1. Hard (3.08 stars, 237 notes)
2. Insane (3.94 stars, 304 notes)
3. Normal (1.79 stars, 123 notes)

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:

I never thought that some ppl will visit my profile and read my userpage
Hi, hello. Short mod as I said never curse me ;n;)

Normal

1. 00:07:751 - Maybe can put a beat here. Instead of emphasizing a 00:07:941 - try this pattern. nope
   
2. 00:12:688 - convert?
   
3. 00:31:865 - Can also put a beat here too. Instead of ending a slider at 00:32:055 - why not start an another slider? i want to make things easier, actually xD
   
4. 01:05:662 (4) - Maybe it will heading to the downright for better flow with 01:06:232 (1) - good

Hard

1. 00:03:384 (4,1) - not really a big issue but ye, nazi fixx
   
2. 01:00:346 (1,2) - swap the pattern? It will be nice if 01:00:726 - is clickable. on purpose
   

Insane

1. 00:11:359 (5) - just a small thing. x:281|y:271 ok good
2. 00:37:941 (2) - remove clap on tail? there're drum sound
3. 01:09:080 (2) - you can add NC for emphasize the whistle more. k
4. 01:18:479 (6,7) - spread them more like 01:19:523 (4,5) -
5. 01:21:422 (1,2,3) - DS 0.7 or 0.8 is nice for emphasize your cymbal in 01:21:612 - nope
6. 01:22:751 (7) - 3/4 Slider then make 01:23:131 - clickable like 01:21:612 (3) - err i think its enough

no kds if worthless
/me runs

Sangzin wrote:

PM request~

[Insane]

• 
  00:05:662 (1,3) - blanket? ok
  00:37:941 (2,3) - Perfect stack please, since end of (3) is x:370 y:169, meanwhile (2) is x:370 y:168 fix
  00:49:238 (4) - Ctrl+G or circles maybe?
  00:50:283 (3) - ^
  01:09:080 (2) - NC to notice SV change?they're did on purpose

[Hard]

• 
  00:11:264 (4) - circles maybe? 1/4s is fine imo :3

[Normal]

• 
  00:45:726 - add circle?hmm keeping

Well.......What a mod. I can't find problem in this map. Sorry for bad mod.
If you don't accept my mod at all, you can no kds to me. GL!

Frey wrote:

poi poi

• General

1. Source: ご注文はうさぎですか？ will add this kind of stuffs later
2. The end of the last spinner should be at 01:27:688 - , you can still hear the music between 01:27:593 - 01:27:688 - nope, its end on blue tick
   
   
   Normal
3. 00:29:966 (1) - unify the ds to keep consistency oops, done
4. 00:36:042 - add a whistle like 00:29:966 (1) - , whistle fits the violin sound ok
5. 00:50:283 - add whistle to emphasize the voice? hmm nope for consistency
   
   
   Insane
6. 00:29:966 (7) - The position seems a bit untidy, could you move it to x149 y73 ?ahaha yes, fixed

Good luck

1. 00:02:625 (1,2) - apa ini kamu mau buatkan jadi blanket atau ga?
2. 00:14:397 (4) - DS
3. 00:50:283 (4,1) - blanket ini bisa di rapiin sedikit

1. 00:28:447 (1,2) - ampir ok blanket ny ini. coba aja pindahkan 00:28:827 (2) - ke 182|285
2. 00:40:789 (1) - ini tail ny kena HP Bar sihh di 800x600 view w. coba pindahkan ini ntah mau mana
3. 01:20:093 (1,3) - rapiin blanket ini dong

1. 00:05:662 (1,3) - rapiin blanketnya dong
2. 00:09:270 (3,4) - blanket
3. 00:23:890 (1) - 162|211 biar agak rapi blanketnya sama 00:22:941 (5) -
4. 00:40:030 (3) - blanket?
5. 00:59:776 (6,1) - ^ ?
6. 01:15:536 (1,2) - coba rapiin blanketnya
7. 01:16:865 (1,2) - ^

-Hakurei- wrote:

unexpected M4M stuff hue

this maybe

Feb wrote:

-Hakurei- wrote:

unexpected M4M stuff hue

man your insane is super fun. The gap between hard and normal is super huge compared to insane and hard. Idk how it will affect ranking, but it seems to me unproportional.

I think I'll go just for critical stuff If I find any. (I think you wanted to add source and stuff later right?)LOL

Changed your Background to an JPG- File. Let's save some KB right :3
Download me

[Insane]

-1 HP? It's kinda draining map for newbs. Me included. 7 is already low man ><

00:24:650 (2) - seems bit untidy? stack it on the slider end 00:23:511 (6) - here?
00:24:840 (1) - not entirely sure why you NC'd this? Bcs direction change or vocal I can't tell. well i think its per 3 / 2 notes lol
00:30:536 (3,4,5) - I think this pattern is fine, as it is but 4 could I think placed better imo. hmm nope

this maybe

however idk if you want a jump this big.
00:51:232 (1) - I want to hit the head every freaking time, prolly bcs of the angle its placed right now. It's fine just wanted to point it out.
01:14:776 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think I'm deaf theres nothing is it? I had no problems in playtest tho... there're instrument there

man this was fun.

[Hard]
00:31:485 (1,2) - idk this feels very awkward to hit, it prolly is wrong rythm. I mean if i ctrl+g this it already soudns better. changed
00:34:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - holycrap I missed here bcs I sck at reading. I like this pattern srs.

very nice diff. I really like to play hard diffs. They are so flowyyyyyyyy <3

[Normal]
13447 - greenline with no effect. hmm they're fine though
14017 - ^same
00:15:536 (2,3) - are you mapping vocal? Kinda feels not right to leave out the downbeat. (nvm you're definitly mapping vocals). Yea I don't do that in my diffs >:
00:47:625 (4) - I think you should move this a bit up it's right on the graph. k

I like this set, good luck.

Owntrolf wrote:

• Normal

  00:08:700 (1,2) - Maybe change 1 to a 1/1 slider then replace 2 with a 1/1 slider right after the red tick of 1
  00:16:485 (3) - Maybe replace with 1/2 slider
  00:22:561 (3) - ^
  01:24:650 (1) - Aww I still like pressing final notes then the spinner goes :> added

• Hard

  00:02:625 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Maybe change it to a pattern like this
  SPOILER

  
  
  00:31:485 (1,2) - Similar to Feb, why not swap these notes around so its slider first then circle so its the circle stacks on 3 changed to another pattern
  00:37:181 (4,1) - Blame blankets for cold winters

• Insane

  00:02:814 (2,4,5) - Should I start complaining about blankets :> orz, ok
  00:23:511 (6) - Maybe use the same curve as 5 done
  00:37:941 (2) - Im not too sure about this 3/4 might be hard to hit or tell the difference from a normal 1/2 it's easy according to the pattern imo

FCL wrote:

M4M from your queue

• [General]

1. combo colour 1 too blinding. Replace on something else
2. Where tags and video?
3. I think you should change format of BG to jpg for save space

• [Normal]

1. 00:14:776 (1) - looks weird relatively 00:15:536 (2) - . That is fine http://puu.sh/l6Agd/946332ccdd.jpg
2. 00:22:941 (4) - very dismal sliderwawe. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/l6AmO/85f7e72c9e.jpg added more curves
3. 00:29:207 (4,1) - not necessary in white points
4. 00:34:143 (2) - make a straight flow here (not really necessarily)
5. 00:39:080 (1) - logically this slider should be rotated 90 degrees relative to the 00: 38: 700 (6) -
6. 00:47:625 (4) - 1/2 slider here is better
7. 00:56:549 (4) - need NC, i guess
8. 00:59:587 (3,4) - i think 1/1 slider is better here
9. 01:06:232 (1,2,3) - uhh (imo) it's looks boring. Curved sliders maybe? okay
10. 01:24:650 (1) - end on 01:27:688? added note

• [Hard]

1. 00:02:814 (2,3,4) - uneven angle of 90 degrees
2. 00:11:264 (4) - make it parallel to 00:10:789 (3) - done
3. 00:37:181 (4,2) - stack with end
4. 00:44:587 (6,1) - make a parallel too
5. 00:55:599 (1) - same as 00:22:941 (4) in Easy
6. 00:56:928 (5) - ctrl+h form is beter here imo
7. 01:18:384 (1,2,3) - sound is rather weak here, triple would be better
8. 01:24:650 (4) - new bit, NC

• [Insane]

1. 00:03:384 (4) - i think you could do blanket with 00:02:814 (2) - here. It's really looks good ok
2. 00:17:814 (1,2,3) - you should make this sliders at the same distance from each other
3. 00:32:055 (2,3) - flow is really bad, better able to come up with something else ouch
4. 00:33:764 (3,4) - same.
5. 00:34:713 (2) - make more distance here, like 00:34:903 (3) - . because it sounds similar
6. 00:56:928 (6) - NC
7. 01:00:916 (3) - add curve on head too http://puu.sh/l6DKJ/5c67e784bf.jpg
8. 01:17:625 (3) - 1/1 slider is better here, definitely
9. 01:22:751 (7) - you could make instead 1/1 slider 3/4, in so far sound on downbit too strong
10. 01:24:650 (5) - NC

Gooood luck!

Prismetical wrote:

Heya! :3

Easy

00:14:397 (4) - maybe make an own combo for that circle
00:55:599 (3) - morrior that slider
01:24:460 (1) - start spinner here and end it here 01:27:593 - ok :3

Good job on that map!

1. 00:47:814 - I feel this beat could've been mapped enough along the strong vocal and beat. Consider making 00:47:625 (4) as a 1/2 slider.
2. 00:53:890 (5,1) - Spacing issue.
3. 01:23:131 (3) - Consider NC along the finish.

1. 00:02:814 - Not sure if this beat worthed a click especially in the start of the map. Just making 00:02:625 a 1/1 slider would've been more natural imo.
2. 00:34:903 (2,3) - I agree with the jump of (3,4) which fits the music, but the jump of (2,3) felt too much.
3. 01:09:080 (2) - Reducing 1/4 would be better in emphasizing the click of 01:09:460 (1) imo.

1. 00:09:080 (2,3) - The music here is pretty weak, and having this massive jump didn't felt well. Ctrl+G (3) would be better. Anyways, this pattern having a larger jump than 00:09:840 (4,1) didn't felt logical.
2. 00:24:460 (1,1) - Not sure if these NC worth your pattern.

Sonnyc wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:47:814 - I feel this beat could've been mapped enough along the strong vocal and beat. Consider making 00:47:625 (4) as a 1/2 slider. i want to make this one easier
2. 00:53:890 (5,1) - Spacing issue.
3. 01:23:131 (3) - Consider NC along the finish. fix both

[Hard]

1. 00:02:814 - Not sure if this beat worthed a click especially in the start of the map. Just making 00:02:625 a 1/1 slider would've been more natural imo. to catch the vocal :3
2. 00:34:903 (2,3) - I agree with the jump of (3,4) which fits the music, but the jump of (2,3) felt too much. fixed
3. 01:09:080 (2) - Reducing 1/4 would be better in emphasizing the click of 01:09:460 (1) imo. hmm.. keeping

[Insane]

1. 00:09:080 (2,3) - The music here is pretty weak, and having this massive jump didn't felt well. Ctrl+G (3) would be better. Anyways, this pattern having a larger jump than 00:09:840 (4,1) didn't felt logical. okay ~
2. 00:24:460 (1,1) - Not sure if these NC worth your pattern. its on purpose though

Enjoy wrote:

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