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pishifat
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 13, 2015 at 3:13:52 AM

Artist: Saosin
Title: Collapse
Tags: metal punk burnout paradise mx_vs_atv capitol post hardcore alternative
BPM: 182.93
Filesize: 4800kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.74 stars, 173 notes)
  2. Extra (5.4 stars, 711 notes)
  3. Hard (3.44 stars, 403 notes)
  4. Insane (4.45 stars, 552 notes)
  5. Normal (2.39 stars, 293 notes)
Download: Saosin - Collapse
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Moo-Chan
nice star rating B)
Topic Starter
pishifat
not anymore
Avishay
pishi is amazing

I might mod it tomorrow if I won't forget, midnight atm
Topic Starter
pishifat
this is good
Weeaboo
From Queue

Extra

1. 00:09:840 (4) - I would move this up a bit
2. 00:11:808 (1) - I would curve this up a bit it seems to flow a bit better that way
3. 00:32:800 (1,2) - Goes pretty low on the screen as well I would move it up a bit
4. 00:53:136 (3,4,5) - Curve this like the one after it
5. 00:58:384 (4,5) - Keep the HP bar in mind
6. 01:35:448 (2) - Maybe make this slider more like the previous one
7. 01:44:141 (2) - Move this a little bit down because it could hit someones HP bar
8. 01:45:781 (5) - Reduce the curve of this slider maybe something like this?

Insane

1. 00:03:608 (4) - - Curve this like the one below it
2. 00:05:412 (2) - Move this down slightly so it wont hit someones HP bar
3. 00:35:424 (1,2) - Maybe curve the slider and move the note so it doesn't go so close to the score
4. 01:07:240 (2,3) - This overlap seems a bit weird
5. 01:17:736 (2,3) - Move these down so 2 doesn't go so high and it wont ruin the blanket
6. 01:28:232 (2,3) - Maybe reverse the direction on 3 and blanket it
7. 01:44:140 (2) - This note is a bit high too

Gl
Avishay
sry pishi u map 2 good, well I took a look just on Extra and I am too lazy to testplay it, the only thing I found was some nazi blanket stuff that I better not mention.

I should take a look when I am not a dead horse after an all-nighter.

Eitherway I love your maps.
Topic Starter
pishifat
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Osuology
[Hard]
Gome, but I can't find anything.

[Insane]
00:23:452 (5,1) - I don't likey

[Too perfect]
Sorry my mods really suck
Topic Starter
pishifat
squarey

Squarey wrote:

From Queue

Extra

1. 00:09:840 (4) - I would move this up a bit butwhy breaks the sexy triangle
2. 00:11:808 (1) - I would curve this up a bit it seems to flow a bit better that wayit is curved up a bit lul
3. 00:32:800 (1,2) - Goes pretty low on the screen as well I would move it up a bit doesnt really matter unless it goes offscreen
4. 00:53:136 (3,4,5) - Curve this like the one after it doesnt really look as good when everything is curved (whcih is why i alternate straight curved everywhere)
5. 00:58:384 (4,5) - Keep the HP bar in mind o ya
6. 01:35:448 (2) - Maybe make this slider more like the previous one they are copy paste with rotation lol
7. 01:44:141 (2) - Move this a little bit down because it could hit someones HP bar eeeee
8. 01:45:781 (5) - Reduce the curve of this slider maybe something like this? super tight curve was intentional tho

Insane

1. 00:03:608 (4) - - Curve this like the one below it already explained that up there
2. 00:05:412 (2) - Move this down slightly so it wont hit someones HP bar ye that one wont ever
3. 00:35:424 (1,2) - Maybe curve the slider and move the note so it doesn't go so close to the score should be k
4. 01:07:240 (2,3) - This overlap seems a bit weird seems rpetty ordinary lul
5. 01:17:736 (2,3) - Move these down so 2 doesn't go so high and it wont ruin the blanket not exactly too high like those other ones lol
6. 01:28:232 (2,3) - Maybe reverse the direction on 3 and blanket it uh not really practical at al
7. 01:44:140 (2) - This note is a bit high too ya

Gl

osuology: i dunno what's weirdl about that but thanks for looking lol
Bearizm
OMG SAOSIN. PLEASE MAP VOICES NEXT <3
George
Osu! needs more Underoath (I'll mod eventually)
Setz
me attempting to give back

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:280 (3) - ayyy i think this jump might be a bit too large, you should stay consistent with 00:01:968 (3) - it plays nicer for the intro
  2. 00:21:648 (5,6) - this plays a little awkward. I dont think the go and stop motion really fits here, you could move 5 to around x124 y 254 for smoother gameplay
  3. 01:13:144 - i dont know if you should ignore this, its pretty loud, while playing I instinctively clicked here while listening to the music. 01:34:136 (5) - plays much nicer since you didn't ignore
  4. 01:34:792 (3,4,5,6,1) - omg pls y u do dis. i cri. ( not necessarily bad, i just have trouble with these kinds of things.)
[Hard]
  1. 00:37:228 (2,3) - the stack here made the spacing less than what you intended I think, idk i noticed it during play.
  2. 01:15:440 - again i dont think you should leave this empty
  3. 02:17:761 (1,2) - i think a stack is a little boring for this, maybe make a jump out of these 2 for more impactful finish?
  4. also you forgot spinner at the end
    MLG pro hard
[Normal]
  1. 01:19:376 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - this whole sequence might be too dense imo, maybe turn one of the 2 circle patterns into a 1/2 slider instead?
  2. 02:17:761 (3) - use stack ender here like you did in hard? seems more fitting.
I cant play the extra, and i can't find anything else with the easy and normal that isn't annoying nazi stuff, so i will spare you. hope you can take something useful from this.
LightOfHellfire
MX vs Atv and Burnout! The nostalgia ;_;
Topic Starter
pishifat
sets

Setz wrote:

me attempting to give back

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:280 (3) - ayyy i think this jump might be a bit too large, you should stay consistent with 00:01:968 (3) - it plays nicer for the intro y0
  2. 00:21:648 (5,6) - this plays a little awkward. I dont think the go and stop motion really fits here, you could move 5 to around x124 y 254 for smoother gameplay seems the same to me so lolk
  3. 01:13:144 - i dont know if you should ignore this, its pretty loud, while playing I instinctively clicked here while listening to the music. 01:34:136 (5) - plays much nicer since you didn't ignore idk sounds like something not worth mapping. the 5 thing there exists for the vocal nd every diff ignores the first one
  4. 01:34:792 (3,4,5,6,1) - omg pls y u do dis. i cri. ( not necessarily bad, i just have trouble with these kinds of things.) B)
[Hard]
  1. 00:37:228 (2,3) - the stack here made the spacing less than what you intended I think, idk i noticed it during play. iguess
  2. 01:15:440 - again i dont think you should leave this empty
  3. 02:17:761 (1,2) - i think a stack is a little boring for this, maybe make a jump out of these 2 for more impactful finish? 0k
  4. also you forgot spinner at the end p
    MLG pro hard
[Normal]
  1. 01:19:376 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - this whole sequence might be too dense imo, maybe turn one of the 2 circle patterns into a 1/2 slider instead? got rid of a circle
  2. 02:17:761 (3) - use stack ender here like you did in hard? seems more fitting. separate doubles on normals are sucky
I cant play the extra, and i can't find anything else with the easy and normal that isn't annoying nazi stuff, so i will spare you. hope you can take something useful from this. thank !!!!!
Ringating
;-;
6:04 PM - pishizor.: i am dying and only source of sustainence is mods pls
6:12 PM - > Ringating is now Online.
6:12 PM - > Ringating: what
6:12 PM - > Ringating: i cant mod at all
6:13 PM - pishizor.: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/331082
6:13 PM - pishizor.: you are a professional modder with your 100+ kudosu [from backgrounds]
6:13 PM - > Ringating: brace yourself for nothing
6:13 PM - pishizor.: red E
6:16 PM - > Ringating: well all i can really see is consistency things because i dont know what is correct/not correct
6:16 PM - > Ringating: but im thinking the sliders on Insane at 00:47:888 (3,4) - 01:40:368 (3,4) - should both have the same speeds. only the first one has the velocity increase
6:17 PM - pishizor.: o ya
6:18 PM - > Ringating: wew
6:18 PM - > Ringating: i know what im doing
6:19 PM - pishizor.: very
6:20 PM - pishizor.: fixed it on extra too cuz the same speed ups happen
6:20 PM - pishizor.: ok
6:20 PM - pishizor.: ok ok
6:20 PM - > Ringating: i think the process of getting mods is
6:20 PM - > Ringating: suffer
6:21 PM - pishizor.: tru
6:21 PM - pishizor.: are you out of finds
6:21 PM - pishizor.: pls say no
6:21 PM - > Ringating: why
6:21 PM - > Ringating: are your circles small on the low diffs
6:21 PM - pishizor.: oh that was for making star rating perfectly linear lol
6:22 PM - > Ringating: nice
6:22 PM - > Ringating: how about move 01:30:200 (3,4) - on Normal higher up
6:22 PM - > Ringating: theyre really close to the score meter if that matters
6:22 PM - pishizor.: i don't even think people playing normals know what the score meter is
6:23 PM - pishizor.: but whatever it makes sense
6:23 PM - > Ringating: 100% mod success
6:24 PM - pishizor.: ik
6:24 PM - pishizor.: i'm intimidated
6:24 PM - > Ringating: https://www.massdrop.com/buy/akg-m220-semi-open-studio-headphones?mode=guest_open&utm_source=Sailthru&utm_term=Community - Audiophile - MAU (Active)&utm_campaign=Special%3A AKG M220 Audiophile A
6:24 PM - pishizor.: white
6:25 PM - > Ringating: true
6:25 PM - > Ringating: but akg
6:25 PM - pishizor.: also true
6:25 PM - pishizor.: also spit out more mod
6:25 PM - > Ringating: also also true
6:27 PM - > Ringating: 01:36:760 (2,4) - on Easy
6:27 PM - > Ringating: are a pixel off from being stacked directly
6:28 PM - > Ringating: i dont know what else to point out so is that enough
6:30 PM - pishizor.: o
6:30 PM - pishizor.: o
6:30 PM - pishizor.: did that
6:31 PM - pishizor.: well done
6:32 PM - > Ringating: ty
6:32 PM - > Ringating: so well done that i'm never doing it again
Topic Starter
pishifat
^best modder
Milan-
[xxx]
  1. increase ur hp
  2. 00:30:504 (3,4,5,6,1) - spacing is a bit weird cuz i'd expect more distance between 5-6 to begin the stream from. like the distance between 3 and 4
  3. 00:41:984 (1) - try something like x61y244 downbeat is dumb
  4. 01:07:404 (4) - why dont u use 1/4 like 01:07:896 (6) - . same rhythm-same pattern makes more sense
  5. i'd be cool if 02:12:513 (1,2,3) - and 02:13:497 (7,8,1) - had different idea/spacing. It's weird to see the same pattern right next to the other when the music is different
  6. 02:17:925 (2) - didnt u say you edited the mp3 or im deif aaaaaaok
[isane]
  1. increase ur hp, this isnt challenging
  2. 01:09:372 (2,1,2) - can u like make the flow/angle less sharp. pretty annoying to play right now. Try moving (1) around x391y281
  3. 02:17:761 (1,2) - this ending is so opaque ;w; try doing a jump or something funnier
[nurmal]
  1. 00:01:968 (3,4,1,2) - this pattern is a bit weid to play due to the stacking. I'd do this i guess http://puu.sh/jaQZ1/c5e3423016.jpg but prefer if you just move them apart
  2. 00:50:348 (2) - remove this? seems to be not so necessary in my eyes. If you want to keep it, i'd like you to think in a way that 00:50:348 (2,3,4) - doesnt look hard to read, gl.
  3. 01:01:664 (1,2) - 1/1 repeater sounds better imo
  4. 01:22:984 (2,3) - this sound bad for some reason, like mapping nothing. Try http://puu.sh/jaRly/ba81bb7325.jpg
  5. 02:02:673 - 02:13:169 - uh add circle ? sounds really empty using a 3/2 gap there. i dun care your constancyyy
easy is fine but im worried about it having widescreen support ticked long 2/1 sliders part at the beginning, it should be more dense cuz your normal is like helll dense uhm

so well done that i'm never doing it again
Topic Starter
pishifat
SPOILER

Milan- wrote:

[xxx]
  1. increase ur hp calmdown
  2. 00:30:504 (3,4,5,6,1) - spacing is a bit weird cuz i'd expect more distance between 5-6 to begin the stream from. like the distance between 3 and 4 guitar pitches tho. 34 is high pitch 56 is low pitch so high spacing low spacing
  3. 00:41:984 (1) - try something like x61y244 downbeat is dumb tru
  4. 01:07:404 (4) - why dont u use 1/4 like 01:07:896 (6) - . same rhythm-same pattern makes more sense 1/2 for both instead cuz 01:17:900 (3,5) - i broke myself
  5. i'd be cool if 02:12:513 (1,2,3) - and 02:13:497 (7,8,1) - had different idea/spacing. It's weird to see the same pattern right next to the other when the music is different 0k
  6. 02:17:925 (2) - didnt u say you edited the mp3 or im deif aaaaaaok o
  7. [spoilgferbox][/fgfgfpoilerbox]e
[isane]
  1. increase ur hp, this isnt challenging ur challenging
  2. 01:09:372 (2,1,2) - can u like make the flow/angle less sharp. pretty annoying to play right now. Try moving (1) around x391y281 i moved it there and im pretty sure it's more sharp but i like it so
  3. 02:17:761 (1,2) - this ending is so opaque ;w; try doing a jump or something funnier opaque what lol
[nurmal]
  1. 00:01:968 (3,4,1,2) - this pattern is a bit weid to play due to the stacking. I'd do this i guess http://puu.sh/jaQZ1/c5e3423016.jpg but prefer if you just move them apart
  2. 00:50:348 (2) - remove this? seems to be not so necessary in my eyes. If you want to keep it, i'd like you to think in a way that 00:50:348 (2,3,4) - doesnt look hard to read, gl. died
  3. 01:01:664 (1,2) - 1/1 repeater sounds better imo did something completely unrelated
  4. 01:22:984 (2,3) - this sound bad for some reason, like mapping nothing. Try http://puu.sh/jaRly/ba81bb7325.jpg thjere was a guitar but now there isnt
  5. 02:02:673 - 02:13:169 - uh add circle ? sounds really empty using a 3/2 gap there. i dun care your constancyyy same
easy is fine but im worried about it having widescreen support ticked long 2/1 sliders part at the beginning, it should be more dense cuz your normal is like helll dense uhm filled gapz

so well done that i'm never doing it again sam3
Mortem
hi.

General:
Add to the tags: captiol, it's a music label, where this song was published. Also optional tags are: post-hardcore, alternative.
I'm not actually sure by this but if this song is from Burnout Paradise, shouldn't be a Burnout Paradise be as a source?

Easy:
• 00:17:056 (1,2) - Blanket is little bit off. But just a bit.

Normal:
• 00:02:132 (4,1,2) - Is this on purpose? If not, then stack them.
• 01:56:441 (4,1) - Stack?

Hard:
• 00:07:052 (2,4) - Not stacked properly.
• 01:09:536 (1,4) - ^

Other diffs seems fine to me.
Sorry for small mod, but I didn't find any issues that would catch my eye. Beautiful mapset.
Hope that helps. Good Luck!
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