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Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mardi 27 octobre 2015 at 22:50:40

Artist: Rise Against
Title: Making Christmas
Tags: The Nightmare Revisited pishifat the nightmare before christmas
BPM: 164
Filesize: 4787kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,59 stars, 134 notes)
  2. Hard (3,2 stars, 307 notes)
  3. Nightmare (4,92 stars, 459 notes)
  4. Normal (2,03 stars, 202 notes)
  5. pishi's Insane (4,13 stars, 422 notes)
Download: Rise Against - Making Christmas
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Spooky

Play pishifat's diff because that's what the cool kids do

Thanks everyone!
-BlueSun-
Small mod :)

General

- your BG is 1024x576 which is ok but it would be better to make the image 1024x768 instead.

Easy
- 00:26:497 (1) - Remove NC
- 00:34:912 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It does not sound right, Move these back one.
- 00:38:205 (1) - this too, move it back one.
- Consider adding a slider here for better rhythm.
- 00:41:497 (1,1,1) - unnecessary new combos.
- 01:18:083 (1,1) - ^
- 01:48:083 (1) - ^
- 01:49:546 (1) - ^
- 01:51:009 (1) - ^
- 01:52:473 (1) - ^

Normal
- 00:07:107 (1,2) - odd pattern try this: http://puu.sh/dGEmY/3ea6f6359a.jpg
- 00:16:619 (3,1,1) - ^
-00:35:644 (2,3) - ^
- 01:17:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks bad, consider changing.
-01:37:839 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
- This normal is too hard imo. you should try making it less harder for begginer players.

Good luck.
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
Fixed / changed
Meh, waiting for further feedback
Other

cocokrunch wrote:

Small mod :)


General

- your BG is 1024x576 which is ok but it would be better to make the image 1024x768 instead.

Easy
- 00:26:497 (1) - Remove NC - Done
- 00:34:912 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It does not sound right, Move these back one.
- 00:38:205 (1) - this too, move it back one.
- Consider adding a slider here for better rhythm. - fixed everything above
- 00:41:497 (1,1,1) - unnecessary new combos. - I kinda like this, it goes well with the song imo
- 01:18:083 (1,1) - ^
- 01:48:083 (1) - ^
- 01:49:546 (1) - ^
- 01:51:009 (1) - ^
- 01:52:473 (1) - ^ Changed the rest

Normal
- 00:07:107 (1,2) - odd pattern try this: http://puu.sh/dGEmY/3ea6f6359a.jpg
- 00:16:619 (3,1,1) - ^
-00:35:644 (2,3) - ^ These will be changed
- 01:17:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks bad, consider changing.
-01:37:839 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ I like these
- This normal is too hard imo. you should try making it less harder for begginer players. I have discussed this with a friend, we came to the conclusion that this is indeed too hard. I'll probably remap some parts I've changed the hard to read parts at the beginning and removed some notes here and there. The end stays the same for now though

Good luck.
Thanks alot !
Yuii-
Mod by Yuii-
Map posted at: SlowBurn x Yuii's Queue


[Easy]


General: Change CS to "3,0" ("2,0" is something really exagerated) / AR to "3,0" / HP to "3,0" (Optional)


00:09:668 - There's a drum sound here, try adding a circle there.

00:12:229 (3) - Try making this slider last longer.

00:49:180 (2) - Can I suggest 2 circles instead?

00:59:058 (2) - Delete it.

01:10:948 - 01:12:412 - Don't leave this like that, come on! Map something :D

01:53:753 - What do you say of a spinner here? It can last up to 01:54:668



[Normal]


General: This would be a good map for a "Hard" diff.


00:04:363 (3) - For a Normal diff, this note is quite weird. But leave it if you feel it necesarry.

00:07:473 - Add circle.

00:40:400 - Same ^ ^

00:48:631 (4) - Don't like how it sounds.

00:59:424 (1,2,3,4) - Quite haaaard for a Normal diff, can you please find an alternative?

01:14:241 - 01:15:705 - Don't leave this like that, come on! Map something :D

01:20:827 (4) - Doesn't fit for a Normal diff at all.

01:21:741 (1,2) - What do you think of this?

01:23:753 (2) - Doesn't fit for a Normal diff at all.

01:24:668 (1,2) - Same as I told you before.

01:26:131 - Add circle.

01:27:412 (3) - Doesn't fit for a Normal diff at all.

01:28:144 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:28:875 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:30:339 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:31:070 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:31:802 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:36:192 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:37:656 (5) - Same ^ ^

01:40:217 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:46:619 (1) - Doesn't sound very good at all.

01:47:900 (2) - Delete it.

01:48:631 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:49:363 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:50:095 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:50:827 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:51:558 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:52:290 (2) - Same ^ ^

01:53:753 - What do you say of a spinner here? It can last up to 01:54:668



[Hard]


General: Change CS to "3,5" / HP to "6,0"


01:07:107 - Could you please start mapping here? It sounds better!

01:10:674 (5) - Doesn't fit.

01:25:857 (2) - Maybe I'm deaf, but I can't find the rhythm at using a circle here.

01:27:046 - I know that here you used a slider. But, if you listen carefully, you can add a circle here (making the slider shorter).

01:27:412 - Same ^ ^

01:27:778 - Same ^ ^

01:28:052 (2,3) - You can replace this two circles for a slider, don't you like it more? (Picture taken without editing the previous parts).

01:37:198 (2) - Nope.

01:53:753 - What do you say of a spinner here? It can last up to 01:54:668



[Nightmare]


General: I love this diff!!! // Change OD to "8,0"


00:05:644 (1) - Try putting the slider below, so you can make a pattern!

00:17:900 (6) - Add more spacing.

00:33:448 (1,2) - Awesome!

00:51:467 - Try adding a circle here ^^

01:10:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like how this sounds. Can you try fixing it? I can't find an alternative :(

01:11:772 - Add circle!

01:12:503 - Same ^ ^ (But this is something more optional, since it could be a really long stream)

01:17:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Super!!

01:25:583 (2) - Try replacing it for 2 circles!

01:28:327 (1,1,1,1,1) - Spacing! They're quite hard to hit 'em for an Insane diff

01:30:522 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same ^ ^ (These one are easier, tho)

01:45:888 (1) - Try to start this "new stream" closer to when the slider 5 finishes 01:45:705 (5)

01:47:351 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Spacing!

01:51:101 (3) - I don't like how it sounds.
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

Yuii- wrote:

Mod by Yuii-
Map posted at: SlowBurn x Yuii's Queue


[Easy]


General: Change CS to "3,0" ("2,0" is something really exagerated) / AR to "3,0" / HP to "3,0" (Optional) changed everything


00:09:668 - There's a drum sound here, try adding a circle there. This feels awkward

00:12:229 (3) - Try making this slider last longer. Done !

00:49:180 (2) - Can I suggest 2 circles instead? Yes !

00:59:058 (2) - Delete it. This fits the pattern and the song imo, I will probably leave it for now

01:10:948 - 01:12:412 - Don't leave this like that, come on! Map something :D Added a slider

01:53:753 - What do you say of a spinner here? It can last up to 01:54:668 This might be a bit short for an easy diff



[Normal]


General: This would be a good map for a "Hard" diff.


00:04:363 (3) - For a Normal diff, this note is quite weird. But leave it if you feel it necesarry. I removed it

00:07:473 - Add circle. Done

00:40:400 - Same ^ ^ tryed something

00:48:631 (4) - Don't like how it sounds. Tbh I wasn't sure about this either, changed it

00:59:424 (1,2,3,4) - Quite haaaard for a Normal diff, can you please find an alternative? I tried something

01:14:241 - 01:15:705 - Don't leave this like that, come on! Map something :D

01:20:827 (4) - Doesn't fit for a Normal diff at all. Removed the circle

01:21:741 (1,2) - What do you think of this? I like my version better...

01:23:753 (2) - Doesn't fit for a Normal diff at all. Fixed

01:24:668 (1,2) - Same as I told you before. ...But I used it here !

01:26:131 - Add circle. Done

01:27:412 (3) - Doesn't fit for a Normal diff at all. Fixed

01:28:144 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:28:875 (2) - Same ^ ^Fixed

01:30:339 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:31:070 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:31:802 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:36:192 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:37:656 (5) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:40:217 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:46:619 (1) - Doesn't sound very good at all. I really like this slider, it fits with the guitar's "pick-slide" sound

01:47:900 (2) - Delete it. Done

01:48:631 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:49:363 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:50:095 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:50:827 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:51:558 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:52:290 (2) - Same ^ ^ Fixed

01:53:753 - What do you say of a spinner here? It can last up to 01:54:668 It's still a bit short



[Hard]


General: Change CS to "3,5" / HP to "6,0" Yup


01:07:107 - Could you please start mapping here? It sounds better! Added a slider

01:10:674 (5) - Doesn't fit. Removed it

01:25:857 (2) - Maybe I'm deaf, but I can't find the rhythm at using a circle here. The drum kicks !

01:27:046 - I know that here you used a slider. But, if you listen carefully, you can add a circle here (making the slider shorter).

01:27:412 - Same ^ ^

01:27:778 - Same ^ ^ I prefer it the way it is atm

01:28:052 (2,3) - You can replace this two circles for a slider, don't you like it more? (Picture taken without editing the previous parts). This would have been great if I used your suggestion above but as it is now I prefer my version

01:37:198 (2) - Nope. This goes well with the vocals imo

01:53:753 - What do you say of a spinner here? It can last up to 01:54:668 I still think it would be too short


[Nightmare]


General: I love this diff!!! // Change OD to "8,0" done


00:05:644 (1) - Try putting the slider below, so you can make a pattern! Done

00:17:900 (6) - Add more spacing. Added a bit more

00:33:448 (1,2) - Awesome!

00:51:467 - Try adding a circle here ^^ I did and it felt really weird

01:10:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like how this sounds. Can you try fixing it? I can't find an alternative :( Changed it for something slighlty better

01:11:772 - Add circle! The stream follows the drum roll, there is no drum sound here

01:12:503 - Same ^ ^ (But this is something more optional, since it could be a really long stream) Same here

01:17:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Super!!

01:25:583 (2) - Try replacing it for 2 circles! I prefer it this way

01:28:327 (1,1,1,1,1) - Spacing! They're quite hard to hit 'em for an Insane diff I dont know, these are really easy for me to hit, I did some really minor adjustments but nothing really noticeable

01:30:522 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same ^ ^ (These one are easier, tho) Same as above, but left them as they were

01:45:888 (1) - Try to start this "new stream" closer to when the slider 5 finishes 01:45:705 (5)

01:47:351 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Spacing! Slightly changed the spacing of some of them

01:51:101 (3) - I don't like how it sounds. Changed it for a slider
I hope I didn't forget anything. Thank you very much, this helped alot !
A Mystery
Hello, from my queue!

General

  1. First map? o.o
  2. Not bad
  3. Please replace the mp3 with one of a better sound quality, it doesn't sound very appealing atm. But I like the song! Why cut the original song? :(
  4. With your current timing, move the offset to 522 where the music already starts (it doesn't change the timing or make things unsnapped)
Nightmare

What's with the NC you used? It doesn't seem to make sense but I'll leave a box with every NC addition and removal suggestions

NCs
00:04:180 (1) - remove
00:04:912 (4) - add
00:05:644 (1) - remove
00:06:375 (3) - add
00:07:107 (1) - remove
00:07:839 (3) - add
00:10:766 (7) - add
00:11:497 (1) - remove
00:12:229 (4) - add
00:15:156 (3) - add
00:15:888 (6) - add if you want to stay consistent with the previous NCs you used (00:13:692 (1,1) - )
00:19:546 (3) - add
00:21:009 (7) - add
00:21:192 (1) - remove
00:25:400 (5) - add
00:30:522 (2) - add
00:31:985 (3) - add
00:36:375 (7) - add
00:37:839 (3) - add
00:46:619 (7) - add
00:46:985 (1) - remove
00:49:180 (4) - add
00:49:912 (1) - remove
00:50:644 (3) - add
00:52:473 (3) - add
00:59:424 (5) - add
01:00:339 (1) - remove
01:00:888 (3) - add
01:03:814 (5) - add
01:10:766 (4) - add
01:11:223 (1) - unnecessary
01:12:961 (5) - add
01:15:156 (9) - add
01:15:339 (1) - remove
01:18:448 (10) - add
01:18:540 (1) - remove
01:22:473 (9) - add
01:22:839 (1) - remove
01:23:388 (6) - add
01:23:936 (10) - add
01:24:302 (1) - remove
01:33:357 (1) - remove
01:33:448 (2) - add
01:33:814 (1) - unnecessary
01:35:278 (1) - unnecessary
01:53:205 (5) - add

00:08:205 (5,6,7,8) - It would make more sense if the circles were stacked per 2 starting from every beat instead of the red tick
00:14:058 (2) - Ctrl+g?
00:21:192 (1,2) - There is no real reason why these sliders would be off-beat, because the words of the vocals all start on the white ticks
00:59:424 (5) - NC
01:00:339 (1) - Remove the NC and use it on 01:00:888 (3) -
01:02:351 (1,2) - Switch these 2 slider on the timeline for a better flow
01:03:814 (5) - It would feel better to also end with a greater distance than that after all those slider jumps
01:07:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The rhythm you used does not represent the 1/3 like rhythm that is used in the song. http://puu.sh/efjrt/5507e426c0.jpg This would make more sense
01:53:205 (5) - NC
01:07:107 - You mapped nothing here yet you did in the Hard :(

Hard

The NCs don't really make sense again, but the hard is decent.

Combos
00:04:180 (1) - Remove NC
00:04:912 (4) - Add NC
00:16:619 (5) - Add NC
00:17:168 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:083 (4) - Blanket? and make this a NC
00:19:546 (3) - ^
00:18:083 (4) - Add NC
00:18:814 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:546 (3) - Add NC
00:25:400 (6) - Add NC
00:26:131 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:863 (2) - Add NC
00:36:375 (4) - Add NC
00:37:107 (1) - Remove NC
00:37:839 (3) - Add
00:49:180 (7) - Add
00:49:912 (1) - Remove
00:50:644 (2) - Add
00:54:302 (6) - Add
01:03:814 (5) - Add
01:10:766 (5) - Add
01:21:009 (5) - Add
01:21:375 (1) - Remove
01:44:424 (6) - Add
01:44:790 (1) - Remove
01:45:888 (5) - Add
01:53:205 (5) - Add

00:33:083 (4) - Weird overlap with the next round slider
00:53:570 (4,7) - Fix these blankets
01:07:107 (1) - Same as the Nightmare diff from here. Consider using a rhythm that would make more sense with the 1/3 like one in the music

Normal

If you just only use a NC every 4 or 8 beats, or when there is an obvious strong downbeat in the music, it will make a lot more sense

00:04:180 (2,3) - Swap the rhythms of these 2 on the timeline, it would make a lot more sense
00:24:302 (2,2) - Make these blankets look better
00:18:083 - Why is it so empty here? :(
00:23:570 - And here as well. Add a circle
00:38:936 (2) - An unnecessary offbeat slider. You should try this rhythm http://puu.sh/efqdB/b60d4a6599.jpg
00:46:985 (1) - unnecessary here as well. Why not just 2 circles?
00:52:107 (1) - Why the overlap? :( it looks bad

Easy

Pretty well done

00:39:668 (4,1) - Confusing spacing?


Still needs a lot of improvement, but if this is your first mapset, very impressive! And if it's not, still impressive. Just learn how to use combos a better and it will be pretty fine. The insane was really enjoyable imo.
Ringating
bg and audio mod

I found a higher res version of your bg and scaled it down to 768p.your mp3 sounded a bit bleh, so I found a higher quality version and encoded it accordingly. It's also uncut, so if you really want it to be cut I can do that instead. Here is the full mp3.

no kudosu
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
Finals are finally over, sorry for the late response !

A Mystery wrote:

Hello, from my queue!

General

  1. First map? o.o
  2. Not bad
  3. Please replace the mp3 with one of a better sound quality, it doesn't sound very appealing atm. But I like the song! Why cut the original song? :( I thought alot about this cut, especially because of the solo at the end. But I really prefer to play songs that are shorter thant 2 mins and this was the perfect spot to end the song imo :)
  4. With your current timing, move the offset to 522 where the music already starts (it doesn't change the timing or make things unsnapped)
Done

Nightmare

What's with the NC you used? It doesn't seem to make sense but I'll leave a box with every NC addition and removal suggestions Fixed everything

NCs
00:04:180 (1) - remove
00:04:912 (4) - add
00:05:644 (1) - remove
00:06:375 (3) - add
00:07:107 (1) - remove
00:07:839 (3) - add
00:10:766 (7) - add
00:11:497 (1) - remove
00:12:229 (4) - add
00:15:156 (3) - add
00:15:888 (6) - add if you want to stay consistent with the previous NCs you used (00:13:692 (1,1) - )
00:19:546 (3) - add
00:21:009 (7) - add
00:21:192 (1) - remove
00:25:400 (5) - add
00:30:522 (2) - add
00:31:985 (3) - add
00:36:375 (7) - add
00:37:839 (3) - add
00:46:619 (7) - add
00:46:985 (1) - remove
00:49:180 (4) - add
00:49:912 (1) - remove
00:50:644 (3) - add
00:52:473 (3) - add
00:59:424 (5) - add
01:00:339 (1) - remove
01:00:888 (3) - add
01:03:814 (5) - add
01:10:766 (4) - add
01:11:223 (1) - unnecessary
01:12:961 (5) - add
01:15:156 (9) - add
01:15:339 (1) - remove
01:18:448 (10) - add
01:18:540 (1) - remove
01:22:473 (9) - add
01:22:839 (1) - remove
01:23:388 (6) - add
01:23:936 (10) - add
01:24:302 (1) - remove
01:33:357 (1) - remove
01:33:448 (2) - add
01:33:814 (1) - unnecessary
01:35:278 (1) - unnecessary
01:53:205 (5) - add

00:08:205 (5,6,7,8) - It would make more sense if the circles were stacked per 2 starting from every beat instead of the red tick I'll keep this as it is for now.
00:14:058 (2) - Ctrl+g? done
00:21:192 (1,2) - There is no real reason why these sliders would be off-beat, because the words of the vocals all start on the white ticks This doesnt matter since I'm following the guitar rithm
00:59:424 (5) - NC fixed
01:00:339 (1) - Remove the NC and use it on 01:00:888 (3) - fixed
01:02:351 (1,2) - Switch these 2 slider on the timeline for a better flow Yes
01:03:814 (5) - It would feel better to also end with a greater distance than that after all those slider jumps Did that and changed the position of the sliders a little bit for better flow
01:07:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The rhythm you used does not represent the 1/3 like rhythm that is used in the song. http://puu.sh/efjrt/5507e426c0.jpg This would make more sense I'll think about this. This doesnt bug me since I'm following the guitar rithm but if someone else points this out I'll definately change this.
01:53:205 (5) - NC fixed
01:07:107 - You mapped nothing here yet you did in the Hard :( Added a slider

Hard

The NCs don't really make sense again, but the hard is decent. fixed everything !

Combos
00:04:180 (1) - Remove NC
00:04:912 (4) - Add NC
00:16:619 (5) - Add NC
00:17:168 (1) - Remove NC
00:18:083 (4) - Blanket? and make this a NC
00:19:546 (3) - ^
00:18:083 (4) - Add NC
00:18:814 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:546 (3) - Add NC
00:25:400 (6) - Add NC
00:26:131 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:863 (2) - Add NC
00:36:375 (4) - Add NC
00:37:107 (1) - Remove NC
00:37:839 (3) - Add
00:49:180 (7) - Add
00:49:912 (1) - Remove
00:50:644 (2) - Add
00:54:302 (6) - Add
01:03:814 (5) - Add
01:10:766 (5) - Add
01:21:009 (5) - Add
01:21:375 (1) - Remove
01:44:424 (6) - Add
01:44:790 (1) - Remove
01:45:888 (5) - Add
01:53:205 (5) - Add

00:33:083 (4) - Weird overlap with the next round slider Fixed
00:53:570 (4,7) - Fix these blankets Done
01:07:107 (1) - Same as the Nightmare diff from here. Consider using a rhythm that would make more sense with the 1/3 like one in the music Same as the nightmare diff

Normal

If you just only use a NC every 4 or 8 beats, or when there is an obvious strong downbeat in the music, it will make a lot more sense

00:04:180 (2,3) - Swap the rhythms of these 2 on the timeline, it would make a lot more sense changed it
00:24:302 (2,2) - Make these blankets look better Done
00:18:083 - Why is it so empty here? :( Added 2 sliders
00:23:570 - And here as well. Add a circle Yes
00:38:936 (2) - An unnecessary offbeat slider. You should try this rhythm http://puu.sh/efqdB/b60d4a6599.jpg This is not offbeat. It's following the vocals
00:46:985 (1) - unnecessary here as well. Why not just 2 circles? Changed
00:52:107 (1) - Why the overlap? :( it looks bad Changed

Easy

Pretty well done

00:39:668 (4,1) - Confusing spacing? You're right, changed.


Still needs a lot of improvement, but if this is your first mapset, very impressive! And if it's not, still impressive. Just learn how to use combos a better and it will be pretty fine. The insane was really enjoyable imo.
Thanks alot !

Ringating wrote:

bg and audio mod

I found a higher res version of your bg and scaled it down to 768p.your mp3 sounded a bit bleh, so I found a higher quality version and encoded it accordingly. It's also uncut, so if you really want it to be cut I can do that instead. Here is the full mp3.

no kudosu
I'll work on this thanks alot !
Ringating
well, you took the higher quality audio and re-encoded it back down to 128 kbps :/ the cymbals in particular suffer from this, so here is another mp3 cropped to match the one you are currently using (definitely breaking the offset again, sorry about that).

no kds
mrturtle99
Hi from my modding queue~
This is really impressive for your first map, nice job on it. Also I thought Christmas was over?
Easy
00:10:857 (2) - maybe put a NC here
Normal
00:47:442 (3,7) - this combo is a little long in relation to the rest of the song, so consider putting NC's on both of these
Hard
00:20:369 (1,2,3,4) - in this combo, 00:20:918 (2,3) - are slightly farther apart than the other parts, so that should be fixed
00:32:808 (1,2,3,4) - if you're going to do the whole NC every two beats thing with 00:31:345 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , then this slider part should be NC'ed every slider to keep with the NC pattern
Nightmare
Your audio preview time on here isn't the same as on easy/normal/hard, so that should be fixed
00:53:296 (1,2,3,4) - these should be NC'ed, as other parts in the song with the same 1/4th distance between are NC'ed
AppLoad
Hi, M4M from my queue, thx for mod!

General

1. I don't like preview point. There are many good moments for preview, for example 01:34:729. I think it's better for preview.
2. Disable "Widescreen Support" for all diffs, you don't have SB.
3. Remove letterbox during breaks.
Easy

It's easy, make this diff a bit easier, for example replace these circles: 00:10:857 (2,3,4) - on repeat slider , 00:18:174 (1,2,3,4) - on two sliders, 00:35:735 (1,2,3) and 00:37:198 (1,2,3) on repeat sliders.
00:15:979 (1) - Remove NC
00:24:759 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:857 - You can add circle here.
00:41:223 (5) - ^
01:54:028 (1) - Remove NC
Normal

00:05:003 (2) - Don't like this slider, make it so.I think it's better and more accurate.
00:17:442 (1,2,3,4) - A bit crooked pattern, fix it.
00:20:369 (1) - Maybe make so?
00:24:393 (3) - Add NC
00:24:759 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:784 (1) - Remake a bit this slider. For example
01:00:247 (1,2,3) - Remake this, somehow ugly, make it more accurate.
01:10:491 (1) - You can make more accurate slider, than this, just try different variants.
01:18:174 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Oh... Too awful, remake this moment it's spoil a good diff.
01:48:906 (2,1,1,1,1,1) - So long sliders, they're spoil the rhythm. Make so
Hard

00:11:223 (5) - Don't like this slider, maybe remake?
00:26:954 (3) - Make this slider so.
01:27:686 (1) - Remake this slider a bit. For example
01:51:467 (1) - Don't like the end of slider, it's can be made more accurately.
Nightmare

Cool diff, can't mod, coz can't find anything problems
Good Luck~ Really good song!
The Nightmare Before Christmas <3
neonat
Easy

00:07:154 (1,2,3) - this could look much more neater if you blanket them nicely
00:09:715 (1) - finish on end of slider? Match with the cymbals in the music
00:12:276 (1,3) - blanket nicely
00:21:788 (2,2) - try to avoid such overlaps
00:23:252 (1,2) - being the easiest difficulty, please avoid any kind of stacking whatsoever that could unnecessarily increase the difficulty of it
00:27:276 (3,4) - ^
00:28:740 (1,2) - ^
same thing applies to all further stacks found in the map
00:31:301 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:34:227 (1) - finish
00:35:691 (1) - ^
00:45:935 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:48:861 onwards - you changed the distance snap here, which you should not. Keep it constant throughout the whole song, which was initially 1.0x
01:23:252 (1) - finish
01:30:569 (1) - finish on start of slider

Overall, try to make things neater, especially those that look like blankets. Honestly, most most of them do not blanket perfectly, and are looking off, which isn't good. Also do note about the spacing irregularities, and make sure they are all properly spaced evenly out throughout. Remove all the stacks.



That's it for now and I hope you improve on the mapset, starting with Easy. Good Luck
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
I fixed The audio before going through the mods. Huge mistake.
Also Sorry for the late responses I have been kinda busy irl recently.

mrturtle99 wrote:

Hi from my modding queue~
This is really impressive for your first map, nice job on it. Also I thought Christmas was over?
Easy
00:10:857 (2) - maybe put a NC here If I'd do that it wouldnt be consistent with 00:13:008 (3) - so it's probably not a good idea
Normal
00:47:442 (3,7) - this combo is a little long in relation to the rest of the song, so consider putting NC's on both of these I changed the 7 one

Hard
00:20:369 (1,2,3,4) - in this combo, 00:20:918 (2,3) - are slightly farther apart than the other parts, so that should be fixed Grid density 3 sucks
00:32:808 (1,2,3,4) - if you're going to do the whole NC every two beats thing with 00:31:345 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , then this slider part should be NC'ed every slider to keep with the NC pattern Yeah but that would look ugly :P
Nightmare
Your audio preview time on here isn't the same as on easy/normal/hard, so that should be fixed I fixed that with the offset change
00:53:296 (1,2,3,4) - these should be NC'ed, as other parts in the song with the same 1/4th distance between are NC'ed Idk, it doesnt fit that well to me, the song doesnt feel the same here


Thanks alot !

[AppLoad] wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue, thx for mod!

General

1. I don't like preview point. There are many good moments for preview, for example 01:34:729. I think it's better for preview. Yuii already suggested a new preview point, I'm happy with the one I have now
2. Disable "Widescreen Support" for all diffs, you don't have SB. Yup, fixed
3. Remove letterbox during breaks.
^
Easy

It's easy, make this diff a bit easier, for example replace these circles: 00:10:857 (2,3,4) - on repeat slider , 00:18:174 (1,2,3,4) - on two sliders, 00:35:735 (1,2,3) and 00:37:198 (1,2,3) on repeat sliders. I'm pretty sure repeat sliders are arder than singles and this is fine imo
00:15:979 (1) - Remove NC This one is fine
00:24:759 (1) - Remove NC I think it fits the song better the way it is
00:25:857 - You can add circle here. We dont want to make it too hard do we :P
00:41:223 (5) - ^ Same problem as above there would be a lot of stuff at once, the hard parts should be at the end of the song
01:54:028 (1) - Remove NC
I like that
Normal

00:05:003 (2) - Don't like this slider, make it so.I think it's better and more accurate. I don't !
00:17:442 (1,2,3,4) - A bit crooked pattern, fix it. It should be better now
00:20:369 (1) - Maybe make so? Nah
00:24:393 (3) - Add NC
00:24:759 (1) - Remove NC combo is changing with the guitar here
00:28:784 (1) - Remake a bit this slider. For example Changed it a bit
01:00:247 (1,2,3) - Remake this, somehow ugly, make it more accurate. Changed the shape a little bit, I dont really know what else I could do with that
01:10:491 (1) - You can make more accurate slider, than this, just try different variants. Made the angles a bit less sharp no huge changes though
01:18:174 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Oh... Too awful, remake this moment it's spoil a good diff. Yes
01:48:906 (2,1,1,1,1,1) - So long sliders, they're spoil the rhythm. Make so
If I woul do that there would be no difference with the easy diff. also I dont think this spoils the rhythm
Hard

00:11:223 (5) - Don't like this slider, maybe remake?Made it smoother
00:26:954 (3) - Make this slider so. Yes
01:27:686 (1) - Remake this slider a bit. For example Shape stays the same but I made it look a bit cleaner
01:51:467 (1) - Don't like the end of slider, it's can be made more accurately.
That is fine
Nightmare

Cool diff, can't mod, coz can't find anything problems
Good Luck~ Really good song!
The Nightmare Before Christmas <3
I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks alot !

@neonat I already looked into your mod, I'll edit this post when I'm done editing (and that should be very soon I hope).
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

neonat wrote:

Easy

00:07:154 (1,2,3) - this could look much more neater if you blanket them nicely
00:09:715 (1) - finish on end of slider? Match with the cymbals in the music
00:12:276 (1,3) - blanket nicely
00:21:788 (2,2) - try to avoid such overlaps
00:23:252 (1,2) - being the easiest difficulty, please avoid any kind of stacking whatsoever that could unnecessarily increase the difficulty of it
00:27:276 (3,4) - ^
00:28:740 (1,2) - ^
same thing applies to all further stacks found in the map
00:31:301 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:34:227 (1) - finish
00:35:691 (1) - ^
00:45:935 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:48:861 onwards - you changed the distance snap here, which you should not. Keep it constant throughout the whole song, which was initially 1.0x
01:23:252 (1) - finish
01:30:569 (1) - finish on start of slider

Overall, try to make things neater, especially those that look like blankets. Honestly, most most of them do not blanket perfectly, and are looking off, which isn't good. Also do note about the spacing irregularities, and make sure they are all properly spaced evenly out throughout. Remove all the stacks.



That's it for now and I hope you improve on the mapset, starting with Easy. Good Luck
After 2 month of procrastination it's finally remapped. I fixed everything you suggested. It should look better now.
I also fixed some stuff in the other diffs : Weird looking sliders, blankets, hitsounds...
Thanks alot !
Zaphkael


yo, from my queue

Easy
You have a lot of new combo's that arent really needed. I'll try to give you a few examples, and rework the combo's with that info.

00:15:935 (1,2) - remove NC, same beat, only 2 combo, so no need for a new one.

00:35:691 (1) - ^

00:42:276 (1,1,1) - I know this might look nice to you, but it might be confusing for new players, and there was no real drain part before this, so this means that this part makes your map way too easy to pass.

...and so on

00:56:545 (2,3) - improve this blanket, you can make it nicer.

Normal
00:28:374 (5) - manually place it on x336 y 160 for perfect stack

00:40:447 (3,1) - If this was supposed to be a blanket, fix it

00:59:471 (1) - remove nc

01:22:520 (4,5) - this isn't distance snapped, resnap it.

01:13:374 (6) - NC, and remove NC 01:13:740 (1) - here

01:28:374 (1) - remove NC

Hard
Up HP by 1, since you have so many NC's

00:09:349 (3,1) - ugly overlap, try avoiding this

Nightmare
00:43:740 (1) - Place it a bit closer to the previous note

From the break on, this map becomes way too evil...try placing things closer to each other, make some short sliders single notes and maybe even decrease slider velocity. You really have some difficulty spikes, and it's not nice to make sure the player breaks combo when the song is almost finished :P

Well, this ends my mod. I think the last diff needs some work, but I think this can become a nice map with some modding done. I hope this was useful, cya!
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

inspectorscout wrote:



yo, from my queue

Easy
You have a lot of new combo's that arent really needed. I'll try to give you a few examples, and rework the combo's with that info.

I used a new combo on every strong downbeat. Following that rule, I think most of my NCs are justified.

00:15:935 (1,2) - remove NC, same beat, only 2 combo, so no need for a new one. Removed Ye that one doesn't really fit.

00:35:691 (1) - ^ But that one does

00:42:276 (1,1,1) - I know this might look nice to you, but it might be confusing for new players, and there was no real drain part before this, so this means that this part makes your map way too easy to pass. I'll think about it, I kind of want it to stay consistent with higher diffs. Also this is supposed to be an easy diff I dont think beginners want to get wrecked by high drain. They most likely just want a casual play to get used to the game.

...and so on

00:56:545 (2,3) - improve this blanket, you can make it nicer. That's not supposed to be a blanket lol

Normal
00:28:374 (5) - manually place it on x336 y 160 for perfect stack Yes, changed some stuff

00:40:447 (3,1) - If this was supposed to be a blanket, fix it It was not but I made it neater

00:59:471 (1) - remove nc this one fits imo

01:22:520 (4,5) - this isn't distance snapped, resnap it. This was my way of making the ending part a bit more intense than the rest I wont change that for now

01:13:374 (6) - NC, and remove NC 01:13:740 (1) - here I've been follow ing the guitar until this point, I dont really want to switch the focus on vocals just yet

01:28:374 (1) - remove NC Nah

Hard
Up HP by 1, since you have so many NC's Someone recently told me that hp6 was a bit too high. I dont think I'll make it higher.

00:09:349 (3,1) - ugly overlap, try avoiding this Yes, fixed it

Nightmare
00:43:740 (1) - Place it a bit closer to the previous note Never !

From the break on, this map becomes way too evil...try placing things closer to each other, make some short sliders single notes and maybe even decrease slider velocity. You really have some difficulty spikes, and it's not nice to make sure the player breaks combo when the song is almost finished :P

Well, this song is almost 5 stars for a reason, it's not supposed to be easy. The whole mapset is mapped around this difficulty increase at the end of the song. I wont tweak anything just to make it more accessible. I'd rather make a 5th insane or hyper diff if it's that much of a problem. I don't think it's needed though.

Well, this ends my mod. I think the last diff needs some work, but I think this can become a nice map with some modding done. I hope this was useful, cya!
Thanks for your help !
pishifat
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2015-07-20 20:16 pishifat: the thing that first appeared to me was spacing
2015-07-20 20:16 BOUYAAA: Yeah I get that
2015-07-20 20:16 BOUYAAA: It's pretty random isnt it
2015-07-20 20:16 pishifat: kind of
2015-07-20 20:16 pishifat: when you place jumps
2015-07-20 20:16 pishifat: they should be emphasizing the object being jumped to
2015-07-20 20:17 pishifat: when there's a jump to a sound that's not emphasized then low spacing to a sound that is emphasized it makes no sense
2015-07-20 20:17 pishifat: 00:09:349 (5,6,1) - that's a good example
2015-07-20 20:17 pishifat: 5->6 has a jump but 6->1 should have the jump
2015-07-20 20:17 pishifat: since 6 is just another drum thing but 1 is superloudfinish emphhasisy stuff
2015-07-20 20:17 BOUYAAA: Yeah I see
2015-07-20 20:18 pishifat: for this song, most of the time it's got very standard points of emphasis everywhere else
2015-07-20 20:18 pishifat: being that white ticks > red ticks
2015-07-20 20:18 pishifat: like 00:31:666 (2,3,1,2,1,2) -
2015-07-20 20:18 pishifat: is good
2015-07-20 20:18 pishifat: each white tick is being empahsized with this sort of thing and that's how it should be
2015-07-20 20:18 BOUYAAA: 00:35:691 (1,2,3,4) - this has the same issue right?
2015-07-20 20:19 BOUYAAA: ok
2015-07-20 20:19 pishifat: yea it does
2015-07-20 20:19 pishifat: there, low spacing from 2->3 would make sense
2015-07-20 20:19 pishifat: then higher from 1->2 and 3->4
2015-07-20 20:19 BOUYAAA: I see
2015-07-20 20:20 pishifat: it sounds really restricting i know
2015-07-20 20:20 BOUYAAA: No I totally get it
2015-07-20 20:20 BOUYAAA: This was one of the parts I considered remapping because it felt weird
2015-07-20 20:20 BOUYAAA: I just couldn't point out why
2015-07-20 20:21 pishifat: nice
2015-07-20 20:21 pishifat: well now you know why
2015-07-20 20:21 pishifat: practically every mapper doesnt really care much about this
2015-07-20 20:21 pishifat: so it hurts to see when maps get qualified like this
2015-07-20 20:21 pishifat: then qats come and say "your spacing is totally random"
2015-07-20 20:21 pishifat: and mappers get pissed
2015-07-20 20:22 pishifat: okay now that you got spacing down i'll go over uh other things
2015-07-20 20:22 BOUYAAA: Yeah I understand a bit better now
2015-07-20 20:22 BOUYAAA: okok
2015-07-20 20:23 pishifat: for the most part you do this right but
2015-07-20 20:23 pishifat: right here is a pretty gross thing 00:52:337 (5) -
2015-07-20 20:23 pishifat: you can probably guess why
2015-07-20 20:23 BOUYAAA: I guess this should be one long slider
2015-07-20 20:24 BOUYAAA: I mean you shouldn't have to press on the red tick here
2015-07-20 20:24 pishifat: clicking the red tick isn't necessarily the bad part
2015-07-20 20:24 pishifat: it's that the tick on the tail is stronger than the red tick
2015-07-20 20:24 pishifat: it's called a passive slider or something
2015-07-20 20:24 pishifat: meaning emphasis is on the tail rather than the head
2015-07-20 20:24 pishifat: so playing it is not really intuitive
2015-07-20 20:25 pishifat: since you actually click on sliderheads, giving them impact
2015-07-20 20:25 pishifat: 01:08:800 (4) - 01:09:898 (3) - are some other ones
2015-07-20 20:26 BOUYAAA: Are the two last ones really that much of a problem?
2015-07-20 20:26 BOUYAAA: This was already pointed out by someone
2015-07-20 20:26 BOUYAAA: Yeah it is
2015-07-20 20:27 pishifat: i'd say it is
2015-07-20 20:28 pishifat: your first kiai
2015-07-20 20:29 pishifat: so good
2015-07-20 20:29 BOUYAAA: To play?
2015-07-20 20:30 BOUYAAA: I seriously thought everyone would crush my dreams on this one
2015-07-20 20:30 pishifat: bpm doubles there sorta
2015-07-20 20:30 pishifat: drum pattern is just twice as fast
2015-07-20 20:30 pishifat: and you showed that really well
2015-07-20 20:30 pishifat: ok the thing that i will crush your dreams on now
2015-07-20 20:30 pishifat: is how many extended sliders you have
2015-07-20 20:31 BOUYAAA: Yay
2015-07-20 20:31 BOUYAAA: nooo
2015-07-20 20:31 BOUYAAA: not this :(
2015-07-20 20:31 pishifat: 00:41:544 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -
2015-07-20 20:31 pishifat: these ones are fine
2015-07-20 20:32 pishifat: huh
2015-07-20 20:32 pishifat: seems like just the kiai ones are the ones that are gross
2015-07-20 20:32 pishifat: you can probably hear that you're ignoring a lot of sounds during the last kiai
2015-07-20 20:32 BOUYAAA: 01:48:130 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - These?
2015-07-20 20:33 pishifat: yea
2015-07-20 20:33 BOUYAAA: Yeah the drum sounds
2015-07-20 20:33 BOUYAAA: I think none of them are mapped
2015-07-20 20:34 pishifat: could keep the same idea easily
2015-07-20 20:34 pishifat: with like http://i.gyazo.com/17d81f1584c70ab2b2d948c0b1420198.png
2015-07-20 20:34 BOUYAAA: Yeah but everything would look ugly
2015-07-20 20:34 pishifat: im sure you could manage to make it not ugly lol
2015-07-20 20:35 pishifat: ignoring so many prominent sounds is just not gonna work prob
2015-07-20 20:35 BOUYAAA: I probably would not know what to do with these singles
2015-07-20 20:35 pishifat: could just like
2015-07-20 20:35 pishifat: stack them on the next sliders
2015-07-20 20:35 BOUYAAA: 01:27:642 (5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Are these an issue too?
2015-07-20 20:36 BOUYAAA: Yeah I guess
2015-07-20 20:36 pishifat: yea they would be the same thing
2015-07-20 20:36 BOUYAAA: oh god
2015-07-20 20:36 BOUYAAA: I was so happy about these lol
2015-07-20 20:36 pishifat: basically all of the ones where you cover up a stronger sound in the middle of the slider are nopes
2015-07-20 20:36 pishifat: then ones where it's all silence are okay
2015-07-20 20:38 pishifat: tbh i dont have much else to say
2015-07-20 20:38 pishifat: youve got some obvious overmapping which is not really a good thing to do
2015-07-20 20:38 BOUYAAA: The snare sound should be at the end of the slider right
2015-07-20 20:38 pishifat: 00:34:227 (1,2) - these kinds of things
2015-07-20 20:39 pishifat: snare on tail works ya
2015-07-20 20:39 BOUYAAA: I kinda agree on this
2015-07-20 20:39 BOUYAAA: Any other obvious overmaps?
2015-07-20 20:39 pishifat: 00:55:081 (1,2) -
2015-07-20 20:40 BOUYAAA: ok
2015-07-20 20:40 pishifat: that looks like it
2015-07-20 20:40 pishifat: for the extended sliders you end up keeping
2015-07-20 20:40 pishifat: try setting softsampleset on the tails
2015-07-20 20:41 pishifat: makes them not as obnoxious since you're focusing on just extending them not the actual 3/4 blue tick
2015-07-20 20:42 BOUYAAA: Yeah but if I change one I might aswell change everything
2015-07-20 20:42 pishifat: it would be on the tails of all of them yea
2015-07-20 20:42 pishifat: that's what im saying lul
2015-07-20 20:43 pishifat: ok uh ive gotta go for now but whenever you wanna look at more stuff just pm me and i'll do it like this
2015-07-20 20:43 BOUYAAA: Yeah sorry I'ts almost 6am here lol
2015-07-20 20:43 BOUYAAA: Okok, thank you very much for your help
2015-07-20 20:44 BOUYAAA: This was very helpful
2015-07-20 20:44 BOUYAAA: Any way I can save this conversation?
2015-07-20 20:44 pishifat: ill post it on your thread
Deppyforce
Mod For M4M YE
Nice Map :3
[Easy]
  1. 00:23:252 (3) - NC?
  2. 00:35:691 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This Is Unusual In Easy Diff. Maybe Fix?
  3. 00:41:543 (1,1,1) - I Think This'll Look Better If It's All Vertical Sliders.
  4. 01:12:637 - Big White Tick Should Map With Something Clickable
  5. Add A Spinner Somewhere? Easy Should Have It I Think
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:788 (1,2) - Map This Like 00:20:325 (1,2,3) ?
  2. 00:41:543 (1,2,3) - NC Every Note?
  3. 01:11:905 (1,2) - Maybe Some Reverse Slider Instead
  4. 01:47:027 - Add Note
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:935 (1,2,3) - Should Be Mapped Like This 00:14:471 (1,2,3,4)
  2. 00:41:544 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Change Shape Of Some Of These
  3. 01:04:588 - 1 Note Only?
  4. 01:45:929 (1) - I Think This Looks Bit Weird
  5. 01:52:515 (1,2,3,4) - Change To 4x 1/2 Slider
[Pishi]
Uhh This Is Too Good :3

[Nightmare]
  1. 00:04:959 (3,4) - Change This To Jumps
  2. 00:28:740 (1,1,1,1) - This Should Be Spaced
  3. 00:41:543 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ Maybe This Too
  4. 00:58:186 (2,3,4,1) - Make This Triangle Symmetrical
  5. 01:14:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I Think This Is Bit Too Much For Below 5 Star But I Think You Can Keep
  6. 01:51:783 (1,2) - Diff Spike O.o Maybe Reduce The Distance A Bit
Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

Deppyforce wrote:

Mod For M4M YE YE
Nice Map :3 Oh ty
[Easy]
  1. 00:23:252 (3) - NC? that woudl be too much imo
  2. 00:35:691 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This Is Unusual In Easy Diff. Maybe Fix? this should be fine
  3. 00:41:543 (1,1,1) - I Think This'll Look Better If It's All Vertical Sliders. But don't you see the awesome square shape ? :)
  4. 01:12:637 - Big White Tick Should Map With Something Clickable Yes dfkjshdfs
  5. Add A Spinner Somewhere? Easy Should Have It I Think spinners? ew.
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:788 (1,2) - Map This Like 00:20:325 (1,2,3) ? Ye I could, but this should be fine as it is, for variety and stuff
  2. 00:41:543 (1,2,3) - NC Every Note? seems like someone agrees with my NC spam :^)
  3. 01:11:905 (1,2) - Maybe Some Reverse Slider Instead Nah
  4. 01:47:027 - Add Note idk it doesnt fit very well imo, this also makes a nice break for the 1/2 spam that's coming up
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:935 (1,2,3) - Should Be Mapped Like This 00:14:471 (1,2,3,4) This would just make two entire measure of 1/2 slider spam. Variety pls
  2. 00:41:544 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Change Shape Of Some Of These they already grow in size B)
  3. 01:04:588 - 1 Note Only? I'll keep that in mind in case someone else points this out
  4. 01:45:929 (1) - I Think This Looks Bit Weird Made it a bit less angular
  5. 01:52:515 (1,2,3,4) - Change To 4x 1/2 Slider this is fine as it is imo
[Nightmare]
  1. 00:04:959 (3,4) - Change This To Jumps nah
  2. 00:28:740 (1,1,1,1) - This Should Be Spaced I'll keep that in mind but I think it looks better as it is now
  3. 00:41:543 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ Maybe This Too No this is 100% intentional
  4. 00:58:186 (2,3,4,1) - Make This Triangle Symmetrical that's not what was intended
  5. 01:14:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I Think This Is Bit Too Much For Below 5 Star But I Think You Can Keep this is fine since pishi already has a few long ish streams and star rating doesnt mean much anyways
  6. 01:51:783 (1,2) - Diff Spike O.o Maybe Reduce The Distance A Bit I hope it hurts :^)
Good Luck :3
thanks for your help !
Synpoo
m4m thingssss

[General]
disable widescreen support

[Easy]
00:11:179 - feels like there should be a note here
00:18:496 - ^
00:13:008 (4) - this sounds and plays much better as a note followed by a 1/1 slider (or the same 2/1), similar to 00:09:715 (4,1), and you can just change 00:12:276 (2,3) - to a 1/1 to decrease the density here
00:40:081 (2) - NC?
00:58:735 (1,1) - very minor but there's uneven spacing between these compared to 01:00:198 (1,1) - (purely aesthetic purposes)
01:02:759 (2,4) - not sure how easy this will be for newer players, maybe a pattern like this is better
01:49:588 (1,2) - flow is not too good here compared to the rest of this portion, if 1 has a slight curve it could improve it

[Normal]
00:43:007 (1,1) - nazi, blanket looks off ever so slightly
01:00:930 (3,1) - ((slightly) weak flow here
01:30:380 (3) - moving this up improves flow

[Hard]
00:05:691 (1) - this looks better with less of a curve, or just straight
00:21:057 (3,4) - blanket is off very slightly (naziiii)
00:34:226 (1,2,3) - why not stack these like you did 00:23:252 (1,2,3) - and 00:27:642 (1,2,3)
00:34:592 (3,1) - looks better if you blanket the slider instead of just the head (especially if you stack like i suggested ^ )
00:47:946 (2,3) - give this some spacing like you did 00:46:482 (2,3) - as well as in both of the similar patterns in the next measure
01:00:747 (2,3,4,5) - keeping consistent spacing here is better i think
01:12:545 - map this, the drums don't stop
01:20:868 (2,4) - stack
01:29:466 (2) - fairly strong vocal on the end of this slider, consider a 1/2 + note or something
01:40:807 (1,2) - having 1 repeat here is a bit nicer to match the vocal
01:51:051 (1,2,1) - pretty harsh flow here compared to the rest of the patterns before this that had similar vocals, 01:51:7 83 (1) - ctrl+g fixes it

[pishi's Insane]

00:14:471 (1) - not sure what this repeat slider is supposed to represent, 1/2 pllays and sounds better

[Nightmare]
00:04:959 (3,4) - give these a jump
00:23:435 (2) - consider moving this somewhere like x:292/y:328 for aesthetics and reading purposes
01:00:198 (1,2,3) - awkward flow here, this is kinda similar and plays better
01:12:180 - should be mapped too
01:19:954 (7,8,9,10,1) - this would look better and be more readable if it blanketed 01:19:405 (3) - something like this
01:30:929 (2,3,4) - having these spaced similarly to 01:20:868 (3,1,2,3) - instead of being stacked helps with flow towards 01:31:295 (5)
01:34:222 (9) - NC
01:43:734 (1) - ctrl+G here helps with flow
01:47:393 (9) - NC


Gl, have some stars since my mod isn't as long as yours was.
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