00:09:730 (3,4) - Add a little space between 3 and 4 since the spacing between 1,2,3 may confuse the player.
00:10:599 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 should be on the same level. 2's endslider should be directly above 3's beginning slider.
00:13:860 (6,1) - Place 1 a bit closer to 6 for equal distancing.
00:12:556 (1) - Move 1 down a bit below 2 since it doesn't seem to flow along as a half-circle
00:14:077 (1,2,3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/gTMPZ/7b86c2fe3c.jpg I think it would flow better like this.
00:16:686 (3,4) - Use distance snap to move 4 a bit closer to 3.
00:17:121 (4,5) - Move 5 directly above 4.
00:17:773 (1,2,3) -
http://puu.sh/gTNek/a06efbea75.jpg I think it's better if the 2 and 3 were moved to the right like this, 2 is also moved to the right more than 3
00:19:295 (5,6,7,8) - Move 5,6,7 sliders up a bit so that 8 can have equal spacing.
00:19:295 (5,6,7,8,1) - Move these sliders a bit to the right so that players can notice 1 more easily
00:21:686 (3,4,5) - Use snap distance 1.5x on 5 to move it a bit closer since distance between 3 and 4 is closer than 4 and 5.
00:24:512 (1,2,3) - 3 should be placed further away from 1 and 2 since it may confuse Standard players.
00:27:121 (2,1) - This should be changed but I'm not sure how to explain it. Cursor should not have to go the opposite direction to from note 1 to complete slider 2.
00:27:990 (1,2,3) - 3 be moved to X:176,Y:272 if you are looking to have equal distance between 1,2,3 although this may confuse the player more since if they are at the same distance, then they should be at the same timing but no, so I'd say find a way to give more distance between 2 and 3.
00:28:860 (4,5,6) - Move 6 to X:416,Y:32 to have a straight line between 4 and 5.
00:29:512 (6,1,1) - 1 should be moved to X:96,Y:48 to follow the distance that 6 and 1 is at.
00:30:382 (1,2) - 2 should be directly below 1 but if you decided against ^^^, then ignore this also.
00:30:382 (2,3,4) - I think you should use distance snap 1.6x on those 3 notes since it seems to flow better
http://puu.sh/gTPG5/2da432d546.jpg00:31:251 (4,1,1,2,3) - I feel like 1,1,2,3 should be placed on the same level as 4 but this I'm not very sure about.
00:32:338 (2,3) - 3 should be moved closer to 2.
00:48:860 (1,2,3) - I feel that these notes should be moved back a bit to "Take Me to" and a slider be added for "Wonderland" .
00:55:164 (3,1,2) - 1 should be moved to be more between 3 and 2.
01:02:121 (1,2,3) - Moving 2 a bit more to the left will make the notes flow better.
01:04:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add a back and forth slider so that the player doesn't have to single-tap all the notes.
01:06:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe use distance snap 1.0x to bring to notes a bit closer together?
01:18:208 (1,2,3) - 2 should be closer to 1 and 3 because distancing may confuse the player.
01:24:512 (3,4,5) - 4 and 5 should be moved closer to 3 to keep the distance consistant.
01:25:817 (2,3,4,5) - You should distance snap these to 1.7 although I would personally suggest that you try fiddling around with lower distance snaps since these are a bit far for a Normal-Hard difficulty.
01:43:860 (1,2) - move 1 to X:112, Y:112 to keep the distancing equal.
02:29:947 (1,2) - I think it would be better like this. (link here when puush is back)