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senya - Yureru Koi wa Nami no Gotoku

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月8日 at 2:01:11

Artist: senya
Title: Yureru Koi wa Nami no Gotoku
Source: 艦隊これくしょん~艦これ~
Tags: Kantai Collection~Kan Colle~ 砲雷撃戦、始め! kamasetora hizumi kancolle c85 hiroshi usami yuuhei catharsis wmtokok
BPM: 160
Filesize: 2999kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Catharsis (4 stars, 295 notes)
  2. Normal (1.75 stars, 113 notes)
  3. wmtokok's Hard (2.67 stars, 188 notes)
Download: senya - Yureru Koi wa Nami no Gotoku
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Topic Starter
Momovely
星ありです!
Sellenite
wee
Topic Starter
Momovely

Sellenite wrote:

wee
senya saiko~

thanks star☆彡
Satellite
whee
Topic Starter
Momovely

Satellite wrote:

whee
(^O^)
litoluna
tags "wmtokok" 追加
nokds
Topic Starter
Momovely

litoluna wrote:

tags "wmtokok" 追加
nokds
a wasureteta
Mei

quick mod



[Catharsis]
  1. 00:02:406 (2) - try this?
  2. 00:03:531 (1,2) - try this? it fits vocal better because no vocal in 00:04:093
  3. 00:06:906 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - stream should start from there, so add one note at 00:06:999, maybe try this
  4. 00:15:906 (1,2) - try this?i think 00:16:093 (2) - is kind overmap
  5. 00:21:156 (6,7,8) - try this?(use 2 slider) I think this fits music better
  6. 00:48:906 (5) - move to x104 y68 to avoid overlap?
  7. 00:56:593 (3,3) - stack better?
  8. 01:04:656 (7,8) - this is better for me
  9. 01:17:406 (3,4) - use same shape?


[wmtokok's Hard]
  1. 00:04:468 这里的音空的太难受,建议跟上
  2. 00:17:218 (2,3) - 这个跳会不会太难,唔其实我也没有别的建议
  3. 00:23:781 (2,3,1) - 做个blanket?现在放的有点靠右了,左一点也好打些
  4. 00:33:531 漏了个clap

  5. 00:45:156 (3) - 你前面都是一个长白线一个NC,按照规律这里也最好nc上
  6. 01:10:281 (2,3,4,5) - 试试这样
  7. 01:21:156 (1) - 折返那里露了个clap

and uncheck "widescreen support". It is for storyboard
good luck~~
Topic Starter
Momovely

Mei wrote:


:)

thanks star☆
Kamio Misuzu
M4M from your queue

[Catharsis]
00:13:187 (5) - delete

01:07:187 (3) - ^

00:06:156 (3,4,1,2,3) -
00:42:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:42:249 (2,5) - delete, 00:42:437 - add note (一般的には、赤い線のところで三連打をはじめるのほうがいいです)

00:45:156 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^

00:13:281 (5,6,7,8,1) - add clap at notes and slider's head

00:24:906 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ^

01:01:281 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^

01:07:281 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^

01:11:781 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^

00:25:656 - から00:49:468 - までのhitsoundは少し変だなあっと思って、24clapにしよう、01:13:656 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - これらみたいに

00:55:656 - ここからも^

[wmtokok's Hard]
好像可以用中文?

00:24:906 (3,4) - 这里换成两个1/4的折返?hard难度应该ok

00:36:906 (2) - ^

01:11:218 (3,4,5,1,2) - 现在这样虽然表现出后面的二连了,但是前面节奏不太合适,试试这样
01:15:156 (1,2,3,4) - 中间的停顿给人感觉像是死跟歌词那样,很不自然。建议放1/2slider+note+1/2slider+note这样

[Normal]
00:12:718 (2,3) - スライダーを00:13:281 - まで伸びて、delete 3

00:36:156 (3) - why not use a reverse slider here?reverse at 00:36:437 -

00:48:156 (4,5) - ^

01:12:906 (2) - ^

以上です

金剛かわいいちなみにsenyaもかわいい!~☆ :)
wmtokok

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

M4M from your queue
[wmtokok's Hard]
好像可以用中文?

00:24:906 (3,4) - 这里换成两个1/4的折返?hard难度应该ok sure

00:36:906 (2) - ^ 這個不打算改,因為這樣感覺比較自然

01:11:218 (3,4,5,1,2) - 现在这样虽然表现出后面的二连了,但是前面节奏不太合适,试试这样 我把節奏改了一點點
01:15:156 (1,2,3,4) - 中间的停顿给人感觉像是死跟歌词那样,很不自然。建议放1/2slider+note+1/2slider+note这样 OK

金剛かわいいちなみにsenyaもかわいい!~☆ :)
thanks for mod :)

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Yureru Koi ha Nami no Gotoku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61656
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Yureru Koi wa Nami no Gotoku
TitleUnicode:揺れる恋は波の如く
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Momovely
Version:wmtokok's Hard
Source:Kantai Collection
Tags:砲雷撃戦、始め! kamasetora hizumi kancolle c85 hiroshi usami yuuhei catharsis wmtokok
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Winnie
Random Mod and it's Senya so :)
Only can do 1 difficulty atm because 1pm is cancer

[Normal]

Looks great but below are my suggestions/ideas to implement
00:10:656 (1) - Arc slider to flow gradually down with the vocals? doesn't effect next note either and to continue slider pattern from before http://puu.sh/d7mzf/4f3584b325.jpg
00:16:656 (1) - Doesn't look as appealing when spines are fat to me. So like this? http://puu.sh/d7mER/79f186a5a9.jpg doesn't effect DS
00:33:156 (3) - Looks more symmetrical to me if that end slider notch moves up by 1 (This is my eyes, but you can keep it the same)
00:43:656 (1) - Not sure about this how about a proper blanket here?
01:00:156 (1) - Not sure if this is DS correctly so snap it back in place at the furthest distance maybe?
01:14:406 (2) - Move left 1 notch for perfect blanky

Other than that I love senya and that was a great beatmap, along with your Mami Kawada song you are doing I never got a chance to have fun with :)
GL with getting this map ranked in the future
Topic Starter
Momovely

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

M4M from your queue

[Catharsis]
00:13:187 (5) - delete ok

01:07:187 (3) - ^ ok

00:06:156 (3,4,1,2,3) - 今の形を気に言ってるのでキープで

00:42:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:42:249 (2,5) - delete, 00:42:437 - add note (一般的には、赤い線のところで三連打をはじめるのほうがいいです) なるほど OK! fix

00:45:156 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^ fix


00:13:281 (5,6,7,8,1) - add clap at notes and slider's head 全部clapつけるとうるさいのでドラムの音が強いとこだけclap入れました

00:24:906 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ^ ^

01:01:281 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^ ^

01:07:281 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^

01:11:781 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^ ^

00:25:656 - から00:49:468 - までのhitsoundは少し変だなあっと思って、24clapにしよう、01:13:656 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - これらみたいに  たしかに違和感ある.. 変えました
00:55:656 - ここからも^ ok!



[Normal]
00:12:718 (2,3) - スライダーを00:13:281 - まで伸びて、delete 3   fix

00:36:156 (3) - why not use a reverse slider here?reverse at 00:36:437 - たしかに.. fix

00:48:156 (4,5) - ^ fix

01:12:906 (2) - ^fix

以上です

金剛かわいいちなみにsenyaもかわいい!~☆ :)
modありがとう!

助かりました!

senya 最高~
Winnie
Delete this message. Doubled by accident.
litoluna
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
  1. good

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:281 (4) - ここclapの方があいそう
  2. 00:12:718 (2) - 00:13:281 - で切ったほうが自然じゃない?
  3. 00:48:156 (4) - コレまでのpatternと少しかわるからここNCつけてもいいかも
  4. 01:24:343 (1) - スピンの終端01:26:781 - じゃない?
    ここからフェードアウトしてるし自分ならここで切るけど
    (Insane同様)
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:156 (3,4,1,2,3) - やりたいことはわかるけど窮屈感ある。
    自分ならこうするけどどうでで
    00:06:156 (3,4) - ctrl+G
    00:06:718 (2) - x:212 y:368
    00:06:906 (3) - x:380 y:316
  2. 00:57:156 (1) - 逆に曲げたほうが後の流れよくならない?
  3. 00:59:406 (1,2,3,4,1) - 規則性持たせたほうが好き。
    00:59:406 (1,2,3) - まで徐々にspacing広くなってるのはわかるけど00:59:781 (3,4) - で狭くなるのはおかしいかなと思う。
  4. 01:09:156 (3) - 01:08:406 (1) - と関連付けて配置した方がかっこいい

    全体的にNCをどうつけてるのかわからなかった

    あと...
    ヒットサウンドが結構バラバラに付けられてる感あるから統一したほうが良さそう。
    00:25:656 - ~が特にきになったので。
    大体こんな感じでつけていけば合うと思う。

    もちろん合わない部分もあるから、予めBackの音に対して何のヒットサウンドを使うか決めておくと音付けしやすくなるよ。
Topic Starter
Momovely
I am sorry for the late and lazy reply

@mei  I almost made modifications  mod thanks:3

@litoluna 全部直したぜ!
Homura-
さてらいとの譜面は楽しい。

[General]
  1. offset -4 or-5  Guyにでも聞いてくれ
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:281 (4) - clapも好きだけど Normal-hitnormalかDrum-hitnormalでも良し
  2. 00:25:656 (1) - ここからclapの付け方バラバラだけど別に変えなくてよくない? というか統一させたほうがいいんじゃ・・・
  3. 01:07:281 (5) - 始点にclap
  4. 01:11:781 (2) - clap追加

    やはり一番気になったのはclapの付け方です
    この曲はclapの音が聴き取りやすいからちゃんと聴こう(一定間隔に置くだけでいいよこれ)
[wmtokok's Hard]
  1. 00:32:781 (1) - add clap from slider ends
  2. 00:59:406 (3) - remove whistle , add finish ?
  3. 00:59:781 (5) - remove whistle , add clap ?
  4. 01:04:656 (5) - add finish
  5. 01:16:656 (1) - add finish from slider starts
  6. 01:10:281 (2) - add finish from slider repeats ?
  7. 01:21:156 (1) - add clap from slider repeats
  8. 01:23:406 (3) - add finish from slider stars ?
[Catharsis]
  1. Normalにも書いたけどclap一定間隔じゃあかんのか
  2. 01:00:531 (2) - add whistle
  3. 01:13:656 (1) - add finish

    まあlitolunaさん(神)に指摘されてるけど 全体的にヒットサウンド直そうな
@kazuya
wmtokok

Homura- wrote:

さてらいとの譜面は楽しい。

[General]
  1. offset -4 or-5  Guyにでも聞いてくれ fix by Momovely :)
[wmtokok's Hard]
  1. 00:32:781 (1) - add clap from slider ends add
  2. 00:59:406 (3) - remove whistle , add finish ?
  3. 00:59:781 (5) - remove whistle , add clap ?
  4. 01:04:656 (5) - add finish
  5. 01:16:656 (1) - add finish from slider starts
  6. 01:10:281 (2) - add finish from slider repeats ?
  7. 01:21:156 (1) - add clap from slider repeats
  8. 01:23:406 (3) - add finish from slider stars ?
All add fix ><

まあlitolunaさん(神)に指摘されてるけど 全体的にヒットサウンド直そうな[/list]

@kazuya
thanks for mod ><

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Topic Starter
Momovely

Homura- wrote:

さてらいとの譜面は楽しい。

[General]
  1. offset -4 or-5  Guyにでも聞いてくれ
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:281 (4) - clapも好きだけど Normal-hitnormalかDrum-hitnormalでも良し
  2. 00:25:656 (1) - ここからclapの付け方バラバラだけど別に変えなくてよくない? というか統一させたほうがいいんじゃ・・・
  3. 01:07:281 (5) - 始点にclap
  4. 01:11:781 (2) - clap追加

    やはり一番気になったのはclapの付け方です
    この曲はclapの音が聴き取りやすいからちゃんと聴こう(一定間隔に置くだけでいいよこれ)

[Catharsis]
  1. Normalにも書いたけどclap一定間隔じゃあかんのか
  2. 01:00:531 (2) - add whistle
  3. 01:13:656 (1) - add finish

    まあlitolunaさん(神)に指摘されてるけど 全体的にヒットサウンド直そうな
@kazuya

ヒットサウンド付け直したぜ!

modありがとな :D
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