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AK X LYNX ft. Veela - Virtual Paradise [Taiko]

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-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 23 de julio de 2016 at 11:46:32

Artist: AK X LYNX ft. Veela
Title: Virtual Paradise
Tags: drum and bass dnb liquidfunk xkito chillout tasuke912 Nardoxyribonucleic SKSalt Shini
BPM: 174
Filesize: 2946kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,15 stars, 158 notes)
  2. Muzukashii (2,8 stars, 252 notes)
  3. Nardo's Kantan (1,38 stars, 98 notes)
  4. Oni (3,71 stars, 331 notes)
  5. SK's Inner Oni (3,96 stars, 381 notes)
  6. tasuke's Inner Oni (4,17 stars, 369 notes)
Download: AK X LYNX ft. Veela - Virtual Paradise
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#9
Amazing STD ver. by Milan-

Nardo's Kantan by Nardoxyribonucleic
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by me
Oni by me
SK's Inner Oni by SKSalt
tasuke's Inner Oni by tasuke912

BG by pishifat
Last edited by -Sh1n1- , edited 27 times in total.
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic
Here is the Kantan as requested~ (no kd)

http://puu.sh/lgl1E.rar

It seems that tags are inconsistent at the moment. Please unify them :3
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Here is the Kantan as requested~ (no kd)

http://puu.sh/lgl1E.rar

Thanks Nardo senpai :3

It seems that tags are inconsistent at the moment. Please unify them :3 xD sorry for my bakaness, there was a problem with double spacing lool, fixed~~
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
M4M Request by Prophecy

Extra Stuff: 1 Star
[]
[General]
  1. 00:41:408 - Preview time here?
  2. 01:28:649 - Add a Spinner Start here, end: 01:31:063 ?

[ Nardo's Kantan]
  1. Very solid diffs. Nice Map :3

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:22:442 (2) - d
  2. 00:23:821 (4) - k
  3. 00:27:614 (12) - move to 00:27:270
  4. 00:29:683 (17) - k
  5. 00:33:476 (25) - d
  6. 00:46:752 (54) - k
  7. 00:57:614 - add d
  8. 01:03:132 - add d
  9. 01:13:994 (138) - k
  10. 01:25:718 (175,176,177,178) - I don't prefer 4 notes (5 or 3 is better)

[ Oni]
  1. NICE MAP

[ Inner Oni]
  1. Wonderful! Good Luck!
Last edited by Prophecy , edited 1 time in total.
ZTH
254 posts
Joined November 2014
ZTH
Hello~ From my modding queue. Please note that these are just my personal suggestions and are optional.

General

  1. Background image is 1228x767. I recommend changing it to 1366x768 to fit the 16:9 ratio.

tasuke's Inner Oni

  1. 00:37:270 (52) - I would move this note to 00:36:925 and change 00:36:752 (50,51) both to k to highlight more on vocals. (Also increases consistency as this pattern is similar to 00:30:201 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34))
  2. 00:54:339 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,1) - I find this stream a bit too long and feels out of place. How about deleting 00:54:425 (33) and changing 00:54:339 (32) to d so that the stream starts at a vocal shout (which gives the stream more emphasis)?
  3. 00:54:770 (37,38) - ctrl +g. 00:54:856 (38) should be a kat to match that bell(?) high pitch sound. This makes the stream smoother to play.
  4. 01:05:718 (66) - change to d. Tune is low here.
  5. 01:05:890 (67) - change to k. Tune is increasing.
  6. 01:16:752 (6,7) - ctrl +g. Matches the increasing tune.
  7. 01:27:614 (86,87,88,89,90) - Instead of kkkkd, how about kkddk? Tune is alternating here so kkddk works better.

Oni

  1. 00:24:511 (8,9,10) - d kk sounds better here since k represents those high vocal notes.
  2. 00:29:856 (24) - Either move this note to 00:30:201 or delete it. There is no particular sound happening on 00:29:856 to give it a note.
  3. 00:34:856 (38,39,40) - ctrl+g. The sound of the vocal is decreasing.
  4. 00:36:235 (42) - Move this note to 00:36:063. Matches the vocal better.
  5. 00:38:649 - 00:41:408 - I am not clearly sure what you are following here. You were mostly following the vocals in the beginning part of the song, but this part doesn't follow that, which disrupts the flow. I recommend that you follow the vocals here so that the beginning part of the song flows nicely.
  6. 00:54:856 - 01:06:235 - I just find this section a bit awkward. You placed a 1/4 triplet mainly on vocals, but they don't really follow that well. So these 1/4 feels a bit forced to me. I won't give you any suggestions since I am not that experienced in modding but you should get more mods opinion on this.
  7. 01:08:476 (213) - change to d to match the downbeat.
  8. 01:25:459 (322,323) - ctrl +g. Note 323 represents a downbeat so d works better here.
  9. 01:25:890 (325) - change to k for the snare.
  10. 01:26:063 (326) - change to d for the downbeat.

Muzukashii

  1. 00:24:511 (8,9) - ctrl+g. Increasing vocal so d k works better.
  2. 00:29:856 (23) - Same as oni, this note doesn't really emphasize anything.
  3. 00:34:856 (36) - change to k. The humming sound is decreasing.
  4. 00:35:545 (38,39) - ctrl+g. Increasing vocal.
  5. 00:38:649 - 00:41:408 - Same as oni. Would be nice if you can explain what you are following here.
  6. 01:11:494 (188) - Move this note to 01:11:321. Plays and sounds better.
  7. 01:11:752 (190) - Change to d for the downbeat.
  8. 01:25:201 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - Instead of kdkddkk, how about changing it to dkddkdk? The increasing vocal matches the first two notes dk and the third note is a d since it is a downbeat.

Futsuu

  1. 00:28:304 (14) - change to d. Four k in a row overpowers the song.
  2. 00:29:339 (16) - change to k. Decreasing humming sound.
  3. 00:34:856 (27) - change to k. ^
  4. 00:37:442 (32,33) - ctrl +g. The voice here is alternating.
  5. 00:43:304 (44) - change to k. High voice shout.
  6. 00:43:821 (45) - move this note to 00:43:649 and change it to d to match the vocal.
  7. 00:44:511 - 00:54:166 - Whoa, so many kats here. This, again, overpowers the song. I would change some of them into dons. For example, you can change 00:50:028 (62) or 00:50:718 (64) to d.
  8. 01:05:545 (111) - change to k for alternating rhythm.
  9. 01:11:063 (128) - move this note to 01:10:890 and change it to d to follow the vocal.
  10. 01:25:890 (175,176) - ctrl +g. Note 175 matches the snare and note 176 matches the downbeat.

Nardo's Kantan

  1. 00:38:304 (20) - I don't really see any particular reason to place a note here (considering you mapped vocals so far). I suggest moving this note to 00:37:614 or 00:40:373.
  2. 01:20:028 (83,84,85,86,87,88) - I am a bit curious. I prefer d k ddk d here to be consistent with downbeats and upbeats but you did the polar opposite.

GDs are fine but I believe Oni, Muzukashii and Futsuu needs a bit of a work (especially on the usage of dons and kats). Other than that, this map looks promising and since I like the song, hope you can get it ranked~

GL~ ;)
tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
tasuke912

ZTH wrote:

SPOILER
Hello~ From my modding queue. Please note that these are just my personal suggestions and are optional.

tasuke's Inner Oni

  1. 00:37:270 (52) - I would move this note to 00:36:925 and change 00:36:752 (50,51) both to k to highlight more on vocals. (Also increases consistency as this pattern is similar to 00:30:201 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34)) done.
  2. 00:54:339 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,1) - I find this stream a bit too long and feels out of place. How about deleting 00:54:425 (33) and changing 00:54:339 (32) to d so that the stream starts at a vocal shout (which gives the stream more emphasis)? I prefer keeping this stream, but i will consider about it again.
  3. 00:54:770 (37,38) - ctrl +g. 00:54:856 (38) should be a kat to match that bell(?) high pitch sound. This makes the stream smoother to play. d is also fine, since vocal is lower pitch sound.
  4. 01:05:718 (66) - change to d. Tune is low here. kkk is better imo, cuz it makes reversed pattern of the prev ddd.
  5. 01:05:890 (67) - change to k. Tune is increasing.
  6. 01:16:752 (6,7) - ctrl +g. Matches the increasing tune.
  7. 01:27:614 (86,87,88,89,90) - Instead of kkkkd, how about kkddk? Tune is alternating here so kkddk works better. no change
Thanks!

update: http://puu.sh/lq0dg/25d5ecc415.zip
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Prophecy wrote:

M4M Request by Prophecy

Extra Stuff: 1 Star Thank you, your mod will be ready into the next hours :3
[]
[General]
  1. 00:41:408 - Preview time here? copy from Milan-'s map and It's ranked prefer to keep
  2. 01:28:649 - Add a Spinner Start here, end: 01:31:063 ? Nice idea but I reall want to enphasize the last note with Finish and will be better to keep, but If more modders talk about it I'll notice you

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:22:442 (2) - d not because you have high voice pitch at 00:22:097 (1) - and then teo whistles sound at 00:22:442 (2,3) -
  2. 00:23:821 (4) - k keeping to follow voice better.
  3. 00:27:614 (12) - move to 00:27:270 I want to enphasize piano sound with all notes: 00:27:614 (12,13,14,15) -
  4. 00:29:683 (17) - k keeping consistency with 00:34:856 (27,28) -
  5. 00:33:476 (25) - d 00:33:132 (24,25,26) - have the same sound
  6. 00:46:752 (54) - k added variety cuz 00:45:201 (49,50) - and 00:47:959 (57,58) - will make more repetitive :c
  7. 00:57:614 - add d this diff need more breaks imo, so I'll keep that
  8. 01:03:132 - add d same reason as above
  9. 01:13:994 (138) - k no because there is a good interlude after 01:13:476 (135,136) -
  10. 01:25:718 (175,176,177,178) - I don't prefer 4 notes (5 or 3 is better) Oki changed into 5 notes :3

[ Oni]
  1. NICE MAP Thanks :3

-1MP
I was sick :c sorry for long delay,

tasuke's diff updated *-*/ Thanks
Kankri
192 posts
Joined June 2014
Kankri
From my queue \o/


[Futsuu]

00:50:718 (64) - don

01:10:201 (126) - ^

01:19:856 (157) - ^

Pretty straight stuff.

[Muzukashii]

00:50:632 (92) - New note (don)

[Oni]

Looks good. :D



I wish good luck to this map! ^^
SKSalt
551 posts
Joined September 2013
SKSalt
Hi. Veela song? kudosu×5000000000000000


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:38:304 (34) - delete? 00:27:270 - I considered this.
  2. 00:33:132 (24) - change to d? 00:22:097 (1) - same reason.
  3. 00:27:614 (12) - and 00:28:649 (15) - change to d? I considered an interval.
  4. 00:38:649 (35) - same as above.
  5. 00:45:373 (50) - change to d? It has sense of incongruity that k continues.
  6. 00:48:132 (58) - ^
  7. 00:50:890 (65) - ^
  8. 00:53:649 (73) - ^
  9. 01:10:545 (127) - ^ I considered a vocal sound.
  10. 01:20:718 (159) - ^
  11. 01:23:476 (167) - ^
  12. 01:25:890 (175) - delete? You should avoid five of 1/2 in Futsuu.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:55:373 (112) - delete? This is little long pattern.
  2. 00:58:132 (124) - same as above.
  3. 01:00:890 (136) - ^
  4. 01:03:649 (148) - ^
  5. 01:11:235 (183) - change to d? I considered an interval.
  6. 01:16:063 (204) - delete? same as before.
[tasuke's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:54:339 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,1) - (これちょっと長すぎない...?)
Other diffs are fine, I think. And... I have already made this map lol I would love to participate in this mapset. I will leave it up to your judgment in regards to that.

SK's Inner Oni
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: AK x LYNX ft. Veela - Virtual Paradise.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 41321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Virtual Paradise
TitleUnicode:Virtual Paradise
Artist:AK X LYNX ft. Veela
ArtistUnicode:AK X LYNX ft. Veela
Creator:-Sh1n1-
Version:SK's Inner Oni
Source:
Tags:drum and bass dnb liquidfunk xkito chillout tasuke912 Nardoxyribonucleic
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
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btw, Good luck :) :) :)
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
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Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

ZTH wrote:

Hello~ From my modding queue. Please note that these are just my personal suggestions and are optional.

General

  1. Background image is 1228x767. I recommend changing it to 1366x768 to fit the 16:9 ratio. Changed into another BG

Oni

  1. 00:24:511 (8,9,10) - d kk sounds better here since k represents those high vocal notes. I'm not following vocal here~~, is just the same piano sound as 00:24:166 (7) -
  2. 00:29:856 (24) - Either move this note to 00:30:201 or delete it. There is no particular sound happening on 00:29:856 to give it a note. Oki, fixed~~
  3. 00:34:856 (38,39,40) - ctrl+g. The sound of the vocal is decreasing. I want to mark a difference here cuz if I Ctrl+g'ed 00:35:545 (40,41) - will be d but they don't have the same sound.
  4. 00:36:235 (42) - Move this note to 00:36:063. Matches the vocal better. yeah, fixed~~
  5. 00:38:649 - 00:41:408 - I am not clearly sure what you are following here. You were mostly following the vocals in the beginning part of the song, but this part doesn't follow that, which disrupts the flow. I recommend that you follow the vocals here so that the beginning part of the song flows nicely. I'm wonder because there is a strong piano sound on 00:38:649 - and then I'm following vocal with 00:41:408 -, I didn't understand it :'(
  6. 00:54:856 - 01:06:235 - I just find this section a bit awkward. You placed a 1/4 triplet mainly on vocals, but they don't really follow that well. So these 1/4 feels a bit forced to me. I won't give you any suggestions since I am not that experienced in modding but you should get more mods opinion on this. Well I feel the same, triplets are forced to me too xD but is good at playing
  7. 01:08:476 (213) - change to d to match the downbeat. fixed~~
  8. 01:25:459 (322,323) - ctrl +g. Note 323 represents a downbeat so d works better here. changed into another way cuz I found a difference sound here, no downbeat
  9. 01:25:890 (325) - change to k for the snare. fixed~~
  10. 01:26:063 (326) - change to d for the downbeat. fixed~~

Muzukashii

  1. 00:24:511 (8,9) - ctrl+g. Increasing vocal so d k works better. 00:24:166 (7,8) - they have similar sounds also I want to add more enphasis to 00:24:856 (9) -, keeping consistency with Oni too
  2. 00:29:856 (23) - Same as oni, this note doesn't really emphasize anything. sure, deleted
  3. 00:34:856 (36) - change to k. The humming sound is decreasing. 00:34:856 (35,36) - same vocal pitch here~~
  4. 00:35:545 (38,39) - ctrl+g. Increasing vocal. same as Oni
  5. 00:38:649 - 00:41:408 - Same as oni. Would be nice if you can explain what you are following here. As I said before at Oni, first I'm following high piano sound, then vocal, It downs't need to habe consistency cuz there are difference sounds
  6. 01:11:494 (188) - Move this note to 01:11:321. Plays and sounds better. Ohh, nice catch
  7. 01:11:752 (190) - Change to d for the downbeat. changed 01:11:580 -
  8. 01:25:201 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - Instead of kdkddkk, how about changing it to dkddkdk? The increasing vocal matches the first two notes dk and the third note is a d since it is a downbeat. It could be but 01:25:201 (251) - should be k yes or yes for dums, I'll keep in mind, Thanks

Futsuu

  1. 00:28:304 (14) - change to d. Four k in a row overpowers the song. Fixed~~
  2. 00:29:339 (16) - change to k. Decreasing humming sound. same vocal sound
  3. 00:34:856 (27) - change to k. ^ same as above
  4. 00:37:442 (32,33) - ctrl +g. The voice here is alternating. fixed~~
  5. 00:43:304 (44) - change to k. High voice shout. d follow the voice better I guess
  6. 00:43:821 (45) - move this note to 00:43:649 and change it to d to match the vocal. fixed~~
  7. 00:44:511 - 00:54:166 - Whoa, so many kats here. This, again, overpowers the song. I would change some of them into dons. For example, you can change 00:50:028 (62) or 00:50:718 (64) to d. changed 00:44:856 - 00:47:614 - 00:50:373 - 00:53:132 -
  8. 01:05:545 (111) - change to k for alternating rhythm. fixed~~
  9. 01:11:063 (128) - move this note to 01:10:890 and change it to d to follow the vocal. Not, because I want to follow instrumental with 01:11:408 (129,130,131) - and start a new section with 1/2 triplets is not my style :'( feels werid
  10. 01:25:890 (175,176) - ctrl +g. Note 175 matches the snare and note 176 matches the downbeat. similar sounds at 01:25:718 (174,175) -, same at 01:26:063 (176,177) -

GDs are fine but I believe Oni, Muzukashii and Futsuu needs a bit of a work (especially on the usage of dons and kats). Other than that, this map looks promising and since I like the song, hope you can get it ranked~

GL~ ;)
Thanks for your mod :3 and sorry for long delay :c
-Sh1n1-
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Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Kasha wrote:

From my queue \o/


[Futsuu]

00:50:718 (64) - don Not because I'm keeping consistency with 00:45:201 (49,50) -

01:10:201 (126) - ^ Ohh, nice~~

01:19:856 (157) - ^ *-*/ fixed~~

Pretty straight stuff.

[Muzukashii]

00:50:632 (92) - New note (don) No, sorry, maybe if you explain why?

[Oni]

Looks good. :D yay :3



I wish good luck to this map! ^^
Thanks for your mod Kasha :3
-Sh1n1-
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Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

SKSalt wrote:

Hi. Veela song? kudosu×5000000000000000 Yayyyyyyyyyy, Thanks SK :3 ♥


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:38:304 (34) - delete? 00:27:270 - I considered this. the sound here is more obvious than 00:27:270 -
  2. 00:33:132 (24) - change to d? 00:22:097 (1) - same reason. :O How I didn't keep consistency with that xD kill me pls, fixed~~
  3. 00:27:614 (12) - and 00:28:649 (15) - change to d? I considered an interval. there are strong beats of piano, I think that it's ok at it's now
  4. 00:38:649 (35) - same as above. same as above too
  5. 00:45:373 (50) - change to d? It has sense of incongruity that k continues. well. I'm agree and as modders told me that before, I rather remap this part, it could be ok now
  6. 00:48:132 (58) - ^ ^
  7. 00:50:890 (65) - ^ ^
  8. 00:53:649 (73) - ^ ^
  9. 01:10:545 (127) - ^ I considered a vocal sound. you are tight but I changed the previous note as d, so it feels so weird if I decided to change 01:10:545 - to d
  10. 01:20:718 (159) - ^ ^
  11. 01:23:476 (167) - ^ ^
  12. 01:25:890 (175) - delete? You should avoid five of 1/2 in Futsuu. O.o why? I saw 6-plets on another maps xD
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:55:373 (112) - delete? This is little long pattern. yes. you are right, fixed ~~
  2. 00:58:132 (124) - same as above. fixed ~~
  3. 01:00:890 (136) - ^ fixed ~~
  4. 01:03:649 (148) - ^ fixed~~
  5. 01:11:235 (183) - change to d? I considered an interval. Nope, it break my consistency
  6. 01:16:063 (204) - delete? same as before. same as above
Other diffs are fine, I think. And... I have already made this map lol I would love to participate in this mapset. I will leave it up to your judgment in regards to that. Sure, *-*/ let's rank it

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123,228,88304,1,0,0:0:0:0:

btw, Good luck :) :) :)
Thanks for mod, stars and GD *-*/
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

ZTH wrote:

Hello~ From my modding queue. Please note that these are just my personal suggestions and are optional.

Nardo's Kantan

  1. 00:38:304 (20) - I don't really see any particular reason to place a note here (considering you mapped vocals so far). I suggest moving this note to 00:37:614 or 00:40:373. Retained for a smoother flow. In fact, not all of the notes are following the vocal because of difficulty limitation.
  2. 01:20:028 (83,84,85,86,87,88) - I am a bit curious. I prefer d k ddk d here to be consistent with downbeats and upbeats but you did the polar opposite. I think this would follow the vocal pitch more.

GDs are fine but I believe Oni, Muzukashii and Futsuu needs a bit of a work (especially on the usage of dons and kats). Other than that, this map looks promising and since I like the song, hope you can get it ranked~

GL~ ;)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
really great map, good luck
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
Thank you :3

where is my Mutual? :c
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Ok so let's try it.

I may take some time to mod it and i may do it in several parts. So dw.

[General]

Why inners got higher hp than Oni? Is it because Inner can be considered out of set?
Demn those early beats made like there's someone who's walking in my house aaaaaaaaaa

[Nardo's Kantan]

00:37:959 : I don't really understand those 2 first note. There nothing really noticable compared to (21). It may not be consistent since it's not a noticable new section of the music too.

00:50:718 : You may add k here, the next patterns finish with a triple, this one shoudn't be missing too.

00:48:649 : After some reflexions, i would move this k to 00:47:959, first it would make the triple similar to what i said above (if you accepted it), then if would make the d at 00:48:304 having a better impact since you did the same at 00:54:511 for example.

00:53:132 : You may delete this note here. That would make the next pattern consitent in terms of length and rythm.

Overall i think the fact that you have a break around 00:51:063 and have 3 same pattenrs makes it akward, like you moved your patterns counted to the second. Maybe some rethiking and replacement here could be nice. Up to you tho.

01:20:373 : You may add a k here. She said twice the same sentence but you map it differently. Sounds weird.
01:22:787 : Same here but it would be too much.

Overall i'm not picky about the d and k stuff here. The notes are decent, and it is mapped really well. Mapping is consitent but some points are questionable for me.

[Futsuu]

00:28:649 : Since you made a 3/1 break at 00:22:787, you should delete this note and get a consistent break value.
00:30:890 : It way be complicated to play for new players this section imo. Plus, you can move this one 1/2 earlier, it's also decent.
00:38:304 : Imo, i don't find this k legit, it sounds weird and make the next note having less impact.
00:49:511 : Tbh it's not a wise choice here. I would change it into a D at 00:49:683.
01:05:545 : You may delete this triple, overall it's a long pattern and it's not consitent with the previous pattern too. Let's keep it clean.
01:20:373 : I really love those patterns, nice job! However it's like it's missing something and i don't know well:

First the full k on 2 of the patterns make it a lack of "shape", it's like it missing some d on the middle of them.
Second it's like it's misplaced. We hear a double beat at 01:22:787 which is not mapped, also, you finish your pattern where veela starts her repetitive setence. Maybe akward.

Overall i like the """""kiai""""" part but less the begining. It's like you have no choice to map 1/2 with 3/2 spacing but it sounds a bit outplaced, like you forced yourself to map on the vocals and not on the melody instead.

[Muzukashii]

00:38:304 : I would go for adelete here (same as futsuu), it's more up to you here.
00:44:689 : Delete aswell, that would preserved the quadruple and double patterns.
00:49:858 : I personnaly moved this one 1/2 ealier and convert into a D. That's better imo.
00:50:201 : Delete with the same argue as above.
01:09:166 : You should move it 1/2 earlier, you're missing a strong beat. Plus, it will keep the quadruples consistent.
01:27:787 : This break is a bit weird imo. Add a d? With the melody it sounds well.

Overall i've nothing special to say, i like the rythm.

[Oni]

00:53:821 : That's strange to get only a double on this part. Maybe you would go add a d here since there's a beat.
01:19:339 : Why a break here? The current pattern is kinda short imo. If you want a cut, better at 01:19:551 or at 01:20:201 imo.

Overall that's fine too, the rythm is kinda consitent.

[SK's Inner]

The begining has less notes as the Oni itself, you would probably add some notes.

00:48:735 : I would add a d here, personnal preference, it sounds good and having a solo quint here is akward imo. D:
00:58:821 : Considered how you placed your triplets, this one is misplaced and should be further.
01:00:201 : Same.
01:15:632 : Add a d? Previously you did quint + triple, so let's do that here too.
01:27:787 : How about add k? Somehow it will make the pattern rythm-same like the previous pattern, and there's melody. You can even change into a d k k d pattern too.

After some playtesting it sounds generaly great. The flow is good all players needs to fc it is some stamina, and the SR is to low tbh :<.
I think the lack of Quint+ is the result. There's no real complicated pattern at all.

[Tasuke's Inner]

00:33:476 : Imo, kdk sounds better according to the melody.
00:54:339 : I'm not really sure if this stream is well done, there's several beats ok k and melody points on d which is akward. I would go for something like :
ddkkddkdkdd instead which follows well the structure of the song.
01:03:476 : I feel this section a bit void. How about a quint composed of dkddk? You can also add a d at 01:04:166 if you want tho.
01:21:494 : Looking backward, this note shouldn't be here (considered on the vocal structure).
01:25:114 : Same here but as you want.

Both of the inner oni are interesting one needs stamina but no real pattern skills (SK), and the other is more technical but needs no stamina except the end (Tasuke), which is good to have 2 complete different Inner oni.

And that's all i can say.
Gl hf for rank :D
I like the music.

Gonna continue later.
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

Aldwych wrote:

Ok so let's try it.

I may take some time to mod it and i may do it in several parts. So dw.

[Nardo's Kantan]

00:37:959 : I don't really understand those 2 first note. There nothing really noticable compared to (21). It may not be consistent since it's not a noticable new section of the music too. Modified the pattern a bit for the change of vocal pattern starting from 00:35:890 - .

00:50:718 : You may add k here, the next patterns finish with a triple, this one shoudn't be missing too. Retained for break consistency as 00:45:201 -

00:48:649 : After some reflexions, i would move this k to 00:47:959, first it would make the triple similar to what i said above (if you accepted it), then if would make the d at 00:48:304 having a better impact since you did the same at 00:54:511 for example. I would prefer keeping the note at 00:48:649 - as the vocal there is more prominent.

00:53:132 : You may delete this note here. That would make the next pattern consitent in terms of length and rythm. Deleting this note would be strange as there is a note at 00:47:614 -

Overall i think the fact that you have a break around 00:51:063 and have 3 same pattenrs makes it akward, like you moved your patterns counted to the second. Maybe some rethiking and replacement here could be nice. Up to you tho. Hmm, the break is actually consistent with 00:45:545 - , so I think it would be okay.

01:20:373 : You may add a k here. She said twice the same sentence but you map it differently. Sounds weird.
01:22:787 : Same here but it would be too much. Yeah, that's why I don't map all of them.

Overall i'm not picky about the d and k stuff here. The notes are decent, and it is mapped really well. Mapping is consitent but some points are questionable for me.

And that's all i can say.
Gl hf for rank :D
I like the music.

Gonna continue later.
Thanks for the mod~ :)

http://puu.sh/mxDTR.rar
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Aldwych wrote:

Ok so let's try it.

I may take some time to mod it and i may do it in several parts. So dw. Thank u~~

[General]

Why inners got higher hp than Oni? Is it because Inner can be considered out of set?

I'll post one thing that I saw a few days ago: credits to Nofool

Nofool wrote:

Inner Oni being an extra diff, HP can be increased again in order to make it harder to clear than the other difficulties.
HP settings are pretty subjective unless you actually test at what point the diff is or is not clearable anyways.
Demn those early beats made like there's someone who's walking in my house aaaaaaaaaa loool

[Futsuu]

00:28:649 : Since you made a 3/1 break at 00:22:787, you should delete this note and get a consistent break value.
00:30:890 : It way be complicated to play for new players this section imo. Plus, you can move this one 1/2 earlier, it's also decent.
00:38:304 : Imo, i don't find this k legit, it sounds weird and make the next note having less impact.
00:49:511 : Tbh it's not a wise choice here. I would change it into a D at 00:49:683.
01:05:545 : You may delete this triple, overall it's a long pattern and it's not consitent with the previous pattern too. Let's keep it clean.
01:20:373 : I really love those patterns, nice job! However it's like it's missing something and i don't know well:

First the full k on 2 of the patterns make it a lack of "shape", it's like it missing some d on the middle of them.
Second it's like it's misplaced. We hear a double beat at 01:22:787 which is not mapped, also, you finish your pattern where veela starts her repetitive setence. Maybe akward.

Overall i like the """""kiai""""" part but less the begining. It's like you have no choice to map 1/2 with 3/2 spacing but it sounds a bit outplaced, like you forced yourself to map on the vocals and not on the melody instead.

[Muzukashii]

00:38:304 : I would go for adelete here (same as futsuu), it's more up to you here. keep 'cause I'm following piano at this part consistency of sounds with 00:27:270 (15,16) -
00:44:689 : Delete aswell, that would preserved the quadruple and double patterns. Ohh nice~~
00:49:858 : I personnaly moved this one 1/2 ealier and convert into a D. That's better imo. sounds weird imo, maybe 'cause is not like my style xD furthermore 00:49:856 (85,86) - follow voice nicely
00:50:201 : Delete with the same argue as above. sure, I fixed it with the first advice.
01:09:166 : You should move it 1/2 earlier, you're missing a strong beat. Plus, it will keep the quadruples consistent. well, follow voice nicely, about consistency I'm not sure because there are similar pattern too close like 01:12:787 (186,187,188,189,190) -
01:27:787 : This break is a bit weird imo. Add a d? With the melody it sounds well. I don't think so, at 01:27:614 - there is a high pitch, a little rest after could be fine.

Overall i've nothing special to say, i like the rythm. Thanks~~

[Oni]

00:53:821 : That's strange to get only a double on this part. Maybe you would go add a d here since there's a beat. No, because I'm following voice here and it will break my consistence with parts like 00:50:890 - 00:52:270 -
01:19:339 : Why a break here? The current pattern is kinda short imo. If you want a cut, better at 01:19:551 or at 01:20:201 imo. you are right about break, rearranged the whole pattern

Overall that's fine too, the rythm is kinda consitent. *-*/

Both of the inner oni are interesting one needs stamina but no real pattern skills (SK), and the other is more technical but needs no stamina except the end (Tasuke), which is good to have 2 complete different Inner oni.

And that's all i can say.
Gl hf for rank :D
I like the music.

Gonna continue later.
Thank you very much bro~~ I'll continue with futsuu later *-*/

Nardo's Kantan updated
SKSalt
551 posts
Joined September 2013
SKSalt

Aldwych wrote:

Ok so let's try it.

I may take some time to mod it and i may do it in several parts. So dw.

[General]

Why inners got higher hp than Oni? Is it because Inner can be considered out of set? I don't know. But I don't change it for now.
Demn those early beats made like there's someone who's walking in my house aaaaaaaaaa

[SK's Inner]

The begining has less notes as the Oni itself, you would probably add some notes. I consider only a vocal. And it is not necessary to mind spread.

00:48:735 : I would add a d here, personnal preference, it sounds good and having a solo quint here is akward imo. D: okay.
00:58:821 : Considered how you placed your triplets, this one is misplaced and should be further. You mean delete this? No. There is sense of incongruity so that rhythm changes suddenly.
01:00:201 : Same. ^
01:15:632 : Add a d? Previously you did quint + triple, so let's do that here too. 01:16:149 (283) - add to d here.
01:27:787 : How about add k? Somehow it will make the pattern rythm-same like the previous pattern, and there's melody. You can even change into a d k k d pattern too. add to d.

After some playtesting it sounds generaly great. The flow is good all players needs to fc it is some stamina, and the SR is to low tbh :<.
I think the lack of Quint+ is the result. There's no real complicated pattern at all.

Both of the inner oni are interesting one needs stamina but no real pattern skills (SK), and the other is more technical but needs no stamina except the end (Tasuke), which is good to have 2 complete different Inner oni.

And that's all i can say.
Gl hf for rank :D
I like the music.

Gonna continue later.
Thanks for modding ;) Update

SK's Inner Oni
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newyams99
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newyams99
Hi, from request~

Nice and short song :D



Nardo's Kantan

00:48:649 (32) - Move to 00:49:339. Mainly because there's inconsistency of the rhythms with similar sounding areas such as 00:54:856 (41) and 01:00:373 (50) which are placed to produce a k k d, while this makes the d k k a beat before.

01:06:925 (61) - Remove? The placement surely makes sense, but I feel with the quiet feeling of this small portion, you can capture a contrast between the quiet and louder instrumentals by having no hits in the section. Kinda like the gap you have at 01:16:580, but with a greater effect imo.

01:21:408 (83) - Perhaps change to d? You matched this to the vocals, while 01:24:166 (87) is matched to the instrumentals. I suppose you have it like this since the vocals are slightly louder here than at 01:24:166 (87).

Very well made :D

Futsuu

-Sh1n1- wrote:

I'll be waiting for your answer
Sorry for not giving you a response. I was planning to do mod this much earlier.

It seems like there's some inconsistency with similar sound areas imo.

00:22:787 (3) - Delete? I feel like you should do this because this is an almost 100% vocal section. Having a mix between vocals and instrumentals here loses focus on the vocals. An alternative could be to delete 00:22:442 (2) for a full focus on instrumentals. Doing this could also make a better difficulty curve from the Futsuu to Oni; the Muzukashii and the Oni are exactly the same for this small section.

00:28:304 (14) - ^ If accept, change 00:27:959 (13) to d to match the vocals better.

00:29:683 (17) - Change to k? This sounds similar to 00:24:166 (5). This might not be your style, since you've been matching to the amount of emphasis on a hit.

00:33:132 (24) - Change to d? This sounds similar to 00:22:097 (1).

00:35:201 (28) - Change to k? This sounds similar to 00:24:166 (5). For the previous three, you should also change it in the Muzukashii and the Oni if you accept.

00:38:304 (34) - Delete? You should make this part slightly easier for a fairly nice and large break and make the rhythm at the start a bit easier, since the difficulty gap is quite large between the Futsuu and Kantan (although it is a GD).

00:42:959 - Add a hit here? You've had similar rhythms previously, such as at 00:31:580 (20,21,22,23).

01:05:890 (113) - Change to d. This is at least the same pitch as the previous hit, if not lower, and won't conflict with the clap sound since it isn't present here.

01:15:201 (141) - ^ I think it'd give a bit more contrast with the next hit, which is a higher pitch than this hit.

01:19:856 (157) - Change to k? This sounds similar to 01:14:339 (139).

01:24:511 (170,171,172) - Switch the colours for these three hits? The clap sounds are suddenly matched to d, and it really stood out imo.

Muzukashii

00:21:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - As mentioned before, this is identical to the Oni. Perhaps you should modify this rhythm slightly.

00:26:925 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - ^

00:30:028 - Add a hit here? You had a hit at 00:24:511 which is similar.

00:54:511 (105) - Change to k? Same at 00:57:270 (117), 01:00:028 (129) and 01:02:787 (141). The pitch is higher than the previous and next hits.

00:57:614 (118) - Change to d? Sounds similar to 00:54:856 (106).

01:20:718 (223) - Change to d? It would make a nice contrast with the ks surrounding it imo.

01:23:476 (237) - ^

Oni

Any colour changes that were done in the Muzukashii and Futsuu should be incorporated in addition to the suggestions that you've accepted.

00:25:028 (10) - Change to k? This sounds similar to 00:36:063 (42).

00:48:476 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - This rhythm is harder than both Inner Onis (if you isolated the rhythms of this portion from each difficulty). Modify to make it slightly easier. As a result of the difficulty, the difficulty gap between the Muzukashii and Oni here is quite large.

01:03:132 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202) - ^

SK's Inner Oni

00:22:097 (2,3) - Ctrl + G? This would sound better and match 00:27:614 (16,17).

00:25:373 (9,10,11,12) - ^ Just sounds better with the ks on the more emphasized hits imo.

00:42:270 (49) - Move to 00:42:442. You've done so well to match to the vocals, so you should have it match here as well imo.

00:45:373 (62,63,64) - kkd? This is mainly to have a k k rhythm at 00:45:201 (61,62), like you had it everywhere else.

01:28:132 - Add a hit here? It sounds similar to what you matched at 01:27:442 (363).

tasuke's Inner Oni

00:36:235 (48,49) - Idk, this just sounded weird the first I listened to it. 00:36:235 (48) would be better placed at 00:36:063 imo.

00:45:201 (8,9) - This is perfectly fine, but this is the only k d, while in similar areas such as 00:46:580 (16,17), or 00:47:959 (25,26) where you match to the vocals. If you'd like to keep consistency, you should Ctrl + G.

Nice :D

Good luck on rank~
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