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Savoir Adore - Dreamers

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Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年8月17日 at 下午 06:20:11

Artist: Savoir Adore
Title: Dreamers
Tags: Our Nature PES2013 StarrStyx Pro Evolution Soccer Soundtrack
BPM: 102.5
Filesize: 4614kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Awake (2.58 stars, 365 notes)
  2. Starr's Normal (1.66 stars, 231 notes)
Download: Savoir Adore - Dreamers
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Gaia__ Karen

"You can stay where you are. I will wake you. I will wake you in the morning.
You can stay where you are, so don’t you worry. Don’t you worry - keep on sleeping."


#15

Starr's Normal by StarrStyx
Awake by Chaoslitz
Last edited by Chaoslitz , edited 25 times in total.
Starfy
1,046 posts
Joined November 2012
Starfy
As your request

[General]
-Offset should be +7032
-Close Widescreens Support
-Close Enable countdown

[Starr's Normal]
-HP=4 is more appropriate
-The rhythm density of the map seems..too low actually
-00:27:529 (4) - Try to make a more symmetric slider
-00:29:285 (6) - Placed more left can improve the flow
-00:29:285 (6) - NC
-00:30:163 (8) - This slider skipped some important beat such as 00:30:456, 00:31:042
-00:33:383 (6,1) - Switch their combo
-00:36:310 (4) - The slider is too straight here. Maybe try this=>http://puu.sh/j7dWT/1742b16fb4.jpg It can improve the flow
-00:39:822 (9) - The flow here is really strange, why not ctrl+H the slider to make a good flow to connect 00:38:651 (8,1) -
-00:42:163 (3) - Symmetric slider can make the direction become clearer and tidier
-00:45:676 (1,2,3) - The flow is too straight, it makes a bit of weird
-00:48:602 (6) - Try => http://puu.sh/j7ei3/32516b77b3.jpg It looks much more tidier
-00:58:554 (6) - Place upper seems better
-00:58:554 (6,7,8) - I only can say the flow is weird, but anyway this is quite optional for you to consider
-01:00:895 (1) - Normal difficulty should not contain any SV change
-01:10:261 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of straight flow is not appropriate to be placed
-01:12:602 (5,6) - Why not make the same rhythm of 01:10:261 (1,2,3,4) - ?
-01:16:115 Add a note to connect the rhythm
-01:19:627 (1) - Useless timing point should be deleted
-01:20:798 (2,3) - Consider to make a curve slider to increase the flow
-01:23:139 (5,6,7,1) - Same as above, this kind of straight flow is not really appropriate to be placed
-01:26:359 Add a note here can connect the rhythm effectively
-01:31:042 (4) - It touches 01:30:163 (3) - , try to avoid this because this is quite ugly
-01:35:432 (5,6) - Why suddenly stacked?
-01:40:700 (3) - This is quite ugly since there is a different orientation and curved slider before this slider
-01:43:042 (6) - As well
-01:46:554 (5) - The slider makes a weird flow
-01:47:724 (7) - Try => http://puu.sh/j7ggT/22937a9b43.jpg It looks more comfortable IO believe
-01:47:724 (7,8,1) - This stack is weird actually...
-01:48:895 (1) - This slider is too curved imo
-01:53:285 (7,8) - So hard to read for newbie, and also not good-looking
-01:54:749 (1) - I believe this slider can be more symmetric
-01:57:090 (4) - The blanket is too tight, and the blanket isn't good
-02:01:773 (7) - The blanket is too tight
-02:04:115 (1) - Normal difficulty should not contain any SV change
-02:04:115 (1,2,3) - Opinion, this is quite weird...Not the flow, but the shape
-02:06:456 (4) - This slider is too curved imo
-02:07:627 (6,7,1) - The flow is too straight as well, look not comfortable
-02:49:481 (5,6) - Switch these two notes to slider will make the pattern look a bit more better
-03:12:017 (1) - The curve of the slider is not really good... Try => http://puu.sh/j7ijw/409afc05b4.jpg
-03:14:359 (5) - The blanket can be improved
-03:16:115 (8,9,1) - The flow is too straight. Try => http://puu.sh/j7ioB/f083da2399.jpg
-03:17:871 (3,4) - Are you serious ._.? This is too hard for newbie to read and play the map
-03:31:920 (3,4) - This kind of pattern always appear in this map...A bit of boring maybe
-03:33:676 (2,3) - Why not blanket them?
-03:34:261 (3,4) - As well
-03:36:602 (1) - NC
-03:36:602 (7,8,9) - A bit of strange Try => http://puu.sh/j7iIF/7d9a9cccc0.jpg
03:44:798 (1) - Why so pro

[Awake]
-00:33:675 (3,4,5,6,7) - The stream can be curved a bit due to the better flow
-00:34:845 (8,1) - Make a better blanket
-00:51:090 (4) - Although this is not overmapped, this note is still a bit weird for me
-00:52:700 (4,5,6) - Make a prettier triangle please
-00:59:139 (2,3) - The blanket can be improved
-01:03:237 (1) - The slider can be more symmetric
-01:04:993 (4) - Why not make an alternate shape of 01:04:407 (3) -
-01:13:773 (3) - Place it lower can match more the circular which you are keeping
-01:14:944 (1) - Why not add a note before the spinner
-01:30:749 (6,7,1) - The triangle isn't perfect
-01:39:529 (3,4,5,6) - Square here is weird, at least for me
-01:45:383 (1) - Place the red control point left a bit to match the slider tail of 01:44:212 (4) -
-01:49:481 (5) - The note makes the flow become less smooth
-01:50:651 (2,3) -Captious mod, the blanket can be improved
-01:52:993 (2) - Try to move the red control point to the middle as near as possible, it will make the flow become more smooth
-01:54:311 (4) - Same as above, although this is not overmapped, this note is still a bit weird for me
-02:18:163 (1) - Same as above, why not add a note before the spinner
-02:25:188 (4) - Cool slider, but I think this slider is not really appropriate in the slow and soft vocal
-02:48:602 (1) - You know my meaning
-02:48:602 (1) - Totally opinion, the spinner can end at 02:50:944
-03:26:066 (1) - Yea
-03:28:846 (1,2) - This is quite easy to mislead the player since the note start at blue line
-03:33:822 (3) - Place lower can match more the flow

Gook luck
Last edited by Starfy , edited 3 times in total.
Nakano Itsuki
1,218 posts
Joined July 2014
Nakano Itsuki
ww

StarFY
00:29:285 (6) - Keep consistent with the next combo color
00:33:383 (6,1) - 00:33:968 (1) - This seems to be the first beat of a new section more clearly.
00:36:310 (4) - No change since I don't really like the slider being tilted, plus it seems fine
00:48:602 (6) - seems good and tidy enough for me
00:58:554 (6,7,8) - should be fine actually
01:31:042 (4) - I don't see a problem with this, plus ppl won't really notice the overlapping anyway
01:40:700 (3) - no I gotta BE FANCY !!11!1!!1!!!!1!!11!!
01:43:042 (6) - same
01:46:554 (5) - Not really, as the velocity of the playing is rather slow, the player wont really feel any weirdness, plus it flows into the next slider perfectly
01:47:724 (7) - The antiflow is intentional
01:47:724 (7,8,1) - Well I see some maps have a similar look, so...
01:48:895 (1) - Well not much of a problem imo
01:57:090 (4) - I see no problem, though I adjusted the blanket a bit
02:01:773 (7) - same
03:14:359 (5) - too lazy too ;w; looks fine anyway
03:31:920 (3,4) - pls you're just stating the obvious - normal diffs ARE boring
03:36:602 (1) - I dont see the need for NC, plus I need to keep the consistency
03:36:602 (7,8,9) - I like this pattern, so no

Didn't apply any mods did between 01:00:895 to 01:28:407 (7) - and 02:04:115 (1) - to 03:10:846 due to removal of sv change and huge tweaks. You can recheck that part of you like ww

others changed
thanks 95

SPOILER
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Countdown: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Dreamers
TitleUnicode:Dreamers
Artist:Savoir Adore
ArtistUnicode:Savoir Adore
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:Starr's Normal
Source:Our Nature
Tags:PES2013 StarrStyx
BeatmapID:745231
BeatmapSetID:336770

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Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
As your req

Normal

  1. 00:48:602 (6,7) - 避免这样的逆flow，让滑条尾巴方向指向note
  2. 01:00:310 (8,1) - 这可以blanket。。
  3. 01:16:407 (3,4) - 单独的两个就用滑条好了，用圈感觉不合适
  4. 01:30:163 (3,4) - 这overlap很不好看
  5. 01:47:724 (7,8) - ^
  6. 01:52:407 (6,8) - ^
  7. 01:56:505 (3,4) - ^
  8. 03:23:139 (4,5) - ^
  9. 01:48:895 (1,2) - 为什么突然变成1.4距离了
  10. 03:44:798 (1) - 这滑条肯定不行，必须要可以一眼看出轨迹
  11. 另外stack用的太多了，因为这是最低难度，不能太难，stack会增加难度，建议去掉些

Awake

  1. 03:34:700 (5,6) - 这跟前面一样overlap？保持一致好点
  2. 做的很好，找不出什么问题了:D
Normal还需要再改改
Nakano Itsuki
1,218 posts
Joined July 2014
Nakano Itsuki
早知我等到有多點mod才開始改.-.
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
[General]
  1. 沒什麼好說的

[Starr's Normal]
  1. 每隔兩條大白線NC一次，現在這樣的NC太亂了

  2. 00:31:042 - 不建議漏，可以和後面00:31:334 (9) - 組成1/1滑條

    00:48:602 (6,7,1) - 這樣的逆flow不太好

    00:52:700 (3,4,5) - 這裡DS為何突然變成1.0x了，最低難度DS建議保持一致

    01:00:310 (8) - DS

    01:16:407 (3,4) - DS

    後面還有一些DS問題，建議全部用1.2x DS重新放一次

    01:52:407 (6,7,8) - 這種不建議在低難度用

    03:44:798 (1) - 需要改一改，因為看不出軌跡，然後滑條可以延長到03:49:481 - ，這樣你就有空間重新拉一次了

[Awake]
  1. 01:04:407 (3) - ctrl+G

    01:45:968 (2,3,4,5) - 這樣放flow會好點
    SPOILER

    02:01:773 (1,2,3) -
    SPOILER

    03:13:188 (3,4) - 這種3疊到4可能會好點

    03:15:529 (3,4) - 03:18:017 (4) - 03:20:212 (3,4) - 03:22:554 (4,5) - 03:24:895 (3,4) - ^後面還有的也可以改

    03:44:798 (1) - 轉盤建議拉到03:49:481 - 會好點
Good Luck~
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

StarForYou wrote:

As your request

[General]
-Offset should be +7032
-Close Widescreens Support
-Close Enable countdown

[Starr's Normal]
[Awake]
-00:33:675 (3,4,5,6,7) - The stream can be curved a bit due to the better flow
-00:34:845 (8,1) - Make a better blanket
-00:51:090 (4) - Although this is not overmapped, this note is still a bit weird for me i think it is fine
-00:52:700 (4,5,6) - Make a prettier triangle please
-00:59:139 (2,3) - The blanket can be improved
-01:03:237 (1) - The slider can be more symmetric um no need
-01:04:993 (4) - Why not make an alternate shape of 01:04:407 (3) - ?
-01:13:773 (3) - Place it lower can match more the circular which you are keeping
-01:14:944 (1) - Why not add a note before the spinner this is fine i think
-01:30:749 (6,7,1) - The triangle isn't perfect
-01:39:529 (3,4,5,6) - Square here is weird, at least for me no problem i believe
-01:45:383 (1) - Place the red control point left a bit to match the slider tail of 01:44:212 (4) -
-01:49:481 (5) - The note makes the flow become less smooth why?
-01:50:651 (2,3) -Captious mod, the blanket can be improved
-01:52:993 (2) - Try to move the red control point to the middle as near as possible, it will make the flow become more smooth
-01:54:311 (4) - Same as above, although this is not overmapped, this note is still a bit weird for me ^
-02:18:163 (1) - Same as above, why not add a note before the spinner ^
-02:25:188 (4) - Cool slider, but I think this slider is not really appropriate in the slow and soft vocal lol why
-02:48:602 (1) - You know my meaning ^
-02:48:602 (1) - Totally opinion, the spinner can end at 02:50:944 let people relax in the best preview point \:D/
-03:26:066 (1) - Yea
-03:28:846 (1,2) - This is quite easy to mislead the player since the note start at blue line so I am placing it near centre, and it is following the music
-03:33:822 (3) - Place lower can match more the flow

Gook luck

Karen wrote:

Awake

  1. 03:34:700 (5,6) - 这跟前面一样overlap？保持一致好点
  2. 做的很好，找不出什么问题了:D
Normal还需要再改改

Kencho wrote:

[Awake]
  1. 01:04:407 (3) - ctrl+G

    01:45:968 (2,3,4,5) - 這樣放flow會好點 不想有跳ww
    SPOILER

    02:01:773 (1,2,3) -
    SPOILER

    03:13:188 (3,4) - 這種3疊到4可能會好點 現在的我覺得還好

    03:15:529 (3,4) - 03:18:017 (4) - 03:20:212 (3,4) - 03:22:554 (4,5) - 03:24:895 (3,4) - ^後面還有的也可以改 不了我覺得現在不錯

    03:44:798 (1) - 轉盤建議拉到03:49:481 - 會好點 也太長;w;
Good Luck~
no comment=fixed
thanks !!
sjoy
1,024 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
[Starr's Normal]
00:25:178 (1) - 其实这种节奏滑条不是很好用，重要在尾巴大白线上，一般来说滑条的用法都是重音在前的
00:28:690 (5) - NC
00:43:617 漏音，这里567都是一致的
00:59:714 (7) - 这个位置给我感觉很莫名吧
01:14:934 (1,2) - 合成滑条
01:23:129 (5,6) - ^
01:27:812 (5,6) - 这里没有必要强调单点
01:45:373 (3) - 这里NC
02:13:471 (1) - FIN
02:18:153 (1) - 改成滑条
03:14:349 (5) - 其实这种重音滑条都能加WHIS的
[Awake]
00:33:957 (5) - 去掉会不会更带感点
01:37:178 (5) - 同上
01:51:228 (3) - 头WHIS
01:52:397 (1) - ^
01:58:251 (4) - ^
02:13:471 (1) - FIN
02:28:105 (2) - WHIS
03:12:592 (2,3) - 这种距离给人感觉是连起来的
03:14:349 (1) - WHIS
03:16:690 (1) - WHIS
03:17:275 (2,3) - 03:12:592 (2,3)
03:19:032 (1) - WHIS
03:23:714 (1) - WHIS
03:33:666 (2,3) - 这里2连感觉不太合适
好像没什么问题 祝飞 :)
Nakano Itsuki
1,218 posts
Joined July 2014
Nakano Itsuki
Karen
01:16:407 (3,4) - 我哪裡有圈子.-. 可能是舊版本吧
01:56:505 (3,4) - 其實是Blanket太緊 w 已經放遠一點
01:48:895 (1,2) - 我想新版本應該沒有了

Kencho
00:48:602 (6,7,1) - 我覺得沒什麼問題，不過把slider ctrl+j了
01:52:407 (6,7,8) - 在Karen mod裡fix了
另外already fix ds

候補:
sjoy
00:59:714 (7) - 剛剛把整個map ds從頭做過，所以這個應該也改了 :?
01:14:934 (1,2) - 但合成的話怪怪的，而且也太長了吧
01:23:129 (5,6) - 01:23:129 和 01:23:714 有重音
01:27:812 (5,6) - 我還是覺得強調好點

others fixed
thx

asdf
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Dreamers.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 171080
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 25178
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Dreamers
TitleUnicode:Dreamers
Artist:Savoir Adore
ArtistUnicode:Savoir Adore
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:Starr's Normal
Source:Our Nature
Tags:PES2013 StarrStyx
BeatmapID:745231
BeatmapSetID:336770

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

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Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
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Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

sjoy wrote:

[Awake]
00:33:957 (5) - 去掉会不会更带感点 5連我覺得沒問題
01:37:178 (5) - 同上
01:51:228 (3) - 头WHIS
01:52:397 (1) - ^
01:58:251 (4) - ^
02:13:471 (1) - FIN
02:28:105 (2) - WHIS
03:12:592 (2,3) - 这种距离给人感觉是连起来的 整張diff都統一ds owo
03:14:349 (1) - WHIS
03:16:690 (1) - WHIS
03:17:275 (2,3) - 03:12:592 (2,3)
03:19:032 (1) - WHIS
03:23:714 (1) - WHIS
03:33:666 (2,3) - 这里2连感觉不太合适 跟drum
好像没什么问题 祝飞 :)
other fixed
我盡快會摸你圖;w;
RVMathew
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RVMathew
Nice Background!
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
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Chaoslitz

RVMathew wrote:

Nice Background!
thanks!

and thanks for your stars <3
RVMathew
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RVMathew

Chaoslitz wrote:

RVMathew wrote:

Nice Background!
thanks!

and thanks for your stars <3
That's exactly why I gave the stars. I had that as my desktop bg a few months before, so you needed stars for that lel.

By the way, are you accepting guest diffs?
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
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Chaoslitz

RVMathew wrote:

That's exactly why I gave the stars. I had that as my desktop bg a few months before, so you needed stars for that lel.

By the way, are you accepting guest diffs?
uwu I think two diffs is enough for this
RVMathew
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RVMathew

Chaoslitz wrote:

RVMathew wrote:

That's exactly why I gave the stars. I had that as my desktop bg a few months before, so you needed stars for that lel.

By the way, are you accepting guest diffs?
uwu I think two diffs is enough for this

I see. Good luck.
Nakano Itsuki
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Nakano Itsuki
uwu
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined December 2012
-Mo-
Hello, slightly late;



Starr's Normal
- 00:25:178 (1,2) - In my opinion, this anacrusis doesn't feel very intuitive to play on a Normal difficulty, since it uses a red tick pattern straight out, although there isn't much choice to change it to, so leaving it should be fine.
- 00:27:519 (5) - I noticed you used these sliders a lot, where they go over 1/1 and finish on the downbeat. I would personally recommend that you add a hard note on the downbeat (i.e. a circle or new slider at 00:28:105 (1)) since I think that beat should have more emphasis.
- 00:36:300 (4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is a bit more advanced compared to what you've mapped so far, and it seems to come out of nowhere. Perhaps change it to a rhythm that's a bit more intuitive to play?
Example
- 00:42:153 (3) - I think the new combo should be on this note, since this note is where the downbeat is, and is where you placed the finish.
- 00:46:836 (3) - Make this a slider to match the vocals of the song.
- 01:26:641 (3,4,5,6) - I personally wouldn't recommend using stacks in a Normal difficulty, especially since this is going to be the easiest difficulty in the mapset.
- 01:31:032 (4,5) - As above. If you are going to use stacks, I would rather you use them to highlight something. I won't mention it again since it comes up again a couple of times.
- 03:37:763 (9) - New combo since the current one spans over too many measures.

Awake
- 00:25:178 (1) - I would have the first note in the map be a 1/2 so that the rhythm is easier to pick up right off, since an extended slider can be confusing to start with. I understand that the extended matches the vocals more accurately though.
- 00:48:007 (3,4) - Minor: These seem to be very slightly divergent. Not sure if it's intended, but I think having them be parallel would look better.
Example

This diff. seems fairly clean to me.

Good luck :)
GIDZ
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Joined January 2013
GIDZ
General:
I agree with this but no.

Starr's normal:
Not much to say here.... Errr, I think you can utilise more curved sliders than straight sliders and fix some overlapping notes.


Awake:
01:40:397 (6,7,1) - Abit of overlap with previous note.
03:10:836 - I dun feel the difference between Kiai and no Kiai. I think you can space notes abit further?
03:47:422 - Add spinner here since the vocal increases volume until 03:49:471 .

._. I dun think this is helpful but that's all I can find.
Starfy
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Joined November 2012
Starfy

- G I D Z - wrote:

General:
I agree with this but no.
"I agree with this but no" Gallery confirmed
Starfall9908
663 posts
Joined November 2013
Starfall9908
As Chaosmoe requested :3

[Normal]
  1. 00:43:910 (6,7) - this overlap isn't beautiful ;_;
  2. 02:46:836 (2) - this slider is curved too much
[Awake]
  1. 00:28:983 (3,4) - Blanket

Sorry for such a short mod ;__; The map is nearly perfect. I still think it needs some work in some parts but I'm pretty unsure about it so I'll leave it to future modders.

Good luck~
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