1. Farewell (4.93 stars, 1020 notes)

What the... ffaaaq?

15:24 Kibbleru: see i told u its all the song http://puu.sh/dLNPD/f4d1ca70d3.png
15:25 Gaia: wait what lol
15:27 Kibbleru: koi yuki
15:27 Gaia: oh damn
15:28 Gaia: meanwhile nobody knows me
15:28 Gaia: lel
15:28 Kibbleru: its cuz
15:28 Kibbleru: my name is in the diff name
15:28 Kibbleru:
15:29 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/573034 ChouCho - Hajimete no Koi ga Owaru Toki [Farewell]]
15:29 Gaia: what the fuq
15:29 Gaia: why are we mapping the same song
15:29 Gaia: with the same diff name
15:30 Kibbleru: r u serious?
15:30 *Gaia is listening to ChouCho - Hajimete no Koi ga Owaru Toki
15:30 *Gaia is editing ChouCho - Hajimete no Koi ga Owaru Toki [Farewell]
15:30 Gaia: what the actual
15:30 Gaia: fuck
15:30 Kibbleru: wtf
15:30 Kibbleru: real?
15:30 Kibbleru: wtf
15:31 Gaia: real
15:31 Gaia: what
15:31 Kibbleru: u stole my idea
15:31 Gaia: http://puu.sh/dLOid/01482ca764.jpg
15:31 Gaia: dude
15:31 Kibbleru: real
15:31 Kibbleru: lmfao.
15:31 Gaia: im 2 mins and 30 secs in bro
15:31 Kibbleru: oh u mapped more than me
15:31 Gaia: wtf
15:31 Kibbleru: idk i started this like yesterday
15:31 Gaia: me too LOL
15:31 Gaia: omfg
15:31 Gaia: what
15:32 Kibbleru: wtf.
15:32 Gaia: man i was like
15:32 Gaia: how the hell did u np my song
15:32 Gaia: i didnt give it to anyone
15:32 Kibbleru: i found this song off the choucho playlist
15:32 Gaia: .........................
15:32 Gaia: wtf
15:32 Gaia: what is life
15:32 Kibbleru: oh god
15:32 Kibbleru: lmfao.
15:32 Gaia: WHAT ARE THR CHANCES
15:32 Gaia: LOL
15:33 Kibbleru: LOL
15:33 Gaia: the name too
15:33 Gaia: fuck
15:33 Kibbleru: lmao.
15:34 Gaia: last night i asked guinea if i should submit it wip
15:34 Gaia: he was like finish it first
15:35 Gaia: i was like aight
15:35 Gaia: G_G
15:35 Gaia: i checked if someone was working on this song before i started mapping too >.>
15:36 Kibbleru: i saw 1 japanese guy working on it
15:36 Gaia: gg
15:36 Gaia: well
15:37 Gaia: im halfway done i might as well finish
15:37 Gaia: lol
15:37 Gaia: the timing at the start and end is messed up tho
15:39 Kibbleru: check my timing
15:39 Kibbleru: i timed it myself
15:39 Gaia: ty time to steal timing
15:39 Gaia:
15:39 Kibbleru: perfect
15:40 Gaia: 00:34:852 (1) - im pretty sure this is just 1/4 lmao
15:40 Kibbleru: now when u get it qualified itll be dq'd
15:40 Kibbleru: B)
15:40 Gaia: lol
15:40 Gaia: oh
15:40 Gaia: good
15:40 Gaia: our rhythms are different
15:40 Gaia: =3=
15:40 Kibbleru: i skip vocals
15:40 Gaia: i dont
15:40 Gaia: lol
15:41 Kibbleru: my rhythms are very unique
15:41 Kibbleru:
15:41 Kibbleru: so likely gunna be different
15:41 Gaia:
15:41 Gaia: man whyd u have to upload it first
15:41 Gaia: now it'll look like i stold this from u
15:41 Gaia: fuk

Kocari wrote:

This song is really nice. If possible GD is open I will use my efforts to make it into perfection, other than that, hell yes that BG

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

I'll be here to mod lol

eINess wrote:

where is 1 seconds!?!?!?

-Tochi wrote:

Yes i'm the first to mod it!!!! lol

Hm, as requested

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  Farewell

1. 00:19:187 (1) - Make this slider end here 00:19:647 - and mute the end? i want to get the piano though :c
2. 00:21:288 (1) - Spinner should end here 00:23:163 - k
3. 00:34:519 (4,5) - IMO i think these two circles are too close to each other. k
4. 00:51:102 (3) - Delete and try/hear if it sounds/plays better, i think it's best if you delete it. i disagree, maybe so if you're following vocals
5. 01:23:185 (2,3,4) - New combo's? ill consider, they sorta fit but atm i don't see much of a purpose to them
6. 01:43:352 (2,2) - Stack the sliderhead with the circle? unnotiecable
7. 01:53:852 (3) - NC here, same with 01:54:519 (3) - nah i made this jump in comboes of 4
8. 02:06:852 - Break from here to 02:17:519 - because in a slow part like this, the chance is over 33,3% to get 100's, because it's only circles. I know that you want drain to be 4:59+ but well...you can either delete that slow part so there's a break, or remap it with more sliders and few circles. well i thought i could create a "light" feeling by using alot of circles and big gaps. also if i delete it.. my drain time wont be above 5 min for approval lol..
9. 02:17:519 (1,1) - Stack properly (both slider heads). as b4
10. 02:48:074 (6,1) - instead of stacking these, i think you should use 1,0x or 0,8x DS. i think stacking works too ^^
11. 03:07:019 (3) - delete slider, put a circle that stacks so it makes it to a triple, and put a circle here 03:07:185 - mm i prefer mine
12. 03:38:852 (1,2,3) - Make a better triangle. the lengths vary according to the music's intensity
13. 03:42:019 (5) - NC? meh no need imo
14. 03:43:352 - put a circle here so you move your cursor back & forth. i prefer the antijump
15. 03:51:352 (2) - Ctrl + G? flow break is cool tho
16. 04:35:435 (1) - Same as above ill consider this one too owo doesnt play so bad

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  Nice map, good work. Good luck with it o/

Your Good Self wrote:

Mod as requested.
I split the modding out over 2 days, and I got kind of ninja'd by -Tochi in that time, so some of the things in the first part may have already been mentioned.

[Farewell]
first bit
00:17:024 (1) - I think it would be better if the end pointed towards the start of the next slider. meh flow break is cool i think i like them

(very) rough suggestion

I have no idea what I am doing

00:24:186 (1) - Add drum-hitclap? drum sample instead
00:31:852 (6) - Replace with this? pass

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https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2538807

00:41:019 (2) - Moving this about 2 grids to the right will make a blanket with 00:39:852 (4,5,6,7,1) but it's up to you u mean to the left? k
00:41:019 (2) - Change to 1 beat (or 1.25 beat) slider, to bring out the held sound. circle works just fine imo
00:54:019 (3) - It would be better to break this up into 3 hitcircles 1/2 beat apart, so the beat 00:54:185 isn't just a slidertick. this is to emphasize drums

:/

00:59:185 (3,4) - One slider is very slightly curved while the other is completely straight. Maybe bend (3) a little downwards? meh this is fine xD looks nice imo
01:08:019 (4) - Why the sudden drop in spacing? cuz the circle 4 is alot less emphasized in the music
01:08:685 (2,3,1) - There could be a blanket here not rly intended
01:12:685 (2,3,4) - Move the sliders back 1/2 beat so they start on the white ticks, then shove the lone hitcircle to the front at 01:12:685. You'll have to shuffle the positions around a little, as well as the slider shapes. red tick for a nice effect imo and bringing out the background beats

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01:16:602 (2) - There's nothing on the blue tick where this slider starts. I think the best solution would be to delete this slider, and repeat 01:16:185 (1) one time. Then adjust 01:17:185 (3) to remove the overlap. yeah i thought about this too but for now its kinda like these 01:11:185 (2,3) -
01:23:519 (3) - Increase the distance from the previous note, for a larger jump before 01:23:852 (4) and a larger antijump after it. i think its okay, distance isnt large enough to be able to feel any significatn changes
01:25:352 (5,6,1) - Suggestion: ctrl+D 01:24:852 (4) - rotate 180 degrees and ctrl+shift+F idk what the first part is but pass on the slider part
01:27:435 (3) - Probably just personal preference here, but I think this can be moved to around x:316 y:212. i think stacking looks better
01:32:019 (7) - Move to around x:312 y:40? DS in the surrounding notes don't exceed 3.00x, yet this note is approaching 4.00x i think it's okay, i really want to have a sense of emphasis on that slider on the downbeat
01:37:852 (3) - Shorten by 1/4 beat so it lands on the red tick extended slider works well with the vocals here
01:38:352 (2,4) - Better blanket? not rly intended
01:39:352 (1) - Slowdown is good, but there's more potential when you combine jump+slowdown i made the jump slightly bigger to the other slowed slider but ur suggestion doesn't look too good for me

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second bit
02:01:185 - Add 1/4 beat repeating slider? no need o-o
02:07:352 (2,2) - Replace with 1/2 beat slider, there's the bell sound on the white tick yeah i see where you're coming at. ive tried rhythming those out before, but it just didnt work out. was too confusing to play lol
02:10:185 - Add note, for the same reason as above
02:12:852 - ^
02:22:519 (6,1) - Blanket? 02:22:560 not intended :X
02:32:352 (2,1,2) - ^ ^
02:44:685 (2) - This note is a little hard to see since it's stacked under (1). How about moving it to x:136 y:104? i think more insane players should be able to read that fine o-o
02:59:352 (1) - Refer to 01:39:352 (1) above this jump is big enough
03:15:852 (1) - I think this can be split into two hitcircles, and you can have a jump here. Also I think the SV drop should start at 03:16:185 instead. i wanted the stream to end on a slider since thats easier to do
04:01:019 (2) - Push this 1/2 a beat later i see where you're getting at for this section but i prefer mapping the instruments, and for here, there is a quiet ticky sound thing but i did something so it should play less awkwardly now
04:01:519 (1,2) - I think something like this would fit better

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04:02:852 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Something like this would be better imo.

04:15:185 - Add something like this?

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04:18:185 - Add note?
04:19:852 (2) - Add note at around x:32 y:176. That's when just about every instrument stops, and I think that's mappable. its fine >_>
04:34:685 (5) - Have a more equal spacing before and after this note. Moving this somewhere around x:456 y:96 works. k
04:44:185 - Not a big fan of leaving breaks like that personally, but it's up to you. i love them tho :C

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[General Thoughts]
Overall a pretty nice map. Some of the patterns in there are just ahhhhh <3
Hope to see this ranked soon. Good luck!

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

I'll be here to mod lol

Mei wrote:

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

I'll be here to mod lol

[Farewell]

1. 00:16:412 (3) - silence the slider's end? i mean add a 10% inherited point yeah i guess since this section is somewhat quiet q:
   
2. 00:19:187 (1) - this slider sounds weird for me, if you are following vocal then i think use a note will be better, if you are folloing drum then i suppose you missed some sounds in 00:19:341 or somewhere yeah, well im not sure what to do with this as of now since its not clear where the piano is snapped to
   
3. 01:02:519 (6) - use 1/2 slider here is better since 01:02:685 there is vocal here i wanted to emphasize the instrument thing.
   
4. 01:19:019 (2) - for this part, clap is on the slider's end, which make me feel not that fit for this section i try to emphasize the off beat kick drums
   
5. 01:20:685 (3) - try this? i think mine flows well too, its like circular flow
   
   Picture

   
6. 01:38:352 (2,3) - ctrl+g? k
   
7. 02:15:685 (5) - i think remove this note will sounds better sounds weird if i remove xD
   
8. 03:58:852 (1,2) - try this? i think it will fits better with vocal for this section, i was mainly focusing on instruments. i didn't map vcaols here
   
   Picture

   
9. 04:01:185 add a note here? ^
   
10. 04:01:519 (1,2) - try this? ^
    
    Picture

    
11. 04:03:685 the vocal here really obivous ^
    
12. 04:35:352 (7,1) - this jump is on purpose? yea, emphasize the finish.

nice map! good luck

Kibbleru wrote:

Somebody should make me a cool storyboard for this :X

-[Koinuri] wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

Somebody should make me a cool storyboard for this :X

aaa I wish I didn't have bunch of requests to do, I love this song ;_;

Maybe if this wasn't ranked after March/April and no one offered to sb before me

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

I tried to mod but I had no idea what was going on x_x
but I think soft-hitlcap.wav is counted as 5ms delay
http://puu.sh/eVEvl/56507443b2.png
maybe?
and the BG size ww
tag add 初音ミク? I don't have much ideas