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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 November 2017 at 03:46:56

Artist: Jeff Williams
Title: When It Falls (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
Source: RWBY
Tags: Withered Lotus JBHyperion - Magic Bomb - Volume Season 3 Opening
BPM: 105.3
Filesize: 3359kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:

Download: Jeff Williams - When It Falls (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
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15/11/17 - Updated hitsounds on cup
08/11/17 - Added a new Rain to fit between the Platter and Lotus' Rain because 6 diff spreads are cool

Mbomb's Cup by MBomb
Hyperion's Salad by JBHyperion
Lotus' Rain by Withered Lotus

Timing and mp3 taken from Pho's mapset!
Last edited by Sorcerer on , edited 79 times in total.
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Timing check requested in PM

A basic summary of what's changed and why:
  • 00:07:112 - New timing point at 00:07:112 so that 00:07:113 (1,2,3) snap to white ticks - no functional change to the map, just done in the interest of "correctness"
  • 00:10:003 - Timing point here BPM changed (+4, BPM 235), since this drumroll is actually a little faster than that of the main melody - these notes will need a minor resnap, but positioning shouldn't need changing
  • 00:10:896 - The "biggest" change, although it leaves the map functionally no different - this has been moved forward 1/2 to 00:11:024 since this is the true downbeat following the drum rhythm. It's easy to make this mistake, since the guitar and vocals do start at 00:10:896 but if you listen with this arrangement, all the drum beats land on red ticks when they should be white. basically everything from here has just stayed the same, with the timeline moving "forward" 1/2 a beat
  • 00:27:647 - 00:31:828 - That made these timing points unnecessary, since they were just metronome resets that have already been done at 00:11:024 now
  • 00:40:139 - Timing point added here with BPM halved to 115.5 - I don't know if you intend to map this (since it's a spinner in both diffs so far) but I fixed it just in case
  • 00:44:164 - Same 3/2 delay in the main drum rhythm here as before, so I moved this forward 1/2 to 00:44:294 and added a green line in it's place to start the kiai in the same way as before. Shouldn't be any functional changes to the patterns or snapping since I just moved everything by 1/2 again
  • 01:07:152 - Added a timing point here to halve the BPM, again should be no changes

Other than that, there may be a few 1ms unsnaps due to rounding, but these will have almost no impact on the patterns/placement and AImod will pick them up pretty easily anyway so it won't take much to fix.

New Timing
Just copy and paste this into your .osu files over the TimingPoints Section.
Code:
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Any questions, let me know.

Good luck! (:
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Code:
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[General]
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PreviewTime: 43210
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:When It Falls (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
TitleUnicode:When It Falls (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
Artist:Jeff Williams
ArtistUnicode:Jeff Williams
Creator:Sorcerer
Version:Hyperion's Salad
Source:RWBY
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.2
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Who could possibly have guessed I'd be back here a whole year later with a GD? hint: it's me

Why do you do this to me
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: RWBY Volume 3 - Opening.mp3
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:When It Falls (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
TitleUnicode:When It Falls (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
Artist:Jeff Williams
ArtistUnicode:Jeff Williams
Creator:Sorcerer
Version:Hyperion's Salad
Source:RWBY
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

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Not hitsounded yet.


Thanks man. Hopefully this mapset will get somewhere in the next year this time. Remind me to never submit unfinished beatmaps again
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Code:
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Creator:Sorcerer
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Code:
osu file format v14

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Artist:Jeff Williams
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Creator:Sorcerer
Version:MBomb's Cup
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Tags:
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Thanks my dude, uploaded it. Just waiting on Withered's Rain then the real suffering begins (:
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00:43:989 - I think the 231 BPM point should be placed here, white ticks will be on the strongest beats and at the start of vocals. Generally it makes more sense to place there a red point.

Salad

Only one issue I can find here is spacing on 231 BPM 1/2 dashes, on all of them I would reduce the distance from around 2.40 to 2.20

00:14:510 (4,1) -
00:16:847 (6,1) -
00:18:666 (4,1) -
00:18:666 (4,1) -
00:27:367 (7,1) -
00:28:406 (4,5) - this a such difficulty spike, high ds + sharp direction change
00:35:549 (5,1) -
00:37:757 (7,1) -
00:53:469 (3,4) -
00:56:326 (5,1) -

Okay not only one, the spinner (01:15:287 (1) - ) end feels pretty random for me. For me it should end at 01:16:586 - where is end of drums line or whatever we can call that or here - 01:18:924 - where the long sound in background fades away. The 01:16:846 - no real sound to follow so for me it totally doesn't fit as spinner end.

Platter

00:00:698 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:01:838 (1,2,3,4) - the shape of streams doesn't flow to me. Try - http://puu.sh/stj2X/68b82ea834.jpg

00:10:744 (1,3) - distance feels too high

00:17:367 (1,2,3,4) - antiflow movement makes the streams very hard to read so to play. I think you should make it easier or get rid of the antiflow.

00:33:860 (2,3) - distance feels too high

00:51:131 (1,2,3,4) - well the shape of stream doesn't flow tbh. Something like that would be perfect - http://puu.sh/sttkz/46512b94f6.jpg

I think you should introduce more 1/2 hypers instead of hard movement patterns at this diff.

Rain

00:04:687 (1,2) -, 00:05:852 (1,2) - and 00:06:977 (1,2) - 1/12 beatsnap works better here for me.

00:18:405 (1,2,3,1) - I wonder if the pattern is not too 'insane' as for Rain. Like for me combo of 2 hypers is fine at rain but of 3 is a bit too much but well it plays nice so *shrug

00:26:652 (4,1) - 00:26:912 (4,1) - the distance is too high for the normal dash, I am sugesting you to lower distance or making them hypersdashes.

00:33:730 (2,3,1) - the jump from (3) to (1) is nazi, it would be better if the 3 > 1 could be hyper :)

01:16:628 - I would add spinner here as well

Overdone

00:17:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sorry but the left-right movement here is just boring to play. I mean making movement more various should make map a lot better to play and here you could use something like this http://puu.sh/sttNy/8c1d1967f6.jpg

00:21:003 (1) - place on x:488 and 00:21:133 (2) - on x:272 I feel that need hyperdash

01:07:755 (3) - 01:09:833 (3) - 01:11:911 (3) - 01:13:988 (3) - I think you could make those more interesting you tried the patterning and timeline - http://puu.sh/sttVY/14c002e9c5.jpg

01:16:586 - I feel you can place a spinner here as well (:


MB is noob thats why I could't find anything in his diff :(


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00:43:989 - I think the 231 BPM point should be placed here, white ticks will be on the strongest beats and at the start of vocals. Generally it makes more sense to place there a red point. Generally yes, but this vocal is clearly extended by 1/2 as are all the vocals in this section, see 00:46:067 (1) - 00:48:144 (1) - etc. The metronome follows the drums, which clearly strike on the white ticks only when the red line is placed at its current position

Salad

Only one issue I can find here is spacing on 231 BPM 1/2 dashes, on all of them I would reduce the distance from around 2.40 to 2.20

00:14:510 (4,1) -
00:16:847 (6,1) -
00:18:666 (4,1) -
00:18:666 (4,1) -
00:27:367 (7,1) -
00:28:406 (4,5) - this a such difficulty spike, high ds + sharp direction change
00:35:549 (5,1) -
00:37:757 (7,1) -
00:53:469 (3,4) -
00:56:326 (5,1) -

Reduced all a tiny bit, though these aren't nearly as bad as you're making them out to be imo

Okay not only one, the spinner (01:15:287 (1) - ) end feels pretty random for me. For me it should end at 01:16:586 - where is end of drums line or whatever we can call that or here - 01:18:924 - where the long sound in background fades away. The 01:16:846 - no real sound to follow so for me it totally doesn't fit as spinner end. Will let Sorcerer decide for consistency


Good luck, and happy holidays!

Thanks for the suggestions

Salad
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BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Ho ho ho I am your Santa :P

General

00:43:989 - I think the 231 BPM point should be placed here, white ticks will be on the strongest beats and at the start of vocals. Generally it makes more sense to place there a red point. - JBH answered this pretty well


Platter

00:00:698 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:01:838 (1,2,3,4) - the shape of streams doesn't flow to me. Try - http://puu.sh/stj2X/68b82ea834.jpg - Done this as I think it looks aesthetically better though I feel they still played just fine

00:10:744 (1,3) - distance feels too high - Moved 00:11:133 (2,3) - a grid space right

00:17:367 (1,2,3,4) - antiflow movement makes the streams very hard to read so to play. I think you should make it easier or get rid of the antiflow. - Hmm, I really think this plays and reads just fine. Maybe bumping up the ar to 8.2 because of the density may help? We'll see

00:33:860 (2,3) - distance feels too high - Reduced

00:51:131 (1,2,3,4) - well the shape of stream doesn't flow tbh. Something like that would be perfect - http://puu.sh/sttkz/46512b94f6.jpg - Almost done, it's a similar shape but i've used equal distancing between the notes to fit with the style of the rest of the map

I think you should introduce more 1/2 hypers instead of hard movement patterns at this diff. - I've purposefully avoided using 1/2 hypers in this diff as it's fairly high BPM. I think hyper usage is best kept to a minimum here, I'd already "remapped" this and took out a lot of hypers in the process. I haven't intentionally put in hard movement patterns but If I've missed the mark they can always be nerfed and simpilfied.



Overdone

00:17:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sorry but the left-right movement here is just boring to play. I mean making movement more various should make map a lot better to play and here you could use something like this http://puu.sh/sttNy/8c1d1967f6.jpg - You really think so? I quite enjoy these movements ;<

00:21:003 (1) - place on x:488 and 00:21:133 (2) - on x:272 I feel that need hyperdash - Yeah this certainly needed a hyper. Though I felt having 00:21:003 (1) - at x:488 made for too large a distance so I've put it at x:432 and moved 00:21:133 (2) - to x:176 and made it curve

01:07:755 (3) - 01:09:833 (3) - 01:11:911 (3) - 01:13:988 (3) - I think you could make those more interesting you tried the patterning and timeline - http://puu.sh/sttVY/14c002e9c5.jpg - Yeah I quite like this

01:16:586 - I feel you can place a spinner here as well (: - Left this without a spinner for now, almost all diffs are ending in a different way at a different time though I think a spinner in all diffs will be the better option so I'll check with Mbomb and Lotus that they're alright with that. Also shortened the spinner in JBH's Salad to end at 01:16:586 -


MB is noob thats why I could't find anything in his diff :(


Good luck, and happy holidays!


Thank you for the mod SantaOfDarkness! Updated mine + JBH's diffs, Lotus' not yet applied.
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BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Rain

00:04:687 (1,2) -, 00:05:852 (1,2) - and 00:06:977 (1,2) - 1/12 beatsnap works better here for me. Yeah, I'd agree, changed.

00:18:405 (1,2,3,1) - I wonder if the pattern is not too 'insane' as for Rain. Like for me combo of 2 hypers is fine at rain but of 3 is a bit too much but well it plays nice so *shrug hmm, hard to say, I see where you're coming from and I don't expect this to stay but I feel it's arguably reasonable with the nature of the map's difficulty.

00:26:652 (4,1) - 00:26:912 (4,1) - the distance is too high for the normal dash, I am sugesting you to lower distance or making them hypersdashes. Reduced distance a bit.

00:33:730 (2,3,1) - the jump from (3) to (1) is nazi, it would be better if the 3 > 1 could be hyper :) Yeah this jump is kinda mean, reduced distance a bit.

01:16:628 - I would add spinner here as well I'm not a fan of this tbh, doesn't feel like it fits very well.


Thanks for the mod.

nerfed the intro a bit.

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  • 00:48:922 (4) - Fiddle with this, move it forward and back again since it's not snapped properly.
  • Fix the other shite in AIMod too pls, thank.
  • 00:04:687 (1,2) - These feel a bit odd, I personally thing that single notes or maybe even 1/2 sliders would fit better here. Maybe space them 1/8 rather than 1/12? I think it sounds a bit better.
  • 00:07:952 (1) - Slider fits nicely until the end. Starting such a powerful section swap with a slider end feels really counter-productive. Maybe fade the slider out towards 00:09:364 - and start strong at 00:09:835 - ? Slider has same effect here but it doesn't strangle the section start.
  • 00:12:301 (2,3) - Hyper here seems a bit strange to me, 00:12:431 (3) - seems like such a dead note compared to 00:12:171 (1) - which is stacked. I'd suggest swapping this around as I feel the emphasis here has been jumbled up a bit.
  • 00:21:262 (1) - 1/2 repeater here? You've done it in places like 00:20:743 (1) - and 00:16:197 (1) - so it would be pretty consistent. I'd suggest similar for the ones after too.
  • 00:31:132 (1) - Gap feels a bit odd after this, maybe two 1/2 sliders? It sounds pretty nice and bridges well.
  • 00:32:171 - Pretty clear beat missed out here, simple circle bridges well between the two sliders on either side.
  • 00:33:210 - Same as above here, happens a few more times after this and I'd suggest filling it in.
  • 00:48:014 - Even if you don't fill in the ones above, I highly suggest this one due to it being kiai.
  • 00:52:364 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This is way too long. Dropping notes at previous points seems to have been to hold combo back for the overdose and this makes that completely useless. This stream should stop at 00:52:689 - latest, it goes back to a simple 1/2 after this so I'd mix it back up like you have been doing previously.
  • 00:54:442 (4,6) - Also pretty unnececcary, wouldn't keep these here in the Rain.
  • 00:54:637 (1,2,3) - Really conservative here, even though we are still in the kiai the red ticks are missing beats inside and between the sliders. Combo shouldn't be a problem with previous suggestions so I'd work this around.
  • 01:16:066 (3,4,5) - feels pretty lame to walk, especially 01:16:455 (5) - maybe add some distance for a dash to final note or a direction change?



Platter
  • Similar to Lotus' diff, check AIMod and wiggle those two objects to snap them properly.
  • 00:14:899 (1) - Consider making this a 1/2 repeater? Its following the vocals right now but it doesn't feel the greatest, there is a pitch shift from the downbeat and strong instrumental so I'd consider it a justified change.
  • 00:19:055 (1) - This slider feels a tad too long, it doesn't really fit the vocal part and it covers a solid beat at 00:19:445 -. I'd knock it back about 1/1 and throw a 1/2 slider after it instead.
  • 00:26:718 (5,5) - Fancy throwing some direction changes here? No big distance increases but directional changes for the streams would work nicely with the hitounds and whatnot.
  • 00:52:625 (4) - I'd drop this note out here in exchange for some movement towards 00:52:690 (1) - . The note isn't really needed in the platter, the triplet does the job well but the 5-plet causes 00:52:690 (1) - to lose so much emphasis that the song places upon it.
  • 00:54:768 (1) - Same as above here.
  • 01:07:755 (3) - Split to two circles, cheeky hyper to 01:08:014 - to create a nice ending maybe? Same application to rest of ending.
  • 01:15:287 (1) - I'd map this out here, the spinner feels so clunky and out of place ontop of that instrumental. Also inconsistent with other diffs on the set.


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  • 00:14:899 (1) - sounds better at 00:15:029 - to me. Extra random density here doesn't feel warranted or important to the song. Moving it also adds more emphasis to the vocals.
  • 00:25:289 (1) - ^
  • 00:31:263 - Gap here is good but I feel like adding a note here carries on well. It's quite audable and leaves a good gap until 00:31:653 (1) - .
  • 00:34:770 (4) - Repeater here? Works really really well with the roll it lands on at 00:35:159 - and still works well as a curve.
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  • 00:12:562 (4) - This sounds pretty funky here, missing out on 00:12:692 - sounds really odd. Maybe add a note or just repeat 00:11:912 (3) - ? 00:14:510 (4,1) - works nicely so maybe something like this could work here. Was trying to focus only on vocal, but it does feel inconsistent with my other patterns, so I added a circle similar to 00:09:835 (1,2,3,1) -
  • 00:27:367 (7) - Maybe drop this out? Movement towards 00:27:497 (1) - is warranted but might spook the player. Whilst 00:27:367 (7) - isn't far away from 00:27:237 (6) - it feels quite expendable but still keeps a strong distance if it disappears. Similar to 00:31:393 (5,1) - kinda. I want to keep the extra note here to build intensity and emphasis at the end of the measure, similar to 00:35:289 (4,5,1) - Considering the flow is very simple here, I think this should be ok
  • 00:51:131 (3) - maybe drop this and just repeat 00:50:872 (2) - instead? Similar effect but looks nicer imo. A lack of spacing here would contradict the clap hitsound, so I've kept them separated for this emphasis
  • 01:15:287 (1) - Feels lame, you mapped out where people used spinners before and I think thats really works nicely in this diff, but I also think this could work here in some ways. I don't have a spinner elsewhere in the diff and this felt like the best place to put one for me :/

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Salad
Code:
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: RWBY Volume 3 - Opening.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
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Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 2
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[Metadata]
Title:When It Falls (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
TitleUnicode:When It Falls (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
Artist:Jeff Williams
ArtistUnicode:Jeff Williams
Creator:Sorcerer
Version:Hyperion's Salad
Source:RWBY
Tags:Withered Lotus JBHyperion - Magic Bomb - Volume Season 3 Opening
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Overdose
  • 00:09:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like this should be swapped to a 4-3 pattern rather than a 3-4 pattern. 00:10:354 (5) - feels much stronger than 00:10:224 (4) - and it would flow much better into a really heavy note such as 00:10:744 (1) - . - Moved 00:10:224 (4) - so the jump is now to 00:10:354 (5) -
  • 00:20:094 (2,3) - This hyper feels really forced. All previous ones like this follow a strong vocal or instrumental change (00:11:783 (2,3) - is an example) but this doesn't really follow anything. 00:20:354 (4,1) - would be more optimal to follow previous timeline hypers. - So there's a couple of reasons I'd like to keep this, one being that I feel the way it plays matches the overall intensity of the song and secondly is that although this is a hyper it is nowhere near as emphasised as many others used in the song. There's no direction change on it, 00:19:964 (1,2,3,4) - is just one movement, hold shift and press left. It helps to keep the catcher moving fast to match the intensity of the song without putting emphasis on a note that doesn't need it
  • 00:21:133 (2) - This hyper feels a bit early, 00:21:133 - feels like it should just be a normal note and 00:21:263 - is much stronger (vocally at least) so I would hyper here. This change follows previous timeline and fits quite well, 00:21:263 - holds vocal emphasis whilst 00:21:133 - follows the instrumental perfectly fine, creating good flow towards 00:21:523 (1) - . - Yeah 00:21:263 (3) - is 1/2 a tick earlier, I'm deaf. Consider it fixed
  • 00:21:523 (1) - If you change the point above I would consider hypering to this note. I would also consider removing the hyper to 00:21:783 (3) - if you do so as it is not consistent with 00:22:172 (2,3) - where you should hyper to 00:22:302 (3) - instead of 00:22:172 (2) - to continue vocal emphasis. 00:22:172 (2) - seems weaker vocally and through the instrumental so I would strongly consider changing this up. - Holy rework, did a lot of changes to this part but it should be more consistent and sensible throughout now, same applies to the unanswered below
  • 00:22:562 (1,2) - Feels like it should be swapped around too. 00:22:432 (4,1) - is a really short distance considering how strong 00:22:562 (1) - is, especially if we look at how you hyper to 00:22:692 (2) - which is the passive continuation of 00:22:562 (1) - .
  • 00:23:211 (2) - I would suggest the same as 00:21:133 (2) - here, a 1/1 slider just doesn't feel right to me. - Listening to this closely this actually fits the vocal this time, it just starts with an sss sound that's a total b8.
  • 00:24:250 (2) - ^ - I'll take my vocal emphasis to the grave, you'll never take it away from me!
  • 00:31:393 (3) - Consider making this a 1/2 slider? 00:31:588 (4,1) - sounds pretty gaudy due to the small gap that you haven't really used anywhere else. 00:31:393 (3) - "ends" at 00:31:523 - so I don't think its such a bad idea, the triplet sounds quite natural. - I've added a slider here at 00:31:393 (3) - but ended it at 00:31:263 (2) - and now hypers to 00:31:653 (1) - which I think is a better fit to the song and an improvement to play. I didn't end it at 00:31:523 - to create a slight pause instead to better emphasise 00:31:653 (1) -
  • 00:32:562 (4,5) - Swap these two around timeline wise? I think it sounds better, 00:32:562 - seems quite passive whilst 00:32:692 - starts vocally and is a downbeat. 00:33:081 (2) - and 00:34:120 (2) - are examples where you do something similar. - Yeah I think this was just me being lazy with putting notes down, mind you these sliders don't make droplets anyway so they're effecitvely no different to just notes but did it anyway (:
  • 00:35:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is 1/3, there are 4 beats here and if you slow it down and play it through it fits perfectly. The section sounds really odd as it is now so I'd change it up for that. a 2-2 like you have going now (minus 00:35:289 (5) - ) fits nicely too. - Whaaat the fuck, you've blown my mind
  • 00:53:209 (1,2,3,4) - I think that the hyper would be more fitting to go to 00:53:209 (1) - rather than 00:53:469 (3) - . Although it is the downbeat it doesn't seem strong enough to warrant it over 00:53:209 (1) - . - Mistakes were made over a year ago, sometimes I wish I just remapped this entirely fresh (:
  • 00:53:729 (1,2) - Similar to above, hyper placement here doesn't seem as fitting as it could be. - Same as above, year ago me was a terrible person
  • 01:16:196 (4) - Ending here seems pretty boring and anti-climactic. Try hyper to a note at the end? It sounds fitting enough to me. - Added a cheeky little hyper




Platter
  • Similar to Lotus' diff, check AIMod and wiggle those two objects to snap them properly. - Wiggled
  • 00:14:899 (1) - Consider making this a 1/2 repeater? Its following the vocals right now but it doesn't feel the greatest, there is a pitch shift from the downbeat and strong instrumental so I'd consider it a justified change. - No change here, prefer to stick with following the vocals
  • 00:19:055 (1) - This slider feels a tad too long, it doesn't really fit the vocal part and it covers a solid beat at 00:19:445 -. I'd knock it back about 1/1 and throw a 1/2 slider after it instead. - Yeah that slider is shit
  • 00:26:718 (5,5) - Fancy throwing some direction changes here? No big distance increases but directional changes for the streams would work nicely with the hitounds and whatnot. - So this is the original stream I mapped a year ago, it was the first stream I mapped for this and I was like "yeah thats good enough". So I've redone it now, I went for slight distance increases over direction changes but it should work better with the hitsounds and be better overall
  • 00:52:625 (4) - I'd drop this note out here in exchange for some movement towards 00:52:690 (1) - . The note isn't really needed in the platter, the triplet does the job well but the 5-plet causes 00:52:690 (1) - to lose so much emphasis that the song places upon it. - Just for you babe
  • 00:54:768 (1) - Same as above here. - ^
  • 01:07:755 (3) - Split to two circles, cheeky hyper to 01:08:014 - to create a nice ending maybe? Same application to rest of ending. - Consider it done
  • 01:15:287 (1) - I'd map this out here, the spinner feels so clunky and out of place ontop of that instrumental. Also inconsistent with other diffs on the set. - Yeah didn't like the spinner here either, mapped it out cos im a mad lad




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