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Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI

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Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, February 19, 2015 at 5:31:07 PM

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: FUBUKI
Source: Fleet Girls Collection KanColle Animation Sequence
Tags: ending TV Size kantai karia 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ
BPM: 180
Filesize: 16919kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.56 stars, 110 notes)
  2. Hard (3.28 stars, 265 notes)
  3. Insane (4.8 stars, 380 notes)
  4. Karia's Insane (4.55 stars, 337 notes)
  5. Normal (2.11 stars, 142 notes)
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2

DL link if you need it: http://bloodcat.com/osu/s/263033

Difficulties:

Insane by me
Karia's Insane by Karia
Hard by me
Normal by me
Easy by me

NEW bg, mp3, and hitsounds - 2/19/15. Redownload if you need to!

Thanks for modding!
No Dap
-Yuzuriha-inori-
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Last edited by Knotts , edited 57 times in total.
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
omg great song, can I Join Extra? ~ㅅ~
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

eINess wrote:

omg great song, can I Join Extra? ~ㅅ~
I don't think I'm going to have an extra this set actually. Sorry
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
oh.. ok :3

GL~
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
[General]
unrankably badly drawn boobs lol
SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. AR4 OD4 HP4 you're kidding me right????????????????
  2. 00:25:140 (3,4,1) - what is this NC?
  3. 00:29:140 - clap
  4. 01:01:473 - bass
  5. 01:22:140 (3,4) - perfect symmetry would look nicer
[Normal]
  1. HP OD too high for high bpm normal
  2. 00:29:140 - clap
  3. 00:10:140 (1) - don't really think this NC is needed
  4. 01:01:473 (4) - bass
  5. 01:08:473 (2) - this is 1/3 so just use a circle unless you wanna have complex rhythm change
    this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:140 (2) - do you want this HP bar touch
  2. 00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these are all 1/3
  3. 00:11:556 (1,1) - not gonna happen in hard diff
  4. 00:29:140 (2) - clap
  5. 00:55:973 (3) - needs to be stacked on 00:55:806 (2) - for intuitive play
  6. 01:04:473 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - these are 1/3 also
  7. 01:15:140 (3) - players will click earlier than it is. make 01:14:473 (2) - reverse?
  8. 01:16:473 (1) - really unnecessary NC here. 01:16:140 (1,1) - these two beats are in 1 group
  9. 01:17:806 (1) - same as above
  10. 01:17:973 (2) - you can start NC here, this is where the vocal starts and would make more sense since this has nothing to do with 01:17:806 (1) -
  11. 01:20:473 (4,1) - why do you not have doubled spacing here?
  12. 01:01:473 - bass
[Insane]
  1. please use 1/3 when it's 1/3 otherwise it's unrankable
  2. 00:29:140 - clap
  3. 01:01:473 - bass
  4. 01:25:140 (3,4,5,6,7) - manual stack for more safe movement? something like this
    SPOILER

those 1/4s on 1/3 must be fixed. they are unrnakable
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

No Dap wrote:

[General]
unrankably badly drawn boobs lol
SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. AR4 OD4 HP4 you're kidding me right???????????????? o
  2. 00:25:140 (3,4,1) - what is this NC?
  3. 00:29:140 - clap
  4. 01:01:473 - bass
  5. 01:22:140 (3,4) - perfect symmetry would look nicer
[Normal]
  1. HP OD too high for high bpm normal
  2. 00:29:140 - clap
  3. 00:10:140 (1) - don't really think this NC is needed
  4. 01:01:473 (4) - bass
  5. 01:08:473 (2) - this is 1/3 so just use a circle unless you wanna have complex rhythm change
    this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff i'll add some more later, too lazy rn
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:140 (2) - do you want this HP bar touch it doesn't touch
  2. 00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these are all 1/3
  3. 00:11:556 (1,1) - not gonna happen in hard diff
  4. 00:29:140 (2) - clap
  5. 00:55:973 (3) - needs to be stacked on 00:55:806 (2) - for intuitive play
  6. 01:04:473 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - these are 1/3 also would people let me keep this if i told them it was to play it simplified?
  7. 01:15:140 (3) - players will click earlier than it is. make 01:14:473 (2) - reverse?
  8. 01:16:473 (1) - really unnecessary NC here. 01:16:140 (1,1) - these two beats are in 1 group
  9. 01:17:806 (1) - same as above
  10. 01:17:973 (2) - you can start NC here, this is where the vocal starts and would make more sense since this has nothing to do with 01:17:806 (1) -
  11. 01:20:473 (4,1) - why do you not have doubled spacing here? I only double space where normal spacing would look ugly and here looks fine to me
  12. 01:01:473 - bass
[Insane]
  1. please use 1/3 when it's 1/3 otherwise it's unrankable
  2. 00:29:140 - clap
  3. 01:01:473 - bass
  4. 01:25:140 (3,4,5,6,7) - manual stack for more safe movement? something like this last stream feels fine to play to me
    SPOILER

those 1/4s on 1/3 must be fixed. they are unrnakable
Fixed whatever I didn't comment on. Thanks no daperino
-Yuzuriha
574 posts
Joined March 2012
-Yuzuriha
General

audio lead in is 1500 or 2000 plz



Insane

00:10:472 (3,4) - It is near DS . hard to see

00:12:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - volume is down req ~

00:20:473 (4) - chenge note req

01:02:973 (4,5) - i don like this type :<
try!
http://gyazo.com/66682ed590165da6f795cdf6028734ae

01:08:473 (6) - chenge Form req
http://gyazo.com/ce6527ba3d5bcc7a0a48cc66fb8733f8

01:16:140 (1) - remove NC ?
01:17:473 (1) - ^


Hard

00:17:390 (3) - remove note
00:21:390 (3) - ^
00:50:056 (4) - ^


Normal

good diff

fine ~ :)


Easy

good diff

fine~

--------------------------------------------------------

good luck ~ :)
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:

General

audio lead in is 1500 or 2000 plz 1500 felt too long so I used 1000 instead



Insane

00:10:472 (3,4) - It is near DS . hard to see

00:12:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - volume is down req ~

00:20:473 (4) - chenge note req why?

01:02:973 (4,5) - i don like this type :< I like how it is now :(
try!
http://gyazo.com/66682ed590165da6f795cdf6028734ae

01:08:473 (6) - chenge Form req I want to keep how everything is straight there
http://gyazo.com/ce6527ba3d5bcc7a0a48cc66fb8733f8

01:16:140 (1) - remove NC ?
01:17:473 (1) - ^ this one is for SV change


Hard

00:17:390 (3) - remove note
00:21:390 (3) - ^
00:50:056 (4) - ^

I hear triplets for all three of these though

Normal

good diff

fine ~ :)


Easy

good diff

fine~

--------------------------------------------------------

good luck ~ :)
Thanks for the mod!
No comment = fixed
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
[easy]
00:22:140 (3) - make a diamond hereeee

[normal]
00:07:473 (3) - blanket is off also dont overlap the ends
01:08:473 (2) - dont u like stacks? http://puu.sh/eImuX/40568d22e7.jpg
01:21:473 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/eImCF/781608aeae.jpg

No Dap wrote:

this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff
^ evident in the beginning where you have 2/1 sliders and 2/1 breaks, but in the hard you're mapping every single possible thing there is <:

[hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4) - random pause in the middle
00:20:723 - circle here for the trumpet
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1) - holy crap ur 1/4 spacing = = this is a hard.. (00:24:806 (1) - i dont understand why this is the only one overlapping too, like the one after doesnt overlap o3o)
00:44:806 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:04:806 (1) - these are 1/3's o3o
01:07:473 (1) - but you use 1/3 for this one? you gotta be consistent like cmon
01:16:473 (1) - 01:17:806 (1) - probably dont need these NCs

[karia]
00:22:806 (3) - you can try this, to keep ur spacing consistent http://puu.sh/eInX3/07553f0821.jpg
00:48:640 (3,1) - 00:49:973 (3,1) - try not to stack these?
00:54:806 (5,6) - move these out? its a bit close to the previous stack
01:24:973 (3,4) - omg
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Gaia wrote:

[karia]
00:22:806 (3) - you can try this, to keep ur spacing consistent http://puu.sh/eInX3/07553f0821.jpg Hmm,,I like current pattern and I don't care about the 1/4 distance in this part xP
00:48:640 (3,1) - 00:49:973 (3,1) - try not to stack these? The 1st one is 1/8 slider, so I don't want that unstack in Insane diff. And the 2nd one is..changed the rhythm to 1/4!
00:54:806 (5,6) - move these out? its a bit close to the previous stack sure
01:24:973 (3,4) - omg no problem here hehe
Thanks for modding!

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiena Nishizawa-Fubuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58723
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 54140,58473
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.399999

[Metadata]
Title:Fubuki
TitleUnicode:吹雪
Artist:Nishizawa Shiena
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Knotts
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:ending TV Size kancolle kantai collection
BeatmapID:604817
BeatmapSetID:263033

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.76
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"FubuHQ.flv"
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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144,84,26640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,26806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
40,180,26973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,20,27140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,88,27306,2,0,L|264:48,2,35.2,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
260,88,27806,6,0,L|344:80,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,160,28140,2,0,L|216:152,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
348,64,28473,2,0,L|264:72,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,164,28806,6,0,L|424:24,1,140.8,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,23,29306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,124,29473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
512,124,29640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
332,156,29806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,256,29973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,256,30056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,256,30140,6,0,P|376:252|292:252,1,140.8,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,30640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,204,30806,2,0,L|164:284,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
232,328,31140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,368,31306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,368,31390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,368,31473,6,0,L|68:288,1,70.4,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,112,31806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,200,31973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,32140,1,2,0:1:0:0:
240,216,32306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
212,48,32473,2,0,B|196:112|196:112|220:160,1,105.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,32806,6,0,P|160:112|108:156,1,140.8,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,232,33306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,33473,2,0,P|208:244|172:248,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
96,260,33806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,256,33973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,34056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,34140,6,0,P|343:253|416:248,1,140.8,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,220,34640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,148,34806,2,0,L|340:220,2,70.4,2|2|8,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,35306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,35390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,35473,5,6,0:0:0:0:
444,64,35806,2,0,P|388:64|336:60,1,105.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,36140,2,0,P|276:50|236:56,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
96,100,36473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,64,36640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,56,36806,6,0,P|140:100|172:152,1,105.6,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,37140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,176,37306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,37473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
176,316,37640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
144,80,37806,2,0,P|208:44|272:80,1,140.8,8|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
264,69,38473,6,0,L|192:64,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,124,38806,2,0,L|406:128,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,156,39140,2,0,L|246:160,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
16,188,39473,6,0,B|120:196|120:196|76:212,1,140.8,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,84,39973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,124,40140,2,0,L|148:136,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
288,44,40473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,220,40640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,40723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,40806,6,0,P|344:144|352:76,1,140.8,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,148,41306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,41473,2,0,L|336:236,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
444,172,41806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,332,41973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,332,42056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,332,42140,6,0,L|496:324,1,70.4,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,384,42473,2,0,L|309:299,1,70.4,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
292,116,42806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
416,196,42973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
208,232,43140,2,0,P|152:232|96:224,1,105.6,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,216,43473,6,0,P|119:211|160:204,1,70.4,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,124,43806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,72,43973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,44140,2,0,P|181:63|141:53,1,70.4,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
292,8,44473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,184,44640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,44723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,184,44806,6,0,P|372:176|444:176,1,105.6,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,180,45140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,304,45306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,304,45390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,304,45473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,260,45640,1,4,0:3:0:0:
360,308,45806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
333,304,45889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,304,45972,1,2,0:1:0:0:
281,305,46056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,310,46140,6,0,P|168:312|84:296,1,158.399995166016,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,192,46806,2,0,P|20:112|92:96,1,158.399995166016,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,156,47473,6,0,L|172:252,2,79.1999975830079,2|2|2,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
263,88,48140,2,0,P|316:94|369:96,1,105.599996777344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,48640,2,0,L|464:76,3,13.199999597168,2|0|2|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,48806,6,0,B|468:120|468:120|512:176|480:248,1,158.399995166016,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,248,49473,2,0,P|322:194|336:136,1,105.599996777344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,48,49973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,48,50056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,48,50140,6,0,P|328:48|264:56,1,105.599996777344,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,160,50806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,160,50973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,160,51140,2,0,P|160:160|216:152,1,99.0000037765504,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,51473,6,0,P|208:200|248:264,1,176,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,51973,2,0,L|364:128,1,88,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
304,296,52306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
476,252,52473,2,0,L|484:164,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,84,52723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,84,52806,6,0,P|392:92|356:92,1,88,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,72,53140,2,0,P|230:88|262:103,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,272,53473,2,0,L|320:172,1,88,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
148,196,53806,2,0,L|156:296,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,54140,5,2,0:1:0:0:
248,336,54306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
72,316,54473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
72,316,54639,1,2,0:1:0:0:
228,244,54806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
228,244,54973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,112,55140,1,2,0:1:0:0:
100,112,55307,1,2,0:1:0:0:
16,244,55473,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,168,55640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
116,84,55806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
328,144,55973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
188,196,56140,5,2,0:1:0:0:
232,36,56306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
424,160,56473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
424,160,56640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
316,120,56806,5,4,0:0:0:0:
392,24,56973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
432,248,57140,1,2,0:1:0:0:
448,128,57306,1,2,0:1:0:0:
224,208,57473,5,2,0:1:0:0:
320,252,57640,1,2,0:1:0:0:
112,280,57806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
112,280,57973,1,2,0:1:0:0:
216,76,58140,5,2,1:0:0:0:
248,312,58306,1,2,1:0:0:0:
44,176,58473,1,2,1:0:0:0:
44,176,58806,6,0,P|124:160|100:240,1,184.799994360352
56,288,59473,6,0,P|120:272|232:288,1,176,6|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,352,59973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,184,60140,2,0,L|288:192,1,88,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,100,60473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,272,60640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,152,60806,6,0,P|144:160|128:248,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,61306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,61473,2,0,L|308:128,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,64,61973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,64,62056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,64,62140,6,0,P|208:64|252:60,1,88,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,36,62473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,148,62640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,12,62806,2,0,P|456:104|464:200,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,280,63306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,63473,6,0,P|348:156|452:200,1,176,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,308,63973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,308,64056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,308,64140,2,0,L|392:316,1,88,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,64473,2,0,L|356:300,1,117.333333333333,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,244,64806,6,0,P|113:303|108:368,1,117.333333333333,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,200,65140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,160,65251,2,0,L|124:164,1,58.6666666666667
296,168,65473,1,2,0:1:0:0:
312,216,65584,2,0,L|188:212,1,117.333333333333,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,176,65918,2,0,L|396:240,1,58.6666666666667
312,92,66140,6,0,L|432:96,1,117.333333333333,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,95,66473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,132,66695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,132,66806,1,2,0:1:0:0:
284,20,67029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,20,67140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,96,67362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,72,67473,6,0,L|60:12,1,58.6666666666667,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,144,67695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,188,67806,2,0,L|88:184,1,117.333333333333,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,236,68140,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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224,300,68473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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172,124,72723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,216,73140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,48,73306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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500,160,73973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,260,74140,6,0,P|408:252|504:272,2,176,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
208,308,74973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,75140,2,0,L|128:272,1,88,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,124,75473,5,8,0:0:0:0:
72,88,75584,2,0,L|132:92,1,58.6666666666667,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,75806,2,0,L|340:120,2,58.6666666666667,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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512,96,77140,2,0,L|504:32,2,58.6666666666667,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,236,79029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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305,99,80639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,95,80723,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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400,216,81306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,212,82640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,112,82806,2,0,L|372:208,2,88,2|2|8,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,44,83306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,44,83390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,252,84890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,240,85140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,85223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,85306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,85390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,85473,2,0,L|284:296,3,44,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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356,108,86140,5,2,0:0:0:0:
Sylphi
osu! Alumni
3,298 posts
Joined February 2012
Sylphi
[General]
  1. normal-hitwhistle is a bit loud in your difficulty.
[Easy]
  1. 00:08:806 (3,4) - this rhythm is a bit weird. I think it would be better changing to this.
  2. 00:06:140 (3,1) - Toggle new combo for consistency.
  3. 00:08:806 (3) - New combo for consistency.
  4. 00:10:806 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency.
  5. 00:16:806 - I think it fits more music to start new combo cycle.
  6. 00:19:140 - It sounds empty. How about add circle?
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:140 (3) - Add normal whistle on repeat arrow.
  2. 00:56:473 (3) - I think here is better clap than normal whistle.
  3. 01:08:473 (2) - I guess you forgot to add clap.
  4. 00:40:806 - Why new combo cycle is changed on this part?
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:140 (1) - I think it would be better flow to apply reverse section.
  2. 00:13:140 (2,3) - It isn't a issue. but how about reduce distance between these by a little?
  3. 01:07:807 (2) - End to 01:08:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm.
  4. 01:24:473 (4,1) - Same as 00:13:140.
[Karia's Insane]
  1. 00:39:140 (3) - How about apply reverse section?
[Insane]
  1. 01:04:806 (1) - End to 01:05:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm.
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Underflow wrote:

[Karia's Insane]
  1. 00:39:140 (3) - How about apply reverse section? 그것도 괜찮긴 한데 여기는 찍을때부터 (2,3,1)을 세트로 찍으려고 했던부분이라 이건 이대로 두고싶다는 마음이 앞서네요,,
Thanks for modding!
hehe
1,959 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe
just dropping by



kamikin_old
286 posts
Joined June 2014
kamikin_old
Hi hi! From my queue!

Easy
00:02:140 (2) - I dont think this fits with 1 very well, maybe make 1 like 2?
00:08:806 (3,4) - The different lengths make the pattern look strange
Maybe something like this? (to try and make flow better as well)

00:25:140 (3) - Why put this at a different angle?
00:27:473 (3,4) - These could blanket each other well
00:32:140 (2) - Make this curved as well to keep it consistent with 1
00:34:473 (2) - Blanket? I think it make the flow better and looks better (2 is given purpouse in the pattern)

00:36:806 (1) - You should curve this to keep it consistent with 2
00:42:140 (1) - Either curve this or make 2 the same for consistency
00:48:806 (2) - The red point make this slider awkward aesthetically, probably just make this a normal blanket
00:56:806 (1) - This slider shape looks off
01:00:806 (3,4) - Double blanket
01:03:473 (3) - Straighten this imo
01:06:473 (2) - Blanket?
01:07:473 (1) - This should be obviously not a blanket
01:08:806 (3,4) - Double blanket
01:10:140 (1) - maybe blanket 2?
01:12:806 (1) - This slider shape is awkward, straighten or curve?
01:15:473 (1) - When this happens make the slider obviously a blanket or obviously not, this is halfway
01:18:140 (1) - Curve the first part before the red point?

Normal
00:16:806 (1) - Why red point?
00:17:473 (2) - Make this blanket 3 or the long short pattern looks off
00:28:806 (1,2) - Short long pattern again
00:38:806 (2,3) - Curved for consistency
00:46:140 (3) - Blanket 2
00:51:473 (3) - Use this to blanket 1
00:56:140 (2,3,4) - Keep these as a normal triangle

01:02:640 (2) - Move this up
01:02:806 (3) - Curve
01:06:140 (3) - Take off the repeat and use a copied version of 01:04:806 (1) -
01:15:473 (1) - Make this peel off 4

01:18:140 (1) - use a version of 01:16:806 (8) - for consistency

Hard
00:00:807 (1) - Blanket?
00:02:806 (2) - Curve
00:04:806 (1) - Make this parallel to 00:03:473 (1) - For a better looking pattern
00:08:473 (4) - Unstack, if anything should be stacked it should be 2 + 3
00:09:473 (3) - Curve?
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Quieten these a bit
00:14:806 (3,4) - Why not (it looks better)

00:16:140 (3) - Straighten for consistency with 4 and 1
00:21:973 (5,1) - Awkward flow imo
00:23:806 (2,3,4) - The blue ticks sound strange
00:25:140 (2,4) - Short long
00:26:806 (4) - Curve
00:32:140 (4,5) - Imo, this looks neater

00:39:140 (4,1) - Short long
00:44:806 (1) - Strange slider shape, maybe use 00:45:140 (2) -
00:52:806 (1) - Straighten
00:55:473 (1) - Clap as well at the beginning
00:57:806 (4) - Curve
01:08:140 (3) - Weird slider shape for the music
01:08:806 (1) - Blanket
01:11:473 (1) - On this second 'ku' you sound map it the same as 01:10:140 (1) -

Couldn't play any of the higher diffs, I hope I was useful! :)
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts
Gaia

Gaia wrote:

[easy]
00:22:140 (3) - make a diamond hereeee

[normal]
00:07:473 (3) - blanket is off also dont overlap the ends
01:08:473 (2) - dont u like stacks? http://puu.sh/eImuX/40568d22e7.jpg
01:21:473 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/eImCF/781608aeae.jpg

No Dap wrote:

this diff needs to have more 1/2 for better spread with hard diff
^ evident in the beginning where you have 2/1 sliders and 2/1 breaks, but in the hard you're mapping every single possible thing there is <:

[hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4) - random pause in the middle
00:20:723 - circle here for the trumpet
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,1) - holy crap ur 1/4 spacing = = this is a hard.. (00:24:806 (1) - i dont understand why this is the only one overlapping too, like the one after doesnt overlap o3o)
00:44:806 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:04:806 (1) - these are 1/3's o3o
01:07:473 (1) - but you use 1/3 for this one? you gotta be consistent like cmon
01:16:473 (1) - 01:17:806 (1) - probably dont need these NCs
Fixed everything

Underflow

Underflow wrote:

[General]
  1. normal-hitwhistle is a bit loud in your difficulty. might change it to soft-hitwhistle later
[Easy]
  1. 00:08:806 (3,4) - this rhythm is a bit weird. I think it would be better changing to this. cool
  2. 00:06:140 (3,1) - Toggle new combo for consistency. fixed
  3. 00:08:806 (3) - New combo for consistency. ^
  4. 00:10:806 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency. ^
  5. 00:16:806 - I think it fits more music to start new combo cycle. idk, you told me to fix the other NCs for consistency but then you tell me to break it for this
  6. 00:19:140 - It sounds empty. How about add circle?
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:140 (3) - Add normal whistle on repeat arrow. I dont think it'd fit
  2. 00:56:473 (3) - I think here is better clap than normal whistle. fixed
  3. 01:08:473 (2) - I guess you forgot to add clap. oops
  4. 00:40:806 - Why new combo cycle is changed on this part? I think i fixed all of the inconsistencies
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:140 (1) - I think it would be better flow to apply reverse section. I think it flows alright already
  2. 00:13:140 (2,3) - It isn't a issue. but how about reduce distance between these by a little? ok
  3. 01:07:807 (2) - End to 01:08:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm. fixed
  4. 01:24:473 (4,1) - Same as 00:13:140. ^
[Insane]
  1. 01:04:806 (1) - End to 01:05:029. It is 1 / 3 rhythm. fixed

kamikin

kamikin wrote:

Hi hi! From my queue!

Easy
00:02:140 (2) - I dont think this fits with 1 very well, maybe make 1 like 2? looks fine to me
00:08:806 (3,4) - The different lengths make the pattern look strange fixed in previous mod
Maybe something like this? (to try and make flow better as well)

00:25:140 (3) - Why put this at a different angle? sometimes i don't like being parallel
00:27:473 (3,4) - These could blanket each other well i like it the way it is
00:32:140 (2) - Make this curved as well to keep it consistent with 1 i don't think that's necessary here
00:34:473 (2) - Blanket? I think it make the flow better and looks better (2 is given purpouse in the pattern) not a fan of that tbh

00:36:806 (1) - You should curve this to keep it consistent with 2 ehh, why not. i'll change this one
00:42:140 (1) - Either curve this or make 2 the same for consistency no need
00:48:806 (2) - The red point make this slider awkward aesthetically, probably just make this a normal blanket fine to me
00:56:806 (1) - This slider shape looks off ^
01:00:806 (3,4) - Double blanket not sure what your blanket idea looks like but this already looks fine to me
01:03:473 (3) - Straighten this imo flow from (2) would be a little awkward then
01:06:473 (2) - Blanket? I don't think it'd look good
01:07:473 (1) - This should be obviously not a blanket fixed (unless you were thinking of something else)
01:08:806 (3,4) - Double blanket I'd rather keep them looking how they already are
01:10:140 (1) - maybe blanket 2? Would kinda be awkward flow and i'd have to move a lot of stuff around.
01:12:806 (1) - This slider shape is awkward, straighten or curve? i dont see the awkwardness
01:15:473 (1) - When this happens make the slider obviously a blanket or obviously not, this is halfway well it goes around it so i'd consider it a blanket
01:18:140 (1) - Curve the first part before the red point? sure

Normal
00:16:806 (1) - Why red point? i like to spice things up sometimes, heh.
00:17:473 (2) - Make this blanket 3 or the long short pattern looks off looks fine to me
00:28:806 (1,2) - Short long pattern again ^
00:38:806 (2,3) - Curved for consistency doesn't really affect the flow since you pretty much play (2) as a curved slider
00:46:140 (3) - Blanket 2 you seem to really like blankets. I only use them sparingly
00:51:473 (3) - Use this to blanket 1^
00:56:140 (2,3,4) - Keep these as a normal triangle sure

01:02:640 (2) - Move this up fine how it is
01:02:806 (3) - Curve ^
01:06:140 (3) - Take off the repeat and use a copied version of 01:04:806 (1) - I think the repeat lets me follow the vocals a little better here
01:15:473 (1) - Make this peel off 4 That'd make it kinda hard to keep (2) is DS space without creating awkward flow or going off screen

01:18:140 (1) - use a version of 01:16:806 (8) - for consistency there's really no need for consistency on that

Hard
00:00:807 (1) - Blanket? not a fan of that type of blanketing
00:02:806 (2) - Curve no need, plays fine
00:04:806 (1) - Make this parallel to 00:03:473 (1) - For a better looking pattern sure
00:08:473 (4) - Unstack, if anything should be stacked it should be 2 + 3 not sure of the reasoning
00:09:473 (3) - Curve? Don't like it curved
00:12:806 (1,2,3,4) - Quieten these a bit sounds fine to me
00:14:806 (3,4) - Why not (it looks better) spacing's too crazy for me

00:16:140 (3) - Straighten for consistency with 4 and 1 Looks/plays fine to me
00:21:973 (5,1) - Awkward flow imo not seeing it
00:23:806 (2,3,4) - The blue ticks sound strange seems like it fits to me
00:25:140 (2,4) - Short long nothing wrong with this
00:26:806 (4) - Curve ^
00:32:140 (4,5) - Imo, this looks neater too much stacking, hard to read

00:39:140 (4,1) - Short long no need to change
00:44:806 (1) - Strange slider shape, maybe use 00:45:140 (2) - doesn't look good like that. sometimes variety is a good thing
00:52:806 (1) - Straighten no need
00:55:473 (1) - Clap as well at the beginning i dont hear one
00:57:806 (4) - Curve no need
01:08:140 (3) - Weird slider shape for the music its fine
01:08:806 (1) - Blanket remapped from previous mod so it already blankets something
01:11:473 (1) - On this second 'ku' you sound map it the same as 01:10:140 (1) - there's really no reason to change this

Couldn't play any of the higher diffs, I hope I was useful! :) no problem!

Thanks for the mod guys. Sorry if my responses seemed a little half-ass, lots to apply.
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
Let's Mod this map \o/



General
  1. disabled in Karia's Insane diff

Easy
  1. you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol
  2. 00:15:473 - 00:56:723 - i guess this newcombo pattern isn't 8 bar. newcombo seem early 4 bar, compare Easy diff with Normal diff. ex) http://puu.sh/eLCf3/a2b57224ad.jpg

    nothing to say

Normal
  1. you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol
  2. 00:46:140 (1,2) - isn't big problem just there are feel so empty ya ears bored imo, so how about add whistle in slider ends?
  3. same as intro part, it's up to you

Hard
  1. same here you should fix this http://puu.sh/eLFaL/3b8ed6bebb.png
  2. 00:04:806 (1) - i think so slider end is should be 00:05:473 - here also weird imo, exactly vocal until here 00:05:390 - and think some echo then http://puu.sh/eLDJn/127cf074a1.jpg it would be batter.
  3. 01:24:473 (4,1) - don't look at only your veiw, this part might be confuse. think 01:22:806 (3,4) - 1/2 gap and 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/4 gap here almost same also you added newcombo they will think 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/2 gap here imo. or ask it for more opinions

    nothing to say too much

카리아의 미친
  1. 하... 매핑굇 ㅡㅡ 제가 저번에 카리아님 맵 모딩할때도 언랭요소몇개좀 만들어두어달라고 말씀드렸던적이있었던거같은데.

Insane
  1. just check this http://puu.sh/eLHe5/777a119e13.png
  2. nothing to say
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

koreapenguin wrote:

Let's Mod this map \o/



General
  1. disabled in Karia's Insane diff fixed

Easy
  1. you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol fixed
  2. 00:15:473 - 00:56:723 - i guess this newcombo pattern isn't 8 bar. newcombo seem early 4 bar, compare Easy diff with Normal diff. ex) http://puu.sh/eLCf3/a2b57224ad.jpg I'm not sure what this means. Can you tell karia and then he can tell me

    nothing to say

Normal
  1. you must fix this http://puu.sh/eLCDV/3c706d1f26.png about vol fixed
  2. 00:46:140 (1,2) - isn't big problem just there are feel so empty ya ears bored imo, so how about add whistle in slider ends? ok
  3. same as intro part, it's up to you

Hard
  1. same here you should fix this http://puu.sh/eLFaL/3b8ed6bebb.png fixed
  2. 00:04:806 (1) - i think so slider end is should be 00:05:473 - here also weird imo, exactly vocal until here 00:05:390 - and think some echo then ok
  3. 01:24:473 (4,1) - don't look at only your veiw, this part might be confuse. think 01:22:806 (3,4) - 1/2 gap and 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/4 gap here almost same also you added newcombo they will think 01:24:473 (4,1) - 1/2 gap here imo. or ask it for more opinions moved a little closer

    nothing to say too much

Insane
  1. just check this http://puu.sh/eLHe5/777a119e13.png fixed
  2. nothing to say
Thanks for the mod and star! :)
Trynna
714 posts
Joined May 2013
Trynna
love this music, lol


[Normal]

00:11:473 (1) - remove slider and add spinner

[Hard]

00:06:584 (2) - remove circle
00:06:473 - add a little spin with a back arrow
00:07:140 - add circle
00:07:973 (2) - change it to 1/3 and put in 00:08:029 (2) -
00:08:695 - add circle (1/3)
00:10:140 (1,2,3,4) - change sliders to 1/3 and use one backarrow
01:06:723 (3) - unnecessary circle
01:15:473 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow
01:16:695 - add circle (1/3)
01:16:806 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow

[Karia's Insane]

00:11:473 (1) - remove circle and add spinner

[Insane]

00:01:306 - add a circle here maybe
idk

good luck
Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Knotts

Firewest wrote:

love this music, lol


[Normal]

00:11:473 (1) - remove slider and add spinner There wouldn't be enough recover time unfortunately. Had to remove the spinner

[Hard]

00:06:584 (2) - remove circle Used to follow the vocal
00:06:473 - add a little spin with a back arrow Circle makes it easier and follows the vocals in a simple fashion
00:07:140 - add circle I don't really want an object there because that'd be a little too much for a hard, plus i skipped it 00:09:806
00:07:973 (2) - change it to 1/3 and put in 00:08:029 (2) - done
00:08:695 - add circle (1/3) I want to limit the amount of 1/3s I have in the hard and i dont think its too necessary to have a note for that vocal
00:10:140 (1,2,3,4) - change sliders to 1/3 and use one backarrow ^
01:06:723 (3) - unnecessary circle it's used to somewhat follow the vocal
01:15:473 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow not really necessary
01:16:695 - add circle (1/3) ^
01:16:806 (1,2) - change to 1/3 and use one back arrow ^



[Insane]

00:01:306 - add a circle here maybe doesn't seem necessary to me
idk

good luck
Thanks for the mod! (someone help me with the whistles in the beginning, I have no idea what I'm doing :x)
nika mika
397 posts
Joined January 2014
nika mika
Hi~from my queue.
[Insane]
01:06:806 (4) – start at here01:06:723 -
Some suggestions on rhythm:
00:00:140 -00:00:640 –00:08:723 -00:58:056 -01:14:056 -add
00:01:640 -00:01:806 -00:05:640 -00:58:306 -00:52:723 -00:58:640 -00:58:723 -01:01:306 -01:07:306 -01:07:390 –delete
I personally think you are overusing triples, so delete some if you do think so.
[Hard]
00:06:140 (1,2,3,4,5) –fill those 1/3s
00:13:473 (3) – this distance is too far for hard
01:24:806 (1) -^
00:58:640 (4,5) –delete
01:16:390 - 01:17:723 -10% volume here
[Normal]
00:11:473 –I suggest a spinner instead of a slider here
00:12:806 –If you take the suggestion above add some notes here
01:04:806 (1) - 01:07:473 (1) - make a reverse slider like 01:06:140 (3) –
[Easy]
No big problems. Nice mapped.
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