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yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Osu|Taiko]

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Kyle Y
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月22日 at 22:09:47

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Haru Modoki
Source: やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags: yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou walaowey Del05 TV Size Nardoxyribonucleic
BPM: 174
Filesize: 18152kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Del's Normal (2.03 stars, 163 notes)
  2. Easy (1.53 stars, 102 notes)
  3. Hard (3.3 stars, 251 notes)
  4. Nardo's Muzukashii (2.77 stars, 318 notes)
  5. Nardo's Oni (4.16 stars, 509 notes)
  6. Starfy's Insane (4.47 stars, 340 notes)
  7. Walao's Insane (4.72 stars, 361 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Haru Modoki
Download: yanaginagi - Haru Modoki (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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やはり青春ラブコメはまちがっている。
(Opening)

1st Ranked

←2nd mapset | This mapset | 4th mapset→

Enjoy the song~

Easy by Kyle Y
Normal by Del05
Hard by Kyle Y
Insane by StarForYou
Insane by walaowey
Muzukashii by Nardoxyribonucleic
Oni by Nardoxyribonucleic

Thanks for all guest diff mapper

9 Aug by OzzyOzrock
7 Oct by Mako Sakata
17 Oct Thanks sheela901 for fixing audio stream problem.
18 Oct by HappyRocket88
22 Oct by alacat
22 Oct by alacat
22 Oct by HappyRocket88

Thanks for checking my map.


ED:

created by Del05 (Ranked)
included my guest diff, Ky's Insane


Kawashiro
Yo guy, Good Luck! I will mod and finish my hard this weekend :)
Kawashiro
My Hard is finish~ (not hitsound)
Hard
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: yanaginagi - Harumodoki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58899
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 796,7693,18727,40796,58899
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Harumodoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:UnLock's Hard
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season
BeatmapID:684591
BeatmapSetID:305737

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Startrick
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Mikii
Hey M4M request

[General]
  1. Hitsounding is essential. A basic drum beat to add on to your notes would be great
  2. I think the rhythm is too inconsistent in the lower difficulties and you need to work on making them easier to read
  3. Ctrl + Shift + a and fix your issues. Distance snap everything in easy and normal
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:670 (1) The pre verse is pretty much impossible to read for a beginner because most notes are snapped to red ticks. Try your best to snap them onto white ticks as it is easier for beginners to click to the rhythm.
  2. 00:20:946 (4) You see how this note was much easier to play? Its because everything else is on red ticks. Just showing you an example
  3. I check the whole map. It feels like you changed the offset but you didn't put the notes back. If you think this is fine, please pm me and I can show you in more depth. Every part of the map feels inconsistent, is mapped to red ticks and basically, its unplayable
  4. 00:44:308 (1) Random spinner
I've checked the rest of your map and it would look like it would be much better to do and irc mod with you
SPOILER
17:18 Mikii: Hey man you there? I need to do and irc mod with ya :D
17:18 Mikii: an*
17:19 Mikii: hello?
17:19 Kyle Y: irc...?
17:19 Kyle Y: um..
17:19 Mikii: just a chat mod
17:20 Kyle Y: I know, I am concerning how long do it spend
17:20 Kyle Y: since it is 00:19 here
17:20 Mikii: how long will it take? well how long do you have?
17:21 Kyle Y: I know I need to get up at 7:00am
17:21 Kyle Y: half an hour I think is okay (?
17:21 Mikii: thats fine
17:21 Mikii: alright lets make this quick, have you tested your maps?
17:22 Kyle Y: I have played for several times
17:22 Mikii: can i spectate you playing easy?
17:22 Kyle Y: not played by you?
17:22 Mikii: i want you to play the map
17:22 Kyle Y: I think is okay
17:22 Kyle Y: okay
17:23 Kyle Y: without mods right?
17:23 Mikii: yes
17:24 Kyle Y: then maybe you update the map first
17:24 Mikii: ???
17:24 Mikii: i mean, can you play the easy song of your map?
17:24 Mikii: right now
17:25 Kyle Y: becasue I have updated my date once
17:25 Mikii: okay im redownloading
17:25 Kyle Y: okay
17:25 Mikii: okay you can start :)
17:27 Kyle Y: yep, sth like that
17:27 Mikii: okay we're just going onto editor to make a few changes
17:27 Kyle Y: okay
17:28 *Mikii is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/684589 yanaginagi - Harumodoki [Easy]]
17:28 Mikii: 00:70:670 (1)- start the slider here
17:28 Kyle Y: yep
17:28 Kyle Y: okay
17:28 Mikii: 00:08:187 (1)- end it here
17:28 Mikii: 00:08:532 (2)- place the hitcircle here
17:29 Mikii: 00:08:877 (1)- shift the slider to the left here
17:29 Mikii: 00:09:566 (2)- place the hitcircle here
17:29 Mikii: how does the this part sound now
17:30 Mikii: how do those 4 notes we change sound compared to the rest
17:30 Kyle Y: I can follow
17:30 Mikii: much better?
17:31 Kyle Y: but I don't want to use 1/2 beat in fact
17:31 Mikii: placing your notes on red ticks makes the easy map extremely hard for beginners
17:31 Kyle Y: okay...
17:32 Kyle Y: maybe 1.5 beat slider?
17:32 Mikii: i just wouldnt place your notes starting on a red tick
17:32 Mikii: do you know what i mean by a red tick?
17:32 Kyle Y: yep, I know it
17:32 Kyle Y: 0.5 beat
17:32 Mikii: right now the notes dont feel snapped to the song
17:33 Mikii: its because they arent placed on the drum beats which you are completely missing out on the white ticks
17:34 Kyle Y: okay
17:34 Mikii: you can't follow the map by the music but you have to do it by reading the approach circles
17:35 Mikii: thats what i felt when i played the easy map
17:35 Mikii: did that help?
17:35 Kyle Y: yup, maybe
17:35 Mikii: have you look at another easy map? do those feel easier to play
17:36 Kyle Y: I seldom play EZ
17:37 Mikii: i guess ill have to show you this
17:37 *Mikii is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/673198 yanaginagi - Harumodoki [Easy]]
17:37 Kyle Y: oh... the same map
17:37 Mikii: its my map
17:38 Kyle Y: yep, same song
17:38 Mikii: can you compare the differences the my easy and your easy?
17:38 Kyle Y: of course
17:38 Kyle Y: wait for dning
17:40 Mikii: are you done?
17:41 Kyle Y: use a lot of 1/2 beat
17:41 Kyle Y: that's what I am avoiding in EZ
17:41 Mikii: uhhh
17:41 Mikii: 00:22:152 (2) you use quite a few here
17:41 Mikii: 00:22:152 (2)-
17:42 Mikii: 00:39:394 (3,4)-
17:42 Mikii: but thats not the point
17:42 Kyle Y: just a little
17:42 Mikii: i dont think thats the problem
17:42 Kyle Y: okay...
17:43 Mikii: what are most of my notes snapped to
17:43 Mikii: white ticks right?
17:43 Mikii: does that play better than snapping your notes onto red ticks?
17:43 Kyle Y: yep, maybe
17:44 Mikii: so you're going to have to fix that, because i've never seen an easy map that has 90% of the notes snapped to red ticks
17:45 Mikii: okay?
17:45 Kyle Y: 00:19:049 (1,2,3,4) - is this red tick okay?
17:46 Mikii: you have to say to yourself, does it play better if it were on white ticks
17:47 Kyle Y: becasue I just map basic on the music
17:47 Mikii: what do you mean
17:47 Mikii: the notes are basic, they are spaced, but they're spaced on red ticks
17:47 Kyle Y: I know it is on red tick
17:48 Mikii: and its a huge issue
17:48 Kyle Y: okay then
17:48 Mikii: If you don't agree on me with that, then I'll have to end the mod :( because thats the main issue right now, rhythm
17:49 Mikii: okay?
17:49 Kyle Y: I agree then
17:50 Mikii: okay, if you can fix the red tick rhythm issues, that'll be great. because then the notes would be mapped to the drums
17:52 Mikii: but still i think we should leave it here, since need to sleep
17:52 Mikii: you*
17:55 Mikii: i hope this suggestion helped you, if you do disagree, feel free to say so

The same rhythm issues can be applied onto hard and it isn't just simple modding that can fix that when the whole map needs fixing.

Enjoy the mod!
Kawashiro

Startrick wrote:

request by UnLock-

UnLock's Hard

  1. AR 8이 더 좋아 보이는 것 같네요 - 수정
  1. 00:03:704 (7,1) - 두 개 뉴 콤보 바꿔주시는 건 어떨까요? - 수정
  2. 00:46:463 (1) - 여기만 슬라이더 느려서 100점 뜨고 리딩 문제 있을 수도 있을 거 같은데 사실 큰 차이도 안 보여서 빼거나 아니면 더 느리게 하는 건 어떠신지? - 오오, 수정!
  3. 제가 하드를 안 한 지 오래돼서 잘 모르겠는데 00:56:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8연타는 그렇다 쳐도 시작은 00:55:773 (4) - 이거랑 붙여두심이? - 난이도 표기 오류입니다... 라이트 인세인으로는 적당하다고 생각함
  4. 01:05:081 (8) - 바로 전에 3연타 나왔는데 이건 좀 거리가 먼 것 같네요 - 난이도 표기 오류입니다... 라이트 인세인으로는 적당하다고 생각함
  5. 01:21:633 (6) - 이것도 5번 슬라이더랑 붙이는 게 좋을 것 같네요 - 난이도 표기 오류입니다... 라이트 인세인으로는 적당하다고 생각함
  6. 01:10:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - 제가 하드를 너무 쉬운 난이도로 보는가 싶기도 한데 이거 괜찮은 지 모르겠네요... - 난이도 표기 오류입니다... 라이트 인세인으로는 적당하다고 생각함

good luck ;)
Thank you! I love you <3

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TitleUnicode:春擬き
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Version:UnLock's Light Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season
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walaowey
Hi Kyle >w</

My Insane GD is done :D

Walao's Insane
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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
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256,192,87577,12,2,89215,0:0:0:0:

Good luck with it :)

Shoot a for you ;)
Starfy

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walaowey

StarForYou wrote:

walaowey wrote:

Shoot a for you ;)
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Korey
Yo from #modreqs, sorry if my mod was bad i'm still learning and if you can could you explain why i was wrong so I learn for future mods thank you

General

the largest resolution allowed in osu for 16:9 is 1366x768 your background isn't and i assume you want the best quality so i suggest you fix that

Easy

00:03:698 (1,2) - i think what you've done in the last combo 00:02:319 (1,2) - fits better here because 00:04:043 - is a vocal and i think that's more important to start a note on in my opinion
00:12:664 (4) - not sure how retarded new players are but this changes back and forth fast and they might not expect it to do it an extra time? you could replace with a slider without repeats might be hard to put in though and redo blanket
00:23:181 (2,1) - i don't think it's good to overlap these on an easy i'd recommend spreading them out
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:38:353 (2,3,1) - hard to read?
01:06:112 (2,3) - arrow could be aiming to the middle of the bow? looks a bit crooked

Del's Normal

00:02:319 (3) - i think this should of been a 1/1 slider repeated once because your missing the vocal at 00:02:664 - should be fine though
00:03:353 (4,1) - put a slider here because i think that whatever you call the sound at 00:03:698 - isn't significant enough to have a note start on it
00:08:526 (4) - this is such a small blanket is looks unnecessary and would look neater in my opinion if you just made it straight or 3 point curved?
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:31:284 (5) - this slider longer and delete 00:31:629 (1) - and put a note at 00:31:974 - ?
01:00:595 (3,4) - i think this should just be one slider because the end of 01:00:595 (3) - isn't landing on any vocals

Hard

00:07:491 (2) - I ain't feeling this i think you should curve it
00:18:698 - I honestly don't think the slider velocity should slow down here it makes some of the sharp angled sliders look weird and i don't understand why you're changing between them and the curved sliders
00:23:440 - i think a note should be here?
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:34:733 (3) - should be curved in my opinion
00:51:284 (4,5,6,7) - just a suggestion i think it'd be better if two of them were stacked and then the next two were stacked? hope that made sense
01:03:181 (1,2,3) - 1 is closer to 2 looks uneven fix that

UnLock's Light Insane

00:02:146 - what's this here for unless my ears are dead there's no sound there
00:15:940 - how about getting rid of the break here and putting a 1/2 slider at 00:16:284 - and then a circle every beat from 00:16:802 - ?
00:18:181 (1) - i think it'd be better with two circles
00:23:181 (5,6,7) - the spacing shouldn't change here? it would just confuse and be harder to read in my opinion?
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:30:767 (4,7) - snap on perfectly by putting 7 right in front of 4 on the timeline i think this can apply to some other section of the map
00:36:284 (3) - slider shape feels out of place
00:43:353 (1) - ^
00:46:457 - slow down feels random
00:52:664 (3) - slider shape feels out of place
01:01:629 (1) - curving this more looks neater in my opinion
01:02:664 (4,5,6) - feels random you haven't had any triples the whole map and there are only two so i think you should remove them or make triples more frequent
01:23:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels weird kinda and doesn't really fit in my opinion try fitting some sliders or something there because i don't think that's working.

Starfy's Insane

00:03:008 (6) - I think you should ctr g this and repeat it once and delete 00:03:698 (1) -
00:59:560 (3) - this isn't necessary unless i'm retarded just repeat 00:59:215 (2) - if you don't want it too slow down
01:05:767 (1,2) - these are too spaced
01:21:629 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - keep in mind this is a bit hard to read i don't think it's much of a problem though
01:25:767 (3,4,5,6) - it'd be more appropriate if this was a repeated short slider

Walao's Insane

00:00:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - not the funnest/creative thing ever
00:26:112 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - i don't like this because it makes 00:26:457 (9,10,1) - feel less special
00:27:491 - insert break?
00:59:733 (2) - i don't think this is important enough to map and in my opinion the vocals should come first in the kiai section
01:20:767 (1) - personally think this would be cooler as a wavy or simply curved slider
Starfy

ikorza wrote:

Starfy's Insane
00:03:008 (6) - I think you should ctr g this and repeat it once and delete 00:03:698 (1) - Humm seems not good because it broke the flow of 00:02:319 (5,6) -
00:59:560 (3) - this isn't necessary unless i'm retarded just repeat 00:59:215 (2) - if you don't want it too slow down I don't know why i can't put the note here, sorry for no change this
01:05:767 (1,2) - these are too spaced I think not really
01:21:629 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - keep in mind this is a bit hard to read i don't think it's much of a problem though I testplay-ed this a lot of time before and i found that this is not really hard to read imo
01:25:767 (3,4,5,6) - it'd be more appropriate if this was a repeated short slider Repeated slider is so weird when putting here
Tks for mod
No change
Korey
went through my mod together
IRC
20:49 ikorza: just wanted to let you know i've left a mod on your Map p/4121818#p4121818
22:20 Kyle Y: thx
22:20 Kyle Y: sorry that I saw it so late
22:21 ikorza: doesnt matter hope my mod helps
22:21 Kyle Y: are you free now? maybe I can edit my map now and talk about your modding also
22:22 ikorza: yeah im free
22:22 ikorza: i dont mind looking at it with you
22:22 Kyle Y: I only mapped EZ and HD
22:22 ikorza: ok
22:23 Kyle Y: and sfy's insane... I think he said sth about it on forum
22:23 ikorza: yeah i looked he had no changed
22:23 Kyle Y: He also keeps his mind
22:23 ikorza: which one you looking at firsT?
22:23 Kyle Y: but he is an one-ranked-map mapper
22:24 Kyle Y: EZ first? maybe
22:24 ikorza: ok
22:25 Kyle Y: for the slider 00:03:698 (1) -
22:25 Kyle Y: I think both are okay, as better to start slider on the white tick
22:25 ikorza: wait um
22:26 ikorza: 00:03:698 (1) -
22:26 Kyle Y: I think your modding also correct, maybe sth about mapping style
22:26 ikorza: this is white tick i think its better to have a repeated slider for the vocals
22:26 Kyle Y: 00:03:698 - there is a sound from gackground music
22:26 Kyle Y: background*
22:27 ikorza: i still think there should be a note there but not a slider
22:27 ikorza: because the sound doesnt really last long
22:28 ikorza: like same rhythm you got at 00:02:319 (1,2) - and put it At 00:02:319 (1,2) -
22:29 Kyle Y: maybe your are better
22:29 ikorza: you gonna do mine?
22:29 Kyle Y: I think it can be
22:29 Kyle Y: Then I just follow
22:30 ikorza: ok
22:30 Kyle Y: For 00:12:664 (4) - do you mean replace by 1.5 beat slider
22:30 ikorza: yeah
22:30 Kyle Y: In fact, I think simply words is okay for modding
22:31 Kyle Y: just like 00:12:664 (4) - change to 1.5 beat slider
22:31 Kyle Y: simple and easy to read
22:31 ikorza: yeah its an easy diff afterall
22:32 Kyle Y: This part I will change it later on
22:32 ikorza: ok
22:32 Kyle Y: In fact I am not familar with mapping EZ
22:33 Kyle Y: you said 00:23:181 (2,1) - seperate them
22:33 ikorza: yeah
22:33 ikorza: should be easy since you got space
22:33 ikorza: in the top left
22:34 Kyle Y: okay, and the pattern of slider 2 need to be change also
22:35 Kyle Y: btw do you think 00:26:974 (1) - a circle or a slider is better?
22:36 ikorza: another sound doesnt start at the end of the slider so i think a circle would be simplier
22:36 Kyle Y: For the break, I just try to not to use it. Since the whole mapset is mapped without break, and the HP is not quite high
22:36 Kyle Y: okay
22:36 ikorza: i think that because stars diff has a break there all should or he should nto so its all the same
22:36 Kyle Y: 00:38:353 (2,3,1) - this I will consider it
22:37 ikorza: ok
22:37 Kyle Y: I will ask he to remove it
22:38 Kyle Y: try to
22:38 ikorza: lol
22:38 Kyle Y: 01:06:112 (2,3) - what do you mean here?
22:39 ikorza: um
22:39 ikorza: its blanketed fine but
22:39 Kyle Y: oh.... you said blanketed and I know it
22:39 Kyle Y: fixed
22:39 ikorza: if you were to look at it straight 3 would be pointing to the right
22:40 ikorza: when it could be straight not really an issue but could be considered to perfect the map i guess
22:41 Kyle Y: yup, but no need to descript is too detail, as all mapper know what blanket is
22:41 ikorza: 01:11:629 (2,1) - this blanket could be better
22:41 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089118
22:42 Kyle Y: fixed
22:44 ikorza: i dont see much else wrong
22:44 ikorza: do hard now?
22:44 Kyle Y: any other modding in EZ?
22:44 Kyle Y: ookay
22:44 Kyle Y: 00:07:491 (2) - fixed
22:45 ikorza: 00:07:491 (2,2,3) - blanket \
22:45 ikorza: is this a blanket 00:14:733 (1,2) - ?
22:47 ikorza: 00:19:043 (2) - i dont like how you're changing slider style often just my opinion though but i think the map would be a lot neater if you kept consistancy
22:47 Kyle Y: oh yeah..
22:48 ikorza: 00:43:353 - i think a slider should start here and also slow down start here aswell
22:48 Kyle Y: I just want a little bit lower down and later on seems more fast only
22:49 ikorza: ok
22:50 ikorza: 00:58:698 (6) - how about a jump here?
22:50 Kyle Y: 00:43:181 (5,6) - I accept this
22:51 Kyle Y: I hate using jump in hard as I do want this hard be too hard
22:52 ikorza: maybe stack 00:58:353 (4,5) - those two instead too make 00:58:698 (6) - more emphasised
22:54 Kyle Y: then I stack it
22:55 ikorza: 01:22:664 (2,3,4) - distance these off the start so it looks more even by ctrl g temporarily
22:55 Kyle Y: I don't think a circle here 00:23:440 -
22:55 Kyle Y: 01:22:491 (1,2,3,4) - it is a kind of pattern?
22:56 Kyle Y: when you play it, you main draw half of it and then go to next slider
22:56 ikorza: wait what distance snap is it here ? 01:21:974 (5,1) - between those two notes
22:56 ikorza: wait let me see in play mode
22:57 Kyle Y: oh I know what you mean
22:57 ikorza: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089182 like this
22:58 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089183
22:58 ikorza: yeah
22:58 ikorza: that looks better imo
22:58 Kyle Y: yeah, get it
22:59 ikorza: and about the bg
22:59 ikorza: according too some guys thread osu allows up to 1366x768 16:9 for your image
22:59 ikorza: you should get the right size
23:00 Kyle Y: I think this size is still okay, and it is still rankable
23:00 ikorza: ok well i dont see anything else
23:00 ikorza: do you have any other question bout my mod?
23:02 Kyle Y: btw, it is nothing about modding, but the modding style
23:03 Kyle Y: I think better to type [Hard] instead of Hard
23:03 Kyle Y: and adding spoilerbox for each diff becasue it is clearer for different diff
23:03 ikorza: ill try formatting my mods better
23:04 ikorza: ill just copy someone else lol
23:04 Kyle Y: and another problem, description is too long, some of them can be simply to said by few words
23:04 Kyle Y: maybe it is my modding style
23:04 ikorza: well
23:04 ikorza: i find it hard to like explain what i mean
23:05 ikorza: so i tend to write too much i guess
23:05 Kyle Y: I think reasons no need to be mention for some case
23:06 ikorza: do you want me to post chat log in beatmap thread?
23:06 Kyle Y: provides reasons only when you think his/her pattern is okay, but giving suggestion
23:06 Kyle Y: I don't know how to do that in fact
23:06 ikorza: i got it dw

no kds
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

ikorza wrote:

Yo from #modreqs, sorry if my mod was bad i'm still learning and if you can could you explain why i was wrong so I learn for future mods thank you

SPOILER
General

the largest resolution allowed in osu for 16:9 is 1366x768 your background isn't and i assume you want the best quality so i suggest you fix that I think is okay

Easy

00:03:698 (1,2) - i think what you've done in the last combo 00:02:319 (1,2) - fits better here because 00:04:043 - is a vocal and i think that's more important to start a note on in my opinion fixed
00:12:664 (4) - not sure how retarded new players are but this changes back and forth fast and they might not expect it to do it an extra time? you could replace with a slider without repeats might be hard to put in though and redo blanket
00:23:181 (2,1) - i don't think it's good to overlap these on an easy i'd recommend spreading them out
00:27:491 - insert break? no change
00:38:353 (2,3,1) - hard to read? change if mentioned again
01:06:112 (2,3) - arrow could be aiming to the middle of the bow? looks a bit crooked fixed



Hard

00:07:491 (2) - I ain't feeling this i think you should curve it changed
00:18:698 - I honestly don't think the slider velocity should slow down here it makes some of the sharp angled sliders look weird and i don't understand why you're changing between them and the curved sliders just style?
00:23:440 - i think a note should be here? no change
00:27:491 - insert break? no change
00:34:733 (3) - should be curved in my opinion fixed
00:51:284 (4,5,6,7) - just a suggestion i think it'd be better if two of them were stacked and then the next two were stacked? hope that made sense fixed
01:03:181 (1,2,3) - 1 is closer to 2 looks uneven fix that fixed

IQR
20:24 Kyle Y: for the slider 00:03:698 (1) -
20:25 Kyle Y: I think both are okay, as better to start slider on the white tick
20:25 ikorza: wait um
20:26 ikorza: 00:03:698 (1) -
20:26 Kyle Y: I think your modding also correct, maybe sth about mapping style
20:26 Kyle Y: 00:03:698 - there is a sound from gackground music
20:26 ikorza: this is white tick i think its better to have a repeated slider for the vocals
20:26 Kyle Y: background*
20:27 ikorza: i still think there should be a note there but not a slider
20:27 ikorza: because the sound doesnt really last long
20:28 ikorza: like same rhythm you got at 00:02:319 (1,2) - and put it At 00:02:319 (1,2) -
20:29 Kyle Y: maybe your are better
20:29 ikorza: you gonna do mine?
20:29 Kyle Y: I think it can be
20:29 Kyle Y: Then I just follow
20:30 ikorza: ok
20:30 Kyle Y: For 00:12:664 (4) - do you mean replace by 1.5 beat slider
20:30 ikorza: yeah
20:30 Kyle Y: In fact, I think simply words is okay for modding
20:31 Kyle Y: just like 00:12:664 (4) - change to 1.5 beat slider
20:31 Kyle Y: simple and easy to read
20:31 ikorza: yeah its an easy diff afterall
20:32 Kyle Y: This part I will change it later on
20:32 ikorza: ok
20:32 Kyle Y: In fact I am not familar with mapping EZ
20:33 Kyle Y: you said 00:23:181 (2,1) - seperate them
20:33 ikorza: yeah
20:33 ikorza: should be easy since you got space
20:33 ikorza: in the top left
20:34 Kyle Y: okay, and the pattern of slider 2 need to be change also
20:35 Kyle Y: btw do you think 00:26:974 (1) - a circle or a slider is better?
20:35 ikorza: another sound doesnt start at the end of the slider so i think a circle would be simplier
20:36 Kyle Y: For the break, I just try to not to use it. Since the whole mapset is mapped without break, and the HP is not quite high
20:36 Kyle Y: okay
20:36 ikorza: i think that because stars diff has a break there all should or he should nto so its all the same
20:36 Kyle Y: 00:38:353 (2,3,1) - this I will consider it
20:37 ikorza: ok
20:37 Kyle Y: I will ask he to remove it
20:37 Kyle Y: try to
20:38 ikorza: lol
20:38 Kyle Y: 01:06:112 (2,3) - what do you mean here?
20:39 ikorza: um
20:39 ikorza: its blanketed fine but
20:39 Kyle Y: oh.... you said blanketed and I know it
20:39 Kyle Y: fixed
20:39 ikorza: if you were to look at it straight 3 would be pointing to the right
20:40 ikorza: when it could be straight not really an issue but could be considered to perfect the map i guess
20:40 Kyle Y: yup, but no need to descript is too detail, as all mapper know what blanket is
20:41 ikorza: 01:11:629 (2,1) - this blanket could be better
20:41 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089118
20:42 Kyle Y: fixed
20:44 ikorza: i dont see much else wrong
20:44 Kyle Y: any other modding in EZ?
20:44 ikorza: do hard now?
20:44 Kyle Y: ookay
20:44 Kyle Y: 00:07:491 (2) - fixed
20:45 ikorza: 00:07:491 (2,2,3) - blanket \
20:45 ikorza: is this a blanket 00:14:733 (1,2) - ?
20:47 Kyle Y: oh yeah..
20:47 ikorza: 00:19:043 (2) - i dont like how you're changing slider style often just my opinion though but i think the map would be a lot neater if you kept consistancy
20:48 ikorza: 00:43:353 - i think a slider should start here and also slow down start here aswell
20:48 Kyle Y: I just want a little bit lower down and later on seems more fast only
20:49 ikorza: ok
20:50 ikorza: 00:58:698 (6) - how about a jump here?
20:50 Kyle Y: 00:43:181 (5,6) - I accept this
20:51 Kyle Y: I hate using jump in hard as I do want this hard be too hard
20:52 ikorza: maybe stack 00:58:353 (4,5) - those two instead too make 00:58:698 (6) - more emphasised
20:54 Kyle Y: then I stack it
20:55 ikorza: 01:22:664 (2,3,4) - distance these off the start so it looks more even by ctrl g temporarily
20:55 Kyle Y: I don't think a circle here 00:23:440 -
20:55 Kyle Y: 01:22:491 (1,2,3,4) - it is a kind of pattern?
20:56 Kyle Y: when you play it, you main draw half of it and then go to next slider
20:56 ikorza: wait what distance snap is it here ? 01:21:974 (5,1) - between those two notes
20:56 ikorza: wait let me see in play mode
20:57 Kyle Y: oh I know what you mean
20:57 ikorza: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089182 like this
20:57 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3089183
20:58 ikorza: yeah
20:58 Kyle Y: yeah, get it
20:58 ikorza: that looks better imo
20:59 ikorza: and about the bg
20:59 ikorza: according too some guys thread osu allows up to 1366x768 16:9 for your image
20:59 ikorza: you should get the right size
21:00 Kyle Y: I think this size is still okay, and it is still rankable
21:00 ikorza: ok well i dont see anything else
Del05
Hi ikorza !
Thanks for give some mods.
And just for some information, in this diff i dont follow vocal but the drum sound, so maybe some slider aren't landing on vocal

ikorza wrote:

Del's Normal

00:02:319 (3) - i think this should of been a 1/1 slider repeated once because your missing the vocal at 00:02:664 - should be fine though Nope cause i dont follow the vocal
00:03:353 (4,1) - put a slider here because i think that whatever you call the sound at 00:03:698 - isn't significant enough to have a note start on it Nope i think it is fine because at 00:03:698 we can hear a piano sound and i think piano sound better using hit circle than using a slider
00:08:526 (4) - this is such a small blanket is looks unnecessary and would look neater in my opinion if you just made it straight or 3 point curved? Fixed
00:27:491 - insert break? Fixed
00:31:284 (5) - this slider longer and delete 00:31:629 (1) - and put a note at 00:31:974 - ? Nope cause if you do that you will skip the beat
01:00:595 (3,4) - i think this should just be one slider because the end of 01:00:595 (3) - isn't landing on any vocals Nope cause i map the rhythm not the vocal
My new code --> http://puu.sh/hB5EZ/98d0cfbe8d.osu
walaowey

ikorza wrote:

Yo from #modreqs, sorry if my mod was bad i'm still learning and if you can could you explain why i was wrong so I learn for future mods thank you Hi there o/

Walao's Insane

00:00:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - not the funnest/creative thing ever nope I think its fine here, but if too many modders say about this..I will consider changing it :D
00:26:112 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - i don't like this because it makes 00:26:457 (9,10,1) - feel less special you mean i should emphasizes the (9,10) sound right.. Alright, I change something here.
00:27:491 - insert break? You're right :D
00:59:733 (2) - i don't think this is important enough to map and in my opinion the vocals should come first in the kiai section I think its fine here. If you listen closely, I'm trying to map the drum sound here. and during the kiai time I map base on drum sound not vocal.
01:20:767 (1) - personally think this would be cooler as a wavy or simply curved slider Yeah you're right, its definitely better now with curved slider :)
Thanks for the mod ;)

Update is here Kyle :)
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Mio_chan
HK OSU!區求其搵野MOD~

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢,或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[General]
[Easy]
你成個正歌落紅線仲多過白線,其實對新手黎講好難玩…
00:04:819 (1) – 同下一個音太近,係00:06:457 –完?
00:07:664 (1,1) – 感樣對新手易D

00:15:767 (4) – overlap 左 (2),唔好overlap
00:19:043 (1,2) – 我對呢個有D保留… 紅線既notes對新手黎講真係唔係咁易掌握,有心理準備其他人都會叫你改 (我都建議改)
00:24:215 (1) – 唔好overlap
00:44:215 (1) –我都係覺得同下個notes有D太近…
01:04:388 (1) – remove NC
01:19:905 (2) – 唔好 overlap
01:21:974 (1) – 你好多spinner都有呢個問題,同下個notes距離少個700ms,都未轉完下一set combo已經出曬黎



[Del’s Normal]
Plays quite nice for me, but idk whether the beat is too hard to catch for a normal
00:13:181 – I suggest changing 00:13:008 (3) – to circles and start (4) at here, because accent is located here.
01:09:388 (3) – change it to a 1/2 repeating slider? 01:09:560 – sounds missing sth imo


[Hard]
AR 7 HP5
00:07:146 (1) – 我建議呢個改左佢,少repeat一次啦,個light insane已經唔多1/4
00:18:698 (1,2,3) – 請參照[UnLock’s Light Insane] 00:18:698 (1,2,3)
00:21:457 (1,2,3) – 同上
00:35:250 (1) – 我覺得呢個anti-jump有D怪,你其他位都無落
00:40:365 (4,1) - – 呢個我好建議你改左佢,00:40:365 (4) –喺白線開始先易捉個感覺,另外個drum fill 本身係1/3,你00:40:767 (1) -落喺紅線到玩落好怪,同埋00:40:940 –應該係circle或然slider頭,fill in如之後音樂個beat唔同左好多,所以呢兩段應該分清楚,唔好用slider橫跨呢兩段
00:43:698 (1) – overlap得有D唔係咁好睇
00:50:250 (1) –blanket整得唔好
00:54:388 (4) – (nazi) 1 grid down
00:54:733 (1) – (nazi) x:196 y:284
00:59:733 (7,8,9) – 轉slider
01:06:802 (5) – delete, 重拍落左喺01:06:974 -,但係依家呢度係slider中間
01:09:560 (5) – 同上,重拍喺01:09:733 -,同埋呢個slider本身blanket都整得唔好
01:11:026 (4,5,6) – 對於你呢個mapset既hard黎講呢個真係有D難…
01:20:767 – 呢度唔應該係slider尾我覺得,都係重拍既問題
01:25:422 – 呢度vocal好出,無野有D怪
01:25:767 (3,4,5) – 轉slider



[Starfy’s Insane]
00:40:250 (3) – NC? 個1/3 fill in用NC會易睇D
00:45:853 (6) – 我覺得唔要呢個circle,整JUMP仲好
01:06:457 (3) –轉做兩個circles?
01:22:146 (8) – 睇死我www(我渣;_;),OK既其實,唔係真係咁難
中文

[UnLock’s Light Insane]
HP – 1 or 0.5? I think light insane can be more lenient
00:18:698 (1,2,3) – this pattern suits better imo

00:21:974 – add a repeated arrows here? Since you following the vocal a lot
00:24:215 (3) – I think this flow better
00:45:767 to 00:46:284 – feels empty as there is drum fill in here
00:56:112 (8) – NC? The combo seems to be too long
01:10:940 (1,2) – I am wondering if this is too much for a light insane, since you have 2 harder insanes already, same goes for 01:21:284 (5,6)
01:18:871 to 01:19:388 – again feels empty due to drum fill in here

[Walao’s Insane]
OD + 1? Since there are 3 insanes and OD 7 is quite lenient in this BPM
00:00:000 to 00:06:457 – I think the finish hitsounds are too loud during this period.
00:19:991 – I think something is missing here. Since it’s very clear that there is a bass drum suound
00:26:629 (5) – add a 0.5x SV?
00:27:146 – why there isn’t break here but in starfy’s Insane does? This is even longer than that
00:29:129 – add note, due to drum sound
00:40:250 (4) – I suggest a NC here to indicate that you are following the 1/3 drum roll
00:40:940 to 00:51:974 – I personally dislike this part because the beat is halved but the intensity of your map has little change only, but that’s my personal preference only, just telling you what I think, you may just keep all of them if you think is fine.
01:00:250 (1) – the only 1/1 repeated slider in the whole map, remap this slider to something else?
01:20:767 (1) – This slider can be smoother
walaowey

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[Walao’s Insane]
OD + 1? Since there are 3 insanes and OD 7 is quite lenient in this BPM Nope i think, I worry if somebody mess up during the stream part, It will cause them to fail. But if more modders suggest it, i will change it.
00:00:000 to 00:06:457 – I think the finish hitsounds are too loud during this period. Yes you're right. I have decrease the volume at this part.
00:19:991 – I think something is missing here. Since it’s very clear that there is a bass drum sound Fixed
00:26:629 (5) – add a 0.5x SV? I think 0.5x SV is too short, I try 0.75x
00:27:146 – why there isn’t break here but in starfy’s Insane does? This is even longer than that Sorry about that, last modder tell me to add it, maybe I forgot about it lol..sorry :D..Anyway, fixed
00:29:129 – add note, due to drum sound Fixed
00:40:250 (4) – I suggest a NC here to indicate that you are following the 1/3 drum roll Nope, I think its ok here.
00:40:940 to 00:51:974 – I personally dislike this part because the beat is halved but the intensity of your map has little change only, but that’s my personal preference only, just telling you what I think, you may just keep all of them if you think is fine. I think its fine here though.
01:00:250 (1) – the only 1/1 repeated slider in the whole map, remap this slider to something else? Why not add some variance right, it will be too bold if its the same type of slider+circles only ;). But if other modders suggest to change that, I will consider about it.
01:20:767 (1) – This slider can be smootherImo, its quite smooth already, I'm trying the line up the slider body with the side stream circle.
Thanks for the mod :)

Update
osu file format v14

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Title:Harumodoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Walao's Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku Oregairu my teen romantic snafu opening 2nd season StarForYou UnLock walaowey Del05
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Starfy

Mio_chan wrote:

[Starfy’s Insane]
00:40:250 (3) – NC? 個1/3 fill in用NC會易睇D Fixed
00:45:853 (6) – 我覺得唔要呢個circle,整JUMP仲好 Fixed
01:06:457 (3) –轉做兩個circles? 我覺得slider好睇d w
01:22:146 (8) – 睇死我www(我渣;_;),OK既其實,唔係真係咁難 \:D/
中文
Tks for mod
http://puu.sh/hDr7G/cf3ff4b177.zip
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

Mio_chan wrote:

HK OSU!區求其搵野MOD~

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Red mods are unrankable
Green mods are comments only.
黑色係建議
藍色係強烈建議改左佢,或者要留心
紅色係unrankable
綠色係純粹Comment

[General]
[Easy]
你成個正歌落紅線仲多過白線,其實對新手黎講好難玩…okay....
00:04:819 (1) – 同下一個音太近,係00:06:457 –完?fixed
00:07:664 (1,1) – 感樣對新手易D fixed

00:15:767 (4) – overlap 左 (2),唔好overlapfixed
00:19:043 (1,2) – 我對呢個有D保留… 紅線既notes對新手黎講真係唔係咁易掌握,有心理準備其他人都會叫你改 (我都建議改)fixed
00:24:215 (1) – 唔好overlapfixed
00:44:215 (1) –我都係覺得同下個notes有D太近…fixed
01:04:388 (1) – remove NC fixed
01:19:905 (2) – 唔好 overlapfixed
01:21:974 (1) – 你好多spinner都有呢個問題,同下個notes距離少個700ms,都未轉完下一set combo已經出曬黎fixed


[Hard]
AR 7 HP5
00:07:146 (1) – 我建議呢個改左佢,少repeat一次啦,個light insane已經唔多1/4
00:18:698 (1,2,3) – 請參照[UnLock’s Light Insane] 00:18:698 (1,2,3) fixed
00:21:457 (1,2,3) – 同上fixed
00:35:250 (1) – 我覺得呢個anti-jump有D怪,你其他位都無落fixed
00:40:365 (4,1) - – 呢個我好建議你改左佢,00:40:365 (4) –喺白線開始先易捉個感覺,另外個drum fill 本身係1/3,你00:40:767 (1) -落喺紅線到玩落好怪,同埋00:40:940 –應該係circle或然slider頭,fill in如之後音樂個beat唔同左好多,所以呢兩段應該分清楚,唔好用slider橫跨呢兩段fixed, I think
00:43:698 (1) – overlap得有D唔係咁好睇 fixed
00:50:250 (1) –blanket整得唔好 fixed
00:54:388 (4) – (nazi) 1 grid downfixed
00:54:733 (1) – (nazi) x:196 y:284fixed
00:59:733 (7,8,9) – 轉slider Fix when mentioned again
01:06:802 (5) – delete, 重拍落左喺01:06:974 -,但係依家呢度係slider中間fixed
01:09:560 (5) – 同上,重拍喺01:09:733 -,同埋呢個slider本身blanket都整得唔好Keep 1 beat slider, but fixed blanket
01:11:026 (4,5,6) – 對於你呢個mapset既hard黎講呢個真係有D難…Fix when mentioned again
01:20:767 – 呢度唔應該係slider尾我覺得,都係重拍既問題Fix when mentioned again
01:25:422 – 呢度vocal好出,無野有D怪 um...
01:25:767 (3,4,5) – 轉slider Fix when mentioned again
Kawashiro

ikorza wrote:

Yo from #modreqs, sorry if my mod was bad i'm still learning and if you can could you explain why i was wrong so I learn for future mods thank you


UnLock's Light Insane

00:02:146 - what's this here for unless my ears are dead there's no sound there
00:15:940 - how about getting rid of the break here and putting a 1/2 slider at 00:16:284 - and then a circle every beat from 00:16:802 - ?
00:18:181 (1) - i think it'd be better with two circles
00:23:181 (5,6,7) - the spacing shouldn't change here? it would just confuse and be harder to read in my opinion?
00:27:491 - insert break? - Delete 00:15:940 this break, Thanks
00:30:767 (4,7) - snap on perfectly by putting 7 right in front of 4 on the timeline i think this can apply to some other section of the map - fix
00:36:284 (3) - slider shape feels out of place - fix
00:43:353 (1) - ^ - ^
00:46:457 - slow down feels random
00:52:664 (3) - slider shape feels out of place - ^
01:01:629 (1) - curving this more looks neater in my opinion
01:02:664 (4,5,6) - feels random you haven't had any triples the whole map and there are only two so i think you should remove them or make triples more frequent
01:23:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels weird kinda and doesn't really fit in my opinion try fitting some sliders or something there because i don't think that's working.
Thanks~

Mio_chan wrote:

[UnLock’s Light Insane]
HP – 1 or 0.5? I think light insane can be more lenient
00:18:698 (1,2,3) – this pattern suits better imo - fix

00:21:974 – add a repeated arrows here? Since you following the vocal a lot
00:24:215 (3) – I think this flow better - fix
00:45:767 to 00:46:284 – feels empty as there is drum fill in here
00:56:112 (8) – NC? The combo seems to be too long - fix
01:10:940 (1,2) – I am wondering if this is too much for a light insane, since you have 2 harder insanes already, same goes for 01:21:284 (5,6)
01:18:871 to 01:19:388 – again feels empty due to drum fill in here - fix
Thanks~ ><

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:春擬き
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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。 続
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256,72,86112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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