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TRUSTRICK - FLYING FAFNIR (Anime OP Version)

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Maboyu
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Maboyu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月10日 at 下午 07:11:24

Artist: TRUSTRICK
Title: FLYING FAFNIR (Anime OP Version)
Source: Juuou Mujin no Fafnir
Tags: 銃皇無尽のファフニール opening 神田沙也加 Kanda Sayaka IamKwaN Amamiya Yuko skystar
BPM: 143
Filesize: 19960kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.01 stars, 216 notes)
  2. Insane (3.57 stars, 261 notes)
  3. KwaN's Easy (1.49 stars, 96 notes)
  4. Normal (1.8 stars, 128 notes)
  5. Skystar's Insane (4.14 stars, 363 notes)
Download: TRUSTRICK - FLYING FAFNIR (Anime OP Version)
Download: TRUSTRICK - FLYING FAFNIR (Anime OP Version) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 銃皇無尽のファフニール Opening Rank!
Easy by IamKwaN 100%
Normal by me 100%
Hard by me 100%
Insane by me 100%
Insane by Amamiya Yuko 100%
video by Shad0w1and
Zweib's lol diff

If downloading before 2015/2/10,please redownload !

Last edited by Maboyu , edited 49 times in total.
One Miss
94 posts
Joined June 2014
One Miss
Random Mod:3



General


  1. Normal diff is fine IMO
  2. The hard is pretty much solid as well(could use a little more consistency)
  3. The insane has a ridiculous amount of SV changes and abnormal DS.(maby a bit overmapped at parts as well)
  4. Your insane is shorter than your other two diffs. Make sure that all your diffs have the same length or it wont get ranked
SPOILER
Hard
  1. 00:22:568 (1) - minor suggestion, maby add an inheriting section here to lower hitsound volume for when the song gets quiet(if you do, do it for all diffs)
  2. 01:12:917 (1,2,3) - here you have DS of 1.2-1.2-2.94, try to keep DS more consistent because here-01:14:596 (1,2,3) - is the exact same beat only with 1.2 all across(look at entire mapset for similar problems just using this one as an example)
SPOILER
Skystars Insane

  1. 00:21:624 (2,1,2) - this overlap is hard to aim and read i would advise you change it
  2. 00:25:190 (2) - try to avoid starting sliders on a blue tick unless it follows an existing note in the song
  3. 00:31:379 (2,3) - this DS is waaay to far
  4. 00:40:924 (3) - ^same
  5. 00:43:022 (2) - this overlap is abit hard to read
  6. 00:46:903 (1) - same here
  7. 00:49:701 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1) - GL getting ranked with all these SV changes, i think they are kinda cool but you might get shot down
  8. 00:55:575 (2) - This is not snapped to a beat
  9. 00:55:994 (2) - ^same
  10. 00:56:973 (4,5) - reaaly hard to read again these overlaps are just a bit too clustered
  11. 01:00:120 (3,4) - same^(not as bad though)
  12. 01:03:057 (2,3) - unstack these or stack them on 01:03:267 (4) -
  13. 01:13:232 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - not sure what this is following in the song, maby im just not hearing it><
  14. 01:23:267 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - same thing as before, GL i think they are cool nonetheless(maby a bit overdone) but cool
  15. All and all you had some good ideas but follow the song more and less odd looking overlaps/SV changes

Didnt do Normal diff because i think its fine as is.
Good luck! hopefully i could help:D
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
No kds
音频杂音很重。。为什么BAT和好多mapper都喜欢这么重口的提升音量。。。都破音了。。。
还是把和视频对应的mp3给你吧...用不用就看你了。offset和视频一样的
http://puu.sh/eRkmf/0bb824018e.mp3
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,122 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
mod as requested :)

[Info]
  1. Red: Unrankable Issues
  2. Bold: Highly Recommended
  3. Black: Personal Suggestions

[General]
  1. Maybe you need to add an easier Insane since Skystar's seems a bit hard.
  2. Add "神田沙也加" "Kanda Sayaka" to tags (vocal).

[Skystar's Insane]
  1. 00:11:029 (2,2,2,2) - I heard no sounds at these time points. Consider deleting them.
  2. 00:18:582 (2,3,4,1) - Try increasing distance a bit. http://puu.sh/eWtq5/d0f7a5d3b6.jpg
  3. 00:19:840 (1) - 240|48 might be better, for better blanket with 00:19:631 (2) -. (adjust objects which come next)
  4. 00:38:092 (2) - 240|268, the same reason as above.
  5. 00:58:652 (1,2,3) - Keeping 0.3x distance (the same with 00:58:127 (2,3) - and many more similar patterns) is better.
  6. 01:04:526 (1,2) - Why not try this? Heavy drums usually lead to a jump imo. http://puu.sh/eWviP/6dcf29623d.jpg
  7. 01:05:575 (2,4) - I prefer ctrl+g each, here.
  8. 01:19:001 (2,4) - ^
  9. 01:25:085 (1) - Not perfect star? Try to organize it better lol.

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:784 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks a bit messy. Consider simplifying this into 3/4s. http://puu.sh/eWx4P/3cd39bf58a.jpg
  2. 00:07:463 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Try changing to some sliders? o.o This pattern seems odd.
  3. 00:47:743 (1,2) - blanket better.
  4. 00:51:519 (1,2) - nazi again, 1 grid down.
  5. 00:52:777 (1,2) - Will it look nicer? http://puu.sh/eWxmp/234007da9c.jpg
  6. 00:56:134 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:01:169 (1,2) - ^
  8. 01:23:826 (3,4) - 1/3 drums here, not 1/4.

[Normal]
  1. 00:15:435 (1) - Add a 1/2 slider here.
  2. 00:54:456 (4) - Try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/eWxVZ/b9da2cb20f.jpg
  3. 00:57:812 (4) - ^
  4. 01:09:980 (2) - 2nd anchor 1 gird down, to make it parallel with 01:11:239 (3) - .
  5. 01:12:078 (4) - Maybe this can be more natural. But it depends on yourself since if you do this, it is hard to adjust objects next. http://puu.sh/eWyrJ/dab21f459e.jpg
  6. 01:23:826 (3) - As I mentioned in Hard, I'm not sure whether this slider should stop here instead of 01:24:526.

good luck~~ >.<
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
http://puu.sh/eWCoz.rar

Adjust a bit the song title as shown here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8aq3BovqiVY
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Crystal wrote:

mod as requested :)

[Info]
  1. Red: Unrankable Issues
  2. Bold: Highly Recommended
  3. Black: Personal Suggestions

[General]
  1. Maybe you need to add an easier Insane since Skystar's seems a bit hard.
  2. Add "神田沙也加" "Kanda Sayaka" to tags (vocal).ok add!

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:784 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks a bit messy. Consider simplifying this into 3/4s. http://puu.sh/eWx4P/3cd39bf58a.jpg fixed
  2. 00:07:463 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Try changing to some sliders? o.o This pattern seems odd.
  3. 00:47:743 (1,2) - blanket better. fixed
  4. 00:51:519 (1,2) - nazi again, 1 grid down. fixed
  5. 00:52:777 (1,2) - Will it look nicer? http://puu.sh/eWxmp/234007da9c.jpg fixed
  6. 00:56:134 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  7. 01:01:169 (1,2) - ^ 這個先這樣吧!
  8. 01:23:826 (3,4) - 1/3 drums here, not 1/4. fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:15:435 (1) - Add a 1/2 slider here. add!
  2. 00:54:456 (4) - Try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/eWxVZ/b9da2cb20f.jpg 這個先保留!
  3. 00:57:812 (4) - ^ ^
  4. 01:09:980 (2) - 2nd anchor 1 gird down, to make it parallel with 01:11:239 (3) - . fixed
  5. 01:12:078 (4) - Maybe this can be more natural. But it depends on yourself since if you do this, it is hard to adjust objects next. http://puu.sh/eWyrJ/dab21f459e.jpg good idea i change :3
  6. 01:23:826 (3) - As I mentioned in Hard, I'm not sure whether this slider should stop here instead of 01:24:526. fixed


good luck~~ >.<
謝謝星星>.<
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

dogsticks wrote:

Random Mod:3



General


  1. Normal diff is fine IMO
  2. The hard is pretty much solid as well(could use a little more consistency)
  3. The insane has a ridiculous amount of SV changes and abnormal DS.(maby a bit overmapped at parts as well)
  4. Your insane is shorter than your other two diffs. Make sure that all your diffs have the same length or it wont get ranked
SPOILER
Hard
  1. 00:22:568 (1) - minor suggestion, maby add an inheriting section here to lower hitsound volume for when the song gets quiet(if you do, do it for all diffs) ok fixed
  2. 01:12:917 (1,2,3) - here you have DS of 1.2-1.2-2.94, try to keep DS more consistent because here-01:14:596 (1,2,3) - is the exact same beat only with 1.2 all across(look at entire mapset for similar problems just using this one as an example)
    I need to think about this


Didnt do Normal diff because i think its fine as is.
Good luck! hopefully i could help:D
thanks you :3
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
友情贊助，In Game :)

5.5我試試看，畢竟有點超出我的能力

[General]
Skystar's Insane 自己的Ai mod點開來處理掉，我已經開了1/12幫你check了還是被Ai mod抓出來
http://puu.sh/eZlRx/5d5975f0ae.png
[Easy]
沒問題
[Normal]
00:02:428 (3) - 後半段彎曲一下，跟著Flow http://puu.sh/eZmvn/6557282c91.jpg
00:17:533 (3) - 複製00:15:854 (1) 然後180度迴轉感覺比較好，要不然00:18:372 (5,1) - 感覺接得很勉強
00:26:554 (2) - 刪掉circle，和00:22:568 (1,2) - 一樣
00:27:393 - circle
00:51:519 (4,5) - 強烈建議circle疊在slider頭上
01:16:903 (2,3) - 我自己看這段區域是跟詞，合成slider比較好
01:23:826 (2) - 彎好看一點吧 http://puu.sh/eZoq7/5cb2271f54.jpg
[Hard]
00:35:155 (1,2,3) - 為何不跟著2 circle + 1 3連打的拍子?? Hard出現1/4 slider很反感
01:01:589 (2,3) - 平行
01:08:302 (4,5,6) - 大大也擺好看一點吧 http://puu.sh/eZpal/810c00d696.jpg
01:23:197 (1,2) - 合成1 slider感覺比較順
[Skystar's Insane]
老實說我很討厭低BPM裡有這種Style的Insane，大大喜歡就好，我會幫你Fix小細節的set
00:00:750 (1) - 頭尾whistle
00:01:798 (2) - whistle
00:02:008 (3) - ^, 頭
00:03:057 (3) - whistle
00:04:106 (1,2,3,1) - 同上
00:06:413 (3) - whistle
這裡要修就修全部，我幫大大配好的，要不然這裡好空，打起來沒感覺
00:09:141 (2) - 尾巴彎曲點移到 120|364 ，包好circle
00:15:435 (1) - y+3，三個circle排正
00:16:274 (2,1) - 包好 http://puu.sh/eZr5J/5b64fb9451.jpg
00:19:631 (2,1) - 旋轉-3度微調，不要貼到00:20:260 (2) http://puu.sh/eZrhB/593784f337.jpg
00:23:302 (1) - 移到328|204；00:23:407 (2) - 移到304|272
00:26:659 (2) - 移到198|240，感覺這樣的連打比之前疊在一起來的順暢許多
00:28:547 (2) - 包好circle
00:38:092 (2) - x+2，包好
00:52:673 (2) - 疊在00:52:777 (1) 頭上，之後接續暴走Flow，感覺這樣比較合適
01:08:722 (1) - 包好喔
01:25:085 (1) - 我覺得做成手杖的心型不錯...
[Zweib's lol]
和Sky一樣，這首歌不適合做Extra，我一樣幫大大看
00:02:008 - 00:05:365 - 我是習慣跟歌詞的Mapper，我不管怎麼聽，大大這段開頭沒有很明顯的聲音可以跟(鋼琴聲就2.3聲而已)，強烈建議這裡不要空著，要擺頓點找別的地方
00:16:169 (2) - 移到352|104，三角形沒擺好
00:19:840 (4) - 彎曲點沒意義，刪掉變成直的
01:05:784 (5) - 往下挪一點，測試的時候貼到血條了
後面我沒辦法幫忙了，抱歉 :(

祝各位大大好運，早日RK :)
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

m1223961117 wrote:

友情贊助，In Game :)

5.5我試試看，畢竟有點超出我的能力

[Normal]
00:02:428 (3) - 後半段彎曲一下，跟著Flow http://puu.sh/eZmvn/6557282c91.jpg 這個就先這樣吧!
00:17:533 (3) - 複製00:15:854 (1) 然後180度迴轉感覺比較好，要不然00:18:372 (5,1) - 感覺接得很勉強 ok改了
00:26:554 (2) - 刪掉circle，和00:22:568 (1,2) - 一樣 好 刪了
00:27:393 - circle ok補上!
00:51:519 (4,5) - 強烈建議circle疊在slider頭上 這個也改了!
01:16:903 (2,3) - 我自己看這段區域是跟詞，合成slider比較好 聽起來怪怪....這個不改!
01:23:826 (2) - 彎好看一點吧 http://puu.sh/eZoq7/5cb2271f54.jpg fixed
[Hard]
00:35:155 (1,2,3) - 為何不跟著2 circle + 1 3連打的拍子?? Hard出現1/4 slider很反感 ok改了!
01:01:589 (2,3) - 平行 fixed
01:08:302 (4,5,6) - 大大也擺好看一點吧 http://puu.sh/eZpal/810c00d696.jpg 好!
01:23:197 (1,2) - 合成1 slider感覺比較順 這個是故意單點的



祝各位大大好運，早日RK :)
thanks you!^^
Last edited by Maboyu , edited 1 time in total.
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
[Skystar]
00:09:141 (2) - blanket
00:12:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 有点听不懂
00:15:645 (3) - 弯度太大了
00:20:680 (5) - ^
00:25:190 (2) - 虽然我是无所谓但总觉得这种会被qat抓啊
00:50:819 (1,1) - 这能打？
01:19:210 (3,4) - 是不是和01:18:791 (1,2) - 区分一下比较好
扭曲梗玩得飞起啊 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2628817
[Insane]
00:21:729 (2) - add normal sampleset at head
00:28:022 (2) - 没包好
00:38:092 (2) - ^
00:35:155 (3,4,5,6) - overmap
01:01:169 (1,2) - keep same
01:06:204 (1,2,3,4) - 这梗看起来好蠢……
kiai感觉能加不少finish
[Hard]
00:15:435 (4,5,6) - 换成折返滑条吧感觉节奏有点乱
00:24:246 (1) - 尾部右歪一点
00:32:638 (1) - 尾部歪一点
00:51:729 (2) - 扭曲莫名其妙
01:16:064 (4,5,1) - 手工堆叠不然会偏移
[Normal]
00:39:351 (1) - 弯度大了
00:47:743 (4) - 弯度大了
[Kwan]
00:41:868 (4) - 00:48:582 (4) - 这重叠没问题么
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
先說聲不好意思不過希望你可以回完ts8zs的mod更新完我再看這樣,
個人的堅持 XDDD, 真的不方便我再直接看~
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
Ah, sorry for no change, I do the shape like this to reflect drums at both white and red tick.
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:21:729 (2) - add normal sampleset at head 好補上了
00:28:022 (2) - 没包好 fixed
00:38:092 (2) - ^ 感覺還好...
00:35:155 (3,4,5,6) - overmap 這個先這樣...
01:01:169 (1,2) - keep same fixed
01:06:204 (1,2,3,4) - 这梗看起来好蠢……haha 改了XD
kiai感觉能加不少finish 我露了一堆finish..現在都補上了
[Hard]
00:15:435 (4,5,6) - 换成折返滑条吧感觉节奏有点乱 好，換了折返滑条
00:24:246 (1) - 尾部右歪一点 好!
00:32:638 (1) - 尾部歪一点 ^
00:51:729 (2) - 扭曲莫名其妙 不太會扭.......
01:16:064 (4,5,1) - 手工堆叠不然会偏移 fixed
[Normal]
00:39:351 (1) - 弯度大了 ok fixed
00:47:743 (4) - 弯度大了 這個不改了
謝謝包子啊~~~~
update me and Amamiya Yuko diff
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
雖然這樣說不過我還是不能保證我的mod是好的
只是希望不會有重覆到的內容...畢竟同時看到一樣的問題應該會覺得很煩吧 ww

KwaN's Easy
00:09:141 (3) - out of the mapping range?
00:26:344 (2) - slider start and end add clap, i know it's intention but still suggest :?
00:41:868 (4) - ahh...i don't think it's okay in Easy...maybe need more opinions

Normal
00:18:372 (3,1) - 這兩個平行看起來比較整齊
01:04:526 (2) - 讓轉折點跟01:02:847 (1) 在一樣的位置

Hard
00:51:519 (1,2) - 可以往下一格重疊在00:49:701 (1) - 的位置
00:54:036 (4,5) - 覺得ctrl+g更好,在00:54:036有一個重音,距離應該可以拉遠,不過主要還是看你怎麼想
00:57:393 (4,5) - ^
01:05:365 (4) - 往下彎曲似乎打得比較順~

Insane
00:35:155 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這連擊擺得更圓滑會更好看 :?
00:50:540 (4,5) - 強烈建議ctrl+g, 打起來比較順
01:20:680 (4,5) - ^

做的還不錯,就是flow和有點亂而已 (我好像沒資格說

抱歉我真的不會抓Insane難度之上的難度 :o
然後這首歌最近好像滿多人做阿,新風潮?? XDDD
大概只有這些, Good Luck~~
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

bigfrog wrote:

雖然這樣說不過我還是不能保證我的mod是好的
只是希望不會有重覆到的內容...畢竟同時看到一樣的問題應該會覺得很煩吧 ww

Normal
00:18:372 (3,1) - 這兩個平行看起來比較整齊 這個是故意放這樣的
01:04:526 (2) - 讓轉折點跟01:02:847 (1) 在一樣的位置 ok fixed

Hard
00:51:519 (1,2) - 可以往下一格重疊在00:49:701 (1) - 的位置 這個也是故意的
00:54:036 (4,5) - 覺得ctrl+g更好,在00:54:036有一個重音,距離應該可以拉遠,不過主要還是看你怎麼想 這個就放這樣吧!
00:57:393 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:05:365 (4) - 往下彎曲似乎打得比較順~ 好!往下彎曲

Insane
00:35:155 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這連擊擺得更圓滑會更好看 :? 好改了:3
00:50:540 (4,5) - 強烈建議ctrl+g, 打起來比較順 fixed
01:20:680 (4,5) - ^ 這個是左右對稱

做的還不錯,就是flow和有點亂而已 (我好像沒資格說

抱歉我真的不會抓Insane難度之上的難度 :o
然後這首歌最近好像滿多人做阿,新風潮?? XDDD
大概只有這些, Good Luck~~
謝謝bigfrog>.<
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
[KwaN's Easy]
  1. 00:09:141 (3) - 这尾巴也加一个drum-finish.虽然我知道这是故意的不过前后都有就这里没有还是怪怪的
  2. 00:26:344 (2) - 头尾漏了clap吗.-.
  3. 01:25:085 (3) - 这最后一个建议NC一下

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:498 (5) - 滑条头加一个clap，这里这音还挺重的.
  2. 01:06:204 (1) - 中间的finish换成clap？
  3. 00:17:533 (1) - 取消NC?这里没有特殊的音或者物件
  4. 01:13:756 (2,3) - 这两个并不平行啊，稍微调整一下

[Hard]
  1. 00:20:050 (3,4) - 这两个滑条都Ctrl+G一下感觉更舒服
  2. 00:49:701 (1) - 这个离前面间距大一点，毕竟中间

[Insane]
  1. 00:35:889 (10,1) - 简单insane里隔这么远有点坑吧。
  2. 01:21:729 (2,3) - 这跟前面间距太大了，而且又逆flow，建议往右移一点.:3，考虑到对称，还要对前面也调整一下
  3. 01:23:267 (1) - 这个滑条头应该是跟着01:23:197 - 这里这个音的吧
  4. 01:25:085 - 没用的绿线
  5. 01:25:295 (1) - 这个转盘可以早一点在01:25:295 (1) - 开始.-.

[Skystar's Insane]
  1. 00:07:463 - 这绿线没用
  2. 00:49:631 - ^
  3. 00:12:498 (1) - 滑条头加一个whistle好一点
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:12:498 (5) - 滑条头加一个clap，这里这音还挺重的. 好!
  2. 01:06:204 (1) - 中间的finish换成clap？ 這個音效不改了!
  3. 00:17:533 (1) - 取消NC?这里没有特殊的音或者物件 wa這邊之前換了一個滑條忘了改..... fixed
  4. 01:13:756 (2,3) - 这两个并不平行啊，稍微调整一下 感覺還好...><

[Hard]
  1. 00:20:050 (3,4) - 这两个滑条都Ctrl+G一下感觉更舒服 這個感覺還可以 ....
  2. 00:49:701 (1) - 这个离前面间距大一点，毕竟中间 稍微拉近一點了!

[Insane]
  1. 00:35:889 (10,1) - 简单insane里隔这么远有点坑吧。 ok fixed
  2. 01:21:729 (2,3) - 这跟前面间距太大了，而且又逆flow，建议往右移一点.:3，考虑到对称，还要对前面也调整一下 這個先保留!
  3. 01:23:267 (1) - 这个滑条头应该是跟着01:23:197 - 这里这个音的吧 這裡是1/3呀QAQ
  4. 01:25:085 - 没用的绿线 ok刪了!
  5. 01:25:295 (1) - 这个转盘可以早一点在01:25:295 (1) - 开始.-. ok 改了
謝謝Kagamine Ren呀>.<
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
Hello ~~

Form game pm

[KwaN's Easy]
  1. 00:07:463 (1,2) - 考慮把這兩個弄成跟相同形狀?
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:211 (1) - 考慮跟(5)擺平行?
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. Nor用AR5 Insane用AR9 , Hard就用Ar7吧 , 也比較好讀
  2. 00:20:470 (4) - Ctrl+G 把Jump留給(1)的重音
  3. 00:57:729 (2) - 感覺作對稱會比較好看
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:15:225 (6,7,8) - 讓這些Slider的起點距離統一一下比較好 , 1/4 Slider比較接近單Note , 所以間距用他的start來定玩起來會比較沒違和感
    SPOILER
  2. 00:16:274 (2) - 感覺Ctrl+G的Flow比較好看
  3. 00:35:994 (1) - 這個就跟前面一樣用0.7x重疊 , 或著加大成像00:37:673 (1,2) - 的距離吧 , 這邊碰到一點看起來感覺不是很工整
  4. 00:51:729(2) - 感覺這個Slider的形狀不是很好看 , 這種Slider我個人喜歡錨點分配平均一點的
    SPOILER
  5. 00:52:777 (1,2) - 因為是副歌段 , 所以還是推薦和後面一樣用1.5x的距離
  6. 01:23:826 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊的排列其實不是很好按 , 感覺有點拘束
    推薦配合音樂作個漸進式的加大間距Jump如何 ?
  1. 01:06:204 (1,2,3,4) - 這一段的Hitsound感覺特別突兀 , 要不要在01:09:561 (1,2,6) - 的開頭也加上Finish保持平衡?
    或是直接把這一段的Finish簡化
  2. 01:12:917 (1) - Add Finish ?
[Skystar's Insane]
  1. 我覺得沒什麼好抓的......
  2. 01:18:582 (2,1) - 這裡的Flow好像有一點不順
[Zweib's lol]
  1. lol

好爽的圖

Good luck !! :D

Edit : 你kd給的也太迅速wwww
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Xinchii wrote:

Hello ~~

Form game pm

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:211 (1) - 考慮跟(5)擺平行? 這邊的話是故意的:3
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. Nor用AR5 Insane用AR9 , Hard就用Ar7吧 , 也比較好讀 好改了!
  2. 00:20:470 (4) - Ctrl+G 把Jump留給(1)的重音 好!
  3. 00:57:729 (2) - 感覺作對稱會比較好看 這個也改了
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:15:225 (6,7,8) - 讓這些Slider的起點距離統一一下比較好 , 1/4 Slider比較接近單Note , 所以間距用他的start來定玩起來會比較沒違和感 fixed
    SPOILER
  2. 00:16:274 (2) - 感覺Ctrl+G的Flow比較好看 好!
  3. 00:35:994 (1) - 這個就跟前面一樣用0.7x重疊 , 或著加大成像00:37:673 (1,2) - 的距離吧 , 這邊碰到一點看起來感覺不是很工整 這邊我放0.7x重疊:3
  4. 00:51:729(2) - 感覺這個Slider的形狀不是很好看 , 這種Slider我個人喜歡錨點分配平均一點的 fixed
    SPOILER
  5. 00:52:777 (1,2) - 因為是副歌段 , 所以還是推薦和後面一樣用1.5x的距離 這個也改了
  6. 01:23:826 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊的排列其實不是很好按 , 感覺有點拘束
    推薦配合音樂作個漸進式的加大間距Jump如何 ? 好~~~!!!
  1. 01:06:204 (1,2,3,4) - 這一段的Hitsound感覺特別突兀 , 要不要在01:09:561 (1,2,6) - 的開頭也加上Finish保持平衡?
    或是直接把這一段的Finish簡化 這些+finish不怎麼好聽 所以不加><
  2. 01:12:917 (1) - Add Finish ? ok add




好爽的圖

Good luck !! :D

Edit : 你kd給的也太迅速wwww hahaXD
thanks Xinchii >.<
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
[KwaN's Easy]

generally, i looks like normal diff i think.

00:10:400 (4,1) - that pattern too hard for beginner. how about combine both?
00:41:868 (4) - that slider looks not good i think and little confusing. reduce at 00:42:288.
00:48:582 (4) - ^
00:56:134 (1) - remove finish at front.

[Normal]

00:19:211 (1) - make angle to same at 00:18:372 (5).
00:49:421 - add circle here.
01:06:204 (1) - remove finish at reserve. it`s not necessary..
01:07:463 (2) - ^ at front

[Hard]

00:15:435 (4) - make that slider to stream and add circle 00:15:750.

00:24:875 (2,3) - improve blanket this.
00:37:673 (1) - move to x:272 y:136. cause that`s more associate at 00:37:253 (4,5).
00:40:190 (4) - how about make like this?
01:06:624 (2) - remove finish here.
01:07:463 (4) - ^

[Insane]

00:31:484 - add circle here?
01:06:624 (2,4) - same like other diff. i don`t like
01:23:826 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make that balanced.
Ex

[Skystar's Insane]

00:02:428 (1) - sry,it looks ugly i think...how about change different?
00:05:784 (1) - ^
00:21:624 (2,1) - change NC, it`s confusing
00:51:099 (1,2) - lol....that`s too fast :o , reduce speed a little.

sorry, Zweib's lol is actually extra diff so i skip this :(
Good luck for the Rank~ ;)
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