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8284 vs wa. - Adularescence [CatchTheBeat]

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autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月24日 at 13:46:03

Artist: 8284 vs wa.
Title: Adularescence
Source: BMS
Tags: BOF2013 of fighters chronica konzertsaal cross over crossover morion alicia* toybot zirox
BPM: 190
Filesize: 3573kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Rain (4.01 stars, 461 notes)
  2. Salad (2.1 stars, 233 notes)
  3. toybot's Overdose (5.77 stars, 494 notes)
  4. ZiRoX's Platter (3.12 stars, 374 notes)
Download: 8284 vs wa. - Adularescence
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3 | 8284 vs wa. - Adularescence


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● Salad by AFB
● ZiRoX's Platter by ZiRoX
● Rain by AFB
● toybot's Overdose by toybot

♫ Hitsounds by AFB

Nominated by JBHyperion & Kurokami
Last edited by autofanboy , edited 126 times in total.
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy
shit post

Mods

  1. Prophecy
  2. Razorflamekun
  3. GAMI
  4. examination
  5. Tyrell
  6. Razor Sharp
  7. Seph
  8. -[ Asuna ]-
  9. Pew
  10. murutattack
  11. Kurokami
  12. Absolute Zero
  13. JBHyperion
  14. BoberOfDarkness
Last edited by autofanboy , edited 32 times in total.
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
[Salad]
Awesome!

[Platter]
00:36:693 - I think it is weird. Maybe Try Reverse slider?
00:45:535 - Finish?
01:19:640 - Finish

[Rain]
01:46:167 ~ 01:47:430 - xDDDD I think there is a time bomb...

[Renascence (Overdose)]
Non-People Play.....
A F B = ALIEN that make some FUNNY BIG things.
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy

Prophecy wrote:

[Salad]
Awesome! *Thanks

[Platter]
00:36:693 - I think it is weird. Maybe Try Reverse slider? *What is so weird about?
00:45:535 - Finish? *It was added already...
01:19:640 - Finish *No because that part is progressing with the whistle sound.

[Rain]
01:46:167 ~ 01:47:430 - xDDDD I think there is a time bomb... *Yea but what is the problem o:

[Renascence (Overdose)]
Non-People Play.....
A F B = ALIEN that make some FUNNY BIG things. *Rip 2k14 2k15 mapping
Thanks for mod but I rejected them ;w;

*No change
Razorflamekun
162 posts
Joined October 2014
Razorflamekun
I'll have a mod for your Salad shortly, but 7.32 stars for highest diff? :o I'll autoplay it :)

After autoplaying Resonance, there are several VERY sharp hyper dashes. (By sharp, I mean in horizontal distance being very large with very short timeframe). Definitely might be a few instances of fruit too far away from each other. Other than that, diff looked fine to me.

Salad
00:35:430 (1) - Really awkward to hit. Recommend changing it's location to move the fruit and droplets to the left side of the previous fruit to make it easier to hit and less awkward.

00:43:640 (1) - Move this somewhere to make the fruit to the right of the next fruit and droplets that come down.
00:46:640 (2) - Really, really sharp dash here. Suggest changing it's location to move it further right towards the other two fruit.
01:13:325 (1,2) - This combination is really, really awkward. First slider position is fine. I'd suggestion moving the second slider so that it's closer to the fruit that starts the third slider as the dash to that fruit is really, really awkward at the moment.

01:42:377 (1) - Move this fruit further to the left and closer to the fruit that ends the previous slider. Too sharp of a dash.

Other than those issues that I had, I really enjoyed playing the Salad difficulty! Great work and I hope this gets ranked :)

Wonderful song and can't wait to see this ranked!
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy

Razorflamekun wrote:

I'll have a mod for your Salad shortly, but 7.32 stars for highest diff? :o I'll autoplay it :)

After autoplaying Resonance, there are several VERY sharp hyper dashes. (By sharp, I mean in horizontal distance being very large with very short timeframe). Definitely might be a few instances of fruit too far away from each other. Other than that, diff looked fine to me. *But they are totally fine as most of the 'sharp' hyper dashes are covered with HDashes or a dash that's not Go Berzerk ones *I am lenient so I reduce 0.01 star to 7.31 star lol

Salad
00:35:430 (1) - Really awkward to hit. Recommend changing it's location to move the fruit and droplets to the left side of the previous fruit to make it easier to hit and less awkward. *Made easier and better flowing

00:43:640 (1) - Move this somewhere to make the fruit to the right of the next fruit and droplets that come down. *I dont understand.. *IMO it is fine
00:46:640 (2) - Really, really sharp dash here. Suggest changing it's location to move it further right towards the other two fruit. *Made easier and better flowing
01:13:325 (1,2) - This combination is really, really awkward. First slider position is fine. I'd suggestion moving the second slider so that it's closer to the fruit that starts the third slider as the dash to that fruit is really, really awkward at the moment. *I made this easier instead, since I don't think that it is awkward, but the dash is pretty far so I trimmed down a little bit

01:42:377 (1) - Move this fruit further to the left and closer to the fruit that ends the previous slider. Too sharp of a dash. *Moved (3) to a bit closer instead so that I don't have to move the later parts

Other than those issues that I had, I really enjoyed playing the Salad difficulty! Great work and I hope this gets ranked :) *Good to hear!

Wonderful song and can't wait to see this ranked!
*Thanks for mod!
GAMI
582 posts
Joined February 2014
GAMI
yo afb M4M

sadly I cant mod Diff higher than Overdose for stream song like this ;w; forgive me D: I'm trying for 1 hour

Salad
00:08:588 (3) - not good, ctrl+g
00:13:009 (2) - ctrl+g and move back to 456 since the last note is red jump make the player jump become inconsistens
00:23:272 (2) - move to 316
00:43:009 (1) - move the end of this slider like this since for wall slider not good that you put b4
00:50:588 (1) - I prefer this note make become red jump since it's good for the beat of music too
00:52:482 (2) - move to 108 for a good red jump
01:07:640 (3) - why dont make like this
01:25:956 (1) - if you want, you can use SV high ONLY on this note for a cool movement

Rain
01:39:851 (1,2,3) - tbh, this is not good as a slider, try to make become a note , not a slider. it's weird
00:07:167 (2) - 360
00:07:482 (4) - 340
00:36:693 (1,2,3) - same as 1st suggestion that I give you
00:39:219 (1,2,3) - make like this (for unique lol)
00:39:851 (1,2,3) - same as above
00:41:272 (2) - move a bit to 476
00:41:588 (4) - move a bit to 480
00:44:588 (4) - ctrl+g and move to 172
01:45:061 (2) - move a bit to 200
01:45:377 (4) - move a bit to 192

if you want, after platter is done ,call me again to mod it

well, GL !
sorry for didn't help ><
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy

GAMI wrote:

yo afb M4M

sadly I cant mod Diff higher than Overdose for stream song like this ;w; forgive me D: I'm trying for 1 hour

Salad
00:08:588 (3) - not good, ctrl+g *What???
00:13:009 (2) - ctrl+g and move back to 456 since the last note is red jump make the player jump become inconsistens *... The timing listed here are different from the current version
00:23:272 (2) - move to 316 ??
00:43:009 (1) - move the end of this slider like this since for wall slider not good that you put b4 *It is from Platter *facepalms*
00:50:588 (1) - I prefer this note make become red jump since it's good for the beat of music too *But it is Salad... HDash is not necessary
00:52:482 (2) - move to 108 for a good red jump *No
01:07:640 (3) - why dont make like this *It would be too hard
01:25:956 (1) - if you want, you can use SV high ONLY on this note for a cool movement *But it is already a curved slider...

Rain
01:39:851 (1,2,3) - tbh, this is not good as a slider, try to make become a note , not a slider. it's weird *... It is matching the song, I don't see any problems
00:07:167 (2) - 360
00:07:482 (4) - 340 *Both enlarged distance but not the ones with x:360 and x:340 because I want the HDash
00:36:693 (1,2,3) - same as 1st suggestion that I give you *Same as the 1st answer
00:39:219 (1,2,3) - make like this (for unique lol)
00:39:851 (1,2,3) - same as above I intended to make that 3/4 slider pattern that is not too hard, with your suggested pattern, it feels harder to follow. I will remap this part tho
00:41:272 (2) - move a bit to 476
00:41:588 (4) - move a bit to 480 I don't want to make it too far so I have another solution
00:44:588 (4) - ctrl+g and move to 172 *Done
01:45:061 (2) - move a bit to 200
01:45:377 (4) - move a bit to 192 Same as above

if you want, after platter is done ,call me again to mod it

well, GL !
sorry for didn't help ><
*Thanks for mod
Yumeno Himiko
Elite Storyboarder
1,168 posts
Joined August 2012
Yumeno Himiko
Hello afb XD m4m~

[General]
Looking ok

[Hitsounding]
Since the hitsounds in all diffs are copied from Renascence, I only point out the problems in Renascence diff.
00:11:114 (1) - missing clap
01:43:009 (3) - missing finish
01:46:167 (1,2,3) - Soft sample sounds better and do not use beep(whistle) here.

[Salad]
00:40:167 (2,3,1) - The ds can be cut down a bit to go with your previous patterns.
00:56:903 (1,2) - I guess a reverse slider is better than a slider with a circle.
01:17:746 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - give more moving here?
01:29:903 (1) - rotate 180° should be better
01:43:325 (4,1) - more ds should be made

[Rain]
00:04:009 (3,4) - a bit hard here, try 00:04:167 (4) - x = 328
00:10:482 (2) - rotate 90° to make the flow a bit harder
01:11:272 (1,2,3,4,5) - flow like this will be easier to catch
SPOILER

[toybot's Overdose]
one unsnapped slider

00:05:272 (1,2) - move them apart
00:46:482 (2,3) - also needs a larger move
00:56:588 (3,4) - ^
00:51:061 (2,3) - ds can be larger
01:44:272 - missing circle?
01:45:377 (2) - move it a bit right(x = 172?) and 01:45:535 (3) - ctrl + G on this slider

[Renascence]
uhh I can't actually play this diff XD, just some feeling after HT played it
01:05:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - DS may be too large? timed jumps with HDashes seem not so nice
01:14:272 (1,2,3) - I don't know but is this really catchable @_@ so amazing
01:21:851 (1,2,3) - ^ also these reversed-direction 1/4 sliders :? tops are so awesome

OK definitely an awesome work! it deserves a star :)
Good luck XD
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy

examination wrote:

Hello afb XD m4m~ *I will mod later :3

[General]
Looking ok *Thanks :3

[Hitsounding]
Since the hitsounds in all diffs are copied from Renascence, I only point out the problems in Renascence diff.
00:11:114 (1) - missing clap *Fixed
01:43:009 (3) - missing finish *Fixed
01:46:167 (1,2,3) - Soft sample sounds better and do not use beep(whistle) here. *Okay

[Salad]
00:40:167 (2,3,1) - The ds can be cut down a bit to go with your previous patterns. *Done
00:56:903 (1,2) - I guess a reverse slider is better than a slider with a circle. *Okay
01:17:746 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - give more moving here? *Nah, I want to keep the part before the kiai time easy
01:29:903 (1) - rotate 180° should be better *Nah, I want to make it easier here as it is Salad
01:43:325 (4,1) - more ds should be made *Done

[Rain]
00:04:009 (3,4) - a bit hard here, try 00:04:167 (4) - x = 328 *Done
00:10:482 (2) - rotate 90° to make the flow a bit harder *I don't think it is harder and I want to keep them straight as a pattern
01:11:272 (1,2,3,4,5) - flow like this will be easier to catch *I fix 01:12:219 (1,2,3) instead to have more different streams
SPOILER

[Renascence]
uhh I can't actually play this diff XD, just some feeling after HT played it *xD It is for monsters
01:05:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - DS may be too large? timed jumps with HDashes seem not so nice *I think it is not too timed, however I made it easier
01:14:272 (1,2,3) - I don't know but is this really catchable @_@ so amazing *It is catchable
01:21:851 (1,2,3) - ^ also these reversed-direction 1/4 sliders :? tops are so awesome *Thanks xD

OK definitely an awesome work! it deserves a star :) *Thanks a lot!!
Good luck XD
Thanks for Mod!
toybot
1,050 posts
Joined June 2013
toybot

examination wrote:

Hello afb XD m4m~

[General]
Looking ok

[Hitsounding]
Since the hitsounds in all diffs are copied from Renascence, I only point out the problems in Renascence diff.
00:11:114 (1) - missing clap
01:43:009 (3) - missing finish
01:46:167 (1,2,3) - Soft sample sounds better and do not use beep(whistle) here.

[toybot's Overdose]
one unsnapped slider

00:05:272 (1,2) - move them apart - keeping for stop in movement change
00:46:482 (2,3) - also needs a larger move
00:56:588 (3,4) - ^
00:51:061 (2,3) - ds can be larger
01:44:272 - missing circle? -changed whole section
01:45:377 (2) - move it a bit right(x = 172?) and 01:45:535 (3) - ctrl + G on this slider -changed whole section

OK definitely an awesome work! it deserves a star :)
Good luck XD

thanks for mod, if someone can give me ideas for mapping ending thatll be awesome

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84693
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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TitleUnicode:Adularescence
Artist:8284 vs wa.
ArtistUnicode:8284 vs wa.
Creator:alienflybot
Version:toybot's Overdose
Source:BMS
Tags:BOF2013 BOF 2013 of fighters chronica konzertsaal cross over crossover toybot
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BeatmapSetID:245851

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:9.3
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:2
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Tyrell
425 posts
Joined July 2014
Tyrell
Modding because of request in my queue.

salad
I dont know if you want to do this but i would just consider changing the ar and od to 7, seems to fit the timeline better. Also recommend changing hp drain to 4 since 4.5 seems unnecesary.

Would consider increasing distance from 00:25:167 (3) - to 00:25:325 (1) - emphasize a jump, or reduce a bit for easier flow
00:40:482 (1) - Would reduce the distance from previous to this a bit because it should be easier to catch

Platter
01:07:166 (4) - I feel the jump to this is a bit much, would reduce a bit
01:15:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - would recommend making the curves like these arc a bit more so it's easier to catch and it flows better in my opinion

Although i wouldnt say this is an issue, because im sure it's your style and i appreciate it but the zig zag patterns at the beginning and end seem a bit much, would only change it a bit at the beginning not the end since it's kiai time. You dont have to change it at all but I would at least consider it. Such a fun platter :)

Well hopefully my mod was helpful. :)
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy

spartancog95 wrote:

Modding because of request in my queue.

salad
I dont know if you want to do this but i would just consider changing the ar and od to 7, seems to fit the timeline better. Also recommend changing hp drain to 4 since 4.5 seems unnecesary. @ No change for AR and OD, they seem fine; HP reduced to 4.

Would consider increasing distance from 00:25:167 (3) - to 00:25:325 (1) - emphasize a jump, or reduce a bit for easier flow
00:40:482 (1) - Would reduce the distance from previous to this a bit because it should be easier to catch @ Reduced distance between (2,3) instead

Well hopefully my mod was helpful. :)
Thanks for mod!
ZiRoX
Elite Mapper
1,019 posts
Joined November 2009
ZiRoX

spartancog95 wrote:

Modding because of request in my queue.

01:07:166 (4) - I feel the jump to this is a bit much, would reduce a bit Yeah, the jump was a bit large, reduced it a bit, hope it's better now!
01:15:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - would recommend making the curves like these arc a bit more so it's easier to catch and it flows better in my opinion Made the last 2 curves, the ones that come after hyperdash, curve a bit more so the flow after the hyper is nicer.

Although i wouldnt say this is an issue, because im sure it's your style and i appreciate it but the zig zag patterns at the beginning and end seem a bit much, would only change it a bit at the beginning not the end since it's kiai time. You dont have to change it at all but I would at least consider it. Such a fun platter :) The pattern is walkable, so I kept the idea, yet I reduced the spacing a bit to make it more evident and so it doesn't look that evil.

Well hopefully my mod was helpful. :)
Thanks for the mod. Keep modding, you brought up some nice points!

ZiRoX's Platter
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Razor Sharp
1,151 posts
Joined October 2013
Razor Sharp
GENERAL

Offset: Sound better at 1327, but might just be me.
Combo Colors: As i can see here, you dont have any. Prob use: Bright Red, Pink, Purple and a Bright Purpleish color.
Tags: Remove "BOF 2013" is you got it from before, and the fact its just a space at this one, wont make a difference.

Everything else seems ok!

RENASCENCE

00:01:561 - Missing note!
00:01:798 (4,1) - This will be very hard to catch, so would suggest to make this into a hyper!
00:03:693 (3,1) - Decrease the ds?
00:21:377 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uhm, this will be very annoying. Would suggest to make (1) - (8) curve the other direction.
00:22:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is very uncomfortable to play. Way to easy to miss here. Change it.
01:04:640 (4,5,6) - This is a borderline pixeljump. We dont want that after a hyper (it is unrankable). Would suggest to reduce the DS. Check for other places in the map where this is, as i might miss some.
01:11:746 (1,2) - Not, please.. This is plain annoying to hit.
01:17:272 (1,2) - Make these into hypers, as it esencially is the same as the borderline i mentioned 2 spaces above.
01:20:903 (1,2) - Too hard to hit (2) here. Change.
01:22:167 (3) - This is flow breaking. Would suggest to change the direction of this (ctrl + g).
01:28:482 (1) - Same as the first thing i mentioned!
01:28:956 (1) - ^
01:29:903 (1,2,3,4) - Would suggest to curve this, as we hit it right after a hyper. Will be very annying to miss cause of this.
01:40:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:43:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This whole part, should be a remarcable deathstream imo. Just listen to it. It would fit.

This diff is very nice, and very fun and challening!

toybot's OVERDOSE

00:16:009 (2,3) - This is a borderline pixel jump. Would suggest to reduce the distance.
Would suggest you go over the map, and look for borderline jumps, as it is unrankable.
01:27:535 (4,5) - Try to have this a hyper.

Cant really find more issues with this map, as it is made very nice.

RAIN

Cant find anything here, sorry ;_; too good diff D:

This is a very nice mapset afb! Call me back whenever you get more mods, and ill do a recheck!
Good luck!
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy

Razor Sharp wrote:

GENERAL

Offset: Sound better at 1327, but might just be me. - Taken from the ranked version so I am not changing it unless a BN or QAT point this out.
Combo Colors: As i can see here, you dont have any. Prob use: Bright Red, Pink, Purple and a Bright Purpleish color. - Changed the combo colors to another pairs.
Tags: Remove "BOF 2013" is you got it from before, and the fact its just a space at this one, wont make a difference. - Removed.

Everything else seems ok!

RENASCENCE

00:01:561 - Missing note! - Added.
00:01:798 (4,1) - This will be very hard to catch, so would suggest to make this into a hyper! - Done.
00:03:693 (3,1) - Decrease the ds? - Easier now.
00:21:377 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uhm, this will be very annoying. Would suggest to make (1) - (8) curve the other direction. - Done.
00:22:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is very uncomfortable to play. Way to easy to miss here. Change it. - Would like to keep such pattern but I reduced the distance so it is way easier now.
01:04:640 (4,5,6) - This is a borderline pixeljump. We dont want that after a hyper (it is unrankable). Would suggest to reduce the DS. - I do want to keep such pattern and its progressive jumps, but fine, I changed the patterns after the first 6 circles.
Check for other places in the map where this is, as i might miss some.
01:11:746 (1,2) - Not, please.. This is plain annoying to hit. - Shortened distance.
01:17:272 (1,2) - Make these into hypers, as it esencially is the same as the borderline i mentioned 2 spaces above. - Shortened distance instead because I want to keep it progressive.
01:20:903 (1,2) - Too hard to hit (2) here. Change. - Huehue this is how standard mapping trolls; Okay fixed.
01:22:167 (3) - This is flow breaking. Would suggest to change the direction of this (ctrl + g). - Done.
01:28:482 (1) - Same as the first thing i mentioned!
01:28:956 (1) - ^ - Done.
01:29:903 (1,2,3,4) - Would suggest to curve this, as we hit it right after a hyper. Will be very annying to miss cause of this.
01:40:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - Done both.
01:43:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This whole part, should be a remarcable deathstream imo. Just listen to it. It would fit. - Wish granted!

This diff is very nice, and very fun and challening!

RAIN

Cant find anything here, sorry ;_; too good diff D:

This is a very nice mapset afb! Call me back whenever you get more mods, and ill do a recheck!
Good luck!
Thanks for mod!
toybot
1,050 posts
Joined June 2013
toybot

Razor Sharp wrote:

GENERAL

Offset: Sound better at 1327, but might just be me.
Combo Colors: As i can see here, you dont have any. Prob use: Bright Red, Pink, Purple and a Bright Purpleish color.
Tags: Remove "BOF 2013" is you got it from before, and the fact its just a space at this one, wont make a difference.

Everything else seems ok!

toybot's OVERDOSE

00:16:009 (2,3) - This is a borderline pixel jump. Would suggest to reduce the distance.
Would suggest you go over the map, and look for borderline jumps, as it is unrankable. - ok!!
01:27:535 (4,5) - Try to have this a hyper. - sure, i'm clsw now

Cant really find more issues with this map, as it is made very nice.

This is a very nice mapset afb! Call me back whenever you get more mods, and ill do a recheck!
Good luck!
thanks for mod!

https://0paste.tk/7595.txt
Seph
Seph
because i promised

[Renascene]
  1. 00:01:482 (2,3,4) - this is a bit extreme for a beginning, maybe nerf it a little bit?
  2. 00:07:640 (1,2) - id ctrl+g this tbh
  3. 00:31:719 (1,2) - haha nerf
  4. 01:10:798 to 01:13:246 would be better if placed properly, its somewhat bad
only this atm, i need sleep zz

nice Deluge though!
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,578 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
autofanboy

Seph wrote:

because i promised

[Renascene]
  1. 00:01:482 (2,3,4) - this is a bit extreme for a beginning, maybe nerf it a little bit? - Sure.
  2. 00:07:640 (1,2) - id ctrl+g this tbh - I made the slider more slanted instead.
  3. 00:31:719 (1,2) - haha nerf - So easy now lol
  4. 01:10:798 to 01:13:246 would be better if placed properly, its somewhat bad - Nah I would like to keep that pattern.
only this atm, i need sleep zz

nice Deluge though!
Thanks for mod.

All updated.
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Arlecchino
yo! as requested, if there is something wrong, ask me.. cuz im modding offline

Salad


  1. 00:06:377 (1) - a bit dont like this flow, makes a straight slider instead (keep the slope)
  2. 00:14:588 (1) - add reverse at this slider and 00:14:903 (2) - change to circle to delay the movement, so its not makes new player easy to miss, but you can keep 00:17:114 (1,2) - this part, since the distance a bit closer and challenging for new player
  3. 00:15:219 (1) - std mapstyle, but i prefer this slider is curve in other side for better flow
  4. 00:18:693 (2,3,4,1,2) - ctrl+h and move to x:356, to add little movement that's not make player waiting the fruit dropped
  5. 00:22:798 (1,2) - keep in flow, move 00:22:798 (1) - to x:212
  6. 00:29:588 (2) - avoid this flow, not good for this part, better natural flow (i guess), other side?
  7. 00:35:430 (1,2) - *pic, 00:36:377 (2) - x:400
  8. 00:52:482 (2) - other side for better flow
  9. 00:59:430 (3) - ^ ?
  10. 01:36:061 (1) - ^
  11. 01:41:746 (2,3) - ctrl+g
  12. 01:45:535 (2) - ctrl+h and back to the previous place

Zirox's Platter


  1. oohh qop.. this diff, mabushiii~ >.<)7
  2. 00:17:430 (3,1) - *pic
  3. 00:27:693 (4) - da jump is a bit force, move a bit to left (x:388)
    rly, looks good for me, and more with slider tick 1

Rain


  • Soon

toybotr's overduse


  1. wtf! 6.1 stars, rain only 4,19, drop pls
  2. 00:17:746 (1,2) - x:180, 00:18:061 (1,2) - x:332, so the distance will increased further, not force player to jump so much (and this makes the stars drop away from 6 stars, at least for better spread)
  3. 00:21:535 (1) - rotate (selection center) 55 degree, 00:21:693 (2) - (-55) degree, 00:21:851 (3) - 45 degree, and 00:22:009 (4) - (-45), this make those more catch-able and better flow, reduce miss possibility
  4. 00:23:114 (2,3) - for wat? useless for me, no need to add HDash here
  5. 00:24:298 (2) - often random miss here, move to x:196 or just make it a bit closer?
  6. 00:26:588 (1) - make more catch-able, the jump is a bit force though its an overdose, x:356 at least still keep the HDash but its more easy to catch, also for 00:27:061 (3,4) - you can move the slider to x:432 for reduce the distance
  7. 00:27:614 (6,7) - stack those with (5)? or just reduce the distance, so player no need to be hurry to catch next slider, also its like a little break after jumping pattern
  8. 00:30:219 (4,5) - move to left or stack with 00:30:377 (1) - head, to avoid forced jump without HDash
  9. 00:37:114 (3,4) - *pic
  10. 01:01:640 (4) - x:232
  11. 01:46:167 (1) - made a curve slider *pic


ahhh... back modding and get worse at this thing
hope helped continue asap..
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