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TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

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Aiceo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 02, 2015 at 3:32:05 AM

Artist: TwoThirds & Feint
Title: Epiphany (feat. Veela)
Tags: A Mystery Hula marathon drum and bass dnb vocal full version collab best map VINXIS
BPM: 175
Filesize: 11814kb
Play Time: 06:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Revelation (5.47 stars, 1924 notes)
Download: TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Colllab with A Mystery

Hitsounds by Hula
Storyboards by VINXIS

He's remembered everything and now I'm dead...




Sections:
00:22:152 - Aiceo
00:44:095 - A Mystery
04:01:581 - Aiceo
ErunamoJAZZ
diff names
  1. drunk on a Saturday
  2. omen
  3. omission
  4. ecstasy
  5. etc...
Mint
metadata: p/3827499
star for you :D
Topic Starter
Aiceo

appleeaterx wrote:

metadata: p/3827499
star for you :D
o, okay ill fix that thanks!
Aleycks
IRC Mod
23:41 Aiceo: now give epiphany a mod :P
23:43 Aleycks: sure, why not :P
23:43 Aleycks: I'm not sure I'd have a lot of things to say though
23:46 Aiceo: feel free to leave some suggestions then
23:47 Aleycks: well
23:47 Aleycks: honestly the mapping itself is fine
23:47 Aleycks: it plays well
23:48 Aleycks: but as you said it's kinda repetitive
23:48 Aleycks: It's a shame that the map is based on one pattern
23:49 Aleycks: I think you could have played with 1/4 sliders
23:49 Aleycks: to make the whole thing less repetitive
23:49 Aiceo: yeah i realised that too late
23:50 Aiceo: ill try doing something now
23:50 Aiceo: got an idea
23:52 Aleycks: nice
23:52 Aleycks: Like, you could keep the same "pattern"
23:52 Aleycks: but use 1/4 sliders instead of triples / streams in some place
23:53 Aleycks: so the whole thing has more variations
23:55 Aleycks: also I would haver prefered CS4 but that's personnal opinion I guess xd
23:55 Aleycks: CS4 is love, CS4 is live
23:55 Aiceo: i dont like cs4 lol
23:58 Aleycks: So yeah not much more to say I guess
23:58 Aleycks: I just played through it once again
23:58 Aleycks: it plays fine
00:01 Aiceo: i tried doing some variety with the vocal sliders
00:01 Aleycks: send :O
00:02 Aleycks: I made a map a while ago
00:02 Aleycks: that had the same problem as this one lol
00:02 Aleycks: The song was very repetitive like this one
00:02 Aleycks: a liquid dnb song aswell
00:03 Aiceo: 05:07:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
00:03 Aleycks: and I just did the same pattern all over again and again
00:03 Aiceo: stuff like this
00:03 Aiceo: adds some variety
00:03 Aiceo: and this
00:03 Aiceo: 06:02:267 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:04 Aleycks: I think that's a good idea
00:06 Aleycks: 00:28:152 (4,5) -
00:06 Aleycks: something like that
00:06 Aleycks: would feel good too
00:06 Aleycks: I think
00:07 Aleycks: instead of triples at some places
00:10 Aleycks: your tower of heaven map
00:10 Aleycks: dayum
00:12 Aiceo: ye lol
00:12 Aleycks: may I try and map an insane ?
00:12 Aleycks: don't take it if you don't like it
00:13 Aiceo: I already have the gds coming
00:13 *Aiceo is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687303 TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela) [Collab]]
00:13 Aiceo: there i updated it
00:13 Aiceo: with some sassy stuff now
00:13 Aleycks: already
00:13 Aleycks: lemme play through it
00:14 *Aleycks is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687303 TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela) [Collab]]
00:14 Aiceo: sec watching a friend D:
00:14 Aiceo: give me a minute lol
00:14 Aleycks: sure
00:14 Aleycks: telle me when
00:14 Aleycks: I'm bored anyway
00:14 Aleycks: lazy to do anything
00:14 Aleycks: tell*
00:15 Aleycks: also how to get gds ;-;
00:16 Aiceo: spam people lol
00:17 Aiceo: just try as many people as you can
00:17 Aiceo: someone will like the song
00:17 Aiceo: and will accept
00:18 Aleycks: lol I see
00:29 Aiceo: sec im changing stuff around
00:46 Aleycks: (:
00:47 Aiceo: still changing lol
00:47 Aleycks: alright xD
00:48 Aleycks: Thought you went afk
00:48 Aleycks: Just tell me when it's ready
00:49 Aiceo: uploading
00:50 *Aiceo is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687303 TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela) [Collab]]
00:50 Aiceo: sec lemme delete hula's diff
00:51 Aleycks: is this diff gonna be called collab btw ?
00:51 Aiceo: alright go
00:51 Aiceo: nah
00:51 Aiceo: i can't figure a name
00:51 Aiceo: but it's a 3 man collab
00:52 Aleycks: :D
00:52 Aleycks: hmm
00:52 Aleycks: alright
00:52 Aiceo: 40% me 40% A Mystery 20% Hula (hitsounding)
00:52 Aleycks: ok
00:52 Aleycks: I'm so cold right now
00:52 Aleycks: sorry if I make dumb mistakes
00:52 Aiceo: lol
00:52 Aiceo: no problem
00:53 *Aleycks is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687303 TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela) [Collab]]
01:00 Aleycks: I loved the sliders towards the end !
01:00 Aleycks: the 1/4s
01:00 Aleycks: more like those
01:00 Aiceo: yah i added those
01:00 Aleycks: please
01:01 Aleycks: these need to be all over the map
01:01 Aleycks: imo
01:01 Aleycks: not only towards the end
01:01 Aleycks: But they do feel good !
01:01 Aiceo: they are all over the map :(
01:01 Aleycks: and add variation
01:01 Aleycks: hmm
01:01 Aleycks: I only noticed the changes towards the end
01:01 Aleycks: ;o
01:02 Aiceo: i guess i can fit a few more
01:03 Aleycks: I mean you only added 1/4s sliders during the last kiai right ?
01:03 Aiceo: first kiai
01:03 Aiceo: is not mine
01:03 Aiceo: A Mystery
01:03 Aleycks: oooh
01:03 Aleycks: I see
01:07 Aleycks: 05:24:381 (4,5,6,7,1) -
01:07 Aleycks: feels wrong for some reason
01:07 Aleycks: I misread it when you spec'd me
01:07 Aleycks: and I just played your kiai in the editor one more time
01:07 Aleycks: and also had trouble reading this
01:08 Aiceo: yeah
01:08 Aiceo: I thought it would work but
01:08 Aiceo: eh
01:10 Aiceo: Alright changed it a bit
01:10 Aiceo: Should be fine for now
01:10 Aiceo: Gonna upload and let A Mystery clean up his part
01:10 Aleycks: yeah
01:11 Aiceo: post the log if you want the kds
01:11 Aiceo: you did actually help alot
01:11 Aiceo: more than you think lol
01:11 Aleycks: really ? xD
01:11 Aleycks: I'm glad I did then :)

Glad I could help with this poor mod, and good luck ! :D
Yamicchi
Here's something :D
[General]
00:24:210 (3) - place this at x:64 y:144
00:24:381 (4) - place this at x:152 y:208, these two will be better there :D
00:26:267 (1) - flip it up
02:17:010 (4,5,6,7,8) - this should flip up i think
02:46:495 (2,3) - Ctrl + J is better
04:27:638 (1) - maybe place it to the left of [*]04:27:295
05:02:095 - this should have 1 circle or place the slider farther then
05:21:295 (2) - wrong DS here
06:13:581 (2,3,4) - place the slider down toward the (5)
06:37:238 (3) - place this at x:416 y:152 ( on to the left of (4) )
06:56:610 (6) - place this under (7,8) at x:408 y:344
That's all I can do ( I think ) and please award me a Kudosu if this useful :D
Anyway, good luck with approved this map :3
Topic Starter
Aiceo

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Here's something :D
[General]
00:24:210 (3) - place this at x:64 y:144 no change
00:24:381 (4) - place this at x:152 y:208, these two will be better there :D no change
00:26:267 (1) - flip it up no change
04:27:638 (1) - maybe place it to the left of [*]04:27:295 no change
05:02:095 - this should have 1 circle or place the slider farther then placed the slider further away
05:21:295 (2) - wrong DS here no change
06:13:581 (2,3,4) - place the slider down toward the (5) no change
06:37:238 (3) - place this at x:416 y:152 ( on to the left of (4) ) no change
06:56:610 (6) - place this under (7,8) at x:408 y:344 yeah that's better
That's all I can do ( I think ) and please award me a Kudosu if this useful :D
Anyway, good luck with approved this map :3
Kuki
IRC + Testplay 8-)

SPOILER
2015-06-19 00:07 Kuki: Still need mods?
2015-06-19 00:08 Aiceo: Yeah, but I don't do m4m sorry :(
2015-06-19 00:08 Kuki: no problem
2015-06-19 00:08 Kuki: free for an irc?
2015-06-19 00:09 Kuki: Which map?
2015-06-19 00:09 Aiceo: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687303 TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela) [Revelation]]
2015-06-19 00:09 Aiceo: Yeah im free
2015-06-19 00:09 Kuki: Kewl
2015-06-19 00:10 Kuki: Want a testplay?
2015-06-19 00:11 Aiceo: yeah sure
2015-06-19 00:11 Aiceo: just changed some stuff around
2015-06-19 00:11 Aiceo: wanna see how it plays
2015-06-19 00:11 Kuki: cool ^_^
2015-06-19 00:18 Kuki: wow
2015-06-19 00:18 Kuki: both of my hands are numb
2015-06-19 00:18 Kuki: lol
2015-06-19 00:18 Aiceo: yah haha
2015-06-19 00:18 Kuki: there were a few misreads
2015-06-19 00:18 Kuki: but those were cause my eyes can't keep up with osu anymore
2015-06-19 00:19 Kuki: and a few weird shakes that looked like misreads because I move veins in my index finger when holding the pen lmao
2015-06-19 00:19 Aiceo: lol
2015-06-19 00:19 Aiceo: let me know if you have any suggestions
2015-06-19 00:19 Aiceo: dont mind the random hitsounds
2015-06-19 00:19 Aiceo: its not hitsounded
2015-06-19 00:19 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687303 TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela) [Revelation]]
2015-06-19 00:19 Aiceo: yet
2015-06-19 00:19 Kuki: mk
2015-06-19 00:20 Kuki: uhh well first
2015-06-19 00:20 Kuki: ouch
2015-06-19 00:20 Kuki: like
2015-06-19 00:20 Kuki: streams
2015-06-19 00:20 Kuki: that's like freakin hollow wings streams
2015-06-19 00:20 Kuki: lmao
2015-06-19 00:20 Aiceo: just simple quintuplets nothing special
2015-06-19 00:20 Kuki: nono I mean like
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: Genryuu kaiko streams
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: hahah
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: not spacing but just the amount of streams
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: was really intense
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: and there were not many breaks
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: at all
2015-06-19 00:21 Aiceo: gotta map them all :P
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: I mean
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: one break
2015-06-19 00:21 Aiceo: one break
2015-06-19 00:21 Aiceo: yeah
2015-06-19 00:21 Aiceo: i got some suggestions
2015-06-19 00:21 Aiceo: to actually map that break
2015-06-19 00:21 Aiceo: lol
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: yeah
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: well
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: don't
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: lmao
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: it's too much
2015-06-19 00:21 Kuki: It got to a point when I was just like
2015-06-19 00:22 Kuki: okay sounds like there might be a break thank god
2015-06-19 00:22 Kuki: and there was done
2015-06-19 00:22 Kuki: and it eventually escalated to "when will this finger torture end"
2015-06-19 00:22 Aiceo: yeah well i can't really insert any more breaks
2015-06-19 00:22 Kuki: chucking in more sliders would be nice I think
2015-06-19 00:22 Kuki: yeah
2015-06-19 00:22 Kuki: I know
2015-06-19 00:23 Kuki: I see that
2015-06-19 00:23 Kuki: more sliders could help with that though
2015-06-19 00:23 Kuki: cause it seems a bit repetitive
2015-06-19 00:23 Kuki: I mean
2015-06-19 00:23 Kuki: the song's very repetitive
2015-06-19 00:23 Kuki: but it doesn't mean the map needs to be
2015-06-19 00:23 Aiceo: it has variety imo, the 1/2 sliders and stuff
2015-06-19 00:24 Aiceo: 1/4*
2015-06-19 00:24 Aiceo: spamming 1/2 sliders won't make a difference
2015-06-19 00:24 Kuki: 1/4 sliders
2015-06-19 00:24 Aiceo: brb
2015-06-19 00:24 Kuki: more of 1/4 sliders
2015-06-19 00:24 Kuki: k
2015-06-19 00:31 Aiceo: hey im back
2015-06-19 00:31 Kuki: k
2015-06-19 00:32 Kuki: just
2015-06-19 00:32 Kuki: ACTION is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/625323 Razihel & Virtual Riot - One For All, All For One [Together We've Fallen]] +Hidden +HardRock
2015-06-19 00:32 Kuki: 1 sec
2015-06-19 00:32 Kuki: lol
2015-06-19 00:35 Kuki: k
2015-06-19 00:35 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687303 TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela) [Revelation]]
2015-06-19 00:38 Kuki: I can't really see anything
2015-06-19 00:38 Kuki: advice wise i'll tell you to watch for overlaps though
2015-06-19 00:38 Kuki: while playing overlaps look really ugly
2015-06-19 00:38 Kuki: editor too
2015-06-19 00:38 Aiceo: lol
2015-06-19 00:39 Aiceo: uh
2015-06-19 00:39 Aiceo: probably
2015-06-19 00:39 Aiceo: not my part
2015-06-19 00:39 Aiceo: i don't do overlaps
2015-06-19 00:39 Kuki: oh it's collab
2015-06-19 00:40 Kuki: didn't realise
2015-06-19 00:40 Kuki: well I mean
2015-06-19 00:40 Kuki: general rule really
2015-06-19 00:40 Kuki: just watch out for overlaps
2015-06-19 00:40 Kuki: cause ugly
2015-06-19 00:41 Kuki: 06:34:838 (4,5,6,7,1) - I assume this isn't your part but I really like this
2015-06-19 00:41 Kuki: since it's low bpm it would be nice to see more spaced streams in kiai since they're really fun and look really nice.
2015-06-19 00:41 Kuki: but yeah
2015-06-19 00:41 Kuki: that's it for me
2015-06-19 00:41 Kuki: i'll post logs I guess
guineaQ
BeatofIke
Excellent map. Have a star ^_^
Nyukai
[General]

  1. add collab / collaboration in tags for obvious reasons o3o
[Revelation]

  1. 00:24:210 (3,4) - the flow is a bit weird here, Ctrl+G them?
  2. 00:27:810 (2,3) - same?
  3. 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken.
  4. 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
  5. 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself.
  6. 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o
  7. 04:21:123 (2) - same as 01:15:637 (1) - ;w;
  8. 04:24:895 (6) - uh since this part I see another NC consistency, then here 04:46:838 (1) - you're back to the current consistency while the music doesn't change at all, not a big problem but better fix this because suddenly I see a big number of combos and I feel like the consistency is broken and it's really noticeable imo =w=
  9. 06:34:838 (4,5,6,7,1) - wow, this is kinda sudden and confusing, firstly I thought they had another rhythm o.o you always used more or less the same spacing when you map this rhythm, I suggest to change this because it could be a big problem for players even for pro ones
  10. 06:56:781 (1,5) - swap NC
Awesome map o3o
Topic Starter
Aiceo

Inyuschan wrote:

[General]

  1. add collab / collaboration in tags for obvious reasons o3o okay


[Revelation]

  1. 00:24:210 (3,4) - the flow is a bit weird here, Ctrl+G them? nah i think its fine
  2. 00:27:810 (2,3) - same?
  3. 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken.
  4. 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
  5. 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself.
  6. 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o
  7. 04:21:123 (2) - same as 01:15:637 (1) - ;w; yup fixed
  8. 04:24:895 (6) - uh since this part I see another NC consistency, then here 04:46:838 (1) - you're back to the current consistency while the music doesn't change at all, not a big problem but better fix this because suddenly I see a big number of combos and I feel like the consistency is broken and it's really noticeable imo =w= Yeah i fixed the ncing there
  9. 06:34:838 (4,5,6,7,1) - wow, this is kinda sudden and confusing, firstly I thought they had another rhythm o.o you always used more or less the same spacing when you map this rhythm, I suggest to change this because it could be a big problem for players even for pro ones Yeah illl reduce the spacing a bit
  10. 06:56:781 (1,5) - swap NC
yup

Awesome map o3o
Thanks for the mod!
A Mystery

Inyuschan wrote:

[Revelation]

  1. 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken. - Not sure what you mean, Slider looks fine to me
  2. 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
  3. 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself. - Fixed
  4. 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o - Added (pls don't hurt me hula)
Awesome map o3o
Thanks for modding!
Avena
Fixed some missing hitsounds, a small error of colors with the storyboard and some small patterns.

Bubble #1
Nyukai
No kudosu, it's just a recheck.

  1. As I've said the OD seems a bit excessive for this kind of map. Maybe OD8.5?
  2. 03:39:295 (1) - This NC is unnecessary o3o
  3. 04:12:552 (1) - Missing whistle?
  4. 04:18:038 (1) - Same.
  5. 06:34:838 (1,2,3,4,1) - I thought you were going to fix this...
Let me know.
Nyukai
Bubbled #2~
Secretpipe
Wheeeee~

EDIT : 2manyqualifiedmapsfortoday c:

come back tomorrow!
VINXIS
smth smth mandatory post about how manual sbing is the dumest thing to exist smth smth post
Nyukai

Secretpipe wrote:

Wheeeee~

EDIT : 2manyqualifiedmapsfortoday c:

come back tomorrow!
Actually you can come back in 2 hours more or less w
Krfawy
Combo colors are very bright and they are too similar to the background/storyboard. That might cause a disqualify if you ask me.
Combo2 : 183,70,123
Combo3 : 213,70,73

BTW OD9.3 pls so it's the same like AR and it gives a little bit more pp. You know, we should support players during their hard work, shall we? \WWWWWWWW/

EDIT: Instead of looking at cute songs and cute maps go back to my Kac (TV Size) and mod it & circle it as you promised 2 months ago you Baguette. : /
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