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Thanks for the mod! Very helpfull!- Magic Bomb - wrote:
M4M was requested.Cosmic MindAdd some kiai time to this song, feels bland how it is now.
00:24:583 (1,3) - Swap NC please. - Fixed!
00:27:206 (1,3) - ^ - Fixed!
00:29:829 (1,2) - ^ (Sorry I just really prefer this NC pattern) - Fixed!
00:45:825 - There's a definite drum beat on the 3/4 here, add a circle? - Fixed!
00:47:133 - ^ - Fixed!
00:48:449 - ^ - Fixed!
00:49:764 - ^ - Fixed!
00:51:056 - ^ - Fixed!
00:52:378 - ^ - Fixed!
00:53:681 - ^ - Fixed!
00:55:002 - ^ - Fixed!
00:56:295 - ^ - Fixed!
00:57:601 - ^ - Fixed!
00:58:601 - ^ - Fixed!
00:58:920 - ^ - Fixed!
01:06:386 (4,5) - In my opinion, 3 should hyper to 4, but instead 5 should hyper to 6, so maybe switch this pattern around a bit so 3 to 4 and 4 to 5 are normal dashes, followed by a hyper to 6? - I do preffer this as it is. Wont change!
01:11:714 (5,6,7) - This sounds better as 5 hypering to 6 rather than 6 hypering to 7 in my opinion. - ^
01:13:763 (2) - I like this at x:0 as a hyper snap to 01:13:927 (3) - , as this is a very strong note. - Fixed!
01:15:074 (1,1,1,1) - I don't like NC patterns like this, remove the NCs from all except 01:15:074 (1) - . - Fixed!
01:15:730 (3) - NC. - Fixed!
01:16:386 (1,1,1,1) - Same as 01:15:074 (1,1,1,1) -. - Fixed!
01:17:042 (3) - NC. - Fixed!
01:19:829 (1) - Remove NC please. - Fixed!
01:21:140 (1) - ^ - Fixed!
01:22:124 (1) - Move this to the right a lot, feels weird to have this as a hyper. - I like this as a hyper, so wont change!
01:22:124 (1,1,1) - Remove NCs on these. - Fixed!
01:29:009 (4) - I like an NC here. - Fixed!
01:55:894 (2,1) - Replace these notes with a spinner possibly? - No, i feel like the map got enough spinners from before.
01:58:025 (5) - NC here fits nicely. - Fixed!
02:00:648 (5) - ^ - Fixed!
02:03:271 (5) - ^ - Fixed!
02:05:894 (5) - ^ - Fixed!
02:06:060 - A circle on the 1/2 here would look good.
02:23:517 (1,2) - Swap NC please for consistency with your NC pattern with the rest of this stream, just feels weird to have it like this.
02:29:337 (2,1) - I personally prefer the 1 from before this being a normal dash to 2, followed by a hyper to the 1 highlighted here.
02:33:271 (2) - 1 to 2 shouldn't be a hyper here, it's a very weak beat.
03:29:009 (2) - 1 shouldn't hyper to this, this is too weak.
03:47:451 (1,2) - Same as 02:23:517 (1,2) - , the lack of consistency with the NC pattern before this feels so weird.
03:51:632 (3,4) - Please, this section shouldn't have hypers, it's a calm part just before the difficult part. I'd move these notes closer together, the first hyper of this section should be to 03:52:124 (1) - .
03:55:074 (2) - 1 shouldn't hyper to this, but this should hyper to 3.
04:00:812 (3) - Weak beat, 2 hypering to this feels odd in my opinion.
04:06:549 (1) - I don't like 5 hypering to this at all, I'd just move 1 to the right.
From 04:23:599 - until 04:34:091 - , I don't think there should be any hypers.
04:26:153 - Add a circle on the 3/4 here, there's a distinct beat. - Fixed!
04:27:449 - ^ - Fixed!
04:28:764 - ^ - Fixed!
04:30:078 - ^ - Fixed!
04:31:407 - ^ - Fixed!
04:32:704 - ^ - Fixed!
04:36:550 (6) - 5 shouldn't hyper to 6 here, 6 should hyper to 1. - I want to keep the hyper from 5-6. But i made 6 hyper to 1.
04:46:878 (4) - Ctrl+g on this feels nice to me. - Fixed!
04:47:698 (2) - Maybe put this on x:512 for a snap hyper to 04:47:862 (3) - ? Feels good to me. - Fixed!
04:54:911 (7,8) - 6 could hyper to 7 here, but then 8 hypering to 1 also feels nice, so changing this pattern so that you get a hyper in both of these spots would be good. - Fixed!
05:01:140 (4) - Split this into 2 circles instead, and instead of the hyper from the slider tail to 5, make the first circle of this slider hyper to the second. - Fixed!
05:26:550 (6) - I prefer the spinner starting here. - I kinda want the finish hit there. So i wont change for now :s
05:34:091 (1,3) - And again, same NC pattern as the beginning, I prefer swapping NCs here. - Fixed!
05:36:222 (3) - Start the spinner from here, sounds a lot better. - Fixed!
Alright, done Feel free to call me back some other time after a while. ok!
- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Add some kiai time to this song, feels bland how it is now.
Thanks for mod!Tarynn wrote:
- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Add some kiai time to this song, feels bland how it is now. - WORKING ON IT XDCosmic Mind01:04:255 (1) - You could maybe add kai time on strong notes like this (Most of your finish notes).
- No, i dont like that kind of kiai
01:25:238 (1) - ^ - Added kiai!
02:28:189 (1) - ^ - ^
03:10:156 (1) - ^ - ^
03:52:124 (1) - ^ (If it's not going to be an actual kai time). - ^
04:23:599 (1) - ^ - Nope.
04:44:583 (1) - ^ - Fixed!
Sorry for such a small mod, MB hauled ass with his mod. - It helped!
Great map though, really nice to play.
Best of luck for getting this approved.
Thanks for the mod!224dj wrote:
im noob mapper & 'for fun' mapper... so knowledge is not about me rank beat map... ;_;
It's just advice ok? XD - Everything helps!
01:02:615 (5) -pls hitsound delete this slider... end? - Fixed!
01:36:714 (4) - ^ - Fixed!
01:43:599 (1) - ^ - Like it as it is. Wont change!
01:44:091 (2) - ^ - ^
01:55:894 (2) - ^ - ^
02:58:681 (1) - ^ - Fixed!
02:59:009 (2) - ^ - Fixed!
03:54:419 (5) - ^ - Fixed!
03:54:747 (1) - ^ - Like it as it is. Wont change!
03:55:074 (2) - ^ - ^
03:55:402 (3) - ^ - ^
03:55:730 (4) - ^ - ^
04:06:222 (5) - ^ - Fixed!
04:09:828 (1) - ^ - Fixed!
04:10:156 (2) - ^ - Fixed!
04:10:484 (1) - ^ - Like it as it is. Wont change!
04:12:453 (1) - ^ - ^
04:12:779 (2) - ^ - ^
04:56:058 (4) - ^ - Fixed!
05:02:943 (1) - ^ - Like it as it is. Wont change!
05:03:435 (2) - ^ - ^
01:11:960 (7) - i think... this jump distance is so hard... Make narrow streets. or Make hyperdash - Moved to x448 to make hyper!
04:00:812 (3) - ^ - This is a hyper, like it as it is. Wont change!
05:05:238 (2) - Memorize a pattern that requires. - Moved to x288 for reduced DS. Should be ok now!
Thank you for mod!Hi_Hello wrote:
M4M~~~GENERAL
Suggestion: Move the viewing point here 01:23:927 because this part is the most recognized. - Fixed!Cosmic Mind
Hi!
01:17:206 (1) - move it/ the stream a bit to the left because it's too hard to catch. make 00:17:124 (7) hdash. - Fixed!
01:23:927 (1,2) - fix these unheard hitsounds. - They are supposed to be like that!
02:28:025 (5) - move closer to 02:27:861 (4). hard to catch (it's possible but low-end devices (like mine) cant catch this) have mercy. lol - Wont change this. It fits the map IMO.
02:41:468 (2) - move a bit to the left (make 02:41:304 (1) hdash). - Moved. But wont make (1) a HDash!
02:41:623 (3) - x:400 -make it closer to 02:41:793 (4)- - Fixed!
02:57:073 (1) - make it closer to 02:56:878 (6) - Wont change! I like it as it is!
03:51:796 (4) - lessen those hdash back and forth patterns. move (4) closer to 03:51:960 (5). But make sure 03:51:632 (3) is still on hdash. - Wont change this, as it fits the map quiet well!
03:56:058 (1) - combo breaker!!! fix this by clicking ctrl+h - Fixed!
05:05:566 to 05:26:550 - make sure the patterns here are possible. many users will fail here. - I have no problem FC'ing this part at all. Its just timing consistent! And its meant to be hard here. Wont change!
That's all!
Overall: Nice map! Streams are well placed and good hitsounding skills. fun to play!
Good Luck with your map!
Thanks for the mod!Withered Lotus wrote:
Modderino00:23:435 (8) - 00:24:911 (1) - 00:26:058 (8) - 00:27:533 (1) - 00:28:681 (8) - I feel there should maybe be a clap at these points for the higher notes in the music. - Fixed!
00:32:779 - Doesn't seem to be any change on this green line from the previous 1 so don't need it. - Fixed!
00:33:927 (7,8,1) - I think this small jump is here for the high note in the song (like at 00:35:320 (8,1,2) - ) but it is delayed. Suggest moving 00:33:927 (7,8) - to the next stream so that it is in sync. - Fixed!
00:36:550 (7,8,1) - ^ - Fixed!
00:39:173 (7,8,1) - ^ - Fixed!
00:33:927 (7) - Whistle - Fixed!
00:36:550 (7) - ^ - Fixed!
00:39:173 (7) - ^ - Fixed!
00:47:943 (6,7,3,4,5,6,7) - prehaps you could add a bit more spacing here? - Fixed!
00:51:632 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ - Fixed!
02:49:173 - Again, doesn't seem to be any change on this green line from the previous 1 so don't need it. - Fixed!
04:55:074 - ^ - Fixed!
05:31:796 (1) - prehaps a finish here like at the start of the song? - Fixed!
I noticed the BG you use is a very odd resoution 1234 x 768. This isn't a typical 4:3 or 16:9 format, though it isn't prohibited, it's better to use an image with 1 of these formats. - Where to find? D:
The map genre isn't specified, I suppose it would be Video game (Japanesse) (totally not copying metadata from the ranked version *COUGH*) - I cant set this?
Sorry for the short mod but I honestly can't find anything else to say (I tried, I really did QAQ!) it's just such a good map! Good luck with approval and take my stars! - Thank you very much!
Thanks for the mod!alienflybot wrote:
Mod Requested by Razor Sharp (I will tell you the map for M4M later)[ General]
Background Image
- Change the resolution to 1366x768. 1234x768 is not in a 4:3 ratio which is not meeting the ranking criteria. - I need help finding image D:
Tags- You might want to add the tags in *this mapset as it is ranked. Perhaps adding Aqua Trytone, Hotaru, Kanshou no Matenrou -Fixed!
[ Cosmic Mind]
Gameplay
- 00:21:632 (1) - Even though this is accepted in the ranked version (HW one), I think this spinner should be longer instead because ranking criteria of Standard is different from CtB one. I recommend starting the spinner at 00:20:812 or 00:20:976 (just at your own preference). - Fixed!
- 00:29:665 (3,4) - Kind of missing a HDash here, as the previous 2 patterns have it there. - Fixed!
- 00:43:189 (5,1) - I would prefer a HDash here, indicating a stanza change and it is
swaggily coolnice after the long-combo stream. - Fixed!- 01:02:943 (6) - Maybe a NC works well here? - Fixed!
- 01:22:288 (7,8,1) - This part is opposing the flow IMO. Make something like *this? - Fixed!
- 01:22:943 (1,1,1) - Fix this part if you made the changes on previous mod. - Fixed!
- 02:17:042 (1) - Actually the spinner is way too short... Change it to a 1/8 stream or an easy 4/3 slider. - Think its ok now!
- 02:20:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well this part feels like it is overmapped because the song stanza hasn't change yet. I think you should map this part like the one after spinner with 1/2 patterns. - Fixed!
- 02:26:714 (4,1) - HDash? Otherwise it feels so weird that I will see it a bad flow. - Should be ok now!
- 02:56:058 (2,3) - ^ - Should be ok now!
- 03:02:779 (2,3) - Add HDash, maybe Ctrl+G'ing it. - Fixed!
- 03:09:337 (4,1) - Add HDash. - Fixed!
- 03:30:320 (1) - I think you should replace this with a 1/2 slider instead to make the whole pattern complete. Timeline: *Click. - Fixed!
- 03:40:976 (1) - Same as 02:17:042 (1) . - Fixed!
- 03:44:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 02:20:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) . - Fixed!
- 03:50:648 (4,1) - Same again. - Fixed!
- 05:04:911 (1) - Ctrl+G it for an easier jump to (2). - Fixed!
- 05:21:632 (2,3) - Add HDash, it is too hard and inconsistent with the previous patterns. - Fixed!
- 05:26:714 (1,1) - You are gonna make people rage when they got spin-trapped. I recommend moving 05:31:796 (1) to the middle or just Ctrl+G the whole pattern. - Fixed!
Hitsounds- 01:36:714 (4) - Don't add clap on blue ticks. Silent the note instead by using audio inherited section. - Fixed!
- 04:09:828 (1,2) - ^ - Fixed!
- 04:56:058 (4) - ^ - Fixed!
General Comments- The patterns are quite similar and it seems that you copy
pastapasted the patterns in first part to the second part. You should change a little bit if you copy pasted the patterns. - Changed!- The diff seems too easy because the stream patterns are quite similar. Then it is time for you to brainstorm to have more creative jumps / streams! - Changed!
- Hitsounds are nice! - Thanks!
Good luck ranking the mapset!
-AFB
Thanks for the mod!Kyuare wrote:
Cosmic minD
00:28:845 (1) - x:256 - Fixed!
00:29:665 (3,4) - jump unjustified, I suggest to reduce the distance - Wont change, prefer it as it is!
00:45:402 (7,8) - keep up the flow here, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006358 - I ctrl+g the (8) instead, and moved a little bit to the right.
00:46:386 (3,4,5,6,7) - not enough, more space https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006372 - Fixed!
00:58:681 (9) - This slider is too short, increase the velocity of 1,5 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3004525 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3004529 - I like this as it is now.
01:04:255 (1) - x: 224 - ^
00:53:681 (9) - x: 48 the jump must be between the blue and white tic - Fixed!
00:54:091 (2) - x: 256 jump - I like this as it is now.
01:15:402 (3) - x 256 - Fixed!
01:16:550 (2) - x 288 - Fixed!
01:16:714 (3) - x 144 - Fixed!
01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - for streams like this, start by placing a gap of 1 circle then you reduce the distance gradually like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006413 - Fixed!
01:22:943 (1,1) - it shouldn't have jumps here '^' - Fixed!
01:44:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same for 01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006459 - Fixed!
01:45:566 (1,2,3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006464 - Fixed!
04:01:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I strongly advise you to do as 01:44:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3006499 - Fixed!
If you apply these suggestions in your map, the stars will fall enormously
I let you improve based on changes you make, I would check a 2nd time later
Good map, good luck ! - Thanks!
Thanks for the HS mod!Tokufi wrote:
Hi hi~! First time modding ;w;
Tokufi's Hitsound ModsCosmic Mind00:30:156 (1) - Whistle - Fixed!
00:31:304 (6) - ^ - Fixed!
00:34:255 (3) - ^ - Fixed!
00:36:878 (3) - ^ - Fixed!
00:39:501 (3) - ^ - Fixed!
01:02:861 (5) - Remove Whistle - Fixed!
01:38:025 (3) - Add clap - Fixed!
01:38:189 (4) - ^ - Fixed!
01:39:501 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
01:40:812 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Wont fit ;w;
01:42:288 (1) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
01:45:894 (1) - ^ - Fixed!
01:46:058 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
01:57:042 (2) - Remove whistle - I like this whistle ;w;
01:57:697 (3) - Remove clap - Wont fit ;w;
01:58:025 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
01:59:665 (2) - Remove whistle - Wont fit ;w;
01:59:993 (3) - Remove clap - Wont fit ;w;
02:00:648 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:02:943 (3) - Remove whistle - Wont fit ;w;
02:02:288 (2) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:03:271 (1) - Remove clap - Wont fit ;w;
02:04:911 (2) - Remove whistle - Wont fit ;w;
02:05:238 (3) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:26:714 (4) - Add finish - Wont fit ;w;
02:32:124 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Added clap, but not remove!
02:32:615 (2) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
02:33:435 (1) - Same as previous 2 - Wont fit ;w;
02:33:927 (2) -
02:34:747 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:35:238 (2) -
02:36:058 (1) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
02:36:222 (2) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:36:550 (4) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
02:37:370 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:03:435 (1) - ^ - Fixed!
03:04:255 (3) - ^ On both ends - Added on start!
03:04:747 (4) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:24:911 (2) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:25:074 (3) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:25:730 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:30:894 (3) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:30:976 (5) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:31:058 (7) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
03:50:648 (4) - Add finish - Wont fit ;w;
03:58:681 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Wont fit ;w;
03:59:992 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
04:34:091 (1) - Add finish - Fixed!
04:38:354 (2) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
04:38:517 (3) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
04:39:173 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
04:40:485 (5) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
04:40:649 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Wont fit ;w;
04:58:845 (1) - Add clap - Wont fit ;w;
04:59:500 (2) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
05:00:156 (1) - Add clap at the beginning of slider and remove the one at the end - Wont fit ;w;
05:10:812 (1) - Add finish - Wont fit ;w;
05:21:304 (1) - ^ - Wont fit ;w;
GL with ranking ^^ There is probably more hitsounds to fix but i cant find all ;w; *hides*