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Arlecchino

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-15T13:25:41+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 02 Agustus 2016 at 17:59:29

Artist: YUI
Title: again
Source: 鋼の錬金術師
Tags: Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood Haganenorenkinjutsushi Gero Xinely Pho pkhg FMA FMOST1 Hisashi Kondo Ayumi Hamasaki Holydays in the Sun
BPM: 140
Filesize: 17979kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Gero's Insane (3,96 stars, 336 notes)
Hard (2,96 stars, 228 notes)
Normal (1,8 stars, 140 notes)
Pho's Insane (4,07 stars, 341 notes)
pkhg's Insane (3,91 stars, 371 notes)
Xinely's Easy (1,48 stars, 78 notes)

Download: YUI - again
Download: YUI - again (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Pliss Re-download if you download before 09 Feb 2015 - change audio file
Xinely's Easy - 100% Complete By Xinely
Normal - 100% Complete By Me
Hard - 100% Complete By Me
pkhg's Insane - 100% Complete By pkhg
Gero's Insane - 100% Complete By Gero
Pho's Insane - 100% Complete By Pho
you want to plays harder difficulty? try Epiphronn's Another - DL here
Hope you like it~
Lazy hitsounding _(:зゝ∠)_
my diff is too bad for this awesome GD!!

Last edited by Arlecchino 2016-08-02T11:01:19+00:00, edited 75 times in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-16T04:58:06+00:00

quick mapping hue

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Yui - Again.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60699
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12699,21270,48699
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Again
TitleUnicode:Again
Artist:Yui
ArtistUnicode:Yui
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood
Tags:FMA FMOST1 Hisashi Kondo Ayumi Hamasaki
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,12899,19830
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-16T21:33:58+00:00

Here as requested from modding queue.

General Overview

Mappers decision to add claps or not. Spinners end vary on each difficulty so either match with each other on where to end or each difficulty set will have a different end time. Checked out the metadata and I don't see any problems there so it should be good. Also slider velocity from normal - easy is really big of a gap compared to hard-normal.
I can see an insane mapped, but only will time tell

Xinely's Easy

Disable Widescreen Support

00:12:699 (3) - Is it me or does this finish not sound like a finish? I believe because the sampleset is on normal that I can't hear an actual finish at this note. I suggest to change sampleset to soft if you want that finish sound
00:26:199 (3,5) - These 2 notes are somewhat overlapping, Instead how about straightening out note (4) and doing something like this without overlaps http://puu.sh/eBOPj/01c0c1c1d8.jpg
00:30:913 (3) - Whistle at the end to match with this 00:26:199 (3) - because the sliders match each other on both sequences and a whistle there is to just keep it consistent
00:36:699 (4) - Make this a little more parallel with 00:35:413 (2) - by moving (4) tail a little to the left more. Presumably 2-3 grids
00:53:842 (2,1) - How about something like this so slider (1) has more of a sense of purpose http://puu.sh/eBPCv/2f305aaf24.jpg
01:21:270 (4) - How bout the slider have ticks like this. On the way back it visually doesn't look smooth but instead rough http://puu.sh/eBQpr/c1d836862f.jpg
01:26:520 (1) - Still unsure about spinner regulations on easy but is blue tick ok?
Good difficulty I don't see anything that is a huge issue. Still that ending cut off too soon and didn't hold on the guitar long enough RIP Sound

Normal

I would rather have OD as 4 instead of 3.5 considering how fast the sliders are going

00:05:413 (3) - I'd rather move this over to the white tick to end with the vocals and allow the next set of notes to have their own components
00:05:842 (1,2) - This one doesn't have a gap in between sliders and the next one does. I feel keeping the spaces consistent looks better with having the sliders almost touch
00:35:627 (2) - Can be moved further up
00:48:699 (1,2,) - Instead of claps I feel implementing the whistles on head sound better on both occasions and most of the others as well, but it's a preference thing so you can decide
00:58:985 (1) - Move to x224 y124 to match ends with this 00:57:270 (3)
01:08:842 (3,1) - Sliders are practically touching so move (1) a little to the left since DS allows it
01:11:627 - A slider or a note should be here the gap here throws off the flow/rhythm you had before with the slider pattern also because vocals still apply there it would fit better
01:12:913 (2) - You can remove whistle at the reverse because it sounds better without one otherwise it's too repetitive of a sound at that part

Hard

Disable Widescreen Support

00:12:056 (4) - Slider tail how about addition drum-finish or just regular soft addition and a finish because there is definitely a drum sound there and I believe a drum hitsound would play it well
01:05:413 (6,7,1) - The flow here dives to much, so how about making it rounder something like this http://puu.sh/eBUHt/1aaa2c6859.jpg
01:12:699 (1) - Kinda nazi but move a little to the right if you were intending to blanket
01:16:127 (1) - Make this .06 DS as well please, getting fancy here will just feel weird so instead just make them consistent
Nothing out of the ordinary

I hope this was a good mod to help you. If you have any questions about the mod please do ask me so I can clarify what I was trying to present. Have a good day hoped to see this in the near future

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-16T22:15:52+00:00

Almost Fix everything!!
Except 01:11:627 - in normal diff, i in purpose makes it like that for calm/slow part
Thanks Kocari <3

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-01-17T21:15:23+00:00

http://puu.sh/eEIAD/0dd44d7d10.rar

I'm actually a fast worker lol. Hope you like, tell me when there's stuff you don't agree with and we can discuss it in-game.
Btw, that video quality is pretty low, you might want to ask someone to reencode a better version of it.

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2015-01-19T04:35:37+00:00

hey from queue!

[general]
the fade out at the end is super bad orz, u should get a new mp3 or get someone to fade it out for u

timing might be a bit off too, example 00:10:342 - the vocal isnt on the red tick

why is pho the only one with custom colours ;~;

a spinner would fit nicely at the end imo
[soy sauce]
00:05:842 (2) - o3o
00:07:556 (1) - 節奏突然好簡單啊
00:27:699 (5) - 往上移一點, 下面好擠 orz
00:55:556 (1,2,1) -normal sampleset
01:00:699 (2) - 01:02:413 (1) - 別用一樣的形狀好嗎

沒什麼大為題怎麼都是圓圈

[normal]
00:03:056 (2) - it's touching the scorebar thing right now you're better off shifting it up to avoid it
00:04:127 (1) - don't always have perfect circle flow >.> have some variation (maybe like this http://puu.sh/eICqh/e16f5cb8d6.jpg)
00:06:485 (2) - replace with just a circle, there's not sound at 00:06:699 -
00:07:556 (1) - move it up a bit, touching slightly
00:35:627 (2) - touching hp bar!
00:59:199 (1,1) - you need 750 ms after the spinner! which is roughly 2 beats of rest
00:48:699 (1) - etc, hitsound these drums! (normal sampleset)

just the flow is really stale >.<!

[hard]
00:21:913 (2) - fix ur blanket?
00:35:627 (2) - since its hard i think u can do this

00:39:699 (3,4,1) - is this supposed to be linear?
00:55:556 (1) - same as normal, too low
01:25:020 (2,3,4,5) - a bit hard cuz kickslider stream

[Pho]
00:09:913 - add a circle here, follow vocals and solves polarity problem!
00:25:342 (4) - clap
00:28:985 - random break, the guitar strumming sound keeps going so no reason to stop imo , also 00:28:556 (2,3,4) - is the same spacing so yea
00:33:056 (1) - please map out the downbeat ><
00:35:735 (4) - this does nooot look like 1/4 orz
00:44:520 (5) - ^ i mean if it was after 00:48:699 - then maybe that makes sense but this is still the calm part
00:50:627 - really big drum sound u should map out!!
00:52:342 - normal sampleset
00:55:770 (2) - ^
00:56:842 (1,2,1,2) - 00:57:699 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - lol is this really neccessary
01:06:485 (3) - idk, 1/4 sounds good enough for me (this is barely noticeable to me tbh)
01:08:627 (5) - nerf this spacing a bit ?
01:13:127 (2) - looks like a 1/4 spacing from what ive seen before
01:20:306 (3) - i'm pretty sure there's no 1/8 here,

good luck and have fun!

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-19T08:14:48+00:00

pointed what i didn't fixed

Normal

Fix all except the note after spinner, 1/1 beat in 133bpm is enough for rest after spinner so, its fine imo

Hard

01:25:020 (2,3,4,5) - indeed makes this part a bit hard, but if you give me a little suggestion about pattern, i'll consider it

everything is fixed, except what i mentioned in above

Thanks for Mod~

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Nuolong 2015-01-19T16:59:38+00:00

Xinely's Easy

00:35:413 (2) - I recommend putting this again about the 37 sec mark where the vocals are similar.
Darn, nothing else to pick on. Good job!

Normal

00:03:913 (3,1) - Maybe around here put a small reverse slider thingy so it makes a 3 beat like vocals
00:08:199 (2,3) - ^
00:31:342 (3,1) - ^
00:34:556 (3) - I don't like these in normal difficulty D:
00:59:199 (1) - I see what you're trying to do, but I like it more with 00:55:556 (1,2,3,4) this because it goes with the song more

I feel like in the kiai section you could add a lot of short reverse sliders. :3
Good job! I had to be picky because I couldn't find much wrong.

Hard

00:12:699 (1) - You could map this out or make it a break again. I just don't like this that much xD
See what you do here 00:35:627 (2,3,4) ? It would be nice if you could do that up to around 50 sec. Because it goes with the song. This part is boring w/o some aweshum beats

01:08:199 (3) - So far away D:
01:25:985 (7) - Awe no spinner this time?

Not that you have to add one xD
Nice diff

Pho's Insane

00:21:270 (1,2,3) - This is not too hawt for me... hard to read. For me ;-;
00:24:485 (5,6,1) - Instead of using these often, maybe reverse sliders?
00:44:520 (5,6) - You should either just not do this, or do it more

01:06:485 (3) - Yush this is so hawt

(good)
01:20:306 (3) - ^ hehe
01:26:413 (2) - Sadness... no slider again xD not that you should or have to.
Awesome diff

Good luck!!

:3 Sorry if I wasn't helpful!

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-20T01:13:59+00:00

NolanM wrote:
Normal
00:03:913 (3,1) - Maybe around here put a small reverse slider thingy so it makes a 3 beat like vocals a bit dont understand with dis mod xD
00:08:199 (2,3) - ^
00:31:342 (3,1) - ^
00:34:556 (3) - I don't like these in normal difficulty D: i'll consider it
00:59:199 (1) - I see what you're trying to do, but I like it more with 00:55:556 (1,2,3,4) this because it goes with the song more ^
I feel like in the kiai section you could add a lot of short reverse sliders. :3
Good job! I had to be picky because I couldn't find much wrong.

Hard
00:12:699 (1) - You could map this out or make it a break again. I just don't like this that much xD purpose add Spinner here :3
See what you do here 00:35:627 (2,3,4) ? It would be nice if you could do that up to around 50 sec. Because it goes with the song. This part is boring w/o some aweshum beats im in purpose to do that in 50sec part, but meh
01:08:199 (3) - So far away D: indeed, and i think its ok
01:25:985 (7) - Awe no spinner this time? Not that you have to add one xD i'll consider it
Nice diff

Good luck!! :3 Sorry if I wasn't helpful!

Thanks For Mod~

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-21T00:43:49+00:00

mod here:3

07:47 Fort: males post trit ane mah
07:48 -[ Asuna ]-: fak
07:48 Fort: ane mau ngemod map mu sekarang
07:48 *Fort is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/599265 Yui - Again]
07:48 -[ Asuna ]-: SEKARANG
07:49 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/599265 YUI - again [Hard]]
07:49 -[ Asuna ]-: IYA SEKARANG
07:49 Fort: 00:07:449 (6) - spacing nya terlalu tajam ini
07:50 Fort: coba geser e x9y236
07:50 -[ Asuna ]-: :T males irc (*^*)
07:50 Fort: ke*
07:50 Fort: yaudah
07:50 Fort: bayar 10.000 ke ane
07:50 Fort: :3
07:50 -[ Asuna ]-: wait wait
07:51 -[ Asuna ]-: i'll gives you 99999999999 if you licks my foot
07:51 Fort: EZ
07:51 Fort: 00:20:842 (5,6,7) - why this?
07:52 -[ Asuna ]-: why not?
07:52 Fort: stack aja di 6
07:52 Fort: menghindari overlap + light jump + flow
07:52 -[ Asuna ]-: tai
07:52 Fort: 00:39:592 - tambah circle
07:53 Fort: itu jelas vokal
07:53 -[ Asuna ]-: 00:20:842 (5,6,7) - (7) stack sama (6) nih ?
07:53 Fort: 5 dan 7 distack di 6
07:53 Fort: 00:48:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 
07:54 Fort: detstrim pls
07:54 *Fort runs
07:54 -[ Asuna ]-: Nevaa
07:55 Fort: 01:09:913 (3,4,5) - perasaan enak pakai clap
07:56 Fort: 01:14:413 (1,3) - finish bro
07:57 Fort: 01:15:699 (5) - ini juga boleh ditambah finish
07:58 Fort: perasaan kau ketinggalan masang finish
07:58 Fort: 01:07:556 (1) - ^
07:59 Fort: 01:08:199 (3) - 
07:59 Fort: 01:09:270 (1) - 
07:59 Fort: dan masih banyak lagi
07:59 Fort: :>
07:59 Fort: jiah malah offlen

/me runs

Edit: look box pls

edit 2: get 3 mod = PM me, dont DC pls >.<

Last edited by Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-21T01:01:52+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-21T00:47:01+00:00

Fort wrote:
mod here:3
bayar 10.000 dulu

/me runs

/me kills Fort

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-21T02:39:18+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Here as requested from modding queue.

General Overview
Mappers decision to add claps or not. Spinners end vary on each difficulty so either match with each other on where to end or each difficulty set will have a different end time. Checked out the metadata and I don't see any problems there so it should be good. Also slider velocity from normal - easy is really big of a gap compared to hard-normal.
I can see an insane mapped, but only will time tell

Xinely's Easy
Disable Widescreen Support
00:12:699 (3) - Is it me or does this finish not sound like a finish? I believe because the sampleset is on normal that I can't hear an actual finish at this note. I suggest to change sampleset to soft if you want that finish sound yep finish, sampleset normal addition soft instead
00:26:199 (3,5) - These 2 notes are somewhat overlapping, Instead how about straightening out note (4) and doing something like this without overlaps http://puu.sh/eBOPj/01c0c1c1d8.jpg
00:30:913 (3) - Whistle at the end to match with this 00:26:199 (3) - because the sliders match each other on both sequences and a whistle there is to just keep it consistent
00:36:699 (4) - Make this a little more parallel with 00:35:413 (2) - by moving (4) tail a little to the left more. Presumably 2-3 grids
00:53:842 (2,1) - How about something like this so slider (1) has more of a sense of purpose http://puu.sh/eBPCv/2f305aaf24.jpg
01:21:270 (4) - How bout the slider have ticks like this. On the way back it visually doesn't look smooth but instead rough http://puu.sh/eBQpr/c1d836862f.jpg i guess mine is fine either so i prefer keep
01:26:520 (1) - Still unsure about spinner regulations on easy but is blue tick ok? actually fine since that is not 1/4 click but ok moved to 1/2 instead
Good difficulty I don't see anything that is a huge issue. Still that ending cut off too soon and didn't hold on the guitar long enough RIP Sound

Gaia wrote:
[soy sauce]
00:05:842 (2) - o3o 怎么了？
00:07:556 (1) - 節奏突然好簡單啊给别的节奏，重复的节奏觉得好无聊啊
00:27:699 (5) - 往上移一點, 下面好擠 orz 在Kocari's mod已经改了
00:55:556 (1,2,1) -normal sampleset 改了，我忘了删双greenline lol
01:00:699 (2) - 01:02:413 (1) - 別用一樣的形狀好嗎看得还好

沒什麼大為題怎麼都是圓圈只有20个:p

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Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-01-21T03:30:54+00:00

Gaia wrote:
hey from queue!

[general]
the fade out at the end is super bad orz, u should get a new mp3 or get someone to fade it out for u

timing might be a bit off too, example 00:10:342 - the vocal isnt on the red tick Timing should be fine, there's a syncope at this point.

why is pho the only one with custom colours ;~; ;~;

[Pho]
00:09:913 - add a circle here, follow vocals and solves polarity problem! I derped here.
00:25:342 (4) - clap
00:28:985 - random break, the guitar strumming sound keeps going so no reason to stop imo , also 00:28:556 (2,3,4) - is the same spacing so yea Made the spacing clearer, but that break is needed to lower down the tension at this section imo./
00:33:056 (1) - please map out the downbeat >< I thought I could avoid that lol... fine.
00:35:735 (4) - this does nooot look like 1/4 orz Idk what you want me to do here, it's 1/2. Works fine? D:
00:44:520 (5) - ^ i mean if it was after 00:48:699 - then maybe that makes sense but this is still the calm part Same as above. These sliders go well with the vocal and fit the intensity of this part, which kicks in at 00:48:699 -
00:50:627 - really big drum sound u should map out!! Derp 2nd time.
00:52:342 - normal sampleset
00:55:770 (2) - ^
00:56:842 (1,2,1,2) - 00:57:699 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - lol is this really neccessary Probably not lol, just see how people feel about it. If I get more opinions on that, I will decide whether to keep or drop it (prob the latter case, but let's see first ).
01:06:485 (3) - idk, 1/4 sounds good enough for me (this is barely noticeable to me tbh)
01:08:627 (5) - nerf this spacing a bit ?
01:13:127 (2) - looks like a 1/4 spacing from what ive seen before
01:20:306 (3) - i'm pretty sure there's no 1/8 here, True that there's no beat at 01:20:360 - , but there's noise which is followed by this backslider. It also synergizes pretty well with the vocal, so keep for now.

good luck and have fun!

NolanM wrote:
Pho's Insane
00:21:270 (1,2,3) - This is not too hawt for me... hard to read. For me ;-; :c It's readable though, I keep for now.
00:24:485 (5,6,1) - Instead of using these often, maybe reverse sliders? Hmm, maybe you're right... I need to think about this one.
00:44:520 (5,6) - You should either just not do this, or do it more I like variety though~
01:06:485 (3) - Yush this is so hawt (good) Sry, but replaced it, cuz overmap
01:20:306 (3) - ^ hehe Ye this one's cool tho, I try to keep that.
01:26:413 (2) - Sadness... no slider again xD not that you should or have to. There's no need for a slider here, circle with finish gives enough resonance at the end.
Awesome diff Thanks c:

Good luck!! :3 Sorry if I wasn't helpful!

Thanks for the mods guys!

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-21T06:22:41+00:00

from #modreqs and YUI <3 \:3/
Just a quick check ~~i'm lazy ww~~

[General]
Add Xinely, Pho and pkhg to tags

[Xinely's Easy]

00:04:127 (1) - make it 1/1 and add circle here 00:05:413 -
00:06:913 (3) - use a circle instead, I know there's a guitar/bass-like sound in the bg but isnt too noticeable :3
00:10:985 (1) - change to 1/1 and add a repeat (even you can do it without repeat)
00:25:770 (2,3,4) - try this http://puu.sh/eO2xJ/70a15e7b90.jpg (3's sliderticks cover vocals too nice :3 ) you can use 2 circles instead of the 1/1 slider if you want :3
00:48:699 you have 2 greenlines here

Dont take it bad but i dont like the way you mapped it so i'll give you a rough draft of my way to map this song (following vocals works way better to me ;3)

[Normal]

00:55:127 (4) - even if its too hard (maybe) for a normal, replace it with a 1/2 slider, the song deserves it !!
00:57:485 (4) - nc for consistency and remove from this 00:58:985 (1) -

[Hard]

00:21:270 (1,2) - rotate 1 by -21º from selection centre then move it to x200 y92 so you can fix the spacing issue (and you'll keep the blanket with 00:19:985 (2) - >.o )
01:02:842 (2,3) - huge jump imo, better reduce spacing
01:10:985 (7,1) - swap nc

[Pho's Insane]

00:08:199 (3) - whistle on head

Hope it helps

I started modding and ended making a diff lol. Thanks for accepting it Asuna <3

Hitsounds: http://puu.sh/eOwPb/a01667e442.rar
Map: http://puu.sh/eOwTX/1b28fe1d46.rar

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-21T08:03:47+00:00

almost fix everything, repair some part you mentioned in your mod~

i'll update your diff soon

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-21T09:06:23+00:00

pkhg wrote:
from #modreqs and YUI <3 \:3/
Just a quick check ~~i'm lazy ww~~

[General]
Add Xinely, Pho and pkhg to tags

[Xinely's Easy]

00:04:127 (1) - make it 1/1 and add circle here 00:05:413 - it's weird to follow vocal here
00:06:913 (3) - use a circle instead, I know there's a guitar/bass-like sound in the bg but isnt too noticeable :3 make not 1/1 gap feels so bad in Easy diff, also i love to follow musics more than vocal
00:10:985 (1) - change to 1/1 and add a repeat (even you can do it without repeat) weird again since vocal isnt at the whitetick, and drum is so weak at that time
00:25:770 (2,3,4) - try this http://puu.sh/eO2xJ/70a15e7b90.jpg (3's sliderticks cover vocals too nice :3 ) you can use 2 circles instead of the 1/1 slider if you want :3 nope since i have to map 00:27:056 - , also i make this for variation, it's so boring with 3/2 slider repeats only 8(
00:48:699 you have 2 greenlines here fixed before you mod it, blame asuna didnt update it yet

Dont take it bad but i dont like the way you mapped it so i'll give you a rough draft of my way to map this song (following vocals works way better to me ;3) checked the draft but sorry you skipped some (3/4 from whole song) of cymbals, it feel so empty and weird for me. and i dont like to map vocal unless for Hard and Insane, so just different taste here

thanks 4 mod but sorry no fixed >_<

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-01-21T17:32:08+00:00

From LordRaika's Modding Party

[General]
Not really mapping thingie, but the mp3 suddenly stops. Is this normal, or not? If it's not, try getting a better mp3

[Xinely's Easy]
Why slidertickrate 2? I recommend 1 for Easy

00:06:913 (3) - This slider feels weird, quite a lot actually, due to it starting at red tick, and being only 1/2 long
00:22:342 (2) - ^^
00:26:199 (3,4) - ^^
00:30:913 (3) - ^^ (Why is this the only problem so far?)
00:39:485 (2) - ^^
00:43:556 (2) - As it's a reverse, maybe you can try to blanket it with (1)
00:46:770 (3) - This slider feels weird, quite a lot actually, due to it starting at red tick, and being only 1/2 long
00:53:842 (2,1) - Maybe you can try to blanket them, add a grey point at the start of the slider
01:07:556 (4) - Going to high (HP bar)
01:21:270 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved, move the red point around a little
01:24:699 (4) - NC (for the Kiai ending)

[Normal]
Such High SV O.o
Try not to stack in easy/normal difficulties
SV CHANGES ARE NOT ALLOWED IN EASY/NORMAL!!
00:12:699 (3) - Add a circle, probably with a NC
00:23:627 (2,3,1) - Blanket can be improved
00:30:485 (2,3,1) - ^^

Good diff, but it has big problems, due to stacks/SV changes

[Hard]
00:10:020 (3,5) - Improve blanket
00:49:342 (2,3,4,3,4,3,4) - Delete? Can give better emphasis
00:56:199 (2,3,4,3,4,5,3,4,5) - ^^
01:13:985 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - All those 1/4 might be too fast for hard. consider changing some parts to 1/2
01:25:020 (2,3) - Feels weird, due to starting at the blue tick. Consider making it all circles, or something completely else

Really neat diff

[pkhg's Insane]
Wow, SV is lower then Normal/Hard

00:08:306 (5) - Looks kinda ugly, with it being so curvy. something like 00:09:699 (2,3) - would be better
00:12:270 (1) - Unsnapped end (AiMOD)
00:29:842 (1) - Move to 185:171
01:18:913 (6,1) - It looks like it's 1/2 apart from eachother
01:25:449 (5,6) - Distance might be to high after a stream, but it's kinda low BPM, so only a small suggestion
01:26:520 (1) - Spinner is unsnapped (AiMOD)

[Pho's Insane]

00:10:449 (4) - Feels weird starting at a blue tick (off-beat)
00:26:199 (6,1) - Might feel even better when made a blanket
00:35:413 (3,4) - Distance feels like 1/2
00:43:770 (2) - Consider moving to 216:150 (Same as 00:42:592 (4,5))
00:44:199 (4,5,6) - Jump is kinda big. Maybe Ctrl G (5) and move to 204:56 (Or smth like that) to not cause weird big 1/4 jumps
00:56:842 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Even though it plays okay, it feels weird. Maybe due to the "weird" NC. Maybe delete some NC, not 100% sure tbh ;-;
01:15:699 (4,5,6,7,1) - Move them all up 1 coordinate (so 4 is at 220:255, just like 01:14:306 (9))
01:20:306 (3) - Where is the 1/8 in the music?
01:26:520 - Consider adding a spinner here

Finished, but already got the KD xD

Good map, and good luck
You deserve a star :3

Last edited by Bara- 2015-01-21T18:59:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-21T17:57:25+00:00

oops clicked kds ;w;
sorry but hope you finish it soon~
about SV changes in normal, i think its ok since lust says "if its clear and fits with the diffuculty"

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-01-21T19:00:46+00:00

Finished the mod
Can the denied post get back the kudosu?

Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2015-01-21T19:27:00+00:00

Xinely's Easy
00:05:842 (2) This slider looks weird in my opinion. Maybe you should just make it curvy withtou the red dot
00:22:342 (2) Why not a little bit curvy?
00:39:485 (2,4) Make (4) like (2). looks way better
00:55:556 (1,2,1) Why dont you make those curvy so its something different than before?

Normal
00:00:699 (1,2) Why not something like this

SPOILER

Fits better when 00:02:413 (1) comes
00:02:413 (1,2) They are touching and really close to each other, maybe you should move (2) a little bit
00:45:270 (1) Move the last point too 284/220
00:59:199 (1,1) Recovery time is too short
01:11:627 It feels like there is something missing. Add a Circle

Hard
00:00:699 (1) Remove NC
00:05:413 (4,3) Stack is not perfect
01:01:342 (3,4,5) Maybe you should delete (4) and put circles there instead
01:17:842 (1,2) Make (2) curvy, but not just straight. The pattern looks pretty boring to me

pkhg's Insane
Ar 8,5 pls. Ar 9 on 140 Bpm is too high
00:23:627 (7) ctrl + g and move 00:24:270 (8) to 396/296

Pho's Insane
00:07:985 (2,3) Make (2) a triplet and let (3) begin on 00:08:306 or make a stream from 00:07:985 till 00:08:413
00:21:163 (4,1) Let (1) have the same distance as 00:20:842 (1,2,3,4)
00:33:056 (1) ctrl + g
00:39:056 (4,5) I hate to mention blanks, but this one can be improved in my opinion
01:25:127 Add a circle here maybe? Feels so empty

Really nice map :3
One of the few japanese songs i like haha
Good Luck with it ^_^

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-01-21T20:18:33+00:00

baraatje123 wrote:
From LordRaika's Modding Party

[General]
Not really mapping thingie, but the mp3 suddenly stops. Is this normal, or not? If it's not, try getting a better mp3

[Xinely's Easy]
Why slidertickrate 2? I recommend 1 for Easy

00:06:913 (3) - This slider feels weird, quite a lot actually, due to it starting at red tick, and being only 1/2 long
00:22:342 (2) - ^^
00:26:199 (3,4) - ^^
00:30:913 (3) - ^^ (Why is this the only problem so far?)
00:39:485 (2) - ^^
00:43:556 (2) - As it's a reverse, maybe you can try to blanket it with (1)
00:46:770 (3) - This slider feels weird, quite a lot actually, due to it starting at red tick, and being only 1/2 long
00:53:842 (2,1) - Maybe you can try to blanket them, add a grey point at the start of the slider
01:07:556 (4) - Going to high (HP bar)
01:21:270 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved, move the red point around a little
01:24:699 (4) - NC (for the Kiai ending)

[Normal]
Such High SV O.o
Try not to stack in easy/normal difficulties
SV CHANGES ARE NOT ALLOWED IN EASY/NORMAL!!
00:12:699 (3) - Add a circle, probably with a NC
00:23:627 (2,3,1) - Blanket can be improved
00:30:485 (2,3,1) - ^^

Good diff, but it has big problems, due to stacks/SV changes

[Hard]
00:10:020 (3,5) - Improve blanket
00:49:342 (2,3,4,3,4,3,4) - Delete? Can give better emphasis
00:56:199 (2,3,4,3,4,5,3,4,5) - ^^
01:13:985 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - All those 1/4 might be too fast for hard. consider changing some parts to 1/2
01:25:020 (2,3) - Feels weird, due to starting at the blue tick. Consider making it all circles, or something completely else

Really neat diff

[pkhg's Insane]
Wow, SV is lower then Normal/Hard

00:08:306 (5) - Looks kinda ugly, with it being so curvy. something like 00:09:699 (2,3) - would be better
00:12:270 (1) - Unsnapped end (AiMOD)
00:29:842 (1) - Move to 185:171
01:18:913 (6,1) - It looks like it's 1/2 apart from eachother
01:25:449 (5,6) - Distance might be to high after a stream, but it's kinda low BPM, so only a small suggestion
01:26:520 (1) - Spinner is unsnapped (AiMOD)

[Pho's Insane]

00:10:449 (4) - Feels weird starting at a blue tick (off-beat) Might feel strange, yeah, but there's no problem with it as it follows the vocal pretty well. the previous slider also followed blue tick at the end, so no polarity issue either.
00:26:199 (6,1) - Might feel even better when made a blanket
00:35:413 (3,4) - Distance feels like 1/2 Maybe, but this is a new section in the music, so people might imply the jump behind this pattern.
00:43:770 (2) - Consider moving to 216:150 (Same as 00:42:592 (4,5))
00:44:199 (4,5,6) - Jump is kinda big. Maybe Ctrl G (5) and move to 204:56 (Or smth like that) to not cause weird big 1/4 jumps
00:56:842 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Even though it plays okay, it feels weird. Maybe due to the "weird" NC. Maybe delete some NC, not 100% sure tbh ;-; NC is what makes this pattern more readable, and it follows the each vocal's syllable. Keep for now.
01:15:699 (4,5,6,7,1) - Move them all up 1 coordinate (so 4 is at 220:255, just like 01:14:306 (9))
01:20:306 (3) - Where is the 1/8 in the music? Same answer as to Gaia, there's noise at 01:20:413 - which is fine to follow with this backslider imo. I'll wait for more opinions on this.
01:26:520 - Consider adding a spinner here Not really needed, but I need to see how the other mappers in this set decide. I think the fade-off needs to be made better first before I think about setting a spinner at the end. <.<

Finished, but already got the KD xD Thanks for the mod :3 Sry for the temporary KD denial, was unneeded lol.

Good map, and good luck
You deserve a star :3

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Pho's Insane
00:07:985 (2,3) Make (2) a triplet and let (3) begin on 00:08:306 or make a stream from 00:07:985 till 00:08:413 I don't like even streams tbh ;-; Rearranged this rhythm tho.
00:21:163 (4,1) Let (1) have the same distance as 00:20:842 (1,2,3,4) Uh... but it has.
00:33:056 (1) ctrl + g Will think about this, I like how the sliders follow the same direction here.
00:39:056 (4,5) I hate to mention blanks, but this one can be improved in my opinion
01:25:127 Add a circle here maybe? Feels so empty I don't know, this is a relatively weak beat to me that doesn't need to be played :/ Will think about it.

Really nice map :3
One of the few japanese songs i like haha
Good Luck with it ^_^

Thanks for the mod!

No comment = fixed.
@ pkhg: Psst, you got unsnapped stuff. Also, you got our names twice in the tags for some reason. <.<

updoot. Also fixed pattern at the beginning blah cuz i didn't like it

osu file format v13

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Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-22T01:42:52+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Normal
00:00:699 (1,2) Why not something like this
SPOILER
Fits better when 00:02:413 (1) comes
00:02:413 (1,2) They are touching and really close to each other, maybe you should move (2) a little bit
00:45:270 (1) Move the last point too 284/220
00:59:199 (1,1) Recovery time is too short its ok for me
01:11:627 It feels like there is something missing. Add a Circle

Hard
00:00:699 (1) Remove NC
00:05:413 (4,3) Stack is not perfect
01:01:342 (3,4,5) Maybe you should delete (4) and put circles there instead prefer 1/4 slider here
01:17:842 (1,2) Make (2) curvy, but not just straight. The pattern looks pretty boring to me

Really nice map :3
One of the few japanese songs i like haha
Good Luck with it ^_^

baraatje123 wrote:
From LordRaika's Modding Party

[General]
Not really mapping thingie, but the mp3 suddenly stops. Is this normal, or not? If it's not, try getting a better mp3

[Normal]
Such High SV O.o
Try not to stack in easy/normal difficulties
SV CHANGES ARE NOT ALLOWED IN EASY/NORMAL!!
00:12:699 (3) - Add a circle, probably with a NC
00:23:627 (2,3,1) - Blanket can be improved
00:30:485 (2,3,1) - ^^

Good diff, but it has big problems, due to stacks/SV changes

[Hard]
00:10:020 (3,5) - Improve blanket its more than enough
00:49:342 (2,3,4,3,4,3,4) - Delete? Can give better emphasis it will be feels empty, although i should be map this part, but i'll keep it like that
00:56:199 (2,3,4,3,4,5,3,4,5) - ^^ ^^
01:13:985 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - All those 1/4 might be too fast for hard. consider changing some parts to 1/2 i think its fair enough for hard
01:25:020 (2,3) - Feels weird, due to starting at the blue tick. Consider making it all circles, or something completely else im in purpose to makes this part a bit hard :3

Really neat diff

Good map, and good luck
You deserve a star :3

no reply = fixed
Thanks for mod!! you both~

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-22T04:34:36+00:00

baraatje123 wrote:
From LordRaika's Modding Party

[General]
Not really mapping thingie, but the mp3 suddenly stops. Is this normal, or not? If it's not, try getting a better mp3 It isnt normal, that happens cuz asuna is using the same .mp3 that Remco32 used on his map like 6 years ago x.x
So Asuna try to get a new mp3 if it isnt too hard :3

[pkhg's Insane]
Wow, SV is lower then Normal/Hard that pkhg guy doesnt know how to map with high sv

00:08:306 (5) - Looks kinda ugly, with it being so curvy. something like 00:09:699 (2,3) - would be better Fixed
00:12:270 (1) - Unsnapped end (AiMOD) I was playing with sv so i forgot to adjust this, thanks :3
00:29:842 (1) - Move to 185:171 but this is stacked on 00:28:127 (1) - so i moved 00:29:413 (4) - instead
01:18:913 (6,1) - It looks like it's 1/2 apart from eachother Fixed
01:25:449 (5,6) - Distance might be to high after a stream, but it's kinda low BPM, so only a small suggestion No changes then :3
01:26:520 (1) - Spinner is unsnapped (AiMOD) Fixed

Good map, and good luck
You deserve a star :3

Come[Back]Home wrote:
pkhg's Insane
Ar 8,5 pls. Ar 9 on 140 Bpm is too high If more ppl point out this I'll change
00:23:627 (7) ctrl + g and move 00:24:270 (8) to 396/296 Tried it but still I like mine :3

Really nice map :3
One of the few japanese songs i like haha
Good Luck with it ^_^

Thanks a lot guys >wo

update \:3/

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pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,812 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-01-23T23:46:46+00:00

from the queue

i wonder how fast you would be able to stream if you had a metal arm
or is it even possible to keep rhythm with that
how does automail work
science help

[general]

that other guy mentioned it already but current mp3 has some audible static at parts and doesn't even fade out so uh get a new one. people with spinneres should reconsider placement after that happens
negative offset isn't necessary. it would be if you had a green line before 00:00:699 (1) - but none of the diffs do, so the uninherited point should be at 00:00:699 - or whatever the equivalent is with a better mp3
prolly want some audioleadin (which again depends on the new mp3 you gotta get)
would be nice to have a creditless opening. it definitely exists somewhere (and i wouldn't suggest ripping it from that youtube video lol)
soft-sliderslide20.wav is unused so

[pho]

00:00:485 - you follow vocals everywhere so it would probably make sense to have an object here too. stacking it on 00:00:699 (1) - would be fine pkhg style
00:06:913 (4) - assuming the whistles on 00:06:056 (2,3) - were for the piano, this one needs a whistle too
00:08:199 (3,4) - whistles should be swapped cuz same sound that you whistled at 00:01:342 (2) - 00:03:056 (4) - 00:04:556 (2) -
00:09:699 (2) - tail should have whistle for same reaosn as ^
00:11:627 (4) - and head^
00:12:270 (3) - hitsound of some kind please
00:12:270 (3) - may just be me, but making this a straight slider works way better to empahsize the slowness and difference from curvy sliders surrounding it
00:15:485 (8) - supernazi but if you were going for a standard curve on this stream 8 should be more to the right
00:17:627 (8) - normal sampleset sounds a lot better on this. doubt it was intentional to have soft sampleset and soft addition lol
00:18:699 (1,2,3,4) - clapclapclapfinish sounds a lot better than finishfinishfinishfinish cuz song does that
00:21:270 (1) - spacing here kind of screwed. it says 1.0x in the top right but it's not cuz sv multiplier breaks things. shoudl be at 1.2x
00:28:770 (3) - i think you forgot a whistle here cuz same thing as 00:21:913 (2) - tbh i dont even know what's going on with hitsounds here vocalstooconfusing
00:33:913 (4) - CLAP
00:34:985 (1) - clap
00:43:556 (1) - further right so not confused as another sliderjump
00:47:413 (2,3,4,5,6) - may want to increase volume steadily here cuz #buildup see pkhg diff
00:48:270 (5,6) - sounds a lot better as a 1/2 slider since there's nothing to really click on 6. would also give more emphasis on the clickystuff in next section cuz it is intense. i would do something like this but i do pretty stupid stuff so maybe dont do that. no object where 6 is would also work see pkhg again
00:48:699 (1,3) - 00:50:413 (1,3) - not getting why one is whistle+nothing then the other is whislte+whistle. you do it consistently so you probably have reasoning but i'm not hearing it
00:54:056 (2) - sounds way better wtih normal sampleset. right now it's like hitting a silent circle cuz of how soft softsampleset is
01:00:699 (1) - tail should also ^
01:10:770 (7) - lowerpls by like 5 pixels i have reasons just do it ;-;
01:13:342 (3,4,5) - what is a straight line
01:24:699 (1,2,3,4,1) - might be good to swtich to a different sampleset here since it's all vocals. pkhg diff does it gud
01:25:985 (1) - soft whistle > normal whistle
well uh hitsounds in the kiai are pretty lacking. you've only got a finish or two every couple measures which is kind of lame. the 2 and 4 snare hits would be good with emphasis so maybe do that. there's a couple of snare streams too that you can find

[pkhg]i still still love you

8.5ish is definitely better
how about nah
00:00:699 - with the offset change mentioned in general, this green line will become unrankable so remove kty
00:22:985 (5) - forgot a new combow
00:50:199 (1) - 00:51:913 (1) - 00:58:770 (1) - doesn't really need a new combo. like i know it was intentional but it's just weird to have triple combo spam and a new combo on an unemphasized sound like those places (relative to emphasis of 00:50:413 (1) - and 00:50:627 (1) - yaya)
00:52:127 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - comboing here is uh weird. dunno how else to explain. you do the same rhythm twice in the measure, so dividing the measure in half with combos would work fine
00:59:842 (5,1) - combos should be swapped cuz vocal thing starts on the white tick not bluezueu
01:08:627 (3) - finish doesn't really seem necessary here since there isn't one in musicstuff. keeping the whistle sounds good tho. 01:22:342 (1) - does it rigtht
01:14:413 (3) - 01:15:056 (1) - should have finishes for same reason you put them on 01:07:556 (3) - 01:08:198 (1) -
01:18:913 (6,1,2,3,1) - why the comboing

yes it's all new combo stuff dont judge my abilities

[hard]ok so this will sound bad, but the slider velocity used in the opening seems way too fast. stuff starting at 00:21:270 (1) - onwards is really nice since it builds up slider velocity along with the song, but the beginning is the same slider velocity as the kiai which is completely unnatural when it's so much calmer. doing something like .75x will work way better. using a lower base sv as explained in the first thing on normal would prob be good too. approach rate could be lowered to match that as well and make the spread beautiful

depending on what changes you make some things may be irrelevant, but i'll point out some big deal stuff:

00:12:056 (4) - pretty awkward to have such a strong sound on a slider end. the normal and easy both map this rhythmically better so pretty sure you'll be able to do something on a hard. 01:25:985 (7) - is also a pretty hardcore passive slider which the easy managed to get easily
00:18:056 - if you insist on keeping the spinner right before this, you shoudl continue mappign here. the large gap makes no sense pretty much
00:55:556 (1) - would work way better as two circles which you did like everywhere else here
01:01:877 (4,5) - rhythm like this is pretty unnatural since you're emphasizing the blue tick on 5 while the song is emphazing the white tick on the end of 4. using a rhythm to represent that would be gud
01:02:842 (2,3) - jumps this large after a mintue of entirely distance snapped stuff is pretty confusing. keeping jumps below 2x is usually a good guideline on hards (with exceptions of course) but in this case nah. 3 doesn't even have much emphasis compared to other stuff in teh section so a super wide jump even more weird. same thing appears a lot of other places in the kiai
01:10:556 (6,1) - this kind of thing happens a lot and a lot of mappers do it. it's like you want to have the curve from 6 follow the same curve as 1 but it doesn't really work cuz of the way they're played. it's kind of like an awkward dip i dunno how to explain. anyway, usually for these kinds of things it works way better to have sliders going in a shaper curve or different directions. i like the second one more but i do stupid things often. you do the same thing like everywhere on this and hte normal and it could really be a lot nicer. the same sort of thing applies to circles going into sliders like 00:07:342 (5,6,1) - . 5,6,1 are in a curve then 1 itself is a differently angled curve and it just plays like poo. changing the direction on 1 tho will make things unpoo
01:24:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - this kind of thing on a hard is pretty much just spam xzxzxzxzxz and hope you don't miss. would be a lot better to replace 2,3 with a kickslider if you're not planning on using sliderjumps for 1/4 sutff

there's a bunch of other stuff but ya

[normal]
slider velocity is uh... uncomfortably fast like everywhere. 1.6 for a normal is just not natural for an average normal or the difficulty spread here (pkhg's insane is lower so uhhhh). if you were to map with 1.4 as a base sv things would make a lot more sense. the beginning should be slower than kiai as mentioned in hard. also using circle size 3.5 or so may also benefit since things are uncomfortably overlapping/barely overlapping everywhere + fit the spread better. can't really add more mod stuff cuz what i said basically killed the map so woops gl

oh and the gap at 00:59:199 (1,1) - is kind of not a good idea. just using another slider instead of the spinner would work fine ok thats it

[xinely]

00:28:127 (1) - 00:30:913 (3) - not seeing why these have whistles on tails when everything surrounding it is the same thign withouth those whisltels please

[]
normal and hard could be better and i have a fetish for pkhgmap goodbye

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-01-24T02:09:37+00:00

pishifat wrote:
from the queue

i wonder how fast you would be able to stream if you had a metal arm
or is it even possible to keep rhythm with that
how does automail work
science help

[general]
that other guy mentioned it already but current mp3 has some audible static at parts and doesn't even fade out so uh get a new one. people with spinneres should reconsider placement after that happens
negative offset isn't necessary. it would be if you had a green line before 00:00:699 (1) - but none of the diffs do, so the uninherited point should be at 00:00:699 - or whatever the equivalent is with a better mp3
prolly want some audioleadin (which again depends on the new mp3 you gotta get)
would be nice to have a creditless opening. it definitely exists somewhere (and i wouldn't suggest ripping it from that youtube video lol) I'm never sure if you mean stuff like this srs or not >.>
soft-sliderslide20.wav is unused so
[pho]
00:00:485 - you follow vocals everywhere so it would probably make sense to have an object here too. stacking it on 00:00:699 (1) - would be fine pkhg style I'm not pkhg. But I agree with the note
00:06:913 (4) - assuming the whistles on 00:06:056 (2,3) - were for the piano, this one needs a whistle too
00:08:199 (3,4) - whistles should be swapped cuz same sound that you whistled at 00:01:342 (2) - 00:03:056 (4) - 00:04:556 (2) -
00:09:699 (2) - tail should have whistle for same reaosn as ^
00:11:627 (4) - and head^
00:12:270 (3) - hitsound of some kind please
00:12:270 (3) - may just be me, but making this a straight slider works way better to empahsize the slowness and difference from curvy sliders surrounding it Might be, but I don't feel anything wrong with slow curvy sliders. Keep.
00:15:485 (8) - supernazi but if you were going for a standard curve on this stream 8 should be more to the right
00:17:627 (8) - normal sampleset sounds a lot better on this. doubt it was intentional to have soft sampleset and soft addition lol That was inteded lol, fixed.
00:18:699 (1,2,3,4) - clapclapclapfinish sounds a lot better than finishfinishfinishfinish cuz song does that
00:21:270 (1) - spacing here kind of screwed. it says 1.0x in the top right but it's not cuz sv multiplier breaks things. shoudl be at 1.2x rly, i forgot that i switched SV here =.=
00:28:770 (3) - i think you forgot a whistle here cuz same thing as 00:21:913 (2) - tbh i dont even know what's going on with hitsounds here vocalstooconfusing herpderp, I reworked hitsound this whole section, so whistles are much more sparse.
00:33:913 (4) - CLAP
00:34:985 (1) - clap
00:43:556 (1) - further right so not confused as another sliderjump
00:47:413 (2,3,4,5,6) - may want to increase volume steadily here cuz #buildup see pkhg diff Done, still not pkhg.
00:48:270 (5,6) - sounds a lot better as a 1/2 slider since there's nothing to really click on 6. would also give more emphasis on the clickystuff in next section cuz it is intense. i would do something like this but i do pretty stupid stuff so maybe dont do that. no object where 6 is would also work see pkhg again Again, I'm not pkhg lol. Slider was a pretty good idea, I'll go with that.
00:48:699 (1,3) - 00:50:413 (1,3) - not getting why one is whistle+nothing then the other is whislte+whistle. you do it consistently so you probably have reasoning but i'm not hearing it Thought it'd be good for variety in HS, but that was a dumb reason. Gonna set double-whistles all over this place again.
00:54:056 (2) - sounds way better wtih normal sampleset. right now it's like hitting a silent circle cuz of how soft softsampleset is
01:00:699 (1) - tail should also ^
01:10:770 (7) - lowerpls by like 5 pixels i have reasons just do it ;-; Probably for scoreboard i guess
01:13:342 (3,4,5) - what is a straight line
01:24:699 (1,2,3,4,1) - might be good to swtich to a different sampleset here since it's all vocals. pkhg diff does it gud Good idea... I'm still not pkh tho.
01:25:985 (1) - soft whistle > normal whistle
well uh hitsounds in the kiai are pretty lacking. you've only got a finish or two every couple measures which is kind of lame. the 2 and 4 snare hits would be good with emphasis so maybe do that. there's a couple of snare streams too that you can find The hitsounds were still kinda unfinished, I wanted to add another custom HS set first. All reworked now. i counted pkhg's name 4 times in my mod wow pishifan.

Thanks for the mod pishi! No comment = fixed!
I added some extra hitsounds in the file, you have to overwrite the already existing hitsounds from set5 but that's okay:
http://puu.sh/eWkl5/cebb8df535.rar

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-24T05:02:11+00:00

pishifat wrote:
from the queue

i wonder how fast you would be able to stream if you had a metal arm
or is it even possible to keep rhythm with that
how does automail work
science help

[general]
that other guy mentioned it already but current mp3 has some audible static at parts and doesn't even fade out so uh get a new one. people with spinneres should reconsider placement after that happens~~i'll try to get better mp3~~
negative offset isn't necessary. it would be if you had a green line before 00:00:699 (1) - but none of the diffs do, so the uninherited point should be at 00:00:699 - or whatever the equivalent is with a better mp3
prolly want some audioleadin (which again depends on the new mp3 you gotta get)
would be nice to have a creditless opening. it definitely exists somewhere (and i wouldn't suggest ripping it from that youtube video lol)
soft-sliderslide20.wav is unused so delete it

[hard]ok so this will sound bad, but the slider velocity used in the opening seems way too fast. stuff starting at 00:21:270 (1) - onwards is really nice since it builds up slider velocity along with the song, but the beginning is the same slider velocity as the kiai which is completely unnatural when it's so much calmer. doing something like .75x will work way better i'm using 0.85x, since 00:21:270 (1) - this section a bit more slow than the beginning i guess. using a lower base sv as explained in the first thing on normal would prob be good too. approach rate could be lowered to match that as well and make the spread beautiful well changed AR into 7

depending on what changes you make some things may be irrelevant, but i'll point out some big deal stuff:
00:12:056 (4) - pretty awkward to have such a strong sound on a slider end. the normal and easy both map this rhythmically better so pretty sure you'll be able to do something on a hard. 01:25:985 (7) - is also a pretty hardcore passive slider which the easy managed to get easily i made triplet here
00:18:056 - if you insist on keeping the spinner right before this, you shoudl continue mappign here. the large gap makes no sense pretty much mapped this section
00:55:556 (1) - would work way better as two circles which you did like everywhere else here k changed into 2 circle instead
01:01:877 (4,5) - rhythm like this is pretty unnatural since you're emphasizing the blue tick on 5 while the song is emphazing the white tick on the end of 4. using a rhythm to represent that would be gud k i'm make (4) start in white tick and (5) in red tick also remove the reverse at (5)
01:02:842 (2,3) - jumps this large after a mintue of entirely distance snapped stuff is pretty confusing. keeping jumps below 2x is usually a good guideline on hards (with exceptions of course) but in this case nah. 3 doesn't even have much emphasis compared to other stuff in teh section so a super wide jump even more weird. same thing appears a lot of other places in the kiai i'll consider it more, since im really want add a big jump here
01:10:556 (6,1) - this kind of thing happens a lot and a lot of mappers do it. it's like you want to have the curve from 6 follow the same curve as 1 but it doesn't really work cuz of the way they're played. it's kind of like an awkward dip i dunno how to explain. anyway, usually for these kinds of things it works way better to have sliders going in a shaper curve or different directions. i like the second one more but i do stupid things often. you do the same thing like everywhere on this and hte normal and it could really be a lot nicer i think better use the "shaper curve" :3, k i'll try to do in some part too. the same sort of thing applies to circles going into sliders like 00:07:342 (5,6,1) - . 5,6,1 are in a curve then 1 itself is a differently angled curve and it just plays like poo. changing the direction on 1 tho will make things unpoo k
01:24:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - this kind of thing on a hard is pretty much just spam xzxzxzxzxz and hope you don't miss. would be a lot better to replace 2,3 with a kickslider if you're not planning on using sliderjumps for 1/4 sutff k since so much ppl said this is too hard, i change it
there's a bunch of other stuff but ya

[normal]
slider velocity is uh... uncomfortably fast like everywhere. 1.6 for a normal is just not natural for an average normal or the difficulty spread here (pkhg's insane is lower so uhhhh). if you were to map with 1.4 as a base sv things would make a lot more sense. the beginning should be slower than kiai as mentioned in hard. also using circle size 3.5 or so may also benefit since things are uncomfortably overlapping/barely overlapping everywhere + fit the spread better. can't really add more mod stuff cuz what i said basically killed the map so woops gl the big problem is about slider velocity, maybe i'll remap with 1.4 DS `-` also use 3.5 CS, time to remap \o\ \o| \o/ |o/ /o/

oh and the gap at 00:59:199 (1,1) - is kind of not a good idea. just using another slider instead of the spinner would work fine ok thats it i keep this since ask in #modhelps said its ok, but well map this part with slider instead
[list:1337]okay, this is gives me experience in mapping std, im not thats good at mapping std, but i'll try to be more better than now
already remap normal to repair SV issue and repair hard so much

[]
normal and hard could be better and i have a fetish for pkhgmap goodbye XD Thanks for mod!~

Already get better mp3, wait GD'r update before updating new mp3

EDIT : Comming soon!! Gero's Insane
too much Insane \o| \o/ |o/

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-24T15:41:33+00:00

pishifat wrote:
from the queue

i wonder how fast you would be able to stream if you had a metal arm
or is it even possible to keep rhythm with that
how does automail work
science help

[general]
that other guy mentioned it already but current mp3 has some audible static at parts and doesn't even fade out so uh get a new one. people with spinneres should reconsider placement after that happens
negative offset isn't necessary. it would be if you had a green line before 00:00:699 (1) - but none of the diffs do, so the uninherited point should be at 00:00:699 - or whatever the equivalent is with a better mp3
prolly want some audioleadin (which again depends on the new mp3 you gotta get)
would be nice to have a creditless opening. it definitely exists somewhere (and i wouldn't suggest ripping it from that youtube video lol)
soft-sliderslide20.wav is unused so
Took me a lot to adjust hitsounds so maybe i forgot to delete it, oops

[pkhg]i still still love you
i luv u too
8.5ish is definitely better uh kk
how about nah wat
00:00:699 - with the offset change mentioned in general, this green line will become unrankable so remove kty sure
00:22:985 (5) - forgot a new combow
00:50:199 (1) - 00:51:913 (1) - 00:58:770 (1) - doesn't really need a new combo. like i know it was intentional but it's just weird to have triple combo spam and a new combo on an unemphasized sound like those places (relative to emphasis of 00:50:413 (1) - and 00:50:627 (1) - yaya)
00:52:127 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - comboing here is uh weird. dunno how else to explain. you do the same rhythm twice in the measure, so dividing the measure in half with combos would work fine
00:59:842 (5,1) - combos should be swapped cuz vocal thing starts on the white tick not bluezueu
01:08:627 (3) - finish doesn't really seem necessary here since there isn't one in musicstuff. keeping the whistle sounds good tho. 01:22:342 (1) - does it rigtht i know it, but was nice, i'll miss it :c
01:14:413 (3) - 01:15:056 (1) - should have finishes for same reason you put them on 01:07:556 (3) - 01:08:198 (1) -
01:18:913 (6,1,2,3,1) - why the comboing removed from 01:19:556 (4) - i guess its ok
yes it's all new combo stuff dont judge my abilities

[]
normal and hard could be better and i have a fetish for pkhgmap goodbye good to know owo

Fixed everything thx pishi :3

update yay

osu file format v14

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MoodyRPG

2,754 posts

Joined August 2010

MoodyRPG 2015-01-25T02:58:09+00:00

General

~

Xinely's Easy

01:24:913 (4) - Just a suggestion, new combo perhaps?

Normal

00:42:484 (3) - New combo here to avoid the long combo?
00:54:699 (3) - I'd would like to see a finish for a whistle, sounds cool
01:00:913 (3) - Finish

Hard

00:40:127 (5) - Make this note a bit curved? Is so straight in my opinion
00:55:341 (4) - Add a clap here?
01:26:841 (x) - You should add a spinner like the others difficulties

pkhg's Insane

Bien hecho compatriota o/

Pho's Insane

Nothing wrong lol

That's all, good luck

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-25T04:23:34+00:00

Thanks for mod!!
fix everything~

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-01-25T08:03:57+00:00

MoodyRPG wrote:
pkhg's Insane
Bien hecho compatriota o/
That's all, good luck

Gracias Moody :3

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-01-25T19:49:44+00:00

I did some self-modding and lowered overall volume for the new MP3:

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Yui - Again.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60699
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:again
TitleUnicode:again
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Pho's Insane
Source:Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood
Tags:Xinely Pho pkhg FMA FMOST1 Hisashi Kondo Ayumi Hamasaki Hollydays in the Sun
BeatmapID:603329
BeatmapSetID:262627

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8.6
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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The more Insanes, the merrier the set becomes \:D/

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-25T19:52:22+00:00

Updated w/o xinely update ;w;

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-01-27T21:11:15+00:00

baraatje123 wrote:
From LordRaika's Modding Party

[General]
Not really mapping thingie, but the mp3 suddenly stops. Is this normal, or not? If it's not, try getting a better mp3

[Xinely's Easy]
Why slidertickrate 2? I recommend 1 for Easy coz tr 2 sounds better for this song

00:06:913 (3) - This slider feels weird, quite a lot actually, due to it starting at red tick, and being only 1/2 long cmon this is low bpm, 1/2 works fine, also the music is complicated to be mapped in Easy so i think this is best way can i do
00:22:342 (2) - ^^
00:26:199 (3,4) - ^^
00:30:913 (3) - ^^ (Why is this the only problem so far?)
00:39:485 (2) - ^^ all above refering to my first comment
00:43:556 (2) - As it's a reverse, maybe you can try to blanket it with (1) ok
00:46:770 (3) - This slider feels weird, quite a lot actually, due to it starting at red tick, and being only 1/2 long same as first
00:53:842 (2,1) - Maybe you can try to blanket them, add a grey point at the start of the slider idk if i can blanket them, no idea too. i prefer to keep it first
01:07:556 (4) - Going to high (HP bar) it dont touch HP bar orz :C
01:21:270 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved, move the red point around a little o
01:24:699 (4) - NC (for the Kiai ending) but i NC'ed every 2 stanza, even kiai end that time isnt music change pattern so NC doesnt give any sense imo

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Xinely's Easy
00:05:842 (2) This slider looks weird in my opinion. Maybe you should just make it curvy withtou the red dot give another white dot instead, i want to make some variation for it will be boring here
00:22:342 (2) Why not a little bit curvy? coz the natural flow says to me to keep straight, i dont think curve will give better flow either
00:39:485 (2,4) Make (4) like (2). looks way better done
00:55:556 (1,2,1) Why dont you make those curvy so its something different than before? the musics are strong which emphasized nicely with straight rather than curve imo

pishifat wrote:
from the queue

[xinely]
00:28:127 (1) - 00:30:913 (3) - not seeing why these have whistles on tails when everything surrounding it is the same thign withouth those whisltels please removed whistle from 00:28:341 (1) - but i prefer keep for 00:31:127 (3) - because it has guitar snare at tail

MoodyRPG wrote:
Xinely's Easy
01:24:913 (4) - Just a suggestion, new combo perhaps? same as above, since i NC'ed every 2 stanza and music should be NC'ed in 01:26:627 (6) - , nc that instead w

thanks 4 mods ~

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60699
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:again
TitleUnicode:again
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood
Tags:Xinely Pho pkhg FMA FMOST1 Hisashi Kondo Ayumi Hamasaki Hollydays in the Sun
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Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-27T22:31:52+00:00

woohh, udah difix sendiri toh timing'a
kirain belum re-download XD
yowes biar cepet

Updated!!

Modem

3,013 posts

Joined February 2014

Modem 2015-01-30T00:34:27+00:00

Hi~! For M4M

General

Add some AudioLeadin
Others are fine <3

Xinely's Easy

AR 2
00:09:484 (2) Put this slider to x:128 y:260 for better flow
00:45:484 (1) Blanket this slider with 00:45:056 (2) would be nice
Nothing more found~!

Normal

00:06:270 (1) Add whistle in soft default
00:06:699 (2) ^
00:07:127 (3) ^
If you follow my suggestion, then get back to SC5 at 00:07:341 (3)
00:32:413 (2) Put this slider at x:160 y:264 to make the flow prettier, then fix the DS
00:35:841 (2) Put this slider at x:172 y:80 to make the flow prettier
00:34:770 (3) Add whistle (SC5) at this note for consistency
00:35:199 (1) Add finish at this slider's head
00:42:056 (2) Then, add finish at this slider's tail for consistency
00:59:199 (1) Add whistle in normal sampleset and drum additions just like what you did at 00:55:770 (1) and 00:55:984 (2) for consistency
00:59:413 (2) Here too ^
01:01:556 (2) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it
01:03:913 (3) Why did you use whistle at the strong part like this? Normal sampleset without whistle will fit much better
01:06:484 (1) ^
01:07:341 (2) ^
01:07:770 (1) Add finish at this part to follow the music
01:08:413 (2) Here as well ^
01:09:056 (3) Use normal sampleset without whistle here
01:09:484 (1) Add finish at this part to follow the music
01:10:770 (3) Use normal sampleset without whistle here
01:11:627 (1) ^
01:12:484 (2) ^
01:13:341 (2) ^
01:14:199 (3) ^
01:14:627 (1) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it
01:15:270 (2) ^
01:15:913 (3) Use normal sampleset without whistle here
01:16:770 (1) ^
01:18:484 (1) ^
01:20:199 (1) ^
01:21:056 (3) ^
01:21:484 (1) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it
01:23:627 (1) Use normal sampleset without whistle here
01:24:484 (3) ^

Hard

00:43:556 (3) Add whistle (SC5)
00:45:270 (5) ^
00:46:984 (3) ^
00:55:449 (4) Add clap at this reverse part (SC5)
01:07:127 (3) Add whistle (SC5)
01:07:556 (5) Add clap (SC5)
01:12:056 (1) Add whistle (SC5)
01:12:270 (2) ^
01:14:627 (1) Add finish at this part
01:15:270 (3) ^ And NC this
01:16:341 (1) Add finish again
01:17:413 (3) Add whistle (SC5)
01:19:127 (2) ^
01:23:199 (1) Add finish at this part
01:23:949 (3) Add whistle (SC5)

pkhg's Insane

(o w o) AR 9??
Ummmm.... change AR to ?
OD 8
Why is it this diff. have no video while other diff. have it?
Nothing more found~!

Pho's Insane

............. Nothing found

Sorry..... I didn't mod Insane diff very well since there are nothing wrong for me to pointed out
Good luck~!

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-30T09:08:12+00:00

Modem wrote:
Hi~! For M4M
General
Add some AudioLeadin
Others are fine <3

Normal
00:06:270 (1) Add whistle in soft default it's feels weird to me
00:06:699 (2) ^ ^
00:07:127 (3) ^ ^
If you follow my suggestion, then get back to SC5 at 00:07:341 (3)
00:32:413 (2) Put this slider at x:160 y:264 to make the flow prettier, then fix the DS i'll try
00:35:841 (2) Put this slider at x:172 y:80 to make the flow prettier it's fine for me
00:34:770 (3) Add whistle (SC5) at this note for consistency added
00:35:199 (1) Add finish at this slider's head it isn't fits and sounds weird i guess
00:42:056 (2) Then, add finish at this slider's tail for consistency ^
00:59:199 (1) Add whistle in normal sampleset and drum additions just like what you did at 00:55:770 (1) and 00:55:984 (2) for consistency how i can forget dis!!! added
00:59:413 (2) Here too ^ ^
01:01:556 (2) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it ok i'll try
01:03:913 (3) Why did you use whistle at the strong part like this? Normal sampleset without whistle will fit much better just change it into clap i guess
01:06:484 (1) ^
01:07:341 (2) ^
01:07:770 (1) Add finish at this part to follow the music
01:08:413 (2) Here as well ^
01:09:056 (3) Use normal sampleset without whistle here
01:09:484 (1) Add finish at this part to follow the music
01:10:770 (3) Use normal sampleset without whistle here
01:11:627 (1) ^
01:12:484 (2) ^
01:13:341 (2) ^
01:14:199 (3) ^
01:14:627 (1) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it
01:15:270 (2) ^
01:15:913 (3) Use normal sampleset without whistle here
01:16:770 (1) ^
01:18:484 (1) ^
01:20:199 (1) ^
01:21:056 (3) ^
01:21:484 (1) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it
01:23:627 (1) Use normal sampleset without whistle here
01:24:484 (3) ^

ok already repair the hitsound

Hard
00:43:556 (3) Add whistle (SC5)
00:45:270 (5) ^
00:46:984 (3) ^
00:55:449 (4) Add clap at this reverse part (SC5)
01:07:127 (3) Add whistle (SC5)
01:07:556 (5) Add clap (SC5)
01:12:056 (1) Add whistle (SC5)
01:12:270 (2) ^
01:14:627 (1) Add finish at this part
01:15:270 (3) ^ And NC this
01:16:341 (1) Add finish again
01:17:413 (3) Add whistle (SC5)
01:19:127 (2) ^
01:23:199 (1) Add finish at this part
01:23:949 (3) Add whistle (SC5)

Sorry..... I didn't mod Insane diff very well since there are nothing wrong for me to pointed out
Good luck~!

Thanks for mod, repair some hitsound~

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

__Hatsune_Miku 2015-01-31T07:56:30+00:00

ah...

Xinely's Easy

01:26:841 (1) - s↘P↗inner end is 01:29:627 (1)
Then.. is good as Easy !!!

Normal

01:22:127 (2) - Distance Snap Is on , pull down note / then off them , move note left a little ?

hard

i cant fined problme in this diff..

pkhg's Insane

i cant fine sorry. is Perfect !

Pho's Insane

00:25:984 (5) - ctrl+< 1 time and little pull To the right ?
01:08:841 (5) - ctrl+> 1 time and pull donw and Put one upon another 01:08:413 (4) this
00:08:520 (3) - Put one upon another - 00:08:199 (2)

I'm sorry, did not fully

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-01-31T08:43:39+00:00

Placeholder for my mod :3

Ayu

1,126 posts

Joined December 2011

Ayu 2015-01-31T12:53:17+00:00

Xinely's Easy

00:48:913 (1,2,1) - Maybe you could put a 90 degree rotation in here somewhere, so it's less straight forward and a bit more intuitive to play.

Normal

00:08:413 (2) - What's this jump for? It's rather random.

Hard

01:02:198 (4,5) - this is a little over the top for hard, if you ask me.

pkhg's Insane

00:10:627 (4) - Start this on a 1/3 tick if you're trying to focus on the vocals.
00:13:984 (6) - I'd use 2 circles here instead, or at least something that requires user input on the white tick.
00:23:841 (3) - Reverse this?

Pho's Insane

00:08:520 (3) - Same as in pkhg's insane, this should start on 1/3 if you're focussing on the vocals.
00:09:484 (1,2,3,4) - Here too, everything is kinda missing the vocals, because it's mapped on the wrong beat snap divisor.

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

957 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2015-01-31T14:41:42+00:00

Hey, Mod4Mod from my queue.

Xinely's Easy
- 00:06:056 (2) - Perhaps bring back the linear point so that the shape looks more defined? Currently it looks like a really messy curve.

Example

- 00:11:199 (1) - Kinda pedantic of me but perhaps balance the shape of this slider by moving the second slider point to about 280:324?

Not much to say about this difficulty.

Normal
- 00:00:913 (1,2) - Perhaps use a distance snap that's far enough so that notes in white-red rhythm don't touch eachother? x1.1 should be fine and not up the difficulty too much. If you have them to the point where they're barely touching, you might aswell have them seperated so that it looks better.
- 00:02:413 (3,1) - I'll mention this one since it doesn't seem to be a huge issue, but stacks can be difficult for beginner players to read so I would be careful at how you use them.
- 00:35:199 (1,2) - This flow isn't particularly nice for a beginner to play. I would suggest having it flow from the direction from 1 rather than have it be an anti-flow.
- 00:48:913 (1) - Same as the first section; use a distance snap so that white-red don't touch.
- 00:59:413 (2,3) - This spacing is inconsistent.
- 01:18:699 (2,1) - The tails of these aren't perfectly stacked.

Hard
- 00:11:198 (1,2,3) - Perhaps make a more regular equilateral triangle from these?
- 00:49:127 (1) - 01:00:698 (5) - This rhythm is readable, but I don't think it matches the music as well as it could. If it were me, I would try and cover it with sliders, but it's your map so keep this if you want, this is just an opinon.
- 01:01:555 (3) - This blanket could be slightly improved [01:01:127]. If you look from that timestamp, you can see how it compares to the approach circle.
- 01:10:127 (3,4,5) - Too many claps here in my opinion. I would keep the one at 01:10:127 (3) and remove the other two, and maybe whistle on 01:10:341 (5) if you wanted.
- 01:25:234 (2,3,4) - I found this kind hard to read and I keep hitting 3 and 4 too early even after multiple attempts in testing. I would perhaps use an odd number of repeats on 2 and have it pointing away from the flow of the combo.

pkhg's Insane
AR9 feels a little fast for a 140bpm song in my opinion. I would personally use AR8.5. Note that Pho's Insane is using AR8.6.
- 00:13:341 (3,4,5) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 00:47:199 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - This shape looks a little off since they're not spaced apart consistently.
- 00:52:341 (1,2,3) - The visual flow is off here since these aren't in a straight line. For just three objects I think it would be better if they were in line. I noticed you did the same sort of thing later, but that one works since there's a pair of them, while this one here just looks like an odd one out.
- 01:10:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Perhaps use a regular pentagon shape for this star pattern?
- 01:16:984 (3,4,5) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 01:19:127 (6,1) - This spacing is inconsistent to the rest of the stream.

Pho's Insane
- 00:02:627 (1,4) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 00:16:984 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Perhaps use a regular square arrangement for these? I noticed that it's a little more like a trapezium. If that's intended, then I would make that shape more distinct.
- 00:18:270 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Use a consistent spacing between all of these. I don't really a see a reason why there shouldn't be.
- 00:21:484 (1,2,3) - These are different timings, so I would use a more distinct spacing. x0.2 and x0.3 isn't enough to distinguish between them. Perhaps stack 1 and 2 and then move 3 closer to 4?
- 00:26:841 (1,2,3) - Use a more regular equilateral triangle shape for these so that the spacing is consistent.
- 00:31:770 (1,2,3) - Using a consistent spacing for these would look bettwe in my opinion.

Rest of the difficult looks good to me.

Nice mapset. Good luck

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-01-31T18:28:44+00:00

Ayu wrote:
Normal
00:08:413 (2) - What's this jump for? It's rather random. sorry my mistake, repair it

Hard
01:02:198 (4,5) - this is a little over the top for hard, if you ask me. if more ppl pointed this, i'll consider it more

Thanks~

-Mo- wrote:
Hey, Mod4Mod from my queue.

Normal
- 00:00:913 (1,2) - Perhaps use a distance snap that's far enough so that notes in white-red rhythm don't touch eachother? x1.1 should be fine and not up the difficulty too much. If you have them to the point where they're barely touching, you might aswell have them seperated so that it looks better. its bcuz the slidermultiplier and i forget change it in beginning, if i change to 1.1x maybe i need to remap it again
- 00:02:413 (3,1) - I'll mention this one since it doesn't seem to be a huge issue, but stacks can be difficult for beginner players to read so I would be careful at how you use them. i think stacking in normal diff is fine
- 00:35:199 (1,2) - This flow isn't particularly nice for a beginner to play. I would suggest having it flow from the direction from 1 rather than have it be an anti-flow. im make it like that cuz the flow in this diff is a bit boring, so i make it a bit hard for beginner that more fun to play
- 00:48:913 (1) - Same as the first section; use a distance snap so that white-red don't touch. itsh ok i guess
- 00:59:413 (2,3) - This spacing is inconsistent. my mistake, i dunno why this still inconsistent, whereas i've repair it in last update
- 01:18:699 (2,1) - The tails of these aren't perfectly stacked. this is just my feeling or it's totally not stacking properly, well already repair it

Hard
- 00:11:198 (1,2,3) - Perhaps make a more regular equilateral triangle from these? k
- 00:49:127 (1) - 01:00:698 (5) - This rhythm is readable, but I don't think it matches the music as well as it could. If it were me, I would try and cover it with sliders, but it's your map so keep this if you want, this is just an opinon. yea, indeed i want map it like dat though its better with slider XD
- 01:01:555 (3) - This blanket could be slightly improved [01:01:127]. If you look from that timestamp, you can see how it compares to the approach circle. improve the blanket
- 01:10:127 (3,4,5) - Too many claps here in my opinion. I would keep the one at 01:10:127 (3) and remove the other two, and maybe whistle on 01:10:341 (5) if you wanted. its fits the song so why not
- 01:25:234 (2,3,4) - I found this kind hard to read and I keep hitting 3 and 4 too early even after multiple attempts in testing. I would perhaps use an odd number of repeats on 2 and have it pointing away from the flow of the combo. indeed want to make this part a bit hard, ok i'll consider it more if more ppl pointing this

Nice mapset. Good luck

Thanks for mod, you both~

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-01-31T20:34:53+00:00

ehhhhhhhhhhh looks like Gero's insane is still in the wait
hmu when Gero's done and I'll mod it right away so i can mod hte full mapset u feel

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-02-02T09:21:52+00:00

Modem wrote:
Hi~! For M4M

pkhg's Insane
(o w o) AR 9??
Ummmm.... change AR to ?Ar 8.5 then
OD 8
Why is it this diff. have no video while other diff. have it? omg Added D:
Nothing more found~!
Good luck~!

Ayu wrote:
pkhg's Insane
00:10:627 (4) - Start this on a 1/3 tick if you're trying to focus on the vocals. Wow really nice catch, fixed this entire pattern too 00:11:270 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:13:984 (6) - I'd use 2 circles here instead, or at least something that requires user input on the white tick. I prefer the slider
00:23:841 (3) - Reverse this? no

-Mo- wrote:
Hey, Mod4Mod from my queue.

pkhg's Insane
AR9 feels a little fast for a 140bpm song in my opinion. I would personally use AR8.5. Note that Pho's Insane is using AR8.6. Ok
- 00:13:341 (3,4,5) - These aren't perfectly stacked. Fixed
- 00:47:199 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - This shape looks a little off since they're not spaced apart consistently. consistency? what's that?
- 00:52:341 (1,2,3) - The visual flow is off here since these aren't in a straight line. For just three objects I think it would be better if they were in line. I noticed you did the same sort of thing later, but that one works since there's a pair of them, while this one here just looks like an odd one out. This doesn't affect gameplay at all
- 01:10:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Perhaps use a regular pentagon shape for this star pattern? wow i didn't noticed that it was a star. No changes though
- 01:16:984 (3,4,5) - These aren't perfectly stacked. Fixed
- 01:19:127 (6,1) - This spacing is inconsistent to the rest of the stream. Fixed

Rest of the difficult looks good to me.

Nice mapset. Good luck

Thanks guys

Update

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@Pho: Your diff doesnt have video neither, also you must adjust this pattern too 00:11:199 (1,2,3,4) - Look at my diff

Pho

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Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-02-03T00:35:34+00:00

@_ Hatsune Miku: Only fixed first point, the others feel kind of unnecessary to me.

Ayu wrote:
Pho's Insane
00:08:520 (3) - Same as in pkhg's insane, this should start on 1/3 if you're focussing on the vocals. 1/4 is fine here, it's the same like in pkhg's diff
00:09:484 (1,2,3,4) - Here too, everything is kinda missing the vocals, because it's mapped on the wrong beat snap divisor. Again, it's actually the same like in pkhg's diff. If you meant the upcoming part, yes, I realized it needs to be 1/6 BSed, but this section is fine as it is.

-Mo- wrote:
Pho's Insane
- 00:02:627 (1,4) - These aren't perfectly stacked.
- 00:16:984 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Perhaps use a regular square arrangement for these? I noticed that it's a little more like a trapezium. If that's intended, then I would make that shape more distinct. It's fine, not sure why I should make it more distinct.
- 00:18:270 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Use a consistent spacing between all of these. I don't really a see a reason why there shouldn't be. Spacing change here is intended as the drums on the yellow combo have less impact to me.
- 00:21:484 (1,2,3) - These are different timings, so I would use a more distinct spacing. x0.2 and x0.3 isn't enough to distinguish between them. Perhaps stack 1 and 2 and then move 3 closer to 4? No, this play is intended.
- 00:26:841 (1,2,3) - Use a more regular equilateral triangle shape for these so that the spacing is consistent. Not intended, I wanted the smaller emphasis between 2-3 by having an increased spacing here.
- 00:31:770 (1,2,3) - Using a consistent spacing for these would look bettwe in my opinion. Jump is intended, I'll make it more visible.

Rest of the difficult looks good to me.

Nice mapset. Good luck

@pkhg: Rearranged that a bit, nice touch. I got a problem with 00:11:913 (4) - as this is snapped to nothing in the track anymore. There's guitar strings on the previous red tick, but that'd mess up the rhythm a lot here since vocals and guitar follow different beatsnaps orz... I went with this instead to follow the vocal optimally:

SPOILER

UPDATE

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Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2015-02-03T02:44:35+00:00

#queue

[General]

add some audio lead-in
pevew time seems weird to me what about 01:02:627 - ?

[Easy]

where is the slider slide?
00:54:056 (2) - i would prefer to see a curved slider as next a blanket it keeps the flow cleen as it was before

[Normal]

01:04:341 (1,2,3) - hitsound are wrong here
in the kiai the hitsounds are incosistent

[Hard]

why no break?
00:48:484 (5) - ctrl+g
01:10:127 (3,4,5) - to much here are not needed

pkhg your hitsounds are ♥

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-02-03T03:19:46+00:00

Modem wrote:
Hi~! For M4M
General
Add some AudioLeadin
Others are fine <3

Xinely's Easy
AR 2 ar 2 to ar 5 in normal is huge
00:09:484 (2) Put this slider to x:128 y:260 for better flow move in other way
00:45:484 (1) Blanket this slider with 00:45:056 (2) would be nice
Nothing more found~!

@_ Hatsune Miku : fixed ~

@Ayu : i did for 00:55:770 (1,2,1) - so i want use another flow for the previous.. it will be boring imo if we use all vertical sliders

@-Mo- : i feel those shape better than on screenshot sorry ;_;

@Lally : i dont use sliderslide coz i hitsounded my diff before asuna add custom hitsounds, the second one fixed in other way.

thanks 4 mods

~

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60699
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:again
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood
Tags:Xinely Pho pkhg FMA FMOST1 Hisashi Kondo Ayumi Hamasaki Hollydays in the Sun
BeatmapID:600157
BeatmapSetID:262627

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

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Video,0,"Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood Opening 1 HD.flv"
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Arlecchino 2015-02-03T08:55:07+00:00

Lally wrote:
#queue

[General]
add some audio lead-in
pevew time seems weird to me what about 01:02:627 - ? k
[Easy]
where is the slider slide?
00:54:056 (2) - i would prefer to see a curved slider as next a blanket it keeps the flow cleen as it was before
[Normal]
01:04:341 (1,2,3) - hitsound are wrong here repaired?
in the kiai the hitsounds are incosistent repair
[Hard]
why no break? why not?
00:48:484 (5) - ctrl+g fix i guess
01:10:127 (3,4,5) - to much here are not needed it's fits the song
pkhg your hitsounds are ♥

thanks for mod lallehh

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-02-04T08:11:06+00:00

Lally wrote:
pkhg your hitsounds are ♥

yay Thanks a lot :3

@Pho: Nice :3

Also Asuna, you mispelled a tag, its "Holydays in the sun" (already fixed on my diff) and move the preview point 1/4 earlier so we can hear the chorus properly :3 (already fixed too)

Update owo

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Yui - Again.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 62556
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 485,7877,12699,19556,21270,28127,34985,38413,41842,45270,48699,55984,60913,62627
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:again
TitleUnicode:again
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:pkhg's Insane
Source:Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood
Tags:Xinely Pho pkhg FMA FMOST1 Hisashi Kondo Ayumi Hamasaki Holydays in the Sun
BeatmapID:608709
BeatmapSetID:262627

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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Video,0,"Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood Opening 1 HD.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Sylas

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Sylas 2015-02-04T15:29:53+00:00

Hey ^^ M4M

General
Kinda confused why the offset is before the song even starts, it should be at 00:00:699 cmiiw

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Nothing I can find in this diff

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00:22:770 - I think you should add a note there, it fits well in the song
Not much I can find in this diff either

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Nothing important I can find

pkhg's Insane
00:11:270 (1) - why not blanket that under 00:10:627 (4) ?
I would suggest removing the NC from 00:55:770 (1) and 00:59:199 (1)
That's all I can find

Pho's Insane
00:26:413 (6,1) - Blanket them
00:35:413 (2,3) - ^
01:07:127 (4) - Why not move that to x=325 y=184 exactly under 01:06:484 (2) basically stack them
Other then that everything seems fine

I really like your mapset, I think you should try getting it ranked soon?
Anyway good luck

Arlecchino

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Arlecchino 2015-02-05T01:21:59+00:00

TheKoala wrote:
Hey ^^ M4M

General
Kinda confused why the offset is before the song even starts, it should be at 00:00:699 cmiiw cuz the metronome :3

Normal
00:22:770 - I think you should add a note there, it fits well in the song im not follow the vocal there, so its fine for me
Not much I can find in this diff either

I really like your mapset, I think you should try getting it ranked soon?
Anyway good luck

Thanks for mod~

EDIT : repair tag coloum and preview point

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