1. Desire (5.72 stars, 1851 notes)
2. Madni's Hellfire (5.97 stars, 2225 notes)
3. Original Progressive Extra (5.23 stars, 1275 notes)

HolyNightmare wrote:

from modreqs :3


03:20:510 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - change this to only one combo I've had some enquiries about it, I'll change for now since it doesn't affect play.

05:12:967 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ Fixed

03:22:567 (1) - add it to the combo before Meh I liked it being a NC by itself. Maybe it if it comes up again I'll change.

03:22:738 (2) - add a circle ...why? There isn't any emphasis here.

03:28:567 (5) - change to x-184 y-232 maybe,, i doesn't suit well when it is so close to the circle Fixed, but made it overlap a slider.


Rest of the map is pretty well and fun.
Tried my best to mod but can´t really find something big :/
But i think you could do this map even more better with special hitsounds ! give it a try
Hope this will help you and good luck with this map ^-^

Fort wrote:

I'm not sure about your long stream pattern in middle of song, maybe you can use 1/4 slider pattern for that deathstream

George wrote:

---General---
I think you should choose a different BG image, this image doesnt really relate at all to the song, maybe peoples hands after the streams though Agreed
This map is also kinda fast so I most likely missed things

00:24:624 (4) - try making this repeat
00:26:339 (1,1,1) - No NC
00:28:053 (2) - NC
00:30:110 (5) - try making this repeat
00:31:824 (1,1,1) - No NC
00:33:539 (2) - NC
00:35:596 (5) - try making this repeat
00:37:310 (1,1,1,2,3) - No NC
00:39:710 (4) - NC
00:41:082 (6) - try making this repeat
00:42:796 (1,1,2) - No NC
00:44:167 (1) - NC
01:43:481 (3,4) - Check distance spacing
02:38:852 (2,3,4) - Offscreen (May not be off by much its just that people point this out a lot now) raised up 02:38:681 (1,2,3,4) -
03:22:567 (1) - No NC I object to anyone who hates this NC! (thats a few)
04:37:310 (1) - ^
04:39:367 (1,1,1) - ^
04:42:110 (1) - NC
04:42:796 (1,1,2) - No NC
04:47:939 (1) - repeat
04:53:425 (4) - ^ Rrrr changed some, applied reverse etc
05:04:396 (4) - This slider kinda looks ugly, try fixing and making it repeat Was gonna change anyway.
07:22:567 (5) - Really offscreen

1. 00:42:796 (1) - remove NC. I suggest you to put NCs on every big white tick on slow parts and every big white tick on faster parts of the song, this will make your map more logical(btw, you change BPM in the beginning, so that's why you should put NCs on every big white tick). Try to follow this rule and your combos will be more consistent
2. 00:52:396 (1,2,3,4) - this slider pattern would look better if (1)-(2) has the same spacing as (3)-(4)
3. 01:00:624 (1) - lazy spinner. Your map would look much more interesting if you map it with notes
4. 01:06:624 "...an end..." here should be a clickable object
5. 01:39:024 (1) - Hm... I'm not sure about using streams on these parts of the song, where there is no any beat. If you decide to keep it here, I would advise you either to keep the same spacing or to let it increase or decrease (on the first part of the stream there is 0,5 then 0,25 then 0,75, it looks untidy imo and does not follow the song)
6. 02:09:881 (1,2,3,4) - consider to change it in a perfect square
7. 02:11:938 imo this part of the song is not the main one. Remove kiai and put it on faster parts. And during all of this part I would use slower and extended sliders (1/1 rather than 1/2)
8. 02:21:710 (2,4) - I would stack them
9. 02:29:938 (2,3,4) - put them in a straight line
10. 02:37:310 (1) - the stream should start here
11. 02:50:167 a spinner should end here
12. 03:09:881 (2) - I would reconsider this slider, replace it with a slider end here 03:10:395 and a note here 03:10:567
13. 04:36:625 (5,6) - keep the same spacing, it's much more plesant to play
14. 04:49:653 (1,2,3) - previuosly you put NCs on every of them. Yeah, it's ok to put it, however try to keep it more constant. You can use another rhythm: to follow guitar sounds u can put a note here 04:50:682 but to avoid players' confusion do it with respective spacing, or do like u did here 05:07:139 (3) -
15. 05:17:767 (1,2) - it's playable, but I suggest you to avoid such overlaps as this
16. 06:34:738 (3) - a stream should start here. Remove this note 06:34:652 (2) - and put (1) a little bit away
17. 07:05:081 (4) - this one crosses the playfield border. It makes the game on this map less plesant

Sgord1 wrote:

Hello there I'm from #modreqs.
Let's go! Ignore everything u disagree. Feel free to point what you don't understand, my english sucks D:

[General]
Even despite it does not touch the timing, I strongly suggest you to use the same BPM through the map. This will make your map easier to mod. rrr I can try

[The diff]

1. 00:42:796 (1) - remove NC. I suggest you to put NCs on every big white tick on slow parts and every big white tick on faster parts of the song, this will make your map more logical(btw, you change BPM in the beginning, so that's why you should put NCs on every big white tick). Try to follow this rule and your combos will be more consistent Fixed!
2. 00:52:396 (1,2,3,4) - this slider pattern would look better if (1)-(2) has the same spacing as (3)-(4) I had my reasons but yeah I'll change
3. 01:00:624 (1) - lazy spinner. Your map would look much more interesting if you map it with notes I've heard some people talking about this (everyone) but this is mapped to one of the BG instruments. I seriously don't wanna change it
4. 01:06:624 "...an end..." here should be a clickable object Disagree
5. 01:39:024 (1) - Hm... I'm not sure about using streams on these parts of the song, where there is no any beat. If you decide to keep it here, I would advise you either to keep the same spacing or to let it increase or decrease (on the first part of the stream there is 0,5 then 0,25 then 0,75, it looks untidy imo and does not follow the song) I can see where you are coming at, but 1) I can hear notes (not really 'beats') and 2) the distancing was done to spice up the lame ass single distancing otherwise. We don't want a map which is 50% streams of the same DS. That's 4 mins of boo
6. 02:09:881 (1,2,3,4) - consider to change it in a perfect square Gotcha
7. 02:11:938 imo this part of the song is not the main one. Remove kiai and put it on faster parts. And during all of this part I would use slower and extended sliders (1/1 rather than 1/2) rrrrrrrr this is the BIGGEST debate I've had with people. Its like either "the kiai is boring because it's too damn slow" or "it needs to be slower cus music" personally I'm keeping it how it is. As for changing kiai I'll think about it.
8. 02:21:710 (2,4) - I would stack them Agreed
9. 02:29:938 (2,3,4) - put them in a straight line ...aren't they?
10. 02:37:310 (1) - the stream should start here Disagree, maybe I'll spice it up
11. 02:50:167 a spinner should end here No, big no. Very big no
12. 03:09:881 (2) - I would reconsider this slider, replace it with a slider end here 03:10:395 and a note here 03:10:567 Ruins consistency and... wait what that sounds bad!
13. 04:36:625 (5,6) - keep the same spacing, it's much more plesant to play dw changed
14. 04:49:653 (1,2,3) - previuosly you put NCs on every of them. Yeah, it's ok to put it, however try to keep it more constant. You can use another rhythm: to follow guitar sounds u can put a note here 04:50:682 but to avoid players' confusion do it with respective spacing, or do like u did here 05:07:139 (3) - ^ god I undermap *stares at streams*
15. 05:17:767 (1,2) - it's playable, but I suggest you to avoid such overlaps as this rrr I like too much
16. 06:34:738 (3) - a stream should start here. Remove this note 06:34:652 (2) - and put (1) a little bit away After listening 100 times yeah. Agreed.
17. 07:05:081 (4) - this one crosses the playfield border. It makes the game on this map less plesant

Knew it! I knew that would need changing haha. Gotcha!

Frostei wrote:

Add "End of an Empire - Chapter 01: Time" as the source

Its Depths wrote:

as requested

Desire
to start why cs 3.5? 4 would be better imo Never! I wanted this to be cs3.5 from the start.

02:58:396 (3) - stack this properly on the tail of 02:58:910 (2) - its a little off Fixed

04:44:339 (2) - check to make sure this doesn't go off screen Got it

07:00:453 (2) - stack with 06:58:910 (2) - Nah ruins flow

07:00:624 (3) - stack with 06:59:596 (4) - ^

07:16:396 (1) - there are drumbeats going on during this slider, and I feel like they should be emphasized more than the vocal Added two notes and shuffled some stuff

06:43:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe add 1/4 repeats in? still considering...

short mod, good map.. gl

1. Use AR9. AR9.3 Is totally uneccessary for this beatmap and it's difficulty.
2. 02:33:196 (3) - Triple here.
3. 03:17:767 (1,2) - Curve/force curve these perhaps.
4. 04:11:596 (2) - Curve this also.
5. 06:02:339 (1) - ^
6. 07:12:282 (1) - I'm not sure if this fits, consider changing.

Kuki wrote:

From #Modreqs

Desire

1. Use AR9. AR9.3 Is totally uneccessary for this beatmap and it's difficulty. Some people prefer AR9.3 (me and most testers) so I'mma get more opnions here
2. 02:33:196 (3) - Triple here.
3. 03:17:767 (1,2) - Curve/force curve these perhaps. Placeholder fix for now, changing again soon.
4. 04:11:596 (2) - Curve this also. No thanks, I like this
5. 06:02:339 (1) - ^ Nahhh I like this here too. Changing this would mean fixing up quite a lot of the other patterns since it fits with the last sliders
6. 07:12:282 (1) - I'm not sure if this fits, consider changing. It fits to me, but I changed it anyway. Still 1/1 slider though

1. 00:11:253 (1) - First note, first minor complaint: it kinda comes out of nowhere and threw me off the first time. Again, pretty minor.
2. 00:26:339 (5,6,1) - Not a fan of these, but I get their function. Minor complaint again.
3. 00:49:653 (1,2,3,4) - The beat speeds up here, why are these still 2/1? Consider adding some 1/1 here.
4. 01:48:967 (2) - Blankets the end of 01:48:624 (1) - nicely, but why not blanket the rest of (1)?
5. 02:58:910 (2) - Unnecessary kink, this blanket could be so nice (especially jarring with stuff llike 03:05:767 (2) - further down the line)
6. 03:19:824 (2,1) - It feels a bit empty between these two, maybe make (2) a bit longer or add something in between?
7. 03:21:710 (8,1) - The jump between these two is smaller than the previous jump 03:21:539 (7,8) - when the song escalates. Why ;__;
8. 03:49:139 (6,1) - Sudden DS increase might be a bit jarring. Maybe bump the DS of the previous part up a bit.
9. 04:49:653 (1,2,3) - Maybe follow the guitar here to make the rhythm a bit more interesting. As it stands, the 2/1 doesn't really fit here.
10. 04:55:139 (1,2,3) - see above
11. 05:00:624 (1,2,3) - same deal as above
12. 05:06:110 (1,2,3) - See, you did it here, why not on the other parts I pointed out above?
13. 07:19:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't into this pattern. I'm fine at playing 07:21:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - or 07:24:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - for instance, but 07:19:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - just doesn't work for me. Maybe have the sliders point outward from each other?

Not_Zippy wrote:

M4m time, also 1st mod evar so expect it to be a bit shit. Not bad eh

1. 00:11:253 (1) - First note, first minor complaint: it kinda comes out of nowhere and threw me off the first time. Again, pretty minor. Keeping cus 1 note why not
2. 00:26:339 (5,6,1) - Not a fan of these, but I get their function. Minor complaint again. Yeah they are there because I had complaints when they WERE NOT there wat do
3. 00:49:653 (1,2,3,4) - The beat speeds up here, why are these still 2/1? Consider adding some 1/1 here. I don't consider the drums in the BG to be important enough right now to change much, plus adding 1/1 here would drain out the 1/1 just after
4. 01:48:967 (2) - Blankets the end of 01:48:624 (1) - nicely, but why not blanket the rest of (1)? This has had 3 reworks ugh I need to fix again
5. 02:58:910 (2) - Unnecessary kink, this blanket could be so nice (especially jarring with stuff llike 03:05:767 (2) - further down the line) I liked the way it feels after the slider jumps as the momentum feels good pointing in the direction of the slider, maybe I'll change
6. 03:19:824 (2,1) - It feels a bit empty between these two, maybe make (2) a bit longer or add something in between? Eh cramps my style. I will only change if people ask
7. 03:21:710 (8,1) - The jump between these two is smaller than the previous jump 03:21:539 (7,8) - when the song escalates. Why ;__; Oh god you genius haha I think imma buff this too much
8. 03:49:139 (6,1) - Sudden DS increase might be a bit jarring. Maybe bump the DS of the previous part up a bit.
9. 04:49:653 (1,2,3) - Maybe follow the guitar here to make the rhythm a bit more interesting. As it stands, the 2/1 doesn't really fit here. Kinda agree kinda disagree. I, personally, like this part. But I know it feels empty so who knows, I'll look into it.
10. 04:55:139 (1,2,3) - see above
11. 05:00:624 (1,2,3) - same deal as above
12. 05:06:110 (1,2,3) - See, you did it here, why not on the other parts I pointed out above? It suits there more being the end? I dunno
13. 07:19:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't into this pattern. I'm fine at playing 07:21:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - or 07:24:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - for instance, but 07:19:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - just doesn't work for me. Maybe have the sliders point outward from each other?

I've has some complaints. Will change

And that's about it. I can't pass it because of the streams so can't really comment on the difficulty settings, but the AR seemed fine to me.

Good map overall, good luck getting it approved Thanks~