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Agnete Kjolsrud - Get Jinxed

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Topic Starter
Tarrasky
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Bronze by Seto Kousuke and me
Silver by SrSkyPlayer and me
Gold by me
Platinum by me
Diamond by Irreversible and EvilElvis
Master by me
Challenger by Mismagius

Thanks ezek for the video <3
Dont forget to play the amazing diff made by Marianna <3
http://puu.sh/qP5SZ/72a89cd205.osu

Thank you everyone ~
Marianna
Dark Sovereign
I love it! So fun to play :^)
AmigoDoChroome
DELICIOUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
AmigoDoChroome
:)
Topic Starter
Tarrasky
obrigado pelo mod AmigoDoChroome ^^
ajustei várias coisas ty
Sonnyc
I personally feel adding ENHIX in the difficulty name was pretty redundant, since "Bronze Silver Gold Platinum Diamond Challenger" are a consecutive word enough to be an individual difficulty name.
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

Sonnyc wrote:

I personally feel adding ENHIX in the difficulty name was pretty redundant, since "Bronze Silver Gold Platinum Diamond Challenger" are a consecutive word enough to be an individual difficulty name.
i'm just follow the rank criteria
"A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming." wiki/Ranking_Criteria
not necessarily that "Gold" says which is a Hard, for example
Irreversible

Sonnyc wrote:

I personally feel adding ENHIX in the difficulty name was pretty redundant, since "Bronze Silver Gold Platinum Diamond Challenger" are a consecutive word enough to be an individual difficulty name.
He is right, there is a clear consecutive line in the diff names (you can prove it too):

Bronze League
Silver League
Gold League
Platinum League
Diamond League
(Master)
Challenger

It's okay to keep Challenger as last diff, because you can name the highest diff just as you want.

Sonnyc
p/2725713

An average human will logically understand such consecutive order of difficulty names, but fine if you do not prefer using such.
I'm more than sure those custom diff names are acceptable in this case.

Will check this map later.
Necroluttah
Hey ^_^
Short mod from #modreqs

[SrTarra's Normal Silver Duo]
AR10 PLZ CANT READ ANYTHING

Great map, good luck bro :D
can i have a kudosu?
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

Necroluttah wrote:

Hey ^_^
Short mod from #modreqs

[SrTarra's Normal Silver Duo]
AR10 PLZ CANT READ ANYTHING

Great map, good luck bro :D
I think the current AR is good, I tested with AR10, was not so bad, but I think I will have to reject sorry :(

Sonnyc wrote:

p/2725713

An average human will logically understand such consecutive order of difficulty names, but fine if you do not prefer using such.
I'm more than sure those custom diff names are acceptable in this case.

Will check this map later.
wow thats nice, i'll use Bronze/Silver/Gold... thanks for this information :D :D
Slayed_old_1
so can you try a little harder? im really getting bored
nice set, nice map. enjoyed it really.

#m4m

easy.

1. 00:14:328 (3) - this slider doesnt fit the song at all. i cant attach it to vocal or music. if u really want to keep it, i suggest u to put a note here 00:13:995 at least it will sound better

2. 00:16:995 (1) - move this to x= 252, y=348 to make a flow like on the screen: here

3. 00:28:328 (2) - something is wrong with the spacing after this timing point. in easy DS should be consistent, so check it up. some really noticeable places:

SPOILER
00:31:662 (4)
00:33:662 (2)
00:36:328 (4)

4. 00:40:328 - ^ same with.. its different from DS that was in the beginning

5. 00:47:662 (1) - move to x=220 y=276 to make a flow like i mentioned before

6. 00:49:662 (3) - move to x=232 y=112 caz this looks better, when yours

7. 01:12:328 (1) - unreadable for new players. DS should be in the whole song, so change it

8. 01:21:662 (1) - this spinner is high a bit. try to pass if u would only started playing.

9. 01:27:995 (1) - same as 7

10. 01:42:995 (4) - move to x=140 y=300 to make a flow

hard.

1. 00:02:328 (4) - think about moving it on x=176 y=100 to make a flow or try to make it similar to the 00:01:828 (2)

2. 00:13:328 (3,4,5) - here will be better if u will make a straight line here..

3. 00:16:328 (1) - this imposition is not nice, u probably should stack these notes this doesnt look nice

4. 00:22:828 (4) - i can suggest u to make a flow here, moving this note to x=272 y=284

5. 00:31:662 (2) - move this to x=188 y=84 to make a flow

6. 00:39:995 (2,3) - hard to read, dont u think? maybe stack this note and check the DS?

7. 01:03:328 (2,3) - suggesting to do a straight line here

8. 01:34:995 (1) - stack this note with 01:34:328 (3) -

9. 01:40:995 (3,4) - hmm, this blanket is really little compare to ur other blankets, so i think u should increase it

actually thats all. very solid set.
gl! :)
Trynna

Platinum Solo


caraio tarrasky od 8 pra uma diff 4.3* parece muito errado, bota 7.5 nessa caralha

Irrelvis' Diamond Duo


Same ar, od and hp of Platinum Solo
almost 1* difference
pls rito change

This diff should stars in 00:00:329 - like the others, but if not, I think should stars in 00:05:995 -
01:22:996 (1) - delete this slider pls (if you want, put a circle, but I don't think a circle here a nice idea)
01:49:329 (4) - I think it will be better in x:192 y:168
01:49:496 (5) - I think it will be better in x:224 y:332

Challenger Solo


hp 6.5 becuz i'm a faggot

sorry for bad english eu so brasil porra vai toma no copo de suco delicioso
boa sorte com o mapa de dota
Stefan
Someone starts a real attempt, good luck!
Seto Kousuke
the mighty mod
#m4m

hard.

1. 00:02:328 (4) - think about moving it on x=176 y=100 to make a flow or try to make it similar to the 00:01:828 (2) - Adjusted based on slider 2 and minor things.

2. 00:13:328 (3,4,5) - here will be better if u will make a straight line here.. - fix

3. 00:16:328 (1) - this imposition is not nice, u probably should stack these notes this doesnt look nice - mehh, don't like it stacked...moved it a bit to the right tho.

4. 00:22:828 (4) - i can suggest u to make a flow here, moving this note to x=272 y=284 - yah, plays better

5. 00:31:662 (2) - move this to x=188 y=84 to make a flow looks fine to me

6. 00:39:995 (2,3) - hard to read, dont u think? maybe stack this note and check the DS? - not at all actually lol. But i put a new combo at 2.

7. 01:03:328 (2,3) - suggesting to do a straight line here - nah

8. 01:34:995 (1) - stack this note with 01:34:328 (3) - yeah, looks better

9. 01:40:995 (3,4) - hmm, this blanket is really little compare to ur other blankets, so i think u should increase it - well, increased a little

actually thats all. very solid set.
gl! :)

sankyuuu

hmm
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Marianna
No change, Sorry :(
Topic Starter
Tarrasky
Atualizado, obrigado pelo mod ^^
iMega
Yo
[General]
A azul clara ta tão... brilhante? Escurece um pouco mais, meus olhos ardem olhando pra elas. Ah a rosa tb.

[Hoen's Bronze Solo]
http://puu.sh/kVhKP/1e09619fb9.png n tem objeto nos 2 primeiros então tu não precisa deles, o 3 tu também deleta já que a unica coisa que tem de diferente do timming point é o volume, dai tu bota o volume do timming em 40%.
00:26:662 - tu tbm n precisa desse, deleta.
00:39:995 - ^
01:06:995 - ^
01:09:662 - ^
02:00:328 - ^

O resto ta bom já q n sei moddar easy

[Talrrasky's Gold Duo]
Diminue o volume do começo pelo amor de deus sdkjlghsgdjlkahsg.
01:57:995 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 02:02:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 02:07:995 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - eu sei q isso e hard e que o som repete mas spammar 1/2 sliders nesse final n ficou mt legal

[Platinum Solo]00:05:995 (1,2) - fix blanket, deixa bem blanketado.
00:09:662 (2,1) - ^
01:11:995 (7,8,1) - a musica acalmou e aki e uma transição pra outra parte lenta com sliders lentos, não faz sentido esse jump, ao menos diminui a intensidade dele.
01:32:662 (6,7,8) - os outros tem o mesmo espaçamento, no final acaba espaçando mais, ficou meio inconsistente. ou faz tudo igual ou espaça aos poucos
01:33:662 (1,2,3,4) - esses sliders tao meio random, não sei D:
02:05:662 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - os de antes eu gostei mas esses aki tao mt repetitivos, acho que tu podia criar uns jumps aki sla.

[Irrelvis' Diamond Duo]02:10:829 (1,1,1) - wow

[Challenger Solo]00:03:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - eu botei meu volume no máximo e não achei nada pra justificar a stream, sem contar q a parte é lenta, acha mesmo que precisa dela aki?
01:17:495 (4,1) - mt espaçado
01:31:662 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

02:00:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - gozei com esses jumps, gj

Eu posso fazer um Master Solo? ç.ç
Grrum
Hello. Here from requesting a M4M. I did most of the mod yesterday before your recent update, so I apologize if there's any useless suggestions because of that. Hope this helps!

[Hoen's Bronze Solo]

00:14:328 (2,2) – These are pretty close and so look a little cramped, try rotating 00:17:662 (2) - to space these out.

00:49:662 (3,1) – These are not perfectly parallel, do copy paste and ctrl shift s

01:14:995 (1,2) - The rhythm here is a little confusing what with red ticks and white ticks. A simpler rhythm like this fits better imo: http://puu.sh/kV7et/4b8a898c6e.jpg

01:37:662 (1) – I'm concerned that the spinner is too short for an easy player to do. Perhaps consider a rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/kV6Ra/91cfb0c1d5.jpg

[SrTarras's Silver Duo]

00:09:662 (3) – Move the end point to 398, 273 to blanket 00:11:328 (1) – better

00:20:995 (4) – moving this to 344, 122 gives the pattern better curvature imo.

00:33:328 (4,2) – spacing these out by moving (2) to 262, 87 could look nice

00:44:328 (1) – moving to 114, 309 makes a nicer blanket

00:55:662 (3,3) – looks odd imo, why not stack these?

01:56:995 (1,2) – This is the only instance where you use two ½ sliders instead of a reverse slider to express this unique part of the music, so it felt off. I like the pattern you have, but I think reverse slider fits the rhythm better, so see if you use that instead.

01:59:662 (2,3) – I'm not sure if you wanted to go with the DS of the next timing section, so I thought I'd just point this out that your DS is not 1.0x

02:05:162 (2,2) – This overlap looks odd to me, see if you can move 02:05:495 (3,1) – (so that 02:05:162 (2,1) – have a DS of ~1.0x) so that 02:05:162 (2,2) - stack

02:07:662 (2,3) – Due to the auto-stacking, your DS is not consistent

[Talrrasky's Gold Duo]

I can't really tell that it's a colab from the name. Maybe try Kousky's Gold Duo?

00:04:495 (2,3,4) – A more curved flow feels more natural to me: http://puu.sh/kVdEz/5ca5c1089c.jpg

00:04:995 (4,1) – The spacing here implies a ½ distance. I think a larger spacing transitions into the slower section better.

00:13:328 (3,4,5) – Make this linear since it's so close to being so.

00:15:995 (3,1) – blanket this since it's close to blanket anyway?

00:18:995 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) – A bit of a pet peeve of mine. This is all clockwise flow, and there's so much it's a little overwhelming and trivializes the music. Going counterclockwise at 00:22:995 (1) – feels expressive since it goes with the stressed lyrics, but going counterclockwise at 00:22:328 (3) – is probably a better place to go counterclockwise since it feels like the right time to do so and it gets rid of the awkward 00:22:328 (3,2) - overlap

00:41:328 (4,2) – These being so close looks odd, try rotating 00:41:662 (1) – clockwise to give you some more room.

00:44:995 (3) – Try making this clockwise since that feels more natural. The idea is something like http://puu.sh/kVc1F/5a8fcb9f08.jpg , but obviously you would need to make more room by changing what comes before this

00:56:995 (3,5) – The curvature being so strikingly different looks odd to me. I would take the average of these curvatures and make them both that, or I would use a different flow that gives a reason to change the curvature like maybe this rough example: http://puu.sh/kVco3/d4e5b56a64.jpg

01:01:662 (1,3) – Space these out a little more to look nicer

01:10:328 (3,3) – I'm not a fan of this overlap

01:15:328 – Missing the vocal here feels odd when 01:13:662 (1,2) – follows the vocals so well. Try making this a ½ slider and deleting 01:15:495 (2) - .

01:21:662 (1) – Obligatory make your spiral slider better.

01:34:328 (3,1) – (minor) this overlap is a little awkward to me

01:49:662 (1,2) – The way you make the 1 slider, you're asking for these to be blanketed. Blanket these or change the slider or make 2 in a position that doesn't ask to be blanketed.

01:51:495 – Missing the note at felt a little odd to me

02:01:328 (4,1) – Make this jump a little bigger, like 1.4x

02:04:328 (1,2,3,4) – Due to slider leniency, the effective spacing of this is very small. Go for something more like http://puu.sh/kVcOM/c7f81d81e7.jpg
02:08:328 (1,2,3,4) – Similar ^

General opinion: the direction/curvatures of your sliders in addition to some odd overlaps produce some awkward looking patterns, but the map is good as a whole.

[Platinum solo]

00:37:662 (1) – looks a little odd to me, try having a more obtuse angle like this rough example: http://puu.sh/kV5Yd/d1e7c4733e.jpg

00:38:662 (1,2,1) – Get more opinions on this, but this was a huge spike in intensity that didn't feel intuitive. Consider ending the slider at 00:39:662 – and putting a circle at 00:39:995 – as well as reducing the general level of spacing

01:13:662 (2) - Try slanting this so that the player can see the slant more clearly like: http://puu.sh/kV631/c5574902df.jpg
01:16:328 (3) – Similar ^

From 01:41:662 (1) – to 01:45:995 (2) – you prioritize counterclockwise flow a little too much and it feels a little repetitive when it shouldn't be. Try breaking up the counterclockwise flow at 01:43:662 (3,4,5,6) – to alleviate this issue. For a rough example: http://puu.sh/kVzvi/a807eebbf2.jpg .

02:02:328 (4,5,6,1) – I like how you build tension with the ½ stacked notes and release the tension with jump sliders. It does a good job of expressing the music here. :)

[Irrelvis' Diamond Duo]

01:04:328 (1,2) – This spacing is awkward. Right now it just feels small, but increasing it could lead to misinterpreting the rhythm since 01:04:162 (4,1) – is a huge jump, so I don't know exactly what to do. I tried stacking these and it felt okay but yeah idk.

01:13:662 (1,2) – This isn't symmetric with itself (along the lines the slider head to head and tail to tail). Take a look at this for a more symmetric slider arrangement. http://puu.sh/kVyy6/a85e6d73a8.jpg For convenience I've included the code if you like it:

170,46,77662,38,0,B|234:55|234:55|248:82|248:82|333:91,1,172.799994726563,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
412,91,78329,2,0,P|414:62|416:26,1,57.5999982421876,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:22:996 (1) - Making a tiny hole in the center of this like http://puu.sh/kVaJi/0542dbb3a2.jpg makes the slider make more sense and looks better to me.

01:46:996 (9,1) – (minor) These could be more parallel

02:01:995 (2,3,4) – I know you're going for symmetry here, but the reduction in spacing felt off when playing. Try keeping the same flow but make the spacing around 1.3x. Right now, the symmetry is less noticeable than the spacing issue.

02:08:329 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) – That the spacing here is less than that at 02:02:995 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) – is poor pacing to me. Make the earlier one smaller or the later one bigger or both.

02:10:829 (1,1,1) – This high energy section creates a controversial point of pacing. 02:10:912 (1) – is overmapped (which isn't a problem by itself, but it gives a solid argument for an interpretation of no stream here, leading to a player easily misreading and not agreeing with the high spaced stream), and in my opinion, the music doesn't support the high spacing, especially when there is no build up in the map to such an intense moment. I had a very sour experience playing this, so I highly encourage you to reduce the spacing to ~0.9x so that this acts more as a resolution to the song instead of a climax.

Besides this last point, this was a very fun, well-designed map. Good job!

[Challenger Solo]

00:06:995 (2) – this is not symmetric to itself since the last third is shorter than the first third. Try a more symmetric one.

00:30:328 (4) – This is awkward to me in the rhythm. In particular, 00:30:662 – is a strong note that is mapped weakly. Try a different rhythm (I like three circles).

00:35:995 (6,1) – This jump could be a bit bigger to emphasize the strong vocal here

00:42:328 (3) – In the diamond difficulty, these were ½ sliders which fits the staccato nature of this sound byte. I apologize for making the comparison, but in comparison there is something lacking here by not capturing this staccato rhythm.

01:29:662 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) – The long sliders/rhythm makes this part too weak. See what you can do about increasing the note density here. I know that's kind of stupid without going into specifics, but that's how I feel when playing.

02:04:995 (5,6,7,8) – The spacing here feels too small. This is the climax of the first half of this section, so I would go with a spacing more comparable to 02:05:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – and then make 02:05:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – have more of a “rest” feel to it.

And that's it from me. Good luck!
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