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164 feat. GUMI - shiningray [OsuMania]

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hayabusa0423
13 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
hayabusa0423
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年5月3日 at 18:29:52

Artist: 164 feat. GUMI
Title: shiningray
Tags: 164 shiningray Hatsune Miku GUMI Vocaloid Vocarock sdvx 3
BPM: 166.02
Filesize: 5514kb
Play Time: 02:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K Easy - 4Key (1.21 stars, 322 notes)
  2. 4K Hard - 4Key (2.43 stars, 799 notes)
  3. 4k Normal - 4Key (1.7 stars, 557 notes)
Download: 164 feat. GUMI - shiningray
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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病室の一角、ずっと変わらない景色。眩しい日差し、燃える太陽。志半ばの少女は死をどうみつめるのでしょうか。



Here is my first osumania beatmaps. (^^)
'shiningray' 164 feat.GUMI is the first song of 164, who is famous for 'Ama no jaku.'
I wanna receive some comments about this map.
Everything for the first time, so your comments certainly improve my beatmaps.

The original song is here!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FzpkAbuv6ug
the original video using MMD is here
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm16712818

Thank you for your help!
Gomuryuu

XD
17/03/2015 First Submission (Easy)
20/03/2015 Normal and Easy fixed the pattern(make pattern 1-3, 2-4 more often)
Changed Video file (clearer Graphic)
21/03/2015 Set the timing and volume.
02/04/2015 Added Hit sound. Done 'Hard.', renamed some part.
03/04/2015 Change HP,OD. Some pattern fixed. Start to map Full song.
05/04/2015 Reset offset. Delete 'Normal+' because it is not sophisticated.
Done 'Full Hard' so you can enjoy whole song of this!
07/04/2015 Set hitsound except 'Full Hard'. Some inconsistency was fixed.
09/04/2015 Applied modding from Gomuryuu, now WIP.
12/04/2015 Edited 'Easy' (in order to avoid feeling of empty?)
What I have To Do is to reconsider hitsounds.
16/05/2015 some changed. (I'm very busy lately. I apologize for late.)
3/05/2016 delete movie

I want to be checked (a minimum level, general thing). And Please Mod. (>_<)
Last edited by hayabusa0423 , edited 47 times in total.
SomeDumbFurry
1 post
Joined November 2014
SomeDumbFurry
This chart looks great so far! One thing I'd recommend is changing up your chords a little, throw a 1-3 or 2-4 in every so often! 8/10

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私がお勧めしたい一つのこと。和音を少し変更します、そう頻繁にあらゆる1-3または2-4を投げる。8/10
hayabusa0423
13 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
hayabusa0423

SomeDumbFurry wrote:

This chart looks great so far! One thing I'd recommend is changing up your chords a little, throw a 1-3 or 2-4 in every so often! 8/10

~~

私がお勧めしたい一つのこと。和音を少し変更します、そう頻繁にあらゆる1-3または2-4を投げる。8/10

Thank you for playing and comments! I'd appreciate your recommend and I'll take into account it!
1－3　2－4を入れるようにしてみます！
ありがとうございます。

00:31:093 -
01:34:700 -
hayabusa0423
13 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
hayabusa0423
Mod chat log. Thank you for help. Arigatou!
11:08 Satoshi Kazuki: yo
11:08 hayabusa0423: good morning
11:08 Satoshi Kazuki: i mod ur beatmap a little
11:09 Satoshi Kazuki: hahaha good morning
11:09 hayabusa0423: thank you(*^^*)
11:10 Satoshi Kazuki: at 01:32:531 (92531|2) - move to the fourth coloum
11:10 hayabusa0423: done^^
11:11 hayabusa0423: consistency of 3-4-3-4-3- right?
11:12 Satoshi Kazuki: 01:32:170 (92170|2) to 01:32:170 (92170|2) - pull the LN
11:12 Satoshi Kazuki: make it same the note 01:32:531 (92531|3)
11:12 Satoshi Kazuki: my english is bad @@
11:12 Satoshi Kazuki: wait i screenshot
11:15 Satoshi Kazuki: http://puu.sh/h0JI7/3ddb4e6570.jpg
11:15 Satoshi Kazuki: like this
11:15 Satoshi Kazuki: at 4K hard
11:17 hayabusa0423: ah you mean 01:31:809 - end here? done
11:17 Satoshi Kazuki: yeah
11:18 Satoshi Kazuki: 00:07:963 to 00:08:325 - add 3 note...follow the guitar rythem
11:19 Satoshi Kazuki: and same with other add some note that follow the guitar ryhtem...its hard diff after all ^^
11:20 Satoshi Kazuki: 00:19:167 - add note at second coloum
11:20 Satoshi Kazuki: 00:24:949 - same here
11:21 hayabusa0423: sorry i can't understand fully at 07:963 issue. later I ask you
11:21 Satoshi Kazuki: ok
11:21 hayabusa0423: done (add note )
11:22 Satoshi Kazuki: 00:07:963 - to - 00:08:325 - add 3 note use spees 25% u will hear the drum or guitar rythem
11:23 Satoshi Kazuki: wait ><
11:23 Satoshi Kazuki: my mistake
11:23 Satoshi Kazuki: 00:08:144 - add one note
11:23 Satoshi Kazuki: only that note 3 note
11:23 Satoshi Kazuki: *not 3 note
11:24 hayabusa0423: add 1 note at 00:08:144 -
11:24 Satoshi Kazuki: 00:20:974 - LN note end here
11:24 Satoshi Kazuki: yup
11:25 Satoshi Kazuki: 00:17:721 - LN end here
11:25 hayabusa0423: done (LN)
11:25 Satoshi Kazuki: i gather all the mod at my notepad then i post at forum
11:25 Satoshi Kazuki: ok?
11:25 Satoshi Kazuki: ^^
11:26 hayabusa0423: Sure, I really appreciate!
11:26 Satoshi Kazuki: ^^
Gomuryuu
375 posts
Joined January 2014
Gomuryuu
Hi~
From My Queue
Here's my mod as requested

Column |1|2|3|4|

4K Easy
This diff feels too empty, actually you can still add some notes at some point, i'll help a bit. Also try to avoid making too many holds
00:09:935 (9935|2) - add note
00:10:297 (10297|1) - add note
00:14:633 (14633|0) - move to 3 for balance
00:21:500 (21500|1) - add note
00:27:825 (27825|3) - move to 3 for balance
00:48:425 (48425|2) - add note
00:59:989 (59989|2) - add note
01:16:975 (76975|0,76975|1) - add notes
01:17:337 (77337|2) - add note
01:17:698 (77698|2) - add note
01:19:505 (79505|2) - add note
01:19:867 (79867|1) - add note
01:22:758 (82758|2,82758|3) - add notes
01:23:119 (83119|1) - add LN, end here 01:23:481
01:23:842 (83842|0) - add note
and you can continue by yourself, this diff still needs alot of work to be better. Please consider remapping this diff and avoid mapping to vocals.
4K Normal
00:07:948 (7948|2) - change to LN, end here 00:08:309
00:12:826 (12826|0) - move to 4 for balance, avoid making unnecessary minijacks
00:13:369 (13369|2) - add note
00:14:091 (14091|1,14091|0) - move to 2-3 for balance
00:14:633 (14633|2) - move to 1^
00:14:814 (14814|3) - move to 2^
00:15:176 (15176|2) - add note
00:15:718 (15718|2) - add note
00:16:983 (16983|3) - move to 2 for balance
00:18:609 (18609|0) - move to 4 for balance
00:20:416 (20416|2) - move to 2 for balance
00:20:597 (20597|3) - move to 3^
00:20:958 (20958|2) - move to 4^
00:24:391 (24391|0) - move to 4 for balance
00:29:090 (29090|3) - move to 1
00:41:016 (41016|2,41197|1) - Ctrl+H for balance
01:22:216 (82216|2) - move to 2, avoid making unnecessary minijacks
01:23:119 (83119|1) - change to LN, end here 01:23:481
01:27:998 (87998|3) - move to 2, avoid making unnecessary minijacks
01:57:995 (117995|3) - remove, one note is enough, also avoid making unnecessary minijacks
02:17:330 (137330|1,137510|2,137691|3) - move these one column to the left so it starts from 1
4K Hard
00:14:633 (14633|2) - move to 2 for balance
00:14:814 (14814|3) - move to 3^
00:15:356 (15356|2) - move to 4^
00:20:416 (20416|0) - move to 3^
00:21:862 (21862|0) - move to 2^
00:29:090 (29090|2) - move to 2^
00:32:342 (32342|2,32523|1,32704|2,32884|1,32884|3,33065|0,33246|1) - Ctrl+H for Variation
00:35:233 (35233|2,35414|1,35595|2,35776|1,35776|3,35956|0,36137|1) - and here too^
00:37:763 (37763|0) - move to 3 for balance
00:48:605 (48605|0,48605|1) - move to 3-4 for balance and then 00:48:063 (48063|0,48063|1,48244|2,48244|3,48425|0,48425|1,48605|2,48605|3) - ctrl+H this
00:50:051 (50051|1) - move to 3 for balance
00:51:497 (51497|1) - ^
00:52:942 (52942|1) - ^
01:00:532 (60532|2) - move to 2^
01:00:893 (60893|1) - move to 3 for balance
01:02:339 (62339|1) - ^
01:04:146 (64146|2) - move to 2^
01:15:349 (75349|1) - move to 3^
01:18:782 (78782|2) - move to 2^
01:27:817 (87817|1) - move to 3^
01:32:516 (92516|3) - move to 2^
01:32:696 (92696|2) - move to 4^
01:35:949 (95949|2,96130|1,96310|2,96491|1,96491|3,96672|0,96852|1) - Ctrl+H variation
01:38:840 (98840|2,99021|1,99202|2,99382|1,99382|3,99563|0,99744|1) - here too^
01:41:370 (101370|0) - move to 3 for balance
01:45:707 (105707|1) - move to 3^
01:52:212 (112212|1,112212|0) - move to 3-4 for balance and then 01:51:670 (111670|0,111670|1,111851|2,111851|3,112031|0,112031|1,112212|2,112212|3) - Ctrl+H this
02:08:656 - Here, what about this

Wow, a short and full version in one mapset, this is my first time seeing it i don't know whether it could be an unrankable issue or not tho, but i think you should stick to one version.
hayabusa0423
13 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
hayabusa0423
Thank you for your help. I really appreciate it!
Done as below. I hope you like this song.

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi~
From My Queue
Here's my mod as requested

Column |1|2|3|4|

4K Easy
This diff feels too empty, actually you can still add some notes at some point, i'll help a bit. Also try to avoid making too many holds
00:09:935 (9935|2) - add note
00:10:297 (10297|1) - add note why here? Strong drum-sound?
00:14:633 (14633|0) - move to 3 for balance
00:21:500 (21500|1) - add note
00:27:825 (27825|3) - move to 3 for balance
00:48:425 (48425|2) - add note
00:59:989 (59989|2) - add note
01:16:975 (76975|0,76975|1) - add notes
01:17:337 (77337|2) - add note
01:17:698 (77698|2) - add note
01:19:505 (79505|2) - add note
01:19:867 (79867|1) - add note
01:22:758 (82758|2,82758|3) - add notes
01:23:119 (83119|1) - add LN, end here 01:23:481
01:23:842 (83842|0) - add note
and you can continue by yourself, this diff still needs alot of work to be better. Please consider remapping this diff and avoid mapping to vocals.

I'll try to remap this. I have to study easy mapping more. :oops:
I know I should avoid mapping to vocals as a beginner. However this song is 'rock ballad' and the vocal in the first part of this song stands out, compared to instruments. That's why I did map on vocals. I refer to another maps how to map on vocal, but I need to learn more.
4K Normal
00:07:948 (7948|2) - change to LN, end here 00:08:309
00:12:826 (12826|0) - move to 4 for balance, avoid making unnecessary minijacks
00:13:369 (13369|2) - add note
00:14:091 (14091|1,14091|0) - move to 2-3 for balance
00:14:633 (14633|2) - move to 1^
00:14:814 (14814|3) - move to 2^
00:15:176 (15176|2) - add note Done. And then 00:15:356 (15356|2) - moved to 4 for balance.
00:15:718 (15718|2) - add note
00:16:983 (16983|3) - move to 2 for balance
00:18:609 (18609|0) - move to 4 for balance
00:20:416 (20416|2) - move to 2 for balance
00:20:597 (20597|3) - move to 3^
00:20:958 (20958|2) - move to 4^
00:24:391 (24391|0) - move to 4 for balance
00:29:090 (29090|3) - move to 1
00:41:016 (41016|2,41197|1) - Ctrl+H for balance
01:22:216 (82216|2) - move to 2, avoid making unnecessary minijacks
01:23:119 (83119|1) - change to LN, end here 01:23:481
01:27:998 (87998|3) - move to 2, avoid making unnecessary minijacks
01:57:995 (117995|3) - remove, one note is enough, also avoid making unnecessary minijacks
02:17:330 (137330|1,137510|2,137691|3) - move these one column to the left so it starts from 1
Nice mods thank you. I learned I have to avoid mini-jacks. All done.
4K Hard
00:14:633 (14633|2) - move to 2 for balance
00:14:814 (14814|3) - move to 3^
00:15:356 (15356|2) - move to 4^
00:20:416 (20416|0) - move to 3^
00:21:862 (21862|0) - move to 2^
00:29:090 (29090|2) - move to 2^
00:32:342 (32342|2,32523|1,32704|2,32884|1,32884|3,33065|0,33246|1) - Ctrl+H for Variation
00:35:233 (35233|2,35414|1,35595|2,35776|1,35776|3,35956|0,36137|1) - and here too^
00:37:763 (37763|0) - move to 3 for balance
00:48:605 (48605|0,48605|1) - move to 3-4 for balance and then 00:48:063 (48063|0,48063|1,48244|2,48244|3,48425|0,48425|1,48605|2,48605|3) - ctrl+H this
00:50:051 (50051|1) - move to 3 for balance
00:51:497 (51497|1) - ^
00:52:942 (52942|1) - ^
01:00:532 (60532|2) - move to 2^
01:00:893 (60893|1) - move to 3 for balance
01:02:339 (62339|1) - ^
01:04:146 (64146|2) - move to 2^
01:15:349 (75349|1) - move to 3^
01:18:782 (78782|2) - move to 2^
01:27:817 (87817|1) - move to 3^
01:32:516 (92516|3) - move to 2^
01:32:696 (92696|2) - move to 4^
01:35:949 (95949|2,96130|1,96310|2,96491|1,96491|3,96672|0,96852|1) - Ctrl+H variation
01:38:840 (98840|2,99021|1,99202|2,99382|1,99382|3,99563|0,99744|1) - here too^
01:41:370 (101370|0) - move to 3 for balance
01:45:707 (105707|1) - move to 3^
01:52:212 (112212|1,112212|0) - move to 3-4 for balance and then 01:51:670 (111670|0,111670|1,111851|2,111851|3,112031|0,112031|1,112212|2,112212|3) - Ctrl+H this
02:08:656 - Here, what about this

All applied. I can understand what you want to say and your modding brings me point of views.

Wow, a short and full version in one mapset, this is my first time seeing it i don't know whether it could be an unrankable issue or not tho, but i think you should stick to one version.
Sorry to have surprised you. Yeah I should concentrate on short version if I aim to be ranked.
Anyway, I learn how to arrange the patterns and what I should avoid. Thank you very much.
FrenzyLi
258 posts
Joined April 2015
FrenzyLi
你好！

I'll suggest the following modifications to the [EASY] map.

Measure
0:0 ~ 0:2 [Add SLIDER 1] (you might want to add something to the prelude)
1:0 ~ 1:2 [Add SLIDER 4]
2:0 ~ 0:2 [Add SLIDER 2]
3:0 ~ 1:2 [Add SLIDER 3]

86:2 [Move 3 to 2] (to improve symmetry)

Also, I'm looking forward to your further updates.
Satoshi Kazuki
525 posts
Joined July 2014
Satoshi Kazuki
Sorry for very very late mod..i was busy with school @.@
I just complete mod 4K hard only....about the other diff i do it later :( (busy desu)

Lets begin!!

4K Hard
00:22:765 (22765|0) - end here 00:23:488
00:32:161 - add 1 note
00:35:685 - add 1 note at second coloum
00:45:353 (45353|2,45353|1) - remove these note
00:45:533 - LN end here
00:48:063 - LN end here
01:05:049 - add 1 more note
01:05:230 - same here 1 more note too
01:04:688 to 01:05:410 - make a stairs note
01:06:856 - add 1 more note at third coloum
01:08:302 - add 1 more note at first coloum
01:08:302 - add 1 more note at second coloum
01:11:193 - add 1 more note at first coloum
01:16:975 - LN end here
01:35:768 - add 1 more note at first coloum
01:28:902 - add 2 notes
01:17:337 - add 2 notes
01:17:517 - 2 notes at here too
01:18:963 - replace with 1 notes.if you make LN like that it will hard to get ranked
01:23:119 - 2 notes
01:23:300 - 2 notes too
01:29:082 - 2 notes
01:29:082 - LN end here
01:51:670 - LN end here
02:15:523 - add 2 notes at first and second coloum
02:21:305 - add 1 note at third coloum
02:33:593 to 02:34:677 - add 2 note from every one note that you have place
02:35:038 to 02:35:580 - add 2 note like this


Good luck ^^ :)
NlHIL
856 posts
Joined December 2013
NlHIL

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

Sorry for very very late mod..i was busy with school @.@
I just complete mod 4K hard only....about the other diff i do it later :( (busy desu)

Lets begin!!

4K Hard
00:22:765 (22765|0) - end here 00:23:488
00:32:161 - add 1 note
00:35:685 - add 1 note at second coloum
00:45:353 (45353|2,45353|1) - remove these note
00:45:533 - LN end here
00:48:063 - LN end here
01:05:049 - add 1 more note
01:05:230 - same here 1 more note too
01:04:688 to 01:05:410 - make a stairs note
01:06:856 - add 1 more note at third coloum
01:08:302 - add 1 more note at first coloum
01:08:302 - add 1 more note at second coloum
01:11:193 - add 1 more note at first coloum
01:16:975 - LN end here
01:35:768 - add 1 more note at first coloum
01:28:902 - add 2 notes
01:17:337 - add 2 notes
01:17:517 - 2 notes at here too
01:18:963 - replace with 1 notes.if you make LN like that it will hard to get ranked
01:23:119 - 2 notes
01:23:300 - 2 notes too
01:29:082 - 2 notes
01:29:082 - LN end here
01:51:670 - LN end here
02:15:523 - add 2 notes at first and second coloum
02:21:305 - add 1 note at third coloum
02:33:593 to 02:34:677 - add 2 note from every one note that you have place
02:35:038 to 02:35:580 - add 2 note like this


Good luck ^^ :)
lol
Reminiscence97
1 post
Joined January 2016
Reminiscence97
shiningray~

great job ^-^

CastorPollux
hayabusa0423
13 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
hayabusa0423

Reminiscence97 wrote:

shiningray~

great job ^-^

CastorPollux
Thank you for the comment! I'm happy to hear that! ^o^
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