1. Inner Oni (7.18 stars, 2198 notes)

1. 02:04:183 - add d? It is all right even if you put it successively.
2. 02:18:718 (392) - change to k? When I consider a electric sound.
3. 02:19:328 (397) - same as above.
4. 04:16:974 (7,8,9,10) - When I reverse a color, how about? The kick sound is basically high-pitched.
5. 04:17:323 (12,13,14) - ^

SKSalt wrote:

hi, m4m request from IRC(1st mod )

[Nishizumi]

1. 02:04:183 - add d? It is all right even if you put it successively. yes added
2. 02:18:718 (392) - change to k? When I consider a electric sound. nope, it's similar as (390)
3. 02:19:328 (397) - same as above. no
4. 04:16:974 (7,8,9,10) - When I reverse a color, how about? The kick sound is basically high-pitched. i know, but i think it more fit dddk than kkkd, also for variety pattern
5. 04:17:323 (12,13,14) - ^ ^

wow, really nice map... give you ★

Good luck

Surono wrote:

yah lupa modding mapmu D:
placeholdel, ntar mod map gw yg diare bapersich. oje heh3he3h *m4m intensinj1nk*

1. 00:26:044 (136,137,138) - kdd patterns are really continuous. why don't you put k on 00:28:660, and 00:28:834 reverse (148,149) - ?
2. put d on 00:34:241, and 00:34:590 (177) - change to k?
3. 00:37:730 add d to follow the kicks.?
4. 00:45:578 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - simple pattern is better imo. e.g.) kkkd d kkkd
5. 00:56:916 (53) - Finish.
6. 02:42:613 -, 02:48:195 - see above.
7. 02:58:834 simple pattern is better, too. d-d-dddk is weird for playing..
8. 03:10:870 (203) - Finish.
9. 03:16:451 (240) - k would more fit to the kicks.
10. 04:16:887 (6) - change to k? k k dddk is more natural for playing (imo). also 04:17:323 (12,13,14) - change to k.
11. 05:23:078 (42,43,44,45,46,47) - see above.

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi, Nishizumi. M4M
[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:26:044 (136,137,138) - kdd patterns are really continuous. why don't you put k on 00:28:660, and 00:28:834 reverse (148,149) - ? nope, consistency like 00:14:881 - to 00:17:323
2. put d on 00:34:241, and 00:34:590 (177) - change to k? nope, same as above
3. 00:37:730 add d to follow the kicks.? i actually follow the vocal sound
4. 00:45:578 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - simple pattern is better imo. e.g.) kkkd d kkkd i think current is more simple, also more fit with background music
5. 00:56:916 (53) - Finish. okay changed
6. 02:42:613 -, 02:48:195 - see above. nope, see above too
7. 02:58:834 simple pattern is better, too. d-d-dddk is weird for playing.. i think this way is most simple, also compatible with the background music. if you think that's weird to play, can you give me a suggestion to make it not weird
8. 03:10:870 (203) - Finish. okay
9. 03:16:451 (240) - k would more fit to the kicks. orz okay
10. 04:16:887 (6) - change to k? k k dddk is more natural for playing (imo). also 04:17:323 (12,13,14) - change to k. but the tone sounds faint, also (12,13,14) is same as (7,8,9) so i made it same too
11. 05:23:078 (42,43,44,45,46,47) - see above. nope, see above too

Good luck!
(=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Midnaait wrote:

Hey Nishi, from Modding Queue Hey

d=don k=kat D=big don K=big kat

[General]

Very good thanks

[Inner Oni]

00:02:671 (7) - k? Voice is definetly higher than the previous note, also 00:24:997 (132) is a kat and the voice is the same tone i think they are different, 00:02:671 - is more similar as 00:03:202
00:13:834 (65) - ^ ^
00:39:299 (201) - k? changed
01:50:811 (181,182,183,184) - how about kddk?, all the notes except 182 have the same pitch as 01:49:415 (173,174,175,176) (181) and (183) have same pitch, so i can't change it to kddk
01:56:392 (213,214,215,216) - kdkk? i'll consider this. because i think it'll be harder, and i don't want it :/
02:38:951 (25) - kat, Same as the top ^^^ same too
04:04:764 (195,196,197,198) - kkdk or dkdk? i'll consider this
04:52:904 (109) - k v
05:04:067 (6) - ^ nope

I can't find too many flaws in this map, plays very well in my opinion.
Good luck

PS. Also have a star, you deserve it

1. 00:12:439 (58,59) - How about changing to 1/6 stream? there is sound that is similar as prev. /me runs
2. 00:41:392 (214,215) - Swap these? it would be fit vocals imo.
3. 00:50:113 (23) - Move to 00:50:637?
4. 00:54:474 (38) - It would be not bad to add finish imo.
5. 01:14:532 - Add note to follow vocal.
6. 01:52:206 (189,190,191,192) - kdkk would be fit more the music imo.
7. 02:10:259 (321) - Move to 02:10:171? sound is continued on there.
8. 02:15:840 (368) - Same as above.
9. 02:17:933 (386) - It would be more natural that moving to 02:17:846 imo.
10. 02:18:631 (392) - Same as 02:10:259.
11. 04:13:660 (40) - d?
12. 04:31:451 - There is no note suddenly. it would be better to add note because it feels empty compared to around.
13. 04:34:241 - Same as above.

Ploenar wrote:

Hi, Nishizumi.

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:12:439 (58,59) - How about changing to 1/6 stream? there is sound that is similar as prev. /me runs i know, but i'm focusing emphasis on 00:12:613
2. 00:41:392 (214,215) - Swap these? it would be fit vocals imo. change to d k k d instead on 00:41:044 (212,213,214,215)
3. 00:50:113 (23) - Move to 00:50:637? nope, i think there's no good to follow the note here
4. 00:54:474 (38) - It would be not bad to add finish imo. consider this, seems nicer but i think there're same emphasis as 00:54:648 (39,40,41)
5. 01:14:532 - Add note to follow vocal. nope, i follow drum and kick sound
6. 01:52:206 (189,190,191,192) - kdkk would be fit more the music imo. nope, 01:52:468 - pitch seems going down
7. 02:10:259 (321) - Move to 02:10:171? sound is continued on there. yeah in this part there're many continued music. but i won't move it because i just wanna make 2,4 and 5 stream pattern here.
8. 02:15:840 (368) - Same as above. same
9. 02:17:933 (386) - It would be more natural that moving to 02:17:846 imo. same as above
10. 02:18:631 (392) - Same as 02:10:259. same
11. 04:13:660 (40) - d? nope, it's similar as 04:13:834 (41)
12. 04:31:451 - There is no note suddenly. it would be better to add note because it feels empty compared to around. since i follow vocal sound from 04:29:357 - and vocal sound is audible stopped 04:31:276 - also for a little bit break
13. 04:34:241 - Same as above. same as above

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from queue~

Inner Oni
This diff should be less than 7.07 stars lol why ? or should i change diff name ?

00:25:695 (10) - Change to k. There is a change in the pitch of the vocals here. It will also match 02:39:648 (10). no, i think (8,9,10) are same

01:10:171 (10,11) - Ctrl + G? This is the only part of the chorus where you're not matching a k with the kick sound in the instrumentals. i follow vocal sounds here

01:45:230 (19,20,21,22) - kdkk? I think this would match better, but it doesn't really matter. kddk would work too. Same thing at 01:56:392 (19,20,21,22). i know at 01:45:230 - is more fit, but i don't want make same pattern sequentially with 01:43:834 or make varied pattern

01:49:502 (44) - Change to d. The pitch change is more emphasized with the previous hit rather than the next hit imo. nope, for varied pattern

01:50:811 (51) - Change to k. The pitch goes down from this hit. same as 01:45:230

01:52:206 (59) - Change to d. This matches the instrumentals, and 01:46:625 (27). same as above

02:03:369 (34,35,36,37) - Turn this into a 1/4 pattern. This doesn't match the instrumentals too well. keep for now, but i'll consider this

02:01:973 (22) - Change to k might sound better. ok, also (23)

02:50:462 (10,11) - Ctrl + G sounds better to me. no for me

03:11:218 - Make this whole kiai time harder. It's too similar to the first kiai time (if it's not copy pasted ), but I don't think that the difficulty in this kiai time is very fitting for this whole song. In the first kiai time, it's more tolerable since it's still the start of the diff, but the third kiai time should definitely match the overall difficulty of the whole song more. Make it harder, like you did with the fourth kiai time. wut da hell is tolerable ? it's fitting with bg music. i'll consider this to make it harder or not, or i'm waiting what other modder questioned it or not.

03:55:869 - For this section, the suggestions are the same since the song is so similar, so look at the above. i'm comparing this part with previous of here. so this is ok i guess

Uh... that's it D: I don't think I had many good suggestions so this might not be too helpful, but great song and fun diff

Good luck on rank~

1. lol 2 notes!

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1. 00:13:834 (7) - change to k　Uniformity of the next Notes. and I felt the same sound here (00:14:532 (10) - )
2. 00:25:520 (9) - change to k　I think vocal pitch is high
3. 00:39:823 (25,27) - delete & 00:40:171 (26) - change to k same as above
4. 01:26:131 (29) - change to d I think sound will feel low.
5. 02:04:590 - ~ 02:26:392 - this part is good!
6. 02:38:951 (7) - change to k Same as that written the first
7. 04:52:904 (7) - ^
8. 05:04:067 (7) - ^

BlackHairEND wrote:

Hello!
From M4M
sorry lating mod ;w; np

[General]

1. lol 2 notes!

wtf my poor mistake

[Inner Oni]

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1. 00:13:834 (7) - change to k　Uniformity of the next Notes. and I felt the same sound here (00:14:532 (10) - ) no, (7) is similar as (8) and it's not as strong as (10)
2. 00:25:520 (9) - change to k　I think vocal pitch is high umm i don't think so, (8,9,10) - are same pitch
3. 00:39:823 (25,27) - delete & 00:40:171 (26) - change to k same as above same as above, i'm not focusing on vocal sound. i combine between vocal and music sound
4. 01:26:131 (29) - change to d I think sound will feel low. oh damn, agreed x_x
5. 02:04:590 - ~ 02:26:392 - this part is good! thanks
6. 02:38:951 (7) - change to k Same as that written the first same too
7. 04:52:904 (7) - ^ same
8. 05:04:067 (7) - ^ ^

Good Luck!

Flying Pan wrote:

Hello, from my queue~

uh..SR 7.. ok, let's try.

[Bintang Toedjoe Masuk Angin-ner Oni]
00:08:776 (35) - ganti jadi k? sounds similar with 00:09:125 (36) - ngga, (35) nadanya ga sekuat dan setinggi (36)

00:25:520 (9) - k is better imo. suaranya agak naik disitu ngga, (8,9,10) menurut gw sama semua
00:24:997 (7) - terus ini engga d? tadi di 00:02:671 (7) - ama 00:13:834 (7) - juga d bagian yang itu beda banget sama yang dua yang kamu sebutin. di sini jelas banget tingginya sedangkan yang dua itu rendah dan hampir gak kedengeran

00:50:201 - i think there is mappable sound. add k? i don't want to make it more dense in calm part

00:58:834 (13,14,15) - kdk biar pas sama pitchnya? atau dkd biar pas sama drumnya no, current is more fit i guess

01:13:137 (28) - karnea suaranya turun disini rasanya lebih baik d menurut gw (27) itu agak sama kaya (28) so keep

01:14:706 (3) - ini bisa pindah ke 01:14:532 - terus
01:15:230 - tambah d disini.
01:16:102 () - pindah ke 01:16:625 - to follow the vocal?
nope, i follow the instrument
01:19:852 (2) - sebenernya gw gak denger mappable sound disini sih. hapus buat ngasi break? ato pindah ke 01:19:416 - dan kasih finisher di 01:19:590 (1) - rasanya terlalu padet untuk bagian yang relatif kalem. it's mapable, also it's audible. so i put it there. kalo move ke 01:19:416 - itu sengaja di kosongin buat break ke tempat slow, lagipula kalo ditambahin note di situ bakal overlap imo. ga tega saya mas ngasih finisher di bagian tenang begini
01:22:642 (13) - ini juga bisa dihapus untuk memberi break lebih. no
01:39:561 (6) - ini gw saranin dipotong untuk memberi kesan peningkatan note density sepanjang bagian kalem ini. menurut gw kalo langsung long stream dari bagian kalem agak gimana gitu. nope, buat konsistensi di bagian sebelumnya. juga di part ini cuma ditambahin satu note biar sedikit lebih susah.

02:00:753 (14,15) - swap? konsisten dengan 01:54:996 (11,12,13,14) - itu jelas beda mas imo

02:50:113 (8,9,10,11) - kddk i know it's more fit, but i don't want to make same pattern sequentially
02:51:857 (16) - d, lebih rendah dari 02:52:032 (17) - considering this, but keep for now

03:01:450 (7) - delete to just follow the vocal it's sustainable to here

03:18:893 (54) - uhh pindah ke 03:19:067 - di bagian 03:13:137 - breaknya abis vocal. suara vokalnya emang berhenti di 03:18:893 - mas
03:19:067 (54,55) - kalo udah ini di-swap. no
03:13:747 (18) - ini ganti jadi k terus pindah ke 03:13:921 - untuk pattern consistency dengan 03:19:503 - consistency is no needed

03:33:544 ~ 03:54:474 - sama kayak mod bagian kalem. sama jawabannya juga

sisanya bagus... Good luck with the beatmap!

1. 00:02:671 (7) - 00:13:834 (7) - dll kenapa nggak diganti k aja kalo ngikutin vokal? imo buat ngemphasie bedanya vokal pas di situ sama 00:02:323 (5,6) - , "e"nya kedengeran gitu (kaya 00:07:904 (31,32,33) - )
2. 00:11:218 (46) - kasih finish, lalu remove 00:11:392 (47,48,49) - . bisa dibuat emphasize musiknya sih, dan sebenernya di 00:11:392 (47,48,49) - ini kan kosong, hasil musiknya 00:11:218 (46) - blank (sama finish) ini juga bisa dibuat sebagai 'transisi' perpindahan kamu dari ngikut ke vokal jadi ikut instrumen
3. 00:20:985 (1) - k? kalo didengerin baik" sih musiknya di sini cocok kalo kat daripada don, karena mirip" sama 00:21:334 (5) - dan gw ga mau komen masalah 1/6nya, kalo gw sih gabisa main tapi ya emang cocok ;_;
4. 00:34:241 coba add note di sini, k gitu, biar nggak bosen mulu patternnya + musiknya di sana kan juga nyambung
5. 01:35:549 add note? cuma out of curiousity aja sih, karna gw tau lu ngikut patternnya gitu" doang.. but.. dont you feel it kinda repetiting altho the music is fun here? cth lainnya sih di bagian ini 01:24:387, bisa ditambahin note, lalu di bagian selanjutnya ditambahin lagi, karena bagian ini lebih intense daripada bagian lainnya. lalu bagian setelah ini juga 01:30:753, ngikut aja musiknya, kalo sama kea yang sebelumnya imo bakal ngebosenin walaupun musiknya di sini lebih intense lagi. jadi kaya rising gitu, dari simpel, agak dipadetin, lalu jadi padet. ya terserah sih, gw bilang biar nggak terlalu repetitive kaya gini aja despite the music intensity is rising
6. .. is what i want to say. gapapalah biarin di sana aja ya haha. ini ngikutin musiknya di bagian selanjutnya well.. okay, but ini jadi ngefokus ke musiknya doang, yang repetitif dari jaman beda 01:30:666 sampe 02:22:206, basenya sama mulu.. ya beda orang beda rasa lah ya
7. 02:03:980 (43,44,45,46) - ada ya yang suka d ddddd 1/4 + 1/6? gw sih nggak, secara susah banget dihit
8. 03:32:323 (14,19) - nggak flow better as k? xD
9. Kiai part keempat agak kacau kah? Kok gw ngerasanya gitu.. atau cuma gw aja kali >_> hitsoundnya kerasin btw, d bagian sini ngga seberapa kedengeran