks kinda off, I recommend just using a normal stack.. or doing something else.. can't really think of anything though
01:10:713 (2,3) - very nazi but anchor points can be more in the middle

also your ncs seem pretty inconsistent to me, try looking at it again yourself

good luck bonsai and ezek!

Bonsai

1,212 posts

Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2015-12-19T02:30:07+00:00

Zectro wrote:
Alrighty, let's see
Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
soft-hitfinish.wav Oh that's weird, I took it from some other ranked map ^^ (and clap is the same with different pitch but no delay there appearently lol)

[Normal]
00:47:662 (2) - Is not perfectly blanketing 00:45:747 (5) - Definitely not noticable ingame but I think I fixed it ^^

good luck bonsai and ezek! thanks, I'll get to your map as soon as my hand feels better

@ezek: Here's the fixed soft-hitfinish and concerning Baraatje's point I guess it's best to just add the soft-slidertick as soft-hitwhistle too as it fits perfectly with the song

changing my map one slider after the other

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: White Winter Hymnal.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 39033,77439,92805,108171,119701
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:White Winter Hymnal
TitleUnicode:White Winter Hymnal
Artist:Fleet Foxes
ArtistUnicode:Fleet Foxes
Creator:ezek
Version:Bonsai's Normal
Source:
Tags:Bonsai Snow
BeatmapID:823998
BeatmapSetID:376372

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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312,191,25100,2,0,P|309:156|322:123,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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79,45,26300,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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350,27,54394,6,0,P|431:124|351:155,1,231.000007049561,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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362,88,69274,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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241,50,78159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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EDIT: Also, after randomly looking at your diffs quite a few times now there's a few points I wanna point out too for the Hard ^^

00:21:260 (3,4) - I generally don't like these upbeat-sliders, but moreover you made them onbeat at 00:28:460 (2,3) so I'd do that here too
00:23:660 (6,7) and 00:25:580 (5,6) and 00:27:500 (6,7) are all the same interval in the same section but the last one is differently spaced, maybe make that consistent too. Same with 00:31:340 (6,7) and 00:33:269 (4,5)
00:38:553 - Whistle missing here
I am personally not a big fan of stacking different intervals on the same stack, what I mean are 00:42:630 (4,1,2) - 01:48:890 (2,3,4) - 01:50:808 (6,7,8) - 01:52:727 (2,3,4) and 01:54:651 (6,7,8) - imo they are rather boring to play since there is no movement for such a long time, and it's also extremely difficult to read with HD ^^
00:47:901 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is currently pretty much the only place where you placed so many 1/2s when there is not much happening in the music, so I'd suggest either doing that more often, like for example replacing 00:53:431 (3) with circles too, or making that one a bit less dense
00:57:034 and 02:02:326 - Maybe it's intentional but the vocals have the "was" here, so those are the only times where you left out a vocal note o:
01:02:796 (1,2) and 01:04:715 (1,2) are offbeat-sliders which don't fit that well here imo since the beats on their tails are stronger than the ones on their heads, but moreover you made them onbeat at 01:10:713 (2,3) for example so I'd make them onbeat everywhere :::D
Which leaves me with the last offbeat-slider I personally don't like: 02:08:078 (1) -. Also, the equivalent places, 02:00:416 (2,3,4,5) and 02:02:564 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:09:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 02:15:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6) are all mapped more dense than this one, so I'd remover the repeat from 02:08:798 (3) and add another circle there
Also somebody told me that 01:06:875 (2,4) are overlapping, although barely noticable, but why not move (4) up by four pixels, then it's also on the same height as 01:09:753 (6) bc of auto-stack

Now you can give me kudosu! without me feeling bad about it ehehe ^_^;

where are you though D:

ZekeyHache

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Joined October 2009

Topic Starter

ZekeyHache 2015-12-20T01:15:21+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
Hi
[General]
Why not make the softwhistle the same as the slidertick? oki, I cloned the slidertick sound and put it as hitwhistle.
Now 2 different files play, which is quite awkward
Oh, lower volume please
50% is more then enough imo no sir, I want those hitsounds to make some noise! : p

[Easy]
What's going on with the NC's? They feel really awkward. Why not do a Nc every 2 white ticks? oh.. everyone tells me about this NC issue xd I guess I'll have to work harder on this
Also, the sliders ending at a big white tick are not that good, you need to let go on a fairly strong sound, which is quite awkward hmm, it doesn't sound akward for me
01:12:635 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit cluttered, so close all together I separated them a little bit
01:22:241 (1,3) - Make them the same shape, for symmetry? I made the same shape, but I'm not aiming for a perfect symmetry
02:06:868 (3,4) - This is like the only stack in the map, that'll be very confusing for newbies removed~

[Hard]
00:30:380 (4,5,6,7) - Make sure it's spaced the same, as the rhythms are the same as well! Nope, besides the notes are separated by the same amount of time, 6 feels like a stop and 7 like a continuation (ugh, I don't know how to explain it better), so that's why I stacked 6 and 7.
00:47:901 (2,3,4,5,6) - Add some sliders, too many circles is too hard it isn't that hard since I didn't add jumps in that pattern, also, there are sliders waiting at the end of it! personally, I love that part, so, nope, no change.
Spacings in general seem a bit overdone, but everyone does that nowadays so I guess it fine

Uhm idk, I believe this song is quite hard to map properly, so you did a good job on it!
Good luck, and a merry Christmas!

Thanks for the mod and merry Christmas Baraatje!

Zectro wrote:
Alrighty, let's see
Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
soft-hitfinish.wav fixed by Bonsai~

Easy is perfect. That makes me happy

[Hard]
00:27:500 (6,7) - 00:31:340 (6,7) - try to make the distance more the same ish idkhgbrsguh you get what I mean (try disabling grid snap for this)
00:38:072 (6,7) - ^ hmm.. how did I not think about that? done~
00:39:033 (1,2) - This can be blanketed better oki, I tried..
01:02:556 (7,1) - Since you barely do this in other parts of the map it looks kinda off, I recommend just using a normal stack.. or doing something else.. can't really think of anything though I think is fine, it is a new and fresh pattern to not get players bored repeating the same stuff everytime
01:10:713 (2,3) - very nazi but anchor points can be more in the middle nah, it looks great as it is

also your ncs seem pretty inconsistent to me, try looking at it again yourself argh, I suck at NCs xd, yeah, I'll do what I can xd

good luck bonsai and ezek!

Thanks 4 the mod Zectro! <3

Bonsai wrote:
EDIT: Also, after randomly looking at your diffs quite a few times now there's a few points I wanna point out too for the Hard ^^
00:21:260 (3,4) - I generally don't like these upbeat-sliders, but moreover you made them onbeat at 00:28:460 (2,3) so I'd do that here too fixed~
00:23:660 (6,7) and 00:25:580 (5,6) and 00:27:500 (6,7) are all the same interval in the same section but the last one is differently spaced, maybe make that consistent too. Same with 00:31:340 (6,7) and 00:33:269 (4,5) I stacked them equally (I think)
00:38:553 - Whistle missing here oh... not anymore~
I am personally not a big fan of stacking different intervals on the same stack, what I mean are 00:42:630 (4,1,2) - 01:48:890 (2,3,4) - 01:50:808 (6,7,8) - 01:52:727 (2,3,4) and 01:54:651 (6,7,8) - imo they are rather boring to play since there is no movement for such a long time, and it's also extremely difficult to read with HD ^^ unstacked~
00:47:901 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is currently pretty much the only place where you placed so many 1/2s when there is not much happening in the music, so I'd suggest either doing that more often, like for example replacing 00:53:431 (3) with circles too, or making that one a bit less dense oki, I did something similar to 01:25:122 (1,2,3) -
00:57:034 and 02:02:326 - Maybe it's intentional but the vocals have the "was" here, so those are the only times where you left out a vocal note o: eh? there is no vocal saying "was" it says "all swallowed in their coats" and the parts you pointed me out are the ending of the word "all" combined with the beginning of "swallowed", which I think that made you hear a word in those places.
01:02:796 (1,2) and 01:04:715 (1,2) are offbeat-sliders which don't fit that well here imo since the beats on their tails are stronger than the ones on their heads, but moreover you made them onbeat at 01:10:713 (2,3) for example so I'd make them onbeat everywhere :::D oki, oki, oki (I hope I did the right stuff to fix the surrounding objects xd)
Which leaves me with the last offbeat-slider I personally don't like: 02:08:078 (1) -. Also, the equivalent places, 02:00:416 (2,3,4,5) and 02:02:564 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:09:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 02:15:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6) are all mapped more dense than this one, so I'd remover the repeat from 02:08:798 (3) and add another circle there, oki, I made the part more dense, but I changed the whole part, take a look : p
Also somebody told me that 01:06:875 (2,4) are overlapping, although barely noticable, but why not move (4) up by four pixels, then it's also on the same height as 01:09:753 (6) bc of auto-stack fixed~
Now you can give me kudosu! without me feeling bad about it ehehe ^_^; take it!

where are you though D: sshht, that's a secret!

Thanks for the extra help Bonsy!

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*Applied Baraatje123's mod
*Applied Zectro's mod
*Applied Bonsai's mod

Updated~

~~I will take a look at my NCs since people keep telling me bad stuff about them~~ xd

Updated~ again..

Bonsai

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Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2015-12-22T03:41:34+00:00

I decided to map the outro too after all ^^

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osu file format v14

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ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2015-12-22T08:11:18+00:00

Updated~

*Applied Bonsai's changes to his diff.
*Applied a new combo suggestion to Hard (thanks Bonsai)
*Added video (thanks for fixing that BSS peppy!) I think XinCrin forgot about the SB

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-12-23T04:27:21+00:00

Bonsai wrote:
You're posting very late since you got kicked

more like no more school so my sleep schedule is also screwed g

when using slidertick hitsounds, it's best to differnetiate them from actual impact hitsounds (like circles/sliderheadtail stuff)
the most fitting way to do that in this case is making the slidertick hitsound lower volume than your ordinary whistles, either through inherited point bs or lowering the actual hitsound file's volume

not liking how the whole easy difficulty has rhythm structured so almost every downbeat is on a slidertail. im sure you already know why that's not a great thing to do, and if you don't you can always look at bonsai's points of emphasis or even your hard lol. keeping your same 2/1 sliders thing except having them start on beat 1 and end on 3 would be the most practical way to adjust this stuff if you're gonna go throughwith it

bonsai ur tail is unsnapped 02:22:295 (4) -

on hard 00:20:540 (1,2,3) - should try not to do 1/2 and 1/1 stacks in the same location like this. pain to read for this level of difficulty
also 01:54:646 (2,3,4) - are barely unsnapped lul

if you end up doing that stuff any bn would give this a bub

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2015-12-23T07:58:58+00:00

pishifat wrote:
Bonsai wrote:
You're posting very late since you got kicked
more like no more school so my sleep schedule is also screwed g
I slept 3 hours today

when using slidertick hitsounds, it's best to differnetiate them from actual impact hitsounds (like circles/sliderheadtail stuff)
the most fitting way to do that in this case is making the slidertick hitsound lower volume than your ordinary whistles, either through inherited point bs or lowering the actual hitsound file's volume oki, lowered slidertick's volume~

not liking how the whole easy difficulty has rhythm structured so almost every downbeat is on a slidertail. im sure you already know why that's not a great thing to do, and if you don't you can always look at bonsai's points of emphasis or even your hard lol. keeping your same 2/1 sliders thing except having them start on beat 1 and end on 3 would be the most practical way to adjust this stuff if you're gonna go throughwith it ay... I'm gonna remap the easy, I'll make a mess if I mess around with all those sliders

bonsai ur tail is unsnapped 02:22:295 (4) - fixed for him~

on hard 00:20:540 (1,2,3) - should try not to do 1/2 and 1/1 stacks in the same location like this. pain to read for this level of difficulty oki, I stacked the 3 with 00:21:740 (4) -
also 01:54:646 (2,3,4) - are barely unsnapped lul lol, fixed~

if you end up doing that stuff any bn would give this a bub

thanks pishi! <3

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