1. Easy (1.51 stars, 151 notes)
2. Goodbye (3.43 stars, 473 notes)
3. Hard (2.76 stars, 343 notes)
4. Normal (1.78 stars, 243 notes)

1. I like the background, but I think a better one could be found (less sad since the lyrics already are ; ; )
2. The first combo color is too close to the background / video color, might be troublesome with 0% dim
3. Maybe make kiai time from 01:41:026 to 02:09:898 ?

1. 00:27:041 (2,3) - the followpoint between these is a bit long, maybe make 00:28:395 (3) a NC?
2. 00:34:259 (4,5) - ^
3. 01:39:222 (2,3) - ^
4. 02:34:710 (1,2,3) - ^ even though this makes more sense, just pointing it out just in case
5. 01:24:785 (3) - third anchor point is outside of the grid
6. 03:20:274 (4) - I was gonna say to make this curved but I just noticed what you meant with it beeing plain.. THIS IS SO SAD, but greatly creative, love it (second anchor point is still outside of the grid)

1. 00:35:161 (5) - rotate by ~ 9º clockwise (repositioning)
2. 00:53:207 (5) - start NC here? (vocals)
3. 01:48:244 (1) - this slider looks a bit deformed

1. HP Drain and OD 6?
2. 00:19:598 (6) - would move 2nd anchor point to ~ x:404 y:104
3. 01:18:019 (6,7) - why the increased distance between these?

1. I have tons of fun playing this DT
2. OD7? :b
3. 00:19:598 (1,2) - move just a bit to the right, I felt the flow breaking a bit here while playing
4. 00:53:658 (4,1) - ctrl+g both?
5. 01:38:996 (6) - move to ~ x:264 y:336

Mira-san wrote:

first post. /o/

aight pm req. just a quick look on all diffs kek

the lyrics tho.

I suggest adding a 1000 ms audio leadin because it sounds better if the song didn't start immediately lol I'll try it out

[Goodbye]
00:19:598 (1) - not sure about this, all other parts similar to this one follows the synth, or at least it seems to follow the synth.
my explanation is vague so i'll just link examples where it doesn't follow the synth DIRECTLY but it works anyway. changed rhythm
00:21:176 (5,1) - 00:24:785 (5,1) - (the synths start on the end of slider (5) and ends at the start of (1).)
00:24:785 (5) - I think it's better if it's like this. offers a straighter flow to (1). shifted

img

00:32:004 (5) - move this somewhere lower. y:176 perhaps shifted away from 00:31:552 (3)
00:35:387 (4) - don't stack? lol idk stacked it on 00:34:259 (1)
00:48:470 (7,1) - i feel like a jump can be added here (by stacking 1) on (2). shifted somewhere else
00:51:853 (5,6,1) - reverse order of these objects on the timeline, it sounds good, but breaks the NC flow (and makes the slider's hitsound passive qq). your call. keeping this
00:52:079 (6) - x:376 y:44? lel changed it slightly just now to fit something else, so will keep it where it is now
00:53:658 (4,1,2) - make these parallel lol don't think I will be doing so
00:57:267 (5) - ^ to 00:56:816 (4) I tilted it down, but whether or not it is parallel I don't really focus on that
01:08:545 (1) - ctrl+h on this one, then move to a better position WITH A LOWER X VALUE than 6. and then move 01:09:222 (2) - to a better place. changed locations
01:29:748 (5) - blanket the end of 01:30:199 (1)- lol too curved for my liking
01:38:770 (5,6,1) - make the distance equal shifted in a way
01:36:740 (4) - rotate -11 degrees selection centre lel rotated but never use specific angle
02:14:861 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - move these so there are centered. or select all then move by 16 x units done
02:41:477 (3) - blanket 02:40:575 (1) - head ok
02:42:379 (1) - not stacked lel not intended
02:47:793 (1) - blanket head of 02:47:342 (3) - ^
03:22:079 (1) - use a blank hitsound for the end of this one (lol get it from my genryuu kaiko map 'drum-hitfinish.wav') I'm not really sure if I should make it blank, hence some audio

[Hard]
01:27:943 (5) - rotate by -16 degrees kek. ok
01:31:101 (3) - make a bit higher than (2) shifted slightly up

[Normal]
03:14:861 (1,2,3,4) - creative but not new lol gud
Nothing here

[Easy]
Such heartbeat.
None here.

starred /o/

Milhofo wrote:

Heyo, I love this song and really liked the map, so, random mod \o/ I would give kudos if I had any ; ;

All of these are suggestions / opinions, I love the map already ^^

[General]

1. I like the background, but I think a better one could be found (less sad since the lyrics already are ; ; )
2. The first combo color is too close to the background / video color, might be troublesome with 0% dim
3. Maybe make kiai time from 01:41:026 to 02:09:898 ? Only the last section is kiai because that is where the climax of the whole song is, the strongest chorus as well, hence I made it the only kiai time

[Easy]

1. 00:27:041 (2,3) - the followpoint between these is a bit long, maybe make 00:28:395 (3) a NC? rapid change in NC seems confusing too
2. 00:34:259 (4,5) - ^ ^ but I forgot NC for 00:32:455
3. 01:39:222 (2,3) - ^ ^
4. 02:34:710 (1,2,3) - ^ even though this makes more sense, just pointing it out just in case ^
5. 01:24:785 (3) - third anchor point is outside of the grid still within the play area
6. 03:20:274 (4) - I was gonna say to make this curved but I just noticed what you meant with it beeing plain.. THIS IS SO SAD, but greatly creative, love it (second anchor point is still outside of the grid)

[Normal]

1. 00:35:161 (5) - rotate by ~ 9º clockwise (repositioning) I think the current angle is still fine
2. 00:53:207 (5) - start NC here? (vocals) having the NC on the strong downbeat which makes it follow the usual pattern
3. 01:48:244 (1) - this slider looks a bit deformed Using a simple shape, regular 3 point curve

[Hard]

1. HP Drain and OD 6? will try OD6
2. 00:19:598 (6) - would move 2nd anchor point to ~ x:404 y:104 shifted a different point
3. 01:18:019 (6,7) - why the increased distance between these? 01:18:244 (7) is the start of a new vocal word

[Goodbye]

1. I have tons of fun playing this DT
2. OD7? :b yea
3. 00:19:598 (1,2) - move just a bit to the right, I felt the flow breaking a bit here while playing shifted in a way
4. 00:53:658 (4,1) - ctrl+g both? 1st 2 meant to follow each others path, same for the latter 2
5. 01:38:996 (6) - move to ~ x:264 y:336 shifted my way in previous mod

This song deserves a great map, pls get this ranked

yus yus, here is my mod

1. AiMod: Normal and Hard leadin conflicts with Easy and Goodbye diffs.
2. Diff gap between Normal and Hard is too big. Consider making Normal harder.
3. There's only one kiai where it's the climax of the song, but you could add short kiai sections at 00:36:064 - 01:41:026 - like this to highlight them too. I have seems this used in other maps to highlight little explosions in the song.
4. 03:14:861 - Gex.exe stopped working. Reason: Too much epicness ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪

1. 00:07:192 (1) - It feels a bit odd, you use sliders everywhere in this diff but here and also you are ignoring the vocals in the gap you leave.
2. 00:19:823 (3) - Idk if this is on purpose or not but, following your hitsound pattern, here should be a whistle.
3. 01:04:936 (3) - It's hard to hear the finish sound here, I'd take out the green line.
4. 01:26:590 (1,2) - Give more space between these two. One pixel is not enough... xD
5. 02:34:710 (1) - Imo the slider end should be clickable.

1. Already said this in general section but you should make this diff harder to fix the gap. I think something around 1.90 should be fine.
2. 00:08:094 (3,4) - I don't think this rhythm is a good idea... Maybe something like this? (Same applies to 00:11:703 (3) - 00:15:312 (3) - 00:18:921 (3) - ).
3. 00:13:282 - Note missing. Extending (4) might be a good idea.
4. 01:12:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't understand this @.@ Sounds very repetitive...

1. 00:19:598 (6) - Not a big fan of this shape really... Something with less red anchors would be better.
2. 00:41:928 (5) - There's nothing in the music to support a note here i think.
3. 00:45:086 (4) - Same as above.
4. 00:45:988 (6) - Same. Is in the slider end.
5. Not much to say here. Nice diff.

GL with your map. Hope you find my mod useful
So this is my goodbye ~♪

Gexigamma wrote:

yus yus, here is my mod

[ General]

1. AiMod: Normal and Hard leadin conflicts with Easy and Goodbye diffs. fixed the audioleadin
2. Diff gap between Normal and Hard is too big. Consider making Normal harder.
3. There's only one kiai where it's the climax of the song, but you could add short kiai sections at 00:36:064 - 01:41:026 - like this to highlight them too. I have seems this used in other maps to highlight little explosions in the song. I totally changed the way I used Kiai time for this song
4. 03:14:861 - Gex.exe stopped working. Reason: Too much epicness ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪

[ Easy]

1. 00:07:192 (1) - It feels a bit odd, you use sliders everywhere in this diff but here and also you are ignoring the vocals in the gap you leave. there is that part in the music where there is something that fades out, I'm trying to replicate it with this gap
2. 00:19:823 (3) - Idk if this is on purpose or not but, following your hitsound pattern, here should be a whistle. ok
3. 01:04:936 (3) - It's hard to hear the finish sound here, I'd take out the green line. I think it's fine to be softer
4. 01:26:590 (1,2) - Give more space between these two. One pixel is not enough... xD lol, I will see how in the future as I get more feedback
5. 02:34:710 (1) - Imo the slider end should be clickable. trying to keep this part really simple, but I will be open for more suggestions in the future if there is something good

[ Normal]

1. Already said this in general section but you should make this diff harder to fix the gap. I think something around 1.90 should be fine. not really too sure about this one, I gradually eased the amount of 1/2s found in the difficulties, Normal has mostly 2 in a row, Hard starts to get more but without too often than not bigger spacings
2. 00:08:094 (3,4) - I don't think this rhythm is a good idea... Maybe something like this? (Same applies to 00:11:703 (3) - 00:15:312 (3) - 00:18:921 (3) - ).
3. 00:13:282 - Note missing. Extending (4) might be a good idea. I wanted a break in the pattern for rest
4. 01:12:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't understand this @.@ Sounds very repetitive... Might change it out in the future

[ Hard]

1. 00:19:598 (6) - Not a big fan of this shape really... Something with less red anchors would be better. needed the extra red anchor to make the curve less awkward
2. 00:41:928 (5) - There's nothing in the music to support a note here i think. trying to link up the pattern
3. 00:45:086 (4) - Same as above. ^
4. 00:45:988 (6) - Same. Is in the slider end. ^
5. Not much to say here. Nice diff.

GL with your map. Hope you find my mod useful
So this is my goodbye ~♪

• 
  Nice

1. 00:59:071 (2) - I would bump this up a bit
   
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2. 01:13:958 (5,6,7,8) - I would NC here because you can hear a slight difference in the music compared to 01:12:154 (1,2,3,4)

1. 03:17:567 (2,3) - Try positioning these like this
   
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1. 01:01:101 (6) - Try placing this around x:312 y:312
   
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2. 01:21:628 (2) - I think this type of jump might be better
   
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3. 03:00:199 (6) - This seems a bit far, bump it up a bit?
   
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sukiNathan wrote:

Hi~ this map is very good so not much to say ;w;

[Easy]

• 
  Nice

[Normal]

1. 00:59:071 (2) - I would bump this up a bit I don't think I need to place it so high, the deviation in the path would increase
   
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2. 01:13:958 (5,6,7,8) - I would NC here because you can hear a slight difference in the music compared to 01:12:154 (1,2,3,4) For now I don't think it is necessary

[Hard]

1. 03:17:567 (2,3) - Try positioning these like this seems too similar to the previous one
   
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[Goodbye]

1. 01:01:101 (6) - Try placing this around x:312 y:312 shifted it to another area
   
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2. 01:21:628 (2) - I think this type of jump might be better picture doesn't match? @@
   
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3. 03:00:199 (6) - This seems a bit far, bump it up a bit? shifted slightly up
   
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1. Not sure why you toggled the Kiai time so often for not even 1 second

1. Pretty nice - Nothing found √

1. 03:14:861 (1,2,3,4) - You could increase the DS here so they wont overlap
2. I feel bad for not findiing anything xD - Nice map √

1. Awkward found nothing √

1. Damn good job. √

zeroclover wrote:

general

because closed wrong tab,all my mod were gone...
i start write my mod in notepad now
oh god.. what ive done


easy
404


normal 1.77 ☆

01:20:049 (3) - this is bad , look 01:16:214 (2,3,4) - the vocals sound different here though
02:32:680 (3) - remove , make slider at (2) just like 02:25:237 (3,4) - wanted to use more variety of pattern rhythms

fix that things, make your normal rate become 1.75 ☆


hard 2.79 ☆

00:15:988 (4,5) - remove (5), extend (4)'s slider to (5) , just like 00:08:770 (6) - ok
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00:41:477 (4,5,6,7) - dont use this beat place , try copy 01:46:440 (4,5,6) - I think it's fine, and the ending slider makes the next slider more prominent with the change in flow
02:44:184 (4,5,6,7) - ^ same issue like above don't think I need to keep using sliders alone
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02:45:763 (8) - remove keeping for a more constant lead in here
03:21:628 (4,1) - i prefer change it to 1/8 repeat slider ( goodbye diff did it ._. ) I think it makes breaking too easy to happen in Hard if I did

my target is make this hard rate become 2.75☆


goodbye 3.49 ☆

01:09:447 (1) - spinner too sudden and ruin the jump flow , should remove it and continue to make jumping pattern changed the pattern here
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02:10:124 - dont
02:18:372 - add
03:08:187 - break (maybe this need a break)
reason : make this diff more playful , 02:10:124 - add this break , try put beat like this http://puu.sh/eShfv.jpg
it was similiar like 02:17:116 (1,2) - ,but this only just suggestion I think that is quite excessive though, but I will see in the future
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if there were a triplet notes in this map, diff rate will go up to 3.75 ☆ ( '- ' )


overall : good to play

crabovan wrote:

Hello, this is part of our m4m.

General
Why did you use kick sample on whistle section? Also, you can make this kick a bit louder, sometimes it's hard to hear him.

Goodbye

00:15:988 (6) - maybe better place this note right between 00:15:312 (3,4) ? might be a possible position, but the angle I wanted is as such
00:22:530 (3) - how about place it to x:376 y:180 to fit this 00:21:628 (1) slider? Also move then 00:22:755 (4) a bit away from this note, for example to 00:21:628 (1) slider start. not changing that but shifted 00:22:981 (5) slightly
00:25:237 (1) - move to 00:27:041 (1) position. ok
00:26:139 (3) - move to 00:24:560 (4) position. not shifting there
00:41:026 (2) - delete this note and make repeat on 00:39:673 (1). changes the rhythm, which isn't what I'm going after
00:50:951 (2) - delete this slider, make copy of 00:50:500 (1) and rotate to make this slider more aestetic. the individual sliders are to highlight ech word
00:49:598 (4) - same as this^. ^
00:53:207 (3,4,1,2) - same, make all this 4 sliders from same source. would be weird though. With the current 2 sliders per side, it highlights the vocals better
01:00:199 (2,3,4,5,6) - you can make from this hexagon (Ctrl+Shift+D) without 1 note (remove 1 note after you created figure).
01:20:951 (1) - move away from 01:20:049 (3,5) (to somewhere about x:36 y:144), and move middle slider square to x:104 y:192 to better fit 01:20:725 (6). I think this is better
01:23:883 (4) - move to x:248 y:244. I don't really like that position
01:25:688 (4) - delete this slider and make copy of 01:26:139 (5). why though, that doesn't make the impact as high
01:33:582 (6) - move to 01:33:131 (4) position. intended slight overlap
01:42:379 (3,2,3) - again, sliders from same source. they are copies of each other, if that is what you are trying to say, so no change
01:45:988 (3,2) - ^. ^
02:04:485 (1) - move away from 02:03:808 (3) (to x:296 y:144 for example).
02:54:560 (5) - move away from 02:53:883 (2) to x:456 y:88. all above overlaps are what I was trying to make
03:00:199 (6) - move to start of 03:01:327 (2). Jumps at 02:59:973 (5,6,1) are intended, don't want to reduce the spacing
03:02:229 (1) - make this slider somehow like this http://puu.sh/feeYZ/08a0eeb682.jpg adjusted slider
03:06:064 (2) - move to 03:04:034 (1) start position. that is off the equal positions of this pattern
03:06:740 (4) - delete this slider, make copy from 03:06:064 (2) and move away from 03:05:838 (1). takes away the rhythm I wanted with the objects, so no change. Repeat sliders that you suggested reduces impact of the respective places, which is not what I am looking for. I want to emphasize on such places, hence I used more sliders and circles

Hard

00:19:146 (4) - move away from 00:19:146 (4). intentional overlap which I think still looks fine
00:29:522 (2,3,4,5) - you can make square from this. using a diamond shape which is easier to move
01:33:131 (8) - move to x:268 y:24 for much better flow. shifted higher up instead

Normal

01:18:244 (5,6,7) - how about make from this 2 sliders? wanted to split "it's" from "all the" and "same"
02:47:793 (3,4) - move 3 slider end to x:120 y:136, move start of 4 slider to x:112 y:192 and finish of 4 slider to x:84 y:324, feeling much better. I think that's too steep

Easy

All nice.

Well, this is one from few vocaloid songs that I liked.

Domi200 wrote:

Hey here is my mod

[General]

1. Not sure why you toggled the Kiai time so often for not even 1 second Like what TicClick told me, it is to highlight the climax of the song, where she falls, the flashes are to simulate like her life flashing by in her eyes and her heart beat

[Easy]

1. Pretty nice - Nothing found √

[Normal]

1. 03:14:861 (1,2,3,4) - You could increase the DS here so they wont overlap I can't adjust the DS in Normal, even if it's the ending, sorry
2. I feel bad for not findiing anything xD - Nice map √

[Hard]

1. Awkward found nothing √

[Goodbye]

1. Damn good job. √

Not good enough to find anything on your maps xD I leave you a star =)

Rtyzen wrote:

Finally here orz~ why not neobat yet XD

[Easy]

1. 00:34:259 (2,3) - Why so far lol cuz DS
2. 00:52:304 - Just a suggestion but you can use the slidertick here for HS I'm not really into hitsounding slider ticks, because even if it's apparent in the music, I don't want emphasizing something you don't click, because then in terms of the heaviness in beat to click something, it diffuses if everything is the same, be it clicking on something or holding through a slider
3. 01:13:958 (3) - ^
4. 01:17:567 (3) - ^ yea not gonna mention any more
5. 02:34:710 (1) - NC move 02:36:515 (2) - ? since the word stop is said on the end of this, I started the NC already
6. Some of the sounds are so strong that IMO you need to either use the slidertick hitsound or change the rhythm

[Normal]

1. 00:18:695 (2) - Move to 00:18:470 - Following vocals sounds abit weird IMO seems fine for the earlier, I think this will keep it constant as well, so it will be more familiar
2. 02:49:598 (1,2,3) - Could be confusing will get more feedback on that if possible
3. 02:51:402 (5,6) - This could also be confusing, how about http://puu.sh/fpGzz/ed052ca20f.jpg ? ^
4. Same as easy, could use slidertick hitsounds to make it sound better

[Hard]

1. 00:18:695 (2,3,4,5) - ooh this looks abit weird. Maybe stack 4 on 1's end? and then move 3 and 5 accordingly you know me and my purposely overlaps lol..
2. 00:25:913 (2,3,4,5) - Distance between 4&5 should be greater than between 2&3 shifted slightly the former
3. 00:33:131 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
4. 02:33:357 (1) - just imo this slider looks really lazy maybe cuz it is lol

[Goodbye]

1. 00:31:327 (2,3,4) - Suddenly wider jump? I have been using jumps for the whole way though
2. 00:34:034 (6) - use 1 to blanket it at x:192 y:112 would make it have better flow IMO
3. 01:00:650 (4) - Move it away from 6 shifted slightly
4. The distance snapping on this is way too weird even for insane. The distance goes from really high to really low even though there is no change in the music, and idk how to mod it orz o wellz

That's it from me Good luck!

Jemmmmy wrote:

[easy]
01:18:921 - I think I'll keep it the same
01:26:590 (1,2) - too close, try other shape k
03:05:838 (3) - move to x:463 k
03:16:665 (2,3) - bad overlap, it's the best I can make it
[normal]
00:11:703 (3) - don't want it too low
00:18:921 (3) - decrease angle trying to keep it within the a certain area
00:20:725 (5) - too gentle an angle, it won't make an extreme enough change in direction for the next object to be more comfortable
01:13:958 (5) - NC keeping the combos consistent for all, but I'll see if I get more opinions on this
01:17:342 (4,5,6,7) - not in a straight line not intended (?)
03:14:861 (1,2,3) - bad overlap same as easy
[hard]
00:14:410 (1,2,3) - not in straight line not intended
00:18:019 (1,4) - bad overlap I think it looks fine
00:19:598 (6,7) - changed shape
00:27:041 (5) - I don't think that angle and movement plays as well
00:37:417 (3,4) - snap or put somewhere not too close. same as the rest
00:48:244 (4) - del
01:01:327 (1,2) - snap for all those above, I intended to use this for the whole difficulty, I think it doesn't affect the play in anyway, and it was how I wanted to show it, so I think removing it changes a lot
01:18:019 (6,7,8) - use same distance 7 is a new vocal
01:29:522 (9) - put left a little let 01:29:297 (8,9) - in a straight line it makes 01:29:297 (8,9,1) look too right angled
01:31:101 (3,4) - use same shape made my own change
[goodbye]
00:34:936 (2,3) - same angle as 00:35:387 (4,5) - decreasing the angle
00:45:086 (1,4) - bad overlap intended to overlap 00:44:184 (2,1) equally
00:57:718 (1,3) - ^ wanted the circle to poke out from behind
01:28:395 (1,2) - ^ for the specific angle
01:01:101 (6,2) - snap
01:31:101 (3) - for the spacing of 01:29:748 (5,2,3)
01:36:740 (4) - use two circle will consider
02:26:139 (1) - more curve nah
03:18:244 (5) - use one circle I think this is fine

1. 00:50:500 (1) - what about adding finish on this slider's head? it's really nice to hear like 00:36:064 (1) - this
2. 01:24:334 (6) - missed whistle
3. 01:55:462 (1) - you may know what to do lol
4. 02:14:861 - since current sliderslide sound is a bit annoying due to the loud volume set, lowering it as 45% would be great

10:20 neonat: im on if u still want irc lol
10:26 HelloSCV: lol
10:26 HelloSCV: sure
10:26 *HelloSCV is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/577427 Circus-P - Goodbye [Goodbye]]
10:27 HelloSCV: 00:12:379 (4) - 
10:28 HelloSCV: isn't it better if this note is closed to next slider rather than previous one?
10:28 HelloSCV: to fit with the vocal better
10:29 neonat: because the bass beat on the next slider
10:29 neonat: wanted that place to be the bigger spacing
10:29 neonat: like 00:14:410 (1) -
10:30 HelloSCV: then what about giving more distance between 00:11:703 (3,4) - these?
10:30 HelloSCV: most of your rhthms are following the vocal sound rather than other sounds like drum or bass
10:31 neonat: ok
10:31 neonat: spaced further apart
10:31 HelloSCV: kk
10:31 HelloSCV: 00:54:560 (2) - 
10:32 HelloSCV: well it's just my feeling of this part but how about reversing this slider by using ctrl g?
10:32 HelloSCV: plays much better imo, maybe it's because of previous sliders
10:32 HelloSCV: 00:53:207 (3,4) - these
10:34 neonat: ok then
10:34 neonat: at least they are still the same shape
10:34 HelloSCV: yea that's what i want lol
10:36 HelloSCV: 03:07:643 (1) - 
10:37 HelloSCV: not sure if i already mentioned on my mod post, try adding whistle 
10:40 neonat: i think it is fine without
10:40 HelloSCV: kk
10:40 *HelloSCV is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/577321 Circus-P - Goodbye [Hard]]
10:44 HelloSCV: 00:07:191 (1) - 
10:45 HelloSCV: missed whistle on slider's end
10:51 HelloSCV: nothing else
10:51 neonat: i applied the additional finishes on all diffs
10:51 HelloSCV: oh but consider adding some finishes like i mentioned on Goodbye diff
10:51 neonat: when needed
10:51 HelloSCV: lol
10:51 HelloSCV: nice
10:51 neonat: lol
10:51 neonat: psychiccc
10:52 HelloSCV: great haha
10:52 HelloSCV: oh one more thing
10:52 HelloSCV: 00:07:191 (1) - 
10:52 HelloSCV: add whistle on slider's start as well just like you did on Goodbye diff
10:53 neonat: k
10:53 *HelloSCV is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/577257 Circus-P - Goodbye [Normal]]
10:53 HelloSCV: 00:07:191 (1) -  you may know whta to do
10:53 neonat: yeap
10:54 HelloSCV: 00:15:312 (3) - off screeeeeeeeeeeeen
10:55 neonat: appears in play field
10:55 HelloSCV: yea
10:56 neonat: i think it should be fine as long as it doesn't go out
10:56 HelloSCV: well but it's a kind of unrankable stuff as far as i know
10:57 HelloSCV: and there are some maps which were unranked because of this kind of off screen onjects
10:57 neonat: it says All mapsets are played from a fixed-screen viewpoint, so any hitobjects that are even partially off-screen can make it very difficult to read the pattern they are following. Test play your map to confirm this.
10:57 HelloSCV: objects*
10:58 neonat: oh k...
10:58 neonat: it's affected by smallest resolution lol'
10:58 neonat: zz
10:58 HelloSCV: yea lol
10:59 HelloSCV: since i'm using 800x600 ratio, yea it's quite out of screen
11:00 neonat: so small
11:00 neonat: ww
11:00 HelloSCV: yea ww
11:01 neonat: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/4R3903g.png
11:01 HelloSCV: seems fine now
11:02 HelloSCV: next slider seems almost off screen as well but since it actually doesn't, it should be fine
11:05 HelloSCV: 03:14:861 (1) - 
11:05 HelloSCV: hmmmmmm i recommend you to split this sliders into a 3/2 slider and a 1/1 slider like http://puu.sh/g7dqU/464cf64674.jpg this
11:06 HelloSCV: i think current sliders fit with Easy diff rather than Normal
11:08 neonat: for all?
11:08 HelloSCV: oh 
11:08 HelloSCV: yea
11:08 HelloSCV: for all
11:13 neonat: still keeping 03:20:274 (7) -  though
11:13 HelloSCV: k
11:14 *HelloSCV is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/577177 Circus-P - Goodbye [Easy]]
11:14 HelloSCV: 00:07:192 (1) - 
11:14 HelloSCV: lol
11:15 HelloSCV: 00:35:613 (3) - hmmmm i'm not sure why you suddenly increased distance here
11:16 neonat: because of the huge gap in time
11:17 HelloSCV: but you didn't use this type of distance on previous gap
11:17 HelloSCV: 00:28:395 (3) - 
11:17 neonat: lol fine
11:18 HelloSCV: 01:17:567 (3) - missed whistle on slider's start
11:19 HelloSCV: 01:21:176 (3) - same as above
11:19 HelloSCV: 01:24:785 (3) - this one too
11:25 HelloSCV: let me know when you update all of diffs
11:26 neonat: done
11:30 HelloSCV: last ting
11:30 HelloSCV: thing
11:30 HelloSCV: 02:54:560 (3) - 
11:30 HelloSCV: i think using 1/1 slider with a repeat would be much better than 2/1 slider due to the kiai flash
11:30 HelloSCV: giving click event feels better
11:31 HelloSCV: so using a note and a 1/1 slider would be nice as well
11:31 HelloSCV: http://puu.sh/g7fjT/3ae4974c6b.jpg or http://puu.sh/g7fkR/6bc0b307f0.jpg
11:33 neonat: updated