1. AIR's Normal (1.93 stars, 206 notes)
2. Easy (1.48 stars, 154 notes)
3. Extra (4.59 stars, 554 notes)
4. Guy's Extra (5.06 stars, 630 notes)
5. Hard (3.33 stars, 391 notes)
6. Mokori's Insane (4.43 stars, 483 notes)

• 00:21:190 (3) - maybe make the slider like this. one tick less, but the flow gets better imo
  -00:33:896 (4) - Does this slider have the red Dot intentionally? because all others are just curved normally
  -00:47:308 (2) - Curve this slider slightly upwards
  -00:48:719 (5) - Maybe make this one like this
  -00:55:072 (1,2,3) - I'd do it like this
  -01:24:013 (4) - Curve this one in the other direction
  -01:28:955 (3) - make this on a wave slider
  -01:39:543 (3) - this one seems a little bit awkward
  -01:42:366 (3) - put it a bit lower and curve it slightly in the other direction
  -01:47:308 (1) - curve in other direction
  -01:48:013 (2) - a little bit lower

• 
  -Maybe Use Ar 8 instead of 7. but thats just my opinion :3
  -00:58:249 (2,3,4,5) - Is a little hard to read for Hard in my Opinion
  -00:15:013 (3) - im really not sure about theese, They seem kind Hard... but i dont have any suggestion on how to improve that :/ might have to ask a more experienced mapper about that.

-Sandoras- wrote:

Hard

• 
  -Maybe Use Ar 8 instead of 7. but thats just my opinion :3 I'm not sure about this, will ask other modders
  -00:58:249 (2,3,4,5) - Is a little hard to read for Hard in my Opinion
  -00:15:013 (3) - im really not sure about theese, They seem kind Hard... but i dont have any suggestion on how to improve that :/ might have to ask a more experienced mapper about that. yeah i know your means, 1/8 sliders are not easy to play, but i can't ignore these sounds;w; let me wait for other modders' ideas

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

another
00:27:895 (5) - 这个应该接着往回走, 不应该跳过来才对啊233 哈哈，这都被你发现了，不过我觉得那么更难读图了;w;就这样吧
00:34:867 (4,5) - 最后那么叠着多别扭, 这样不就可以了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2817523 啊 其实叠那三个是故意的o.o
00:42:190 (6) - 把这个改成短滑条往前(左上)刺出去, 似乎好一点 哦豁 不错不错，好主意
01:43:955 (1,2) - 这两个的位置差了两个像素( 爷爷。。这都能发现。改了
01:43:602 (1,2) - 我觉得这样好一点.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2817528 这里就不改了，有点overmap
guy's extra挺好的

hard
00:58:778 (5) - 这个太莫名了 很容易断.. 上面那位也这么说233,，确实不知道怎么改啊，1/8音太明显了。。如果还有人觉得蛋疼我就重做下这块儿吧。
02:06:013 (2) - blanket 厚(

-Sandoras- wrote:

SPOILER

AIR's Normal

• 00:21:190 (3) - maybe make the slider like this. one tick less, but the flow gets better imo
  -00:33:896 (4) - Does this slider have the red Dot intentionally? because all others are just curved normally keep
  -00:47:308 (2) - Curve this slider slightly upwards
  -00:48:719 (5) - Maybe make this one like this
  -00:55:072 (1,2,3) - I'd do it like this
  -01:24:013 (4) - Curve this one in the other direction
  -01:28:955 (3) - make this on a wave slider
  -01:39:543 (3) - this one seems a little bit awkward
  -01:42:366 (3) - put it a bit lower and curve it slightly in the other direction
  -01:47:308 (1) - curve in other direction
  -01:48:013 (2) - a little bit lower

Euny wrote:

SPOILER

• AIR's Normal

1. 00:05:484 (3) - place it to x244y288 for better blanket with previous note? done
2. 00:06:366 (4) - i recommend more curvy for this.done
   
3. 00:28:955 (4) - move last point to x244y44 for better blanket?
4. 01:07:778 (1,2) - i think this pattern is doesn't fit good for tempo. try this?(patterns are your choice!)
   
   

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

SPOILER

[AIR's Normal]
00:57:719 (1) - 貌似最低难度转盘离下个note不能这么短时间

1. No kiai at all? ; ;
2. Hitsounds seem awfully low in all diffs, some more than others

1. 00:05:484 (3) - ctrl+g flows waaay better
2. 00:07:072 (1) - this might touch some HP bars
3. 00:17:661 (6,1) - blanket and then make 00:18:366 (2) - blanket with 00:17:308 (5) -
4. 00:19:425 (4) - curve left or fix the angle with 00:19:778 (5) -
5. 00:25:425 (3) - reverse curvature? (curve down)
6. 00:42:366 (1,2) - imo this should be a blanket so 2 doesn't overlap with 00:44:484 (2) -
7. 00:52:249 (1,2) - blanket spam but blankets just look better in this cases xD
8. 01:20:484 (3,1,2) - I think this might be a little too much for a normal, 2 reverse sliders would be best, but that's up to you
9. 01:26:131 (3,4,1) - 3 blanket with 4, 4 blanket with 1

1. 00:00:719 (1,1) - try to center the second slider with the first one's slider end
2. 00:02:661 (5,1) - imperfect stack
3. 00:03:366 - I think it would still be good to add a note here
4. 00:03:543 (3) - NC
5. 00:05:484 (1,3) - blanket, then readkjusting 00:06:013 (2) -
6. 00:09:190 (3) - without a NC here spacing between 00:08:308 (1,2,3) - is really confusing for a hard
7. 00:32:661 (2,3) - stack?
8. 00:55:425 (2) - stack with 00:55:602 (3) - and then keep 00:56:131 (4) - ? I think that would be interesting, though it might confuse some
9. 01:14:484 (3,1) - imo it could blanket, unless you really want 01:14:837 (1,2) - to be copies
10. 01:48:366 (5) - if this is a blanket, it could be better
11. 01:51:896 (2,4) - blanket, would also flow better with 01:52:602 (5) -

1. 00:06:896 (7) - make the distance even between 00:06:720 (6,7,1) - because 7 is really hard to read
2. 00:58:602 (5) - NC
3. 01:18:367 (2,3) - this overlap is really ugly, imo a stack would be better
4. 01:30:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should separate them in 2 as you did in the hard
5. 01:34:249 (5,6) - ok this is freaking confusing at first xD and really hard to get right, not sure if Insane / Another material
6. 01:37:072 (5,6) - ^
7. 02:06:719 - rip note 2015-2015 ; ;

1. 00:07:778 (5,6,1) - flow here could be better, suggestion: (yes I change the BG to test xd)
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:55:072 (1) - not sure about this reverse, since it's the only thing for me that stands out in the whole map, imo it should be replace by a single note at 00:55:425 - and ofc the normal slider before
3. Welp, I was expecting not to find many problems in this diff, and that's exactly what I found lol

Euny wrote:

your request! came from my queue

• General

1. intentional? or missed? anyways, you have to pick kiai part. add kiai all diffs.

ok

• Hard

1. 00:18:366 (1) - remove NC and add finish and remove clap at the slider's head. its much better for music
2. 00:19:778 (1) - add finish and remove clap at the slider's head.
3. 00:21:190 (1) - add finish and remove clap
4. 00:35:308 (1) - add finish and remove other hit sounds at the slider's head no
5. 00:46:602 (2) - NC swap

fixed others

• Another

1. 00:05:484 (1,2,5) - make perfect stack(just 1grid sorry..!)
2. 00:07:602 (4,6) - fix blanket
3. 00:43:249 (1,2) - make perfect stack
4. 01:27:190 (5) - add finish at the slider's tail

All fixed

mrturtle99 wrote:

Hi from my modding queue~

Hard

00:03:543 (3) - might wanna NC this, as the music starts a different riff here ok
00:27:543 (4,1,2,4) - these you might consider NC'ing as it seems there is a different note every triplet no
00:38:837 (4,1,2,4) - ^

Another

Sheesh the massive difficulty increase
01:49:955 (2) - might to NC this ok

Sorry for short mod, but not much I can see here that I think needs changed. Nice mapping

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

[general]
这bg好像凸点了，可能小孩子看了把持不住 wpcap，完了咨询下bn

[Another]
怎么感觉比extra还难打orz，可以考虑下od7.5 好
00:00:720 (1) - 我觉得应该是从这里开始的00:00:808 其实是在他们之间。。还是决定大白线开始吧
00:06:190 (4) - 放到303,199附近flow好像好点 好主意
00:09:896 (1) - 这个用1/2好点，红线那里有个音，而且这不是长音 不，跟鼓
00:47:661 (5) - 可以考虑叠一下后面的6 。。叠6上太难看了。
00:55:602 (3,4,5) - 这里容易给人以为3,4是1/2 所以感觉4,5间距离再加大点好点（或者减少3,4的距离），后面两组也是 找了几个人试图都没问题。一般能打这图的这种应该ok

[Hard]
AR7.5吧 7太低了，毕竟有170bpm 好
00:00:808这里开始，同上面说的
00:02:837 (1) - 没叠好(360,240) 好
00:18:013 (1) - 这个没必要1个就nc吧 手误。。后面的都改了
00:31:072 (1,3) - hard玩这种梗会不会凶残点。。。我觉得尾巴叠一起就好 好
00:54:013 (2,3) - 感觉移到(93,300)好点，现在4被遮挡太多，hard来说有点不人道 改了

GL

Milhofo wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[Hard]

1. 00:00:719 (1,1) - try to center the second slider with the first one's slider end i didn‘t take your mean
2. 00:02:661 (5,1) - imperfect stack fixed
3. 00:03:366 - I think it would still be good to add a note here no
4. 00:03:543 (3) - NC ok
5. 00:05:484 (1,3) - blanket, then readkjusting 00:06:013 (2) - no, it's unnecessary imo
6. 00:09:190 (3) - without a NC here spacing between 00:08:308 (1,2,3) - is really confusing for a hard ok
7. 00:32:661 (2,3) - stack?
8. 00:55:425 (2) - stack with 00:55:602 (3) - and then keep 00:56:131 (4) - ? I think that would be interesting, though it might confuse some sorry i don't want to do any changes at here;w;
9. 01:14:484 (3,1) - imo it could blanket, unless you really want 01:14:837 (1,2) - to be copies
10. 01:48:366 (5) - if this is a blanket, it could be better done
11. 01:51:896 (2,4) - blanket, would also flow better with 01:52:602 (5) - umh...looks better，but i don't like this flow between 01:51:896 (2,3,4) -

[Another]

1. 00:06:896 (7) - make the distance even between 00:06:720 (6,7,1) - because 7 is really hard to read no
2. 00:58:602 (5) - NC ok
3. 01:18:367 (2,3) - this overlap is really ugly, imo a stack would be better no
4. 01:30:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should separate them in 2 as you did in the hard in fact i dont like that shape
5. 01:34:249 (5,6) - ok this is freaking confusing at first xD and really hard to get right, not sure if Insane / Another material I made this like 01:37:072 (5,6) - , so i dont want to make difference
6. 01:37:072 (5,6) - ^ i like this...sorry
7. 02:06:719 - rip note 2015-2015 ; ; fixed

Love the song and the set, gl!

1. 00:13:955 (4,1) - Is this jump really necessary?
   Looks out of place imo
2. 00:54:366 (3) - Not properly stacked with (2)

1. 00:42:896 (3,1) - This stack plays really really bad. In such a fast paced pattern, breaking the flow so roughly is really a bad idea o.o
2. 01:18:367 (2,3) - (2) overlaps (3) way too much making it barely visible and therefore confusing to play.

1. wow lol

1. 00:08:484 (3) - I feel this part looks crowded by sliders. You should consider making more distancelike this. Also please try aligning this parts parallel to each other by moving the last point of the slider a grid to the right.it looks better to me!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:57:719 (1,1) - You must use more break time between spinner and slider since it's easiest diff. It's too soon after spinner to me. So you must remove this slider or remake this part for beginner.
3. 01:10:072 (5) - How about moving this slider down a bit for natural flow ? it would be better to me.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:10:690 - add a short break time pls.

1. 01:55:778 - 緑線が2本重なっているので1つ削除してください。
2. 00:51:190 (2) - Hard difficultyなのでこれはプレイヤーが混乱してしまう恐れがあります。スライダーの始点の番号が半分くらい見えるまで移動してください。
3. 01:15:366 (2,3,4,1) - 2つ連続で異なった間隔の音を重ねるのは混乱を招くと思います。どちらかを移動してわかりやすくしてください。

1. 01:55:778 - 緑線が2本重なっているので1つ削除してください。
2. 00:26:131 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - こういうったnew comboのパターンはどうでしょう？より曲にフィットすると思います。
   
3. 00:32:132 (1) - ^
4. 02:01:425 (1) - スライダーの始点にfinishを追加？
5. 02:03:543 (1,2,3,4,1) - 静かなパートなので、ここのジャンプは間隔が大きすぎると思います。すこし間隔を減らしてください。

1. 00:18:013 (7,8,1) - (1)に強い音があるので、全部同じ間隔で置くより(8,1)の間でジャンプ作ったほうが音にあってると思います！
2. 00:18:366 (1,2) - ここ3/4 + 1/2 よりも00:12:719 (1,2,3) - ,00:15:543 (1,2,3) - こういう音取りのほうがたくさん音も取れて楽しいと思う！
3. 00:23:484 (1) - ここはnew combo入れなくてもいい気がする
4. 00:26:484 (1) - ^
5. 00:29:661 (4) - 逆にここはここからnew comboじゃないかな？
6. 00:34:602 (1,2,3,4,1) - マイナス5～10度曲げたい！前からのジャンプでここが縦の直線だとちょっとやりづらいかも
7. 00:59:661 (2,1) - kiai time だからもうちょっと音とってもいいと思う！
8. 01:04:602 (7,8,1) - 上記と同じ提案 00:18:013 (7,8,1) -
9. 01:10:249 (1) - ここもnew comboいらないかも・・・00:23:308 (1,1,2) -

Euny wrote:

• Guy's Extra

1. 01:27:543 (1) - add finish at the slider's head. i think much better for tempo. - fixed
2. can't mod ! T.T too perfect to see.

Milhofo wrote:

[Guy's Extra]

1. 00:07:778 (5,6,1) - flow here could be better, suggestion: (yes I change the BG to test xd) - sorry no change ;;
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:55:072 (1) - not sure about this reverse, since it's the only thing for me that stands out in the whole map, imo it should be replace by a single note at 00:55:425 - and ofc the normal slider before - I prefer the current one :3
3. Welp, I was expecting not to find many problems in this diff, and that's exactly what I found lol

alacat wrote:

[がいまん]

1. 00:18:013 (7,8,1) - (1)に強い音があるので、全部同じ間隔で置くより(8,1)の間でジャンプ作ったほうが音にあってると思います！ - なるほどいいですね！
2. 00:18:366 (1,2) - ここ3/4 + 1/2 よりも00:12:719 (1,2,3) - ,00:15:543 (1,2,3) - こういう音取りのほうがたくさん音も取れて楽しいと思う！ - 確かに音取れるんですが、1/4スライダージャンプ後の余韻としてわざと3/4スライダーを入れているのです・・・
3. 00:23:484 (1) - ここはnew combo入れなくてもいい気がする - ホンマや・・・
4. 00:26:484 (1) - ^ - okk
5. 00:29:661 (4) - 逆にここはここからnew comboじゃないかな？ - おっけーです
6. 00:34:602 (1,2,3,4,1) - マイナス5～10度曲げたい！前からのジャンプでここが縦の直線だとちょっとやりづらいかも - ok,ついでにちょっと曲げてみました。
7. 00:59:661 (2,1) - kiai time だからもうちょっと音とってもいいと思う！ - 配置変えてnote入れてみました～
8. 01:04:602 (7,8,1) - 上記と同じ提案 00:18:013 (7,8,1) - okk
9. 01:10:249 (1) - ここもnew comboいらないかも・・・00:23:308 (1,1,2) - ラジャー

Milhofo wrote:

[AIR's Normal]

1. 00:05:484 (3) - ctrl+g flows waaay better done
2. 00:07:072 (1) - this might touch some HP bars
3. 00:17:661 (6,1) - blanket and then make 00:18:366 (2) - blanket with 00:17:308 (5) - done
4. 00:19:425 (4) - curve left or fix the angle with 00:19:778 (5) -
5. 00:25:425 (3) - reverse curvature? (curve down)
6. 00:42:366 (1,2) - imo this should be a blanket so 2 doesn't overlap with 00:44:484 (2) - keep
7. 00:52:249 (1,2) - blanket spam but blankets just look better in this cases xD
8. 01:20:484 (3,1,2) - I think this might be a little too much for a normal, 2 reverse sliders would be best, but that's up to you
9. 01:26:131 (3,4,1) - 3 blanket with 4, 4 blanket with 1 keep

alacat wrote:

[AIR's Normal]

1. 00:08:484 (3) - I feel this part looks crowded by sliders. You should consider making more distancelike this. Also please try aligning this parts parallel to each other by moving the last point of the slider a grid to the right.it looks better to me! done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:57:719 (1,1) - You must use more break time between spinner and slider since it's easiest diff. It's too soon after spinner to me. So you must remove this slider or remake this part for beginner. done
3. 01:10:072 (5) - How about moving this slider down a bit for natural flow ? it would be better to me. √
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:10:690 - add a short break time pls. √

Kurai wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:13:955 (4,1) - Is this jump really necessary? fixed
   Looks out of place imo
2. 00:54:366 (3) - Not properly stacked with (2) done

[Another]

1. 00:42:896 (3,1) - This stack plays really really bad. In such a fast paced pattern, breaking the flow so roughly is really a bad idea o.o no
2. 01:18:367 (2,3) - (2) overlaps (3) way too much making it barely visible and therefore confusing to play. sorry i don't want to make any changes at hereT_T

Thank you kurai~

alacat wrote:

こんにちは みすずさん :3 日本語でModしますが、もし英語のほうがよければ言ってください！まあ、どっちも苦手ですから、同じさあ

[Hard]

1. 01:55:778 - 緑線が2本重なっているので1つ削除してください。fixed
2. 00:51:190 (2) - Hard difficultyなのでこれはプレイヤーが混乱してしまう恐れがあります。スライダーの始点の番号が半分くらい見えるまで移動してください。 スライダーのデザインを変えました
3. 01:15:366 (2,3,4,1) - 2つ連続で異なった間隔の音を重ねるのは混乱を招くと思います。どちらかを移動してわかりやすくしてください。ok

[Another]

1. 01:55:778 - 緑線が2本重なっているので1つ削除してください。fixed
2. 00:26:131 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - こういうったnew comboのパターンはどうでしょう？より曲にフィットすると思います。
   修正しました
3. 00:32:132 (1) - ^　
4. 02:01:425 (1) - スライダーの始点にfinishを追加？ok
5. 02:03:543 (1,2,3,4,1) - 静かなパートなので、ここのジャンプは間隔が大きすぎると思います。すこし間隔を減らしてください。ok

がんばれ～

Mei wrote:

dajiahao，我是路过的