1. ADVANCED - 4Key (2.53 stars, 710 notes)
2. BASIC - 4Key (1.19 stars, 232 notes)
3. EXHAUST - 4Key (3.36 stars, 965 notes)
4. NOVICE - 4Key (1.85 stars, 443 notes)

BladesofSteel wrote:

Hello, here is a timing check from me.

The BPM is correct. But you will need to add another timing point (Red) at Offset 50896.

You can do this by adding the timing point, then un-checking the box beside the words 'Inherit previous timing settings'.

PnX wrote:

From PnX's modding queue

MY MODS

NOVICE
Some of Vocal LN should be removed. It not the main sound. Can you please specify/give examples of which LNs? ><
01:32:405 (92405|2,92510|3) - Remove this one. I want you to specify piano in NOVICE Diff. Agreed. I think I should've done that
01:32:299 (92299|3) - Add This. Done! I also re-patterned and add it has a hand for match the next two notes.

ADVANCE
00:29:553 (29553|1,29976|2,30187|2,30398|1) - Remove? Agreed. Also re-patterned for pitch.
00:36:314 (36314|2,36736|2,36948|2,37159|1) - Remove? Agreed. Did the same thing as above too.
00:36:842 - Add a double note. I will consider as from 00:27:652 - 00:40:328 - I've been using 1/2 snap/beat. I'm afraid that players would find it un-smooth if a 1/4 snap/beat note suddenly appeared.

EXHAUST
00:31:560 - What about this? No, I think the piano sound is too soft to be necessary added. Plus I tried it out but the gameplay didn't feel right. Sorry!
00:34:835 - Here too. No. I hear it too but from 00:34:412 - 00:39:483 - I feel that it's when the drum sound kicks in and becomes the main sound hence I think it's too soft and isn't necessary to add a note here.
00:35:574 - ?* No, Sorry! Same reason as above,
00:38:955 - ?* No, Sorry! Same reason as above,
00:41:067 - Add some note. Done! Nice catch! Also re-patterned for smoother gameplay.
01:08:637 (68637|1) - ?** Done!
01:15:398 (75398|2) - ?** Done!
01:22:158 (82158|2) - ?** Done! Wow, nice catch!
01:23:320 - Add some note. No thanks, I think it's too soft plus I tried adding it and playing it, I feel that it makes the gameplay 'un-smooth'.
01:24:165 - Add some note. No thanks, same reason as above.
01:28:919 (88919|2) - ?** Done!
?* = You might add some note. I hear a sound explicitly.
?** = Remove? Not all white line must have a note. These all are some of example.

Thank you very much! :'3
GL >.<

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Hello there.....I'm still beginner for modding and i hope you like my mod

4k column l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l
green-if you see that color, my suggestions
red- if you see that color, note/reminder

EXHAUST Mod

00:42:229 - add one note at column 2 Done!
00:43:919 - add one note at column 1 Done!
00:44:342 - add one note at column 3 Done!
00:46:032 - add one note at column 1 Ahh I moved 00:46:137 (46137|3) - down to 00:46:032 at column 4 instead as I realised the sound is at 00:44:342 Nice!
00:46:454 - add one note at column 4 Done!
00:48:144 - add one note at column 1 Done!
00:48:567 - add one note at column 3 Done!
00:48:989 - add one note at column 4 Done! Wow these were very nice catch on my notes consistency!

Don't worry your mod is awesome. Salute >w<7

Crusts wrote:

hi from my queue
sorry if delay It's okay, I'm sorry for not responding earlier instead, was busy. ><

Col : 1|2|3|4

mod

Advanced
OD change into 8 Will consider as I wanna check difficulties settings with a BAT so yeah. However, thanks for pointing it out.

00:40:539 (40539|1,40645|2,40750|1,40856|2,40962|1,41067|2) - this part better make like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4631179 Nice, I actually re-patterned this part again afterwards after some try and error, nice suggestion though! XD
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00:41:173 - add note at 1 Done but different column due to above reason.
00:42:651 (42651|1) - move to 4 ? Considering as I might change the patterns.
00:42:863 (42863|3,42968|2,43074|1) - make this into 321 stair(if above accepted) Considering, same as above reason.
00:47:511 (47511|0,47827|3) - ctrl + h Considering, likely not accepting as gameplay felt weird when I tried it out.
00:49:201 (49201|0,49306|3,49412|1) - 123 stair ? Considering as I might change the patterns.
From 00:41:173 - 00:50:891 - I repatterned most stuffs while keeping most of your suggestions in mind, thanks.
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01:12:123 (72123|0,72123|3) - make into 12 jump No thanks, will result in weird pitch placement.
01:12:334 (72334|0,72334|3) - ^ 34 jump No thanks, same reason as above. To me the sound is the same so I placed them on the same column.
01:15:503 (75503|2) - move to 2 No thanks, I felt that the gameplay feels smoother if it's at 3.
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01:15:609 (75609|0,75820|3,76031|3,76137|2,76243|1) - ctrl+h if you are going to make a mirror of this part 01:08:848 (68848|0,69060|3,69271|3,69376|2,69482|1) -
01:22:369 (82369|0,82581|3,82792|3,82898|2,83003|1) - repattern don't make the exact same thing ._. from this part 01:08:848 (68848|0,69060|3,69271|3,69376|2,69482|1) - at least make it different a bit
01:25:644 (85644|3,85644|0,85855|0,85855|3,86067|0,86067|3,86383|1,86383|2) - this part too ._. there are the same thing in 1 part
at least make the placement a bit different
01:29:130 (89130|0,89341|3,89552|3,89658|2,89764|1) - ^
Will consider and try, I do not really want to flip the pattern, I only do so when there isn't really a specific pitch but during the song. However during those parts, I could clearly hear that the pitch drops from high to low thus the same patterns, sorry about that. If more future mods talks about these pattern, I'll do something about it. For now I'll just change the drum sound patterns.
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01:31:876 - just for fun make it like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4631204 Done, totally liking yours better! ^^

Novice
00:13:286 (13286|3,13497|2,13708|1,13919|0) - change into normal note Will consider as the piano sound drags in my opinion.
00:16:666 (16666|1,16877|3,17088|0,17300|2) - don't make too much complicated placement like this LN I'm sorry but this is very vauge, how is it complicated? Checking with the pattern reading difficulties, I find this that this pattern is reasonable for Novice ( Normal ) difficulties. Do you have any suggestions for this part?
00:25:962 (25962|1,26173|1,26384|2,26595|2) - make this into 1234 stair No, this pattern was made according to the pitch of the sound. Stair doesn't seem suitible for this part to me.
00:53:003 (53003|3) - delete really awkward here Agreed, done.
01:00:714 (60714|0,60820|3,60926|0,61031|3) - change placement like this ? I'm sorry, what do you mean?
01:05:257 (65257|2,65679|2) - move to 1 ? hand balance Agreed but changed 01:04:412 (64412|1,64834|1,65257|2,65679|2) - one column to the left instead.
01:12:123 (72123|0,72334|0) - make this 2 into 42 No thanks, would result in incorrect pitch.
01:32:933 (92933|3) - 2 is enough for novice diff No thanks, a hand is actually relatively easy for 4k Novice.

things in general on your map is too much same thing i see in here
prefer too make a different placement
Yes, I am terribly sorry at that if it wasn't pleasant when you played/testplayed it. ;w;
For me I think for pattern-wise, pitch is more important than making different patterns as from what I've learnt it's usually low pitch from left to high pitch to the right in the mania keys, I would like to actually make a map that really flows along with the music as I want them to enjoy the music too with the map, so I actually try to match the notes to both the vocal and instruments ( mainly ). I do not know if this is right or wrong but I would really just want to make a map that's enjoyable with the music and hopefully interesting too.

for exhaust the OD is too high change it into 8.5 Will consider as I wanna check difficulties settings with a BAT, thanks for pointing it out.

that's it my mod gl on your map
Thanks, I really appreicate it!

Abraxos wrote:

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impromptu mod why do i do this to myself every time

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
2. Aimod : ( × ) check for EXH, unsnapped note Done!
3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
4. Metadata : ( ✓ ) cant check properly because i dont japanese
5. Video : ( × ) plz resize to 1366x768, even if its off by 1 Done!

will do EXH only, maybe will come back for others. I'm grateful for your mod already so no worries! >w</

EXH

EXHAUST

1. 00:13:180 (13180|1,13391|1,13603|1,13814|1,14025|1) - hm. current pattern is fine, but id would appreciate it even more if the drums were emphasized more with thrills. something like this would work fine in giving the drums a greater buildup per se. Mmm done!
2. 00:16:349 (16349|0,16349|2,16666|1,16666|3) - sounds like they are the same, only the second one is drawn out more. would understand if you didnt want to have them in the same columns, but maybe you should cuz 00:18:673 (18673|1,18673|3,18990|3,18990|1) - are in the same situation but are in the same columns Ah! I made it that way because I was following 00:17:088 (17088|0,17088|2,17300|0,17300|1) - pattern but flipped. Applied something similar to your idea though.
3. 00:18:990 (18990|1,18990|3,19412|1,19412|3,19729|3,19729|1,20046|1,20046|3) - btw why are all these in the same columns lmao Oh my god xDDD Probably made it that way when I was placing notes to pitch, silly me. Rearranged.
4. 00:21:736 (21736|2) - move to 2, see above and 00:21:736 (21736|2,21736|3,22053|3,22053|2,22370|3,22370|2) - Donee.
5. 00:28:286 (28286|2) - id overlook this because this song was retarded here and decided to have the synth on the blue tick but i strongly suggest you to shift this down by 1/4 due to the fact that vocal mapping isnt really encouraged for mania. !!!!! Done
6. 00:27:018 (27018|3,27018|0) - pretty much a ghost note if you check it with hitsound effects turned to 0%. the drums are in 1/8s so it kinda goes like this. Ah I originally had a pattern similar to this but a person didn't really like it so I changed it to 1/4 snap. To be honest I still like my previous pattern so I'm following yours :3
7. 00:28:391 - i assume you dont mean to miss this synth? Yep, oh and, realised wrong pitch placement, so I rearranged it.
8. 00:28:286 - sound here is very alike 00:28:708 - both sound like a deep bassy twang in the music. ignoring vocals, should this tick have a note then? I believe so.
9. the streams you have here are really hard to comprehend. i mean, they do play well, but when it comes to it being consistent with the music itself it kinda suffers. maybe its just how the song is, with the pretty complicated mix of piano synth and drum, but then again whatever i seem to list above kinda goes against that. i assume you do know what you are doing when it comes to note placement, so ill just leave that alone for now. maybe itll be good to get second opinions on the legitimacy of the 1/4 streams, or you could just review them yourself. I'll keep this in my mind. To be honest, I was having problems mapping the streams because it was hard to hear the uh.. background 'twang' sound due to the vocal -_-. But from the testplays I've seen, they're mostly okay.
10. from now on ill be complaining about playability. since i played this on DT i would be kinda complaining from the perspective of DT, but it kinda applies for this map too, since you mentioned how this was for beginners. Okay I understand.
11. 00:26:807 (26807|0,26807|3,26807|1) - a BG synth rises to the highest pitch when this chord comes so id suggest you differentiate it from 00:26:173 (26173|0,26173|3,26173|1). also removes some of the stacks carried over into the streams (assuming you applied the 1/8 drums before) Done~
12. 00:36:103 (36103|1,36314|1,36525|1,36736|1,36948|1,37159|1) - asfdasaf do this plz. current stacks make the left hand uncomfortable. Ok! ... Holy crap it's much better now xD
13. 00:37:898 (37898|2,38110|1) - should be doubles? they are kicks after all, and this is a exh diff so it should be a little denser. Yes I totally agree, lol.
14. 00:39:905 (39905|3,40117|3,40328|3,40539|3,40750|3,40962|3,41173|3) - stack ends with LN, would strongly encourage to change. Yas, done.
15. 00:41:173 (41173|3) - what is this following? isnt vocals, isnt the piano cuz of the other missed piano notes here, they kinda seem arbitrary to me except for the fact that they all are the same sets here.
16. 00:41:173 (41173|3) - _00:41:173 (41173|3) - intentionally missed piano?
17. 00:45:820 -_ 00:43:708 -_00:47:933 - ^^^
    I'm not entirely sure but it was supposed to be mapped to the piano, I don't really know if I did it exactly because the vocal makes it really hard for me to hear it porperly like, I'm not sure if 00:41:173 (41173|3) or 00:41:173 (41173|3) has a piano sound or not because it's barely hear-able. So I just map the notes to the drums and and piano sounds I could hear. In the end I still added them just incase, let's see what happens when a BN checks the map
18. 00:49:623 (49623|3,49623|1) - are you sure about giving vocals a double? i thought the difference with the impact of instruments and vocals should be there. Opps, fixed!
19. 01:06:736 (66736|0,66788|1,66841|2,66894|3) - shift down by 1/8, check with 25% playback on 0% effect volume if unsure.maybe something like this. turns it into a jumpthrill. you should ditch a note at the first chord of the 1/8s since the jacks it creates makes it bleh. I always knew something's off about this part, now I know why. xD
20. 01:13:496 (73496|0,73549|1,73602|2,73655|3) - same as above, check this if you want a suggestion. Yesh please.
21. 01:18:672 (78672|2,78883|2,79095|2,79306|2,79517|2) - these right hand biased streams arent really smooth on DT, so id suggest a similar thrill pattern i suggested above. variation of the above suggested, gives you an idea of what im driving at. Aye
22. 01:20:257 (80257|0,80310|1,80362|2,80415|3) - same as above. btw i ditched the doubles at 01:20:151 (80151|3,80151|2) - and changed it over to 01:20:362 (80362|2) - because i feel as if the crash there is much stronger and it kinda complements the 1/8 burst well too, and with 01:20:151 (80151|3,80151|2) - it makes it a little too awkward to play. Agreed.
23. 01:26:806 (86806|1,86912|3) - interestingly enough you changed your mind here apparently and now these are singles.
24. 01:27:017 (87017|0,87070|1,87123|2,87176|3) - same as above, you should know how to fix it by now
    Silly BFN strikes again. Both fixed!
    

overall structure seems solid, a few very annoying inconsistencies here and there. if you were to just give it to me just for a testplay i would say this is a solid map, but on further digging the inconsistencies do surface. not bad for a first map if it is your first map. Thank you very much >3</

i am not too sure about the streams you have, they seem pretty hard to define in it of itself, and it kinda bugs me to no end. I am terribly sorry for that, I will improve in making streams next time I map again.

nice HS btw, dont we all agree that HS is the devil amongst us. Thank you! Hitsound = most boring and hardest part during mapping imo.

hope this mod helped somewhat, good luck with rankz <3 aaaaaaaaaaaa \;w;/

edit: matey if you didnt agree with whatever i said then tell me. dont just leave all my efforts in the field lying like that and leave this dying ; its extremely patronizing and makes me think as if whatever i did is utter rubbish.

i tried rationalizing the fact that youve disregarded the mod by saying that you didnt have time to check your map and edit it, but yet you seem to tell me that youve had had time to come online and change your DP and set scores and chat in #osumania? what are you thinking? have you given up on this map? did you disagree with my mod to such an extent that you didnt want to work on this map? were you perhaps discouraged by it? come on now, you know it isnt nice to let my efforts go to waste. seriously, at least get back to me. its been 16 days already.

edit2: turns out my first assumption about the lack of time was right. apologies if edit seemed a little aggro, i needed confirmation back that youre still there and you didnt give up on this map ;w;7 Gomennnn

LuckyLemon wrote:

Hi :p 你好

Columns 1|2|3|4

NOIVE

00:52:581 - maybe add this instead to prevent the little bit of awkward in column 4 Oo, done.

1. 01:02:193 - change to a double
   01:02:510 - change to a double (sounds similar to other doubles)
   No thanks. It doesn't feel right for me.

01:26:912 - add note to column 2, maybe 3 Opps, missed that, added to 2!
01:27:229 - delete note !! Done and shifted notes

1. 01:27:545 - add note in column 3 - continue with the stream
   01:27:757 - add note in column 1
   01:27:968 - add note in column 3
   I get your idea why but no thanks, I wanna focus on the main sounds only for Novice

Note: The following changes increase the star difficulty from 1.76 to 1.8 Didn't apply so... owo

You misspelled NOVICE :3...

ADVANCED

from 00:25:011 - 00:26:807 - no use of column 1. Maybe change 00:26:384 (26384|2,26595|2) - to column 1? Woops! Done.
00:27:441 (27441|2) - add the little burst here like this Will consider. ( Burst is 1/8 btw. )

1. 00:40:117 - burst starts there.
   00:40:222 - add note in column 2
   00:40:434 - add note in column 1
   Added notes and rearranged

01:13:074 - add note same sound as the one prior (1/2 a beat) Done!

EXHAUST

00:14:342 - if you make that a triple you will also need to make the following into triples in order to maintain consistency 00:16:032 (16032|0,16032|3,17722|3,17722|2,19412|1,19412|2,21103|3,21103|2,22793|2,22793|1,24483|2,24483|3) - Ah my bad, fixed.
00:57:651 - make into triple. To avoid making the transition to hard i recommend deleting note in column 4 from 00:57:545 - Accepted!

Good luck with the map Thanks~

1. 00:00:610 note isn't snapped, check your AiMod
2. 00:27:018 this snare roll should start 1/8 beat sooner (on the half beat), i think it sounds weird with the actual timing.
3. 00:45:398 missing a note for the crash cymbal (i suggest putting it on 4th collumn)
4. 00:51:630 missing a note for the nuanced kick (suggesting 3rd or 4th collumn)
5. 00:55:644 ^ (suggesting 1st collumn)
6. 01:32:299 a jump to emphasize the vocals for the outro would be better
7. 01:32:616 ^

Kernaus wrote:

Hi ! Hello there! :d

This is my first attempt at modding, so i apologize if anything sounds dumb to you or if the post itself isn't very well written, but i'll try my best to help you in this. Thank you!


EXHAUST

1. 00:00:610 note isn't snapped, check your AiMod ! done.
2. 00:27:018 this snare roll should start 1/8 beat sooner (on the half beat), i think it sounds weird with the actual timing. Checked with 25% Playback Rate, there's no snare sound there hence not adding.
3. 00:45:398 missing a note for the crash cymbal (i suggest putting it on 4th collumn) Woops! Done
4. 00:51:630 missing a note for the nuanced kick (suggesting 3rd or 4th collumn) d
5. 00:55:644 ^ (suggesting 1st collumn) d
6. 01:32:299 a jump to emphasize the vocals for the outro would be better I'm assuming you meant 'hand' because it's already a jump. ( Jump = 2 notes ) I was afraid that it'll result in awkward pattern because of the jack it'll make but when I tested it, it was fine I guess. Added.
7. 01:32:616 ^ Confused, are you telling me to add a chord?

Well, that's all i was able to find, i might take some time to check the other diffs. hope you found this helpful, good luck getting your map ranked o/ It was helpful ;3