From Kiwi Modding queue.
Descension To HellFirst of all. I do not agree with the AR8.8 as the BPM is reasonably high along with the object density due to so many streams and 1/4 objects. It is up to you to choose what AR you want but I personally believe it requires a minimum of AR9~AR9.5.
You have a lot of beautiful stream shapes. But some of them are too close to perfection to be left unpolished. I think this is the main issue that descends the map to hell (high-five \o).
00:45:650 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Shape it into a perfect circle.
00:47:975 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ This will take a lot of effort to make perfect, the struggles are real. I found it easier to intersect the stream on #4 rather than #3 trying to preserve your original patter as much as possible.
This can help you (.osu code included)224,172,47825,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,192,47900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,196,47975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,199,48050,1,8,0:0:0:0:
439,184,48125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
470,138,48200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,83,48275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
422,45,48350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,41,48425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,74,48500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,128,48575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,177,48650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,199,48725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
406,250,48800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,302,48875,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,335,48950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,327,49025,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,284,49100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,229,49175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,175,49250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,151,49325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,177,49400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:50:150 (16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - exact same thing, just make it a perfect circle.
01:07:625 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Consider it again~ ^
01:19:625 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Please ^
01:28:325 - and 01:28:475 - could be mapped, why the missing piano beats?
Damn though you got sexy sliders
02:12:350 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - shape~ please~
02:15:950 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^
02:28:250 (12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4) - try intersect the stream at 02:28:250 (12,4) - (also the shape imo is okay because its symmetrical and its nowhere close to a circle)
02:29:075 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - circle shape please~
02:35:075 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - not necessary but could make this a circle as well
02:38:375 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - polish this circle, it's almost there but not quite
02:50:000 (14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
03:07:625 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - circle shape~
04:07:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is cool
The rest of the streams surprisingly look tidy even with some weird shapes. So well done. That's about all~
I hope this helps, I really hope you can polish these streams. Goodluck approving this!