Trying to figure out how nazi I should be, so just going to take a shotgun approach and say whatever comes to mind.
I found it really weird in how many breaks you have and how long they are. You might want to map more of it.
I found the ending a bit weird since you end at the start of the next line. I probably would have moved it back 1-2 white ticks
The dark red combo colors are really hard to see against the bg, so I suggest changing them if possible
Easy:00:17:187 (2) - curve this more to better continue 00:15:769 (1) - 's curve
00:18:604 (4) - make straight part parallel with 00:19:549 (1) -
00:22:384 (4) - blanket the end of 00:21:439 (3) - better
00:23:801 (1) - same as 00:17:187 (2) -
00:29:470 (3) - try to bend this more so that you can lead to 00:30:888 (1) - while it does not have to touch the hp bar
00:41:281 (3) - lead into 00:42:226 (1) - better
Not going to talk more about pointing issues in this diff since you know what I'm probably trying to achieve
00:40:336 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent of your pattern of a new combo every 2 large white ticks (2 measures)
00:47:895 (4) - blanket 00:46:951 (3) - better
Repeat Chorus related issues again in the copy and pasted chorus
02:01:596 (3) - You can add a new combo here for effect or rearrange these 4 measures to follow your new combo per every 2 measures
02:05:848 (1) - The spinner doesn't fit that well imo
02:29:943 (1) - remove new combo to follow your pattern of a new combo every 2 measures
Normal:00:16:714 (4) - similar to what I suggested in Easy, make 4 bend more to point at 3
00:29:470 (2) - make this bend a bit more to point more directly at 3
00:37:974 (1) - make this bend a bit more to point more directly at 2
Same as Easy, going to end the pointing stuff here. If you want to fix it, please comb over the rest of the map for it
00:44:116 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 00:40:336 (1) -
01:14:825 (3) - blanket the end of 01:13:407 (2) - ?
repeat first chorus stuff in 2nd chorus
02:05:612 (1) - link in easy, this spinner doesn't fit too long and 2 long spinners after each isn't that fun
02:26:163 (3) - move the end of this slider up a bit to not overlap 02:27:817 (2) - for aesthetic reasons
02:28:998 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 00:46:951 (1) -
Hard, much like the pain of losing your first wife.Not sure how well this diff name will fly with management
Wish you accented the music a bit more. Ex: Throughout this first verse, the singer pauses in places like 00:25:691 (1) - , but you don't do anything to reflect that in your map, something I think should be seen in hard diffs.
00:18:368 (3,1) - shouldn't these 2 be in the same spot?
00:43:171 (4,5) - blanket the head of 00:44:116 (6) - ?
00:52:620 (5,6,7,8) - because of the stack leniency, this is not aligned with the pattern, and it is also not the easiest pattern to read with the previous notes being so close
repeat first chorus stuff in 2nd chorus
01:53:092 (3) - Rotate this so it does not overlap with 01:52:147 (1) -
01:58:289 (4) - blanket 01:58:053 (3) - ?
02:02:069 (4) - curve more to follow 02:02:541 (5) - 's curve
02:05:612 (1) - I again don't think this is a great place for a spinner. I would just map it normally
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Nothing majorly wrong with the map, but as I said on the top of the post, I am worried that you will need to map more and change the ending. Up to you and best of luck.