i suggest this pattern for 00:01:020 -
http://puu.sh/hLxVK/f748daffe2.jpgit retains hand balancing + more accurate in PR representation. your earlier pattern doesn't take pitch/emphasis of the beat into consideration
00:04:943 (4943|1,4943|2,5058|3,5058|0) - there is only 1 sound, why use 2? use 1 note is enough
00:05:173 - instead use 3 notes to express this beat because it will give more and differentiated emphasis on the song. furthermore that beat is louder than this 00:04:712 - which you expressed using 2 notes
00:05:866 (5866|0,5866|1) - 1 note enough
00:05:635 - adding 1 note more here for better emphasis
00:06:096 - ^
00:06:327 (6327|1,6327|0) - move to 3 4
00:06:558 (6558|3,6558|2,6673|1,6673|2,6789|1,6789|0) - ctrl H PR + delete 1 note,
00:06:558 - here can use 2
00:07:020 (7020|1,7020|3) - use 3 note for emphasis
00:07:020 (7020|3,7020|1) - no justification to use 2 notes, only 1 sound and faint. make sure to raise the diff where appropriate and not adding note without considering the element of the song
00:07:250 - this one better 1 note
00:07:366 - high pitch, put at 4 1note
00:07:596 (7596|1,7596|2,7712|3,7712|0) - 1 is enough
00:07:827 - add a note
00:07:943 - 3 notes better emphasis
00:08:173 - 1 note enough
00:10:250 - for retaining hand balance + better emphasis and PR
http://puu.sh/hLyaZ/7d704048cd.jpg00:12:096 - until 00:19:481 - it is usually extremely discouraged to map vocal. if you agree with this revamp the whole section and decrease those LNs and just use where appropriate.
if you meant to map the trumpet sound, then your most of your LN snapping is incorrect and inappropriate imo.
00:12:096 (12096|3) - only here is sustained for 2/4
00:12:327 (12327|2,12558|0,12558|1,12789|2,12789|3,13020|1,13020|2,13250|0,13250|1,13481|0,13481|3,13712|1,13712|2,13943|3,13943|2,14173|3,14173|0) - LN here if you're following the trumpet, are all incorrectly snapped, it's a very clear staccati, which should either be expressed with 1/4 LN, or just use SN all-together to make life easier.
00:14:866 (14866|2) - 2x 1/4 trumpet staccati why long LN? use 2 x 1/4 LN or just use short notes.
and so on until the said time at 00:19:481 - , please do a full recheck
00:19:481 - wrong snap. not following PR, and a bit unbalanced in terms of hand press. here is an alternative
adjust them accordingly
http://puu.sh/hLyrf/3d69360dbb.jpg00:23:173 - no emphasis as well, borderline abusing the note placement >_< here is an alternative
http://puu.sh/hLyvJ/cded1e752c.jpgthey are randomly placed, a bit heavy on right hand, you can adjust accordingly to make it more balanced
00:29:404 (29404|3,29520|2) - wrong, its 2/4 sustained trumpet. use 2/4 LN at 4
00:34:250 (34250|3,34481|2,34712|3) - wrong LN. 1/4 trill here
try this
http://puu.sh/hLyBl/38c5139d80.jpgconsidering hand balance, PR, and also aesthetic. emphasis exist as well with those 2 notes expressing places where there are beat
00:35:173 -
http://puu.sh/hLyEZ/982ed1d6e7.jpgwrong LN as well, suggestions given for the same reason. need to rearrange other notes' placement though.
please recheck your whole diffs for similar reason.