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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年4月19日 at 22:19:48

Artist: t+pazolite
Title: OMAKENO Stroke
Source: GROOVE COASTER EX
Tags: グルーヴコースター AC タイトー TAITO TKSalt TKS
BPM: 240
Filesize: 4961kb
Play Time: 01:52
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Download: t+pazolite - OMAKENO Stroke
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#57
(Really)Extra diff Image TK'S Inner Oni - by TKS ╭( ・ㅂ・)و

#56 >>> #57 t+pazolite - OMAKENO Stroke >>> #58

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Last edited by JUDYDANNY on , edited 27 times in total.
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hi~ from PM mod req.

Kantan looks perfect but i think Futsuu is too hard
so you can make Kantan more harder or make Futsuu more easier ((I think the latter is good


Futsuu Image


Muzukashii Image


Oni Image


TK'S Inner Oni Image

nice song!! :) :) :)
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Hello :3/ mod request by pm ( i hope it's m4m ;w; please )

Note : I won't mod TKS' because too hard to get something from my favorite mapper <333333333


Oni
1. 00:23:631 (6,7,8) - I notice this because it's same with 00:25:631 (14,15,16) - also the (7) a bit low.
2. 00:26:256 (2) - Shouldn't this one deleted? To make consistently between the other pattern that you used as well.
3. 00:28:256 (12) - Also same with ^.
4. 00:48:381 (19,20,21) - I would choose to make the pattern like d k d (most of the sound are following the pattern as you did).
5. 01:48:881 (6,8) - I suggest to change it to d. The pitch of the instrumental sound a bit lower than the other.

Only do the Oni because i don't know i still can mod muzukashii (include the lower difficulties) or nope :((((
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mod requested by JUDYDANNY with PM

実際譜面見てもほとんど書けることがないので大したこと書いてないです pro mapping
反面こっちはkudosu投げる価値もないkusopostですごめんなさい 代わりに☆投げておきます


Difficulty spread
    難易度バランスは特に問題に思いませんでした、高難易度の方は(プレイできないので)わかりませんが……


Muzukashii
  • 01:33:381 - ここにnoteを置いて --> 01:33:881 (21) - を消してみる? // パターンを切る場所に多少の違和感を覚えます。 1.5拍ぶんの休みだとBPMの高さもあって 01:33:631 - を叩くタイミングが掴みづらい印象がありました。
  • 01:35:631 (9,10,11,12,13) - dkkkd ?

限界です('、3_ヽ)_ good luck!
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PMから~
提案としてみてくれれば幸いです!


kantan

Futsuu

Muzukashii
  • 00:37:881 - add k Muzuからここにkを入れても問題ないと思います!

Oni

TK'S Inner Oniは特に気になる所はなかったです。

譜面のバランスはとてもいいと思います!
曲が好きで譜面も面白いので是非ranked頑張ってください! :3
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こんばんは!
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General

  • Kantan,Futsuu,MuzukashiiのWidescreen Supportのチェック外しをしてください。


Kantan

    <<Mapping>>

  • 01:15:631 - change k もしくは01:23:631 - change d ここだけd(もしくはk)だとちょっと違和感を感じました 音はどちらも同じように聞こえるのでどちらかの配色に統一したほうがいいとおもいました。
  • 指摘するとこありますこれ?ww


Futsuu

    <<Mapping>>

  • 特に指摘はないです、良い譜面ですね。

Muzukashii

    <<Mapping>>

  • 01:24:006 (12,13) - Ctrl + G 1個前でのdkdkがあるからなのでしょうか、ちょっとこの7連のdkdkが目立った感じがしたので配色を変更してはどうでしょう?


Oni

    <<Mapping>>

  • 00:22:006 (19,1) - Ctrl + G 00:21:631 (16,17) - ここをkdでとってるなら同じように後ろもkdでいいように感じました、
  • 00:48:006 - delete ちょっと長すぎると思ったので削除してもいいかと
  • 00:48:506 (19,20) - Ctrl + G kdkdkだと変な感じがしました、kdkkdのほうがしっくりきたので提案です。
  • 00:52:881 - change d 音が下がってるように聞こえたのでdにチェンジでいいとおもいました。


TK'S Inner Oni

    <<General>>

  • 気合タイムの終点がクリエイターのJUDYさんと違うのでどちらかに統一してはどうでしょうか?

    <<Mapping>>

  • 00:15:756 (138,139) - Ctrl + G 00:15:756 - こちらのほうが音が低く聞こえたので後ろのdと入れ替えでも良いと思いました。
ランクド期待しています! お二人とも頑張ってくださいgood luck :)
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too fast modders www Updated at once (applied the stu - BHE mods). please wait for reply :?
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stu00608 wrote:

TK'S Inner Oni Image


BlackHairEND wrote:

TK'S Inner Oni

    <<General>>

  • 気合タイムの終点がクリエイターのJUDYさんと違うのでどちらかに統一してはどうでしょうか? - 統一する必要性を感じませんでした。

    <<Mapping>>

  • 00:15:756 (138,139) - Ctrl + G 00:15:756 - こちらのほうが音が低く聞こえたので後ろのdと入れ替えでも良いと思いました。 - 音よりもパターン寄りにしたかったので丸ごと入れ替えました。


thanks!
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... Oni%5D.rar
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Updated TK'S Inner Oni
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/me is waiting judy's reply*

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"stu00608"
hi~ from PM mod req.

Kantan looks perfect but i think Futsuu is too hard
so you can make Kantan more harder or make Futsuu more easier ((I think the latter is good


Futsuu Image


Muzukashii Image


Oni Image

nice song!! :) :) :)


"Niko-nyan"
Hello :3/ mod request by pm ( i hope it's m4m ;w; please )

Note : I won't mod TKS' because too hard to get something from my favorite mapper <333333333


Oni
1. 00:23:631 (6,7,8) - I notice this because it's same with 00:25:631 (14,15,16) - also the (7) a bit low.
:arrow: different sounds there.
2. 00:26:256 (2) - Shouldn't this one deleted? To make consistently between the other pattern that you used as well.
3. 00:28:256 (12) - Also same with ^.
:arrow: keeping , for build up.
4. 00:48:381 (19,20,21) - I would choose to make the pattern like d k d (most of the sound are following the pattern as you did).
:arrow: changed some.
5. 01:48:881 (6,8) - I suggest to change it to d. The pitch of the instrumental sound a bit lower than the other.
:arrow: 01:48:881 - changed d only.
Only do the Oni because i don't know i still can mod muzukashii (include the lower difficulties) or nope :((((


"Naryuga"
mod requested by JUDYDANNY with PM

実際譜面見てもほとんど書けることがないので大したこと書いてないです pro mapping
反面こっちはkudosu投げる価値もないkusopostですごめんなさい 代わりに☆投げておきます


Difficulty spread
    難易度バランスは特に問題に思いませんでした、高難易度の方は(プレイできないので)わかりませんが……


Muzukashii
  • 01:33:381 - ここにnoteを置いて --> 01:33:881 (21) - を消してみる? // パターンを切る場所に多少の違和感を覚えます。 1.5拍ぶんの休みだとBPMの高さもあって 01:33:631 - を叩くタイミングが掴みづらい印象がありました。
  • 01:35:631 (9,10,11,12,13) - dkkkd ?
    :arrow: 全部Fixed~ だいぶ迷ってた箇所でした...ありがとうございます....>_<

限界です('、3_ヽ)_ good luck!


"yuzu__rinrin"
PMから~
提案としてみてくれれば幸いです!


kantan
  • 01:46:131 (1) - change d Kantan以外dなので不自然かなと :arrow: fixed.

Futsuu

Muzukashii
  • 00:37:881 - add k Muzuからここにkを入れても問題ないと思います!
    :arrow: fixed/

Oni
  • 00:15:818 (17) - delete :arrow: 勢いをつけるためにここはむしろd-ddkと置きたいところですが,声ネタ含むので5連のままで;;
  • 00:23:756 (7) - change d :arrow: 00:27:756 - changed to k instead for consistency.

TK'S Inner Oniは特に気になる所はなかったです。

譜面のバランスはとてもいいと思います!
曲が好きで譜面も面白いので是非ranked頑張ってください! :3

"BlackHairEND"
こんばんは!
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General

  • Kantan,Futsuu,MuzukashiiのWidescreen Supportのチェック外しをしてください。


Kantan

    <<Mapping>>

  • 01:15:631 - change k もしくは01:23:631 - change d ここだけd(もしくはk)だとちょっと違和感を感じました 音はどちらも同じように聞こえるのでどちらかの配色に統一したほうがいいとおもいました。
    :arrow: [color=#008000]d no houni change

    /color
  • 指摘するとこありますこれ?ww


Futsuu

    <<Mapping>>

  • 特に指摘はないです、良い譜面ですね。

Muzukashii

    <<Mapping>>

  • 01:24:006 (12,13) - Ctrl + G 1個前でのdkdkがあるからなのでしょうか、ちょっとこの7連のdkdkが目立った感じがしたので配色を変更してはどうでしょう?
    :arrow: fixed.


Oni

    <<Mapping>>

  • 00:22:006 (19,1) - Ctrl + G 00:21:631 (16,17) - ここをkdでとってるなら同じように後ろもkdでいいように感じました、
    :arrow: fixed.
  • 00:48:006 - delete ちょっと長すぎると思ったので削除してもいいかと
    :arrow: うーーーーーーーーーーーーーーん。。。。。。。。fixed.
  • 00:48:506 (19,20) - Ctrl + G kdkdkだと変な感じがしました、kdkkdのほうがしっくりきたので提案です。
    :arrow: fixed.
  • 00:52:881 - change d 音が下がってるように聞こえたのでdにチェンジでいいとおもいました。
    :arrow: fixed.


ランクド期待しています! お二人とも頑張ってくださいgood luck :)


Thanks for mod~~~ ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
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ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ" shouldn't this one on the pending section? ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ" *hides*
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Hello JuDa and TKS~

Here's a taiko mod from me as requested via forum-PM



    Kantan
  • 00:09:631 (5) - Move this note to 00:09:881 -? I think it is more suitable to be there because there is a "diiing" sound here



    Muzukashii
  • 00:30:506 - I suggest adding a note here to maintain the consistency of the double note pattern before you start the k d k d k d buildup after this. Currently, the transition between 00:30:131 - and 00:30:631 - is too sudden. By making a consistent double note pattern here, the transition can be improved :3

  • 01:13:006 (14) - Remove this note so that there is more emphasis on the don beat at 01:13:131 -?
    :idea: You can also add a Finish to 01:13:131 - as well for added emphasis

  • 01:24:256 (14) - ddkkddk sounds unnatural with the music, delete this don?







Futsuu is fine (for me) :P
The overall spread is alright and the general consistency of the note structures, rhythm and patterns are nicely done in all difficulties, so there's not much for me to point out other than some minor consistency issues.
Please don't hesitate to PM me if you have any questions about my mod! :D
Good luck with the map~
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hi o/


Kantan

00:05:631 (5) - move to 00:05:881 and change kat? I think it fit the music more (note the bell sound at the new position). Also considering your relatively low scroll speed of 1.00x I don't think it would be a challenge for newbie players.
00:42:131 (1) - add finisher? just like at 00:34:131 (1) - ?
00:48:131 (4,5,6) - I think this would be more fitting to the music as kat-kat-kat.
01:17:131 (8) - change to don? the music winds down a bit from before here and because of that, I think the significance of this sound is reduced. So no need to use a kat note.
01:25:131 (8) - same here.


Futsuu

00:42:131 (1) - to 00:46:506 (2) - I suggest making the first two notes of such time signatures to be different (since you seemed to do it in previous parts of Futsuu and previous diffs):
---- 00:42:131 (1) - change kat with finisher?
---- 00:42:631 (2) - change to don?
---- 00:46:131 (1,2) - ctrl+g

so 00:46:131 (1,2) - will be inverse of 00:38:131 (1,2) - , etc.

01:06:131 (19) - change to a kat? I find it more fitting than don note.
01:10:131 (1) - same as above.


Muzukashii

00:41:631 (17) - change don note? I think it "just" sounds better.
00:56:131 (10) - remove the finisher? The reason is similar to the last suggestion in Futsuu diff.
01:37:631 (19) - delete? I don't think this sound really needs its own note.

overall good diff :D not much to suggest, just a few things here and there.


Oni

I don't think HP drain should keep going backwards at this point. I'll suggest changing it to at least 6.0.

00:07:756 (9) - change to don? I think the sounds lower here momentarily before the triplet immediately after.
00:34:881 (7) - change to don again? It would reflect parts like 00:37:631 (27) - better.
00:36:881 (21) - ^
00:38:881 (7) - ^
00:40:881 (22) - ^

01:33:631 (30) - change to a don and add another at 01:33:756?

also a good diff~ my alternating practice


TK'S Inner Oni

00:35:881 (296) - change to don? there is a noticeable difference in pitch of this note and the bell sound at the end of next combo (see below)
00:37:881 (315) - is finish really necessary? imo the bell sound is similar volume to the rest of the song and a finisher would just overemphasise it.
00:39:881 (333) - same as (296).

01:16:881 (117,118,119,120) - I suggest kddd, it sounds similar to the 1/6 before it but I think having a different pattern here would make this more interesting. (not to mention the vocal is actually slightly different).
01:24:881 (207,208,209,210) - same as above.


good luck with the mapset~
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mod as req via forum PM. /so late
mostly suggestions...

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That's all from me, nice mapset to play ww
gud luck :3
back to afk for me hue
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